[Text edit] Corrections and translation in the 'bed' file from CroWke

locations/bed.qsrc

@@ -42,25 +42,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mast':
 				if harakHusb = 0:
 					'"What are you doing dear?" he asks.'
 					'"I''m sorry dear, but I really need it, and you''ve been busy, " you reply, without stopping.'
-					'"How often you do this?" he asks.'
+					'"How often do you do this?" he asks.'
 					'"Quite often, sometime in my ass, you want to see?" you ask'
 					if izvratH = 0:
 						husband -= 1
-						'"I''ll wait outside the door until you''re done." he says and leaves. You continued to satisfy yourself rapidly, and soon finished.'
+						'"I''ll wait outside the door until you''re done." he says and leaves. You continue to satisfy yourself rapidly, and soon finish.'
 						$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 
 						act 'Finish':gt 'bed', 'start'
 					elseif izvratH = 1:
-						'"Well, I do not know." he stammers.'
+						'"Well, I don''t know." he stammers.'
 						'"Come on." You encourage him'
 
 						act 'Show':
 							cla
 							*clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/m22.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull the dildo from your pussy and winking at your husband, insert the dildo in her anus. <<$husName>> watches closely as the dildo disappears in and out of your ass.'
+							'You pull the dildo from your pussy and winking at your husband, insert the dildo in your anus. <<$husName>> watches closely as the dildo disappears in and out of your ass.'
 							'You see how his pants swell. "Anything else you want, dear?" you ask, smiling.'
 							'"Can I join?" he asks, a little embarrassed.'
 
@@ -70,8 +70,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mast':
 								analorgasm += 1
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/m23.jpg"></center>'
 								'<<$husName>> gets his dick out and starts masturbating. It is not what you expected, and at first you feel a little sad that he didn''t enter into you, but began to masturbate.'
-								'Then you starts to hit you, watching your husband masturbate as he watches you fuck the dildo, his face covered in pleasure, you screame and fell on the table, having experienced an orgasm.'
-								'The dildo is still sticking out of your ass. <<$husName>> still masturbating looking at you stretched out on the table, you take the dildo from ass and begin to lick it, looking into your husbands eyes.'
+								'Then it starts to hit you, watching your husband masturbate as he watches you fuck the dildo, his face covered in pleasure, you scream and fall on the table, having experienced an orgasm.'
+								'The dildo is still sticking out of your ass. While <<$husName>> is still masturbating, looking at you stretched out on the table, you take the dildo from your ass and begin to lick it, looking into your husbands eyes.'
 								'The spectacle has him immediately cum all over the floor. You go to him, kiss him on the lips and he passionately kisses you back..'
 
 								$orgasm_or = 'yes'
@@ -85,13 +85,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mast':
 				elseif harakHusb = 1:
 					'"Are you trying to tell me that I''m not enough to satisfy you?" He asks.'
 					'"I''m sorry dear, but I really need this, and you''ve been busy." You reply, without stopping.'
-					'"Well then, show me everything that you know how I''ll watch." He says.'
+					'"Well then, show me everything now that you know I''ll watch." He says.'
 					'"Want to see me do it in the ass, too?" You offer.'
 
 					if izvratH = 0:
 						husband += 1
 						husbizvradd += 1
-						'"No, I think this is enough." He says, sits down on a chair and begins to watch. You continued to satisfy yourself rapidly and soon finished in front of her husband.'
+						'"No, I think this is enough." He says, sits down on a chair and begins to watch. You continue to satisfy yourself rapidly and soon finish in front of her husband.'
 						'<<$husName>> stands up and begins to applaud "Bravo, encore?" he laughs.'
 						'"For such a lovely audience, anything, but first an intermission." You laugh. <<$husName>> helps you down from the table.'
 						pcs_horny = 0
@@ -110,7 +110,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mast':
 							cla
 							*clr
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/m22.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull out the dildo from your pussy and winking at your husband, insert the dildo in your anus. <<$husName>> watches closely as you pump the dildo in and out of your ass.'
+							'You pull the dildo out of your pussy and winking at your husband, insert it in your anus. <<$husName>> watches closely as you pump the dildo in and out of your ass.'
 							'You see how his pants swell. "Anything else you want, dear?" you ask, smiling.'
 							'"I don''t just want something, I''ll do somthing." He says, unbuttoning his pants and brings his cock to your mouth.'
 
@@ -139,8 +139,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mast':
 						if izvratH = 0:
 							husband += 1
 							husbizvradd += 1
-							'"You should have said something, now open your mouth." He says pulling out his cock and forcfully pushing it into your mouth.'
-							'He holds you by the hair and fucks your mouth, telling you not to stop masturbating. Soon he was tires of your mouth, "Now enough of this rubber shit, I''m going to fuck you."'
+							'"You should have said something, now open your mouth." He says pulling out his cock and forcefully pushes it into your mouth.'
+							'He holds you by the hair and fucks your mouth, telling you not to stop masturbating. Soon he tires of your mouth, "Now enough of this rubber shit, I''m going to fuck you."'
 
 							gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10
@@ -153,7 +153,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mast':
 							end
 						elseif izvratH = 1:
 							husband += 1
-							'"You''re going to insert this stupid toy in your pussy, ass and mouth, You''ll pulverise them, for as long as I like." He said, sitting down to watch.'
+							'"You''re going to insert this stupid toy in your pussy, ass and mouth, You''ll pulverise them, for as long as I like." He says, sitting down to watch.'
 							'Submissively, you quickly use the dildo to fuck your pussy, ass and mouth.'
 							
 							gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 10
@@ -164,7 +164,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mast':
 								*clr
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/husband/sex/m24.jpg"></center>'
 								'Still using the dildo on your pussy and ass, you offer <<$husName>> your mouth. He gets up and walks over to you.'
-								'You take his flaccid penis and start sucking, until his cock is finally hard. <<$husName>> stops you, "Now I fuck your ass."'
+								'You take his flaccid penis and start sucking, until his cock is finally hard. <<$husName>> stops you, "Now I''ll fuck your ass."'
 
 								gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mast':
 			else
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/mast/mastr.mp4"></video></center>'
 				$orgasm_or = 'custom'
-				$orgasm_txt = 'You stick the dildo to the floor and planted your wet pussy on it, bouncing up and down on the artificial cock, you will quickly feel the excited and orgasm.'
+				$orgasm_txt = 'You stick the dildo to the floor and plant your wet pussy on it, bouncing up and down on the artificial cock, you quickly feel the excitement and orgasm.'
 
 				act 'Breathe':gt 'bed', 'start'
 			end
@@ -217,11 +217,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rab':
 	minut += 120
 	houserabday = daystart
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/nicholas/sex/r0.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once you get into bed your mistress comes into the room, "What, the bitch is going to sleep?" She snaps from the doorway.'
+	'Once you get into bed your mistress comes into the room. "What, my bitch is going to sleep?" She snaps from the doorway.'
 	'"Yes." You reply.'
 	'"Yes, who?" She continues.'
 	'"Yes, mistress." You reply and sit on the bed, she is drunk and barely able to stand on her feet. She is drinking wine from the bottle and spilling quite a bit of it.'
-	'"That''s better, but today you have to be punished." She lifts up her skirt out pops the strap-on. "Suck it." She commands.'
+	'"That''s better, but today you have to be punished." She lifts up her skirt and out pops the strap-on. "Suck it." She commands.'
 
 	act 'Suck it':
 		cla
@@ -231,8 +231,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rab':
 		if pcs_makeup ! 1:pcs_makeup = 0
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/nicholas/sex/r1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You took the strap in his mouth and started sucking her off, not the taste of rubber gives you pleasure and you did it without much enthusiasm. Hostess, though she was drunk, but perfectly vidila that you do not try, then she started to beat podmahivat your movements, driving him deeper into your mouth. You become suspended on and did not like it.'
-		'"Oh damn stubborn, lay down on the bed quickly, " with these words, she strongly pushed you on the bed.'
+		'You take the strap-on in your mouth and start sucking her off. You dislike the taste of rubber and proceed without much enthusiasm. Mistress, though she''s drunk, notices that you''re not trying and starts to thrust along with your movements, driving it deeper into your mouth. You start gagging and don''t like it.'
+		'"Oh damn stubborn bitch, lay down on the bed quickly." With these words, she forcefully pushes you on the bed.'
 
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -241,8 +241,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rab':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/nicholas/sex/r2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You lay on the bed and she climbed on top of you and kneeling over you, you vskhvatila his head and forcefully planted his mouth on the strap. You tried to pull away, but it was useless, her hands firmly held your head. She continued to rape your mouth, you hardly catch the moment that-be for air, and she thrust her it deeper and deeper, eventually he started to slip down your throat, and breathing was absolutely nothing. When you''re starting to lose consciousness she took it out of your throat and you handled on its side, wheezing sniffed.'
-			'"And now to punishment, get up cancer, " she said. "And what if it was" you think, but do not say the hearing began.'
+			'You lay on the bed and she climbs on top of you and kneels over your face. She makes you open your mouth and forcefully shoves the strap-on in. You try to pull away, but it''s useless, her hands hold your head firmly. She continues to violate your mouth, hardly allowing you to catch a breath of air while she thrust it deeper and deeper. Eventually starting to slip down your throat, cutting off your breath completely. When you''re starting to lose consciousness she takes it out of your throat allowing you to roll onto your side, wheezing sniffling.'
+			'"And now for the punishment, get up bitch." she says. "And what was that just now then?" You think, but you don''t dare to utter that thought.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'rough'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -251,11 +251,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rab':
 				cla
 				*clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/nicholas/sex/r3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You get up on all fours on the bed. "But it''s too much, " said the hostess, and erases your saliva with the strap, "You need to punish, not pooscherit. Spreading ass."'
-				'Realizing that you will you breed buttocks with his hands and try to relax your ass, but you did not try, the pain pierces your body when it is with force pushes the strap you in the anus and not giving your ass to get used to gaining crazy pace, you let your buttocks and seizes blanket with hands and teeth. Tears poured from my eyes, you whine, but she still continues, finally a little tired it lowers the tempo and asks, "Well, it hurts."'
-				'"Yes ma''am, very hurt" through tears you say.'
-				'"Well, today I have a good bit smazhem" she says, and begins pouring wine from a bottle on the strap and your ass.'
-				'"Thank you, Mrs." you say, and it is again gaining momentum. First, you got a little easier, but then the wine is dry and start to dry your skin, you become so much hurt by what you already screaming with laughter. "Why did not anyone come in and not hurt her, " you think, because your cries have been heard not only in the apartment, but also around the entrance, but no one came, neither Tanya nor Nicholas. Finally she was tired, and removing the strap out of the room without saying anything. You collapsed on the bed and whined, your ass was on fire and you were afraid to even move after spending an hour so you are asleep.'
+				'You get up on all fours on the bed. "But it''s too wet." Says your mistress, and wipes your saliva on your ass with the strap-on, "You need to be punishes, not pleasured. Spread your ass."'
+				'Realizing that you will get it up the ass, you reach back with your hands and try to relax your ass. But you don''t succeed before the pain pierces your body when she forces the strap-on into your anus and not giving your ass the time to get used to it, starts fucking you at a crazy pace. You let go of your buttocks and seize the blankets with your hands and teeth. Tears pour from your eyes, you whine, but she still continues. Finally, a little tired she lowers the tempo and asks, "Well, does it hurt?"'
+				'"Yes ma''am, it hurts a lot." You gasp through your tears.'
+				'"Well, let''s see how this feels." She says, and begins pouring wine from her bottle onto the strap-on and your ass.'
+				'"Thank you, mistress." You say while she starts gaining momentum again. At first, it gets a little easier, but then stream of wine stops and it starts to dry on your skin. It hurts so much that you start screaming from the pain. "Why hasn''t anyone come in and stopped her." You think, because your screams have been so loud they could have been heard not only inside the apartment, but also in the hallway. But no one came, neither Tanya nor Nicholas. Finally she tires out, removes the strap-on out and walks out of the room without saying a word. You collapse on the bed and whine, your ass is on fire and you''re afraid to even move. After spending an hour so you fall asleep.'
 
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'rough'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -277,16 +277,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rab':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/nicholas/sex/r4.jpg"></center>'
 			'"No." You reply.'
 			'"You <<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>, will suck now or things will get very bad for you." She asserts.'
-			'"No." Answer again.'
-			'"All right, you asked for it." She screams and swings a fist, trying to hit you, you easily dodge the punch and kick her in the stomach.'
+			'"No." You answer again.'
+			'"All right, you asked for it." She screams and swings a fist, trying to hit you. You easily dodge the punch and kick her in the stomach.'
 			'"Bitch." She moans, doubling over. You have suffered enough, you jump out of bed and grabbing her head in your hands, knee her in the face.'
-			'She flies into the corner, but you don''t calm down. Remembering the taste of her dirty boots and sneakers you go up to her and started to push a sneaker into her mouth.'
-			'When you couldn''t shove it in its any more, you throw away the sneakers, grab her hair and yank her off the floor and throw her on to the bed.'
-			'Now lying on the bed covering her face with her hands, you jump on to the bed and straddling her face push your pussy against her mouth. "Eat me, bitch." You yell, she tries to push you away.'
-			'It''s no good, you have her hand tight between your thighs. You continue yelling and she starts licking, you feel her tongue on her pussy, but moving your hips you grind her face and increase the pace.'
-			'Soon you get excited. She does not resist and sticks her tongue out and tries to catch it in your pussy. You start enjoying her submissive nature and you get more excited thinking about your dominant actions.'
+			'She flies into the corner, but you don''t calm down. Remembering the taste of her dirty boots and sneakers you go up to her and start to push a sneaker into her mouth.'
+			'When you can''t shove it in any further, you throw away the sneaker, grab her hair, yank her off the floor and throw her on to the bed.'
+			'Now lying on the bed covering her face with her hands. You jump on the bed, straddling her face and push your pussy against her mouth. "Eat me, bitch." You yell, as she tries to push you away.'
+			'It''s no good, you have her head tight between your thighs. You continue yelling and she starts licking. You feel her tongue on your pussy and start moving your hips, grinding on her face and increasing the pace.'
+			'Soon you get excited. She does not resist and sticks her tongue out and tries to stick it in your pussy. You start enjoying her submissive nature and you get more excited thinking about your dominant actions.'
 			'You have even begun to think about something to do with her strap-on and enjoying this thought, you orgasm. You wipe your crotch in her face and finish. When you finally get off her, her whole face is covered in your juices.'
-			'She quietly gets out of bed, straightens her clothes and leaves the room, "Animal." She obviously won''t forget, now you should be careful, who knows what she will do.'
+			'She quietly gets out of bed, straightens her clothes and leaves the room, "Animal." She obviously won''t forget, from now on you should be careful, who knows what she will do.'
 
 			$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 20, 'dom', 'rough'
@@ -344,28 +344,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vor2':
 	minut += 60
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/apartment/sex/g0.jpg"></center>'
 
-	'You don''t even have time to open your mouth to scream, when a knife is at your throat. "Scream and I''ll cut you, bitch," croaks one of them.'
+	'You don''t even have time to open your mouth to scream, when a knife is at your throat. "Scream and I''ll cut you, bitch." Croaks one of them.'
 	'They tie your hands and one goes to search your apartment, while the second guards you. He sits down and studies you, then begins running his knife across your body.'
-	'"You scared?" he asks, and thinking that it is better to keep silent, you say nothing and look at to the floor. "So you are scared." he grins.'
-	'Then he begins to feel you up, you try to pull away, but the knife is back at your throat, "Sit still bitch, or the knife might slip, fatally." he croaks, and continues to feeling you up.'
-	'Finally, the other intruder returns, "Time we got out of here," he says.'
-	'"Unless we give this juicy little morsel a treat," he sits next to you'
+	'"You scared?" He asks, and thinking that it is better to keep silent, you say nothing and look at the floor. "So you are scared." he grins.'
+	'Then he begins to feel you up, you try to pull away, but the knife is back at your throat, "Sit still bitch, or the knife might slip, fatally." he croaks, and continues feeling you up.'
+	'Finally, the other intruder returns. "Time we got out of here." He says.'
+	'"Unless we give this juicy little morsel a treat." He sits next to you'
 
 	if pcs_apprnc >= 120:
 		guy += 2
 		rape += 1
-		'"Hey, sweet cheeks, something tells me you like to fuck" says the first.'
+		'"Hey, sweet cheeks, something tells me you like to fuck." Says the first.'
 
 		act 'Plead':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/apartment/sex/g1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You are struck with fear, "Well whore kneel down and open your mouth, if we so much as feel a tooth, I''ll cut your throat from ear to ear" says the second one pulling his cock out.'
-			'You begin to pleading them not to touch you, but they just push you to your knees. He jabbed his member against your lips, you reluctantly open your mouth and then his cock is in your mouth.'
+			'You are struck with fear. "Well whore, kneel down and open your mouth, if we so much as feel a tooth, I''ll cut your throat from ear to ear" says the second one pulling his cock out.'
+			'You begin pleading with them not to touch you, but they just push you to your knees. He jabs his member against your lips. You reluctantly open your mouth and then his cock is in your mouth.'
 			'His hands clench your head and he begins to fuck your face. Suddenly there''s a second cock by your mouth, and they try to shove both into your mouth, then they look at each other and it seems they aren''t down with their cocks touching.'
 			'In fact it appears that only you are up for this type of treatment, so they go back to the first option and proceeded to rape your mouth one by one. All the time doing and saying everything they can think of to evoke disgust in you.'
-			'That was the first couple of minutes, and you are surprised to notice that their hands are no longer on your head, and you are actively bobbing your head and working your tongue.'
-			'"Get her on all fours" commands one of them.'
+			'After the first couple of minutes you are surprised to notice that their hands are no longer on your head and you are actively bobbing your head and working your tongue.'
+			'"Get her on all fours." Commands one of them.'
 
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'rough', 'sub', 'group', 'bound'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -382,10 +382,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vor2':
 				$boy[1] = $npclastgenerated
 				$boydesc[1] = $npc_usedname[$npclastgenerated]
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/apartment/sex/g2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You stand up and bend over, one of them stands behind you and stuffs his dick into your pussy. "Yes, it''s dripping wet, this bitch was just waiting for some cock" he says.'
-				'"Open your mouth" growls the second guy inserting his dick into your mouth. They proceeded to rape you from both sides, you are overwhelmed with desire, and sipt-roasted with your hands tied behind your back by two strangers.'
-				'You diligently fuck one while sucking the others dick, when suddenly eyes glaze, your body pleasantly shivers and you shake in orgasm. The one fuck your mouth pulls out, "What''s wrong with this bitch, is she epileptic?" he cries.'
-				'"You idiot, I told her to please us, and this bitch came." said the second. They untie your hands and get off you. "Let''s see what she can do with her hands free" says one.'
+				'You stand up and bend over, one of them stands behind you and stuffs his dick into your pussy. "Yes, it''s dripping wet, this bitch was just waiting for some cock." He says.'
+				'"Open your mouth." Growls the second guy inserting his dick into your mouth. They proceeded to rape you from both sides, you are overwhelmed with desire while being spit-roasted with your hands tied behind your back by two strangers.'
+				'You diligently fuck the one while sucking the others dick, when suddenly your eyes glaze, your body pleasantly shivers and you shake in orgasm. The one fucking your mouth pulls out. "What''s wrong with this bitch, is she epileptic?" He cries.'
+				'"You idiot, I told her to please us, and this bitch came." Says the second. They untie your hands and get off you. "Let''s see what she can do with her hands free." says one of them.'
 
 				$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'rough', 'sub', 'group', 'bound'
@@ -397,8 +397,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vor2':
 			end
 		end
 	elseif pcs_apprnc < 120:
-		'"Do as I tell you," replies the first "And gag her." he added. The second did not argue took some of your clothes and stuffed them in your mouth. "If you try to leave in the next half an hour, you''re dead." says the first intruder, and they''re gone.'
-		'You don''t wait half an hour before you start trying to break free, fortunately they really did not know how to tie a knot and soon you''re free.'
+		'"Do as I tell you." Replies the first. "And gag her." He adds. The second one doesn''t argue and takes some of your clothes and stuffs them in your mouth. "If you try to leave in the next half an hour you''re dead." Says the first intruder, and they leave.'
+		'You don''t wait half an hour before you start trying to break free, fortunately they really didn''t know how to tie a knot and soon you''re free.'
 
 		act 'Assess the damage':gt 'bed', 'vorend'
 	end
@@ -411,7 +411,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vorend':
 	if remsitr = 0:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/apartment/sitr.jpg"></center>'
 	if remsitr = 1:'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/apartment/sitr2.jpg"></center>'
 
-	'Relieved that it was over, you check your apartment to see what''s missing.'
+	'Relieved that it''s over, you check your apartment to see what''s missing.'
 
 	if stolmoney > 0:
 		'They took <<stolmoney>> <b>₽</b> from your living room table.'