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text edit: more spelling fixes, self corrections, in soba.qsrc

oldentree 5 years ago
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locations/soba.qsrc

@@ -50,8 +50,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'polactdog':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/first.jpg"></center>'
 	'After looking around and making sure that no one is around you take off your clothes.'
-	'The dog''s slick but rough tongue begins licking your pussy, the rhythmic action of the dog''s tongue sends waves of excitement through your body, causing an involuntary moan to escape your lips'
-	'A few minutes later the dog stops licking and starts attempting to capture his bitch. To help him, you kneel on all fours. The dog mounts you, sliding his throbbing member against your snatch.'
+	'The dog''s slick but rough tongue begins licking your pussy. The rhythmic action of the dog''s tongue sends waves of excitement through your body, causing an involuntary moan to escape your lips.'
+	'A few minutes later, the dog stops licking and starts attempting to capture his bitch. To help him, you kneel on all fours. The dog mounts you, sliding his throbbing member against your snatch.'
 
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'beast'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'polactdog':
 		pcs_vag += 3
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/vag.jpg"></center>'
-		'You reach back to him and begin to massage his sack, where his throbbing member protrudes from. You start to masturbate him. His dick grows before your eyes, turning into a formidable penis in your hand. You guide him a little and he enters you. He does the rest himself, abruptly pushing his member hungrily into your pussy. You groan with the first blow, and after three strokes you are fully strung on his member. <<$namesob>> began to thrust long, strong strokes, each time pushing his member to the hilt with a single stroke. The dog''s pulls his member almost completely out, leaving only 2 cm inside. Then he abruptly pushes it to its full length with a powerful thrust. The champ goes deep into your vagina, your sex lips tightly wrapping around it in pleasure. Several orgasms follow one another, in surging waves. The dog gains pace, gripping you with his paws, pounding his cock into the depths of your vagina.'
+		'You reach back to him and begin to massage his sack, where his throbbing member protrudes from. You start to masturbate him. His dick grows before your eyes, turning into a formidable penis in your hand. You guide him a little and he enters you. He does the rest himself, abruptly pushing his member hungrily into your pussy. You groan with the first blow, and after three strokes, you are fully strung on his member. <<$namesob>> began to thrust with long, strong strokes, each time pushing his member to the hilt. The dog pulls his member almost completely out, leaving only 2 cm inside. Then he abruptly pushes it to its full length with a powerful thrust. The champ goes deep into your vagina, your sex lips tightly wrapping around it in pleasure. Several orgasms follow one another, in surging waves. The dog gains pace, gripping you with his paws, pounding his cock into the depths of your vagina.'
 
 		$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'beast', 'rough'
@@ -72,7 +72,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'polactdog':
 			gs 'cum_call', '', $petID, 1, 0, -1, 60
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/vag2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You push your ass higher and rest his paws on the ground, making it more comfortable for the male''s dick. Your pussy greedily swallows every centimeter of this member, milking him, squeezing along the entire length. Your pussy burns and drips with love juice, some of it trickling down his thighs and dripping to the ground. The thrusts of the dog become stronger and more violent. Soon he begins to growl and you push your ass against his penis, trying to swallow more of it. Your pussy walls squeeze as his cock grows inside, and he drives his cock to the balls. His unit expands in your pussy, pushing against your wall, his knot tightly binding you together. The dog tries to escape, but his member is firmly stuck in your pussy. You squeeze it tight at the base, determined not to be released until it pumps his bitch full of sperm. You scream when the sperm finally hits, filling your throbbing pussy completely. His thick, hot sperm feels warm inside you. His member is spent, throbbing in your depths. Your pussy milks him of his semen, sucking in every last drop. Cum begins to flow down your legs, trickling down your thighs. You are completely filled with his sperm. The dog struggles and moves around, but you stay tied together for a few minutes with his knot in his prize. Eventually, his knot loosens and you are released from him. You fall to the ground, the dogs thick spunk flowing out of your pussy and pooling around you on the ground.'
+			'You push your ass higher and rest his paws on the ground, making it more comfortable for the male''s dick. Your pussy greedily swallows every centimeter of this member, milking him, squeezing along the entire length. Your pussy burns and drips with love juice, some of it trickling down his thighs and dripping to the ground. The thrusts of the dog become stronger and more violent. Soon he begins to growl and you push your ass against his penis, trying to swallow more of it. Your pussy walls squeeze as his cock grows inside, and he drives his cock to the balls. His unit expands in your pussy, pushing against your wall, his knot tightly binding you together. The dog tries to escape, but his member is firmly stuck in your pussy. You squeeze it tight at the base, determined not to be released until it pumps his bitch full of sperm. You scream when the sperm finally hits, filling your throbbing pussy completely. His thick, hot sperm feels warm inside you.'
+			'His member is spent, throbbing in your depths. Your pussy milks him of his semen, sucking in every last drop. Cum begins to flow down your legs, trickling down your thighs. You are completely filled with his sperm. The dog struggles and moves around, but you stay tied together for a few minutes with his knot in his prize. Eventually, his knot loosens and you are released from him. You fall to the ground, the dogs thick spunk flowing out of your pussy and pooling around you on the ground.'
 
 			$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'beast', 'rough'
@@ -309,24 +310,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hardcoredog':
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/spa6.jpg"></center>'
 										'Your dog starts pawing at you so you jump off and get onto all fours, yeilding control.'
 										'<<$namesob>> jumps onto you and rams his cock into your well worked pussy.'
-										'This is too much and you can''t hold on any longer.'
+										'This is too much for you and you can''t hold on any longer.'
 
 										gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'beast'
 										gs 'stat'
 
-										act 'Take me to Nirvana <<$namesob>>':
+										act 'Take me to Nirvana, <<$namesob>>':
 											cla
 											*clr
 											gs 'cum_call', '', $petID, 1, 0, -1, 60
 											gs 'stat'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/spa7.jpg"></center>'
-											'You clung to the dog and he starts cumming inside you.'
+											'You cling to the dog as he starts cumming inside you.'
 
 											gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'beast'
 											$orgasm_or = 'custom'
 											$orgasm_txt = 'Screaming <<$namesob>>''s name, your dam breaks and you orgasm so hard you forget your own name.'
 
-											'Sometime later, having calmed down you slowly regain your senses.'
+											'Sometime later, having calmed down, you slowly regain your senses.'
 
 											gs 'arousal', 'end'
 											gs 'stat'
@@ -348,7 +349,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hardcoredog':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/zoof3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You go into the hall, undress and sit on the sofa, <<$namesob>> is very excited and jumps on you'
+			'You go into the hall, undress and sit on the sofa. <<$namesob>> is very excited and jumps on you'
 
 			act 'Push <<$namesob>> off you':
 				cla
@@ -361,7 +362,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hardcoredog':
 					*clr
 					pcs_vag += 3
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/zoof5.jpg"></center>'
-					'Your struggle with <<$namesob>> fails,	<<$namesob>> puts his paws on your shoulders and, pushing you down, enters your pussy.'
+					'Your struggle with <<$namesob>> fails.	<<$namesob>> puts his paws on your shoulders and, pushing you down, enters your pussy.'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/zoof6.jpg"></center>'
 
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'beast'
@@ -372,7 +373,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hardcoredog':
 						*clr
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/beast/zoo/zoof7.jpg"></center>'
-						'You have no choice so yo uembrace the passion with doggie.'
+						'You have no choice so you embrace the passion with doggie.'
 						'You are close to orgasm.'
 
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'beast'