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[text edit] more english fixes for gadukino_event

sovietmercader 5 years ago
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      locations/gadukino_event.qsrc

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locations/gadukino_event.qsrc

@@ -8,7 +8,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_apologise':
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/turn_back.jpg"></center>'
 	'Walking through the village you hear someone catching up to you. Turning around, you see Mira nearing you.'
-
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 5
@@ -22,6 +21,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_apologise':
 		'"So what now?," you asked, looking at her.'
 		'"Well, if you want, I can make it up to you?" she answered a bit embarrassed.'
 		'While you pondered what to answer, Mira stares at you, biting her lip impatiently.'
+		
 		act 'Agree':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
@@ -40,7 +40,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_apologise':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 30
 			mirasex = 3
-
 			gs 'stat'
 			gs 'Miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 
@@ -80,11 +79,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mitka_apologise':
 			'"So you won''t have sex with Mira anymore?," you ask relieved.'
 			'"Don''t worry, Mira won''t mind." Mitka snickered.'
 			'"You must stop having sex with her." you look at Mitka with distrust.'
-			'"Well, what can I do. If she begs me to it, I can''t promise I''ll say no." he laughed. "Well, I think we''re all set, I''ll try to avoid Mira... But if she begs me to fuck her I won''t say no."'
+			'"Well, what can I do. If she begs me to do it, I can''t promise I''ll say no." he laughed. "Well, I think we''re all set, I''ll try to avoid Mira... But if she begs me to fuck her I won''t say no."'
 			'Mitka starts walking towards Kolyamba''s house. You watch him for a while, until he disappears behind a corner.'
-		else
+		elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 3:
 			'"And you must stop having sex with Mira." you look at Mitka with distrust.'
-			'"Well, what can I do. If she begs me to it, I can''t promise I''ll say no." he laughed. "Well, I think we''re all set, I''ll try to avoid Mira... But if she begs me to fuck her I won''t say no."'
+			'"Well, what can I do. If she begs me to do it, I can''t promise I''ll say no." he laughed. "Well, I think we''re all set, I''ll try to avoid Mira... But if she begs me to fuck her I won''t say no."'
 			'Mitka starts walking towards Kolyamba''s house. You watch him for a while, until he disappears behind a corner.'
 		end
 		act 'Go back to the village':gt 'gadukino'
@@ -98,7 +97,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gang_apologise':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/turn_back.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking through the village you suddenly hear someone calling out to you by name. Turning back, you see that it is Uncle Stepan, coming your way. Remembering the recent events you pick up your pace. There is no way you want to relive the same thing again.'
+	'Walking through the village you suddenly hear someone calling out to you by name. Turning back, you see that it is Uncle Stepan, coming your way. Remembering the recent events you pick up your pace. There is no way you want to experience that again.'
 	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, wait, I need to speak with you," Stepan yelled from afar, seeing that you are ready run away.'
 
 	act 'Wait':
@@ -106,13 +105,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gang_apologise':
 		minut += 5
 		gs 'stat'
 
-		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Uncle Styopa</font></b></center>'
+		'<center><b><font color = maroon>Uncle Stepan</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/uncle_stepan.jpg"></center>'
-		'For a moment you hesitated, wondering what he wants. While you contemplating to stay or run away, he caught up with you. He started nervously shifted from foot to foot, clearly not knowing how to begin the conversation. You looked puzzled at him thinking he would be prepared, when he finally speaks up.'
-		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, -uh," he began, but immediately faltered. "In short, I''m trully sorry for what happened the other night... I don''t know what came over us, it was like a demon possessed me, I got aroused by Mitka''s drunken tales."'
+		'For a moment you hesitate, wondering what he wants. While you are contemplating to stay or run away, he caught up with you. He shifts nervously from foot to foot, clearly not knowing how to begin the conversation. You look puzzled at him thinking he would be prepared, when he finally speaks up.'
+		'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, -uh," he began, but immediately faltered. "In short, I''m trully sorry for what happened the other day... I don''t know what came over us, it was like a demon possessed me, I got aroused by Mitka''s drunken tales of you."'
 		'He looked at you with sorrow in his eyes. You did not expect that anyone of them would be sorry.'
-		'"I had a talk with the other men in the morning, and, uh," uncle Stepan losing his composure. "Well, in short, I decided that I wanted to talk to you, apologize and ask if you could forget about yesterday... I''m really sorry and I''m worried that we might have damaged you physically."'
-		'You looked skeptically at "your uncle", not really knowing if he''s joking or not.'
+		'"I had a talk with the other men in the morning, and, uh," Uncle Stepan losing his composure. "Well, in short, I decided that I wanted to talk to you, apologize and ask if you could forget about yesterday... I''m really sorry and I''m worried that we might have damaged you physically."'
+		'You look skeptically at your "uncle", not really knowing if he''s joking or not.'
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
@@ -122,13 +121,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gang_apologise':
 			'Feeling that you''re still skeptical, Uncle Stepan reached into his sweatpants and pulled out a bundle, handing it over to you.'
 			'"Here," he showed the money in your hand. "It''s ten thousand rubles."'
 			'"What do you do want me to do with this?" you asked somewhat annoyed.'
-			'"I don''t know, you can do whatever you want with them," replied uncle Stepan. "Spend it on some treatment, or buy yourself something nice."'
-			'Not knowing what to choose, you look at the money, then at "your uncle."'
+			'"I don''t know, you can do whatever you want with it," replied Uncle Stepan. "Spend it on something relaxing, or buy yourself something nice."'
+			'Not knowing what to choose, you look at the money, then at your "uncle."'
 
 			act 'Take the money':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
-				pcs_dom -= 1
+				pcs_dom -= 5
 				gadriver_gang = 2
 				money += 10000
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -136,7 +135,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gang_apologise':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/take_money.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Okay, I accept your money," you finally decide. "Let''s pretend nothing happened yesterday."'
 				'You take the money from his hand.'
-				'"That''s a relief..." Stepan says relieved. "I''ll be on my way."'
+				'"That''s a relief..." Stepan says. "I''ll be on my way."'
 				'You were about to turn and leave, when Uncle Stepan added:'
 				'"And yeah... <<$pcs_nickname>>, none of the men will fuck you like that again, so there''s no need to be afraid."'
 				'"I understand..." you answer, turning away and walking away from him.'
@@ -145,14 +144,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gang_apologise':
 			act 'Refuse':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 5
-				pcs_dom += 1
+				pcs_dom += 5
 				gadriver_gang = 3
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/speak_to_the_hand.jpg"></center>'
 				'"I don''t need your fucking money, I''m not a prostitute or a whore" you said in a firm voice, clearly annoyed, looking straight into Uncle Stepan eyes. "You think you can buy my silence with some money, are you really that dumb?"'
 				'He starts acting anxiously telling you once more to take the money. "I''ve already said it, I don''t want your money! But you don''t need to worry I won''t tell anyone what happened." you sternly tell him.'
-				'"That''s a relief..." Stepan says relieved. "I''ll be on my way."'
+				'"That''s a relief..." Stepan says. "I''ll be on my way."'
 				'Just as you were leaving, Uncle Stepan added:'
 				'"One last thing <<$pcs_nickname>>. None of the men will try to fuck you anymore. Mitka warned everyone that if it happens again their cannon would be shooting blanks for the rest of their life... If anyone approaches you, you come to me and I''ll sort it out."'
 				'"I understand..." you answer, turning away and walking away from him.'
@@ -183,8 +182,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walked along the path, fully immersed in your inner thoughts, you didn''t immediately notice the crowd of drunken village men. Noticing you alone the men turn their attention towards you.'
-	'One of the men grabs you and forces you away from the village. They start stripping you, surround you on all sides, taking out their cocks, warming up for what''s supposed to come. You think about resisting, but considering your reputation in the village, you find it''s not worth fighting, plus there was no way you could fight against this many men so you humbly kneel.'
+	'You walk along the path, fully immersed in your inner thoughts. You don''t pay any attention to the crowd of drunken village men as you walk by. Noticing you alone the men turn their attention towards you.'
+	'One of the men grabs you and forces you away from the village. They start stripping you, surround you on all sides, taking out their cocks, warming up for what''s supposed to come.'
+	'As you humbly kneel, you think about resisting, but considering your reputation in the village, you find it''s not worth fighting, plus there was no way you could fight against this many men.'
 
 	act 'Suck the nearest cock':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -195,7 +195,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 		guy += 1
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_oral1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You took the first available cock in your hand, jerking him off for a bit and then started sucking...'
+		'You take the first available cock in your hand, jerking him off for a bit and then started sucking...'
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 		minut -= 5
@@ -208,7 +208,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 			guy += 1
 
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_oral2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You turned around and started sucking on the next cock...'
+			'You turn around and start sucking on the next cock...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -219,10 +219,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 				guy += 1
 
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_oral3.jpg"></center>'
-				'The men continued piling up, one after another. Some of the men got so impatient they shoved two cocks at you at once. You sucked each one of them off, embracing their penis head with your <<$liptalk>> lips, deepthroating them all. '
-
+				'The men continue lining up, one after another. Some of the men are so impatient they shoved two cocks at you at once. You sucked each one of them off, embracing their penis with your <<$liptalk>> lips, deepthroating them all.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'stat'
+				
 				act 'Make the first trio cum':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut += 5
@@ -231,19 +231,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 					gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', $boy2, 1
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_cum1.jpg"></center>'
-					'It doesn''t take long before the first men finish, cumming in your mouth, on the face and chest. You continue sucking more men off, however...'
-
+					'It doesn''t take long before the first men finish, cumming in your mouth, and on your face and chest. You continue sucking more men off, however...'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 					gs 'stat'
-					act 'Continue':
+					
+					act 'Get penetrated':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'some country man', rand(19,45)
 						gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 						guy += 1
 
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog1.jpg"></center>'
-						'Feeling ecstatic, you didn''t even notice that you''ve changed position, teasing the men with your ass. While you were busy pleasing someone''s cock with your mouth, one of the men enetered your <<$vaginatipe2>> vagina from behind.'
-
+						'You are actually feeling a bit ecstatic from all of this, you didn''t even notice that you''ve changed position. Your ass sticks out in the air teasing the men. While you were busy pleasing someone''s cock with your mouth, one of the men enetered your <<$vaginatipe2>> vagina from behind.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
 						minut -= 5
@@ -268,14 +267,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 							pose = 1
 							if rand(1,2) = 1:gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
 
-							act 'Continue':
+							act 'Let another man fuck your ass':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'drunk man', rand(19,45)
 								gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 								guy += 1
 
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog3.jpg"></center>'
-								'The third man was in no hurry to start pounding your pussy, instead you felt his fingers exploring your <<$anustipe>> anus.'
+								'The third man was in no hurry to to start pounding your pussy, instead you felt his fingers exploring your <<$anustipe>> anus.'
 								if pcs_ass <= 5:'"Well, well what a tight hole you have here..." you hear a male voice. "Let me help you stretch it out."'
 								if pcs_ass <= 10:'You could only mumble in protest as your mouth was busy.'
 
@@ -293,7 +292,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 									npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog2.jpg"></center>'
-									'The next man, not wanting to be worse than the man before, grabbed the cock and thrusted it in your anus and started pounding you relentlessly.'
+									'The next man, not wanting to be outdone by the man before, grabbed his cock, thrust it in your anus and started pounding you relentlessly.'
 
 									gs 'dinSex','boy_wants_anal','lubri'
 									gs 'dinsex','analsex'
@@ -302,7 +301,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 									minut -= 5
 									gs 'stat'
 
-									act 'Continue':
+									act 'Lie down':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs 'boyStat', 'A171'
 										npc_sex[$boy] += 1
@@ -327,7 +326,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 											guy += 1
 
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_mis2.jpg"></center>'
-											'Your next "fan" steps up pounding your sore pussy.'
+											'Your next "fan" steps up to pound your sore pussy.'
 
 											gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 											gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'rough'
@@ -337,14 +336,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 											if rand(1,2) = 1:gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
 											gs 'stat'
 
-											act 'Continue':
+											act 'Watch Vasyan pound you':
 												*clr & cla
 												minut += 5
 												gs 'boyStat', 'A62'
 												npc_sex[$boy] += 1
 
 												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_mis3.jpg"></center>'
-												'You see a familiar face again, Vasyan.'
+												'You see a familiar face again, this time it is Vasyan.'
 												'"Mitka and Kolyamba are also here somewhere waiting for their turn", he tells you before shoving his cock deep inside you.'
 
 												gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
@@ -356,7 +355,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 												gs 'stat'
 												*pl
 
-												act 'Continue':
+												act 'Kneel for them':
 													*clr & cla
 													minut += 5
 													if pcs_health <= 100:pcs_health += 100
@@ -367,9 +366,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 													gs 'stat'
 
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_oral4.jpg"></center>'
-													'The men decide that your holes need a rest, so the next few men are only going to get oral pleasure. They tell you to get on your knees and ordered you to suck.'
+													'The men decide that your holes need a rest, so the next few men are only going to get oral pleasure. They tell you to get on your knees and order you to suck.'
 
-													act 'Continue':
+													act 'Make this group cum':
 														*clr & cla
 														gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy, 1
 														swallow += 1
@@ -390,7 +389,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 														'They finish and walk away.'
 														gs 'stat'
 
-														act 'Continue':
+														act 'Bend over':
 															*clr & cla
 															gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'man', rand(19,45)
 															gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
@@ -408,7 +407,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 															'The men cum and walk away feeling satisfied.'
 															gs 'stat'
 
-															act 'Continue':
+															act 'Please them all':
 																*clr & cla
 																gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'unfamiliar guy', rand(19,45)
 																gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
@@ -442,7 +441,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																	minut -= 5
 																	gs 'stat'
 
-																	act 'Continue':
+																	act 'Slow down a little':
 																		*clr & cla
 																		gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'Drunk man', rand(19,45)
 																		gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
@@ -474,14 +473,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																			minut -= 5
 																			gs 'stat'
 
-																			act 'Continue':
+																			act 'Look at Kolyamba':
 																				*clr & cla
 																				gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'a man', rand(19,45)
 																				gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 																				guy += 1
 
 																				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_dog10.jpg"></center>'
-																				'You continue to get anally fucked, when the next man decided to take advantage of your pussy. In the corner of your eye, you notice in Kolyamba standing in the crowd eagerly awaiting his turn.'
+																				'You continue to get anally fucked, when the next man decided to take advantage of your pussy. In the corner of your eye, you notice Kolyamba standing in the crowd eagerly awaiting his turn.'
 
 																				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 																				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
@@ -491,7 +490,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																				if rand(1,2) = 1:gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
 																				gs 'stat'
 
-																				act 'Continue':
+																				act 'Kneel again':
 																					*clr & cla
 																					minut += 5
 																					if pcs_health <= 100:pcs_health += 100
@@ -499,7 +498,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_oral5.jpg"></center>'
 																					'You''re suddenly surprised to find that no one is using your pussy or ass.'
 																					'"I really hope that that was the last one..." you thought.'
-																					'This was just unfortunately wishful thinking. The men soon put you on your knees and then several men shoved their cocks in your face.'
+																					'This was just unfortunately wishful thinking. The men soon put you on your knees and then several men shove their cocks in your face.'
 
 																					act 'Continue':
 																						*clr & cla
@@ -518,7 +517,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																						if rand(1,2) = 1:gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
 																						gs 'stat'
 
-																						act 'Continue':
+																						act 'Lower yourself onto the next cock':
 																							*clr & cla
 																							gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'drunk guy', rand(19,45)
 																							gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
@@ -591,7 +590,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																										minut -= 5
 																										gs 'stat'
 
-																										act 'Continue':
+																										act 'Plead for relief':
 																											*clr & cla
 																											minut += 5
 																											if pcs_health <= 100:pcs_health += 100
@@ -602,7 +601,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 																											gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 																											gs 'stat'
 
-																											act 'Continue':
+																											act 'Suck the last men off':
 																												*clr & cla
 																												minut += 5
 																												gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'stranger', rand(19,45)
@@ -620,7 +619,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang':
 
 																												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_cum3.jpg"></center>'
 																												'Like a panicked animal being pushed against a wall you gave it all, using all your might to please them. Your endeavor didn''t go unnoticed, some of men began cumming in your mouth and some of them on your face. There was so much sperm that your chest and abdomen also got covered.'
-																												act 'Continue':
+																												act 'Finally finish':
 																													*clr & cla
 																													minut += 5
 																													gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy3, 1
@@ -700,7 +699,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadukino_vasyan':
 
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Vasyan Paket</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/vasyan.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking through the village you met Vasya. Seeing you, he smiled and waved you over to him. He kisses you on the lips and asks you to join him as he walked into the bushes next to the road.'
+	'Walking through the village you met Vasyan. Seeing you, he smiled and waved you over to him. He kisses you on the lips and asks you to join him as he walked into the bushes next to the road.'
 
 	act 'Go with him': gt 'mitkasex', 'gad1', 'A62'
 end
@@ -708,8 +707,6 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gadukino_2boys':
 	menu_off = 1
 	minut += 5
-	gadboyday = daystart
-	mitboyrand = rand(1,3)
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	if month >= 6 and month <= 8:
@@ -717,10 +714,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadukino_2boys':
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/2boys.2.jpg"></center>'
 	end
-	if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking through the village you met Mitka and Kolyamba. Seeing you, they grin, grab you by the arms and drag you into the bushes.'
-	if mitboyrand = 2:'Walking through the village you met Mitka and Vasya. Seeing you, they grin, grab you by the arms and drag you into the bushes.'
-	if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking through the village you met Kolyamba and Vasya. Seeing you, they grin, grab you by the arms and drag you into the bushes.'
-
+	if $ARGS[1] = 1:
+		mitkaday = daystart
+		kolyambaday = daystart
+		'Walking through the village you met Mitka and Kolyamba. Seeing you, they grin, grab you by the arms and drag you into the bushes.'
+	elseif $ARGS[1] = 2:
+		mitkaday = daystart
+		vasyanday = daystart
+		'Walking through the village you met Mitka and Vasyan. Seeing you, they grin, grab you by the arms and drag you into the bushes.'
+	elseif $ARGS[1] = 3:
+		kolyambaday = daystart
+		vasyanday = daystart
+		'Walking through the village you met Kolyamba and Vasyan. Seeing you, they grin, grab you by the arms and drag you into the bushes.'
+	end
 	act 'Go with them': gt 'mitkasex', 'gad2'
 end
 
@@ -732,10 +738,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_mitka':
 
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Mitka Shkvoryen</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/mitka.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking with Mira in the village you met Mitka. Seeing Mira, he started playing with his balls and said with a grin.'
-	'"Oh hey Mira, let''s go have some fun getting rid of this boner you just gave me."'
+	'Walking with Mira in the village you met Mitka. Seeing you and Mira, he starts playing with his balls and said with a grin.'
+	'"Oh hey girls, let''s go have some fun getting rid of this boner you both just gave me."'
 
-	act 'Go with them': gt 'mitkasex', 'forest1', 'A63'
+	act 'Go with him': gt 'mitkasex', 'forest1', 'A63'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_kolyamba':
@@ -746,9 +752,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_kolyamba':
 
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kolyamba Pyut</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/kolyamba.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking with Mira in the village you met Kolyamba. Seeing Mira, he started playing with his balls, dragging her into the bushes next to the road.'
+	'Walking with Mira in the village you met Kolyamba. Seeing you and Mira, he starts playing with his balls, and drags you both into the bushes next to the road.'
 
-	act 'Go with them': gt 'mitkasex', 'forest1', 'A61'
+	act 'Go with him': gt 'mitkasex', 'forest1', 'A61'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_vasyan':
@@ -759,7 +765,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_vasyan':
 
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Vasyan Paket</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/vasyan.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking with Mira in the village you met Vasyan. Seeing Mira, he smiled and dragged her into the bushes next to the road.'
+	'Walking with Mira in the village you met Vasyan. Seeing you and Mira, he smiles and drags you both into the bushes next to the road.'
 
 	act 'Go with them': gt 'mitkasex', 'forest1', 'A62'
 end
@@ -767,8 +773,6 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_2boys':
 	menu_off = 1
 	minut += 5
-	gadboyday = daystart
-	mitboyrand = rand(1,3)
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	if month >= 6 and month <= 8:
@@ -776,17 +780,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_2boys':
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/2boys.2.jpg"></center>'
 	end
-	if mitboyrand = 1:'Walking with Mira in the village you met Mitka and Kolyamba. Seeing Mira, they grin, grab her arms and drag her into the bushes.'
-	if mitboyrand = 2:'Walking with Mira in the village you met Mitka and Vasyan. Seeing Mira, they grin, grab her arms and drag her into the bushes.'
-	if mitboyrand = 3:'Walking with Mira in the village you met Kolyamba and Vasyan. Seeing Mira, they grin, grab her arms and drag her into the bushes.'
-
+	if $ARGS[1] = 1:
+		mitkaday = daystart
+		kolyambaday = daystart
+		'Walking with Mira in the village you met Mitka and Kolyamba. Seeing you and Mira, they smile at each other, and drag you both into the bushes.'
+	elseif $ARGS[1] = 2:
+		mitkaday = daystart
+		vasyanday = daystart
+		'Walking with Mira in the village you met Mitka and Vasyan. Seeing you and Mira, they smile at each other, and drag you both into the bushes.'
+	elseif $ARGS[1] = 3:
+		kolyambaday = daystart
+		vasyanday = daystart
+		'Walking with Mira in the village you met Kolyamba and Vasyan. Seeing you and Mira, they smile at each other, and drag you both into the bushes.'
+	end
 	act 'Go with them': gt 'mitkasex', 'forest2', $ARGS[1]
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_3boys':
 	menu_off = 1
 	minut += 5
-	gadboyday = daystart
+	mitkaday = daystart
+	kolyambaday = daystart
+	vasyanday = daystart
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	if month >= 6 and month <= 8:
@@ -795,7 +810,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_3boys':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/village/drunk.jpg"></center>'
 	end
 
-	'Walking with Mira in the village you met Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan. Seeing Mira, they grin, grab her arms and drag her into the bushes.'
+	'Walking with Mira in the village you met Mitka, Kolyamba and Vasyan. Seeing you and Mira, they smile at each other, and drag you both into the bushes.'
 
 	act 'Go with them': gt 'mitkasex', 'forest3'
 end