Merge https://git.catrenelle.com/Kevin_Smarts/glife

glife.qproj

@@ -629,6 +629,9 @@
 	</Folder>
 	<Folder name="Christina Zvereva">
 		<Location name="Zvereva_events"/>
+		<Location name="Zvereva_house"/>
+		<Location name="Zvereva_house_events"/>
+		<Location name="Zvereva_schedule"/>
 		<Location name="Zvereva_sub_1"/>
 	</Folder>
 	<Folder name="Julia Milov">
@@ -893,6 +896,7 @@
 		<Location name="uni_exams1"/>
 		<Location name="uni_exams2"/>
 		<Location name="uni_library"/>
+		<Location name="uni_events"/>
 		<Location name="uniutil"/>
 	</Folder>
 	<Folder name="University Characters">

locations/BDsex.qsrc

@@ -579,7 +579,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'org':
 		'It is your time of the month and, as his member rams into you, vaginal blood flows slowly around his girth. Painful sensations and pleasure mix. You moan while his strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your pussy.'
 		$orgasm_or = 'no'
 		gs 'stat'
-	elseif mesec <= 0 and stat['virgin'] = 0:
+	elseif mesec <= 0 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 		!!no monthly
 		!!horny - excitement
 		!!pcs_vag - the elasticity of the vagina
@@ -692,7 +692,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'org':
 		end
 
 		if pcs_vag <= dick:pcs_vag += 1
-	elseif stat['virgin'] = 1 and mesec <= 0:
+	elseif stat['think_virgin'] = 1 and mesec <= 0:
 		pcs_mood -= 15
 		'You bite your lip in pain and tears gush from your eyes when <<$boydesc>> enters you, breaking your hymen. You moan while weeping as his strong <<dick>> centimeter dick fucks your bloody pussy.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'rough'

locations/BurgerTip.qsrc

@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'work':
 					
 					act 'Suck his dick': gt 'BurgerTip', 'bj'
 					
-					if stat['virgin'] = 0 or pcs_ass > 0:
+					if stat['think_virgin'] = 0 or pcs_ass > 0:
 						act 'Have sex':
 							*clr&cla
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -611,7 +611,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj':
 	
 	if wantrand = 3:
 		'After a short time, Anatoly takes his cock from your mouth and says, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I want all of you."'
-		if stat['virgin'] = 0 or pcs_ass > 0:
+		if stat['think_virgin'] = 0 or pcs_ass > 0:
 			act 'Bend over the desk': gt 'BurgerTip', 'bend'
 		else
 			'Wait! You''ve never had sex before!'
@@ -621,7 +621,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj':
 		end
 	elseif wantrand = 2:
 		'After a short time, Anatoly groans, "<<$pcs_nickname>> if you keep sucking, I''m going to finish"'
-		if stat['virgin'] = 0 or pcs_ass > 0: act 'Bend over the desk': gt 'BurgerTip', 'bend'
+		if stat['think_virgin'] = 0 or pcs_ass > 0: act 'Bend over the desk': gt 'BurgerTip', 'bend'
 		act 'Finish him by hand': gt 'BurgerTip', 'bj_cum'
 		act 'Continue to suck': gt 'BurgerTip', 'bj2'
 	elseif wantrand < 2:

locations/FedorEv2.qsrc

@@ -386,7 +386,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Home':
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'dom'	
 					gs 'stat'						
 
-					if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+					if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 						act 'Tell him you''re a virgin': gt 'FedorEv2', 'Virgin Sex'	
 					else
 						act 'Spread your legs': gt 'FedorEv2', 'Vaginal Sex'
@@ -403,7 +403,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Home':
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'dom'
 					gs 'stat'						
 					
-					if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+					if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 						act 'Tell him you''re a virgin': gt 'FedorEv2', 'Virgin Sex'			
 					else
 						act 'Let him enter you': gt 'FedorEv2', 'Vaginal Sex'

locations/KatjaHomeTalk.qsrc

@@ -11,6 +11,8 @@
 !! katjaQW['QWstage'] = 6 You have talked with Katja about her first experience with a boy.
 !! katjaQW['QWstage'] = 7 You have told Katja about the boys in the park.
 
+!! katjaQW['boy_block'] is set to 1 if you tell Katja that you have no interest in boys when she ask about you sex experience whit boy. 
+
 !! katjaQW['anal_quest'] =1 Katja has asked you to help her have anal sex with a boy.
 !! katjaQW['anal_quest'] =2 You have agreed to help Katja have anal sex with a boy.
 !! katjaQW['anal_quest'] =3 Katja has had anal sex with a boy and you discussed it afterwards.
@@ -23,14 +25,14 @@
 	
 !! katjaQW['slut'] a number that increases as Katja becomes more and more sexualy liberated, and alows her to be villing to do more sexual stuff. (katjaSlut)
 !! katjaQW['horny'] a messure of Katja''s arousal. Grows until she have an orgasmn and will determine how willing she is at the moment to have sex.
-!! katjaQW['dom'] a number that tells if Katja is dominant or submissive. 0 is neutal, a negative means she is submissive and a positive means she is dominant. In general the absolute value needs to be above 30 before you will see any effect. (katjaDom but not a 1 to 1 translation since that variable was all over the place.)
+!! katjaQW['dom'] a number that tells if Katja is dominant or submissive. 0 is neutral, a negative means she is submissive and a positive means she is dominant. In general the absolute value needs to be above 30 before you will see any effect. (katjaDom but not a 1 to 1 translation since that variable was all over the place.)
 
 !! katjaQW['park_sex'] 	a measure of what experience Katja has had with random guys in the park. 0 means she has not had sex with anybody in the park, 
 !!					1 means that she has had sex with one guy at a time (either alone, in a threesome with the player character or while the player had sex with another guy next to them)
 !!					2 means she has had a threesome with 2 guys you met in the park, and 3 means she has paticipated in an orgy with guys from the park. (katjaSex)
 
 !! katjaQW['masturbates'] = 1 Katja has started masturbating at night if she get too horny. (KatjaMastr)
-!! The following 3 varibles functions as pcs_throat, pcs_vag and pcs_ass does for the player character. So whenever Katja has sex with a guy or a dildo is used on her you should add code to change them as is done for the player character in arousal.
+!! The following 3 variables functions as pcs_throat, pcs_vag and pcs_ass does for the player character. So whenever Katja has sex with a guy or a dildo is used on her you should add code to change them as is done for the player character in arousal.
 !! npc_throat['A14'] The capacity for Katja to take a dick (or dildo) down her throat. (KatjaThroat)
 !! npc_vag['A14'] The capacity for Katja to take a dick (or dildo) in the vagina.
 !! npc_ass['A14'] The capacity for Katja to take a dick (or dildo) in her ass. (KatjaAnus)
@@ -163,12 +165,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 					!!If Marcus have agreed to be katja''s first, the player will tell this to Katja the next time the talk at home
 					gt 'KatjaHomeTalk', 'Marcus_answer_talk'
 			
-				elseif katjaQW['QWstage'] < 4 and katjaQW['slut'] >= 50 and katjaQW['horny'] >= 40 and (katjaQW['knows_BJ'] + katjaQW['knows_sex']) >= 2 and npc_sex['A14'] > 0:
+				elseif katjaQW['QWstage'] < 4 and katjaQW['slut'] >= 50 and katjaQW['horny'] >= 40 and (katjaQW['knows_BJ'] + katjaQW['knows_sex']) >= 2 and npc_sex['A14'] > 0 and katjaQW['anal_quest'] ! 1:
 					!!If Katja have been corrupted enough, have had sex with the player and know that the player have both given blow jobs and have had vaginal sex with a boyu. She will if she is horny ask the player to help her arange her first time with a boy.
 					gt 'KatjaHomeTalk', 'sex_with_boy_ask'
 			
 				else
-					if katjaQW['slut'] >= 60 and katjaQW['horny'] >= 40 and (katjaQW['knows_BJ'] + katjaQW['knows_anal']) >= 2 and npc_sex['A14'] > 0 and katjaQW['anal_quest'] = 0: 
+					if katjaQW['slut'] >= 60 and katjaQW['horny'] >= 40 and (katjaQW['knows_BJ'] + katjaQW['knows_anal']) >= 2 and npc_sex['A14'] > 0 and katjaQW['anal_quest'] = 0 and katjaQW['QWstage'] ! 4: 
 						!!If Katja have been corrupted enough, have had sex with the player and know that the player have both given blow jobs and have had vaginal sex with a boy. She will if she is horny ask the player to help her arange her first time with a boy.
 						gt 'KatjaHomeTalk', 'anal_sex_with_boy_ask'
 				
@@ -530,6 +532,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat':
 		end
 	end
 
+	if katjaQW['boy_block'] = 1:
+		act 'Tell Katja you are have decided that boys are fun after all <br><font color="red">(Katja will start asking about sex with boys boys again)</font>': gt 'KatjaHomeTalk',  'boy_yes'
+	end
+
 	if mey_vika['key'] = 1:
 		Act 'Leave the room': gt 'mey_home', 'start'
 	else
@@ -883,7 +889,11 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Sextalk':
 	'Turning red, Katja looks at you thoughtfully.'
-	kattalkrand = rand(0, 4)
+	if katjaQW['boy_block'] = 1:
+		kattalkrand = rand(3, 4)
+	else
+		kattalkrand = rand(0, 4)
+	end
 
 	if kattalkrand = 0:
 		if katjaQW['knows_BJ'] > 0:
@@ -892,8 +902,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Sextalk':
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, have you ever given a guy a blowjob?"'
 		end
 
+		act 'Tell Katja you are not into boys <br><font color="red">(blocks further contents with Katja and boys)</font>': gt 'KatjaHomeTalk',  'boy_no'
+
 		if stat['bj'] > 0:
-			gs'KatjaHomeTalk','bj_talk1'
+			gs 'KatjaHomeTalk', 'bj_talk1'
 		else
 			act 'You''ve never given a blowjob':
 				cls
@@ -910,6 +922,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Sextalk':
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, have you ever had sex with a guy?"'
 		end
 
+		act 'Tell Katja you are not into boys <br><font color="red">(blocks further contents with Katja and boys)</font>': gt 'KatjaHomeTalk',  'boy_no'
+
 		if stat['vaginal'] > 0:
 			act 'Talk about sex':
 				cls
@@ -938,6 +952,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Sextalk':
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, have you ever had a guy stick it in your ass?"'
 		end
 
+		act 'Tell Katja you are not into boys <br><font color="red">(blocks further contents with Katja and boys)</font>': gt 'KatjaHomeTalk',  'boy_no'
+
 		if stat['anal'] > 0:
 			act 'Talk about anal':
 				cls
@@ -1830,5 +1846,37 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'katja_uni_tell':
 	end
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'boy_no':
+	*clr & cla
+	minut += 15
+	katjaQW['horny'] += 20
+	katjaQW['boy_block'] = 1
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
+	'"I don''t have interest in boys" you tell Katja. "Oh" she replies "Does that mean..." she starts but her voice falters. "Yes. I am only interested in girls" you say. Katja doesn''t say anything but her face is getting redder and she looks intensely at you with her big eyes.'
+	act 'Talk about something else': gt 'KatjaHomeTalk'
+	if mey_vika['key'] = 1:
+		act 'Leave the room': gt 'mey_home', 'start'
+	else
+		act 'Say goodbye and leave':minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'boy_yes':
+	*clr & cla
+	minut += 15
+	katjaQW['horny'] += 10
+	katjaQW['boy_block'] = 0
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
+	'"So I told you earlier that I had no interest in boys" you say "Yes I remember" she say. "Turns out I was wrong. I am in fact starting find boys attractive" you say. "So have you already done something with a boy? Tell me me everything you have done? What is it  you find attractive about boys. Who is the hottest guy in school..." Katja start bombarding you whit questions. "Slow down. This is also something new for me. But we can talk about boys if you want to" you say, as you see Katja''s face getting more red'
+	act 'Talk about something else': gt 'KatjaHomeTalk'
+	if mey_vika['key'] = 1:
+		act 'Leave the room': gt 'mey_home', 'start'
+	else
+		act 'Say goodbye and leave':minut += 5 & gt 'pav_residential'
+	end
+end
+
 --- KatjaHomeTalk ---------------------------------
 

locations/Katja_Tanga.qsrc

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'secretroom':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/sex/school/tanga4_10.jpg"></center>'
 			'After a few minutes of teasing her nipples, you kiss your way down to her stomach, pulling off her skirt as you do. Your lips descend down her body and you begin kissing and teasing her clit with your tongue. You pull her down and gentle push her down on her back. Once she''s comfortable, you slide two of your fingers into her wet pussy and begin to finger fuck her. She moans in pleasure she squeezes her breasts firmly in her hands.'
 			!!The requirements here are to make sure you own a dildo and that neither you or Katja has a hymen, since the scene does not acount for that possibility.
-			if (middildo = 1 or dildo = 1 or largedildo = 1 or bigdildo = 1 or extradildo = 1 or superdildo = 1 or maddildo = 1) and stat['virgin'] = 0 and npc_vag['A14'] > 0:
+			if (middildo = 1 or dildo = 1 or largedildo = 1 or bigdildo = 1 or extradildo = 1 or superdildo = 1 or maddildo = 1) and stat['think_virgin'] = 0 and npc_vag['A14'] > 0:
 				act 'Get dildo':
 					if dildonumber > 0:
 						gs 'boyStat', 'D<<dildonumber>>'
@@ -104,7 +104,6 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'school':
 	*clr & cla
-	i=rand(1,6)
 	katjaQW['no_panties_day'] = daystart
 	'You do a quick turn, causing your skirt to twirl up and expose your lack of panties for a brief second. Katja''s eyes widen in surprise. "You''re not wearing panties?!" she whispers in shock.'
 	if analplugIN = 1:
@@ -112,7 +111,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'school':
 		inhib_exp += rand(1,4)
 		'"I''m not only not wearing panties!" you say while smiling enigmatically. You turn and lift your skirt before parting your ass cheeks, showing Katja the butt plug in your ass.'
 	else
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga1_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga1_<<rand(1,6)>>.jpg"></center>'
 		inhib_exp += rand(1,3)
 		'You look around, making sure that nobody is nearby before turning your ass towards Katja and bending over, showing off your bare ass and pussy and proving that you''re not wearing any panties.'
 	end
@@ -149,7 +148,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'school2':
 	katjaQW['horny'] += 5
 	KatjaQW['Slut'] += 1
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga3_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga3_<<rand(1,6)>>.jpg"></center>'
 	'Katja looks around to make sure nobody is nearby before furtively lifting up her skirt and showing you her panties. "See? I''m wearing panties."'
 	act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
@@ -244,7 +243,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'school5':
 	gs 'stat'
 	katjaQW['horny'] += 10
 	KatjaQW['Slut'] += 1
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga6_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/tanga6_<<rand(1,6)>>.jpg"></center>'
 	'Without any hesitation, Katja pulls up her skirt and shows you her pussy. 
 	"Like what you see?" she asks with a teasing smile.'
 	act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -255,9 +254,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 	gs 'arousal', 'flash', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	katjaQW['no_panties_day_disco'] = daystart & ! katjaQW['no_panties_day_disco'] to operate once a day
-	i=rand(1,3)
 	inhib_exp += rand(1,2)
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_disco2_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_disco2_<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
 	'You lift the edge of your skirt up and flash your pussy at Katja. "I showed you mine, now show me yours."'
 	act 'Ask to see':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -269,6 +267,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 		elseif KatjaQW['Slut'] <= 40:
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', -5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
+			gs 'stat'
 			katjaQW['Horny'] += 10
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_disco4.jpg"></center>'
 			'Katja looks around to make sure nobody is watching before partially bending over and lifting her skirt, showing you her thong and giving you a nice view of her ass.'
@@ -277,6 +276,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			katjaQW['Horny'] += 10
 			KatjaQW['Slut'] += 1
+			gs 'stat'
 			if katjaQW['disco_Foto'] = 0:
 				katjaQW['disco_Foto'] = 1 & !The flag in the photo
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_disco5_1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -297,6 +297,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'arousal', 'flash', -5
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
+						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_disco6_2.jpg"></center>'
 						'Laughing, you pull aside your dress and reveal one of your bare breasts. Katja looks at you, wanting more. "I showed you both of mine!" 
 						You smile. "Yeah, but you''re wearing panties and I''m not."'
@@ -313,6 +314,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'arousal', 'flash', -5
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
+					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_disco6_3.jpg"></center>'
 					'You pull at the edge of your dress, barely exposing one of your nipples as Katja indignantly squeaks."Hey, I showed you mine!"
 					You respond with a laugh. "I already showed you my pussy, so that makes us even."'
@@ -326,6 +328,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 				end
 			else
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
+				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_disco6_4.jpg"></center>'
 				'You watch with anticipation, but Katja just pulls down her top, showing a little extra cleavage before stopping. After seeing your disappointed look, she sticks out her tongue and turns away. You grit your teeth at her teasing.'
 			end
@@ -335,7 +338,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dance':
 			katjaQW['Horny'] += 10
 			KatjaQW['Slut'] += 1
 			katjaQW['no_panties_at_disco']= 1 &!Event at the end of the disc
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_disco7_<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_disco7_<<rand(1,3)>>.jpg"></center>'
 			'Katja doesn''t hesitate and lifts the hem of her skirt, showing you her bare pussy.'
 		end
 		act 'Do something else': gt 'pav_disco_classmates', 'classmates'

locations/Komp.qsrc

@@ -1791,16 +1791,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fuckornot':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/fuckornot/fuckable_list.jpg"></center>'
 	gs 'gschool_groups', 'fuckornot'
 	
-	'10: Perfection. - Would let her do whatever she wants to me'
-	'9: Smoking Hot. - Would eat her ass'
-	'8: Hot. - Would fuck that ass'
-	'7: Damn girl. - Bragging rights for fucking.'
-	'6: Mos def smashable. - Totally fuckable, fuck buddy material'
-	'5: Merely fuckable. - wouldn''t mind smashing it, blowjob buddy material.'
-	'4: Almost fuckable. - Doable, in the dark or to get a blowjob from.'
-	'3: Unattractive. - Doable, if I get myself drunk first, good match for Petria'
-	'2: Fugly. - Has potential compared to a trash bin, even Lesco could do better'
-	'1: Hideous. - Wouldn''t touch it with a stick'
+	'10: Perfection - Would let her do whatever she wants to me.'
+	'9: Smoking Hot - Would eat her ass.'
+	'8: Hot - Would fuck that ass.'
+	'7: Damn girl - Bragging rights for fucking.'
+	'6: Smashable - Totally fuckable. Fuck buddy material'
+	'5: Merely fuckable - Wouldn''t mind smashing it. Blowjob buddy material.'
+	'4: Almost fuckable - Doable in the dark or to get a blowjob from.'
+	'3: Unattractive - Doable if I get myself drunk first. Good match for Petia.'
+	'2: Fugly - Has potential compared to a trash bin. Even Lesco could do better.'
+	'1: Hideous - Wouldn''t touch it with a stick.'
 	
 	act 'Leave the site':
 		if $view_location = 'school':
@@ -1817,16 +1817,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hotornot':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/image_needed.png"></center>'
 	gs 'gschool_groups', 'hotornot'
 	
-	'10: Perfection. - Would let him do whatever he wants to me'
-	'9: Smoking Hot. - Arm Candy'
-	'8: Hot. - Would ride him'
-	'7: Damn man. - Bragging rights for fucking.'
-	'6: Ridable. - Totally fuckable, fuck buddy material'
-	'5: Merely fuckable. - maybe doggy style so I don''t have to look at him.'
-	'4: Almost fuckable. - might sit on his face.'
-	'3: Unattractive. - Not even Zinaida would be seen with him.'
-	'2: Fugly. - Horribly ugly, just being seen with him would lose you social standing.'
-	'1: Hideous. - Wouldn''t touch it with a stick, not even Sonia would take his money.'
+	'10: Perfection - Would let him do whatever he wants to me.'
+	'9: Smoking Hot - Arm candy.'
+	'8: Hot - Would ride him.'
+	'7: Damn son - Bragging rights for fucking.'
+	'6: Rideable - Totally fuckable. Fuck buddy material'
+	'5: Merely fuckable. - Doggy style so I don''t have to look at him.'
+	'4: Almost fuckable - Might sit on his face.'
+	'3: Unattractive - Not even Zinaida would be seen with him.'
+	'2: Fugly - Horribly ugly. Just being seen with him would lose you social standing.'
+	'1: Hideous - Wouldn''t touch it with a stick. Not even a whore would take his money.'
 	
 	act 'Leave the site':
 		if $view_location = 'school':

locations/LariskaSex.qsrc

@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dildo1':
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -10, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
-	if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 		if LariskaQW['tellvirg'] = 0:
 			'I''m a virgin, you tell her softly.'
 			LariskaQW['tellvirg'] = 1
@@ -304,9 +304,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj_1':
 	'Putting her hands on the back of your head, she starts face-fucking you in long, deep strokes. She pulls it out, smacks your cheeks and forehead with it, before pushing it back in.'
 	'Eventually she tires of this game, eager to put her rubber dick to use on your other holes.'
 	pcs_horny += 5
-	gs 'arousal', 'bj', -5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
+	gs 'arousal', 'dildo_suck', -5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
-	if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 		act 'Get your cherry popped':
 			temp = rand (1, 3)
 			if temp = 1:
@@ -352,7 +352,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miss_1':
 	$orgasm_txt = 'As Lariska pounds away, the rush of pleasure shooting through your body sets off an orgasm, and the room quickly fills with the sounds of you screaming her name.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
-	if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 		act 'Get your cherry popped':
 			temp = rand (1, 3)
 			if temp = 1:
@@ -398,7 +398,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cow_1':
 	$orgasm_txt = 'The multiple sensations start to overwhelm you, causing an orgasm to sweep through you like lightning. Throwing your head back, you ride the waves as they wash through you.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
-	if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 		act 'Get your cherry popped':
 			temp = rand (1, 3)
 			if temp = 1:
@@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dog_1':
 	$orgasm_txt = 'The pleasure builds into a crescendo, threatening to overwhelm your senses as an orgasm rips through you.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
-	if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 		act 'Get your cherry popped':
 			temp = rand (1, 3)
 			if temp = 1:
@@ -493,7 +493,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal_miss_1':
 	$orgasm_txt = 'The sensation of having your ass pounded by Lariska overwhelms you, sending waves of pleasure screaming through your body.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
-	if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 		act 'Get your cherry popped':
 			temp = rand (1, 3)
 			if temp = 1:
@@ -541,7 +541,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal_cow_1':
 	$orgasm_txt = 'The sensation of having your ass pounded by Lariska overwhelms you, sending waves of pleasure screaming through your body.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
-	if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 		act 'Get your cherry popped':
 			temp = rand (1, 3)
 			if temp = 1:
@@ -591,7 +591,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'anal_dog_1':
 	$orgasm_txt = 'The sensation of having your ass pounded by Lariska overwhelms you, sending waves of pleasure screaming through your body.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
-	if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 		act 'Get your cherry popped':
 			temp = rand (1, 3)
 			if temp = 1:
@@ -641,7 +641,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boyfriend_sex':
 			act 'Your Turn':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/boyfriend/bf_4.jpg"></center>'
-				if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+				if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 					if analplugin = 1:
 						if pcs_ass < 16:
 							'Lariska slides the butt plug out of your narrow and tight ass, opening the way for Lev.'
@@ -676,7 +676,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boyfriend_sex':
 				act 'Cowgirl':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/lariska/boyfriend/bf_5.jpg"></center>'
-					if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+					if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 						'Deciding to switch things up, or maybe because he was winded, Lev pulls out and sits down, stretching out and pulling you down on top. Feeling more in control now, you slide his dick back into your ass and start grinding your hips against his.'
 						'Lariska wastes no time and climbs onto his face, leaning in to keep rubbing your clitoris while Lev spreads her cheeks and licks her pussy. The sounds of moaning fills the room, and you know your going to cum soon from the dual sensations of Lev''s cock in your butt and Lariska''s rubbing.'
 						pcs_mood += 15

locations/MRear.qsrc

@@ -15,7 +15,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'garden':
 	act 'Go to the conservatory': gt 'MConservatory'
 	act 'Go to the garage': gt 'MRear', 'garage'
 
-	if $BDSMrole = 's' and rand (0, 100) < 5 and stat['virgin'] = 0:
+	if $BDSMrole = 's' and rand (0, 100) < 5 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 		gt 'MRear', 'gEV1'
 	elseif rand (0,100) < 3:
 		menu_off = 1

locations/MartinSex2.qsrc

@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'MartinSexPrep':
 	end
 	
 	*nl
-	if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 		'But before either of you can make another move, a nagging thought that''s been floating around the back of your head pushes to the foreground of your mind: You are a virgin. Is Martin <i>really</i> the man you want to have your first time with? Not to mention all the risks involved if you didn''t take all necessary precautions against pregnancy...'
 	elseif prezik > 0 and preziktype ! 2 and tabletkishot < 1 and pillcon2 < 30000 and ovulate > 0: 
 		'But before either of you can make another move, a simple, powerful thought crosses your mind: You could get pregnant. And unless your count is off, today is a dangerous day to boot. You take a tentative look at your ' + iif(bag > 0,'purse','pocket') + ', the condoms sitting in it materializing before your inner eye.' + iif(preziktype=1,' You usually prefer to have sex without condoms, but...', ' ')

locations/NikoPayback.qsrc

@@ -313,11 +313,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 		'Once you''re fully naked, Niko smiles. "It''s time for you to put that mouth of yours to good use. Suck my fucking dick bitch!" He pushes you onto your knees and pulls down his pants before pressing the tip of his dick against your lips.'
 	elseif VK = 2:
 		'Once you''re fully naked, Niko smiles. "You''ll be my little pee slut today, understand?" You lower your head and nod as Niko pulls down his pants. "Open your mouth and say ahh."'
-	elseif (VK = 3 or VK = 4) and stat['virgin'] = 1:
+	elseif (VK = 3 or VK = 4) and stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 		'Once you''re fully naked, Niko smiles. "I''m gonna fuck your pussy today, so spread those legs!" You fearfully shake your head. "But I can''t... I''m... I''m a virgin." His eyes light up. "Really? Today really is my lucky day. I get to fuck a virgin <i>and</i> take your innocence from you at the same time." You recoil in shock. "Please no! Why would you do that to me?!" He just smiles. "Because it will make you sad, that''s why. Now get over to the sink and spread those fucking legs of yours or I will!"'
 	elseif VK = 3:
 		'Once you''re fully naked, Niko smiles. "I''m gonna fuck your pussy today, so spread those legs!"'		
-	elseif VK = 4 and stat['virgin'] = 1:
+	elseif VK = 4 and stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 	    'Once you''re fully naked, Niko smiles. "You''ll be riding my dick today, so get over here." You fearfully shake your head. "But I can''t... I''m... I''m a virgin." His eyes light up. "Really? Today really is my lucky day. I get to fuck a virgin <i>and</i> take your innocence from you at the same time." You recoil in shock. "Please no! Why would you do that to me?!" He just smiles. "Because it will make you sad, that''s why. Now get over here and sit on my dick. I won''t ask again!"'
 	elseif VK = 4:
 		'Once you''re fully naked, Niko smiles. "You''ll be riding my dick today, so get over here." You meekly nod as you approach him. He unbuttons his pants and grabs you before turning you around and wrapping his hand around your neck, pulling you onto his dick.'
@@ -372,7 +372,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 			end
 		end	
 		
-	elseif VK = 3 and stat['virgin'] = 1:
+	elseif VK = 3 and stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 		act 'Do as he says':	
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'
@@ -419,7 +419,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 			end
 		end
 		
-	elseif VK = 4 and stat['virgin'] = 1:		
+	elseif VK = 4 and stat['think_virgin'] = 1:		
 		act 'Vaginal':	
 			*clr & cla
 			gs'stat'

locations/Serge_kuh.qsrc

@@ -335,7 +335,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'help_ev1':
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, stop tormenting me!" he tells you. "I''m not a robot, I''m a man with needs and desires! If you keep that up, you have no one but yourself to blame for what happens next..."'	
 			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 5
 			gs 'stat'
-			if npc_rel['A112'] >= 50 and stat['virgin'] = 0:
+			if npc_rel['A112'] >= 50 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 				gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 					act 'Stop teasing Sergey (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':

locations/Voltrenersex.qsrc

@@ -106,7 +106,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/gym/volley/sex/voitrensex6.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'Kissing the head of his cock, you open your mouth and began to caress his dick with your tongue, lightly sucking it. Then, you start to suck his cock in earnest, running your lips up and down his shaft as you bob your head, you hands caressing his balls as you do.'
-			if trenerSex >= 3 and stat['virgin'] = 1 and stat['vaginal'] = 0 and mesec <= 0:
+			if trenerSex >= 3 and stat['think_virgin'] = 1 and stat['vaginal'] = 0 and mesec <= 0:
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 					act 'Lose your virginity (<<will_cost>> Willpower)': cla & gt 'Voltrenersex', 'Defl'
 				else

locations/Zvereva_events.qsrc

@@ -1,5 +1,13 @@
 # Zvereva_events
+!!22/05/14 - Alaratt
 
+!!christinaQW['bully'] - earned if you stand up for yourself or not - less then 50 is you standing up, more then 50 is you being meek - at a certain point these unlock the below options
+!!christinaQW['pre_fight'] - 1 means you are preparing to fight her
+!!christinaQW['fight'] - 1 means you fought and won, -1 means you lost and are now her plaything
+!!christinaQW['pre_bm'] - 1 means you are searching for the blackmail material to use against her
+!!christinaQW['blackmail'] - 1 means you have the blackmail and need to talk to her to initiate, 2 means you have her blackmailed and are mostly safe from her bullying
+!!christinaQW['submit'] - 1 means you willingly submitted, stays at 0 if you lose the fight, for reference on how you became her pet
+!!christinaQW['subpath'] - 1 means you are looking to become her pet, 2 means you are her new pet, 3 means you have seen shower events, more will come to increase this
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'cikl':
 	!!failsafe, should be used whenever adding or subtracting with bully events 
@@ -10,7 +18,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cikl':
 		if christinaQW['bully'] < 1: christinaQW['bully'] = 1
 		if christinaQW['bully'] > 99: christinaQW['bully'] = 99
 	end
-	
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'christina_bu_1':
@@ -21,7 +28,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'christina_bu_1':
 	christinaQW['bully'] = 50
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nastymessage.jpg"></center>'
-	'It''s your first day back to school, and Christina has decided to welcome you as only she could. As you approach your locker you find her writing graffiti on your locker.'
+	'It''s your first day back to school, and Christina has decided to welcome you as only she could. As you approach your locker you find her writing graffiti on it.'
 	act 'Say nothing':
 		menu_off = 1
 		pcs_mood -= 10
@@ -44,7 +51,51 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'christina_bu_1':
 		'You try to rub it off, but have no luck. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Fucking bitch, someday I''ll get even, I swear!'+$CloseInnerThought
 		act 'continue': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'bulding'
 	end
-	
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'christina_bu_2':
+	menu_off = 1
+	cla & *clr
+	'You walk through the hallways until headiing outside. As you start down the path to home, you stumble and fall flat on your face. Stunned a bit, you lay there until you hear giggling and what sounds distinctly like a phone camera taking a picture. Climbing to your feet, you realize several of your classmates watched it happen and your face starts turning a bit red. Turning around, you realize who took a picture of you like that.'
+	'"Smooth move," Christina says with her phone still aimed at you. "Hold on, I gotta make sure Lizaveta gets this."'
+	if $pantyworntype ! 'none':
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bully/fall_panties.jpg"></center>'
+		act 'Say nothing':
+			christinaQW['bully'] += 2
+			cla
+			'Your face burns as you imagine everybody in school looking at a picture of your panties, but she will do it no matter what you say, so you just quietly gather your fallen books and walk away.'
+
+			act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+		end
+		act 'Say something':
+			christinaQW['bully'] -= 2
+			cla
+			'Your face burns as you imagine everybody in school looking at a picture of your panties, and can''t stop yourself from saying "You pervert. Do you get off looking at girls panties?"'
+			'Christina just shrugs and responds with "You''re the one showing them to the world. I bet you did it on purpose so people could see your'+iif($pantyworntype = 'cheap', ' ugly',' cute')+' panties, slut." She finishes sending the picture, gives you a smirk, and walks away.'
+			'All you can do at this point is gather your fallen stuff and head out.'
+
+			act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+		end
+	else
+		gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 'tiny', 'local'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bully/fall_nopanties.jpg"></center>'
+		act 'Say nothing':
+			christinaQW['bully'] += 3
+			cla
+			'Your face burns as you imagine everybody in school looking at a picture of your pussy on display, but she will do it no matter what you say, so you just quietly gather your fallen books and walk away.'
+
+			act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+		end
+		act 'Say something':
+			christinaQW['bully'] -= 3
+			cla
+			'Your face burns as you imagine everybody in school looking at a picture of your pussy on display, and can''t stop yourself from saying "You pervert. Do you get off taking upskirt pictures?"'
+			'Christina just shrugs and responds with "You''re the one not wearing panties. I bet you did it on purpose so people could see your <<$pc_desc[''pubes'']>> pussy, slut." She finishes sending the picture, gives you a smirk, and walks away.'
+			'All you can do at this point is gather your fallen stuff and head out.'
+
+			act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+		end
+	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'christina_decide1':

locations/Zvereva_house.qsrc

@@ -0,0 +1,240 @@
+# Zvereva_house
+!!22/05/14 - Alaratt
+
+!!christinaQW['bully'] - earned if you stand up for yourself or not - less then 50 is you standing up, more then 50 is you being meek - at a certain point these unlock the below options
+!!christinaQW['pre_fight'] - 1 means you are preparing to fight her
+!!christinaQW['fight'] - 1 means you fought and won, -1 means you lost and are now her plaything
+!!christinaQW['pre_bm'] - 1 means you are searching for the blackmail material to use against her
+!!christinaQW['blackmail'] - 1 means you have the blackmail and need to talk to her to initiate, 2 means you have her blackmailed and are mostly safe from her bullying
+!!christinaQW['submit'] - 1 means you willingly submitted, stays at 0 if you lose the fight, for reference on how you became her pet
+!!christinaQW['subpath'] - 1 means you are looking to become her pet, 2 means you are her new pet, 3 means you have seen shower events, more will come to increase this
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'front_door':
+	$loc = 'Zvereva_house'
+	$loc_arg = 'front_door'
+	$menu_loc = 'Zvereva_house'
+	$menu_arg = 'front_door'
+
+	menu_off = 1
+	minut += 1
+	gs 'Zvereva_schedule'
+	gs 'stat'
+
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/christina_home/front_door.jpg"></center>'
+	'The Zvereva family house is quite impressive.'
+
+	if chrisloc['athome'] = 1:
+		'Christina answers the door smiling, but as soon as she sees you, she frowns. "I don''t remember inviting you over today."'
+		'You bow your head, but say nothing.'
+		'"Fine. Come inside."'
+
+		act 'Go inside': gt 'Zvereva_house', 'hallw'
+	else
+		'Nobody answers the door.'
+		act 'Go back to town': minut += 1 & gt 'pav_residential'
+	end
+
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'hallw':
+	CLOSE ALL
+	$loc = 'Zvereva_house'
+	$loc_arg = 'hallw'
+	$menu_loc = 'Zvereva_house'
+	$menu_arg = 'hallw'
+	$locM = 'Zvereva_house'
+	$locM_arg = 'hallw'
+	$location_type = 'private'
+	killvar '$locclass'
+
+	menu_off = 0
+	minut += 1
+	gs 'Zvereva_schedule'
+	gs 'stat'
+	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
+	if frost > 0: frost = 0
+
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Foyer</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/christina_home/foyer.jpg"></center>'
+
+	act 'Leave':
+		if $clothingworntype ! 'nude':
+			minut += 1
+			gt 'pav_residential'
+		else
+			msg'<b><font color = red>You need to get dressed.</font></b>'
+			gt 'Zvereva_house', 'hallw'
+		end
+	end
+
+	'The main hallway of Christina''s house. You can visit the different rooms from here.'
+	'There''s a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a> hanging on the wall.'
+
+	if chrisloc = 1 or chrisloc = 2 or chrisloc = 8 or chrisloc = 22:
+		'Christina is in her bedroom right now.'
+	elseif chrisloc = 3 or chrisloc = 11 or chrisloc = 12:
+		'Christina is in the kitchen right now.'
+	elseif chrisloc = 14 or chrisloc = 17:
+		'Christina is in the living room right now.'
+	elseif chrisloc = 13:
+		'Christina is in the bathroom right now.'
+	else
+		'Christina isn''t home right now.'
+	end
+
+	act 'Living Room':gt 'Zvereva_house', 'livroom'
+	act 'Kitchen':gt 'Zvereva_house', 'kitch'
+	act 'Bathroom':gt 'Zvereva_house', 'bathr'
+	act 'Christina''s Bedroom':gt 'Zvereva_house', 'chris_bedro'
+	if slyQW['met'] = 1: act 'Silvestr''s bedroom': gt 'Zvereva_house', 'sly_bedro'
+
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'livroom':
+	$loc = 'Zvereva_house'
+	$loc_arg = 'livroom'
+	$menu_loc = 'Zvereva_house'
+	$menu_arg = 'livroom'
+	$location_type = 'private'
+	$locclass = 'livingr'
+
+	menu_off = 0
+	minut += 1
+	gs 'Zvereva_schedule'
+	gs 'stat'
+
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Living Room</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/christina_home/living_room.jpg"></center>'
+
+	act 'Leave the room': gt 'Zvereva_house', 'hallw'
+
+	'A spacious room with two large couches and an expensive looking tv hanging on the wall above a fireplace.'
+
+	if chrisloc = 14: 'Christina is watching TV right now.'
+	if chrisloc = 17: 'Christina is hanging out here, looking bored.'
+
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'kitch':
+	$loc = 'Zvereva_house'
+	$loc_arg = 'kitch'
+	$menu_loc = 'Zvereva_house'
+	$menu_arg = 'kitch'
+	$locclass = 'kitr'
+
+	menu_off = 0
+	minut += 1
+	!!gs 'kit_din'
+	gs 'Zvereva_schedule'
+	gs 'stat'
+
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Kitchen</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/christina_home/kitchen.jpg"></center>'
+
+	act 'Leave the room': gt 'Zvereva_house', 'hallw'
+
+	'A very modern looking kitchen with a large fridge and stove.'
+
+	if chrisloc = 3: 'Christina is here, eating breakfast.'
+	if chrisloc = 11: 'Christina is making dinner.'
+	if chrisloc = 12: 'Christina is eating dinner right now.'
+
+	!!dynamic $edasnack
+	!!dynamic $sandwich
+	dynamic $driwater
+	!!dynamic $dritea
+	dynamic $fill_bottle
+	!!dynamic $edaD
+	!!dynamic $pranik
+	!!dynamic $fatdel
+	!!dynamic $lekarstvo
+	!!dynamic $vitamin
+
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'bathr':
+	$loc = 'Zvereva_house'
+	$loc_arg = 'bathr'
+	$locM = 'Zvereva_house'
+	$locM_arg = 'bathr'
+	$menu_loc = 'Zvereva_house'
+	$menu_arg = 'bathr'
+	$location_type = 'bathroom'
+
+	menu_off = 0
+	minut += 1
+	gs 'Zvereva_schedule'
+	gs 'stat'
+
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Bathroom</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/christina_home/bathroom.jpg"></center>'
+
+	act 'Leave the room': gt 'Zvereva_house', 'hallw'
+
+	'The stylish room has a large glass shower, toilet, sink, and a <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''start''">mirror</a> where you can ' + iif(pcs_hairbsh = 0,'<a href="exec:gt ''mirror'',''brush''">brush</a>','brush') + ' your hair.'
+
+	if chrisloc = 13: '<a href="exec:gt ''Zvereva_house_events'',''chris_shower''">Christina</a> is here, taking a shower.'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'chris_bedro':
+	$loc = 'Zvereva_house'
+	$loc_arg = 'chris_bedro'
+	$menu_loc = 'Zvereva_house'
+	$menu_arg = 'chris_bedro'
+	$locM = 'Zvereva_house'
+	$locM_arg = 'chris_bedro'
+	$location_type = 'private'
+	$locclass = 'bedr'
+
+	menu_off = 0
+	minut += 1
+	gs 'Zvereva_schedule'
+	gs 'stat'
+
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Christina''s Bedroom</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/christina_home/chris_bedroom.jpg"></center>'
+
+	act 'Leave the room': gt 'Zvereva_house', 'hallw'
+
+	'Surprisingly girly for someone of Christina''s tastes, there is a large bed, walk-in closet, a desk, and a large <a href="exec:gt ''mirror'', ''start''">mirror</a> leaning against the wall.'
+
+	if chrisloc = 1: 'Christina is in bed, asleep.'
+	if chrisloc = 2: 'Christina is getting dressed right now.'
+	if chrisloc = 8: 'Christina is here, doing her homework.'
+	if chrisloc = 22: 'Christina is hanging out here, looking bored.'
+
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'sly_bedro':
+	$loc = 'Zvereva_house'
+	$loc_arg = 'sly_bedro'
+	$menu_loc = 'Zvereva_house'
+	$menu_arg = 'sly_bedro'
+	$locM = 'Zvereva_house'
+	$locM_arg = 'sly_bedro'
+	$location_type = 'private'
+	$locclass = 'bedr'
+
+	menu_off = 0
+	minut += 1
+	gs 'Zvereva_schedule'
+	gs 'stat'
+
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Silvestr''s Bedroom</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/christina_home/sly_bedroom.jpg"></center>'
+
+	act 'Leave the room': gt 'Zvereva_house', 'hallw'
+
+	'Sly''s rather stylish room holds a huge bed, a small couch, and a lot of different artsy looking items.'
+
+end
+
+--- Zvereva_house ---------------------------------
+

locations/Zvereva_house_events.qsrc

@@ -0,0 +1,108 @@
+# Zvereva_house_events
+!!22/05/14 - Alaratt
+
+!!christinaQW['bully'] - earned if you stand up for yourself or not - less then 50 is you standing up, more then 50 is you being meek - at a certain point these unlock the below options
+!!christinaQW['pre_fight'] - 1 means you are preparing to fight her
+!!christinaQW['fight'] - 1 means you fought and won, -1 means you lost and are now her plaything
+!!christinaQW['pre_bm'] - 1 means you are searching for the blackmail material to use against her
+!!christinaQW['blackmail'] - 1 means you have the blackmail and need to talk to her to initiate, 2 means you have her blackmailed and are mostly safe from her bullying
+!!christinaQW['submit'] - 1 means you willingly submitted, stays at 0 if you lose the fight, for reference on how you became her pet
+!!christinaQW['subpath'] - 1 means you are looking to become her pet, 2 means you are her new pet, 3 means you have seen shower events, more will come to increase this
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Chris_walk_home':
+	menu_off = 1
+	gs 'stat'
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big18.jpg"></center>'
+	if christinaQW['subpath'] = 4:
+		christinaQW['subpath'] = 5
+		'"About time, bitch. Come on, lets go." She starts walking away at a brisk pace. You follow, making sure to stay at least one step behind her.'
+
+		act 'Follow her':
+			minut += 10
+			*clr & cla
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/christina_home/front_door.jpg"></center>'
+			'You follow her into the residential district of Pavlovsk, until you get to a large house about ten minutes from the school. Christina''s parents are obviously fairly wealthy, to own a house this size.'
+			*nl
+			'You enter the house behind her.'
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Listen to her':
+				*clr & cla
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big18.jpg"></center>'
+				'"Ok, here are the rules you will follow, or I will '+iif(christinaQW['fight'] = -1, 'beat you black and blue. Again.','spank the absolute shit out of you.')+'"'
+				*nl
+				'"1. You will not speak unless spoken to, or otherwise given permission. When you do, you will either call me by name in the presence of others, or Mistress when we are alone."'
+				*nl
+				'"2. You will do anything I say. If I say clean, you will clean. If I say strip and lick my pussy, you will do it. No hesitation."'
+				*nl
+				'"3. If you meet my parents or brothers, you will be polite, demure, and discreet about anything and everything I do. Only Sly knows anything about my personal life. He is the youngest of my older brothers, and the only one who lives here with me, full time. My parents are almost always traveling for work, so you will only see them on special occasions."'
+				*nl
+				'"4. You will listen to Sly. His demands are usually pretty simple: suck his dick, spread your legs, that kind of thing. You don''t have to do everything he says, but if you annoy him, it better be for a damned good reason because he is the only member of my family I give a shit about."'
+				*nl
+				'"You may speak."'
+
+				act 'I''m a lesbian':
+					*clr & cla
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big18.jpg"></center>'
+					'Christina rolls her eyes. "Ugh. Of course you are. Sly gonna love that. Fine, Lina is his favorite toy anyway, but you better work extra hard to please me."'
+					'"Yes, Mistress. Thank you. What about Lariska? Does she get him off?"'
+					'"Jealous? ...No, not anymore, she refuses to touch him. Don''t ask me why, if he wasn''t my brother..." She stares off into space for a few moments before coming back to the conversation. "Anyway. Those are the rules, for now. Follow them, or else."'
+
+					act 'Yes, Mistress':
+						christinaQW['svet_lez_yes'] = 1
+						gt 'Zvereva_house', 'chris_bedro'
+					end
+				end
+				act 'Yes, Mistress': gt 'Zvereva_house', 'chris_bedro'
+			end
+		end
+	else
+		'"About time, bitch. Come on, lets go." She starts walking away at a brisk pace. You follow, making sure to stay at least one step behind her.'
+		act 'Follow her':
+			minut += 10
+			*clr & cla
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/christina_home/front_door.jpg"></center>'
+			'You follow her home and into her house, to her room.'
+			gs 'stat'
+			gt 'Zvereva_house', 'chris_bedro'
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'chris_shower':
+	menu_off = 1
+	*clr & cla
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big18.jpg"></center>'
+	'You find Christina in the shower. She hasn''t noticed you yet.'
+
+	gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5
+	act 'Leave':
+		gs 'arousal', 'end'
+		gs 'stat'
+		gt 'Zvereva_house', 'hallw'
+	end
+	act 'Join her':
+		*clr & cla
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big18.jpg"></center>'
+		'Removing your clothes, you walk over to the glass door and softly clear your throat and wait to be noticed.'
+		'When she sees you, she opens the door and says "Get in here, I need my back washed."'
+		'You step inside, lather your hands in soap, and start washing her.'
+
+		noShampoo = 1
+		dynamic $showerdin
+		pcs_horny += 10
+		pcs_hairbsh = 1
+		pcs_makeup = 1
+		if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & '<br>Your deodorant gets washed away in the shower.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 20, 'lesbian'
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Finish the shower':
+			gs 'arousal', 'end'
+			gs 'stat'
+			gt 'Zvereva_house', 'bathr'
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+--- Zvereva_house_events ---------------------------------
+

locations/Zvereva_schedule.qsrc

@@ -0,0 +1,247 @@
+# Zvereva_schedule
+
+chrisloc = 0
+
+!! chrisloc['athome'] = 1 means Christina is not only home, but available to answer the door if you knock
+!! unused loc variables - 15, 18, 19, 20, 23+
+
+if SchoolAtestat = 0 and kanikuli = 0:
+	if week <= 5:
+		if (hour < 6) or (hour = 6 and minut < 45):
+			!!Bedroom - Asleep
+			chrisloc = 1
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+		elseif hour < 7:
+			!!Bedroom - Getting Dressed
+			chrisloc = 2
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+		elseif hour = 7 and minut <= 15:
+			!!Kitchen - Breakfast
+			chrisloc = 3
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+		elseif hour = 7 and minut < 30:
+			!!NotHome - Walking to school
+			chrisloc = 4
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+		elseif hour < 14:
+			!!NotHome - At School
+			chrisloc = 5
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+		elseif hour < 16:
+			if cheerleaders_on = 1:
+				if week = 5:
+					!!NotHome - Game Night
+					chrisloc = 7
+					chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+				else
+					!!NotHome - Cheerleader Practice
+					chrisloc = 6
+					chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+				end
+			else
+				if lernHome > 0:
+					!!Bedroom - Homework
+					chrisloc = 8
+					chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+				else
+					!!Bedroom - Hanging Out
+					chrisloc = 22
+					chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+				end
+			end
+		elseif hour < 18:
+			if cheerleaders_on = 1:
+				!!Bedroom - Hanging Out
+				chrisloc = 22
+				chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+			else
+				!!NotHome - Jogging
+				chrisloc = 9
+				chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+			end
+		elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
+			!!Kitchen - Cooking Dinner
+			chrisloc = 11
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+		elseif hour <= 19:
+			!!Kitchen - Eating Dinner
+			chrisloc = 12
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+		elseif hour = 19 and minut <= 30:
+			!!Bathroom - Shower
+			chrisloc = 13
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+		elseif hour < 21:
+			!!Living Room - Watching TV
+			chrisloc = 14
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+		else
+			!!Bedroom - Hanging Out
+			chrisloc = 22
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+		end
+	elseif week = 6:
+		if hour < 8:
+			!!Bedroom - Asleep
+			chrisloc = 1
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+		elseif hour = 8 and minut <= 15:
+			!!Kitchen - Breakfast
+			chrisloc = 3
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+		elseif hour = 8 and minut < 45:
+			!!Bathroom - Shower
+			chrisloc = 13
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+		elseif hour < 9:
+			!!Bedroom - Getting Dressed
+			chrisloc = 2
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+		elseif hour = 9:
+			!!NotHome - Track field stretch
+			chrisloc = 16
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+		elseif hour = 10:
+			!!NotHome - Track field race
+			chrisloc = 21
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+		elseif hour < 16:
+			if month < 11 or month > 3:
+				!!NotHome - Beach
+				chrisloc = 10
+				chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+			else
+				!!Living Room - hanging out
+				chrisloc = 17
+				chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+			end
+		elseif hour < 18:
+			!!NotHome - Jogging
+			chrisloc = 9
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+		elseif hour = 18 and minut <= 30:
+			!!Kitchen - Dinner
+			chrisloc = 12
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+		elseif hour = 18 and minut >= 30:
+			!!Bathroom - Shower
+			chrisloc = 13
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+		elseif hour < 21:
+			!!Living Room - Watching TV
+			chrisloc = 14
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+		else
+			!!Bedroom - Hanging Out
+			chrisloc = 22
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+		end
+	else
+		if hour < 8:
+			!!Bedroom - Asleep
+			chrisloc = 1
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+		elseif hour = 8 and minut <= 15:
+			!!Kitchen - Breakfast
+			chrisloc = 3
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+		elseif hour = 8 and minut < 45:
+			!!Bathroom - Shower
+			chrisloc = 13
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+		elseif hour < 9:
+			!!Bedroom - Getting Dressed
+			chrisloc = 2
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+		elseif hour < 11:
+			!!unknown
+			chrisloc = 0
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+		elseif hour < 16:
+			if month < 11 or month > 3:
+				!!NotHome - Beach
+				chrisloc = 10
+				chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+			else
+				!!Living Room - hanging out
+				chrisloc = 17
+				chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+			end
+		elseif hour < 18:
+			!!NotHome - Jogging
+			chrisloc = 9
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+		elseif hour = 18 and minut <= 30:
+			!!Kitchen - Dinner
+			chrisloc = 12
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+		elseif hour = 18 and minut >= 30:
+			!!Bathroom - Shower
+			chrisloc = 13
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+		elseif hour < 21:
+			!!Living Room - Watching TV
+			chrisloc = 14
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+		else
+			!!Bedroom - Hanging Out
+			chrisloc = 22
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+		end
+	end
+else
+	if hour < 8:
+		!!Bedroom - Asleep
+		chrisloc = 1
+		chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+	elseif hour = 8 and minut <= 15:
+		!!Kitchen - Breakfast
+		chrisloc = 3
+		chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+	elseif hour = 8 and minut < 45:
+		!!Bathroom - Shower
+		chrisloc = 13
+		chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+	elseif hour < 9:
+		!!Bedroom - Getting Dressed
+		chrisloc = 2
+		chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+	elseif hour < 11:
+		!!unknown
+		chrisloc = 0
+		chrisloc['athome'] = 0	
+	elseif hour < 16:
+		if month < 11 or month > 3:
+			!!NotHome - Beach
+			chrisloc = 10
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+		else
+			!!Living Room - hanging out
+			chrisloc = 17
+			chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+		end
+	elseif hour < 18:
+		!!NotHome - Jogging
+		chrisloc = 9
+		chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+	elseif hour = 18 and minut <= 30:
+		!!Kitchen - Dinner
+		chrisloc = 12
+		chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+	elseif hour = 18 and minut >= 30:
+		!!Bathroom - Shower
+		chrisloc = 13
+		chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+	elseif hour < 21:
+		!!Living Room - Watching TV
+		chrisloc = 14
+		chrisloc['athome'] = 1
+	else
+		!!Bedroom - Hanging Out
+		chrisloc = 22
+		chrisloc['athome'] = 0
+	end
+end
+
+--- Zvereva_schedule ---------------------------------
+

locations/Zvereva_sub_1.qsrc

@@ -1,5 +1,13 @@
 # Zvereva_sub_1
+!!22/05/14 - Alaratt
 
+!!christinaQW['bully'] - earned if you stand up for yourself or not - less then 50 is you standing up, more then 50 is you being meek - at a certain point these unlock the below options
+!!christinaQW['pre_fight'] - 1 means you are preparing to fight her
+!!christinaQW['fight'] - 1 means you fought and won, -1 means you lost and are now her plaything
+!!christinaQW['pre_bm'] - 1 means you are searching for the blackmail material to use against her
+!!christinaQW['blackmail'] - 1 means you have the blackmail and need to talk to her to initiate, 2 means you have her blackmailed and are mostly safe from her bullying
+!!christinaQW['submit'] - 1 means you willingly submitted, stays at 0 if you lose the fight, for reference on how you became her pet
+!!christinaQW['subpath'] - 1 means you are looking to become her pet, 2 means you are her new pet, 3 means you have seen shower events, more will come to increase this
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'chris_sub':
 	cla & *clr
@@ -257,17 +265,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'showers' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 		gt 'Zvereva_sub_1','5'
 	elseif gKristinaZvtemp = 6:
 		gt 'Zvereva_sub_1','6'
-	elseif gKristinaZvtemp = 7 and stat['virgin'] = 0:
+	elseif gKristinaZvtemp = 7 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 		gt 'Zvereva_sub_1','7'
-	elseif gKristinaZvtemp = 8 and stat['virgin'] = 0:
+	elseif gKristinaZvtemp = 8 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 		gt 'Zvereva_sub_1','8'
-	elseif gKristinaZvtemp = 9 and stat['virgin'] = 0:
+	elseif gKristinaZvtemp = 9 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 		gt 'Zvereva_sub_1','9'
-	elseif gKristinaZvtemp = 10 and stat['virgin'] = 0:
+	elseif gKristinaZvtemp = 10 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 		gt 'Zvereva_sub_1','10'
-	elseif gKristinaZvtemp = 11 and stat['virgin'] = 0:
+	elseif gKristinaZvtemp = 11 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 		gt 'Zvereva_sub_1','11'
-	elseif gKristinaZvtemp = 12 and stat['virgin'] = 0:
+	elseif gKristinaZvtemp = 12 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 		gt 'Zvereva_sub_1','12'
 	elseif gKristinaZvtemp = 13:
 		gt 'Zvereva_sub_1','13'
@@ -295,7 +303,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '0':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/christina/dildobj.jpg"></center>'
 		'You nod obediently, not wanting to anger her. You squat down in front of the dildo, and take it in your hands before carefully licking it and closing your lips around it. You expected an awful rubber taste, but it''s actually not that bad. You give the dildo a blowjob as all the girls in your class watch you, while Christina laughs. After a few minutes, she has seen enough and allows you to change.'
 
-		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation'
+		gs 'arousal', 'dildo_suck', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		
@@ -317,7 +325,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/christina/dildobj2.jpg"></center>'
 		'You nod obediently, not wanting to anger her. You kneel down in front of the dildo, and take it in your hands before carefully licking it and closing your lips around it. Then you stretch your body and rest your hands next to the stone before pushing yourself up. The dildo makes you have to push up higher than you normally would, and after only a few your arms get tired. As you struggle to keep your weight up, the dildo is driven further and further down your throat. All of the girls in your class watch you do your best to not choke on the dildo while Christina laughs evilly, and after a few more push-ups Christina has seen enough and allows you to stop and change.'
 
-		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'deepthroat'
+		gs 'arousal', 'dildo_suck', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'deepthroat'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		
@@ -340,7 +348,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 		'No moving your feet... this is going to be tricky. You spread your legs and awkwardly bend over, while one of the girls in your class holds the dildo up straight to help you out a little. Once you close your lips around it she pulls away, while you do your best to give the dildo a blowjob in this awkward position.'
 		'After a while, Christina nods approvingly: "Not bad, bitch. You''re getting good at this. Go get changed, I''ll have to think of something more challenging for you for next time."'
 
-		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation'
+		gs 'arousal', 'dildo_suck', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		
@@ -359,7 +367,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '3':
 		'You get down on your knees in front of the middle dildo, and take it in your mouth. You close your lips around it and begin to suck it off, while rhythmically stroking the other two with your hands. You hear the girls of your class quietly whisper things amongst each other while you do what you''re told, and while Christina applauds you. "Very nice, bitch! Very nice! You''re a natural! Or is this just something you do on a regular basis?"'
 		'After a few minutes, she allows you to get changed.'
 
-		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation'
+		gs 'arousal', 'dildo_suck', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		
@@ -379,7 +387,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '4':
 		'You get down on your haunches, and obediently lick the dildo before taking it in your mouth. You look yourself in the eye the whole time as instructed, and are intrigued by the look... this must be what you look like when you suck a guy off. Rather fascinated by the concept, you try to do some different things with your lips, and test out a few facial expressions.'
 		'Hearing the whispers of your classmates suddenly remind you that you''re not alone here, there are a dozen girls watching you! Your face turns crimson red, and when Christina tells you can stop, you do so imediately, feeling deeply embarrassed.'
 
-		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation'
+		gs 'arousal', 'dildo_suck', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys2'
@@ -396,7 +404,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '5':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/christina/dildobj6.jpg"></center>'
 		'You move the dildo to your mouth, and slowly lick the head a few times. Urgh, this one tastes awful. Nevertheless, you don''t want to face the consequences for refusing so you open your mouth as wide as you can, and barely manage to get the dildo past your lips. It''s too big to go down your throat, so you spend the next few minutes licking it and sucking on the tip, while the girls encourage you. After a few minutes, Christina says you can stop.'
 
-		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation'
+		gs 'arousal', 'dildo_suck', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys2'
@@ -737,9 +745,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '15':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'default':
-	'Christina grins as you walk up to her meekly, expecting your punishment: "Sorry bitch, I''m busy today. You''ll have to do without punishment this time."'
-	'She quickly gets dressed and leaves the locker room, and for a second you feel unsure as to what to do. The other girls of your class smirk at your behaviour; you''d gotten so used to Christina''s abuse, that you have no idea how to posture yourself when she''s not here. You''re deeply embarrassed when you try to imagine what they must think of you, and you do your best to ignore them.'
-
+	if christinaQW['subpath'] = 3:
+		christinaQW['subpath'] = 4
+		'Christina grins as you walk up to her meekly, expecting your punishment: "Sorry bitch, I''m busy right now. Meet me after school, we will continue this at my house."'
+		'She quickly gets dressed and leaves the locker room, and for a second you feel unsure as to what to do. The other girls of your class smirk at your behaviour; you''d gotten so used to Christina''s abuse, that you have no idea how to posture yourself when she''s not here. You''re deeply embarrassed when you try to imagine what they must think of you, and you do your best to ignore them.'
+	else
+		'Christina grins as you walk up to her meekly, expecting your punishment: "Sorry bitch, I''m busy today. You''ll have to do without punishment this time."'
+		'She quickly gets dressed and leaves the locker room, and for a second you feel unsure as to what to do. The other girls of your class smirk at your behaviour; you''d gotten so used to Christina''s abuse, that you have no idea how to posture yourself when she''s not here. You''re deeply embarrassed when you try to imagine what they must think of you, and you do your best to ignore them.'
+	end
 	act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'postphys2'
 end
 

locations/_attributes_nerdvana_cosplay.qsrc

@@ -1,171 +1,176 @@
 # $attributes_nerdvana_cosplay
-!2021/09/24
-!prince range from 3 to 6
+!!2022/05/16
+!!prince range from 3 to 7
 
 if ARGS[1] = 1:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 6
 	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 2:
 	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 3:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 4
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 2
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 4:
-	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 4
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 3
 	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 5:
 	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 6:
 	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 3
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 7:
-	CloQuality = 4
+	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloTopCut = 3
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 8:
-	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 4
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 3
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 9:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 6
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 10:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 6
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloBimbo = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 11:
 	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 4
+	CloThinness = 2
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 12:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 4
+	CloQuality = 7
+	CloThinness = 3
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 13:
-	CloQuality = 4
+	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloTopCut = 3
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 14:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloOnePiece = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 15:
 	CloQuality = 6
-	CloThinness = 3
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 16:
 	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 17:
-	CloQuality = 6
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 18:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 4
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
 	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
-
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 19:
 	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 2
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloOnePiece = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 20:
-	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 2
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 21:
-	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 2
+	CloQuality = 7
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 22:
-	CloQuality = 6
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 23:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 24:
 	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 25:
-	CloQuality = 4
+	CloQuality = 6
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 26:
-	CloQuality = 4
+	CloQuality = 6
 	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 3
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 27:
 	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 28:
-	CloQuality = 5
+	CloQuality = 6
 	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 3
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
@@ -174,200 +179,822 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 29:
 	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 30:
-	CloQuality = 5
+	CloQuality = 6
 	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 31:
-	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 32:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
-
-elseif ARGS[1] = 33:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 7
 	CloThinness = 2
 	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 4
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
-elseif ARGS[1] = 34:
+elseif ARGS[1] = 33:
 	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 34:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 35:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 36:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloBra = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloOnePiece = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 37:
-	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloBra = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloOnePiece = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 38:
-	CloQuality = 4
+	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 39:
 	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloBra = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 40:
-	CloQuality = 5
+	CloQuality = 6
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloBra = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 41:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 42:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 43:
 	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 44:
-	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 45:
-	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 46:
 	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 3
-	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 47:
-	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloQuality = 7
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 48:
-	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloBra = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 49:
-	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 50:
-	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloBra = 1
-	CloSkirtShortness = 1
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 51:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 6
 	CloThinness = 3
 	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 52:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 1
+	CloQuality = 7
+	CloThinness = 2
 	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 53:
-	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 1
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 2
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloSkirtShortness = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 54:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 55:
-	CloQuality = 4
+	CloQuality = 6
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloSkirtShortness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 56:
-	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 57:
 	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 58:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+	
+elseif ARGS[1] = 59:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+	
+elseif ARGS[1] = 60:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+	
+elseif ARGS[1] = 61:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 62:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 63:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 64:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 65:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 66:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 67:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 68:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 69:
 	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 70:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 71:
+	CloQuality = 7
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 72:
+	CloQuality = 7
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 73:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 74:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 75:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloPanties = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 76:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 77:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 78:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 79:
+	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 5
 	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 80:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 81:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 82:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloBra = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 5
 	
-elseif ARGS[1] = 59:
+elseif ARGS[1] = 83:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 84:
 	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloSkirtShortness = 3
-	
-elseif ARGS[1] = 60:
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPanties = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 85:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 86:
 	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 2
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 87:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 3
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 88:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 89:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 90:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 91:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloBra = 1
 	CloSkirtShortness = 5
 	
+elseif ARGS[1] = 92:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 93:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 94:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 95:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 96:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 97:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 98:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 99:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 100:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 101:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 1
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 102:
+	CloQuality = 7
+	CloThinness = 1
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 103:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 104:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 105:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 106:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 107:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 108:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 109:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 110:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 111:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 1
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 112:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 113:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 114:
+	CloQuality = 7
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 115:
+	CloQuality = 7
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 116:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 117:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 118:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 119:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 120:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 121:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 122:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 123:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloSkirtShortness = 6
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 124:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 125:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 126:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 127:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 128:
+	CloQuality = 3
+	CloThinness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 129:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 130:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloSkirtShortness = 5
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 131:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 4
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 132:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 133:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 134:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 135:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 136:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 137:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 138:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 139:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 140:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 141:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloSkirtShortness = 1
+	CloDress = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 142:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 143:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloOnePiece = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 144:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPanties = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 145:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloBra = 4
+	CloPanties = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 146:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 147:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 148:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloBra = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 149:
+	CloQuality = 7
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 150:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 151:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 2
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 152:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 153:
+	CloQuality = 6
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 154:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloSkirtShortness = 2
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 155:
+	CloQuality = 7
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 6
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 156:
+	CloQuality = 7
+	CloThinness = 1
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 157:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 158:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 159:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 160:
+	CloQuality = 7
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 end
 
 --- $attributes_nerdvana_cosplay ---------------------------------

locations/_attributes_nerdvana_outfits.qsrc

@@ -1,369 +1,487 @@
 # $attributes_nerdvana_outfits
-!2021/06/11
-!prince range from 3 to 5
+!!2022/05/16
+!!prince range from 4 to 6
 
 if ARGS[1] = 1:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 4
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
 	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 2:
-	CloQuality = 2
-	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 3:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 4:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 5:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 6:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 7:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 8:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 9:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 10:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 11:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 5
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 12:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 13:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloTopCut = 4
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloStyle = 4
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 14:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 15:
-	CloQuality = 2
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 16:
-	CloQuality = 2
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 17:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 18:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 19:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 20:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 21:
 	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 22:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 23:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 2
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 24:
-	CloQuality = 2
-	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 25:
-	CloQuality = 2
-	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 26:
-	CloQuality = 2
-	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 27:
-	CloQuality = 2
-	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 28:
-	CloQuality = 2
-	CloThinness = 2
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 29:
 	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 30:
-	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 31:
-	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 32:
-	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 2
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 33:
-	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 34:
-	CloQuality = 5
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 35:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 1
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 36:
-	CloQuality = 2
-	CloThinness = 3
-	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 3
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 37:
-	CloQuality = 2
-	CloThinness = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 38:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 3
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 39:
-	CloQuality = 2
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 3
 	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 40:
-	CloQuality = 2
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 3
 	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 41:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 3
 	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 42:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 3
 	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 5
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 43:
 	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 3
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 44:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 45:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 5
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 46:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 2
 	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 47:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 48:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 49:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloPantsShortness = 4
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 50:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 51:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloPantsShortness = 4
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 52:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 2
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 53:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
-	CloTopCut = 1
-	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 54:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 55:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 56:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 57:
-	CloQuality = 3
+	CloQuality = 4
 	CloThinness = 4
 	CloTopCut = 2
-	CloPantsShortness = 5
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 58:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloPantsShortness = 5
-	CloStyle = 4
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 59:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloPantsShortness = 5
-	CloStyle = 4
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 60:
-	CloQuality = 3
-	CloThinness = 5
-	CloTopCut = 4
-	CloPantsShortness = 5
-	CloStyle = 4
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	
+elseif ARGS[1] = 61:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 62:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 63:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 64:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 65:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 66:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 67:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 68:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 69:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+	
+elseif ARGS[1] = 70:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 71:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 72:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 73:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 74:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 4
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 75:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 76:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 77:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 78:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 79:
+	CloQuality = 4
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 2
+	CloPantsShortness = 1
+
+elseif ARGS[1] = 80:
+	CloQuality = 5
+	CloThinness = 3
+	CloTopCut = 1
+	CloPantsShortness = 4
 	
 end
 

locations/albina_chat.qsrc

@@ -299,7 +299,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Doggystyle':
 	act'Easy spankings':
 		cla & *nl
 		'"I love getting spanked," you grin.'
-		'"Fuck yeah!" Albina shouts, high fiving you so hard it hurts. "There''s nothing I love more than a cock balls deep up my ass and being spanked until it''s red and tender. If I can still sit down without wincing after, then you didn''t really fuck me."'
+		'"Fuck yeah!" Albina shouts, high fiving you so hard it hurts. "There''s nothing I love more than having a cock balls deep up my ass and being spanked until it''s red and tender. If I can still sit down without wincing after, then you didn''t really fuck me."'
 		gs'albina_chat','Doggystyle2'
 	end
 end
@@ -399,14 +399,14 @@ end
 !!	'You blush as you answer. "Uhhh...You."'
 !!	'She raises her brow. "Really? Me?" she replies and you nod.'
 !!	'"Yeah, you. You really know what you''re doing and I always cum so hard when I''m with you..."'
-!!	'She seems surprised by your answer, but accepts your compliment anyway. "You''re pretty good yourself." she says with a wink and a slight hint of arousal.'
+!!	'She seems surprised by your answer, but accepts your compliment anyway. "You''re pretty good yourself," she says with a wink and a slight hint of arousal.'
 !!	act 'Her best':
 !!		*clr & cla
 !!		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
 !!		'So what was your best?" you ask in turn.'
 !!		'She smiles. "It was this girl I met at a nightclub in the city. Long story short, I have a fake ID and you already know the police don''t question me. Anyway, I saw this cute girl at the bar. I can''t remember her name, but she said she worked in some BBQ place in the city. We had a few drinks together and ended up back at her place. I was expecting some good pussy on pussy action, but I can''t help but notice the bulge under her little dress..."'
-!!		'You raise a brow and she smiles. "Yeah, it''s what you think it was. She pulls up her dress and out springs this massive, rock hard fucking cock! I''m just standing there staring at it, so she pushes me down to my knees in front of her and I just start jerking and sucking it before she makes me deepthroat her as deep as I can go. After that, she threw me onto the bed, pulled my thong off and rammed it right into my pussy. My <i>god</i>, the sex we had was <i>amazing</i>, especially when she fucked me from behind and was pulling my hair and slapping my ass. I don''t know how many times she made me cum, but she made me <i>cum</i>.'
-!!		'She fucked me silly and next thing I know I feel her cum shooting into my pussy. I was too exhausted to say anything, but I''m on the pill anyway so I didn''t mind. We snuggled in bed afterwards and I fell asleep right there in her arms as she stroked my hair. She had already left by the time I woke up and I never seen her again. It''s the best sex I''ve ever fucking had and I still get horny just thinking about it." she says and softly bites her lip. "Don''t tell Mama though. She wouldn''t like me going all the way to the city that late at night and coming home in the morning hungover having clearly hooked up with a stranger." she adds.'
+!!		'You raise a brow and she smiles. "Yeah, it''s what you think it was. She pulls up her dress and out springs this rock hard fucking cock! I''m just standing there staring at it, so she pushes me down to my knees in front of her and I just start jerking and sucking it before she makes me deepthroat her. After that, she threw me onto the bed, pulled my thong off and rammed it right into my pussy. My <i>god</i>, the sex we had was <i>amazing</i>, especially when she fucked me from behind and was pulling my hair and slapping my ass. I don''t know how many times she made me cum, but she made me <i>cum</i>.'
+!!		'She fucked me silly and next thing I know I feel her cum shooting into my pussy. I was too exhausted to say anything, but I''m on the pill anyway so I didn''t mind. We snuggled in bed afterwards and I fell asleep right there in her arms as she stroked my hair. She had already left by the time I woke up and I never seen her again. It''s the best sex I''ve ever fucking had and I still get horny just thinking about it." she says and softly bites her lip. "Don''t tell Mama though. She wouldn''t like me going all the way to the city that late at night and coming home in the morning hungover," she adds.'
 !!		'You feel yourself getting turned on by her story and picture it in your head as you imagine yourself in her position. She snaps you out of it and you decide to do something else.'
 !!		act 'Change the subject': gt 'albina_chat', 'chat'
 !!		act 'Stop talking': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
@@ -430,17 +430,17 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_invite':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
-	'As the two of you head back inside the house, Albina turns towards you, grabbing your attention.'
+	'As the two of you head back inside the house, Albina turns towards you and grabs your attention.'
 	if albina['wine'] = 0:
 		'"Hey, wanna break open a bottle of wine with me? Really warms you up after a quick dip."'
 	else
 		'"Hey, wanna drink some wine with me again?"'
 	end
-	act'No thanks':
+	act 'No thanks':
 	
 	end
 	
-	act'Sure':
+	act 'Sure':
 		cla & *clr
 		!! IMAGE HERE
 		if albina['wine'] = 0:
@@ -464,10 +464,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_invite':
 				*nl
 				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>!" Albina whines. "I''m fuckin'' talkin'' to you!"'
 				'You blink, confused.'
-				act'"What did you say?"':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
+				act '"What did you say?"':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
 			else
 				'You''re not sure if you expected something else, but a short while later you find yourself drunk on the couch with Albina again.'
-				act'Drunkenly converse with Albina':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
+				act 'Drunkenly converse with Albina':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -479,35 +479,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 	if albina['wine_convo'] = 1:
 		'"I loave the taste of my own pusshy," she says loudly. "Iz that weird?"'
-		act'Super weird':
+		act 'Super weird':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Thad''s suhper fucking weird," you slur back.'
 			'"Bullshit!" she complains even louder. "You cahn''t tell me you dohn''t like the taste of ''ur own brand now and again."'
-			gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+			gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 		end
 		
-		act'I like mine too':
+		act 'I like mine too':
 			cla & *nl
 			if stat['virgin'] = 0 and stat['bj'] > 0:
 				'"I l''ke the taste of my pussy too," you slur back. "It tastdes even better when it''s on a dick."'
 				'"You''re a fuhcking slut <<$pcs_nickname>>," Albina blurts out, sending both of you into giggles.'
 			elseif stat['mast'] > 0:
 				'"I l''ke the taste of my pussy too," you slur back. "Sometimes I stdick my fingers in my mouf after I masdurbate, lick it all off."'
-				'"Oh fuck, I do that to! Suck my dildo fucking clean right after I come. It mahkes me wahnt to rub another one out after!" Albina giggles, rubbing her thighs together.'
+				'"Oh fuck, I do that to! Suck my dildo fucking clean right after I cum. It mahkes me wahnt to rub another one out after!" Albina giggles while rubbing her thighs together.'
 			else
 				'"I l''ke the taste of my pussy too," you slur back.'
 				'"I fuhcking knew it!" Albina exclaims. "Every girl loves her own juice!"'
 				'"If you knew, then why are you asking if it''s weird?" you ask, puzzled.'
 				'"I jus'' wanted to see if <i>you</i> were the weird one!" Albina mumbles, her voice echoing off the inside of the glass as she takes another sip.'
 			end
-			gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+			gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 		end
 		if npc_sex['A23'] = 1:
-			act'I like your taste too':
+			act 'I like your taste too':
 				cla & *nl
-				'"I like the taste of your pussy too," you slur back, giving her a filthy grin.'
-				'"Nnnngh~!" Albina rolls her hips, squeezing her thighs together hard. "Fuhck! You make me want to shove your head between my legs right now!"'
-				gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+				'"I like the taste of your pussy too," you slur back while giving her a filthy grin.'
+				'"Nnnngh~!" Albina rolls her hips while squeezing her thighs together hard. "Fuhck! You make me want to shove your head between my legs right now!"'
+				gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 			end
 		end
 	elseif albina['wine_convo'] = 2:
@@ -530,18 +530,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 		if albina['commando_know'] = 0:gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
 		'"So, you really don''t wear panties?" Albina slurs, turning her head toward your pussy. "Like, ev''r?"'
 		if trait['commando_lvl'] = 3:
-			act'Only when I have to':
+			act 'Only when I have to':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Only when I have to," you say, wrinkling your nose in annoyance. "Sometimes you just can''t get away with it."'
 				'"Like when?" she asks curiously.'
-				act'School':
+				act 'School':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"At school," you sigh tiredly. "If I don''t, all the teachers will look up my skirt during class."'
 					'"All of them??" Albina looks confused. "I get the males, men are pigs. The women too? Whad ''bout Ms. Braakman??"'
 					'"Especially her!" you say, sending you both into fits of laughter.'
-					gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+					gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 				end
-				act'Disco':
+				act 'Disco':
 					cla & *nl
 					'"At the disco," you sigh tiredly. "Everyone will think I''m a slut if they see me flash puss on the dance floor."'
 					'"That''s why I wear thongs," Albina smirks proudly. "All the ass, none of the slut shame."'
@@ -549,69 +549,69 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 					'"But don''t all commandos wear pants?"'
 					'Albina narrows her eyes and looks up at you, while you stare down at her.'
 					'"I... shuddup!"'
-					gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+					gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 				end
 			end
 
-			act'Nope, never':
+			act 'Nope, never':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Nope!" you say, popping the P with your lips. "Neverrrrrr."'
 				'"Doesn''t your pussy get cold?"'
 				'"Nneh," you shrug. "You ged used to it."'
-				gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+				gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 			end
 
-			act'I hate them':
+			act 'I hate them':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Neverrr!" you say, wrinkling your nose. "I <i>hate</i> wearing them!"'
 				'"Doesn''t your pussy get itchy when you wear pants?" she asks back.'
 				'"My pussy is tough as nails!" you proclaim proudly. "My pussy doesn''t need no pussy soft panties to protect it!"'
 				'"What?" Albina looks confused. "That doesn''t make any sense at all..."'
-				gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+				gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 			end
 		elseif trait['commando_lvl'] < 0:
-			act'Not never':
+			act 'Not never':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Not <i>never</i>," you slur. "Sometimes I just... skip the part where I put them on..."'
-				'"Hah! Slut!" she shouts, taking another slurp of her wine.'
-				gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+				'"Hah! Slut!" she shouts and takes another slurp of her wine.'
+				gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 			end
 
 			act'Rarely':
 				cla & *nl
 
 
-				gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+				gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 
 			end
 		else
 			albina['commando_know'] = 0
-			act'Nope, never':
+			act 'Nope, never':
 				cla & *nl
 
 
-				gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+				gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 			end
 
-			act'I hate them':
+			act 'I hate them':
 				cla & *nl
 
 
-				gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+				gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 
 			end
 
 		end
 	elseif albina['wine_convo'] = 8:
 		'"Do you think I would make a good stripper?" Albina asks.'
-		act'Probably':
+		act 'Probably':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Probably," you mumble back. "You can dance and love shoving your ash in peopl''sh faces. Primo stripper qualities. Why do you ask?"'
 			'"Was thinking about how to pay for uni. Mama could probably do it for me, but what if I want some extra cash on the side?"'
-			gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+			gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 		end
 
-		act'Too bitchy':
+		act 'Too bitchy':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Nah." You wave your glass dismissively. "You''re too bitchy."'
 			'"Bitchy?!" she gasps, mouth agape in indignation.'
@@ -620,76 +620,76 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
 			'"You''d rip someone''s balls off first time you get called a slut or a whore. You couldn''t put up with enough bullshit to be a stripper."'
 			'"... fuck, you''re right."'
 			'"See? Bitchy," you smile, smuggly sipping your wine.'
-			'"Oh fuck off," she grumbles back, taking a much bigger gulp.'
-			gs'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
+			'"Oh fuck off," she grumbles back before taking a much bigger gulp.'
+			gs 'albina_chat','wine_chat2'
 		end
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat2':
-	act'Call her a butt slut':
+	act 'Call her a butt slut':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"You''re such a butt slut Albina," you remark, taking another sip from your glass.'
 		'"Fuck yeah, I am. And I <i>love</i> being one," she grins back, almost spilling her wine all over her face when you both cackle with uncontrollable laughter.'
-		act'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
+		act 'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
 	end
 
-	act'Spit or swallow?':
+	act 'Spit or swallow?':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 		'"So, spit or swallow?" you ask, looking down at Albina.'
 		'"Swallow, duh."'
-		act'Ew, gross':
+		act 'Ew, gross':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Ewww," you wrinkle your nose in disgust. "Thad''s fucking gross! I can''t believe you do that!"'
 			'"Waht else am I suppozed do?"'
 			'"Just spit it out!"'
 			'"But if he cums in your mouth, that means he wants you to swallow, right?" she says, looking genuinely confused that you''re suggesting there''s a choice.'
-			act'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
+			act 'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
 		end
 
-		act'Me too':
+		act 'Me too':
 			cla & *nl
 			'"Me too," you mumble. "Spitting is quitting."'
 			'"Amen sizter," Albina says, throwing up her hand and high fiving you.'
-			act'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
+			act 'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
 		end
 		if trt_cumeater > 0:
-			act'I love the taste':
+			act 'I love the taste':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Me too," you smile. "I love the way it feels, going down my throat. Taste is pretty good too."'
-				'"What the fuck?" Albina says, looking at you with digust. "You actually like the taste of cum?"'
+				'"What the fuck?!" Albina says, looking at you with digust. "You actually like the taste of cum?!"'
 				'"Yeah, it''s why I swallow. You don''t like it?"'
-				'"No! It fuckin'' tastes like shit!"'
+				'"No! It tastes like slimey shit!"'
 				'"Then why do you do it?"'
 				'"Cuz you''re supposed to? If he cums in my mouth, I can''t spit it out," she says, looking genuinely confused that you''re suggesting there''s a choice.'
-				act'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
+				act 'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
 			end
 		end
 	end
 
-	act'Your mom is is very pretty':
+	act 'Your mom is is very pretty':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 		'With Albina right on your lap, you find your thoughts drifting to her mother. Her hair, her facial structure, she really is her mother''s daughter. It''s easy to tell where she got her good looks from.'
 		'"Your mom is fucking hot," you suddenly blurt out, your mouth autocompleting your thought before it actually passes through your brain. You freeze in panic.'
 		'"Fucking hell, I <i>knowwwwwwww</i>," Albina whines beneath you. "I gots ass fer dayz, but she''s gots tits to match. Big fucking bootyful bounshy tits that give ''er cleavage in a t-shirt. <i>And</i> a great ass! Life is so un-fucking-fair..."'
-		act'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
+		act 'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
 	end
 
 	act'':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 
-		act'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
+		act 'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
 	end
 
 	act'':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
 
-		act'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
+		act 'Continue':gt'albina_chat','wine_chat1'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -771,7 +771,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit2':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/comfort.jpg"></center>'
 	'Eventually Albina''s body stops shuddering and she pulls back. Her eyes are bloodshot and the fierce sobs that coursed through her have been reduced to small hiccuping gasps.'
-	'"My mama is coming home you know," she whispers with a small smile. She glances up at you with eyes that look like they could burst in to tears again at any moment, but this time with joy. "All these years after he chased her away... She''s going to come home. She''s going to come back to me! <i>For</i> me!" She is practically beaming.'
+	'"My mama is coming home you know," she whispers with a small smile. She glances up at you with eyes that look like they could burst into tears again at any moment, but this time with joy. "All these years after he chased her away... She''s going to come home. She''s going to come back to me! <i>For</i> me!" She is practically beaming.'
 	'"You really miss her, don''t you?"'
 	'Instead of answering you, she lunges forward and presses her lips against yours, forcing her tongue between them.'
 	gs 'willpower', 'kiss', 'resist', 'medium'
@@ -823,7 +823,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit2':
 						gs 'arousal', 'kiss', -5
 						cla & *clr
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/kissing.jpg"></center>'
-						'Instead of answering with words, you lean in and press your lips against Albina''s. She practically melts into it, opening her mouth to brush her tongue across your lips. You oblige and open your mouth to press back against her with your own tongue. You feel heat spreading through your entire body when she suddenly breaks off the kiss.'
+						'Instead of answering with words, you lean in and press your lips against Albina''s. She practically melts into it, opening her mouth to brush her tongue across your lips. You oblige and open your mouth to press back against her with your own tongue. Her tongue piercing adds a surprisingly erotic sensation to your kiss as you feel heat spreading through your entire body before she suddenly breaks off the kiss.'
 						'"My room?" she asks breathlessly.'
 						'"Your room." Grabbing you by the arm, she practically drags you upstairs.'
 						act 'Follow her':gt 'albina_chat', 'first_sex'
@@ -840,7 +840,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit2':
 				'Unwilling to leave Albina like this, you lean in and press your lips against hers. She stiffens.'
 				'"No, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says around your lips. "I don''t want to make you-"'
 				'"I was just surprised," you whisper back. "I don''t mind. I want this."'
-				'You press your tongue against her lips and Albina melts into it, opening her mouth to allow you in. Her tongue swirls around yours and you feel heat spreading through your entire body when she suddenly breaks off the kiss.'
+				'You press your tongue against her lips and Albina melts into it, opening her mouth to allow you in. Her tongue piercing adds a surprisingly erotic sensation to your kiss as you feel heat spreading through your entire body before she suddenly breaks off the kiss.'
 				'"My room?" she asks breathlessly.'
 				'"Your room." Grabbing you by the arm, she practically drags you upstairs.'
 				act 'Follow her':gt 'albina_chat', 'first_sex'
@@ -856,7 +856,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_visit2':
 		npc_rel['A23'] += 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/kissing.jpg"></center>'
-		'You''re not sure if it''s just the alcohol or if something else is compelling you, but go right along with it, opening your mouth wider to let her plunge her tongue even deeper. It swirls around yours and you feel heat spreading through your entire body when she suddenly breaks off the kiss.'
+		'You''re not sure if it''s just the alcohol or if something else is compelling you, but go right along with it, opening your mouth wider to let her plunge her tongue even deeper. Her tongue piercing adds a surprisingly erotic sensation to your kiss as you feel heat spreading through your entire body before she suddenly breaks off the kiss.'
 		'"My room?" she asks breathlessly.'
 		'"Your room." Grabbing you by the arm, she practically drags you upstairs into her room.'
 		act 'Follow her':gt 'albina_chat', 'first_sex'
@@ -878,7 +878,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_sex':
 		gs 'stat'
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/lesbian/uanuli22.jpg"></center>'
-		'Albina breaks the kiss and flips you around, shoving two fingers into your pussy and her tongue up your ass. The second one causes you to gasp and she capitalizes on it, sending undulating motions through her tongue to drive you into a frenzy.'
+		'Albina breaks the kiss and flips you around, shoving two fingers into your pussy and her tongue up your ass. The sensation of her piercing pushing into your ass causes you to gasp and she capitalizes on it, sending undulating motions through her tongue to drive you into a frenzy.'
 		'"Oh Albina!" you moan. "I want to make you feel good too!"'
 		act '69':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -890,7 +890,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_sex':
 			gs 'arousal', 'rimming', 5, 'no_orgasm_msg'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/lesbian/69_1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'You turn, forcing her tongue away from your ass and towards your other hole instead, wrapping your thighs around her torso. In the same motion, you dive between her legs and run your tongue across her pussy. It''s absolutely <i>soaked</i>. The two of you eat each other out with mutually reckless abandon as you relentlessly tease each other''s clits. Albina''s tongue occasionally slides up and rims your ass before moving back down to your pussy, which grows wetter and wetter.'
+			'You turn, forcing her tongue away from your ass and towards your other hole instead, wrapping your thighs around her torso. In the same motion, you dive between her legs and run your tongue across her pussy. It''s absolutely <i>soaked</i>. The two of you eat each other out with mutually reckless abandon as you relentlessly tease each other''s clits. Albina''s pierced tongue feels amazing as it swirls around your clit and occasionally slides up and rims your ass before moving back down to your pussy, which grows wetter and wetter.'
 			*nl
 			'Albina''s body begins to tense up and her legs pull you tight against her pussy, practically burying you in it. She''s close, and you feel exactly the same way, mimicking her actions as you feel her lips against your labia. She shrieks into your pussy, her cry of orgasm vibrating through you as a burst of fluid suddenly sprays into your face and the shock sends you over the edge. Your eyes roll back in your head as you too release a wordless groan into her dripping wet pussy. You can feel her spasming underneath your tongue and her juices spray directly into your mouth. It''s unbelievably hot, sustaining your orgasm for longer and longer.'
 			*nl

locations/albina_house_events.qsrc

@@ -52,7 +52,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swim_winter1':
 		act'Join her in the tub':gt'albina_house_events','winter_hot_tub'
 	end
 	
-	act 'Sure I guess (hesitant)':
+	act 'Hesitantly join her':
 		cla & *clr
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/pool_winter.jpg"></center>'
 		'"I... I guess..." you say.'
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swim_winter1':
 		'"Hurry up!"'
 		'"Okay okay!" You finish taking off the last of your clothing and quickly skip towards the pool with Albina.'
 		'<i>Brrrr! It really is cold out here!</i>'
-		act'Hesitate':
+		act 'Hesitate':
 			cla & *clr
 			!! temporary image
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/pool_winter.jpg"></center>'
@@ -74,7 +74,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swim_winter1':
 			'"Come on!" she says with chattering teeth. "Get out before you get frostbite and jump in the hot tub with me!" The two of your swim over to the adjoining wall of the hot tub and throw yourselves over the side.'
 			act'Continue':gt'albina_house_events','winter_hot_tub'
 		end
-		act'Jump in with her':
+		act 'Jump in with her':
 			cla & *clr
 			!! temporary image
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/pool_winter.jpg"></center>'
@@ -85,16 +85,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swim_winter1':
 		end
 	end
 
-	act'Sure (enthusiastic)':
+	act 'Enthusiastically join her':
 		cla & *clr
 		!! IMAGE HERE
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/pool_winter.jpg"></center>'
-		'"Sound fun!" You quickly start stripping out of your clothing while Albina keep standing by the door, jumping up and down and shivering in the cold breeze.'
+		'"Sounds fun!" You quickly start stripping out of your clothing while Albina keep standing by the door, jumping up and down and shivering in the cold breeze.'
 		'"Hurry up!" The moment you take off your last piece of fabric, you sprint straight out the door past her.'
 		*nl
-		'"Waiting on you now!" you call over your shoulder before leaping into the pool. The immediate shock of ice cold sends shivers through your whole body and you gasp as your head breaches the surface, just in time to see Albina jump over you and into the water behind. "<i>Ohmygod!</i>" you manage to chatter out, shivering tremendously but unable to stop yourself from smiling at Albina when she comes up for air.'
+		'"Waiting on you now!" you call over your shoulder before leaping into the pool. The immediate shock of the icy cold sends shivers through your whole body and you gasp as your head breaches the surface, just in time to see Albina jump over you and into the water behind. "<i>Ohmygod!</i>" you manage to chatter out, shivering tremendously but unable to stop yourself from smiling at Albina when she comes up for air.'
 		*nl
-		'"Now into the hot tub! Hurry!" The two of your swim over to the adjoining wall of the hot tub and throw yourselves over the side.'
+		'"Now into the hot tub! Hurry!" The two of your swim over to the adjoining wall of the hot tub and pull yourselves over the side.'
 		act'Continue':gt'albina_house_events','winter_hot_tub'
 	end
 end
@@ -197,9 +197,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_swim_shower':
 		act'Agree':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/bathroom.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Sure," you say, returning her smile. "Why not?" Her smile turns into a grin and she grabs your hand, pulling you through her bedroom into the bathroom.'
+			'"Sure," you say, returning her smile. "Why not?" Her smile turns into a grin and she grabs your hand, pulling you through her bedroom and into the bathroom.'
 			*nl
-			'Once inside, she releases you, bending over to turn on the water. She seems to be a little far away, needing to stretch to reach it. You can see all of the muscles in her legs go taut and her posture gives you a great view of both her holes. She hesitates just before turning the tap, glancing back at you, and you realize she''s doing this on purpose. Shit. What are you getting yourself into here?'
+			'Once inside, she releases you, bending over to turn on the water. She seems to be a little far away, needing to stretch to reach it. You can see all of the muscles in her toned legs go taut and her posture gives you a great view of both her holes. She hesitates just before turning the tap, glancing back at you, and you realize she''s doing this on purpose. Shit. What are you getting yourself into here?'
 
 			act'Continue':
 				cla & *clr
@@ -213,7 +213,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_swim_shower':
 				act'Continue':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/bathroom/1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Albina doesn''t waste anytime and immediately soaps up her tits before getting up on her knees and using a loofah to squeeze soapy water over her shapely ass. She then stands, bends over and spanks herself before wiggling her ass at you, giving you a clear invitation. She spreads her legs to let you slide underneath her and start gently tracing your tongue along her labia before you reach her clit. You start vigoursly eating her pussy, causing her to moan loudly in pleasure as she pushes a few of her fingers into her asshole and starts fingering herself, adding to her pleasure.' 
+					'Albina doesn''t waste anytime and immediately soaps up her breasts before getting up on her knees and using a loofah to squeeze soapy water over her shapely ass. She then stands, bends over and spanks herself before wiggling her ass at you, giving you a clear invitation. She spreads her legs to let you slide underneath her and start gently tracing your tongue along her labia before you reach her clit. You start vigoursly eating her pussy, causing her to moan loudly in pleasure as she pushes a few of her fingers into her asshole and starts fingering herself, adding to her pleasure.' 
 					*nl
 					'The minutes go by and Albina starts grinding against you, smearing you with her wetness as she loudly states "Yes, just like that <<$pcs_nickname>>! I''m going to fucking cum!" A few seconds later, she reaches her orgasm and screams loudly as her juices squirt down onto you. She keeps grinding against you as she rides through her orgasm before she climbs off and looks down at you through her legs, a satisfied smile on her face. She silently motions for you to sit on the edge of the tub.'
 					minut +=6
@@ -228,14 +228,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_swim_shower':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/bathroom/2.jpg"></center>'
 						'You sit on the edge and lean back. Albina spreads your legs and slides in front of you. She slowly starts rubbing your clit, eliciting a soft moan from you before she slides her finger into your pussy. She slowly fingers you before inserting a second finger, making you moan even louder. She then starts fingerbanging you, causing you to shriek loudly in pleasure. After a few minutes of this, she pulls her fingers out and holds them up to your mouth. You take them into your mouth and suck them, getting a good taste of yourself as she grins widely at you.' 
 						*nl
-						'Her face disappears into your crotch, causing you to gasp loudly in pleasured surprise when you suddenly feel her tongue swirling over your clit. You place your hand on the back of her head and hold her down as you sit back and let her pleasure you, her tongue expertly running all over your labia and clit as she passionately eats your pussy. She''s <i>really</i> good at this and you don''t want her to stop. You can feel your orgasm building when she slides her fingers back inside you and starts vigoursly fingerbanging you as she sucks on your clit. A few minutes of this is enough to send you over the edge and you scream loudly in pleasure as you have an explosive orgasm, smearing Albina''s face with your wetness.'
+						'Her face disappears into your crotch, causing you to gasp loudly in pleasured surprise when you suddenly feel her tongue piercing swirling over your clit. You place your hand on the back of her head and hold her down as you sit back and let her pleasure you, her tongue expertly running all over your labia and clit as she passionately eats your pussy. She''s <i>really</i> good at this and her piercing only adds to your pleasure. You don''t want her to stop and feel your orgasm building when she suddenly shoves her fingers back inside you and starts vigoursly fingerbanging you as she sucks on your clit. A few minutes of this is enough to send you over the edge and you scream loudly in pleasure as you have an explosive orgasm, smearing Albina''s face with your wetness.'
 						act 'Continue':
 							gs'arousal','kiss', 5, 'no_orgasm_msg'
 							gs'arousal','end'
 							gs 'stat'
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/bathroom/3.jpg"></center>'
-							'When you finally stop cumming, she climbs up and sits next to you on the edge of the tub. You both start passiontely making out and groping each other''s bodies as you sit in your post-climax bliss. After a few minutes of this, you both climb out of the tub and she pulls the plug before grabbing a towel and walking out to her room, leaving you to get dressed.'
+							'When you finally stop cumming, she climbs up and sits next to you on the edge of the tub. You both start passionately making out and groping each other''s bodies as you sit in your post-climax bliss. After a few minutes of this, you both climb out of the tub and she pulls the plug before grabbing a towel and walking out to her room, leaving you to get dressed.'
 							*nl
 							'You grab yourself a towel and dry off before getting dressed. When you walk into Albina''s room, you are greeted by the sight of her wearing only a lacy white thong as she dries her hair. "Just give me a few seconds to get dressed and we can do something, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 							*nl
@@ -257,7 +257,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hot_tub1':
 	act 'Follow her':
 		*clr & cla
 		'When you reach the pool out back, you see a large hot tub attached. Albina turns the jets on and slips off her robe to reveal she''s only wearing a little black thong. She climbs in and takes a seat, sighing as she does. She looks at you and beckons you to join her.'
-		'"Don''t worry about your panties getting wet <<$pcs_nickname>>," Albina says. "I''ll give you something to wear until they dry."'
+		'"Don''t worry about your panties getting wet <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "I''ll give you something to wear until they dry."'
 		minut +=2
 		gs 'stat'
 		xgt 'albina_house_events','hot_tub3'
@@ -267,7 +267,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'hot_tub2':
 	!! need image? (Alaratt)
 	'The two of you start heading towards the pool and Albina strips the whole way there, tossing her clothes randomly aside without a care. By the time you reach the back door, she''s down to just her thong. She opens the door and struts over to the hot tub and climbs in, sighing as she does. She looks at you and beckons you to join her.'
-	'"Don''t worry about your panties getting wet <<$pcs_nickname>>," Albina says. "I''ll give you something to wear until they dry."'
+	'"Don''t worry about your panties getting wet <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says. "I''ll give you something to wear until they dry."'
 	minut +=6
 	gs 'stat'
 	xgt 'albina_house_events','hot_tub3'
@@ -331,7 +331,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hot_tub3':
 			act 'Take your panties off':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/hottub.jpg"></center>'
-				'You rather brazenly decide to take your panties off and throw them into your pile of clothes before climbing into the hot tub naked. Albina, normally rather daring, is taken aback by your decison, but decides to join you. She wriggles around and pulls her thong off, tossing it aside and smiling.'
+				'You rather brazenly decide to take your panties off and throw them into your pile of clothes before climbing into the hot tub naked. Albina, normally rather daring around you, is taken aback by your decison, but decides to join you. She wriggles around and pulls her thong off before tossing it aside and smiling.'
 				'"Oh <i>fuck</i>..." she moans softly. "Good choice <<$pcs_nickname>>. This is <i>much</i> better..."'
 				*nl
 				'You soon realise what she means when you sit down and instantly feel the jets of warm water softly tickling your clit. It''s slowly turning you on and you can feel your juices flowing in response to the stimulation. It seems to have the same effect on Albina, who reaches over and turns up the bubbles even more. You lose track of time, but it''s a very pleasurable experience.'
@@ -348,7 +348,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hot_tub3':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/zoya.jpg"></center>'
 						'Albina has a look in her eye - she''s horny. You clearly see her hand slither down between her legs. She locks eyes with you, biting her lip in obvious pleasure before her eyes go wide and she sits up straight.'
 						*nl
-						'"You''ll take any opportunity to be as naked as possible, won''t you?" You turn in shock and see Zoya standing behind you, shaking her head as she throws some towels at you'
+						'"You''ll take any opportunity to be as naked as possible, won''t you?" You turn in shock and see Zoya standing behind you, shaking her head as she throws some towels at you.'
 						*nl
 						'"Well I think you two have had enough. Time to get out." She walks back into the house and Albina rolls her eyes, but obeys, climbing out of the tub and walking over to the side where a stack of folded towels sit. You climb out after her and she tosses you one of the towels and the two of you dry off together.'
 						*nl
@@ -420,7 +420,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hot_tub_no_panties':
 		*nl
 		'"What on earth are you two doing?!"'
 		*nl
-		'You jump back from each other and turn, seeing Albina''s mother behind you. "Are you <i>naked</i>??" she scowls, eyeing Albina''s thong on the deck. "This is very unhygenic young lady! And who knows who could have seen you?! Don''t move young lady!" she barks before she disappears into the house. She returns a few minutes later with some towels and throws them at you before walking back into the house. Albina just rolls her eyes, but climbs out anyways, drying herself with one of the towels.'
+		'You jump back from each other and turn, seeing Albina''s mother behind you. "Are you <i>naked</i>??" she scowls, eyeing Albina''s thong on the deck. "This is very unhygenic young lady! And who knows who could have seen you?! Don''t move young lady!" she barks before she disappears into the house. She returns a few minutes later with some towels and throws them at you before walking back into the house. Albina just rolls her eyes, but climbs out and dries herself with one of the towels.'
 		'"Mama will have a fit if you went in there naked, so you better get dressed," she warns as she passes you the other one.'
 		act'Get dressed':
 			cla & *clr
@@ -664,8 +664,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'night_stand':
 		minut += 2
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/anushapt/anushroom/nushdrawer.jpg"></center>'
-		'Albina excuses herself and leaves the room. You grow bored waiting and decide to have a quick snoop around before she returns, opening the drawer of her nightstand to have a peek You find a hairbrush, various skin care products, contraceptive pills, bottles of lube, a vibrator, dildos of various sizes, a large butt plug and a strap-on harness all tossed inside, seemingly without any care. A piece of folded paper hiding underneath the pile catches your eye.' 
-		'You glance around, but it looks like Albina is still busy elsewhere, so you fish out the paper and unfold it to find that it''s actually a crumpled photo of a young Albina dancing as her mother proudly watches. You can see why it has sentimental value to Albina, but decide that you''ve invaded her privacy enough, so you carefully place the photo back inside and close the drawer.'
+		'Albina excuses herself and leaves the room. You grow bored waiting and decide to have a quick snoop around before she returns, opening the drawer of her nightstand to have a peek. You find a hairbrush, various skin care products, contraceptive pills, bottles of lube, a vibrator, dildos of various sizes and a large butt plug all tossed inside, seemingly without any care. A piece of folded paper hiding underneath the pile catches your eye.' 
+		'You glance around, but it looks like Albina is still busy elsewhere, so you fish out the paper and unfold it to find that it''s actually a crumpled photo of a young Albina dancing as her mother proudly watches. You can see why it has sentimental value to Albina, but decide that you''ve invaded her privacy enough, so you carefully place the photo back inside and close the drawer just before Albina returns and smiles at you.'
 		act 'Close the drawer':gt 'albinahome','bedroom'
 	end
 end
@@ -711,7 +711,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				act 'Masturbate':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>>src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/kompmas.jpg"></center>'
-					'While browsing, you find a title you like the sound of and sit back on the bed to start watching it. It turns you on and you instinctively start rubbing your clit through your clothes.'
+					'While browsing, you find a title you like the sound of and sit back on the bed to start watching it. It turns you on and your hand finds its way down to your clit before you start instinctively rubbing it.'
 					'The video is very arousing and you find yourself getting wet after just a few seconds. Just as you''re about to cum, your heart leaps into your mouth when you hear someone approaching. You quickly rip your hand from between your legs and slam the laptop screen down before Albina walks into the room.'
 					$orgasm_or = 'no'
 					gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', 10, 'masturbate'
@@ -737,7 +737,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'alb_yoga_1':
 	menu_off = 1
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src=locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/albyoga.jpg"></center>'
-	'The maid answers the door and lets you enter. "Miss Albina is in the gym." she says before leading you there. You find Albina doing yoga by herself. She smiles when she sees you before raising a finger, telling you to wait. The maid bows and leaves as you sit and watch Albina finish her routine. You know she''s flexible, but some of the poses she does look like they should be impossible. She smiles when she sees your bewildered gaze. "You''re not the only one who appreciates my flexibility... I invited Lazar over one time to work out together and he loved my yoga display so much that we ended up having sex right here." She lets out a small laugh. "Dick brained idiot had seen too much porn and tried ripping my yoga pants open! You know how expensive these are?!" she scorns. "Anyway, I showed him more of my flexibility by sucking and fucking his dick in positions he could never have imagined," she says with a sly grin. A few seconds later, she finishes her routine and you follow her upstairs to her room.'  
+	'The maid answers the door and lets you enter. "Miss Albina is in the gym," she says before leading you there. You find Albina doing yoga by herself. She smiles when she sees you before raising a finger, telling you to wait. The maid bows and leaves as you sit and watch Albina finish her routine.' 
+	'You know she''s flexible, but some of the poses she does look like they should be impossible. She smiles when she sees your bewildered gaze. "You''re not the only one who appreciates my flexibility... I invited Lazar over one time to work out together and he loved my yoga display so much that we ended up having sex right here." She lets out a small laugh. "Dick brained idiot had seen too much porn and tried ripping my yoga pants open! You know how expensive these are?!" she scorns.' 
+	'"Anyway, I showed him more of my flexibility by sucking and fucking his dick in positions he could never have imagined," she says with a sly grin. A few seconds later, she finishes her routine and you follow her upstairs to her room.'  
 
 	act 'Go with her':
 		cla & *clr
@@ -819,7 +821,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'alb_sunbathe_1':
 					'"Pff. Still better than my mother. She keeps scolding me about leaving my dildos lying around the house. A girl has needs, you know?"'
 					'"Ugh, I know exactly what you mean," Albina says, stepping out of the shower and grabbing a towel. "I love Mama, but I wish she wasn''t so uptight about where I leave my toys. Always saying, ''What if a guest comes over and sees that laying around?'' or ''What if they catch you in your underwear?'' As if we have any guests these days other than my friends. Besides, isn''t this what we have a maid for? Cleaning stuff up?" She heads into her room and you follow behind, sitting down on her bed and continuing to chat while she gets dressed.'
 				else
-					if stat['virgin'] = 0:
+					if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 						'"Pff. Still better than my mother. She still makes me see the gyno every month just to confirm I''m still a virgin."'
 						'"What??? There''s no way you''re still a virgin!"'
 						'"I... have ways of getting around it."'
@@ -929,8 +931,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_photos':
 									act 'Leave':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/23.jpg"></center>'
-										'You look to the floor. "I should go...."'
-										'You glance back up at Albina, who looks slightly disappointed but gives you a small smile. 	She watches you walk down the driveway, her thighs gently rubbing together as she does.'
+										'You look at the floor. "I should go...."'
+										'You glance back up at Albina, who looks slightly disappointed but gives you a small smile. She watches you walk down the driveway, her thighs gently rubbing together as she does.'
 										act 'Leave': gt 'pav_residential'
 									end
 								end
@@ -1037,7 +1039,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flash_drive':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/items/accessories/computer/komp.jpg"></center>'
 								'Horrified at what you just watched, you quickly close the video and delete the flash drive''s contents before throwing it out the window as hard as you can.' 
-								if stat['virgin'] = 1 and AlbinaQW['StarletsWhore'] = 0:
+								if stat['think_virgin'] = 1 and AlbinaQW['StarletsWhore'] = 0:
 									'Is that the kind of sick torture Albina had to go through to protect you from those vile men? You can''t help but feel guilty, but decide to keep this to yourself. You know Albina feels extremely guilty about what she was forced to do and mentioning this to her will do more harm than good.'
 								elseif AlbinaQW['StarletsWhore'] = 0:
 									'Is that the kind of sick torture Albina had to go through every time you refused to go with those men? You can''t help but feel guilty and ashamed, but decide to keep this to yourself. You know Albina feels extremely guilty about what she was forced to do and mentioning this to her will do more harm than good.'

locations/albina_lazar_sex.qsrc

@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'join':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/lazar/laz3some1.jpg"></center>'
 		'You strip naked as Albina sucks Lazar''s dick. Once you come over to join them, she pops his dick out of her mouth and offers it to you. You take it into your mouth and start sucking it while she licks and sucks his balls.' 
-		'You swap his cock back and forth between each other before she stops and pushes you onto the bed. She bends over and buries her head into your crotch as Lazar moves in behind her and slides his dick back into her pussy. He starts fucking her as she licks and sucks on your clit, her moans adding to the pleasure.'
+		'You swap his cock back and forth between each other before she stops and pushes you onto the bed. She bends over and buries her head into your crotch as Lazar moves in behind her and slides his dick back into her pussy. He starts fucking her as she licks and sucks on your clit, her moans and piercing adding to your pleasure.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'group'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Get eaten out':
@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'join':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/lazar/laz3some3.jpg"></center>'
 				vaginal_slip = 8
-				'Albina climbs onto the bed as you spread your legs and Lazar slowly penetrates your pussy and starts fucking you. Albina watches him fuck you for a few minutes before she straddles you and sits right on your face, her soaking wet pussy dripping into your mouth. You start licking and sucking her pussy and clit and occassionaly tongue fuck her while she plays with your tits, kneading them in her hands and squeezing your nipples. She soon starts rocking her hips over your face, smearing you with her sticky wetness as Lazar starts fucking you even harder, his balls deep thrusts bottoming out inside you.'  
+				'Albina climbs onto the bed as you spread your legs and Lazar slowly penetrates your pussy and starts fucking you. Albina watches him fuck you for a few minutes before she straddles you and sits right on your face, her soaking wet pussy dripping into your mouth. You start licking and sucking her pussy and clit and occassionaly tongue fuck her while she plays with your breasts, kneading them in her hands and squeezing your nipples. She soon starts rocking her hips over your face, smearing you with her sticky wetness as Lazar starts fucking you even harder, his balls deep thrusts bottoming out inside you.'  
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'group'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Join in sucking his dick':
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'join':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><video autoplay loop  src="images/locations/city/redlight/studio_porn/sex/mff4.mp4"></center>'
 									'He starts really going at it before he grunts and moans in pleasure as you feel his warm cum coating your insides. You moan at the sensation as he continues pumping into your back door. When he finishes, he spreads your ass and pulls out. You squeeze and feel a stream of thick cum pour out of your ass and start running down the inside of your leg. Albina, having recovered from her orgasm, suddenly crawls in behind you and runs her tongue up the length of your thigh, licking up the sticky liquid on your leg before she stops underneath your ass and lets the rest of the cum flow into her mouth.' 
-									'When the stream finally stops, you turn around and watch Albina swallow before sticking her tongue out and showing you both that she''s gulped down all of the load. Lazar then collapses back on the bed, satisfied, and you and Albina crawl over and join him. You all bask in the afterglow of your threesome.' 
+									'When the stream finally stops, you turn around and watch Albina grimace as she swallows before sticking her tongue out and showing you both that she''s gulped down all of the load. Lazar then collapses back on the bed, satisfied, and you and Albina crawl over and join him. You all bask in the afterglow of your threesome.' 
 									gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'group'
 									gs 'cum_call', 'anus', $boy, 1
 									gs 'stat'

locations/albina_mother_events.qsrc

@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'zoya_sunbathing_albina':
 					'"Pff. Still better than my mother. She keeps scolding me about leaving my dildos lying around the house. A girl has needs, you know?"'
 					'"Ugh, I know exactly what you mean," Albina says, stepping out of the shower and grabbing a towel. "I love Mama, but I wish she wasn''t so uptight about where I leave my toys. Always saying, ''What if a guest comes over and sees that laying around?'' or ''What if they catch you in your underwear?'' As if we have any guests these days other than my friends. Besides, isn''t this what we have a maid for? Cleaning stuff up?" She heads into her room and you follow behind, sitting down on her bed and continuing to chat while she gets dressed.'
 				else
-					if stat['virgin'] = 0:
+					if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 						'"Pff. Still better than my mother. She still makes me see the gyno every month just to confirm I''m still a virgin."'
 						'"What??? There''s no way you''re still a virgin!"'
 						'"I... have ways of getting around it."'

locations/albina_school_sex.qsrc

@@ -79,7 +79,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_fun_2':
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/bathroom/bathroom5.jpg"></center>'
-			'You moan softly as she traces her tongue along your folds and over your clit. She does this for a few seconds before concentrating solely on your clit, expertly licking and sucking on it. She teases you like this for only a few seconds before you feel your orgasm building, your breathing becoming more ragged.' 
+			'You moan softly as she traces her tongue along your folds and over your clit. She does this for a few seconds before concentrating solely on your clit, expertly licking and sucking on it, her tongue piercing only adding to your pleasure. She teases you like this for only a few seconds before you feel your orgasm building, your breathing becoming more ragged.' 
 			$orgasm_txt = 'Albina notices this and starts swirling her tongue over your engorged bean even faster, quickly bringing you to an explosive climax. She keeps teasing your clit throughout your orgasm, increasing your pleasure even further.'
 			$orgasm_or = 'custom'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -15, 'lesbian'
@@ -148,13 +148,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lunch_fun_1_2':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/classroom/threesome4.jpg"></center>'
 				'The two of you are soon naked and that''s when Albina stops Julia and pulls her off the table. You help Albina undress her before you and Albina climb onto the table and she leans back against you with her legs spread, presenting her wet pussy to Julia, who stares wide eyed at her. "I know you want a taste Julia, so why don''t you help me out?" Albina says teasingly.'
-				'You see another small smile on Julia''s face as she gets on her knees between Albina''s legs and, without hesitation, starts licking Albina''s pussy. "Shit, your tongue feels fucking great! Keep going!" Julia complies and soon reduces Albina to a quivering mess of loud, pleasured moans. Albina grabs Julia''s hair and holds her tightly against her crotch. Julia doesn''t seem to care and appears to double her efforts, which causes Albina to moan even louder.' 
+				'You see another small smile on Julia''s face as she gets on her knees between Albina''s legs and, without hesitation, starts licking Albina''s pussy. "Shit, your tongue feels fucking great! Keep going!" Julia complies and soon reduces Albina to a quivering mess of loud, pleasured moans. She grabs Julia''s hair and holds her tightly against her crotch. Julia doesn''t seem to care and appears to double her efforts, which causes Albina to moan even louder.' 
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', -8, 'lesbian'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Continue':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/classroom/threesome5.jpg"></center>'
-					'You feel a little left out, so you slide out from behind Albina and lay her flat before straddling her and sitting on her face. You moan loudly as she immediately starts eating your pussy. Albina gives out as much as she''s recieving and you soon find yourself growing weak from the pleasure as her tongue expertly swirls around your clit.'
+					'You feel a little left out, so you slide out from behind Albina and lay her flat before straddling her and sitting on her face. You moan loudly as she immediately starts eating your pussy. Albina gives out as much as she''s recieving and you soon find yourself growing weak from the pleasure as her pierced tongue expertly swirls around your clit.'
 					$orgasm_txt = 'A few minutes of this is enough to bring you to an explosive orgasm and you muffle your screams as you cum over Albina''s face.'
 					$orgasm_or = 'custom'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', -15, 'lesbian'
@@ -210,7 +210,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lunch_fun_2':
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/classroom/class3.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Oh...oh. Wow. That was...fucking amazing <<$pcs_nickname>>. I really needed that." she pants as she rides out her orgasm. "I should return the favour." She sits up and smiles as she motions for you to lie down. She climbs off the desk and pulls you over to the edge as you lie back. She licks her lips and immediately buries her head in your crotch, making you moan loudly as she eats you out for all she''s worth. She knows exactly what she''s doing and has you approaching orgasm within minutes.' 
+			'"Oh...oh. Wow. That was...fucking amazing <<$pcs_nickname>>. I really needed that." she pants as she rides out her orgasm. "I should return the favour." She sits up and flashes her tongue piercing at you as she motions for you to lie down. She climbs off the desk and pulls you over to the edge as you lie back. She licks her lips and immediately buries her head in your crotch, making you moan loudly as she eats you out for all she''s worth. She knows exactly what she''s doing and has you approaching orgasm within minutes.' 
 			'Seeing this, she stops licking your pussy and stands up; you barely have time to ask what''s happening before she jams her fingers deep inside you and starts fingerbanging you. "That''s right <<$pcs_nickname>>, cum for me." she whispers teasingly in your ear before making out with you. You moan loudly into her mouth as she brings you to orgasm. You lie panting on the desk as she pulls her fingers out and sucks on them. "Mhmm. You taste really fucking good, you know that?" she says teasingly with a wink.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 6, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'

locations/albina_starlets.qsrc

@@ -236,7 +236,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina5':
 					'"Well of course you are! I can''t let someone as good as you go to waste on these bow-legged amateurs. We practice every day except for Tuesday and Thursday, so don''t be late!" Albina replies.'
 					AlbinaQW['StarletsJoined'] = 1
 					!! If Sveta is virgin
-					if stat['virgin'] = 1 and stat['vaginal'] = 0:
+					if stat['think_virgin'] = 1 and stat['vaginal'] = 0:
 						'When the other girls leave, Albina pulls you aside. "Hey, are you ''pure''?" she whispers.'
 						'"Why would you want to know such a personal thing?" you reply as you blush.'
 						'"Oh, it''s... nothing. I just... look out for my girls is all." she says with hesitation.'
@@ -318,7 +318,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'starlets':
 						dynamic $showerdin
 						if deodorant_on = 1: gs 'sweat', 'remove_deo' & '<br>Your deodorant gets washed away in the shower.'
 
-						if pcs_apprnc >= 52 and (stat['virgin'] = 0 or stat['vaginal'] > 0):
+						if pcs_apprnc >= 52 and (stat['think_virgin'] = 0 or stat['vaginal'] > 0):
 							if pcs_apprnc < 64:
 								AlbinaQW['StarletCustomer'] = rand(1,15)
 							elseif pcs_apprnc < 72:

locations/albina_wine_event.qsrc

@@ -0,0 +1,578 @@
+# albina_wine_event
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_invite':
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
+	'As the two of you head back inside the house, Albina turns towards you, grabbing your attention.'
+	if albina['wine'] = 0:
+		'"Hey, wanna break open a bottle of wine with me? Really warms you up after a dip in the pool."'
+	else
+		'"Hey, wanna drink some wine with me again?"'
+	end
+	act 'No thanks':
+	
+	end
+	
+	act 'Sure':
+		cla & *clr
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/kitchen.jpg"></center>'
+		if albina['wine'] = 0:
+			'"Sure, that sounds nice. Should I just get dressed and meet you back-"'
+			'"Fuck that," Albina cuts you off, grabbing you by the arm and dragging you to the kitchen. "It''s better if you drink it right after coming out."'
+			'She puts you down on a couch and saunters over to the wine cabinet, waggling her ass along the way, and plucks out two glasses and a bottle. You wait awkwardly while she opens the bottle, before she plops down next to you and hands you a glass.'
+			'"Cheers!" she says with a grin, clinking her glass against yours and downs half the thing in one gulp. You take a more reserved sip, but you feel warmth spread through your chest almost immediately.'
+			*nl
+			'<i>Wow, that <b>is</b> really nice,</i> you think, taking another sip.'
+		else
+			'"Sure," you say with a smile.'
+			'"Great! I''ll get the bottle."'
+			'You head over to the kitchen with her, sitting down on the couch while she procures the alcohol. A short time later, she places a glass in your hand and clinks hers against it.'
+			'"Cheers!" Albina grins at you, and you both enjoy your wine together.'
+		end
+		act 'Drink':
+			minut += rand(10,20)
+			gs'stat'
+			cla & *clr
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
+			if albina['wine'] = 0:
+				'A short while later, you find yourself feeling very warm, fuzzy, and <i>very</i> dizzy, halfway through your second glass. Albina is already sipping from her third glass, head laid on your lap after opening a second bottle. The flush in her cheeks and the slur of her voice tells you she''s totally drunk. You''re not sure your own lips are working right either. Or is it your tongue? What makes you talk funny when you''re drunk? Is it your lips, your tongue, or your brain?'
+				*nl
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>!" Albina whines. "I''m fucking talking to you!"'
+				'You blink, confused.'
+				act '"What did you say?"':albina['wine_start'] = 1 & gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+			else
+				'You''re not sure if you expected something else, but a short while later you find yourself drunk on the couch with Albina. Again.'
+				act 'Drunkenly converse with Albina':gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat1':
+	albina['wine_convo'] = rand(1,7)
+	cla & *clr
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
+	if albina['wine'] = 0: albina['wine'] = 1 & '"Huh? What did you say?"'
+	if albina['wine_convo'] = 1:
+		'"I love the taste of my own pussy," Albina says loudly. "Iz that weird?"'
+		act 'Super weird':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"Thad''s super fucking weird," you slur back.'
+			'"Bullshit!" she shouts even louder than before. "You can''t tell me you don''t like the taste of ''ur own brand. I know you do, you filthy slut."'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+		end
+		
+		act 'I like mine too':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"I l''ke the taste of my pussy too," you slur back.'
+			'"I fuhcking knew it!" Albina shouts triumphantly. "Every girl loves her own juice!"'
+			'"If you knew, then why are you asking if it''s weird?" you ask, puzzled.'
+			'"I jus'' wanted to see if <i>you</i> were the weird one!" Albina mumbles into her glass as she takes another sip, her voice echoing off the inside.'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+		end
+
+		if stat['mast'] > 0:
+			act 'I lick my fingers after masturbating':
+				cla & *nl
+				'"I like the taste of my pussy too," you slur back. "Sometimes I stick my fingers in my mouf after I masturbate, lick it all off."'
+				'"Oh fuck, I do that to! Suck my dildo fucking clean right after I cum. It always makes me want to rub another one out. <i>Fuuuuck</i>, I wanna rub one out right now," she moans while unconsciously squeezing her thighs together.'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+			end
+		end
+		
+		if pcs_vag > 0:
+			act 'I like tasting it on a guy''s dick':
+				cla & *nl
+				'"I like the taste of my pussy too," you slur back. "It tastes even better when it''s on a dick."'
+				'"You''re a fuckin'' slut <<$pcs_nickname>>," Albina says immediately and you nearly choke on your wine as both of you burst into laughter.'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+			end
+		end
+		
+		if npc_sex['A23'] = 1:
+			act'I like your taste too':
+				cla & *nl
+				'"I like the taste of your pussy too," you slur back, giving her a filthy grin.'
+				'"Nnnngh~!" Albina rolls her hips, rubbing her thighs together hard. "<i>Fuuuck!</i> Don''t say that! You make me want to shove your head between my legs right now!"'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+			end
+		end
+	elseif albina['wine_convo'] = 2:
+		!! Shaving convo
+		if pubestyle = 1 and pcs_pubes <= 3:
+			!! clean shaven
+			'"I can''t believe how many girls at our school don''t shave their pussy," Albina says with a disgusted look on her face. "How can they stand having all that itchy hair down there?"'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_answer1'
+		elseif pcs_pubes <= 10:
+			!! stubbly
+			'"You need a shave," Albina says with a disgusted look on her face as she moves her head uncomfortably on your lap. "I can practically feel your stubble velcroing to my hair right now."'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_answer2'
+		elseif pcs_pubes <= 15:
+			!! small patch
+			'"Ugh, how can you stand having even a small patch of hair down there?" Albina rants. "Why don''t you just shave it off? I can practically feel it velcroing to my hair."'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_answer3'
+		elseif pcs_pubes <= 25:
+			!! trimmed/styled bush
+			if (pubestyle >= 2 and pubestyle <= 8) or pubestyle >= 12):
+				!! styled section
+				'"Ugh, how can you stand having all that hair down there?" Albina rants. "Making it look all fancy doesn''t change the fact that it''s velcroing to my hair."'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event', 'shave_answer5'
+			else
+				!! trimmed section
+				'"You''ve already trimmed down there, so why don''t you just go ahead and shave it all off?" Albina asks while moving her head uncomfortably on your lap. "I can feel it velcroing to my hair."'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event', 'shave_answer5'
+			end
+		elseif pcs_pubes <= 30:
+			!! full bush
+			'"Ugh, how can you stand having all that hair down there?" Albina says with a disgusted look on her face before turning to glance down at the pubic hair covering your pussy. "It feels like I''m putting my head on a fucking hamster!"'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_answer5'
+		else
+			!! untamed jungle
+			'"Holy shit, <<$pcs_nickname>>, do you <i>ever</i> shave?" Albina says with a disgusted look on her face as she moves her head uncomfortably on your lap before turning to glance down at the wild bush between your legs. "How can you stand having practically an entire sheep down there?!"'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_answer6'
+		end
+		
+	elseif albina['wine_convo'] = 3:
+		'"Serious question, <<$pcs_nickname>>," Albina says, looking up at you with a mirthless expression on her face. "If you wanted to dominate me in bed, what would you do?"'
+		act 'Why would I do that?':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"Why would I do that?" you say, puzzled. "You''re my friend, I wouldn''t want to do that to you."'
+			'"It was just a hypothetical," Albina responds stiffly while burying her face in her wine glass.'
+			'"I thought you said it was serious?" you say with a nervous chuckle. You try to talk to her some more after that, but she seems a bit pouty for some reason, so you leave it alone.'
+			gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+		end
+		
+		act 'Am I some kind of pervert?':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"Why would I do that?" you ask. "What am I? Some kind of pervert?"'
+			'"It was just a hypothetical," Albina responds stiffly while burying her face in her wine glass.'
+			'"I thought you said it was serious?" you say with a nervous chuckle. You try to talk to her some more after that, but for some reason she gives you the silent treatment for the next few minutes.'
+			gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+		end
+		
+		act 'Bend you over and spank you':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"First, I''d bend you over my lap," you smile gently while softly running your fingers through her hair. Something in your voice makes her eyes go wide and she glances to the side, as if realizing that her head is exactly where you said you''d bend her over.'
+			'"Then, I''d sit you up so your ass is nice and high," you continue. "And then I''d <i>spank you within an inch of your life.</i>" You keep your easy tone, but give Albina a hard stare and her breath hitches. "I''d keep going until your ass is red and swollen. Let my fingers trail over your pussy, edging you until you <i>beg</i> me to let you cum. And then, <i>I won''t.</i>"'
+			*nl
+			'Albina''s face flushes red and she swallows reflexively. Looking down her body, you see her nipples have gone stiff and her thighs are practically soaked with juice.'
+			'"That..." she gulps. "Would be a pretty good way of doing it..."'
+			*nl
+			'She tears herself away from your gaze and buries her face in her wine glass, taking big desperate gulps.'
+			gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+		end
+		
+		act 'I''d sit on your face':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"I''d sit on your face," you grin. "Bury your face in my pussy. Force you to lick your way out or drown."'
+			'"Well..." she smiles back. "My head is already here... You could... you know... Just throw one leg over and see what happens..."'
+			act 'Is that an invitation?':
+				cla & *nl
+				'"Is that an invitation?" you ask.'
+				'"Come and find out," she whispers.'
+				
+			end
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+		end
+		
+		act 'Force you between my legs':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"I''d shove your face into my crotch before wrapping my legs around your head and holding you as tight as a vice." You softly stroke her hair before leaning in and whispering in her ear. "I''d keep squeezing until you make me cum all over your pretty face..."'
+			'"Well..." she smiles back. "My head is already here... You could... you know... Grab me by the hair and see what happens..."'
+			act 'Is that an invitation?':
+				cla & *nl
+				'"Is that an invitation?" you ask.'
+				'"Come and find out," she whispers.'
+				
+			end
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+		end
+		
+		act 'Grab you by the hair and fuck your ass':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"Well, first thing I would get a nice, <i>big</i>, strapon," you smirk. Albina bites her lip, unconsciously rubbing her thighs together while she waits for your next words. "And then I''d grab you by the hair, nice and tight, and then I''d shove it right up your ass!"'
+			'"<i>Fuck!</i> That''s good!" Albina moans, her hand snaking between her legs and shamelessly rubbing her pussy. "Have you been watching me and Lazar or something? That''s <i>just</i> how I like it," she says, a twinkle in her eye as her fingers come back up wet and sticky. She maintains eye contact as she runs her tongue across them, licking up her own juices.'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+		end
+		
+		act 'Tie you down':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"I''d get some rope and tie you to your own bed," you grin. "And then... I think I''d do whatever I want to you."'
+			'You let her imagination take over for you and it seems to work. Albina''s cheeks immediately flush and her breath grows heavy. Her nipples harden and down below, her thighs rub together, moisture glistening between them.'
+			'"That," she gulps. "Sounds like a pretty good way of doing it..."'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+		end
+		
+		
+	elseif albina['wine_convo'] = 4:
+		'"How often do you masturbate <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Albina asks loudly and without even a shred of shame or decency.'
+		act 'Embarrassed':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"Albina! That''s..."'
+			'Suddenly you can''t look at her anymore and your face grows hot for reasons you try to rationalize is just the wine.'
+			'"Oh please, don''t be such a prude <<$pcs_nickname>>," she rolls her eyes. "I know you do it, everyone does. I have to get off at least once a day or I can''t concentrate. Even if you don''t do it <i>every</i> day, I know you do."'
+			'You continue to try and elude her responses, though she grows increasingly bold and entertained in her teasing questions about you.'
+		end
+		if stat['mast'] = 0:
+			act 'Never done it':
+				cla & *nl
+				'"I don''t," you reply before taking another sip of wine.'
+				'"<i>What?!</i>" Albina sits up suddenly, causing you to curse as it makes some wine slosh out of the glass onto your chest. "Bull<i>shit</i>. Everyone masturbates!"'
+				if stat['sex'] > 0:
+					act 'I fuck boys instead':
+						cla & *nl
+						'"I prefer to let cock take care of my needs," you say, taking another sip with a smirk. Albina returns it immediately with a sly grin.'
+						'"Oh. Well, I guess if you''re just gonna slut it up instead..."'
+						gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+					end
+					
+					act 'I fuck girls instead':
+						cla & *nl
+						'"I don''t need to masturbate because I let other girls take care of that for me instead," you say, taking another sip with a mischievous twinkle in your eye. Albina returns it immediately with a sly grin.'
+						'"Oh. Well, I guess if you''re just gonna slut it up instead..."'
+						gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		else
+		
+		end
+	elseif albina['wine_convo'] = 5:
+		'"What''s the sluttiest thing you''ve ever done?"'
+	elseif albina['wine_convo'] = 6:
+		'boob size'
+	elseif albina['wine_convo'] = 7:
+		if albina['commando_know'] = 0:gt'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+		'"So, you really don''t wear panties?" Albina slurs, turning her head toward your pussy. "Like, ever?"'
+		if trait['commando_lvl'] = 3:
+			act 'Only when I have to':
+				cla & *nl
+				'"Only when I have to," you say, wrinkling your nose in annoyance. "Sometimes you just can''t get away with it."'
+				'"Like when?" she asks curiously.'
+				act 'School':
+					cla & *nl
+					'"At school," you sigh tiredly. "If I don''t, all the teachers will look up my skirt during class."'
+					'"All of them??" Albina looks confused. "I get the males, men are pigs, but the women too? Whad about Ms. Braakman??"'
+					'"Especially her!" you say, sending you both into fits of laughter.'
+					gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+				end
+				
+				act 'Disco':
+					cla & *nl
+					'"At the disco," you sigh tiredly. "Everyone will think I''m a slut if they see me flash puss on the dance floor."'
+					'"That''s why I wear thongs," Albina smirks proudly. "All the ass, none of the slut shame."'
+					act 'Maybe I should switch':
+						cla & *nl
+						'"Maybe I should buy some thongs," you mumble. "I''d rather not wear anything at all, but''s better than full shorts I guess."'
+						'"Yeah... Lemme see dat ass..."'
+						'"Albina! I already don''t wear panties. You can see my ass whenever you want."'
+						'"But with a thong, it''s..." She trails off. "... Fuck, what were we talking about?"'
+						gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+					end
+					
+					act 'That''s why I wear pants':
+						cla & *nl
+						'"That''s why I wear <i>pants</i>," you retort. "No one can tell you''re going commando when you''re wearing pants."'
+						'"But don''t all commandos wear pants?"'
+						'Albina narrows her eyes and looks up at you, while you stare down at her.'
+						'"I... shuddup!"'
+						gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+					end
+				end
+			end
+			
+			act 'Nope, never':
+				cla & *nl
+				'"Nope!" you say, popping the P with your lips. "Neverrrrrr."'
+				'"Doesn''t your pussy get cold?"'
+				'"Nyeh," you shrug. "You get used to it. After a while it''s weirder <i>not</i> to feel the breeze."'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+			end
+			
+			act 'I hate them':
+				cla & *nl
+				'"Neverrr!" you say, wrinkling your nose. "I <i>hate</i> wearing them!"'
+				'"Doesn''t your pussy get itchy when you wear pants?" she asks back.'
+				'"My pussy is tough as nails!" you proclaim proudly. "My pussy doesn''t need no pussy soft panties to protect it!"'
+				'"What?" Albina looks confused. "That doesn''t make any sense at all..."'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+			end
+		elseif trait['commando_lvl'] > 0:
+			act 'I just forget sometimes':
+				cla & *nl
+				'"Not <i>never</i>," you slur. "I just...  forget to put them on sometimes..."'
+				'"Ha! Slut!" she shouts before taking another slurp of her wine.'
+				gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+			end
+			
+			act 'Rarely':
+				cla & *nl
+				'"Rarely," you mumble.'
+				'"Like when?" she asks curiously.'
+				act 'School':
+					cla & *nl
+					'"At school," you sigh tiredly. "If I don''t, all the teachers will look up my skirt during class."'
+					'"All of them??" Albina looks confused. "I get the males, men are pigs, but the women too? Whad about Ms. Braakman??"'
+					'"Especially her!" you say, sending you both into fits of laughter.'
+					gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+				end
+				
+				act 'Disco':
+					cla & *nl
+					'"At the disco," you sigh tiredly. "Everyone will think I''m a slut if they see me flash puss on the dance floor."'
+					'"That''s why I wear thongs," Albina smirks proudly. "All the ass, none of the slut shame."'
+					act 'Maybe I should switch':
+						cla & *nl
+						'"Maybe I should switch," you mumble. "That sounds like a good in between."'
+						'"Yeah... Lemme see dat ass..."'
+						'"Albina! I''m already commando most days. You can see my ass whenever you want."'
+						'"But with a thong, it''s..." She trails off. "... Fuck, what were we talking about?"'
+						gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+					end
+					
+					act 'That''s why I wear pants':
+						cla & *nl
+						'"That''s why I wear <i>pants</i>," you retort. "No one can tell you''re going commando when you''re wearing pants."'
+						'"But don''t all commandos wear pants?"'
+						'Albina narrows her eyes and looks up at you, while you stare down at her.'
+						'"I... shuddup!"'
+						gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+					end
+				end
+			end
+			
+			if trait['commando_lvl'] = 1:
+				act 'Only with skirts':
+					cla & *nl
+					'"Only when I''m wearing skirts," you say. "My pussy gets itchy when it rubs against my pants."'
+					'"So you''re saying you just like potentially getting caught."'
+					'"No! That''s not what I sai-"'
+					'"Yeah yeah, whaever you shay," Albina says while slurping up another gulp of wine. "Skirts only? Someone wants to show off the goods."'
+					'"Bitch," you glare.'
+					'"Slut," she grins back.'
+					gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+				end
+			end
+		else
+			albina['commando_know'] = 0
+			act 'Nope, never':
+				cla & *nl
+				
+				
+				gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+			end
+			
+			act 'I hate them':
+				cla & *nl
+				
+				
+				gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+			
+			end
+			
+		end
+	elseif albina['wine_convo'] = 8:
+		'"Do you think I would make a good stripper?" Albina asks.'
+		act 'Probably':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"Probably," you mumble back. "You can dance and love shoving your ash in peopl''sh faces. Primo stripper qualities. Why do you ask?"'
+			'"Was thinking about how to pay for uni. Mama could probably do it for me, but what if I want some extra cash on the side?"'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+		end
+		
+		act 'Too bitchy':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"Nah." You wave your glass dismissively. "Too bitchy."'
+			'"Bitchy?!" she sputters.'
+			'"Yeah, too bitchy."'
+			'"What the fuck is that supposed to mean?"'
+			'"You''d rip someone''s balls off first time you get called a slut or a whore. You couldn''t put up with enough bullshit to be a stripper."'
+			'"... fuck, you''re right."'
+			'"See? Bitchy," you smile, smuggly sipping your wine.'
+			'"Oh fuck off," she grumbles back, taking a much bigger gulp.'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'wine_chat2':
+	act 'Call her a butt slut':
+		cla & *clr
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
+		'"You''re such a butt slut Albina," you remark, taking another sip from your glass.'
+		'"Fuck yeah, I am. And I <i>love</i> being one," she grins back, almost spilling her wine all over her face when you both cackle with uncontrollable laughter.'
+		act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+	end
+	
+	act'Spit or swallow?':
+		cla & *clr
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
+		'"So, spit or swallow?" you ask, looking down at Albina.'
+		'"Swallow, duh."'
+		act 'Ew, gross':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"Ewww!" You wrinkle your nose in disgust. "Thad''s fucking gross! I can''t believe you do that!"'
+			'"Waht the fuck else am I suppozed do?" she asks, sounding confused.'
+			'"Just spit it out!"'
+			'"The fuck are you talking about?" The incredulous look Albina gives you is like you just said one plus one equals five. "If he cums in your mouth, you swallow."'
+			act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+		end
+		
+		act 'Me too':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"Me too," you mumble. "Spitting is quitting."'
+			'"Damn straight," Albina says, throwing up her hand and high fiving you.'
+			act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+		end
+		if trt_cumeater > 0:
+			act 'I love the taste':
+				cla & *nl
+				'"Me too," you smile. "I love the way it feels going down my throat. Taste is pretty good too."'
+				'"What the fuck?" Albina says, looking at you with digust. "You actually like the taste of cum?!"'
+				'"Yeah, it''s why I swallow. You don''t like it?"'
+				'"No! It fuckin'' tastes like shit!"'
+				'"Then why do you do it?"'
+				'"Cuz you''re supposed to? If he cums in my mouth, I can''t spit it out," she says, looking genuinely confused that you''re suggesting there''s a choice.'
+				act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+			end
+		end
+	end
+	
+	act 'Your mom is very pretty':
+		cla & *clr
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
+		'With Albina right on your lap, you find your thoughts drifting to her mother. Her hair, her facial structure, she really is her mother''s daughter. It''s easy to tell where she got her good looks from.'
+		'"Your mom is fucking hot," you suddenly blurt out, your mouth autocompleting your thought before it actually passes through your brain. You freeze in panic.'
+		'"Fucking shit, I <i>knowwwwwwww</i>," Albina whines beneath you. "I gots ass for days, but she''s gots tits to match. Big fucking bootyful bounshy tits that give her cleavage even in a motherfucking t-shirt. <i>And</i> a great ass! Life is so un-fucking-fair..."'
+		act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+	end
+	
+	act'':
+		cla & *clr
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
+		
+		act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+	end
+	
+	act'':
+		cla & *clr
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/wine_talk.jpg"></center>'
+		
+		act 'Continue':gt 'albina_wine_event','wine_chat1'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_answer1':
+	act 'It''s so itchy':
+		cla & *nl
+		'You hum in agreement while you take another sip of wine.'
+		'"I''s sho itchy," you mumble around the glass.'
+		'"<i>Right?!</i>" she says, sitting up and to look at you with wide exhasperated eyes before laying her head back down on your lap.'
+		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
+	end
+	
+	act'So unfashionable':
+		cla & *nl
+		'You hum in agreement while you take another sip of wine.'
+		'"I''s sho ugly," you mumble around the glass. "Don''t they know how unfashionable bush is?"'
+		'"I don''t care about shit like that," Albina shakes her head. She gets quiet for a bit and stares down into her glass while swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
+		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
+	end
+	
+	act 'Easy maintanence':
+		cla & *nl
+		'"Mmmm," you hum in agreement while you take another sip of wine.'
+		'"I''s defini''ly eashier tha ''ay," you mumble around the glass. "I have no patience for styling down there. Easier to shuck it all off. Don''t know why they all don''t do the same."'
+		'"Shaving is a pretty annoying chore," she agrees. "But that''s not what I mean. It''s just so <i>fucking itchy!</i>"'
+		'Albina scowls while looking between her legs, seemingly disgusted at the mere thought of hair growing between them.'
+		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
+	end
+	
+	act 'Shrug':
+		cla & *nl
+		'"Eh," you shrug, taking another sip of wine.'
+		'"''ey can ''o wha''e''er ''ey ''ant down ''ere," you mumble around the glass. "It''s their pussy. I just shave cause I like it that way."'
+		'Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
+		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_answer2':
+	act 'I''m lazy':
+		cla & *nl
+		'"Bleh," you shrug. "I''m lazy. I''ll take care of it... eventually..." You look down at Albina, taking another sip of your wine. She just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
+		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
+	end
+	
+	act 'Didn''t feel like it':
+		cla & *nl
+		'"Bleh," you shrug. "Just didn''t feel like it today. I''l shave it off tomorrow," you mumble, taking another sip of your wine. She just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
+		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
+	end
+	
+	act 'I was in a rush':
+		cla & *nl
+		'"I was running late for something," you say, shrugging. "I''ll take care of it later..." you mumble, taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
+		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
+	end
+	
+	act 'I''m growing it out':
+		cla & *nl
+		'"Actually I''ve been growing it out," you say, taking another sip of your wine. "I thought I might try having some bush for a change." Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
+		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_answer5':
+	if pubestyle = 0 or pubestyle = 10:
+		act 'I''m lazy':
+			cla & *nl
+			if pubestyle = 10:
+				'"Bleh," you shrug. "I''m just lazy. Shaving is so much work. Best I can do is trim it now and then when it starts to get out of control," you mumble, taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
+			else
+				'"Bleh," you shrug. "I''m just lazy. Shaving is so much work. Easier just to let it grow," you mumble, taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
+			end
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
+		end
+		
+		act 'I like it this way':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"I like it this way," you say, shrugging. "Easy to maintain, plus I think I look pretty good with a rug. Don''t you?" you mumble, taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
+		end
+	elseif (pubestyle >= 2 and pubestyle <= 8) or pubestyle >= 12:
+		act 'I like it this way':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"I like it this way," you protest. "I got it styled just the way I like it. Don''t you think it''s cute?" you mumble, taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
+			gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
+		end
+	end
+	
+	act 'Maybe I should try shaving':
+		cla & *nl
+		'"Hmmm, you might have a point," you muse. "You look pretty sexy all clean shaven down there. Maybe I should try it some time," you mumble, taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
+		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_answer6':
+	act 'I''m lazy':
+		cla & *nl
+		'"Bleh," you say, shrugging. "I''m just lazy. Yeah, sometimes it itches but whenever I think of all the work I''d have to do to shave it I''m just like <i>ughhhhhhhh</i>," you mumble, taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
+		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
+	end
+	
+	act 'Doesn''t bother me':
+		cla & *nl
+		'"Doesn''t really bother me," you say, shrugging. "Why should I care? Fashion?" you chuckle, taking another sip of your wine. Albina just stares down at her own glass, swirling the dark red liquid around inside of it.'
+		gs 'albina_wine_event','shave_elaborate'
+	end
+end
+
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'shave_elaborate':
+	'"I only used to shave because of my dad," she says unblinking, like she didn''t even hear what you said. "As soon as I first started growing hair down there, he bought me a pack of razors. Wanted my pussy ''smooth as a baby down there'' for all his rapist friends. I tried letting it grow out once just to spite him, but it was so <i>fucking</i> itchy, I couldn''t even last a week without giving up. Fuck pussy hair! I should get it lasered."'
+	'With that, she tilts her glass back and drains the whole thing in one large swallow before reaching for the bottle to top herself off again.'
+	gs'albina_wine_event','wine_chat2'
+end
+
+--- albina_wine_event ---------------------------------

locations/albinahome.qsrc

@@ -605,7 +605,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'receive_strapon':
 	'You take the dildo into your mouth and start sucking on it while stroking the shaft with one hand. "Yeah, just like that <<$pcs_nickname>>!" she moans as she reaches between the straps and gently rubs her pussy. You spend several minutes sucking on the dildo, getting it nice and wet with your drool before she pulls it out of your mouth. "I''m so going to enjoy fucking you!"'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
-	if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 		act 'You''re a virgin':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'

locations/anushka.qsrc

@@ -184,7 +184,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Her turn':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/sex/detcowgirl.jpg"></center>'
-		if stat['virgin'] = 0:
+		if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 			'You blush as you shake your head. "Sorry, but I don''t want to get fucked. I''m still a virgin."'
 			'They both look at you with surprise. Then Valentin says. "Well I will happily pop your cheery for you." Which earns him a slap on the shoulder from Anushka.'
 			'"Shut up whore dog, a girl picks her time and with whom she wants to lose it." Then she says to you. "Don''t worry about it." Then Anushka climbs on top of him herself. She mounts him cowgirl style then starts riding him hard and fast. You kneel down next to them on the couch, squeezing and kissing her lovely ass as she rides him.'
@@ -225,7 +225,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Her turn':
 		end
 	end
 
-	if stat['virgin'] = 0:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 		act 'Mount him':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'

locations/anushkaev1.qsrc

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon1':
 			'You pull out the strap-on harness and hold it up. "Yeah, I like this..."'
 			'Her eyes widen ever so slightly. "Just what do you plan to do with that?"'
 		end
-		if domnush >= -50 and stat['virgin'] = 0:
+		if domnush >= -50 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 			act 'Take turns':
 				*clr & cla
 				minut += 2
@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon1':
 				act 'Strap-on fun': gt 'anushkaev1', 'bedstrapongive'
 			end
 		end
-		if stat['virgin'] = 0:
+		if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 			act 'Fuck me':
 				*clr & cla
 				nushstrapon = 1
@@ -89,7 +89,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon1':
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/strapon/strapme6.jpg"></center>'
 										'Several minutes go by before she climbs off your face, grabs the harness and quickly slides it on. After making sure it''s securely in place, she grabs you by the hair and pulls your face over the dildo. "Suck my dick, slut!"'
 										'You obediently open your mouth and take the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo in your mouth. She mostly lets you control how deep you take it, although she pushes it a bit deeper a few times, making you gag a little.'
-										gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'lesbian'
+										gs 'arousal', 'dildo_suck', 5, 'lesbian'
 										gs 'stat'
 										act 'Get fucked':
 											*clr & cla
@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'strapon1':
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/bedroom/sex/strapon/strapme6.jpg"></center>'
 									'Several minutes go by before she climbs off your face, grabs the harness and quickly slides it on. After making sure it''s securely in place, she grabs you by the hair and pulls your face over the dildo. "Suck my dick, slut!"'
 									'You obediently open your mouth and take the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo in your mouth. She mostly lets you control how deep you take it, although she pushes it a bit deeper a few times, making you gag a little.'
-									gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'lesbian'
+									gs 'arousal', 'dildo_suck', 5, 'lesbian'
 									gs 'stat'
 									act 'Get fucked':
 										*clr & cla
@@ -1130,13 +1130,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'couch_strapon_get':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/livingroom/cstrapget2.jpg"></center>'
 			'She places her hand on the back of your head and pulls your head down to the strapon. "Suck my dick, slut!"'
 			'You open your mouth, take the dildo into your mouth and sucking on it, getting it nice and wet while her hand guides your head, occasionally forcing it a bit further into your mouth. "Fuck, you''re such a good cock sucker <<$pcs_nickname>>. No wonder all the boys talk about you." she tells you in a teasing tone. Her dirty talk turns you on.'
-			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 2, 'lesbian', 'sub'
+			gs 'arousal', 'dildo_suck', 2, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Swallow the whole thing':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/livingroom/cstrapget3.jpg"></center>'
 				'She starts forcing your head down more and more, gagging you with the dildo and making you slobber all over it. "Come on you fucking slut, I know you can deepthroat this." she says just before she forces the dildo down your throat, gagging you. After a few seconds, she finally releases you to let you catch your breath before doing it again. She pulls off most of her clothes while she face fucks you.'
-				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'deepthroat'
+				gs 'arousal', 'dildo_suck', 3, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Turn around':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -1352,7 +1352,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bedstrapongive':
 			'You smack her on the ass as she rides you. "Yeah, that''s right! Ride my dick like the slut you are!" you tell her in a teasing tone. She''s moaning so loudly that you don''t even think she heard your comment. A few more minutes go by before she cries out in orgasm and you can feel her wetness running down onto your thighs. She almost collapses on you, breathing hard, and you have to help her get off you.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap_give', 5, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'stat'
-			if stat['virgin'] = 0: act 'Have her fuck you now': gt 'anushkaev1','bedstraponget'
+			if stat['think_virgin'] = 0: act 'Have her fuck you now': gt 'anushkaev1','bedstraponget'
 			act 'Have her fuck your ass now': gt 'anushkaev1','bedstrapongetanal'
 			act 'Fuck her ass now': gt 'anushkaev1','bedstrapongiveanal'
 			act 'Finish':
@@ -1524,7 +1524,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bedstrapongiveanal':
 		'You ride her all the way down, still fucking her ass. Even once the last orgasm passes and she seems completely spent, you keep hammering away at her ass, just to show her who''s boss. Finally tiring yourself out, you stop and pull out of her.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'rough', 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
-		if stat['virgin'] = 0: act 'Have her fuck you now': gt 'anushkaev1','bedstraponget'
+		if stat['think_virgin'] = 0: act 'Have her fuck you now': gt 'anushkaev1','bedstraponget'
 		act 'Have her fuck your ass now': gt 'anushkaev1','bedstrapongetanal'
 		act 'Finish':
 			*clr & cla

locations/arousal.qsrc

@@ -17,7 +17,9 @@ It can be when receiving any of the following
 'cuni' - stimulation of your pussy by someones toungue
 'rimming' - stimulation of your anus by someones toungue
 'vaginal' 'vaginal_finger' 'vaginal_fist' 'vaginal_dildo' 'vaginal_strap' 'vaginal_vibe' - stimulation of your vagina with a penis and various others
+'self_fisting' - fisting your own vagina
 'anal' 'anal_finger' 'anal_fist' 'anal_dildo' 'anal_strap' 'anal_vibe' - stimulation of your anus with a penis and various others
+'self_fisting_anal' - fisting your own anus
 'kiss' - snogging, tonsil tennis, lip locking, etc.
 'BDSM' - receiving candle wax, flogging, leash play, bondage etc
 'pee' - being peed upon
@@ -31,6 +33,7 @@ also when giving any of the following:
 'anal_finger_give' 'anal_fist_give' 'anal_dildo_give' 'anal_vibe_give' 'anal_strap_give' - stimulating someones anus in various ways
 'hj' - jerking a guy off with your hand
 'bj' - sucking a guy off
+'dildo_suck' - simulating a bj on a dildo/strapon
 'titjob' - using boobs to jerk off a guy
 'footjob' - using feet to jerk off a guy
 'BDSM_give' - giving candle wax, flogging, leash play, bondage etc
@@ -62,7 +65,7 @@ no_orgasm_msg - if one of the arguments $ARGS[2] - [8] is set to 'no_orgasm_msg'
 You can override the orgasm to force or prevent, to do so use:
 $orgasm_or = 'yes' to force orgasm, it will reset in orgasm call so if you want to force it again, you have to enter it again
 $orgasm_or = 'custom' to force orgasm and use custom text set as $orgasm_txt - *you can just add the text and call with 'yes' this is old method
-$orgasm_or = 'yes' and 'custom' require that the first arousal call is a call that can trigger an orgasm, the following arousal calls can trigger it: clit_finger, clit_vibe, cuni, rimming, trib, anal, anal_finger, anal_fist, anal_dildo, anal_strap, anal_vibe, vaginal, vaginal_finger, vaginal_fist, vaginal_dildo, vaginal_strap, vaginal_vibe can trigger
+$orgasm_or = 'yes' and 'custom' require that the first arousal call is a call that can trigger an orgasm, the following arousal calls can trigger it: clit_finger, clit_vibe, cuni, rimming, trib, anal, anal_finger, anal_fist, anal_dildo, anal_strap, anal_vibe, vaginal, vaginal_finger, vaginal_fist, vaginal_dildo, vaginal_strap, vaginal_vibe, self_fisting and self_fisting_anal.
 $orgasm_or = 'no' to prevent orgasm, it will remain in place until manually changed, or if end is called.
 $orgasm_txt is used to add custom text that will be called if Sveta orgasms in the next arousal call. It will remain until cleared or orgasm so you must clear it if not forcing orgasm and don''t want it to be used on next orgasm.
  }
@@ -252,6 +255,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] ! 'end' and $ARGS[0] ! 'checks' and $ARGS[0] ! 'count' and $ARGS[0]
 			gs 'pain', 4-agape, 'asshole', 'stretch'
 			if agape < 3:agape = 3
 		end
+	elseif $ARGS[0] = 'self_fisting_anal':
+		orgasm_flag['anal'] = 1
+		count['self_fisting_anal'] = 1
+		stim['act'] = 30
+		if traits['buttslut_lvl'] = 1:
+			stim['act'] = 50
+		elseif traits['buttslut_lvl'] >= 2:
+			stim['act'] = 70
+		end
+		if pcs_ass + anal_slip < 30:
+			pcs_ass = 30
+			gs 'pain', 4-agape, 'asshole', 'stretch'
+			if agape < 3:agape = 3
+		end
+		self_fisting
 	elseif $ARGS[0] = 'anal_dildo':
 		orgasm_flag['anal'] = 1
 		count['anal_dildo'] = 1
@@ -365,6 +383,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] ! 'end' and $ARGS[0] ! 'checks' and $ARGS[0] ! 'count' and $ARGS[0]
 			gs 'pain', 3 - vgape, 'vaginal', 'stretch'
 			if vgape < 3:vgape = 3
 		end
+	elseif $ARGS[0] = 'self_fisting':
+		orgasm_flag['vaginal'] = 1
+		count['self_fisting'] = 1
+		stim['act'] = 70
+		if pcs_vag + vaginal_slip < 30:
+			!! same as for 'vaginal'
+			pcs_vag += 3
+			gs 'pain', 3 - vgape, 'vaginal', 'stretch'
+			if vgape < 3:vgape = 3
+		end
 	elseif $ARGS[0] = 'vaginal_dildo':
 		orgasm_flag['vaginal'] = 1
 		count['vaginal_dildo'] = 1
@@ -486,6 +514,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] ! 'end' and $ARGS[0] ! 'checks' and $ARGS[0] ! 'count' and $ARGS[0]
 		end
 		stim['act'] = 45
 		if temp_dick > pcs_throat: pcs_throat += 1
+	elseif $ARGS[0] = 'dildo_suck':
+		count['dildo_suck'] = 1
+		stim['act'] = 30
+		if temp_dick > pcs_throat: pcs_throat += 1
 	elseif $ARGS[0] = 'footjob':
 		if temp_unaware = 1:
 			count['hidden_footjob'] = 1
@@ -853,6 +885,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 	gs 'arousal', 'count', 'anal_dildo'
 	gs 'arousal', 'count', 'anal_strap'
 	gs 'arousal', 'count', 'anal_vibe'
+	gs 'arousal', 'count', 'self_fisting_anal'
 	gs 'arousal', 'count', 'vaginal'
 	gs 'arousal', 'count', 'hidden_vaginal'
 	gs 'arousal', 'count', 'vaginal_finger'
@@ -860,6 +893,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 	gs 'arousal', 'count', 'vaginal_dildo'
 	gs 'arousal', 'count', 'vaginal_strap'
 	gs 'arousal', 'count', 'vaginal_vibe'
+	gs 'arousal', 'count', 'self_fisting'
 	gs 'arousal', 'count', 'BDSM'
 	gs 'arousal', 'count', 'pee'
 	gs 'arousal', 'count', 'massage'
@@ -881,6 +915,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'end':
 	gs 'arousal', 'count', 'hidden_hj'
 	gs 'arousal', 'count', 'bj'
 	gs 'arousal', 'count', 'hidden_bj'
+	gs 'arousal', 'count', 'dildo_suck'
 	gs 'arousal', 'count', 'footjob'
 	gs 'arousal', 'count', 'hidden_footjob'
 	gs 'arousal', 'count', 'titjob'

locations/artem_events.qsrc

@@ -661,7 +661,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 							end
 						end
 					end	
-				elseif pcs_vag = 0:
+				elseif stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 					'You take his dick out of your mouth for a second and smile at him a bit apologetically telling him: "Sorry, Artem, but I''m still a virgin and I am not sure I am ready to lose my virginity yet, ok? I bet I could still make you feel good with my mouth."'
 					'Artem blushes, but presses on and asks: "I would like to be your first, it can be both of our first times together."'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 1
@@ -678,7 +678,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex':
 								'You grab a condom out of your purse and tell him to put it on. He struggles a bit to get it on but eventually manages to get it on his hard cock.'
 							else
 								noprotect = 1
-								'"You do have a condom right?" You ask him.'
+								'"You do have a condom right?" you ask him.'
 								'"I... No, I don''t have any... I haven''t exactly had any use for those yet." He says a bit defensively.'
 								'Not wanting to hurt his feelings you tell him it''s ok.'
 							end

locations/audition_sex2.qsrc

@@ -387,7 +387,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'neutral_bj1':
 			else
 				'"Alright, that''s enough of a warmup. Time for the main course. Bend over."'
 			end
-			if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+			if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 				act'Wait I''m a virgin':
 					audition['virgin_know'] = 1
 					cla & *clr

locations/audition_sex3.qsrc

@@ -381,7 +381,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_bj1':
 			else
 				'"Alright, that''s enough of a warmup. Time for the main course. Bend over."'
 			end
-			if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+			if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 				act'Wait I''m a virgin':
 					audition['virgin_know'] = 1
 					cla & *clr
@@ -591,7 +591,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck':
 	gs 'underwear', 'remove'
 	gs 'stat'
 	if rand(0,1) = 1:
-		if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+		if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 			act'"By the way, I''m a virgin"':
 				cla & *nl
 				audition['virgin_know'] = 1				
@@ -602,7 +602,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck':
 			end
 		end
 		act'Get fucked':
-			if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+			if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 				gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin2'
 			else
 				gt'audition_sex3','slutty_fuck2'
@@ -611,7 +611,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck':
 		if prezikcount > 0:
 			act'Put on a condom on him':
 				audition['condom'] = 1
-				if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+				if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 					gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin2'
 				else
 					gt'audition_sex3','slutty_fuck2'
@@ -619,7 +619,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck':
 			end
 		end
 	else
-		if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+		if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 			act'"By the way, I''m a virgin"':
 				cla & *nl
 				audition['virgin_know'] = 1
@@ -630,7 +630,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck':
 			end
 		end
 		act'Get fucked':
-			if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+			if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 				gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin1'
 			else
 				gt'audition_sex3','slutty_fuck1'
@@ -639,7 +639,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'slutty_fuck':
 		if prezikcount > 0:
 			act'Put on a condom on him':
 				audition['condom'] = 1
-				if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+				if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 					gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin1'
 				else
 					gt'audition_sex3','slutty_fuck1'

locations/auditions_minor1.qsrc

@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 						end
 					elseif audition['position'] = 2:
 						'"Then take off your clothes and bend over."'
-						if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+						if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 							act'"Uhhh..." (I''m a virgin)':
 								audition['virgin_know'] = 1
 								if rand(1,2) = 1:
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 							end
 						end
 						act'Bend over':
-							if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin2'
 							else
 								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_fuck2'
@@ -223,7 +223,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 						end
 						act'Ask him to put on a condom':
 							audition['condom'] = 1
-							if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin2'
 							else
 								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_fuck2'
@@ -231,7 +231,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 						end
 					elseif audition['position'] = 3:
 						'"Take off your clothes and lay down on the desk."'
-						if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+						if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 							act'"Uhhh..." (I''m a virgin)':
 								audition['virgin_know'] = 1
 								if rand(1,2) = 1:
@@ -292,7 +292,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 							end
 						end
 						act'Get on the desk':
-							if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin1'
 							else
 								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_fuck1'
@@ -300,7 +300,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 						end
 						act'Ask him to put on a condom':
 							audition['condom'] = 1
-							if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_virgin1'
 							else
 								gt'audition_sex2','neutral_fuck1'
@@ -323,7 +323,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 						end
 					elseif audition['position'] = 2:
 						'"Then take off your clothes and bend over."'
-						if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+						if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 							act'"By the way, I''m a virgin"':
 								cla & *nl
 								audition['virgin_know'] = 1
@@ -348,7 +348,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 							end
 						end
 						act'Bend over':
-							if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin2'
 							else
 								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_fuck2'
@@ -356,7 +356,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 						end
 						act'Ask him to put on a condom':
 							audition['condom'] = 1
-							if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin2'
 							else
 								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_fuck2'
@@ -364,7 +364,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 						end
 					elseif audition['position'] = 3:
 						'"Take off your clothes and lay down on the desk."'
-						if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+						if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 							act'"By the way, I''m a virgin"':
 								cla & *nl
 								audition['virgin_know'] = 1
@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 							end
 						end
 						act'Get on the desk':
-							if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin1'
 							else
 								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_anal1'
@@ -392,7 +392,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'casting_couch':
 						end
 						act'Ask him to put on a condom':
 							audition['condom'] = 1
-							if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+							if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_virgin1'
 							else
 								gt'audition_sex3','slutty_anal1'

locations/bedrPar.qsrc

@@ -469,7 +469,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/prost4.jpg"></center>'
 					'"You want me to wake up that early?!" you huff. "Can''t I wake up at like... 07:00?"'
 					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shrugs. "You could, but then you might have to cut corners or even end up running late to school, and I won''t be having any of that. Your teachers won''t either." she warns you before making her way towards the kitchen.'
-					if stat['virgin'] = 1: '"Oh, don''t forget; you need to head down to the clinic and see the gynecologist for a check up. Not just once, but every month." she adds quickly.'
+					if stat['think_virgin'] = 1: '"Oh, don''t forget; you need to head down to the clinic and see the gynecologist for a check up. Not just once, but every month." she adds quickly.'
 					act 'But why do I--':
 						cla & *clr
 						minut += 2

locations/body_desc.qsrc

@@ -84,40 +84,40 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pussy':
 	if vgape >= 4:
 		if rand(0,1) = 0:
-			$pcs_vag = 'Your regularly-fucked <a href="exec:view''images/pc/body/pussy/stage5/' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg''">playground</a> can take most things you force up there, ' + iif(stat['virgin'] = 0,'maybe you should skip the next gangbang?.','this can''t be right. What could be doing this to be?.')
+			$pcs_vag = 'Your regularly-fucked <a href="exec:view''images/pc/body/pussy/stage5/' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg''">playground</a> can take most things you force up there, ' + iif(stat['think_virgin'] = 0,'maybe you should skip the next gangbang?.','this can''t be right. What could be doing this to be?.')
 		else
-			$pcs_vag = 'Your poor little <a href="exec:view''images/pc/body/pussy/stage5/' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg''">pussy</a> is broken from too much stuffing, it''ll need time to recover, ' + iif(stat['virgin'] = 0,'maybe you should skip the next gangbang?.','this can''t be right. What could be doing this to be?.')
+			$pcs_vag = 'Your poor little <a href="exec:view''images/pc/body/pussy/stage5/' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg''">pussy</a> is broken from too much stuffing, it''ll need time to recover, ' + iif(stat['think_virgin'] = 0,'maybe you should skip the next gangbang?.','this can''t be right. What could be doing this to be?.')
 		end
 		$pcs_vag_image = 'images/pc/body/pussy/stage5/' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg'
 		$pc_desc['pussy'] = func($this, 'ChooseDescWord', 'ruined', 'broken', 'proplapsed', 'destroyed', 'annihilated', 'obliterated','decimated')
 		$pc_descWordy['pussy'] = 'prolapsed, ruined, chasm of a'
 		$vaginatipe = 'ruined'
 	elseif vgape = 3:
-		$pcs_vag = 'You have a gaping hole of a <a href="exec:view''images/pc/body/pussy/stage4/' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg''">vagina</a>, ' + iif(stat['virgin'] = 0,'it has seen a lot of action.','how though? Maybe something is wrong with you, virgins don''t look like this.')
+		$pcs_vag = 'You have a gaping hole of a <a href="exec:view''images/pc/body/pussy/stage4/' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg''">vagina</a>, ' + iif(stat['think_virgin'] = 0,'it has seen a lot of action.','how though? Maybe something is wrong with you, virgins don''t look like this.')
 		$pcs_vag_image = 'images/pc/body/pussy/stage4/' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg'
 		$pc_desc['pussy'] = func($this, 'ChooseDescWord', 'gaping', 'open', 'extended', 'wide')
 		$pc_descWordy['pussy'] = 'gaping and well used'
 		$vaginatipe = 'gaping'
 	elseif vgape = 2:
-		$pcs_vag = 'Your <a href="exec:view''images/pc/body/pussy/stage3/' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg''">vagina</a> looks like ir has seen some action, ' + iif(stat['virgin'] = 0,'which it totally has.','which doesn''t make sense. You''re still a virgin.')
+		$pcs_vag = 'Your <a href="exec:view''images/pc/body/pussy/stage3/' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg''">vagina</a> looks like ir has seen some action, ' + iif(stat['think_virgin'] = 0,'which it totally has.','which doesn''t make sense. You''re still a virgin.')
 		$pcs_vag_image = 'images/pc/body/pussy/stage3/' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg'
 		$pc_desc['pussy'] = func($this, 'ChooseDescWord', 'recovering', 'recently used', 'welcoming')
 		$pc_descWordy['pussy'] = 'experienced, welcoming'
 		$vaginatipe = 'welcoming'
 	elseif vgape = 1 or pcs_vag > 10:
-		$pcs_vag = 'Your <a href="exec:view''images/pc/body/pussy/stage2/' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg''">pussy</a> looks like has been used recently or is just well worn in, ' + iif(stat['virgin'] = 0,'maybe you''ve been over doing it?','which seems unfair for a virgin like yourself.')
+		$pcs_vag = 'Your <a href="exec:view''images/pc/body/pussy/stage2/' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg''">pussy</a> looks like has been used recently or is just well worn in, ' + iif(stat['think_virgin'] = 0,'maybe you''ve been over doing it?','which seems unfair for a virgin like yourself.')
 		$pcs_vag_image = 'images/pc/body/pussy/stage2/' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg'
 		$pc_desc['pussy'] = func($this, 'ChooseDescWord', 'pliable', 'used')
 		$pc_descWordy['pussy'] = 'worn in'
 		$vaginatipe = 'used'
 	elseif pcs_vag > 0:
-		$pcs_vag = 'Your <a href="exec:view''images/pc/body/pussy/stage1/' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg''">pussy</a> looks perfectly normal, ' + iif(stat['virgin'] = 0,'for someone sexually active.','just not as virginal as you would expect.')
+		$pcs_vag = 'Your <a href="exec:view''images/pc/body/pussy/stage1/' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg''">pussy</a> looks perfectly normal, ' + iif(stat['think_virgin'] = 0,'for someone sexually active.','just not as virginal as you would expect.')
 		$pcs_vag_image = 'images/pc/body/pussy/stage1/' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg'
 		$pc_desc['pussy'] = func($this, 'ChooseDescWord', 'snug', 'tight', 'cosy')
 		$pc_descWordy['pussy'] = 'tight and unused'
 		$vaginatipe = 'unused'
 	else
-		$pcs_vag = 'Your virgin <a href="exec:view''images/pc/body/pussy/stage0/' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg''">pussy</a> still has its hymen intact, ' + iif(stat['virgin'] = 0,'even though you are not a virgin.','which makes sense for a virgin.')
+		$pcs_vag = 'Your virgin <a href="exec:view''images/pc/body/pussy/stage0/' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg''">pussy</a> still has its hymen intact, ' + iif(stat['think_virgin'] = 0,'even though you are not a virgin.','which makes sense for a virgin.')
 		$pcs_vag_image = 'images/pc/body/pussy/stage0/' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg'
 		$pc_desc['pussy'] = 'virgin'
 		$pc_descWordy['pussy'] = 'virgin'

locations/booty_call.qsrc

@@ -943,7 +943,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj_react1.2':
 		if booty_call['cum_choice'] = 3:
 			'"Thanks for the warning," you smile, licking your lips.'
 			'"Ugh! Seriously?" Despite just blowing his load in your mouth, he looks somewhat upset. "I told you, I wanted to fuck tonight, not just get a blowjob."'
-			if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+			if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 				act'Sorry, saving myself for marriage':
 					booty_call['virgin'] = 1
 					cla & *clr
@@ -1003,7 +1003,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj_react2':
 		'"Mmmm. Tasty."'
 		if rand(0,1) = 0 and booty_call['fuck'] ! 1:
 			'"Aww man, I never got to fuck you."'
-			if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+			if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 				act'Sorry, saving myself for marriage':
 					booty_call['virgin'] = 1
 					cla & *clr

locations/booty_call_after.qsrc

@@ -3,8 +3,9 @@
 if $ARGS[0] = 'exit':
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	if $clothingworntype = 'nude': gs'shortgs','dress'
+!!	if know_virgin[$boy] > 0 and pcs_vag > 0 and booty_call['fuck'] > 0: know_virgin[$boy] = 0
 	
-	killvar 'booty_call_after'
+	killvar 'booty_call'
 	minut += 2
 	!! exit should be based on type of apartment and location
 	if npc_residence[$boy] = 1:
@@ -21,13 +22,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'exit':
 		gt 'city_center'
 !!{ disabled for bug testing
 	else
-		if $region = 'pav_residential':
+		if $region = 'pav':
 			gt 'pav_residential'
-		elseif $region = 'pav_commercial':
+		elseif $region = 'pav':
 			gt 'pav_commercial'
 		elseif $region = 'pav_park':
 			gt 'pav_park','start'
-		elseif $region = 'city_residential':
+		elseif $region = 'city':
 			gt 'city_residential'
 		elseif $region = 'city_center':
 			gt 'city_center'
@@ -42,8 +43,8 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'quit':
 	act'Call it quits':
 		cla & *clr
-		!! IMAGE HERE
-		'Grab your things and leave in anger.'
+		$npc_apt_bedroom[$boy]
+		'You know what, <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>>? <i>Fuck you!</i>" You leap off the bed in a huff, quickly grabbing your things and throwing your clothes on. <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> glares daggers at you the whole time but you don''t care and the moment you have all your clothes on, you stalk out the door, giving him the finger as you slam it behind you.'
 		!! if npc_abusive[$boy] > 0 and rand(1,10) > number:
 		!! get raped
 		!! else
@@ -52,16 +53,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'quit':
 	end
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'quit2':
+	booty_call['annoyed'] = 1
+	*nl
+	'Both of you lay back in bed, slightly frustrated with each other with where you''re calling things today, but neither willing to concede.'
+	if npc_smoker[$boy] > 0: *nl & '<<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> grabs his cigarettes from his nightstand and lights up, puffing away at it in annoyance.'
+	gs'booty_call_after','after_sex2'
+end
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'stop_here':
 	act'Finish here?':
 		cla & *clr
 		$npc_apt_bedroom[$boy]
-		'"I think I''m reaching my limit. Want to end here?"'
+		'"I think I''m good here," you say. "How about you?"'
 		if booty_call['cum_count'] < npc_sexdrive[$boy] - 5:
-			'"No way! I still want more!"'
+			'"You''re seriously done already?" <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> protests. "I still want to get off a few more times with you."'
 			act'I can''t keep going':
 				cla & *nl
-				'"I''m sorry <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>>, but I just can''t. Maybe next time."'
+				'"I''m sorry <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>>," you say, rubbing his arm, genuinely apologetic. "But I just can''t keep up with your sex drive. I''m all tapped out. Maybe next time?"'
 				'<<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> seems really disappointed, almost upset.'
 				gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
 			end
@@ -69,12 +78,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'stop_here':
 			act'Well...':
 				cla & *nl
 				'"Well... I guess I might be able to keep going a <i>little</i> longer," you say with a soft smile.'
-				gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
+				gs'booty_call_sex','reset'
+				act'Foreplay':cla & gs 'booty_call_start', 'foreplay_choose'
+				act'Sex':cla & gs'booty_call_sex','position_change' & gs 'booty_call_sex', 'condoms'
 			end
 			
 			act'I don''t have time':
 				cla & *nl
-				'"I don''t have time <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>>," you shake your head. "I need to get going soon."'
+				'"I wish I could, but I don''t have time <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>>," you shake your head. "I really need to get going soon."'
 				'<<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> seems really disappointed, almost upset.'
 				gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
 			end
@@ -86,120 +97,187 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'keep_going':
 	act'Keep going?':
-		cla & *clr
 		if booty_call['cum_count'] >= npc_sexdrive[$boy]:
+			cla & *clr
 			$npc_apt_bedroom[$boy]
-			'"Wanna keep going?"'
-			'"I don''t think I can," he says, cock already limp.'
+			'"Wanna keep going?" you ask eagerly.'
+			if booty_call['cock_remove'] = 1:
+				'"I don''t think I can," he says, cock already flaccid, rapidly deflating right before your eyes as the seconds go by.'
+			else
+				'"I don''t think I can," he says, making you frown as you realize you can feel him getting softer inside you.'
+			end
+			'"Aww shucks," you sigh disappointedly.'
 			gs'booty_call_after','finish'
-		else
+		elseif booty_call['cock_remove'] = 1:
+			cla & *clr
+			minut += rand(1,2)
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/misc/wait.mp4"></video></center>'
+			'"Wanna keep going?" you ask eagerly.'
 			'"Yeah, gimme a minute to get hard again."'
 			'While you wait, you consider what you want to do next...'
 			gs'booty_call_sex','reset'
 			act'Foreplay':cla & gs 'booty_call_start', 'foreplay_choose'
 			act'Sex':cla & gs'booty_call_sex','position_change' & gs 'booty_call_sex', 'condoms'
+		else
+			cla & *nl
+			$booty_call['reset_pos'] = $booty_call['pos_speed']
+			minut += rand(1,2)
+			'"Think you can keep going?" you ask, flexing your pussy around his cock. It twitches inside in response, feeling a little stiffer than before. "That felt like a yes," you grin.'
+			gs'booty_call_sex','reset'
+			act'Foreplay':cla & gs 'booty_call_start', 'foreplay_choose'
+			act'Keep fucking':gs'booty_call_sex','reset' & gt'booty_call_sex',$booty_call['reset_pos']
 		end
 	end
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'wipe_hands':
+	act'Wipe your hands':
+		cla & *clr
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_hands.mp4"></video></center>'
+		cumspclnt = 16
+		gs 'cum_cleanup'
+		gs 'stat'
+		'You grab some tissues and clean your hands off, wiping the cum from every finger.'
+		gs 'booty_call_sex', 'sex_end'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'wipe_face':
+	act'Wipe your face':
+		cla & *clr
+		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/clean_mouth.mp4"></video></center>'
+		cumspclnt = 12
+		gs 'cum_cleanup'
+		gs 'stat'
+		'You grab some tissues and clean up, wiping the cum from your face.'
+		gs 'booty_call_sex', 'sex_end'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'wipe_tits':
+	cla & *clr
+	!! IMAGE HERE
+	$npc_apt_bedroom[$boy]
+	cumspclnt = 16
+	gs 'cum_cleanup'
+	gs 'stat'
+	'You grab some tissues and clean up, wiping the cum from your tits.'
+	gs 'booty_call_sex', 'sex_end'
+end
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'finish':
-	if booty_call['orgasm_count'] = 0 and booty_call['fake_orgasm_count'] = 0 and booty_call['fuck'] = 0 and npc_selfish[$boy] = 0:
+	if booty_call['orgasm_count'] = 0 and booty_call['fake_orgasm_count'] = 0 and booty_call['fuck'] = 0 and npc_selfish[$boy] = 0 and (npc_generous[$boy] = 1 or rand(0,1) = 1):
 		gs'booty_call_after','no_cum_end'
 	elseif booty_call['cum_count'] >= npc_sexdrive[$boy]:
 		booty_call['sex_end'] = 1
-		'"I guess we can call it there."'
+		'"Yeah," <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> pants. "I''m totally tapped out."'
 		gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
+	elseif booty_call['cum_count'] = 0:
+		'"Sorry," you say only a little apologetically. "I really can''t keep going. I''m finished here."'
+		'"This is bullshit..." <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> grumbles.'
 	else
 		booty_call['sex_end'] = 1
-		'"I''m good with that."'
+		'"Yeah," he sighs. "I''m good."'
 		gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'no_cum_end':
-	'"Let''s end here."'
-	'"Really? We didn''t do anything other than getting me off."'
-	if know_virgin[$boy] = 1 and stat['virgin'] = 1:
-		act'You know I''m saving my virginity':
-			cla & *clr
-			'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[$boy]>>''s Bedroom</font></b></center>'
-			$npc_apt_bedroom[$boy]
-			'"Come on <<$boydesc>>," you sigh. "You know I''m saving myself for marriage."'
-			'"And you still have a fuck buddy."'
-			'"Shut up," you roll your eyes.'
-			gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
-		end
-	else
-		act'Didn''t feel like it today':
-			cla & *nl
-			'"Just didn''t feel like doing anything else today.'
-			gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
-		end
-		
-		act'Just wanted to fool around':
-			cla & *nl
-			'"Just wanted to play with your cock for a while. I had fun," you wink.'
-			gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
-		end
-		
-		act'I''m in a rush':
-			cla & *nl
-			'"I''m in a rush today. But don''t worry. I had fun," you wink.'
-			gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
-		end
+	if booty_call['fuck_count'] = 0:
+		'"Really?" <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> asks, sitting up. "But we didn''t fuck. You didn''t even get to come."'
+		if know_virgin[$boy] = 1 and stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
+			act'You know I''m saving my virginity':
+				cla & *clr
+				'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[$boy]>>''s Bedroom</font></b></center>'
+				$npc_apt_bedroom[$boy]
+				'"Come on <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>>," you sigh. "You know I''m saving myself for marriage."'
+				'"And you still have a fuckbuddy."'
+				'"Shut up," you roll your eyes.'
+				gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
+			end
 		
-		if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+		elseif stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 			act'I''m saving my virginity':
 				know_virgin[$boy] = 1
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[$boy]>>''s Bedroom</font></b></center>'
 				$npc_apt_bedroom[$boy]
-				'"Sorry. Saving myself for marriage."'
-				'"Why?"'
+				'"Sorry," you smile apologetically. "I''m saving myself for marriage."'
+				'"Why?" he asks, confusedly.'
 				act'Because I want to':
 					cla & *nl
-					'"Because I want to?" you shrug. "Do I need a better reason?"'
+					'"Because I want to?" you shrug. "I just think it would be nice to give my virginity to my future husband. Do I need a better reason?"'
 					gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
 				end
 				
 				act'Because I want to (annoyed)':
 					cla & *nl
-					'"Because I want to," you say, a little annoyed. "I have to explain myself to you?"'
+					'"Because I want to," you scowl at him. "I have to explain what I want to do with <i>my</i> body?"'
 					gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
 				end
 				if mid($start_type,1,2) = 'sg':
 					act'Ask my mom':
 						cla & *nl
-						'"I don''t know," you shrug. "Ask my mom why it''s so important."'
+						'"I don''t know," you say, rolling your eyes in exhasperation. "Ask my mom why it''s so important."'
 						gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
 					end
 				end
 			end
 		end
+		
+		act'Didn''t feel like it today':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"Just didn''t feel like doing anything else today," you shrug. "Wasn''t in the mood."'
+			gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
+		end
+		
+		act'Just wanted to fool around':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"Just wanted to play with your cock for a while," you wink. "Don''t worry that I didn''t get off. I had fun." '
+			gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
+		end
+	else
+		'"Really?" <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> asks, sitting up. "But you didn''t get to come."'
+		act'It was still good':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"That''s sweet of you," you say, smiling. "But don''t worry about that. You still dicked me good. I''m satisfied without it."'
+			'"You''re sure?" he asks.'
+			'"Yeah, I''m sure," you laugh back.'
+			gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
+		end
+		
+		act'I''m in a rush':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"I''m in a rush today. But don''t worry, I still had fun." You give him a sly wink. "A girl doesn''t need to come every time you know."'
+			'"You really mean that?" he asks.'
+			'"Let''s just not make a habit of it, all right?" you smirk back.'
+			gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
+		end
 	end
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'bad_sex_end':
-	'"Let''s call it here."'
-	'"What, done already?"'
-	act'Don''t feel like it anymore':
-		cla & *nl
-		'"I don''t feel like doing anything else."'
-		gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
-	end
-	
-	act'You killed the mood':
-		cla & *nl
-		'"You killed the mood."'
-		gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
-	end
-	
-	act'You''re an asshole':
-		cla & *nl
-		'"You''re an asshole."'
-		'He snickers and slaps your ass.'
-		gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
+	act'End here (bad end)':
+		'"Let''s call it here," you say, letting your negative feelings get to you.'
+		'"What, done already?" <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> says, sitting up.'
+		act'Don''t feel like it anymore':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"I don''t feel like doing anything else," you mumble, feeling deflated and dejected, sinking further into the bed. "I''m just... not in the mood anymore."'
+			gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
+		end
+		
+		act'You killed the mood':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"You killed the mood," you scowl at him.'
+			gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
+		end
+		
+		act'You''re an asshole':
+			cla & *nl
+			'"You''re an asshole," you scowl at him. "You know what you did."'
+			'"I sure do," he snickers and slaps your ass, earning him a yelp from your lips and a sharp glare from your eyes.'
+			gs'booty_call_after','after_sex1'
+		end
 	end
 end
 
@@ -316,7 +394,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cum_kiss_cock':
 			booty_call['react'] = 1
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/kiss_cock.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'"Glad my hard work is appreciated," you smile, leaning in and giving <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>>''s cock a gentle kiss on the tip.'
+			if $booty_call['last_cum'] = 'swallow':
+				'"Glad my hard work is appreciated," you smile, leaning in and giving <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>>''s cock a gentle kiss on the tip.'
+			else
+				'Feeling cheeky, you finish by leaning in to give <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> a cute little kiss, right on the tip of his cock.'
+			end
 			gs'booty_call_sex','sex_end'
 		end
 	end
@@ -325,16 +407,47 @@ end
 !! -------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'after_sex1':
-	act'Continue':
-		cla & *clr
-		$npc_apt_bedroom[$boy]
-		if npc_smoker[$boy] > 0:
-			'The two of you pull apart and <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> reaches over to his nightstand and pulls out a pack of cigarettes.'
-		else
-			*nl
-			'You and <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> pull apart, quietly basking in the afterglow of your booty call.'
+	if booty_call['cock_remove'] = 0:
+		act'Pull apart':
+			cla & *clr
+			if $booty_call['cum_choice'] = 'creampie':
+				if $booty_call['position'] = 'miss':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/miss1.jpg"></center>'
+					'<<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> removes his cock from your pussy, climbing out from between your legs, flopping onto the other side of the bed. His cum seeps from your pussy, trickling down the crack of your ass into the bedsheets.'
+				elseif $booty_call['position'] = 'doggy':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/doggy1.jpg"></center>'
+					'<<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> slips his cock from your pussy, flopping onto the other side of the bed. His cum seeps from your pussy, slowly oozing from between your legs.'
+				elseif $booty_call['position'] = 'cowgirl':
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/vagcreampie/miss1.jpg"></center>'
+					'You raise your hips, letting <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>>''s cock slip from your pussy, and flop down beside him. His cum seeps from your pussy, trickling down the crack of your ass into the bedsheets.'
+				end
+			else
+				$npc_apt_bedroom[$boy]
+				if $booty_call['position'] = 'miss':
+					'<<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> removes his cock from your pussy, climbing out from between your legs, flopping onto the other side of the bed.'
+				elseif $booty_call['position'] = 'doggy':
+					'<<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> slips his cock from your pussy, flopping onto the other side of the bed.'
+				elseif $booty_call['position'] = 'cowgirl':
+					'You raise your hips, letting <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>>''s cock slip from your pussy, and flop down beside him.'
+				end
+			end
+			if npc_smoker[$boy] > 0:
+				'<<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> reaches over to his nightstand and pulls out a pack of cigarettes.'
+			end
+			gs'booty_call_after','after_sex2'
+		end
+	else
+		act'Finish':
+			cla & *clr
+			$npc_apt_bedroom[$boy]
+			if npc_smoker[$boy] > 0:
+				'The two of you pull apart and <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> reaches over to his nightstand and pulls out a pack of cigarettes.'
+			else
+				*nl
+				'You and <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> pull apart, quietly basking in the afterglow of your booty call.'
+			end
+			gs'booty_call_after','after_sex2'
 		end
-		gs'booty_call_after','after_sex2'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -345,12 +458,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_sex2':
 		act'Take a shower':
 			cla & *clr
 			$npc_apt_bedroom[$boy]
-			'"I''m gonna borrow your shower."'
+			'"I''m gonna borrow your shower," you say, sliding out of the bed and padding towards the bathroom.'
 			if booty_call['cum_count'] < npc_sexdrive[$boy]:
-				'"Why don''t I join you?"'
+				'"Why don''t I join you?" <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> says, a glimmer in his eyes that lets you know he wants more than just to "join" you.'
 				act'I''d rather not':
 					cla & *nl
-					'"No thanks," you say. "I like my alone time in the shower."'
+					'"No thanks," you say, smiling back wryly as you keep going. "I like my alone time," you say, just before you shut the door behind you.'
 					act'Shower':gt'booty_call_after','shower_alone'
 				end
 !!{				act'Sounds nice':
@@ -368,13 +481,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_sex2':
 				
 				act'I''ll try':
 					cla & *nl
-					'"I''ll try not to," you smile and head into the bathroom.'
+					'"I''ll try not to," you smile, padding your way into the bathroom.'
 					act'Shower':gt'booty_call_after','shower_alone'
 				end
 				
 				act'We''ll see':
 					cla & *nl
-					'"We''ll see about that," you smirk and head into the bathroom.'
+					'"We''ll see about that," you smirk and pad your way into the bathroom.'
 					act'Shower':gt'booty_call_after','shower_alone'
 				end
 			end
@@ -402,7 +515,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_sex2':
 		end
 	end
 	
-	if npc_smoker[$boy] > 0:
+	if npc_smoker[$boy] > 0 and booty_call['annoyed'] = 0:
 		act'Bum a cigarette':
 			booty_call['bum_cigarette'] = 1
 			gt'booty_call_after','smoke'
@@ -841,7 +954,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_alone':
 	booty_call['shower'] = 1
 	dynamic $showerdin
 	'You turn on the faucet, relaxing as the hot water pours down over your skin. After a few minutes, you turn the tap off, and step out, walking back to <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>>''s room wet and dripping.'
-	'"I really needed that," you smile at him.'
+	'"Thanks," you smile at him.'
 	gs'booty_call_after','after_sex2'
 end
 
@@ -858,13 +971,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_together':
 		act'Protest':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/shower/grope1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'"Hey!" you protest.'
+			'"Hey!" you protest, looking down at the unwelcome hands squeezing your breasts, feeling something hard poking you in the back.'
 			act'I''m not in the mood':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/shower/grope1.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'"Hey!" you protest. "I''m not in the mood for this."'
+				'"Hey!" you protest, looking down at the unwelcome hands squeezing your breasts, feeling something hard poking you in the back. "I''m not in the mood for this."'
 				if booty_call['cum_count'] >= npc_sexdrive[$boy]:
-					'"They were staring right at me," he grins. But he backs off as you asked.'
+					'"They were staring right at me," he grins. He grabs a few more handfuls but eventually releases you, he backs off as you asked.'
 				else
 					'"You showed up for a booty call didn''t you?"'
 					'"Yeah, and now I''m done. Keep it in your pants."'
@@ -876,11 +989,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_together':
 			act'I don''t have time':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/shower/grope1.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'"Hey!" you protest. "I don''t have time for this. I have shit to do and I can''t have you making me late."'
+				'"Hey!" you protest, looking down at the unwelcome hands squeezing your breasts, feeling something hard poking you in the back. "I don''t have time for this. I have shit to do and I can''t have you making me late."'
 				if booty_call['cum_count'] >= npc_sexdrive[$boy]:
-					'"They were staring right at me," he grins. But he backs off as you asked.'
+					'"They were staring right at me," he grins. But after one more squeeze, he releases you as you asked him to.'
 				else
-					'"You showed up for a booty call didn''t you?"'
+					'"You showed up for a booty call didn''t you?" he grins.'
 					'"Yeah, and now I have something <i>else</i> to do."'
 					'"Fine, fine." He backs off, as you asked.'
 				end
@@ -915,7 +1028,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower_together':
 						'"Well..." Your breath hitches as he gives your nipples a light squeeze. You feel so wet, and it''s not just the shower.'
 						if booty_call['condom'] = 1:
 							'"You won''t cum inside me, will you?"'
-							'"Don''t worry, I won''t." You gasp as without further warning, <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> pushes his cock inside you.'
+							'"Don''t worry, I won''t."'
+							*nl
+							'You gasp as without further warning, <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> pushes his cock inside you.'
 						else
 							'You look at <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> and your expression tells him everything he needs to know. Without another word, he pushes his cock inside you.'
 						end

locations/booty_call_morning.qsrc

@@ -49,7 +49,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'late_for_school':
 		'"Hey, what''s wrong?" <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> says, turning over and squinting at you with sleepy eyes.'
 		act'I need to be somewhere!':
 			cla & *nl
-			'"I''m gonna be late for something!" you huff out. With one last quick check, you make sure all your clothes are in place and rush out the door, leaving <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> and your night together behind you.'
+			'"I''m gonna be late for something!" you say hurriedly. "Gotta go!"'
+			'With one last quick check, you make sure all your clothes are in place and rush out the door, leaving <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> and your night together behind you.'
 			act'Leave':gs'booty_call_after','exit'
 		end
 
@@ -75,7 +76,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'late_for_school':
 				act'That''d be great':
 					cla & *clr
 					$npc_apt_bedroom[$boy]
-					
 					'"Really?" you perk up. "That''d be great!"'
 					'"Let me just get dressed."'
 					'You collect the rest of your things while he throws on some clothes and grabs his keys, then both of you head outside and climb into his car.'
@@ -88,7 +88,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'late_for_school':
 					act'I can walk':
 						cla & *clr
 						$npc_apt_bedroom[$boy]
-						'"Nah," you shake your head. "It''s okay. It''s right here in the residential area. I can just walk.Thanks for the offer though."'
+						'"That''s okay," you shake your head. "It''s right here in the residential area. I can just walk.Thanks for the offer though."'
 						*nl
 						'With one last quick check, you make sure all your clothes are in place and call, "See you later!" over your shoulder as you rush out the door.'
 						act'Leave':gs'booty_call_after','exit'
@@ -98,7 +98,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'late_for_school':
 				act'Can''t let people see':
 					cla & *clr
 					$npc_apt_bedroom[$boy]
-					'You hesitate for a moment, considering it. "No," you shake your head. "I don''t want someone seeing me get out of your car. Rumors spread like fire at my school. I can''t risk it." With one last quick check, you make sure all your clothes are in place, you shout, "See you later!" over your shoulder and rush out the door.'
+					'You hesitate for a moment, considering it.'
+					*nl
+					'"No," you shake your head. "I don''t want someone seeing me get out of your car. Rumors spread like fire at my school. I can''t risk it." With one last quick check, you make sure all your clothes are in place, you shout, "See you later!" over your shoulder and rush out the door.'
 					act'Leave':gs'booty_call_after','exit'
 				end
 			else
@@ -179,7 +181,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/dush.mp4"></video></center>'
 		minut += 10
 		shampoo += 1
-		'You twist the faucet and hot water comes rushing out, pouring over you, soaking into your skin. Slowly over time, it washes away your sleepiness and brings your mind clarity.'
+		'You twist the faucet and hot water comes rushing out, pouring over you, soaking into your skin. Slowly over time, your sleepiness washes away and clarity comes back.'
 		dynamic $showerdin
 		*nl
 		'Feeling sufficiently awake, you turn off the tap and step out of the shower.'

locations/booty_call_talk.qsrc

@@ -8,28 +8,28 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cum_react':
 		cla
 		if booty_call['he_ask_creampie'] = 1 and $booty_call['cum_choice'] ! 'creampie':
 			act'I don''t like creampies (too intimate)':
-				cla & *clr
+				cla & *nl
 				!! IMAGE HERE
 				'"<<$booty_call[''cum_describe1'']>>" you smile, <<$booty_call[''cum_describe2'']>>. "I don''t like being creampied. Feels too intimate."'
 				gs'booty_call_sex','sex_end'
 			end
 			
 			act'I don''t like creampies (too weird)':
-				cla & *clr
+				cla & *nl
 				!! IMAGE HERE
 				'"<<$booty_call[''cum_describe1'']>> you smile, <<$booty_call[''cum_describe2'']>>. "I don''t like being creampied. Feels too weird."'
 				gs'booty_call_sex','sex_end'
 			end
 			
 			act'I don''t like creampies (too messy)':
-				cla & *clr
+				cla & *nl
 				!! IMAGE HERE
 				'"<<$booty_call[''cum_describe1'']>> you smile, <<$booty_call[''cum_describe2'']>>. "I don''t like being creampied. Too messy."'
 				gs'booty_call_sex','sex_end'
 			end
 			
 			act'I don''t like you enough for that':
-				cla & *clr
+				cla & *nl
 				!! IMAGE HERE
 				'"Sorry," you smirk apologetically, <<$booty_call[''cum_describe2'']>>. "I don''t like you enough to let you do that yet."'
 				gs'booty_call_sex','sex_end'
@@ -37,15 +37,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cum_react':
 			
 			if birth_control['think_safe'] < 1 and npc_know_not_bc = 0:
 				act'I''m not on birth control':
-					cla & *clr
+					cla & *nl
 					!! IMAGE HERE
 					npc_know_not_bc = 1
-					'"Sorry. I can''t let you cum inside me," you smile, <<$booty_call[''cum_describe2'']>>. "I''m not on birth control."'
+					'"Sorry. I can''t let you come inside me," you smile, <<$booty_call[''cum_describe2'']>>. "I''m not on birth control."'
 					gs'booty_call_sex','sex_end'
 				end
 			elseif birth_control['think_safe'] < 1 and npc_know_not_bc = 1:
 				act'You know I''m not on birth control (annoyed)':
-					cla & *clr
+					cla & *nl
 					!! IMAGE HERE
 					'"Why the fuck would you even ask that?" you scowl, <<$booty_call[''cum_describe2'']>>. "You know I''m not on birth control!"'
 					gs'booty_call_sex','sex_end'
@@ -53,62 +53,62 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cum_react':
 			end
 			
 			if pcs_lover > pcs_girlfriends:
-				act'Only my boyfriend is allowed to cum inside me':
-					cla & *clr
+				act'Only my boyfriend is allowed to come inside me':
+					cla & *nl
 					!! IMAGE HERE
-					'"Sorry," you smirk apologetically. "Only my boyfriend is allowed to cum inside me."'
-					'"So you can cheat on your boyfriend, but I can''t cum inside you?"'
+					'"Sorry," you smirk. "Only my boyfriend is allowed to come inside me."'
+					'"So you can cheat on your boyfriend, but I can''t come inside you?"'
 					act'Yup':
 						cla & *nl
 						'"Yup, that''s exactly right," you smirk.'
 						gs'booty_call_sex','sex_end'
 					end
-					act'It''s only cheating if you cum inside':
+					act'It''s only cheating if you come inside':
 						cla & *nl
-						'"That''s exactly why I can''t let you do that. It''s not cheating if you don''t cum inside," you wink.'
+						'"That''s exactly why I can''t let you do that. It''s not cheating if you don''t come inside," you wink.'
 						gs'booty_call_sex','sex_end'
 					end
 				end
 			end
 		elseif booty_call['he_ask_mouth'] = 1 and $booty_call['cum_choice'] ! 'mouth':
 			act'Swallowing is gross':
-				cla & *clr
+				cla & *nl
 				!! IMAGE HERE
 				'"Ewww," you grimace, <<$booty_call[''cum_describe2'']>>. "Like I''d ever want <i>this</i> in my mouth." You shudder.'
 				gs'booty_call_sex','sex_end'
 			end
 			
 			act'I don''t like the taste':
-				cla & *clr
+				cla & *nl
 				!! IMAGE HERE
 				'"Sorry," you smile, <<$booty_call[''cum_describe2'']>>. "I''m really not a fan of the taste of cum."'
 				gs'booty_call_sex','sex_end'
 			end
 			
 			act'I don''t like you enough for that':
-				cla & *clr
+				cla & *nl
 				!! IMAGE HERE
 				'"Sorry," you smirk apologetically, <<$booty_call[''cum_describe2'']>>. "I don''t like you enough to let you do that yet."'
 				gs'booty_call_sex','sex_end'
 			end
 		elseif booty_call['he_ask_facial'] = 1 and $booty_call['cum_choice'] ! 'face' and $booty_call['cum_choice'] ! 'face_mouth':
 			act'That''s gross':
-				cla & *clr
+				cla & *nl
 				!! IMAGE HERE
 				'"Ewww," you grimace, <<$booty_call[''cum_describe2'']>>. "Like I''d ever want to do <i>that</i>. This isn''t a porno you know." You shudder.'
 				gs'booty_call_sex','sex_end'
 			end
 			
 			act'Too much mess':
-				cla & *clr
+				cla & *nl
 				!! IMAGE HERE
 				'"Too much mess"'
 				gs'booty_call_sex','sex_end'
 			end
 			
 			if pcs_makeup > 1:
-				act'Don''t ruin my makeup':
-					cla & *clr
+				act'It''ll ruin my makeup':
+					cla & *nl
 					!! IMAGE HERE
 					booty_call['makeup_ruin'] = 1
 					'"I''m not letting your ruin my makeup."'
@@ -117,68 +117,30 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cum_react':
 			end
 		elseif booty_call['he_ask_tits'] = 1 and $booty_call['cum_choice'] ! 'tits':
 			act'That''s gross':
-				cla & *clr
+				cla & *nl
 				!! IMAGE HERE
 				'"Ewww," you grimace, <<$booty_call[''cum_describe2'']>>. "Why do you even want to do that? This isn''t a porno you know."'
 				gs'booty_call_sex','sex_end'
 			end
 			
 			act'Too much mess':
-				cla & *clr
+				cla & *nl
 				!! IMAGE HERE
 				'"Too much mess"'
 				gs'booty_call_sex','sex_end'
 			end
 		else
-			'You grin at him as he cums all over your hand, continuing to jerk him until his cock stops twitching and nothing else comes out. After a couple more tugs for good measure, you pull back.'
+			'You grin at him as he comes all over your hand, continuing to jerk him until his cock stops twitching and nothing else comes out. After a couple more tugs for good measure, you pull back.'
+			gs'booty_call_sex','sex_end'
 		end
-		gs'creampie_react'
+		gs'booty_call_talk','creampie_react'
+		gs'booty_call_talk','facial_react1'
 	end
 end
 
-
-
 if $ARGS[0] = 'creampie_react':
 	if $booty_call['cum_choice'] = 'creampie':
-		gs'booty_call_sex','cum_inside_end'
-		if npc_creampie_okay[$boy] ! 1 and booty_call['creampie_ask'] ! 1 and booty_call['cum_together'] = 0:
-			act'What the fuck!':
-				booty_call['mad'] = 1
-				cla & *clr
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum111.jpg"></center>'
-				if booty_call['pill_tomorrow'] = 1:
-					'"What the fuck!"'
-					'"What? You said you were gonna get the pill tomorrow anyways."'
-				elseif npc_know_not_bc = 1:
-					'"What the fuck! You know I''m not on birth control!"'
-					'"It''ll be fine/It was an accident."'
-				else
-					'"What the fuck!"'
-				end
-				
-				act'Ignore it':
-					cla & *clr
-					$npc_apt_bedroom[$npclastsaved]
-					'"Ugh. Whatever."'
-					gs'booty_call_sex','sex_end'
-				end
-				
-				act'You''re an asshole':
-					cla & *clr
-					$npc_apt_bedroom[$npclastsaved]
-					'"You''re such an asshole."'
-					gs'booty_call_sex','sex_end'
-				end
-			end
-			
-			act'Panic!':
-				cla & *clr
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/cum111.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Holy shit!" you shout, scrambling backwards off the bed to look down at your pussy, horrified by the white liquid dripping from your snatch.'
-				gs'booty_call_after','creampie_panic'
-			end
-		end
-		
+		if booty_call['cock_remove'] ! 1:gs'booty_call_sex','cum_inside_end'
 		act'That felt amazing':
 			cla & *clr
 			$npc_apt_bedroom[$boy]
@@ -207,18 +169,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'creampie_react':
 					if booty_call['cum_together'] = 1:
 						'"That was..." you pant, aftershocks of your orgasm still shivering through you. "I could... feel you... cumming... inside me..."'
 						'"Yeah..." he breathes back.'
-						'"It was amazing..."'
+						'"It was <i>amazing</i>..."'
 					elseif booty_call['cum_together_fake'] = 1:
 						'"That was..." you pant, feigning post-orgasm shakes. "I could... feel you... cumming... inside me..."'
 						'"Yeah..." he breathes back.'
-						'"It was amazing..."'
+						'"It was <i>amazing</i>..."'
 					else
 						'"That was..." you pant, aftershocks of your orgasm still shivering through you. "I just... Did you... did we... together...?"'
 						'"Yeah..." he breathes back.'
-						'"I thought so," you smile. "I could feel you inside me. It was amazing..."'
+						'"I thought so," you smile. "I could feel you inside me. It was <i>amazing</i>..."'
 					end
 				else
-					'"That was great," you grin, <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>>''s cock still stuffed inside you. "I could feel you cum inside me. It felt <i>amazing...</i>"'
+					'"That was great," you grin, gently flexing your pussy around <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>>''s cock, which is still stuffed inside you. "I could <i>feel it</i> when you came inside me. It was <i>amazing...</i>"'
 				end
 			end
 			gs'booty_call_sex','sex_end'
@@ -226,6 +188,176 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'creampie_react':
 	end
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'creampie_panic':
+	if booty_call['condom'] = 2:
+		'"Ohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygod!" You cut him off with a torrent of words that spill from your mouth and globs of cum spill from your pussy, causing you to hyperventilate. "You said-! Not inside-!"'
+	elseif booty_call['condom'] = 3:
+		!! let him fuck you without one if he wouldn''t come inside you
+		'"Sorry, your pussy was just so tight and I-"'
+		'"Ohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygod!" You cut him off with a torrent of words that spill from your mouth and globs of cum spill from your pussy, causing you to hyperventilate. "You said-! You promised-!"'
+	elseif booty_call['condom'] = 4:
+		!! he promised he wouldn''t come inside you
+		'"Ohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygod!" You cut him off with a torrent of words that spill from your mouth and globs of cum spill from your pussy, causing you to hyperventilate. "You said-! I told you-!"'		
+	else
+		'"Ohmygodohmygodohmygodohmygod!" You cut him off with a torrent of words that spill from your mouth and globs of cum spill from your pussy, causing you to hyperventilate.'
+	end
+	'You put your hand to your head as you begin to feel faint.'
+	*nl
+!!{	if birth_control['think_safe'] = 1:
+		'<i>What was I thinking? What if I get an STD?! Why didn''t I insist on a condom...</i>'
+	else
+		'<i>What was I thinking? What if I get an STD? What if I get pregnant?! Why didn''t I insist on a condom...</i>'
+	end}
+	*nl
+	'"Jeez, I didn''t know you were going to freak out like this," <<$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved]>> says, holding his hands up defensively. "Just chill out! You can buy a morning after pill tomorrow, it''ll be fine."'
+	act'Calm down':
+		cla & *clr
+		'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved]>>''s Bedroom</font></b></center>'
+		$npc_apt_bedroom[$npclastsaved]
+		'Trying to focus on his words, you force yoruself to take deep, slow breaths, calming down while <<$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved]>> tries to apologize to you.'
+		'"See? It''s all gonna be fine."'
+		act'He''s right, it''ll be fine':
+			cla & *nl
+			if birth_control['think_safe'] < 1:
+				'<i>He''s right, it''ll be okay. You''re going to get a morning after pill tomorrow and you''re <b>not</b> going to get pregnant. You''re going to remember to go to the pharmacy, you''re going to remember to take the pill, and you''re not going to get knocked up tonight! Everything is going to be fine! <b>It''s going to be fine!</b></i>'
+			else
+				'<i>He''s right, it''ll be okay. You''re on birth control so you don''t need another pill. You''re not going to get pregnant! And he''s not going to have an STD. Can''t have one! Because if he did that would be... Nope! I''m not gonna think about that! Because I''m not getting an STD tonight! Everything is going to be fine! <b>It''s going to be fine!</b></i>'
+			end
+			*nl
+			'After running through this thought process several more times accompanied by many more breaths, you finally begin to calm down.'
+			gs'booty_call_after','pre'
+		end
+	end
+
+	act'I have to go!':
+		cla & *clr
+		'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved]>>''s Bedroom</font></b></center>'
+		$npc_apt_bedroom[$npclastsaved]
+		'"I have to go!" Without warning, you spring up and start grabbing your things, throwing on your clothes with frantic haste.'
+		'"Wha- Where are you going?!"'
+		if birth_control['think_safe'] = 1:
+			'"I just have to go!"'
+			'"I told you, if you''re worried you can just get-"'
+			'"That''s not what this is about!"'
+			'"Then-!"'
+			'"Can''ttalkgottago!"'
+			'You don''t wait to hear what he was trying to say and dash out the door.'
+			*nl
+			'<i>Fuck! What am I going to do if I get an STD?!</i>'
+		else
+			'"I need to get a morning after pill!"'
+			'"Right now?!"'
+			'"Right now!!! I can''t wait even one minute! I can''t get knocked up!"'
+			if hour >= 21:
+				'"No pharmacy is open this time of night! Stop freaking out! Y-"'
+				'"Can''ttalkgottago!"'
+				'You don''t wait to hear what he was trying to say and dash out the door.'
+			else
+				'"Why the rush?? You don''t have to do it right this second-"'
+				'"I have to to be sure! I gotta get it today before the pharmacy closes!"'
+				'"But-!"'
+				'"Can''ttalkgottago!"'
+				'You don''t wait to hear what he was trying to say and dash out the door.'
+			end
+		end
+		act'Leave':gt'booty_call_after','exit'
+	end
+	
+	act'That''s not what I''m concerned about! (STDs)':
+		cla & *clr
+		'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved]>>''s Bedroom</font></b></center>'
+		$npc_apt_bedroom[$npclastsaved]
+		'"That''s not what I''m concerned about!" you say, your hyperventilating getting worse.'
+		'"Then wha- Wait, you think I have an STD???"'
+		'"I don''t know! You could! I just don''t know!"'
+		'"If you were really concerned about that then why would you let me fuck without a condom??"'
+		if booty_call['condom'] >= 2:
+			'"You didn''t want to use one!" you yelp.'
+		else
+			'"<i>I! DON''T! KNOW!</i>" you scream.'
+		end
+		'"Well I''m fucking clean, alright?! I promise!"'
+
+		act'Calm down':
+			cla & *clr
+			'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved]>>''s Bedroom</font></b></center>'
+			$npc_apt_bedroom[$npclastsaved]
+			'Trying to focus on his words, you force yoruself to take deep, slow breaths, calming down while <<$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved]>> tries to reassure you.'
+			'<i>He''s right, it''ll be okay. You''re on birth control and he came inside you so it''s okay! He''s not going to have an STD. Can''t have one! Because if he did that would... Nope! I''m not gonna think about that! Because I''m not getting an STD tonight! Everything is going to be fine! <b>It''s going to be fine!</b></i>'
+			*nl
+			'After running through this thought process several more times accompanied by many more breaths, you finally begin to calm down.'
+			gs'booty_call_after','pre'
+		end
+
+		act'I have to go!':
+			cla & *clr
+			'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved]>>''s Bedroom</font></b></center>'
+			$npc_apt_bedroom[$npclastsaved]
+			'"I have to go!" Without warning, you spring up and start grabbing your things, throwing on your clothes with frantic haste.'
+			'"Wha- Where are you going?!"'
+			'"I just have to go!"'
+			'"If you''re worried about that then leaving now isn''t going to-"'
+			'"That''s not what this is about!"'
+			'"Then-!"'
+			'"Can''ttalkgottago!"'
+			'You don''t wait to hear what he was trying to say, you don''t even really know what you''re saying, and you dash out the door.'
+			*nl
+			'<i>Fuck! What am I going to do if I get an STD?!</i>'
+			act'Leave':gt'booty_call_after','exit'
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'swallow_react1':
+	if trt_cumeater = 1:
+		act'Tasty':
+			cla & *clr
+			$npc_apt_bedroom[$boy]
+			'"Mmmm," you lick your lips. "You taste good."'
+			if $npc_cum_pref[$boy] = 'mouth':
+				'"You''re so fucking hot. I love watching you swallow like that."'
+				'You grin, enjoying his open praise.'
+			else
+				'"You really like swallowing that much?"'
+				'"I <i>love</i> it," you grin.'
+			end
+			gs 'booty_call_after', 'wipe_face'
+			gs 'booty_call_sex', 'sex_end'
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'facial_react1':
+	if trt_cumeater = 1 and ($booty_call['cum_choice'] = 'face_mouth'):
+		act'Tasty':
+			cla & *clr
+			$npc_apt_bedroom[$boy]
+			'"Mmmm," you lick your lips, catching some of the stray shots of cum that still coat your face. "You taste good."'
+			if $npc_cum_pref[$boy] = 'mouth':
+				'"You''re so fucking hot. I love watching you swallow like that."'
+				'You grin, enjoying his open praise.'
+			else
+				'"You really like swallowing that much?"'
+				'"I <i>love</i> it," you grin.'
+			end
+			gs 'booty_call_after', 'wipe_face'
+			gs 'booty_call_sex', 'sex_end'
+		end
+	end
+	if pcs_makeup = 0 and booty_call['ruin_makeup'] ! 1:
+		act'You ruined my makeup (joke)':
+			booty_call['ruin_makeup'] = 1
+			cla & *clr
+			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/cum/facial/facial_after1.mp4"></video></center>'
+			'"Look what you''ve done," you say in a stern tone, contrasted by the smile twisting at the corners of your lips. "You totally fucked up my makeup. Now what am I supposed to do?"'
+			'"You could always go out like that," he snickers.'
+			'"Oh I bet you''d like that," you giggle.'
+			gs 'booty_call_after', 'wipe_face'
+			gs 'booty_call_sex', 'sex_end'
+		end
+	end
+end
+
 !! --------------------- Pillow Talk ------------------------------------
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pillow_talk_start':
 	cla & *clr
@@ -238,41 +370,54 @@ end
 
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pillow_talk_options':
-	act'Stop talking':
+	act'Stop talking':cla & gs'booty_call_after','after_sex2'
 	act'Talk about the sex':cla & gs'booty_call_talk','pillow_talk_sex'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'pillow_talk_sex':
-	
+	act'Stop talking':cla & gs'booty_call_after','after_sex2'
 	gs'booty_call_talk','keep_it_up'
 	gs'booty_call_talk','better_without'
-	gs'booty_call_talk','keep_it_up'
+	gs'booty_call_talk','kuni_wear_out'
 	gs'booty_call_talk','keep_it_up'
 	gs'booty_call_talk','keep_it_up'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'keep_it_up':
-	if booty_call['cum_count'] > 5:
+	if booty_call['cum_count'] > 5 and booty_call['keep_it_up'] = 0:
 		act'You can really keep it up':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/after/pillow_talk.jpg"></center>'
 			booty_call['keep_it_up'] = 1
 			minut += 1
-			'"You can really keep it up, huh?" you smile.'
+			'"You can really keep it up, huh?" you say tiredly.'
 			'"Yeah, I guess I have a pretty high sex drive. Glad that you have one to match," he smiles back.'
 			gs'booty_call_talk','pillow_talk_options'
 		end
 	end
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'kuni_wear_out':
+	if booty_call['pussy_lick_loop'] >= 5:
+		act'You''re a pussyeating psycho':
+			cla & *clr
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/after/pillow_talk1.jpg"></center>'
+			'"You''re a fucking psycho, you know that?" you pant, gasping for breath. "Who... makes a girl... cum five times in a row... with just their tongue?? And... doesn''t even want... to fuck her?!"'
+			'"I like eating pussy," he shrugs.'
+			'"You have a problem is what you have," you say, staring up at the ceiling with exhaustion crashing down on you.'
+			gs'booty_call_talk','pillow_talk_sex'
+		end
+	end
+end
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'better_without':
 	if booty_call['condom'] >= 2 and booty_call['better_without'] = 0:
 		act'It was better without the condom':
 			booty_call['better_without'] = 0
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/after/pillow_talk.jpg"></center>'
-			'"You were right," you smile at <<$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved]>>. "It was better without the condom."'
-			if npc_selfish[$npclastsaved] = 1:
+			'"You were right," you smile at <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>>. "It was better without the condom."'
+			if npc_selfish[$boy] = 1:
 				if $booty_call['cum_choice'] = 'creampie':
 					'"Oh yeah. Busting a nut inside is the best."'
 					act'Worry':
@@ -295,16 +440,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'better_without':
 			else
 				if $booty_call['cum_choice'] = 'creampie':
 					if booty_call['condom'] = 3:
-						'"Sorry I uhh... you know..." He seems embarrassed. "I promised I wouldn''t cum inside you but I ended up doing it anyways."'
+						'"Sorry I uhh... you know..." He seems embarrassed. "I promised I wouldn''t come inside you but I ended up doing it anyways."'
 					else
 						'"Your pussy felt amazing."'
 						'"So did your dick," you murmur back.'
-						'"Is it okay that I... you know...?" <<$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved]>> eyes your pussy, his cum still leaking from it.'
+						'"Is it okay that I... you know...?" <<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> eyes your pussy, his cum still leaking from it.'
 					end
 					
 					act'I''ll be fine':
 						cla & *nl
-						'"I''ll be fine," you say reassuringly. "One creampie isn''t gonna kill me."'
+						'"I''ll be fine," you say reassuringly. "One creampie isn''t gonna kill me. Besides, like I said, it felt good."'
 						'He nods, relaxing a bit.'
 						*nl
 						'<i>I mean, what are the odds that something bad happens, right?</i>'
@@ -334,14 +479,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'better_without':
 							elseif birth_control['think_safe'] = 1:
 								'"It''s fine. I''m on the pill," you reassure him. "I just wanted to be extra safe. No harm done."'
 							end
-							'<<$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved]>> seems to relax, relieved that you''re not upset.'
+							'<<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> seems to relax, relieved that you''re not upset.'
 							gs'booty_call_talk','pillow_talk_options'
 						end
 					else
 						act'I''m on birth control (lie)':
 							cla & *nl
 							'"It''s fine. I''m on birth control," you lie through your teeth.'
-							'<<$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved]>> seems to relax, relieved that you''re not upset.'
+							'<<$npc_firstname[$boy]>> seems to relax, relieved that you''re not upset.'
 							*nl
 							'<i>I wonder if his baby is going to be swimming around inside me after this...</i>'
 							gs'booty_call_talk','pillow_talk_options'
@@ -355,9 +500,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'better_without':
 					end
 				else
 					'"Told you we didn''t need one," he laughs.'
-					act'You sure did':
+					act'You were right':
 						cla
-						'"You sure did," you chuckle back.'
+						'"I guess not," you say, smiling back.'
 						gs'booty_call_talk','pillow_talk_options'
 					end
 					
@@ -422,4 +567,4 @@ end
 !! --------------------- After Sex Talk ---------------------------------
 
 
---- costuming ---------------------------------
+--- booty_call_talk ---------------------------------

locations/brother.qsrc

@@ -1188,7 +1188,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'virginitydialog':
 	'Kolka suddenly interrupts you. "Does it hurt?" he asks.'
 	'You blink in confusion, "Does what hurt?"'
 	'He sits for a moment, silently, before asking slowly, "When a boy puts <i>it</i> in?"'
-	if stat['virgin'] = 0:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 		brother_knows_not_virgin = 1
 		'"Only the first time or two," you respond.'
 		'Kolka inquires, "Have you tried?"'
@@ -1319,7 +1319,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev7':
 		'"Satisfied, now?" you ask.'
 		'Kolka continues to stare at your exposed pussy, "Almost..."'
 		ivrand = rand (1,2)
-		if brother_knows_not_virgin = 1 and stat['virgin'] = 0 and ivrand = 1:
+		if brother_knows_not_virgin = 1 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0 and ivrand = 1:
 			'You sigh, "What else?"'
 			'He looks up at you, "<<$pcs_nickname>>, can you poke a finger inside?"'
 			'You cannot believe he asked you that. "What? Why?"'
@@ -1395,7 +1395,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev8':
 			picrand = rand(1,2)
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/f (6.<<picrand>>).jpg"></center>'
 		'You get off the chair and lie down on the carpet. Overcome with lust, you instinctively begin to rub your pussy and breast.'
-		if stat['virgin'] = 0:'You slip your fingers into your burning pussy, the sensation causing you to moan.'
+		if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:'You slip your fingers into your burning pussy, the sensation causing you to moan.'
 		'You watch as Kolka pulls down his pants and his fully erect <<npc_dick[''A34'']>> cm cock pops free. He kneels between your spread knees and starts to jerk himself off while he watches you play with yourself. Your heart begins to beat faster and faster, you start panting as you feel a primitive heat bubbling up deep from within. Moments later, you hear Kolka groan and watch as ropes of hot cum fly out of his cock, splashing over your crotch, stomach and even your breasts. It''s too much for you and soon you join your brother in ecstasy when your own release finally peaks. It takes everything inside of you to keep from screaming in bliss as your hips buck up and down, your fingers rubbing faster as you ride wave after wave of your orgasm.'
 
 		gs 'arousal','masturbate', 10, 'incest'
@@ -1443,7 +1443,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev8':
 		picrand = rand(1,2)
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/f (6.<<picrand>>).jpg"></center>'
 		'You get off the chair and lie down on the carpet. Overcome with lust, you instinctively begin to rub your pussy and breast.'
-		if stat['virgin'] = 0:'You slip your fingers into your burning pussy, the sensation causing you to moan.'
+		if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:'You slip your fingers into your burning pussy, the sensation causing you to moan.'
 		'You watch as Kolka pulls down his pants and his fully erect <<npc_dick[''A34'']>> cm cock pops free. You follow his movements as he walks up to your head and kneels, his hardened member mere inches from your face. You open your mouth, ready to accept him orally. Kolka pushes forward slowly, your <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips moving over his head and inching down his shaft more and more until he stops. He holds you for a moment before he begins gently thrusting into your mouth. Your fingers continue to play with your own body, as you focus on your sibling. You swirl your tongue around his cock and suck, his moans growing deeper all the while.'
 		'A fire had been building inside you since you disrobed and now your body is nearly engulfed when you feel Kolka stiffen, his penis twitching inside your mouth. He whispers your name as he cums, his jism filling your mouth and you begin to greedily swallow. Your own orgasm isn''t far behind; your entire body begins to convulse and you start to suck your brother''s throbbing dick harder, hoping for more of his delicious cum. The world fades for a few moments...'
 
@@ -1478,7 +1478,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brother_voyeur_ev8':
 		picrand = rand(1,2)
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/kolka/event/homework/f (6.<<picrand>>).jpg"></center>'
 		'You get off the chair and lie down on the carpet. Overcome with lust, you instinctively begin to rub your pussy and breast.'
-		if stat['virgin'] = 0:'You slip your fingers into your burning pussy, the sensation causing you to moan.'
+		if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:'You slip your fingers into your burning pussy, the sensation causing you to moan.'
 		'You watch as Kolka pulls down his pants and his fully erect <<npc_dick[''A34'']>> cm cock pops free. You follow his movements as he walks up to your head and kneels, his hardened member mere inches from your face. You open your mouth, ready to accept him orally. Kolka pushes forward slowly, your <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips moving over his head and inching down his shaft more and more until he stops. He holds you for a moment before he begins gently thrusting into your mouth. Your fingers continue to play with your own body, as you focus on your sibling. You swirl your tongue around his cock and suck, his moans growing deeper all the while.'
 		'A fire had been building inside you since you disrobed and now your body is nearly engulfed when you feel Kolka stiffen, his penis twitching inside your mouth. He whispers your name as he cums, his jism filling your mouth and you begin to greedily swallow. Your own orgasm isn''t far behind; your entire body begins to convulse and you start to suck your brother''s throbbing dick harder, hoping for more of his delicious cum. The world fades for a few moments...'
 

locations/cikl.qsrc

@@ -443,12 +443,12 @@ end
 if $start_type[1] ! 'nomagic':
 	if pcs_horny < 100:pcs_horny += pcs_vag
 else
-	if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 		razeba = 0
 
 		if pcs_horny > 0 and pcs_horny <= 50:pcs_horny -= 10
 		if pcs_horny > 50:pcs_horny -= 25
-	elseif stat['virgin'] = 0:
+	elseif stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 		if pregtimes = 0:
 			if age < 18:
 				razeba = 1
@@ -1207,7 +1207,7 @@ gs 'uni_lessons', 'cikl'
 !!------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
 
 !!resetting moisturizer so it can be used in the morning regardless
-item_moisturizer['time'] = totminut
+item_moisturizer_time = totminut
 
 if bcream_used >= 1:
 	bcream_used = 0

locations/city_clinic.qsrc

@@ -301,6 +301,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							money -= 4500
 							minut += 60
 							glass = 2
+							gs 'body_desc'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'You buy a new, more stylish pair of glasses.'
 
@@ -313,6 +314,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							karta -= 4500
 							minut += 60
 							glass = 2
+							gs 'body_desc'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'You buy a new, more stylish pair of glasses.'
 
@@ -334,6 +336,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							minut += 60
 							blizoruk = 0
 							glass = 0
+							gs 'body_desc'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'You undergo laser eye surgery. Your eyesight is much better now.'
 							act 'Return to the entrance':gt 'city_clinic', 'start'
@@ -346,6 +349,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 							minut += 60
 							blizoruk = 0
 							glass = 0
+							gs 'body_desc'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'You undergo laser eye surgery. Your eyesight is much better now.'
 							act 'Return to the entrance':gt 'city_clinic', 'start'
@@ -585,7 +589,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'herpes_shot':
 	'You see the nurse and she gives you a painful injection in your ass.'
 
 	if GerpesNapr = 0:Gerpes = -10 & 'You have completed the treatment.'
-	act 'Leave':gt 'city_clinic'
+	act 'Leave':gt 'city_clinic', 'start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gonorrhea_shot':
@@ -598,7 +602,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gonorrhea_shot':
 
 	if TriperNapr = 0:TriperOral = 0 & TriperOralSigns = 0 & Triper = 0 & Venera -= 1 & TriperOnce = 0 & 'You have completed the treatment.'
 
-	act 'Leave':gt 'city_clinic'
+	act 'Leave':gt 'city_clinic', 'start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'syphilis_shot':
@@ -613,7 +617,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'syphilis_shot':
 
 	'"That''s it, you might still feel a bit off but the infection is now cured".'
 
-	act 'Leave':gt 'city_clinic'
+	act 'Leave':gt 'city_clinic', 'start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'herpes_cure':
@@ -655,7 +659,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ven1':
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/gy93cr29.jpg"></center>'
     'You lie down, almost crying, mulling over the doctor''s words again and again in your head. You know it is not fair, but you can''t allow these images to go public and decide to pay him to delete the footage.'
 	'You pull the money from your purse and give it to him, hoping he''ll keep true to his word...'
-    act 'Return to the lobby':gt'city_clinic','start'
+    act 'Return to the lobby': gt'city_clinic','start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'ven2':
@@ -666,7 +670,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ven2':
     '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/gy93cr29.jpg"></center>'
     'You lie down, almost crying, mulling over the doctor''s words again and again in your head. After a while you decide that you want the money... you probably won''t be recognized, and even if you do: you can always pretend you didn''t know you were being filmed?'
 	'The doctor seems somewhat surprised to hear your answer, but gives you the money as promised. He grins: "Don''t worry, most of my subscribers don''t live in the city. Maybe a hundred, tops... what are the odds of you running into one of them the coming weeks?"'
-    act 'Leave his office':gt'city_clinic','start'
+    act 'Leave his office': gt'city_clinic','start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'ven3':
@@ -680,7 +684,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ven3':
 	'The doctor is only a few steps behind you, planting a syringe in your neck and injecting you with a liquid before you can tell them what''s happening. As your vision goes blurry and your body goes limp, you hear the doctor say: "That was close! She''s not well in the head and has these fits of violent rage because of her drug addiction! Thank you friends, I can take it from here."'
 	'He scoops you up in his arms and carries your limp body back to his office.'
 	'"Yet another overdose victim, so sad..." he mumbles to himself once the door is closed.'
-    act 'Continue':gt'gameover'
+    act 'Continue': gt'gameover'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'drPP':
@@ -1023,7 +1027,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel2':
 
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 20, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'rough'
 								gs 'stat'
-											
+
 								act 'Obey':
 									*clr & cla
 									pcs_vag += 1
@@ -1044,7 +1048,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ninel2':
 									$orgasm_or = 'yes'
 									gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 10, 'sub', 'lesbian', 'rough'
 									gs 'stat'
-											
+
 									act 'Oblige':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/residential/clinic/sex/exam09.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1531,7 +1535,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'milk_advertisement':
 		'You are not sure why this cought your attention.'
 	end
 	if lact_ev['pcs_knows_milkbank'] < 1: lact_ev['pcs_knows_milkbank'] = 1
-	act 'Go back':gt 'city_clinic','start'
+	act 'Go back': gt 'city_clinic', 'start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'milk_reception':
@@ -1541,7 +1545,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'milk_reception':
 	'She waves into a general direction down the hallway.'
 	'Nurse at the reception: There should be a sign on the door, it is only a small room.'
 	if lact_ev['pcs_knows_milkbank'] < 1: lact_ev['pcs_knows_milkbank'] = 1
-	act 'Go back':gt 'city_clinic','start'
+	act 'Go back': gt 'city_clinic', 'start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'milk_donation_room':
@@ -1635,7 +1639,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'milk_donation_room':
 				!!	else
 				!!		gt 'city_clinic','milk_bank'
 				!!	end
-				gt 'city_clinic','milk_bank'
+				gt 'city_clinic', 'milk_bank'
 			end
 		end
 	else
@@ -1645,7 +1649,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'milk_bank_guy':
 	'content not finished yet'
-	act 'Leave':gt 'city_clinic','start'
+	act 'Leave': gt 'city_clinic','start'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'milk_bank':
@@ -1703,7 +1707,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'milk_bank':
 				menu_off = 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'You: Ah Sorry! I forgot something and can''t donate now.'
-				act 'Leave':gt 'city_clinic', 'milk_donation_room'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'city_clinic', 'milk_donation_room'
 			end
 		end
 	end
@@ -1796,10 +1800,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'milk_donation':
 	elseif lact_ev['poli_donationsessioncount'] > 0:
 		'Sorry Ms. <<$pcs_lastname>>, we are closing now.'
 		'You put on your top, and the employee hands you <<lact_ev[''poli_donatemoney'']>><b>₽</b> for your donated breast milk.'
-		act 'Leave':minut += 5 & gt 'city_clinic', 'milk_donation_room'
+		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_clinic', 'milk_donation_room'
 	else
 		'The milk donation service is closed. It''s open every day between 10:00 and 19:00.'
-		act 'Leave':minut += 5 & gt 'city_clinic', 'milk_donation_room'
+		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_clinic', 'milk_donation_room'
 	end
 end
 

locations/din_van.qsrc

@@ -290,11 +290,11 @@ $bath = {
 }
 
 $SkinCare = {
-	if item_moisturizer > 0 and item_moisturizer['time'] <= totminut:
+	if item_moisturizer > 0 and item_moisturizer_time <= totminut:
 		act 'Apply Moisturizer (0:05)':
 			item_moisturizer -= 1
 			! Moisturiser ware-off timer, so you can only use twice a day. Cleared in cikl so always available in morning
-			item_moisturizer['time'] = totminut + 10 * 60
+			item_moisturizer_time = totminut + 10 * 60
 			menu_off = 1
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5

locations/djibril.qsrc

@@ -16,16 +16,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'djibril_room':
 	djibrilflag = 0
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A82'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/djibrilroom/room.jpg"></center>'
-	'His room is bigger than you expected. There is just one bed over by the windows, and next to that is a desk and a laptop. Closer to the door is a couch and a recliner, with a small TV and PlayStation across from them. It is clean and tastefully decorated.'
+	'His room is bigger than you expected. There is a bed over by the windows, with a laptop sitting on the desk next to it. Closer to the door is a couch and a recliner, with a small TV and PlayStation across from them. It is clean and tastefully decorated.'
 	if DjibrilQW['african_gangbang'] >= 1 and rand(0,3) = 0 and DjibrilQW['gangbang'] ! daystart:
 		DjibrilQW['gangbang'] = daystart
-		'As you enter, he looks hungrily you over. "Would you like me to invite my friends over?" You know he''s talking about inviting his friends over to gangbang you again.'
+		'As you enter, he looks you over hungrily. "Would you like me to invite my friends over?" You know he''s talking about inviting his friends over to gangbang you again.'
 		act 'No, let''s just talk': gt 'djibril', 'djibril_chat'
 		act 'Yes':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 10
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big82.jpg"></center>'
-			'He grins and grabs his phone before sending out text messages. Once he finishes, he sits down in the reclining chair. "They should be here shortly." They arrive within a few minutes and take a seat on the couch with you.'
+			'He grins and grabs his phone before sending a few text messages. Once he finishes, he sits in the reclining chair. "They should be here shortly." They arrive within a few minutes and take a seat on the couch with you.'
 			act 'Continue': gt 'djibrilev1', 'djibrilgb'
 		end
 		if DjibrilQW['anya_inv'] + DjibrilQW['nush_inv'] + DjibrilQW['nat_inv'] > 0:

locations/dreams.qsrc

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		end
 		if pcs_horny > 50:
 			!erotic dream
-			if pcs_vag = 0 and stat['virgin'] = 0 and pcs_ass = 0 and stat['anal'] = 0 and stat['bj'] = 0 and stat['hj'] = 0 and stat['cuni'] = 0 and girl = 0 and guy = 0:
+			if pcs_vag = 0 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0 and pcs_ass = 0 and stat['anal'] = 0 and stat['bj'] = 0 and stat['hj'] = 0 and stat['cuni'] = 0 and girl = 0 and guy = 0:
 				!dreams only for virgin
 				ivrand = rand(1,5)
 			elseif haveHypnoDream = 1:
@@ -249,7 +249,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_dreams':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bedroom/dream/sex/sex5.jpg"></center>'
 		'You dream that you are sitting on top of a guy, bouncing up and down on his cock.'
 	end
-	if stat['virgin'] = 0:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 		'You wake up feeling strange and excited, even though you have never had sex the dream felt very real.'
 	elseif pcs_vag > 0 and stat['vaginal'] = 0:
 		'You have never had a cock in your pussy and yet the sensations from the dream felt very real and have gotten you a little excited.'
@@ -329,9 +329,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gang_dreams':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/home/bedroom/dream/sex/gang2.jpg"></center>'
 		'You dream that you are in-between two hot guys. One is fucking your pussy and the other one is fucking your ass. Both of them slam you with force causing you to moan loudly with pleasure.'
 	end
-	if stat['virgin'] = 0 and pcs_ass = 0 and stat['anal'] = 0 and stat['bj'] = 0 and stat['hj'] = 0 and gang = 0 and guy = 0 and girl = 0:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 0 and pcs_ass = 0 and stat['anal'] = 0 and stat['bj'] = 0 and stat['hj'] = 0 and gang = 0 and guy = 0 and girl = 0:
 		'You haven''t even had normal sex, least of all a threesome. Even though you are excited, the dream still scared you a little.'
-	elseif stat['virgin'] = 1 and pcs_ass = 0 and stat['anal'] = 0 and stat['bj'] = 0 and stat['hj'] = 0 and gang = 0 and guy = 0 and girl = 0:
+	elseif stat['think_virgin'] = 1 and pcs_ass = 0 and stat['anal'] = 0 and stat['bj'] = 0 and stat['hj'] = 0 and gang = 0 and guy = 0 and girl = 0:
 		'Even though you are not a virgin, the thought of a gangbang, even in a dream, is a little alarming.'
 	elseif pcs_vag = 0 and stat['vaginal'] = 0 and pcs_ass > 0 and gang = 0 and guy > 0 and girl = 0:
 		'Even though you are only technically still a virgin, the thought of a gangbang, even in a dream, is a little alarming.'

locations/fame.qsrc

@@ -29,14 +29,14 @@
 
 !!The different values of fame have the following interpretations:
 !! 0-100 not famous - no one knows you
-!! 100-200 some people know of you - if a porn star you are new and only hard core porn viewers of that niche is likely to know you
+!! 100-200 some people know of you - if a porn star you are new and only hard core porn viewers of that niche are likely to know you
 !! 200-300 some people notice you - if a porn star you are new and only hard core porn viewers or those who are into the niche you are in would know you.
-!! 300-400 often recognised - most people who watch a lot of porn would recognize you.
+!! 300-400 often recognized - most people who watch a lot of porn would recognize you.
 !! 400-500 Moderately famous - think Sasha Gray even a lot of people that do not watch porn know who she is.
 !! 500-700 Famous - actress in movies/tv but supporting roles in main stream tv and movies
 !! 700-1000 Very famous - has been a lead actress in main stream tv and movies
 !! Above 1000 A star - A list actress that gets top billing in their movies.
-!! But rember these are local fame. So this is how people in the local area sees you. Not global or even with Russian or the greater region. The fame fame spread to the other regions, so it is always 
+!! But remember these are local fame. So this is how people in the local area sees you. Not global or even with Russian or the greater region. The fame fame spread to the other regions, so it is always 
 
 
 !!To use the fame the call is fame['pav_dance']. Since 1000 is a soft cap on fame, DO NOT compare fame['pav_dance'] to a number higher than 1000.

locations/fathersex.qsrc

@@ -181,13 +181,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fathersex_act1':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/bar/sex/bar/martin/cowgirl/cowgirl_rub.mp4"></video></center>'
 					
-					if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+					if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 						'But daddy, I''m still a virgin...'
 					else
 						'Pound me daddy, all my holes are yours...'
 					end
 
-					if stat['virgin'] = 0:
+					if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 						act 'Hard pounding vag':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/smroom/event/rought/dog2.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -315,7 +315,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fathersex_act1':
 						end
 					end
 
-					if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+					if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 
 						act 'Hard pounding vag (virgin)':
 							*clr & cla

locations/fight.qsrc

@@ -174,7 +174,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'applyDamage':
 		!!If the target has clones, destroy one
 		if <<$fightAppDam['TargetType']>>_clone[<<fightAppDam['TargetNumber']>>] > 0:
 			<<$fightAppDam['TargetType']>>_clone[<<fightAppDam['TargetNumber']>>] -= 1
-			if <<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> = 'you':
+			if $fightAppDam['TargetName'] = 'you':
 				""<<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> lose a clone.""
 			else
 				""<<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> loses a clone.""
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'applyDamage':
 		!!if the target has enough shields to mitigate, remove some shields
 		elseif <<$fightAppDam['TargetType']>>_shield[<<fightAppDam['TargetNumber']>>] >= <<fightAppDam['Damage']>>:
 			<<$fightAppDam['TargetType']>>_shield[<<fightAppDam['TargetNumber']>>] -= <<fightAppDam['Damage']>>
-			if <<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> = 'you':
+			if $fightAppDam['TargetName'] = 'you':
 				""<<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> lose <<fightAppDam['Damage']>> defense.""
 			else
 				""<<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> loses <<fightAppDam['Damage']>> defense.""
@@ -191,7 +191,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'applyDamage':
 		else
 			if <<$fightAppDam['TargetType']>>_shield[<<fightAppDam['TargetNumber']>>] > 0:
 				<<$fightAppDam['TargetType']>>_shield[<<fightAppDam['TargetNumber']>>] = 0
-				if <<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> = 'you':
+				if $fightAppDam['TargetName'] = 'you':
 					""<<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> losse <<fightAppDam['Shield']>> defense.""
 				else
 					""<<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> losses <<fightAppDam['Shield']>> defense.""
@@ -202,7 +202,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'applyDamage':
 			else
 				<<$fightAppDam['TargetType']>>_health[<<fightAppDam['TargetNumber']>>] = 0
 			end
-			if <<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> = 'you':
+			if $fightAppDam['TargetName'] = 'you':
 				""<<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> lose <<fightAppDam['OverShieldDamage']>> health.""
 			else
 				""<<$fightAppDam['TargetName']>> loses <<fightAppDam['OverShieldDamage']>> health.""

locations/foto.qsrc

@@ -149,9 +149,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studio':
 	*clr & cla
 	killvar '$modelopt'
 
-	if special_model['status'] < min(fame['city_modelling'], 700) and modelfoto['topless'] > 0 and hour < 15 and fame_model_event ! daystart:gt 'foto_events','fame'
-	if special_skill_model['status'] < pcs_mdlng and modelfoto['nip'] > 0 and skill_model_event ! daystart:gt 'foto_events','skill'
-	if foto['documentary'] >= 95 and $pantyworntype = 'none' and modelfoto['shoots']>= foto['documentary_timer']:gt'foto_model_documentary','1st_documentary'
+	if model['spcial_job_day'] ! daystart:
+		model['spcial_job_day'] = daystart
+		if special_model['status'] < min(fame['city_modelling'], 700) and modelfoto['topless'] > 0 and hour < 15: gt 'foto_events', 'fame'
+		if special_skill_model['status'] < pcs_mdlng and modelfoto['nip'] > 0: gt 'foto_events', 'skill'
+		if foto['documentary'] >= 95 and $pantyworntype = 'none' and modelfoto['shoots']>= foto['documentary_timer']: gt 'foto_model_documentary', '1st_documentary'
+	end
+
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	gs 'themes', 'indoors'

locations/foto_events.qsrc

@@ -7,7 +7,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'fame':
 	:reroll_1
 	special_model = 2000
 	special_skill_model = 2000
-	fame_model_event = daystart
 	if first_fame_event < 1:
 		gt'foto_events','topless1'
 	else
@@ -31,7 +30,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'skill':
 	:reroll_2
 	special_model = 2000
 	special_skill_model = 2000
-	skill_model_event = daystart
 	*clr & cla
 	mdlng_skill_event = rand(1,5)
 	if mdlng_skill_event = 1 and sunWeather = 1 and daystage < 3:

locations/gadfield.qsrc

@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'horse':
 			hndiwrk_exp += rand(0,3)
 			gs 'stat'
 
-			act 'Continue':gt'gadfield','horse'
+			act 'Continue':gt'gadsarai',''
 		end
 	end
 end

locations/gadukino_event.qsrc

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 # gadukino_event
-!!2022/05/03
+!!2022/05/06
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_apologise':
 	menu_off = 1
@@ -551,9 +551,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang4':
 
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_oral5.jpg"></center>'
 					'You''re suddenly realized that no one is fucking your pussy or ass.'
-					'"I hope that that was the last one, it was fun but my body start to feel sour" you thought.'
-					'This turns out to be wishful thinking as other naked durnken men soon surround you again.'
-					'The men soon make you kneel your knees before several of them shove their cocks in your face.'
+					'"I hope that that was the last one, it was okay but my body start to feel sore all over." you thought.'
+					'This turns out to be wishful thinking as other naked durnken men soon occupy the empty space around you again.'
+					'You kneel obediently in front of the men and several of them shove their cocks to your face immediately.'
 
 					act 'Continue on':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -562,8 +562,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang4':
 						guy += 1
 
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_cow1.jpg"></center>'
-						'"And now, let the little nympho doll work herself for a while." you hear someone say. Turning your head you see a naked man lying on the ground.'
-						'You climb on top of him and start grinding up and down his cock.'
+						'"And now, let the little nympho fuck puppy work herself for a while." you hear someone say. Turning your head you see a naked man lying on the ground and gesture you to get on top of him.'
+						'You climb on top of him and start grinding up and down his cock, lost in the pleasure everytime his cock impales you.'
 
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang', 'deepthroat'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'sub', 'gangbang'
@@ -573,15 +573,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang4':
 						if rand(1,2) = 1:gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
 						gs 'stat'
 
-						act 'Lower yourself onto the next cock':
+						act 'Impale yourself onto the next cock':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'drunk guy', rand(19,45)
 							gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 							guy += 1
 
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_cow2.jpg"></center>'
-							'The next guy was also lying on the ground, you climb on top of him on your own, without any hesitation.' 
-							'Someone else steps up to you with his cock out which you immediately began sucking.'
+							'Another guy lies domw beside the man that you''re currently riding, you climb on top of him and proceed to fuck him just as hard and without any hesitation.' 
+							'Someone else steps up to you with his cock at you face level, you respond immediately by open your mouth and begin to suck.'
 
 							dick = rand(10,20)
 							guy += 1
@@ -601,7 +601,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gadriver_gang4':
 								guy += 1
 
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/river/gadriver_gang_cow3.jpg"></center>'
-								'You see another man lying on the ground, as you''ve already gotten used to it, you climb on the top of him as well.'
+								'You see a thrid man lying on the ground, as you might as well just do it, you climb on the top of him as well.'
 
 								protect = rand(0,1)
 								pose = 1

locations/gdktoilet_mens.qsrc

@@ -148,7 +148,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mens_entrance_events':
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Community Center - Men''s Restroom</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/mens/sex/gangbangbath.jpg"></center>'
 		'You look inside the men''s restroom and see Sonia getting pounded by a bunch of guys. You can tell she is enjoying every second of it as she gets fucked in both holes.'
-		if stat['virgin'] = 0:
+		if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 			gs 'stat'
 			'You feel excited as you watch Sonia. You decide to leave before you are noticed.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
@@ -177,7 +177,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mens_entrance_events':
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Community Center - Men''s Restroom</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/mens/sex/gangbangbath.jpg"></center>'
 		'You look inside the men''s restroom and see Vitek, Dan, Vasily, and one other you don''t recongnize and someone else under some woman getting pounded.'
-		if stat['virgin'] = 0 and pcs_ass > 0:
+		if stat['think_virgin'] = 0 and pcs_ass > 0:
 			pcs_horny += 30
 			'Your pussy starts to itch. You wish you were that woman in between all those horny men taking it in all your holes. The feeling of excitement is enough to make you want to masturbate in the hallway but you decide to leave before your feelings become too much.'
 		end

locations/gopsex.qsrc

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ end
 !===================!============================================
 !deduce if gg first time
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gg_devst_deflor':
-	if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 		if pcs_vag = 0:
 			pcs_horny = 0
 			pcs_mood = pcs_mood - 15
@@ -234,7 +234,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shgopsex':
 		'"So <<$boydesc>>, do you want to have fun with me?" You lick your lips sensually and ask him: "What can I do for you?"'
 		if mesec > 0:
 			'<font color = red><b>You warn him that you''re on your period and so your pussy is off limits!</b></font>'
-		elseif mesec <= 0 and stat['virgin'] = 1:
+		elseif mesec <= 0 and stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 			'<font color = red><b>You tell him, that you want to save your virginity, so your pussy is available only for eating.</b></font>'
 		end
 	end
@@ -243,7 +243,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shgopsex':
 	if pcs_throat >= 20:
 		act 'Deep Throat': gt 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_throat'
 	end
-	if mesec <=0 and stat['virgin'] = 0:
+	if mesec <=0 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 		act 'Sex': gt 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_vag'
 	end
 	act 'Anal sex': gt 'gopsex', 'shgopsex_anal'
@@ -277,7 +277,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shgopsex_end':
 		act 'In your mouth': gt 'gopsex', 'hide','shgopsex_swallow'
 		act 'On your face' : gt 'gopsex', 'hide','shgopsex_cumface'
 		act 'On your body' : gt 'gopsex', 'hide','shgopsex_cumbelly'
-		if stat['virgin'] = 0: act 'In your pussy': gt 'gopsex', 'hide','shgopsex_cumvag'
+		if stat['think_virgin'] = 0: act 'In your pussy': gt 'gopsex', 'hide','shgopsex_cumvag'
 		act 'In your butt' : gt 'gopsex', 'hide','shgopsex_cumanal'
 	end
 	killvar 'sh_bjandhj_cum'
@@ -486,9 +486,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shgopsex_group':
 	gs 'boyStat', 'A11','2'
 	if $ARGS[1] ! 'cont':
 		gs 'gopsex','hide','group_sex_text'
-		if mesec > 0 and stat['virgin'] = 0:
+		if mesec > 0 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 			'<font color = red><b>You warn them that you''re on your period and so your pussy is off limits!</b></font>'
-		elseif mesec <=0 and stat['virgin'] = 1:
+		elseif mesec <=0 and stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 			'<font color = red><b>you remind to them, that you want to preserve your virginity, so your pussy is not available for play!</b></font>'
 		end
 	end
@@ -496,11 +496,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shgopsex_group':
 	if stat['bj'] >= 50:
 		act 'Suck all at once': gs 'gopsex','hide','group_sex_start' & gt 'gopsex','hide','shgopsex_group_bja'
 	end
-	if stat['virgin'] = 0 and mesec <=0:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 0 and mesec <=0:
 		act 'The pussy': gs 'gopsex','hide','group_sex_start' & gt 'gopsex','hide','shgopsex_group_vag'
 	end
 	act 'In the ass': gs 'gopsex','hide','group_sex_start' & gt 'gopsex','hide','shgopsex_group_anal'
-	if stat['virgin'] = 0 and mesec <=0:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 0 and mesec <=0:
 		act 'In the pussy and ass': gs 'gopsex','hide','group_sex_start' & gt 'gopsex','hide','shgopsex_group_dp'
 	end
 	if pcs_ass >= 20:

locations/gschool_boys_bathroom.qsrc

@@ -132,7 +132,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy1':
 	killvar 'boyrand'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/boysbathroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out and see <<$rand_boy>>. Smiling, you exit the stall and call his name. He whirls around, visibly startled, but then breaks into a smile when he sees you. "You scared the shit out of me!"'
+	'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out and see <<$rand_boy>>. Smiling, you exit the stall and call his name. He whirls around, visibly startled, but then breaks into a smile when he sees you. "You scared the shit out of me!"'
 	*nl
 	'Within moments, the two of you are chatting away about school, movies, sports, music and before you know it, the bell rings. You both stop, laugh and gather your things. You then bid each other farewell and head to your next class.'
 	act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -144,12 +144,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy2':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/stall.jpg"></center>'
 	'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You move slightly to make sure you are hidden, but that causes the toilet seat under you to creak noticeably.'
-	*nl
 	'"Who''s in here?" you hear a gruff voice ask. You don''t answer and hope he, whoever it is, will just let it go. Unfortunately, he doesn''t. "Hey, don''t fuck with me! I know you''re here." The next thing you hear is a stall door at the far end of the bathroom slam, audibly opened with a hard push. The sound repeats, again and again, and is slowly working its way towards you. Having little choice, you sit and wait until it''s your stall''s turn. The boy turns out to be Radomir, looking angry at first but his expression changes into a half-grin when he sees who it is. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, what''s up?"'
-	*nl
 	'You look up at him and smile. "Hey Radomir, just cutting class. Needed a break, you know?"'
 	if hotcat >= 6:
-		'He nods his head a bit. "Sure, sure. Glad to find you here, I was afraid I might get bored." he says as he moves into the stall with you, grabs your wrist tightly and pulls you up. You haven''t even processed what he''s doing when you feel his lips on yours as he drags you out of the stall with him.'
+		'He nods his head. "Sure, sure. Glad to find you here, I was afraid I might get bored." he says as he moves into the stall with you, grabs your wrist tightly and pulls you up. You haven''t even processed what he''s doing when you feel his lips on yours as he drags you out of the stall with him.'
 		gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Stop him (<<will_cost>> willpower)':
@@ -226,7 +224,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy2':
 			act 'Suck his cock':gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'boy2_sub'
 		end
 	else
-		'He nods his head a bit. "Sure, sure. Hey, do you have a smoke?" he asks as he seems to search his pockets for a pack of cigarettes.'
+		'He nods his head. "Sure, sure. Hey, do you have a smoke?" he asks as he seems to search his pockets for a pack of cigarettes.'
 		act 'No':
 			*clr & cla
 			npc_rel['A154'] -= 1
@@ -288,9 +286,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy2_sub':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/radomir/sex/school/boy1anal.jpg"></center>'
 			'He seems to slow down, taking shallower strokes in your cunt, then pulls his dick out all the way and pushes it back in, balls deep; he pulls it out again, only to push it all the way in again, causing you to moan - as much as his hand at your throat allows - every time.'
-			*nl
 			'After five or six repeats, he pulls out again but this time, he shoves it up your ass instead, without warning or preparation. You groan in pain and instinctively want to pull away, but there''s still that hand at your throat. He doesn''t wait for you to adjust to his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock being shoved up your ass either; he just drives it all the way in, ignoring your pained noises, until his balls are touching your cheeks and then starts hammering your puckered hole with a vengeance.'
-			*nl
 			'You do what you can to relax and it eventually starts hurting less, it even starts feeling good. After a bit of pounding though, he repeats his earlier movement scheme: He pulls his cock out of your ass and then shoves it all the way in again, in and out, all the way. You have to hold on tight to the counter, but you moan lustfully and after a while, Radomir starts panting, quietly at first but getting louder, and you can tell he is getting close to finishing.'
 			anal_slip += 4
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 6, 'sub', 'rough'
@@ -320,7 +316,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy3':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big149.jpg"></center>'
-	'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out but don''t see anyone. Confused and a little curious, you leave the stall and take a look around. The next stall door is open and you see Lazar using the toilet as a chair, with a folder in his lap. "Hey Lazar, what''s up?" you ask.'
+	'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out but don''t see anyone. Confused and a little curious, you leave the stall and take a look around. The next stall door is open and you see Lazar using the toilet as a chair, with a folder in his lap. "Hey Lazar, what''s up?" you ask.'
 	*nl
 	'He looks up in surprise. "Oh hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, you cutting class?" he asks in reply.'
 	'"Yeah, I couldn''t take another boring class." you tell him with a smile. "I needed a little fun. You?"'
@@ -447,7 +443,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy4':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big146.jpg"></center>'
-	'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out but you don''t see anyone. Confused and a little curious, you leave the stall and take a look around. The next stall door is open and you see Marcus standing there. His pants and underwear are pulled down to his knees and his large, black cock is standing at attention. "Uh... Hey Marcus, did I catch you at a bad time?" you ask carefully.'
+	'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out but you don''t see anyone. Confused and a little curious, you leave the stall and take a look around. The next stall door is open and you see Marcus standing there. His pants and underwear are pulled down to his knees and his large, black cock is standing at attention. "Uh... Hey Marcus, did I catch you at a bad time?" you ask carefully.'
 	*nl
 	'He looks up in startled surprise. He quickly tries to cover up but stops, apparently thinking it''s moot since you already saw his erection. Still, his reply is a bit awkward. "Oh, uh... Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. Is there something I can help you with or have you just come to tease me too?"'
 	*nl
@@ -460,9 +456,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy4':
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/boysbathroom.jpg"></center>'
 		'"I''m so sorry, Marcus. The other girls can be pretty mean sometimes." You shrug apologetically and turn to give him some privacy. "But if you would like to talk, I have some free time on my hands right now. But how about you pull up your pants first?"'
-		*nl
 		'"Oh, right. Sorry." You''re not sure if he blushed or not - his complexion makes it a little difficult to tell. A few moments later, he steps out of the stall with his pants back on. You can still clearly see the bulge in his pants, but you choose to ignore it.'
-		*nl
 		'The two of you talk about Russia and its culture, about America, what he thinks about living here, about movies, music and anything else that strikes your fancy. Before you know it, the class bell rings. You both stop, laugh and gather your things. You then bid each other farewell and head to your next class.'
 		act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
@@ -474,7 +468,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy4':
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/marcus/sex/school/marc0.jpg"></center>'
 		'You look down at the large bulge in his pants, biting your lower lip in a touch of excitement and, being the selfless girl you are, decide to help him relieve his tension and frustration. You wordlessly step up close to him and start rubbing his cock through his pants. He only hesitates a moment, then he starts to nuzzle your neck as he pushes your shirt up, exposing your perky tits.'
-		*nl
 		'He switches to sucking on your nipples as one of his hands slides up your skirt to rub your pussy. Feeling his cock strain against his pants, you unbuckle his belt, unbutton his pants and pull his cock free. You start stroking it with your hand and feel it practically pulsing.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'hj', 5
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -484,7 +477,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy4':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/marcus/sex/school/marc1.jpg"></center>'
 			'Looking down at his large black dick, you bite your lower lip in excitment and wordlessly drop to your knees in front of him. You grab his dick with one of your hands and start stroking it, wrapping your lips around the shaft of his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock only a second later. Marcus looks down at you incredulously, but judging by the moan that escapes him as you take his cock into your mouth, he has no objections.'
-			*nl
 			'He just lets you do the work, leaning back against the stall wall and closing his eyes to enjoy you sucking him off. "God damn, you Russian girls know how to suck dick." You take that as a compliment and redouble your efforts, bobbing your head up and down his length. His impressive size doesn''t make his manhood easy to handle, but it certainly makes it more exciting to you. For a few minutes, he just lets you do your thing as he observes and savors your blowjob, but eventually he breaks the silence. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>? How about you take off your clothes and let me give you the fuck of your life?"'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -504,7 +496,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy4':
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/marcus/sex/school/marc4.mp4"></video></center>'
 						'You take him as deep as you can, and hold him there for a moment. Whatever thought he had a moment ago, you are sure it is all but wiped from memory, ejected along with the groan you hear. You come up for air but go right back down again, deepthroating him and holding him there as if your life depended on it, as if pleasuring him was the only thing that mattered. He starts moaning loudly now and suddenly that hand at the back of your head comes to life; it tilts your head back as he murmurs: "Open your mouth and stick out your tongue."'
-						*nl
 						'As you do, he starts jerking off, holding the tip directly over your tongue and soon, spurts of cum fly onto your tongue and into your mouth. Jet after jet shoots out, more than you''ve ever seen before, and you wonder if he is going to stop at all. He must have had a serious amount saved up; not only is the amount exceptional, but it seems thicker than any sperm you''re familiar with. He completely coats your tongue in white liquid and more of it runs into your mouth, filling it. Letting out one last loud sigh, he steps back and leans against the stall wall, taking a long look at you sitting there on your knees with his cum on your tongue. You are strangely proud of yourself and let him take one last look at you before you pull your tongue back into your mouth and swallow, feeling it go down your throat like glue, then open wide again to show him you gulped it all down.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -531,7 +522,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy4':
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/marcus/sex/school/marc5.jpg"></center>'
 					'Once he has your pussy good and wet with your juices and his saliva, he stands back up and rubs the tip of his penis against your slit. Getting the head of his dick nice and lubed up, he finally slides his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your pussy, filling you entirely. You would have expected this fullness in your vagina to be painful, except it''s everything but. He starts pumping into you, slowly working his way deeper into your pussy with each stroke, and each time you expect it to hurt; to reach your limit.'
-					*nl
 					'However, it doesn''t. He seems to fit you perfectly, even though his size is well above average. All you can feel is intense, mind-dissolving pleasure that shoots up your spine like lightning and grows stronger with every inch of depth he gains. You would have bet that he couldn''t fit his entire cock inside you and yet, eventually, you feel his scrotum touch your nether lips and feel so wonderfully, desperately full. That''s when you hear him whisper "I want to fuck your ass, <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -552,7 +542,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy4':
 								'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/marcus/sex/school/marc4.mp4"></video></center>'
 								'You pull away slightly and he takes the hint and pulls out of you. You turn around, drop to your knees and immediately go down on him, as if your mouth was drawn to his black cock, and you give it a couple of strokes, enjoying the taste of yourself on him. He starts moaning loudly now and suddenly that hand at the back of your head comes to life; it tilts your head back as he murmurs: "Open your mouth and stick out your tongue."'
-								*nl
 								'As you do, he starts jerking off, holding the tip directly over your tongue and soon, spurts of cum fly onto your tongue and into your mouth. Jet after jet shoots out, more than you''ve ever seen before, and you wonder if he is going to stop at all. He must have had a serious amount saved up; not only is the amount exceptional, but it seems thicker than any sperm you''re familiar with. He completely coats your tongue in white liquid and more of it runs into your mouth, filling it. Letting out one last loud sigh, he steps back and leans against the stall wall, taking a long look at you sitting there on your knees with his cum on your tongue. You are strangely proud of yourself and let him take one last look at you before you pull your tongue back into your mouth and swallow, feeling it go down your throat like glue, then open wide again to show him you gulped it all down.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -583,9 +572,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy4':
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/marcus/sex/school/marc3.jpg"></center>'
 						'You can''t even answer. All you do is give him an almost incoherent ''yes'' - you would let him do anything to you right now, as long he just fucks you some more. He pulls out of you and several of his fingers rub your wet pussy; not only does he tease you, but he''s also getting his fingers nice and soaking wet. He then rubs them against your rosebud, getting it slick and lubing it up with your own fluids. He does this several times, even sliding a couple of fingers into your ass to prepare it as best he can.'
-						*nl
 						'By the time he pulls his fingers out, you are more than ready for him and feeling the head of his cock pushing against your asshole is anything but unexpected. He gently eases the tip into your ass, causing you to gasp a little in pain - you were ready, but that doesn''t change the fact that he is big. He stops moving at once and waits a moment before pushing his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dick inside a little more, slowly sinking about halfway into your ass. If you thought you were feeling full before, it is nothing compared to now.'
-						*nl
 						'He starts slowly moving back and forth inside your ass, working his way deeper into your bowels as carefully as possible, slowing down whenever he hears a groan of pain or sees you flinch. Thing is, you are mostly moaning in pleasure now and what little discomfort his size still causes you is easily drowned out by it. Having his big, black cock ploughing your tight little ass is so incredibly arousing. Marcus may be considerate, but the twitching and screaming tells him everything he needs to know.'
 						anal_slip += 4
 						$orgasm_txt = 'He picks up the pace, fucking you fast and hard through your orgasm and prolonging it to the point where it almost turns into pain. You can barely see anything, blinded by the sensory overload, but you can hear him pant and grunt louder than before.'
@@ -597,7 +584,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy4':
 							'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/marcus/sex/school/marc4.mp4"></video></center>'
 							'Then, all of a sudden, he pulls out of your ass and pulls you around and down to your knees - or maybe your legs just gave away - he tilts your head back as he murmurs: "Open your mouth and stick out your tongue."'
-							*nl
 							'As you do, he starts jerking off, holding the tip directly over your tongue and soon, spurts of cum fly onto your tongue and into your mouth. Jet after jet shoots out, more than you''ve ever seen before, and you wonder if he is going to stop at all. He must have had a serious amount saved up; not only is the amount exceptional, but it seems thicker than any sperm you''re familiar with. He completely coats your tongue in white liquid and more of it runs into your mouth, filling it. Letting out one last loud sigh, he steps back and leans against the stall wall, taking a long look at you sitting there on your knees with his cum on your tongue. You are strangely proud of yourself and let him take one last look at you before you pull your tongue back into your mouth and swallow, feeling it go down your throat like glue, then open wide again to show him you gulped it all down.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -619,8 +605,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy4_end':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big146.jpg"></center>'
 	'"I hope you don''t think we are all teases anymore. Even if we do tease, there is normally a big pay off in the end." you tell him as you finish getting the last of your clothes back in place and suggestively wiggle your tongue at him.'
-	*nl
-	'He laughs. "Well, if that''s the case, feel free to tease me any time you want <<$pcs_nickname>>. I should get back to class, they are going to wonder where I went. Talk to you later, okay?" Marcus gives you a final smile and wave as he heads out of the bathroom. It takes you a few more seconds before you realize that this wasn''t some encounter in a club or something, but that you were doing all this in the school bathroom while skipping class. The reality check sucks and you are back to killing time until the bell rings, but the time you spent with the cute black guy was definitely a better use of the period.'
+	'He laughs. "Well, if that''s the case, feel free to tease me any time you want <<$pcs_nickname>>. I should get back to class before they start wondering where I went. Talk to you later, okay?" Marcus gives you a final smile and wave as he heads out of the bathroom. It takes you a few more seconds before you realize that this wasn''t some encounter in a club or something, but that you were doing all this in the school bathroom while skipping class. The reality check sucks and you are back to killing time until the bell rings, but the time you spent with the cute black guy was definitely a better use of the period.'
 	act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
 
@@ -646,7 +631,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy5':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/boysbathroom.jpg"></center>'
 			'"We could, you know, just talk. I mean, how have you guys been?" you say, playing dumb with regards to the innuendo and making no move to leave your stall.'
 			'"Talk? Really?" They both audibly sigh in disappointment. "You sure you don''t want to have some fun?" Fedor asks, but after seeing your expression at his insistence, Ivan thumps him lightly in the chest and whispers "Let it go, man." before he smiles reassuringly at you. "Yeah sure. We can talk."'
-			*nl
 			'You give Ivan a grateful smile in return and engage the two boys in conversation. Soon, the three of you are talking about their sparring, fights, and training, but also about recently released movies, your favorite music and anything else that strikes your fancy. Before you know it, the bell rings. All of you stop and look up reflexively at the sound. You bid each other farewell, your eyes locking with Ivan''s for a moment as you share another smile, and then head to your next class.'
 			act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
@@ -658,9 +642,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy5':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/boysbj.jpg"></center>'
 			'You grin at them - although this was unexpected, you wouldn''t mind passing the time with them. "What did you boys have in mind?" you ask them in a sultry tone, almost purring out the words.'
-			*nl
 			'Seeing your reaction to Fedor''s suggestion of fun, they both waste no time in pulling their dicks out of their pants. As if it wasn''t obvious enough, Fedor feels the need to suggest "Why don''t you come over here and suck our dicks? That''ll be fun." Ivan might have punched him for his stupid remark if his gaze wasn''t completely focused on you.'
-			*nl
 			'You slide off the toilet, down onto all fours, and crawl over to them on your hands and knees, sitting up once you are between the two. You take Fedor''s <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth first and start sucking on it while you use your hand to stroke Ivan''s dick so he doesn''t feel left out.'
 			$orgasm_or = 'no'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'group'
@@ -678,7 +660,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy5':
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/boysfuck.jpg"></center>'
 				'Fedor places one hand on your hip and the other grabs your thigh. He then lifts your leg off the ground while Ivan places his hand on the back of your head, both of them helping you to keep your balance as you stand on one leg - having sex with two jocks definitely has its perks. Just then, Fedor slips his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your pussy and starts fucking you hard almost at once, but his handiwork more than prepared you for it. You moan as he fucks you, but your moans are muffled by Ivan''s cock and Fedor''s thrusts push you forward time and time again, pushing the dick in your mouth deep into your throat over and over.'
-				*nl
 				'After several minutes, they turn you around so they can switch, and some time later, they switch again. About the time you expect them to switch once more, Ivan suggests "Hey, Fedor, how about you lie down on the floor so we can both fuck her?"'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'group'
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A5'
@@ -716,7 +697,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy5':
 						dynamic $showerdin
 						gs 'stat'
 						'Shortly after this moment, Fedor tenses up and holds your head still, his dick buried deep in your mouth. He shoots his cum deep inside, most of it hitting the back of your throat and getting swallowed instantly, and pumps his manhood even deeper into your mouth a few more times before pulling out and standing up to watch Ivan, who is still pounding your ass. A few seconds later, Ivan groans loudly and buries his dick deep in your ass. You feel a warmth flood inside you as he starts cumming. He keeps going for a few more strokes but then pulls out of your ass, just as he stops shooting spurts of sperm in your ass. As his dick leaves your ass, which gapes a bit after his enthusiastic fuck, you feel some of the cum running out. Ivan stands up and smiles. "Fuck, that was great. You''re the best <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-						*nl
 						'Fedor is already washing up at the sink. "Yeah, you are one amazing bitch. Uh... I mean that in a good way." You get up as well and go to the sink to get cleaned up as best you can. You look over to them as you use paper towels to wipe the sperm off and out of your ass and grin when you find them watching you. "You guys were right: That was fun." The guys laugh and you keep chatting while you all get dressed and talk about a variety of things in the little bit of time you have left before the bell rings.'
 						act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 					end
@@ -744,7 +724,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/stall.jpg"></center>'
 	if gruptipe ! 4 and hotcat >= 5:
 		'After a few minutes, you hear several boy''s voices and recognize several of them as gopniks from your class. Several stall doors slam open, their echo loud as thunder and just as startling, and one of them says "Man, you sure?" There is a pause in the noise as another answers "I''m telling you, I saw her come in here just after the bell rang." A few more doors slam open until, suddenly, your door is the one to slam. You see Dan standing there, grinning at you. "Found her. You were right." He steps in and grabs you around the waist, dragging you out of the stall.'
-		*nl
 		'The other boys quickly move over. Within moments, you find yourself in the middle of five of your gopnik classmates, all leering at you lustfully. You know exactly what they are thinking and what they want. You doubt you can reason with them, but perhaps you could scream? Maybe someone would hear you; or maybe it would only piss them off. You could also try and make a run for it.'
 		gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -776,7 +755,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6':
 		act 'Submit': gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'boy6_sub'
 	elseif gruptipe = 4 and hotcat >= 5:
 		'After a few minutes, you hear several boy''s voices and recognize several of them as gopniks from your class. Several stall doors slam open, their echo loud as thunder and just as startling, and one of them says "Man, you sure?" There is a pause in the noise as another answers. "I''m telling you, I saw her come in here just after the bell rang." A few more doors slam open until, suddenly, your door is the one to slam. You see Dan standing there, grinning at you. "Found her. You were right." He steps in and grabs you around the waist, dragging you out of the stall.'
-		*nl
 		'The other boys quickly move over. Within moments, you find yourself in the middle of five of your gopnik classmates, all leering at you lustfully. Vitek roughly grabs and squeezes one of your tits. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s have some fun. You know you want to... and so do we. Isn''t that right?" he asks the others, who nod their heads and start pawing at you as well. You could still get out of this and make them stop - the gopniks are a rowdy bunch, but they''re not complete assholes or rapists - but if you make them stop, they''ll become angry. That makes giving in and seeing where this goes an option you seriously consider; it could genuinely be fun and would certainly make them like you more if you submitted to their desires. That''s how it works, right?'
 		gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -790,7 +768,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6':
 		act 'Submit': gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'boy6_sub'
 	elseif gruptipe = 4 and hotcat < 5:
 		'After a few minutes, you hear several boy''s voices and recognize several of them as gopniks from your class. Several stall doors slam open, their echo loud as thunder and just as startling, and one of them says "Man, you sure?" There is a pause in the noise as another answers. "I''m telling you, I saw her come in here just after the bell rang." A few more doors slam open until, suddenly, your door is the one to slam. You see Dan standing there, grinning at you. "Found her. You were right." He steps in and grabs you around the waist, dragging you out of the stall.'
-		*nl
 		'When they see it is you, they all look disappointed. You even hear one of them say "Oh, it''s you." They let go of you and walk away, back towards the door, when you hear another one say "Well, what the fuck are we going to do now?" and Vitek speaks up. "Shut up, I''ve got an idea." With that, they leave without another word to you.'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
 			act 'Continue to play on phone':gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'bathroom2'
@@ -801,7 +778,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6':
 		pcs_mood -= 20
 		gs 'stat'
 		'After a few minutes, you hear several boy''s voices and recognize several of them as gopniks from your class. Several stall doors slam open, their echo loud as thunder and just as startling, and one of them says "Man, you sure?" There is a pause in the noise as another answers. "I''m telling you, I saw her come in here just after the bell rang." A few more doors slam open until, suddenly, your door is the one to slam. You see Dan standing there, staring at you, "Found her. You were right." He steps in and grabs you by the arm, dragging you out of the stall.'
-		*nl
 		'Once they see who it is, they look visibly disappointed and somewhat angry. "What the fuck is your ugly ass doing in the guys'' bathroom?" Vitek asks, but before you can even respond Dan speaks up. "Maybe she forgot she was a girl; with a body like that, who could blame her?" The rest all bust out laughing.'
 		'Blushing as the boys laugh at you, you don''t know what to say before Vitek roughly grabs your arm and shoves you towards the door. "Get your ugly face out of here before you make us sick." The others laugh some more, and not sure what else to do, you leave. You spend the rest of the period roaming the hall, trying not to be seen while wishing you were better looking.'
 		act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -814,10 +790,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6_not':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/boysbathroom.jpg"></center>'
 	'You decide to shake your head and try to fend them off. "Not today boys." They don''t relent and keep pawing at you, one or two even try to push their luck and see if all it takes to sway you is one good squeeze. Vitek and Dan aren''t as handsy as the others, but aren''t coming to your aid either. You''re trying to push through the others, towards the door, and you know that if they really don''t want to let you leave, there is no way you could force your way past them. You push a couple of them away and they stay backed off for a moment, but by the time you push another off, another moves back in. They seem to be enjoying the game.'
-	*nl
 	'Once near the door, you finally manage break out of the circle, your clothes half pulled off, but you are getting a little annoyed with them now and they can clearly hear that when you cry out "I said enough! Back the fuck up, all of you, now!" With that, all of them stop, but Vitek, who has been silently watching you struggle for the last minute or two, shoves you towards the door, his eyes hard. "Then get the fuck out of here, and don''t come trying to hang out with us." You are looking at him incredulity - he seriously would ''cast you out'', just because you wouldn''t have sex with all of them? He couldn''t possibly be serious... right?'
-	*nl
-	'It''s not too late; you could still submit to their desires, if you wanted to... or you could stand your ground and leave. After all, Vitek might not mean that. It is always hard to tell with gopniks.'
+	'It''s not too late; you could still submit to their desires, if you wanted to... or you could stand your ground and leave. After all, Vitek might not mean that. It''s always hard to tell with gopniks.'
 	gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 		act 'Leave (<<will_cost>> willpower)':
@@ -860,7 +834,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6_sub':
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/gangvag.jpg"></center>'
 		'Once your clothes are removed, or at least moved out of the way, one of them bends you over with a shove. Another grabs your hair and twists it painfully, then drags your head over to his crotch where he''s already stroking his dick. You feel a cock getting shoved into your dry pussy and whoever it is drives it in as deep as it will go, trying to go for balls deep on the first stroke and, failing that, hammering into you with a vengeance. It''s so painful that you cannot stay silent, but just as you cry out over the rough treatment, the guy holding you by the hair shoves his dick into your mouth, tightening his grip around your head so much hurts, but he doesn''t care - all he cares about is fucking your throat.'
-		*nl
 		'They take turns, mostly switching out who is getting to fuck your pussy, but eventually exchanging who gets to fuck your mouth as well. The ones not currently fucking you often smack your ass hard, roughly squeeze one of your tits or painfully pinch one of your nipples while they wait for their turn.'
 		gs 'pain', 1, 'vaginal', 'stretch'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 4, 'group'
@@ -881,7 +854,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6_sub':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/ganganal1.jpg"></center>'
 			'Your uncomfortable spit roasting is interrupted by Roman saying "Lift the bitch up, I want to fuck her ass." Before you even know what''s going on, one of them on each side of you grabs you, lifting you off the ground. Holding you in a sitting position mid air, they spread your legs and you instinctively wrap your arm around one of their necks. Just as it dawns on you why they lifted you, you feel a cock painfully entering your ass.'
-			*nl
 			'The sudden surge of agony causes you to cry out, the threat about keeping quiet momentarily forgotten, but it gets even worse: As soon as Roman has forced himself all the way in, he starts hammering away at your ass. You do your best to make as little noise as you can while tears run down your face, but it is difficult - the pain only seems to get worse. Before long, the dick is pulled out of your ass and you sigh in relief, but too soon: Another takes its place a few moments later, and so it continues - the guys take turns fucking your ass or holding you up.'
 			gs 'pain', 1, 'asshole', 'stretch'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'group'
@@ -897,8 +869,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6_sub':
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/ganganal2.jpg"></center>'
 				'Eventually, one of them complains about holding you up and they let you down, bending you over the instant your feet touch the floor. One cock is shoved back into your ass again while another is shoved into your mouth. They both fall into a jackhammer rhythm, both guys trying to shove their cocks as deep into your holes as they physically can. Someone, either the one fucking your throat or one of the others who''s feeling sadistic, grabs your hair and twists it painfully, holding your head in place so you can''t pull away when your gag reflex acts up.'
-				*nl
-				'You are so dazed by your suffering that you''re barely even aware that they''re talking, let alone that they''re talking and joking about you. As they switch places, they start arguing about who''s turn it is to fuck you where or who is taking too long on his turn.'
+				'You''re so dazed by your suffering that you''re barely even aware that they''re talking, let alone that they''re talking and joking about you. As they switch places, they start arguing about who''s turn it is to fuck you where or who is taking too long on his turn.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal', 3, 'group'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'group'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -913,9 +884,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6_sub':
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/gangdp.jpg"></center>'
 					'It''s up to Vitek to interrupt them and mediate. "Hey, no need to fight guys. Our whore knows her place: She''s a totally obedient little slut, with three holes and two hands. Watch." He drags you by your hair into one of the stalls and dunks your hair into the toilet bowl several times, laughing when you don''t protest, scared of how he might react if you did. Then he drags you back out and shoves you back to the others. "What are you waiting for? Fill her up, boys!"'
-					*nl
 					'They laugh, and you soon find yourself pulled down on top of one of them, straddling him as he enters your pussy. Another shoves his dick into your ass while a third shoves his cock down your throat. All three of them start roughly fucking you while the last two grab your arms and put your hands on their dicks. With the toilet water dripping down your back and your pussy, ass and throat burning and hurting from getting violated, you know that it will be over faster if you play along, so you start jerking both of them off, almost grateful for the dick you have to suck because it muffles the cries you wouldn''t be able to contain.'
-					*nl
 					'At the very least, the guys seem to be much happier now that they are all getting some at the same time. They''re not quite considerate of you but at least they have less frustrations to take out on you, making what could be utter torture almost tolerable. You lose track of time, and they trade positions so often you aren''t even sure who is fucking you where.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'group'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'group'
@@ -933,7 +902,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy6_sub':
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/gangcum.jpg"></center>'
 						'The bell hasn''t rang yet, even though it feels like they have been doing this for hours. All three of your holes are raw from the dry insertions and all the rough fucking they had to withstand. Plain and simple: You are reaching your breaking point where even the pain you thought was tolerable is getting so overbearing you might pass out. Luckily, by the sounds of it, the guys are finally getting close to finishing.'
-						*nl
 						'They withdraw from your holes, one by one, and roughly drag you off the guy you were straddling. You are forced to sit on the floor as all of them gather around you, jerking themselves off like there''s no tomorrow. One by one, they shower you in spurts and drops of cum; it coats your face, lips, hair, breasts, arms, runs down to your stomach, your ass, your pussy, your legs... By the time they are done, it feels like all of you is covered in cum.'
 						'Once they are done, Dan says "Now THAT is one well-trained slut." He laughs at you, still sitting on the ground, and the boys gather up their things and leave.'
 
@@ -1006,7 +974,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'companyb1':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/voyvag.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. Soft murmured voices echo in the room, one male, the other female; you can''t quite make out what they are saying. Then there is some rustling of clothes, shortly followed by female moans. You creep up to the stall door, open it just a tiny bit, just as far as you dare without drawing attention, and peek outside.'
-	*nl
 	'The couple has their backs turned to you, but you can see that her skirt is flipped up and his pants are pulled down - you can''t tell if the guy is a student or a teacher, but both seem possible. He has <<$rand_girl>> up against the sinks, partially bent over them, and he is fucking her from behind. Her face is nearly touching the mirror as he pounds her pussy doggystyle and she seems to be loving it. Afraid you might get caught, you close the door and move back to sit on the toilet.'
 	act 'Wait them out':
 		*clr & cla & *nl
@@ -1050,7 +1017,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'companyb2':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/voyanal.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. Soft murmured voices echo in the room, one male, the other female; you can''t quite make out what they are saying. Then there is some rustling of clothes, shortly followed by female moans. You creep up to the stall door, open it just a tiny bit, just as far as you dare without drawing attention, and peek outside.'
-	*nl
 	'The couple has their backs turned to you, but you can see that her skirt is flipped up and his pants are pulled down - you can''t tell if the guy is a student or a teacher but both seem possible. He has <<$rand_girl>> bent over near the bathroom window and she is looking back at him and in your direction - or at least she would be, if she didn''t have her eyes closed. You can tell that he is fucking her ass and she seems to be loving it, getting her tight little ass pounded right here in a school bathroom! Her soft moans of pleasure echo in the room and the sight is entrancing... but if she opened her eyes right now, you are pretty sure she''d see you! Afraid you might get caught, you close the door and move back to sit on the toilet.'
 	act 'Wait':
 		*clr & cla & *nl
@@ -1094,7 +1060,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'companyb3':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/couplesuck.jpg"></center>'
 	'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. Soft murmured voices echo in the room, one male, the other female; you can''t quite make out what they are saying. Then there is some rustling of clothes, shortly followed by female moans. You creep up to the stall door, open it just a tiny bit, just as far as you dare without drawing attention, and peek outside.'
-	*nl
 	'You see Arkadi with his pants around his ankles with Anushka squatting in front of him and sucking his dick. You watch for a moment and you''d like to watch even longer, but Arkadi keeps looking around, and in your direction! You duck back into the stall before you get spotted... and feel yourself getting very aroused from watching them, listening to them, even just knowing what they are doing. The sucking sounds stop and are quickly replaced by soft female moans of pleasure. Before your inner eye, you can see him fucking her over the sink, or perhaps against the wall? And is he fucking her pussy or ass?'
 	if pcs_horny < 70:
 		act 'Wait':
@@ -1151,7 +1116,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Join them':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/coupleturn.jpg"></center>'
 			'He lifts one of your legs off the ground and turns you sideways from him. Your leg is barely up in the air when you feel his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock penetrate your pussy. His dick is already wet and lubed up from Anushka''s pussy, but your own slit is absolutely soaked by now and it slides right in, all the way until you feel his balls come to rest against your lower lips. Your moans and the pleasure you''re feeling increase tenfold when he starts fucking you as hard and fast as he can, just like he was doing to Anushka, and you would be impressed with his stamina if you weren''t so occupied with enjoying this.'
-			*nl
 			'Anushka recovers in the meantime and steps up to you, kissing you, her tongue darting into your mouth while her hands squeezes your breast or slides down to rub your clit. Her passion is infectious - she seems to be still just as turned on as she was before her orgasm.'
 			$orgasm_txt = 'Between the two of them, your own climax builds up fast, and only a few seconds later, you are moaning into Anushka''s mouth and gripping Arkadi''s cock like a vice, twitching and shaking like crazy.'
 			$orgasm_or = 'custom'
@@ -1169,9 +1133,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Join them':
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/couplecum.jpg"></center>'
 				'He keeps going through your orgasm for some time longer; then, he suddenly reaches out, grabs Anushka by the hair and pulls her down. She drops to her knees and he instantly pulls his cock out of your pussy and shoves it straight into her mouth. She doesn''t seem to mind - on the contrary, she is blowing him like nothing makes her happier. Arkadi places a hand on your shoulder, pushing you down, and Anushka seems to concur, grabbing your arm and encouraging you to join her. You sink down to your knees beside her, and as soon as they touch the ground, he pulls out of her mouth and shoves his cock straight into yours. You do your best to follow Anushka''s example and give him the best blowjob you can while she sucks his balls, and after a minute or so, you switch roles.'
-				*nl
 				'Just when he pulls his dick out of her mouth again and you''ve already half-opened yours to take his cock back into it, he grunts and starts jerking himself rapidly. Only a few strokes later, spurts of hot cum land on both you and Anushka, covering your lips, face and even splattering over your breasts. Once he''s finished cumming, he sticks his dick between Anushka''s lips and she enthusiastically cleans him up. "Fuck, that was great. You two are some fine grade-A sluts." When his dick is sufficiently cleaned, Anushka starts licking the sperm off your face and body, and you return the favor to her. Once you have both lapped it all up, she starts kissing you again, as deep as before, swapping his sperm back and forth between your mouths.'
-				*nl
 				'He lights up a cigarette as he watches the two of you and gives his mostly limp cock a few rubs. "Shit, if you two keep that up, I will need another round!" he laughs, and the two of you smile as you continue making out. Finally, Anushka breaks the kiss and gets up, swallowing most of his sperm herself. You swallow the bit that is left in your mouth, then get up as well and, along with the others, start cleaning up and getting dressed. Just about the time you finish dressing, the bell rings. As Arkadi walks out without another word, Anushka grabs you roughly by the chin. "We''re going to have to do this again sometime, bitch. That was just too much fun." Before you can even respond to her comment, she French kisses you deeply before she walks out as well, shooting you a smoldering look over her shoulder while licking her lips. Her words and actions leave you breathless; that girl is a maelstrom of lust and passion and it''s hard not to get caught in it. You then remember the bell, hurry to straighten out your clothes and head to class, still feeling her lips on you.'
 				act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
@@ -1207,7 +1169,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Join them':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/boys/coupleturn.jpg"></center>'
 			'He lifts one of her legs off the ground and turns her sideways. Her leg is barely up in the air when his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock penetrates her pussy. You would be impressed with his stamina if you weren''t so occupied with enjoying this.'
-			*nl
 			'Anushka starts to scream as her body is rocked by muscle spasms, obviously having an orgasm. Arkadi just fucks her right through her orgasm, shortly after he pulls out and pushes her down. She quickly turns around and drops to her knees, opening her mouth and sticking out her tongue. He gives his cock a few jerks before his cum starts flying all over her face and in her mouth. Once he finishes, she sucks his dick, sucking out the last few drops of cum from him. Afterwards, as he gets dressed, she uses her fingers to clean her face, sucking the cum from her fingers before she gets dressed as well. As she finishes getting dressed, she looks over at you and winks. "Hope you enjoyed the show." The two of them then leave.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1222,9 +1183,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'companyb4':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/teachers1.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'After a couple of minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. Soft murmured voices echo in the room, one male, the other female; you can''t quite make out what they are saying. Then there is some rustling of clothes, shortly followed by female moans. You creep up to the stall door, open it just a tiny bit, just as far as you dare without drawing attention, and peek outside.'
-	*nl
-	'You see Mr. Kuznetsov standing near the sinks with his pants around his ankles while Miss Orlov down on her knees with her top pulled down. She has his cock in her mouth, sucking it for all she is worth. They both seem to be greatly enjoying themselves. You know you should really stop watching incase you get caught but how often do you get to see two of your teachers go at it?'
+	'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. Soft murmured voices echo in the room, one male, the other female; you can''t quite make out what they are saying. Then there is some rustling of clothes, shortly followed by female moans. You creep up to the stall door, open it just a tiny bit, just as far as you dare without drawing attention, and peek outside.'
+	'You see Mr. Kuznetsov standing near the sinks with his pants around his ankles while Miss Orlov is down on her knees with her top pulled down. She has his cock in her mouth, sucking it for all she is worth. They both seem to be greatly enjoying themselves. You know you should really stop watching incase you get caught but how often do you get to see two of your teachers go at it?'
 	act 'Watch':
 		*clr & cla
 		pcs_horny += 15
@@ -1234,7 +1194,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'companyb4':
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sex/teachers2.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'You decide to keep watching them. She sucks his cock for a while and neither seem to be aware of your presence as they are too engrossed in each other. Then he pulls her up, turns her around and pushes her forward. Bending her over the sinks, she pulls up her skirt while he pulls down her panties. He moves up and starts fucking her, slow but passionate at first but as she begins to moan louder, he picks up his pace and before long, he is pounding her like crazy.'
-		*nl
 		'It doesn''t take much longer until Miss Orlov is having a screaming orgasm. Mr. Kuznetsov is forced to put his hand over her mouth as she orgasms to muffle her cries of ecstasy. Some time after she finishes, he pulls out of her. She turns around and gets back on her knees and starts sucking his cock again. Moments later he starts grunting, obviously cumming in her mouth. Not a single drop escapes her mouth, she milks his cock of every last drop before removing it from her mouth.'
 		act 'Masturbate': gt 'gschool_boys_bathroom', 'masturbateb4'
 		if school_bunk = 0:
@@ -1295,7 +1254,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb1':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/caught.jpg"></center>'
 	'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you. You peek out and see one of your teachers, Mr. Vasilyev, standing at the mirror. You duck back into the stall, close the door as quietly as you can and sit down on the toilet, your heart beating like crazy, hoping he didn''t notice you. You hear his footsteps coming closer, closer... and stop, right outside your stall door.'
-	*nl
 	'"I saw you in the mirror, young lady." he says sternly as he pushes the door open. "What do you think you are doing in the boy''s room anyway? Skipping class?"'
 	if school_bunk = 1:'His eyes fall on the smoldering cigarette on the ground. His eyes narrow, "Smoking in school, I see. I really thought you were smarter than that Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 	'Mr. Vasilyev shakes his head. He looks more disappointed than angry. "Well come on, young lady. Get down to the principal''s office." He points in the direction of the bathroom door.'
@@ -1364,9 +1322,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb1':
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'
 					'You pick up the pace even more since you want him finish soon. "I''m about to cum!" he mutters weakly, as if trying to warn you, but you don''t care and suck him even harder. He starts grunting and you feel his dick throbbing in your mouth, when he suddenly pulls your head away, his hand in your hair firmly gripping you.'
-					*nl
 					'As soon his dick loudly pops out of your mouth, he jerks it a few times while pointing it at you. It soon starts spurting loads of hot cum out and the jets land all over your face, mostly around your mouth. When he finishes, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips and then shoves it back into your mouth, the sight of you covered in his cum emboldening him. You look up at him while you suck his cock clean, smiling around him as you feel him getting soft in your mouth. He then pulls out of your mouth and tucks his dick back into his pants.'
-					*nl
 					'Without a word, he walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see that he''s looking at you in the mirror. Finally, he smiles and says: "Feel free to cut class any time you like, <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''ll happily keep your secret." With a chuckle, he leaves - in fact, you think you can hear him whistling outside as he walks away.' 
 					'You go to the mirror yourself, clean yourself up and fix your hair. That wasn''t too bad, you think, and at least you have the rest of the period to yourself.'
 					if school_bunk = 0:
@@ -1404,17 +1360,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb1':
 					gs 'boyStat', 'A128'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtbj.jpg"></center>'
 					'You stroke his dick a few times until it is fully hard, then lean forward and start licking it; you lick up and down the shaft and run your tongue around the head, your eyes locked with his all the while before you smile at him and take his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth. You wrap your <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips tightly around his dick and start bobbing your head, stroking his cock with your lips, your tongue still making its rounds. He rests one hand on the top of your head, but he lets you completely control the action.'
-					*nl
 					'You caress and fondle his balls with one of your hands while the other strokes him in unison with your head''s movement. You increase your speed over time and take him as deep into your mouth as you can without gagging.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'dom'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'He enjoys your blowjob in silence.'
-					if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+					if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 						act 'Cum':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'
 							'You suck him for a little longer until he starts to moan and he pulls his dick out of your mouth. He holds his dick near your face, right in front of your mouth, and jerks it a couple of times. It starts spurting loads of hot cum out and the jets land all over your face, mostly around your mouth. When he finishes, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips and then shoves it back into your mouth, the sight of you covered in his cum emboldening him. You look up at him while you suck his cock clean, smiling around him as you feel him getting soft in your mouth. He pulls out of your mouth and tucks his dick back into his pants.'
-							*nl
 							'Without a word, he walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see that he''s giving you sideways glances. Finally, he smiles and says: "Feel free to cut class any time you like, <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''ll happily keep your secret."' 
 							'You smile back. "If I get ''punished'' like that every time I skip class, I will." He chuckles at that, shakes his head, then leaves the bathroom - you think you can hear him whistling outside as he walks away. That was amazing and you also have the rest of the period to yourself, even if you have his cum dripping down your face.'
 							gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A128', 1
@@ -1440,7 +1394,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb1':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtvag1.jpg"></center>'
 							    'Once the condom is in place, he rubs the tip of his dick against your pussy lips, making sure it is well lubricated, then gently pushes his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock inside you, causing you to gasp. His movements are slow and he is taking all the time in the world to work his way deeper into you, one of his hands rubbing your clit all the while. You moan in pleasure.'
-							    *nl
 							    'He might have been slow at first, but he''s steadily picking up the pace now that he is balls deep inside you; he stays gentle with you the whole time though and keeps stimulating your clit and occasionally kneads your breasts as well. You didn''t expect this to feel so good and cry out: "Oh God! Fuck me, sir! Fuck me harder!"'
 								'He then stops and pulls out of you. "Get up and bend over."'
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'dom'
@@ -1463,7 +1416,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb1':
 											*clr & cla
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'
 											'Your teacher pulls out of you and drags you off the toilet, gently pushing you down to your knees while he gets rid of the condom. He holding his dick near your face, right in front of your mouth, and jerks it a couple of times. It starts spurting loads of hot cum out and the jets land all over your face, mostly around your mouth. When he finishes, he rubs the tip of his dick against your lips and then shoves it back into your mouth, the sight of you covered in his cum emboldening him. You look up at him while you suck his cock clean, smiling around him as you feel him getting soft in your mouth. He pulls out of your mouth and tucks his dick back into his pants.'
-											*nl
 											'Without a word, he walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see that he''s giving you sideways glances. Finally, he smiles and says: "Feel free to cut class any time you like, <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''ll happily keep your secret."' 
 											'You smile back. "If I get ''punished'' like that every time I skip class, I will." He chuckles at that, shakes his head, then leaves the bathroom - you think you can hear him whistling outside as he walks away. That was amazing and you also have the rest of the period to yourself, even if you have his cum dripping down your face.'
 											gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A128', 1
@@ -1509,7 +1461,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'You shake your head. "No! I''m not your whore."'
-					'He laughs. "Suit yourself, maybe next time you will reconsider my kind offer." With that he drags you by the arm to the principal''s office.'
+					'He laughs. "Suit yourself, maybe next time you will reconsider my kind offer." With that, he drags you by the arm to the principal''s office.'
 					act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'ivanov_revenge'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1534,7 +1486,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'You shake your head. "No! I''m not your whore."'
 					'He laughs. "Suit yourself, maybe next time you will reconsider my kind offer." With that he drags you by the arm to the principal''s office.'
-					act 'Go to Principal''s Office': gt 'gschool_office', 'ivanov_revenge'
+					act 'Go to the principal''s Office': gt 'gschool_office', 'ivanov_revenge'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Refuse (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -1603,7 +1555,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtbj2.jpg"></center>'
 					'You have no control over what is happening and so, in the hopes of speeding this up, caress and fondle his balls with one of your hands while he fucks your head. "That''s right, you dirty little slut, take my cock! Gag on it!" He continues to say demeaning things like that as he jams his cock down your throat over and over again. Making you gag seems to be what he enjoys the most.'
-					*nl
 					'He picks up the pace even more, barely even giving you a moment to catch your breath anymore. Drool leaks out of your mouth, dripping down your chin, and tears are running down your cheeks. Without warning, he starts grunting and you feel his dick throbbing in your mouth before he suddenly jerks your head away, pulling your hair painfully in the process and twisting your neck slightly.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'deepthroat'
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -1611,9 +1562,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/teachercum.jpg"></center>'
 						'As soon his dick is out of your mouth, he jerks it a few times while pointing it at you. It starts spurting loads of hot cum out and the jets land all over your face, mostly around your mouth. Once the last spurt of sperm is out, he shoves his cock back into your mouth and you dutifully lick him clean, feeling him go limp in your mouth. He pulls out of your mouth and tucks his dick back into his pants.'
-						*nl
 						'Wordlessly, Mr. Ivanov walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see that he''s looking at you in the mirror. He gives you a cold smile. "Don''t think this will get me to cut you any slack in my class, <<$pcs_lastname>>. And don''t you <i>dare</i> skip my lessons. I''ll be seeing you soon." With that, he walks out of the bathroom.'
-						*nl
 						'Your throat is burning and you like Mr. Ivanov even less than ever before, you think to yourself as you watch him walk out with droplets of his cum run down your fave. At least you are also kind of glad you didn''t have to go the principal. You also have the rest of the period to yourself.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'face', 'A129', 1
@@ -1654,7 +1603,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 					$orgasm_or = 'no'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtbj.jpg"></center>'
 					'You do as you''re told and stroke his dick a few times until it is fully hard, then lean forward and start licking it; you lick up and down the shaft and run your tongue around the head while looking up at him to gauge his nonexistent reaction, before you take his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your mouth. You wrap your <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips tightly around his dick and start bobbing your head, stroking his cock with your lips, your tongue still making its rounds. He rests one hand on the top of your head, but he lets you control the action.'
-					*nl
 					'You caress and fondle his balls with one of your hands while the other strokes him in unison with your head''s movement. You increase your speed over time and take him as deep into your mouth as you can without gagging. He enjoys your blowjob in silence and after several minutes of this, he grabs you by the hair and roughly pulls you up and bends you over.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -1663,7 +1611,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 						Ivanov_toilet = 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtanal.jpg"></center>'
 						'Once you are bent over in the stall, Mr. Ivanov rubs his fingers against your pussy. When he notices that you''re relatively wet, he slips them inside, finger fucking you to lubricate his fingers with your juices. When he pulls his fingers out of you, he rubs them against your asshole and slips one of them inside your puckered hole. You moan in pleasure, with a little bit of pain mixed in, then louder when he adds a second finger and have to bite your lip and flinch a little when he shoves the third one. Mr. Ivanov gets your asshole lubed up and stretches it out a bit, and you doubt he''s doing it for the fun of it.'
-						*nl
 						'When he feels you are sufficiently prepared, he rubs the tip of his dick against your backdoor and uses one of his hands to spread your ass cheeks wide. Once he has your ass cheeks spread wide and his cock lined up, he shoves his <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> cock into your ass. You groan loudly in pleasure and pain. In a few uncomfortable strokes, he shoves his cock all the way into your bowels until he is balls deep inside. You cry out at the last stroke, the pain too intense to keep quiet, and he doesn''t pauses to give your ass a little time to adjust, he just begins to give you a proper hard fucking.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 4
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal_finger', 1,'lube'
@@ -1681,9 +1628,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'
 								'Next thing you know, you feel spurts of hot cum filling your ass. With a loud groan, he buries his cock balls deep up your ass. You feel his dick twitching as he blows his load deep inside of you. He pulls out of your gapping ass, you can feel his cum leaking out of you, as tucks his dick back into his pants.'
-								*nl
 								'Wordlessly, Mr. Ivanov walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see he is giving you sideways glances. He breaks his silence with a cruel smile. "We will be doing this again, <<$pcs_lastname>>. Next time I feel like it, I will keep you back after class and fuck that cute little ass of yours." he laughs and, without waiting for a reply from you, walks out of the bathroom.'
-								*nl
 								'You go to the mirror yourself and clean yourself up and fix your hair. Your ass and throat are burning and his ''promise'' still rings in your ears. You are also kind of glad you didn''t have to go the principal and you also have the rest of the period to yourself.'
 								gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A129', 1
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1737,9 +1682,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2_slut':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'
 						'After what feels like forever he finally gives one more thrust burying himself balls deep in your ass. You feel his dick start twitching, followed by the sensation of his hot cum filling your bowels. Once the last squirt of cum fills you, he pulls his dick out of you. As he puts his dick away you can feel his hot cum leaking out of your gaping asshole.'
-						*nl
 						'Wordlessly, Mr. Ivanov walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see he is giving you sideways glances. He breaks his silence with a cruel smile. "We will be doing this again, <<$pcs_lastname>>. Next time I feel like it, I will keep you after class and fuck that cute little ass of yours." he laughs and, without waiting for a reply from you, walks out of the bathroom.'
-						*nl
 						'You go to the mirror yourself and clean yourself up and fix your hair. Your ass and throat are burning and his ''promise'' still rings in your ears. You are also kind of glad you didn''t have to go the principal and you also have the rest of the period to yourself.'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A129', 1
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1784,9 +1727,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caughtb2_slut':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/serafim/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'
 								'After what feels like an eternity, he finally gives one more thrust and buries himself balls deep in your ass. You feel his dick start twitching, followed by the sensation of his hot cum filling your bowels. Once the last squirt of cum fills you, he pulls his dick out of you. As he puts his dick away you can feel his hot cum leaking out of your gapping asshole.'
-								*nl
 								'Wordlessly, Mr. Ivanov walks over to one of the sinks and washes his hands; he seems to be ignoring you, but you can see he is giving you sideways glances. He breaks his silence with a cruel smile. "We will be doing this again, <<$pcs_lastname>>. Next time I feel like it, I will keep you back after class and fuck that cute little ass of yours." He laughs and, without waiting for a reply from you, walks out of the bathroom.'
-								*nl
 								'You go to the mirror yourself and clean yourself up and fix your hair. Your ass and throat are burning and his ''promise'' still rings in your ears. You are also kind of glad you didn''t have to go the principal and you also have the rest of the period to yourself.'
 								gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A129', 1
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1865,7 +1806,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boy7':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon">Boy''s bathroom</font></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/igor/sex/school/boysroom4.jpg"></center>'
-						'Once he is down on his knees, you push him forward so he is on all fours before you kneel behind him and slip the dildo back into his ass. It easily slides in and you start fucking him again. He moans in pleasure and starts to buck back against you, encouraging you to fuck him harder and deeper as he starts jerking himself off.'
+						'Once he''s down on his knees, you push him forward so he''s on all fours before you kneel behind him and slip the dildo back into his ass. It easily slides in and you start fucking him again. He moans in pleasure and starts to buck back against you, encouraging you to fuck him harder and deeper as he starts jerking himself off.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap_give', 5, 'dom'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Continue':

locations/gschool_break.qsrc

@@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 		gs 'gschool_break', 'restroom_actions'
-	elseif girls_event_rand = 15 and stat['virgin'] = 0:
+	elseif girls_event_rand = 15 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 		menu_off = 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/sweettalk1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -291,7 +291,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girls_restroom_events':
 			'"Okay, I was just asking..." you say in response, but she just ignores you and walks out.'
 			gs 'gschool_break', 'restroom_actions'
 		end
-	elseif girls_event_rand = 16 and stat['virgin'] = 0 and uniform_steal_day ! daystart:
+	elseif girls_event_rand = 16 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0 and uniform_steal_day ! daystart:
 		menu_off = 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/girlspose1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1119,7 +1119,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'smoke2':
 														'She reaches down and pulls you up into a kneeling position. She forces you to open your mouth and sticks her toes in your mouth. "You''re not a bad little girl. You''re just a dirty little girl. Now clean my feet." She makes you suck on her toes and lick both of her feet.'
 														gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2, 'sub'
 														gs 'stat'
-														if grupTipe = 3 or grupTipe = 5 or stat['virgin'] = 1:
+														if grupTipe = 3 or grupTipe = 5 or stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 															'She finally lets go of you and tosses you back your shirt. "Get dressed and get out before you make things worse for yourself." You gather up your shirt and walk out of the classroom. You button up your shirt with your ass still stinging.'
 															act 'Leave the restroom': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 														else

locations/gschool_coolkid_chats.qsrc

@@ -761,11 +761,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bella':
 		if npc_rel['A22'] >= 80:
 			'"Are you going to do something with your life or are you planning on being a sex toy for boys to use forever?" Bella asks.'
 			'"God, you sound like my mother..." you reply unimpressed.'
-			'"You need Jesus. Literally." Bella rolls her eyes and shakes her head before walking away.'                 
+			'"You need Jesus. Literally." She rolls her eyes and shakes her head before walking away.'                 
 		elseif npc_rel['A22'] <= 20:
 			'"Hey Bella, got a minute?" you ask.'
 			'"Me? A minute? For you? Do I look like I want an STD, you slut?" she scoffs.'
-			'"It''s not that bad. It only hurts when I pee." you try to snap back at her.' 
+			'"It''s not that bad. It only hurts when I pee," you try to snap back at her.' 
 			'She sighs while giving you a look of disgust. She then rolls her eyes and walks away, murmuring something about you that don''t quite hear.'
 		else
 			'"Oh, it''s you again." Bella sighs. "Shoo, slut!" she gestures you to leave.'
@@ -774,16 +774,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bella':
 	elseif grupTipe = 1 or grupTipe = 2:
 		if npc_rel['A22'] >= 60:
 			'"Come here, you won''t believe what happened!" Bella says while waving you over.'
-			'"What? Tell me." you reply, intrigued.'
+			'"What? Tell me!" you reply, intrigued.'
 			'"You know that cafe at the train station, right?" she asks in a brisk manner.'
 			'"Uhmh..." you nod back, knowing your mother works there.'
-			'"The old fart that works suggested that Irina should blow him!? Can you believe it! Just because her card got rejected. What a creep!"'
+			'"The old fart that works there suggested that Irina should blow him! Can you believe that?! Just because her card got rejected. What a creep!"'
 			'"We vowed never to go back there, like ever! Besides, there''s a nice cafe in Pushkin where we sometimes hang out. You should join us sometime." she adds as the two of you talk. Well she talks, mostly about other problems she''s had with people more than anything.'   
 		elseif npc_rel['A22'] <= 20:
 			'"What do you want?" Bella arrogantly asks as you approach her.'
 			'"I just wanted to ask you about this store in the city. I heard..."'
-			'Before you''re able to continue she cuts you off and looks at her pedicure with a sigh. "Listen..." Before she can answer, Irina whispers something in her ear and both of their eyes evil up.'
-			'"You know, actually, why you don''t come with us?" Bella quickly suggests. "Saturday midday at the city station. That''s good for you, right Irina?" Irina just smiles.'
+			'Before you''re able to continue, she cuts you off and looks at her pedicure with a sigh. "Listen..." Before she can answer, Irina whispers something in her ear and both of their eyes evil up.'
+			'"Actually, why you don''t come with us?" Bella quickly suggests. "Saturday midday at the city station. That''s good for you, right Irina?" Irina just smiles.'
 			'"See? Settled." Bella smiles and gives you a hug before going on her way.'
 		else
 			'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, there''s something I''ve wanted to ask you for a long time now." Bella says in an intrigued tone.'
@@ -796,7 +796,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bella':
 		if npc_rel['A22'] >= 70:
 			'You see Bella waving at you to get your attention. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, can I take a quick look at your notes for the next class, thanks." She takes your notebook before you can even answer.'
 			'"Hello to you too. Of course, what are friends for?" you reply.'
-			'"Yeah, I got home really late. Hey, you''ll be going to Uni after graduation, right?" she keeps the conversation going while taking photos with her phone.'  
+			'"Yeah, I got home really late. Hey, you''ll be going to uni after graduation, right?" She keeps the conversation going while taking photos with her phone.'  
 			'"I''m thinking of it. Of course, it would be interesting but which one? There''s so many different things to consider studying as well, you know."' 
 			'"Yeah, getting out of this shithouse would be nice," Bella chuckles while pointing over her shoulder at some gopniks leaving the bathroom followed by Petia, whose his hair is visibly wet. You talk for a bit as she snaps photos of your notes. Once she''s done, she smiles at you and walks away.'   
 		elseif npc_rel['A22'] <= 20:
@@ -851,7 +851,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cherleading_notice':
 	'As you walk into the cafeteria, Bella and Stasya gesture towards you to get your attention.'
 	if gruptipe = 1:
 		'"Hey sweetie, we were just by Albina''s table and..."'
-		'Bella trails off when she notices Natasha walking towards the table. Bella flutters her eyelashes as she turns towards her. "Oh my God, I love your shirt! Where did you get it?"'
+		'Bella trails off when she notices Natasha walking towards the table and flutters her eyelashes as she turns towards her. "Oh my god, I love your shirt! Where did you get it?"'
 		'Natasha isn''t sure how to react. "I-It was my mom''s... From the ''90s." she awkwardly mumbles.'
 		'Bella smiles sweetly. "Vintage, how adorable."'
 		act 'Nod in agreement':
@@ -876,7 +876,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cherleading_notice':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/bella/notice/bella_stasya1.jpg"></center>'
 			'"Hey, we were just by Albina''s table and..."'
-			'Bella trails off when she notices Natasha walking towards the table. Bella flutters her eyelashes as she turns towards her. "Oh my God, I love your shirt! Where did you get it?"'
+			'Bella trails off when she notices Natasha walking towards the table and flutters her eyelashes as she turns towards her. "Oh my god, I love your shirt! Where did you get it?"'
 			'Natasha isn''t sure how to react. "I-It was my mom''s... From the ''90s." she awkwardly mumbles.'
 			'Bella smiles sweetly. "Vintage, how adorable."'
 			act 'Nod in agreement':
@@ -1400,7 +1400,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'irina':
 			'"I''m sure Feofan or Petka would be more than happy to help you out," you gently remind her.'
 			'A sly smile spreads across Irina''s face. "You''re totally right <<$pcs_nickname>>! You know me so well."'
 		elseif npc_rel['A1'] <= 20:
-			'You see Irina sweet talking Artem for some reason, probably to do her homework. How can someone so charming be so manipulative?!'
+			'You see Irina sweet talking Artem for some reason, probably to do her homework. How can someone so charming be so manipulative?'
 			'"Grow a pair, Artem! She''s just using you!" you shout at them.'
 			'"What a rude girl <<$pcs_nickname>> is! I think you have a wonderful pair..." Irina doesn''t let your attempt at intervention bother her, even taking it further and letting her hand slide over Artem''s crotch. "Oops, I''m so clumsy! You''ll help me, right?" You can see the growing bulge in his pants as his face turns bright red.'
 			'Once he agrees, she smiles and walks over to you. "You''re out of your league, bitch! Never interrupt me again or you''ll regret it!" she hisses while walking past you in an intimidating manner.' 
@@ -1434,7 +1434,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'irina':
 		elseif npc_rel['A1'] <= 20:
 			'"Hey Irina, about the next class.." you try to inquire.'	
 			'If you ever try talking to me again, I''ll make sure the second hand blow up doll Lesco and Petia use in their threesome is more popular than you! God, I can''t have even five minutes to myself without some loser trying to talk to me!" she mumbles in an angry tone as she walks away.'
-			'Then she turns and walks away from you.'
 		else	
 			'"You don’t have any friends, do you?" Irina asks with a stern, unimpressed look. "And you won''t ever find any either." She then turns around and ignores you.'
 		end

locations/gschool_events.qsrc

@@ -1054,30 +1054,44 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_events':
 	elseif break_rand = 25:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/makeupgirl.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you walk down the hallway, you see Bella sitting on one of the window ledges, ignoring her classmates as she touches up her makeup with her compact. You admit she is pretty and always looks nice, but she is such a snob, acting like she is better than everyone else.'
-	elseif break_rand = 26:
+	elseif break_rand = 26 and christinaQW['fight'] < 1 and christinaQW['blackmail'] < 2:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nastymessage.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you walk down the hallway, you see Christina writing a nasty message on a locker. Yours. Again. It took forever to get it off last time!'
-		act 'Ignore it': gt 'gschool_events', 'leave_break_events2'
-		act 'Avoid eye contact':
-			menu_off = 1
-			christinaQW['bully'] += 2
-			*clr & cla
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nastymessage2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Keeping your eyes on the floor, you try to walk by but she notices you.'
-			'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>. Somebody took the artwork off your locker, so I added it back for you. No need to thank me."'
-			'You hurry away before she does anything else.'
-			gs 'gschool_events', 'leave_break_events'
-		end
-		act 'Yell at Christina':
-			menu_off = 1
-			christinaQW['bully'] -= 2
-			*clr & cla
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big18.jpg"></center>'
-			'You head straight at her and yell "What the fuck, Christina!" Other kids in the hallway start drifting in your direction, sensing a fight is about to happen.'
-			'"Oh, hey <<$pcs_nickname>>. Somebody took the artwork off your locker, so I added it back for you. No need to thank me." She gives you a dangerous look despite the calm tone in her voice.'
-			'Curling your hands into fists makes her drop her marker and do the same, but before either of you can throw a punch a teachers voice calls out, demanding to know what''s happening.'
-			'Christina melts into the crowd that''s rapidly dispersing, a dark promise in her eyes.'
-			gs 'gschool_events', 'leave_break_events'
+		if christinaQW['subpath'] > 1:
+			'As you walk down the hallway, you see Christina writing stuff on your locker. You know your place now, so you walk up to her, keeping your eyes on the floor.'
+			'"Hi Pet. Somebody took the artwork off your locker, so I added it back for you. Now thank me, and then tell me why the last one was removed."'
+			act 'Thank her':
+				menu_off = 1
+				*clr & cla
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nastymessage2.jpg"></center>'
+				'Thank you, Christina. The janitor must have removed it. I left it there so others knew who I belong to.'
+				'She gives you a long look. "Hmmm. I will accept it this time. If it happens again, I am going to have to think you are lying, and punish you." Giving you a smirk, she says "Later, Pet."'
+				'You hurry off to your next class.'
+				gs 'gschool_events', 'leave_break_events'
+			end
+		else
+			'As you walk down the hallway, you see Christina writing a nasty message on a locker. Yours. Again. It took forever to get it off last time!'
+			act 'Ignore it': gt 'gschool_events', 'leave_break_events2'
+			act 'Avoid eye contact':
+				menu_off = 1
+				christinaQW['bully'] += 2
+				*clr & cla
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nastymessage2.jpg"></center>'
+				'Keeping your eyes on the floor, you try to walk by but she notices you.'
+				'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>. Somebody took the artwork off your locker, so I added it back for you. No need to thank me."'
+				'You hurry away before she does anything else.'
+				gs 'gschool_events', 'leave_break_events'
+			end
+			act 'Yell at Christina':
+				menu_off = 1
+				christinaQW['bully'] -= 2
+				*clr & cla
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big18.jpg"></center>'
+				'You head straight at her and yell "What the fuck, Christina!" Other kids in the hallway start drifting in your direction, sensing a fight is about to happen.'
+				'"Oh, hey <<$pcs_nickname>>. Somebody took the artwork off your locker, so I added it back for you. No need to thank me." She gives you a dangerous look despite the calm tone in her voice.'
+				'Curling your hands into fists makes her drop her marker and do the same, but before either of you can throw a punch a teachers voice calls out, demanding to know what''s happening.'
+				'Christina melts into the crowd that''s rapidly dispersing, a dark promise in her eyes.'
+				gs 'gschool_events', 'leave_break_events'
+			end
 		end
 	elseif break_rand = 27:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/nopanties.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1182,190 +1196,172 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool_events':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
-	break_rand = rand(1,32)
-	act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
-	if break_rand = 1:
-		cla
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/alyona1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you walk down the hallway, you see Alyona squating on the floor next to her locker with a bottle of vodka in her hands. She starts to open it.'
-		act 'Ignore her and leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
-		act 'Talk to her':
-			*clr & cla
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/alyona2.jpg"></center>'
-			if grupTipe = 4 or npc_rel['A143'] > 60:
-				'You walk up to her. "Hey, what''s up Alyona?"'
-				'She gives you a dirty look. "Just hanging out. Why?"'
-				'You reply. "No reason. I just wanted to say hi."'
-				'She shrugs a bit as she takes a long pull of the bottle, before offering it to you. "Want a drink?"'
-
-				gs 'willpower', 'drink', 'resist'
-				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-					act 'Refuse the drink (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
-						*clr & cla
-						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
-						gs 'stat'
-						grupvalue[4] -= 1
-						npc_rel['A143'] -= 2
-						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/alyona2.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head and don''t take the offer bottle. "No thanks."'
-						'She gives you a sour look. "Then fuck off and get your pussy ass out of here." Not sure what to say about that and not wishing to piss her off more, you decide to leave her alone.'
-						act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
-					end
-				else
-					act 'Refuse the drink (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
-				end
-
-				act 'Take a drink':
-					*clr & cla
-					gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'vodka', 1
-					grupvalue[4] += 1
-					npc_rel['A143'] += 1
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/drinking/alcohol.jpg"></center>'
-					'You take the offered bottle and take a swig of it yourself. It burns as it goes down. This is some of the cheapest vodka you have ever tasted. Coughing a bit, you hand it back to her and she smiles. "Fuck that''s strong!"'
-					'She takes another long swig from the bottle. "Well I don''t drink this shit for the taste, but for the effect." She offers you the bottle again.'
+	if christinaQW['subpath'] = 0 and christinaQW['blackmail'] = 0 and christinaQW['fight'] = 0 and rand(1, 4) = 4:
+		gt 'Zvereva_events', 'christina_bu_2'
+	else
+		break_rand = rand(1,32)
+		act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+		if break_rand = 1:
+			cla
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/alyona1.jpg"></center>'
+			'As you walk down the hallway, you see Alyona squatting on the floor next to her locker with a bottle of vodka in her hands. She starts to open it.'
+			act 'Ignore her and leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+			act 'Talk to her':
+				*clr & cla
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/alyona2.jpg"></center>'
+				if grupTipe = 4 or npc_rel['A143'] > 60:
+					'You walk up to her. "Hey, what''s up Alyona?"'
+					'She gives you a dirty look. "Just hanging out. Why?"'
+					'You reply. "No reason. I just wanted to say hi."'
+					'She shrugs a bit as she takes a long pull of the bottle, before offering it to you. "Want a drink?"'
 
 					gs 'willpower', 'drink', 'resist'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-						act 'Refuse another drink (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+						act 'Refuse the drink (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 							gs 'stat'
-							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/alyona3.jpg"></center>'
-							'You shake your head and don''t take the offered bottle. "No thanks, I need to be able to walk home."'
-							'She laughs a bit at that and takes another long swig herself. The two of you talk as she drinks. Well, you talk and she drinks. Before long, she is wasted. She puts the bottle away and falls on her ass as she starts to get up. You offer to help, but she pushes you away. "Fuck off, I don''t need any help!"'
-							'You back off and let her get up on her own, but it takes her a couple of tries. Once up, she turns and stumbles for the exit, not sure what to do. You head out after her, at least making sure she gets outside in one piece.'
+							grupvalue[4] -= 1
+							npc_rel['A143'] -= 2
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/alyona2.jpg"></center>'
+							'You shake your head and don''t take the offer bottle. "No thanks."'
+							'She gives you a sour look. "Then fuck off and get your pussy ass out of here." Not sure what to say about that and not wishing to piss her off more, you decide to leave her alone.'
 							act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 						end
 					else
-						act 'Refuse another drink (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+						act 'Refuse the drink (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 					end
 
-					act 'Drink more':
+					act 'Take a drink':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'vodka', 1
 						grupvalue[4] += 1
-						npc_rel['A143'] += 2
-						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/alyona3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You take the offered bottle and take another swig as well. It burns a little less this time. "If I drink much more of this I won''t be able to walk home."'
-						'She laughs a bit at that and take another long swig herself. The two of you talk and drink. Well, you talk while she drinks even more than you do. Before long, you are both wasted. She puts the bottle away and falls on her ass as she starts to get up. You offer to help, but she pushes you away. She then sighs and takes your hand as you pull her to her feet. The two of you stumble outside together supporting one another. After taking a breath of fresh air, you feel a little better.'
-						'She stumbles away but calls back. "I gotta go, see you around <<$pcs_nickname>>!", leaving you drunk and alone.'
-						act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+						npc_rel['A143'] += 1
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/drinking/alcohol.jpg"></center>'
+						'You take the offered bottle and take a swig of it yourself. It burns as it goes down. This is some of the cheapest vodka you have ever tasted. Coughing a bit, you hand it back to her and she smiles. "Fuck that''s strong!"'
+						'She takes another long swig from the bottle. "Well I don''t drink this shit for the taste, but for the effect." She offers you the bottle again.'
+
+						gs 'willpower', 'drink', 'resist'
+						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
+							act 'Refuse another drink (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+								*clr & cla
+								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
+								gs 'stat'
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/alyona3.jpg"></center>'
+								'You shake your head and don''t take the offered bottle. "No thanks, I need to be able to walk home."'
+								'She laughs a bit at that and takes another long swig herself. The two of you talk as she drinks. Well, you talk and she drinks. Before long, she is wasted. She puts the bottle away and falls on her ass as she starts to get up. You offer to help, but she pushes you away. "Fuck off, I don''t need any help!"'
+								'You back off and let her get up on her own, but it takes her a couple of tries. Once up, she turns and stumbles for the exit, not sure what to do. You head out after her, at least making sure she gets outside in one piece.'
+								act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+							end
+						else
+							act 'Refuse another drink (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+						end
+
+						act 'Drink more':
+							*clr & cla
+							gs 'drugs', 'alcohol', 'vodka', 1
+							grupvalue[4] += 1
+							npc_rel['A143'] += 2
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/alyona3.jpg"></center>'
+							'You take the offered bottle and take another swig as well. It burns a little less this time. "If I drink much more of this I won''t be able to walk home."'
+							'She laughs a bit at that and take another long swig herself. The two of you talk and drink. Well, you talk while she drinks even more than you do. Before long, you are both wasted. She puts the bottle away and falls on her ass as she starts to get up. You offer to help, but she pushes you away. She then sighs and takes your hand as you pull her to her feet. The two of you stumble outside together supporting one another. After taking a breath of fresh air, you feel a little better.'
+							'She stumbles away but calls back. "I gotta go, see you around <<$pcs_nickname>>!", leaving you drunk and alone.'
+							act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+						end
 					end
+				else
+					'You walk up to her. "Hey what''s up Alyona?"'
+					'She gives you a dirty look. "What the fuck do you want skank?"'
+					'Taken a bit aback by her comment you reply. "Nothing I just wanted to say hi."'
+					'"Well fuck off bitch before you get hurt!" She sounds serious and you know she has a rep for carrying a knife and not being afraid of using it, so you decide not to press the issue and leave.'
+					act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 				end
-			else
-				'You walk up to her. "Hey what''s up Alyona?"'
-				'She gives you a dirty look. "What the fuck do you want skank?"'
-				'Taken a bit aback by her comment you reply. "Nothing I just wanted to say hi."'
-				'"Well fuck off bitch before you get hurt!" She sounds serious and you know she has a rep for carrying a knife and not being afraid of using it, so you decide not to press the issue and leave.'
-				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 			end
-		end
-	elseif break_rand = 2:
-		cla
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/andsta1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you walk down the hallway, you see Andrey leaning against the lockers, talking to Stasya as she is getting something out of her locker. Nothing special here, just a couple acting like a couple.'
-		act 'Ignore them and leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
-		act 'Watch':
-			*clr & cla
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/andsta2.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you watch, Andrey steps closer, saying something to her softly that you can''t make out while putting one hand on the back of her neck. She puts her hands against his chest as if to push him away, but after a moment they start kissing passionately. His hands begin to roam over her body.'
-			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
-			gs 'arousal', 'end'
-			gs 'stat'
+		elseif break_rand = 2:
+			cla
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/andsta1.jpg"></center>'
+			'As you walk down the hallway, you see Andrey leaning against the lockers, talking to Stasya as she is getting something out of her locker. Nothing special here, just a couple acting like a couple.'
 			act 'Ignore them and leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
-			act 'Keep Watching':
+			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/andsta3.jpg"></center>'
-				'Within a few moments, Andrey has pushed Stasya''s shirt up, exposing her perky breasts for anyone to see. His right hand slides up her legs and starts rubbing her pussy through her panties. Things start to get more heated before she says something to him, then takes him by the hand and the two of them quickly duck into one of the empty classrooms, closing the door. You hear the lock slide in place. Well there goes spying on them, even if you wanted to. It is nice seeing a passionate couple for a change. You head for the exit.'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/andsta2.jpg"></center>'
+				'As you watch, Andrey steps closer, saying something to her softly that you can''t make out while putting one hand on the back of her neck. She puts her hands against his chest as if to push him away, but after a moment they start kissing passionately. His hands begin to roam over her body.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+				act 'Ignore them and leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+				act 'Keep Watching':
+					*clr & cla
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/andsta3.jpg"></center>'
+					'Within a few moments, Andrey has pushed Stasya''s shirt up, exposing her perky breasts for anyone to see. His right hand slides up her legs and starts rubbing her pussy through her panties. Things start to get more heated before she says something to him, then takes him by the hand and the two of them quickly duck into one of the empty classrooms, closing the door. You hear the lock slide in place. Well there goes spying on them, even if you wanted to. It is nice seeing a passionate couple for a change. You head for the exit.'
+					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
+					gs 'arousal', 'end'
+					gs 'stat'
+					act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+				end
 			end
-		end
-	elseif break_rand = 3:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/braflash.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you walk down the hallway, you see several of the gopnik boys giving Paulina a bit of a hard time. She flips them off and shoves the closer ones away. Before she walks off, she flips up her shirt to flash them her bra and laughs at their reaction before walking away, the boys calling her a tease as she does.'
-		gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 1
-		gs 'arousal', 'end'
-		gs 'stat'
-	elseif break_rand = 4:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/nakedgirl' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you walk down the hallway, you are greeted by an unusual sight. A girl from your brother''s class naked, walking the school hallway. When she sees you, she lets out a squeal and runs off before you can ask her what she is doing. Not feeling like trying to chase a naked girl around school and since it''s really not your business anyways, you continue on your way.'
-		gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5
-		gs 'arousal', 'end'
-		gs 'stat'
-	elseif break_rand = 5:
-		cla
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/nushflash1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you walk down the hallway you are greeted by an unusual sight. Anushka naked. Well maybe it''s not that unusual, but you don''t typically see her naked in the school hallway.'
-		gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5, 'unknown'
-		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Ignore her and leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
-		act 'Ask her whats going on':
-			*clr & cla
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/nushflash2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You walk up to her and as you do, she turns to face you, giving you a full view of everything she has. "What''s up <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
-			'You smile at how casual she is about everything. "You tell me! I was about to ask you the same thing."'
-			'She smiles, obviously knowing what you mean and replies. "Oh you know, same old same old." she says as she gets dressed.'
-			'You just nod. What else are you suppose to say? Once fully dressed, she adds "Well I need to go, see you around." and she turns and heads out.'
+		elseif break_rand = 3:
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/braflash.jpg"></center>'
+			'As you walk down the hallway, you see several of the gopnik boys giving Paulina a bit of a hard time. She flips them off and shoves the closer ones away. Before she walks off, she flips up her shirt to flash them her bra and laughs at their reaction before walking away, the boys calling her a tease as she does.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 1
+			gs 'arousal', 'end'
+			gs 'stat'
+		elseif break_rand = 4:
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/nakedgirl' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
+			'As you walk down the hallway, you are greeted by an unusual sight. A girl from your brother''s class naked, walking the school hallway. When she sees you, she lets out a squeal and runs off before you can ask her what she is doing. Not feeling like trying to chase a naked girl around school and since it''s really not your business anyways, you continue on your way.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
-		end
-	elseif break_rand = 6:
-		cla
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/onlypanties.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you walk down the hallway you are greeted by an unusual sight. Natasha frantically trying to open her locker while only wearing panties.'
-		gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5, 'unknown'
-		gs 'arousal', 'end'
-		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Ignore her and leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
-		act 'Ask her whats going on':
-			*clr & cla
-			npc_rel['A16'] += 1
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/onlypanties.jpg"></center>'
-			'You walk up to her and as you do, she glances at you and blushes a deep red. "What''s going on? Where are your clothes?" you ask.'
-			'If anything, she blushes even more. "Nothing." she replies at first and then, noticing that you don''t believe her, hastely says "Christina took them. I owed her some money and she took my clothes as interest." and opens her locker. You nod, knowing Christina can be a real bully.'
-			'"You need any help?" you ask.'
-			'She shakes her head as she pulls out a gym bag and puts on her gym clothes. "Thanks, but I got it. Anyways, see you around." She finishes getting dressed then hurries away, likely to run home.'
-			act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
-		end
-	elseif break_rand = 7 and soniaPS >= 3:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/sonialeash.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you walk down the hallway you are greeted by an unusual sight. Sonia down on all fours crawling along, a collar around her neck with a leash attached to it. Vitek holds onto the leash, walking Sonia like a dog with several other gopniks walking along with them. The boys are making crude jokes about Sonia being "their little bitch" and how after the walk, they are going to show her "a real good time". Sonia keeps her head down while a few of the gopniks look at at you as they pass. Knowing you couldn''t do anything about it even if you wanted to, you go on your way.'
-	elseif break_rand = 8:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/streakers.jpg"></center>'
-		'The hallways are almost completely empty as you leave school, but then you hear giggling. You look up just in time to see two naked girls run by and up the stairs to the second floor of the school. You are fairly certain it was Anushka and Alyona, because who else would it be? With the little show over, you head out.'
-		gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5
-		gs 'arousal', 'end'
-		gs 'stat'
-	elseif break_rand = 9:
-		*clr & cla
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/strip1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You''re running a bit late leaving school and the hallways are deserted. Or so you thought at first, as you hear some voices down one of the corridors. You slow down and then peek around the corner. You see several of the jock boys and Lariska, who seems unsure about something as you hear the boys encouraging her to give them a peek and show off her great body. She glances up and down the hallway, obviously afraid of being seen, but also just as obviously about to give into peer pressure.'
-		act 'Ignore what''s happening and leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
-		gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
-		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Intervene (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+		elseif break_rand = 5:
+			cla
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/nushflash1.jpg"></center>'
+			'As you walk down the hallway you are greeted by an unusual sight. Anushka naked. Well maybe it''s not that unusual, but you don''t typically see her naked in the school hallway.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5, 'unknown'
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Ignore her and leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+			act 'Ask her whats going on':
 				*clr & cla
-				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
-				npc_rel['A13'] += 5
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/nushflash2.jpg"></center>'
+				'You walk up to her and as you do, she turns to face you, giving you a full view of everything she has. "What''s up <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
+				'You smile at how casual she is about everything. "You tell me! I was about to ask you the same thing."'
+				'She smiles, obviously knowing what you mean and replies. "Oh you know, same old same old." she says as she gets dressed.'
+				'You just nod. What else are you suppose to say? Once fully dressed, she adds "Well I need to go, see you around." and she turns and heads out.'
+				gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5
+				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/strip1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You decide to give her an out and head right for Lariska. "There you are! You ready to go?" you ask her.'
-				'For a moment she seems confused, but with a final look at the boys, she nods quickly. "Yes." She smiles to the boys as the two you head out. She leans over to you and quietly says "Thanks."'
-				'The boys grumble a bit as the two of you walk off, but they go their own way as well. Once outside, Lariska thanks you again and then hurries off.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 			end
-		else
-			act 'Intervene (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
-		end
-		act 'Watch':
+		elseif break_rand = 6:
+			cla
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/onlypanties.jpg"></center>'
+			'As you walk down the hallway you are greeted by an unusual sight. Natasha frantically trying to open her locker while only wearing panties.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5, 'unknown'
+			gs 'arousal', 'end'
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Ignore her and leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+			act 'Ask her whats going on':
+				*clr & cla
+				npc_rel['A16'] += 1
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/onlypanties.jpg"></center>'
+				'You walk up to her and as you do, she glances at you and blushes a deep red. "What''s going on? Where are your clothes?" you ask.'
+				'If anything, she blushes even more. "Nothing." she replies at first and then, noticing that you don''t believe her, hastely says "Christina took them. I owed her some money and she took my clothes as interest." and opens her locker. You nod, knowing Christina can be a real bully.'
+				'"You need any help?" you ask.'
+				'She shakes her head as she pulls out a gym bag and puts on her gym clothes. "Thanks, but I got it. Anyways, see you around." She finishes getting dressed then hurries away, likely to run home.'
+				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+			end
+		elseif break_rand = 7 and soniaPS >= 3:
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/sonialeash.jpg"></center>'
+			'As you walk down the hallway you are greeted by an unusual sight. Sonia down on all fours crawling along, a collar around her neck with a leash attached to it. Vitek holds onto the leash, walking Sonia like a dog with several other gopniks walking along with them. The boys are making crude jokes about Sonia being "their little bitch" and how after the walk, they are going to show her "a real good time". Sonia keeps her head down while a few of the gopniks look at at you as they pass. Knowing you couldn''t do anything about it even if you wanted to, you go on your way.'
+		elseif break_rand = 8:
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/streakers.jpg"></center>'
+			'The hallways are almost completely empty as you leave school, but then you hear giggling. You look up just in time to see two naked girls run by and up the stairs to the second floor of the school. You are fairly certain it was Anushka and Alyona, because who else would it be? With the little show over, you head out.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5
+			gs 'arousal', 'end'
+			gs 'stat'
+		elseif break_rand = 9:
 			*clr & cla
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/strip2.jpg"></center>'
-			'After a few moments, they encourage her to take off her jacket. Well it''s just her jacket, nothing to it. She seems unsure but after one more quick glance around, she pulls off her jacket, smiling as the boys whistle and compliment her. She seems to be a little more OK with it since the boys are complimenting her so much. Then they start encouraging her to show them her underwear.'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/strip1.jpg"></center>'
+			'You''re running a bit late leaving school and the hallways are deserted. Or so you thought at first, as you hear some voices down one of the corridors. You slow down and then peek around the corner. You see several of the jock boys and Lariska, who seems unsure about something as you hear the boys encouraging her to give them a peek and show off her great body. She glances up and down the hallway, obviously afraid of being seen, but also just as obviously about to give into peer pressure.'
 			act 'Ignore what''s happening and leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -1383,15 +1379,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool_events':
 			else
 				act 'Intervene (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end
-			act 'Keep Watching':
+			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/strip3.jpg"></center>'
-				'Again she hesitates, obviously a bit unsure but the boys keep encouraging her, pointing out that no one is around and it is just her underwear and that it covers as much as the bikini they have seen her in anyways. After a few more glances around, she unbuttons her shirt and takes it off, then her skirt, leaving her standing in front of them in her underwear, blushing as the boys really compliment her. You can''t tell if she is blushing from the embarrassment or because she likes the attention.'
-				*nl
-				'Next, the boys start encouraging her to take off her bra. She now looks a bit less confident, looking around and partially using her hands to cover herself up from time to time, but the guys keep complimenting and encouraging her to take off her bra. She resists at first, but she slowly seems to be giving in under the peer pressure.'
-				gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5, 'unknown'
-				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Ignore what''s happening and leave': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/strip2.jpg"></center>'
+				'After a few moments, they encourage her to take off her jacket. Well it''s just her jacket, nothing to it. She seems unsure but after one more quick glance around, she pulls off her jacket, smiling as the boys whistle and compliment her. She seems to be a little more OK with it since the boys are complimenting her so much. Then they start encouraging her to show them her underwear.'
+				act 'Ignore what''s happening and leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 				gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 					act 'Intervene (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -1410,11 +1402,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool_events':
 				end
 				act 'Keep Watching':
 					*clr & cla
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/strip4.jpg"></center>'
-					'After a couple of minutes of encouragement, she finally relents and takes off her bra, showing off her perky breasts to the boys, who now really hoot, whistle and show their appreciation for the little show they are getting. She really seems torn on loving it and being ashamed of herself.'
+					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/strip3.jpg"></center>'
+					'Again she hesitates, obviously a bit unsure but the boys keep encouraging her, pointing out that no one is around and it is just her underwear and that it covers as much as the bikini they have seen her in anyways. After a few more glances around, she unbuttons her shirt and takes it off, then her skirt, leaving her standing in front of them in her underwear, blushing as the boys really compliment her. You can''t tell if she is blushing from the embarrassment or because she likes the attention.'
 					*nl
-					'But the boys aren''t done and now they encourage her to take her panties off as well, pointing out she is already practically naked, so what''s a little more going to matter? Again, you can tell she seems to be on the verge of giving in.'
-					gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5
+					'Next, the boys start encouraging her to take off her bra. She now looks a bit less confident, looking around and partially using her hands to cover herself up from time to time, but the guys keep complimenting and encouraging her to take off her bra. She resists at first, but she slowly seems to be giving in under the peer pressure.'
+					gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5, 'unknown'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Ignore what''s happening and leave': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 					gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -1435,167 +1427,193 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool_events':
 					end
 					act 'Keep Watching':
 						*clr & cla
-						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/strip5.jpg"></center>'
-						'Finally, she gives in and pulls her panties down and steps out of them. She is now completely naked in front of the boys, who seem to be loving the show. She seems torn between enjoying the approval of the boys and the embarrassment of being naked. She lets the boys look at her naked body for a couple more minutes before she seems to change her mind and starts to quickly get dressed. The boys try to get her to stay naked, but she gets dressed. The boys take it in their stride and comment about how great she looks and how cool she is. Once she is dressed, they all leave together, leaving you to go on your way as well.'
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/strip4.jpg"></center>'
+						'After a couple of minutes of encouragement, she finally relents and takes off her bra, showing off her perky breasts to the boys, who now really hoot, whistle and show their appreciation for the little show they are getting. She really seems torn on loving it and being ashamed of herself.'
+						*nl
+						'But the boys aren''t done and now they encourage her to take her panties off as well, pointing out she is already practically naked, so what''s a little more going to matter? Again, you can tell she seems to be on the verge of giving in.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5
-						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
-						act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+						act 'Ignore what''s happening and leave': gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+						gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
+						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
+							act 'Intervene (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+								*clr & cla
+								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
+								npc_rel['A13'] += 5
+								gs 'stat'
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/strip1.jpg"></center>'
+								'You decide to give her an out and head right for Lariska. "There you are! You ready to go?" you ask her.'
+								'For a moment she seems confused, but with a final look at the boys, she nods quickly. "Yes." She smiles to the boys as the two you head out. She leans over to you and quietly says "Thanks."'
+								'The boys grumble a bit as the two of you walk off, but they go their own way as well. Once outside, Lariska thanks you again and then hurries off.'
+								act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+							end
+						else
+							act 'Intervene (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+						end
+						act 'Keep Watching':
+							*clr & cla
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/strip5.jpg"></center>'
+							'Finally, she gives in and pulls her panties down and steps out of them. She is now completely naked in front of the boys, who seem to be loving the show. She seems torn between enjoying the approval of the boys and the embarrassment of being naked. She lets the boys look at her naked body for a couple more minutes before she seems to change her mind and starts to quickly get dressed. The boys try to get her to stay naked, but she gets dressed. The boys take it in their stride and comment about how great she looks and how cool she is. Once she is dressed, they all leave together, leaving you to go on your way as well.'
+							gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5
+							gs 'arousal', 'end'
+							gs 'stat'
+							act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+						end
 					end
 				end
 			end
-		end
-	elseif break_rand = 10:
-		cla
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/upset.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you walk down the hallway you see a girl you don''t know from your brother''s class sitting on the floor with her head in her hands. She looks visibly upset and you think you can hear sniffs, as if she is crying.'
-		act 'Ignore her':
-			if grupTipe ! 4 and pcs_mood > 10: pcs_mood -= 10
+		elseif break_rand = 10:
+			cla
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/upset.jpg"></center>'
+			'As you walk down the hallway you see a girl you don''t know from your brother''s class sitting on the floor with her head in her hands. She looks visibly upset and you think you can hear sniffs, as if she is crying.'
+			act 'Ignore her':
+				if grupTipe ! 4 and pcs_mood > 10: pcs_mood -= 10
+				gs 'stat'
+				*nl
+				'You feel bad for the girl, but you just don''t have time to deal with other people''s problems right now.'+iif(grupTipe ! 4,' It certainly doesn''t feel good to just leave her there though.','')
+				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+			end
+			act 'Ask if she is OK':
+				*clr & cla
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/upset.jpg"></center>'
+				'You stop beside her. "Are you OK?" you ask.'
+				'She looks up a bit startled. She apparently didn''t hear you walk up. She quickly rubs her eyes, making it very obvious she was crying. "I''m fine."'
+				'Her tone suggests she is anything but fine, but before you can say more she starts to get up, clearly wanting to get away.'
+				gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', iif(grupTipe ! 4,'easy','')
+				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
+					act 'Try to talk her through her troubles (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
+						*clr & cla
+						minut += 10
+						pcs_mood += 10
+						grupvalue[1] += 1
+						grupvalue[2] += 1
+						grupvalue[3] += 2
+						if grupTipe = 4: grupvalue[4] -= 1
+						gs 'stat'
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/upset.jpg"></center>'
+						'When she sees you''re not going to let her be, she sits back down and starts explaining what happened to her. It sounds like she had a pretty rough day.'
+						'You let her pour out her worries, offering words of comfort and sympathy along the way. In the end, she looks much less distressed and thanks you for listening to her. She insists she''s OK now and that you can go, so you simply offer her a brief hug and go on your way, feeling a bit better about yourself too.'
+						act 'Leave the school': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+					end
+				else
+					act 'Try to talk her through her trubles (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+				end
+				act 'Leave her be': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+			end
+		elseif break_rand = 11:
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/sex/lazarlina.jpg"></center>'
+			'The school is nearly empty and you must be one of the last people left in the building. As you walk past one of the hallways, you catch sight of something, so you stop and peek back around the corner. Halfway down the hallway, you see Lazar leaning against the wall with his pants around his ankles while Lina kneels in front of him, sucking his dick. She seems to be enjoying herself almost as much as he is. After watching them for a few moments, you decide to leave them in peace and go on your way.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
+			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
-			*nl
-			'You feel bad for the girl, but you just don''t have time to deal with other people''s problems right now.'+iif(grupTipe ! 4,' It certainly doesn''t feel good to just leave her there though.','')
-			act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
-		end
-		act 'Ask if she is OK':
+		elseif break_rand = 12:
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/sex/lenalera.jpg"></center>'
+			'The school is nearly empty and you must be one of the last people left in the building. As you walk past one of the hallways, you catch sight of something, so you stop and peek back around the corner. Down at the end of the hallway, you see Lena leaning against the wall with her skirt pushed up while Lera kneels in front of her with her face buried in her crotch, obviously eating Lena out. After watching them for a few moments, you decide to leave the girls in peace and go on your way.'
+			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
+			gs 'arousal', 'end'
+			gs 'stat'
+		elseif break_rand = 13 and kotovLoveQW <= 0 and fame['pav_slut'] > 250 and grupTipe = 4:
 			*clr & cla
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/upset.jpg"></center>'
-			'You stop beside her. "Are you OK?" you ask.'
-			'She looks up a bit startled. She apparently didn''t hear you walk up. She quickly rubs her eyes, making it very obvious she was crying. "I''m fine."'
-			'Her tone suggests she is anything but fine, but before you can say more she starts to get up, clearly wanting to get away.'
-			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', iif(grupTipe ! 4,'easy','')
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big9.jpg"></center>'
+			'As you are heading out of school, you see a group of gopniks ahead of you. Just before you walk past them, Vitek steps in front of you and blocks your path. You step away from him, pulling out of his reach as you turn around. You point your finger at him. "Don''t make me hurt you! You know I will."'
+			'He laughs a bit and steps up closer again, crowding you a bit, but keeps his hands to himself. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>. You know you want to have some fun. Stop acting like you are not all hot and bothered by this. We can help you with that itch."'
+			gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-				act 'Try to talk her through her troubles (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
-					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
+				act 'Back off (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 					*clr & cla
-					minut += 10
-					pcs_mood += 10
-					grupvalue[1] += 1
-					grupvalue[2] += 1
-					grupvalue[3] += 2
-					if grupTipe = 4: grupvalue[4] -= 1
+					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 					gs 'stat'
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/upset.jpg"></center>'
-					'When she sees you''re not going to let her be, she sits back down and starts explaining what happened to her. It sounds like she had a pretty rough day.'
-					'You let her pour out her worries, offering words of comfort and sympathy along the way. In the end, she looks much less distressed and thanks you for listening to her. She insists she''s OK now and that you can go, so you simply offer her a brief hug and go on your way, feeling a bit better about yourself too.'
-					act 'Leave the school': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+					grupvalue[4] += 2
+					inhib_exp += 5
+					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/buttflash.mp4"></video></center>'
+					'You snort at him and look at his friends before looking back at him. You wiggle your middle finger at him, flipping him off while pretending you are wiggling your finger for another reason. "If I needed something that small to satisfy my itch, I could just use this." His friends howl with laughter as he fumes at you. You turn and walk away with a laugh, flashing your ass at them as you do, teasing them on what they are missing out on.'
+					act 'Walk away': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 				end
 			else
-				act 'Try to talk her through her trubles (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
-			end
-			act 'Leave her be': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
-		end
-	elseif break_rand = 11:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/sex/lazarlina.jpg"></center>'
-		'The school is nearly empty and you must be one of the last people left in the building. As you walk past one of the hallways, you catch sight of something, so you stop and peek back around the corner. Halfway down the hallway, you see Lazar leaning against the wall with his pants around his ankles while Lina kneels in front of him, sucking his dick. She seems to be enjoying herself almost as much as he is. After watching them for a few moments, you decide to leave them in peace and go on your way.'
-		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
-		gs 'arousal', 'end'
-		gs 'stat'
-	elseif break_rand = 12:
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/sex/lenalera.jpg"></center>'
-		'The school is nearly empty and you must be one of the last people left in the building. As you walk past one of the hallways, you catch sight of something, so you stop and peek back around the corner. Down at the end of the hallway, you see Lena leaning against the wall with her skirt pushed up while Lera kneels in front of her with her face buried in her crotch, obviously eating Lena out. After watching them for a few moments, you decide to leave the girls in peace and go on your way.'
-		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
-		gs 'arousal', 'end'
-		gs 'stat'
-	elseif break_rand = 13 and kotovLoveQW <= 0 and fame['pav_slut'] > 250 and grupTipe = 4:
-		*clr & cla
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big9.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you are heading out of school, you see a group of gopniks ahead of you. Just before you walk past them, Vitek steps in front of you and blocks your path. You step away from him, pulling out of his reach as you turn around. You point your finger at him. "Don''t make me hurt you! You know I will."'
-		'He laughs a bit and steps up closer again, crowding you a bit, but keeps his hands to himself. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>. You know you want to have some fun. Stop acting like you are not all hot and bothered by this. We can help you with that itch."'
-		gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
-		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Back off (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
-				*clr & cla
-				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
-				gs 'stat'
-				grupvalue[4] += 2
-				inhib_exp += 5
-				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/buttflash.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You snort at him and look at his friends before looking back at him. You wiggle your middle finger at him, flipping him off while pretending you are wiggling your finger for another reason. "If I needed something that small to satisfy my itch, I could just use this." His friends howl with laughter as he fumes at you. You turn and walk away with a laugh, flashing your ass at them as you do, teasing them on what they are missing out on.'
-				act 'Walk away': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+				act 'Back off (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end
-		else
-			act 'Back off (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
-		end
-		act 'Why not?':
-			*clr & cla
-			grupvalue[4] -= 1
-			gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/boysbathroom.jpg"></center>'
-			'You are in the mood anyways, so why not? Hopefully it isn''t too quick. They lead you to the men''s room, where they all crowd around you in a circle and unzip their pants.'
-			'The walls of the restroom are covered in crude texts, quite a few of them involving you in some way.'
-			*nl
-			if fame['pav_slut'] > 250: 'On one wall you see written, in particularly large letters, "<b><<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>> = <<$gnikname>>"</b>.'
-			act 'Start sucking':
+			act 'Why not?':
 				*clr & cla
-				gs 'boyStat', 'A157'
-				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy,1
-				gs 'boyStat', 'A9'
-				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy,1
-				gs 'boyStat', 'A10'
-				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy,1
-				gs 'boyStat', 'A11'
-				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy,1
-				swallow += 4
-				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/building/sex/rand_scoolboy6.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'You kneel down and wrap your <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips around <<$boydesc>>''s hard cock and start to suck. Not forgetting the others, you spend some time alternating between all the cocks, stroking the ones you''re not sucking with your hands.'
-				'Finally, you feel a jet of sperm hit the back of your throat and <<$boydesc>> moans. "That''s right bitch! Swallow it all like a good little slut." <<$boydesc>> seems satisfied and tucks his cock back in his pants.'
+				grupvalue[4] -= 1
+				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/boysbathroom.jpg"></center>'
+				'You are in the mood anyways, so why not? Hopefully it isn''t too quick. They lead you to the men''s room, where they all crowd around you in a circle and unzip their pants.'
+				'The walls of the restroom are covered in crude texts, quite a few of them involving you in some way.'
 				*nl
-				'You immediately switch to another cock and receive another mouthful from him. You carefully swallow his load as well, which earns you a nod of approval and a pat on the head. "Good little whore." He moves aside as well and you finish off the last two guys. As you get up off your knees, you hear one of them laugh. "You''re the best cock sucker we got <<$pcs_nickname>>!" they say as they leave you alone in the bathroom, more horny than when you started. You yell after them. "Fucking assholes!" You then clean up and leave.'
-				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 20, 'group', 'sub'
-				gs 'arousal', 'end'
-				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
-			end
-		end
-	elseif break_rand = 13 and kotovLoveQW <= 0 and fame['pav_slut'] > 300 and grupTipe ! 4:
-		*clr & cla
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big9.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you are heading out of school, you see a group of gopniks ahead of you. Just before you walk past them, Vitek steps in front of you and blocks your path. You look at Vitek with contempt. "What the fuck do you want?" He''s not impressed in the slightest.'
-		*nl
-		'"I''ll show you what the fuck I want slut." He suddenly grabs you by the hair and presses your face against his desk. "What I want is your lips around my dick, right now. Everyone already knows you''re a <<$gnikname>>, so you better start acting like it or there will be consequences." He turns to his friends and says "Come on boys, this whore doesn''t understand her place in life. It''s about time we show her."'
-		gs 'gschool_events', 'rand_boy_arg', 0,1,0,0,0,0
-		if npc_rel[$school_static_num] > 50 and npc_gender[$school_static_num] = 0 and npc_grupTipe[$school_static_num] = 2:
-			'As you try and pull away <<$rand_boy>> comes over and pulls the gopnik off you and turns to him. "Leave her alone!"'
-			'The gopnik turns towards him and narrows his eyes. "Or what pussy?"'
-			'<<$rand_boy>> steps up close, crowding him. "Or I will fucking kick your ass right here!" They start shoving each other, but before more can happen a teacher interrupts. "What''s going on here? Break it up, all of you!" Everyone goes their own way as the teacher watches and you word a thank you to <<$rand_boy>> as you slip away.'
-			act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
-		else
-			gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
-			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-				act 'Resist (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+				if fame['pav_slut'] > 250: 'On one wall you see written, in particularly large letters, "<b><<$pcs_nickname>> <<$pcs_lastname>> = <<$gnikname>>"</b>.'
+				act 'Start sucking':
 					*clr & cla
-					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
+					gs 'boyStat', 'A157'
+					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy,1
+					gs 'boyStat', 'A9'
+					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy,1
+					gs 'boyStat', 'A10'
+					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy,1
+					gs 'boyStat', 'A11'
+					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth', $boy,1
+					swallow += 4
+					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/building/sex/rand_scoolboy6.mp4"></video></center>'
+					'You kneel down and wrap your <<$pc_desc[''lips'']>> lips around <<$boydesc>>''s hard cock and start to suck. Not forgetting the others, you spend some time alternating between all the cocks, stroking the ones you''re not sucking with your hands.'
+					'Finally, you feel a jet of sperm hit the back of your throat and <<$boydesc>> moans. "That''s right bitch! Swallow it all like a good little slut." <<$boydesc>> seems satisfied and tucks his cock back in his pants.'
+					*nl
+					'You immediately switch to another cock and receive another mouthful from him. You carefully swallow his load as well, which earns you a nod of approval and a pat on the head. "Good little whore." He moves aside as well and you finish off the last two guys. As you get up off your knees, you hear one of them laugh. "You''re the best cock sucker we got <<$pcs_nickname>>!" they say as they leave you alone in the bathroom, more horny than when you started. You yell after them. "Fucking assholes!" You then clean up and leave.'
+					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 20, 'group', 'sub'
+					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/resistgop.jpg"></center>'
-					'You manage to pull away from him, but the others are blocking you. You back up, but eventually find your back against one of the walls and turn your head away from him. The boy leans in close to you. "Just do as you''re told or this will be a lot worse for you."'
-					gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
-					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-						act 'Threaten to scream (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
-							*clr & cla
-							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
-							gs 'stat'
-							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/resistgop.jpg"></center>'
-							'"I''ll scream and when the teachers arrive, I will tell them you tried to rape me." He fumes and leans in real close. "You''ll regret this slut! I promise." He relents and leaves with the others following him, all giving you looks you would rather not think about.'
-							act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+					act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+				end
+			end
+		elseif break_rand = 13 and kotovLoveQW <= 0 and fame['pav_slut'] > 300 and grupTipe ! 4:
+			*clr & cla
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big9.jpg"></center>'
+			'As you are heading out of school, you see a group of gopniks ahead of you. Just before you walk past them, Vitek steps in front of you and blocks your path. You look at Vitek with contempt. "What the fuck do you want?" He''s not impressed in the slightest.'
+			*nl
+			'"I''ll show you what the fuck I want slut." He suddenly grabs you by the hair and presses your face against his desk. "What I want is your lips around my dick, right now. Everyone already knows you''re a <<$gnikname>>, so you better start acting like it or there will be consequences." He turns to his friends and says "Come on boys, this whore doesn''t understand her place in life. It''s about time we show her."'
+			gs 'gschool_events', 'rand_boy_arg', 0,1,0,0,0,0
+			if npc_rel[$school_static_num] > 50 and npc_gender[$school_static_num] = 0 and npc_grupTipe[$school_static_num] = 2:
+				'As you try and pull away <<$rand_boy>> comes over and pulls the gopnik off you and turns to him. "Leave her alone!"'
+				'The gopnik turns towards him and narrows his eyes. "Or what pussy?"'
+				'<<$rand_boy>> steps up close, crowding him. "Or I will fucking kick your ass right here!" They start shoving each other, but before more can happen a teacher interrupts. "What''s going on here? Break it up, all of you!" Everyone goes their own way as the teacher watches and you word a thank you to <<$rand_boy>> as you slip away.'
+				act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+			else
+				gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
+				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
+					act 'Resist (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+						*clr & cla
+						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
+						gs 'stat'
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/resistgop.jpg"></center>'
+						'You manage to pull away from him, but the others are blocking you. You back up, but eventually find your back against one of the walls and turn your head away from him. The boy leans in close to you. "Just do as you''re told or this will be a lot worse for you."'
+						gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
+						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
+							act 'Threaten to scream (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+								*clr & cla
+								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
+								gs 'stat'
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/resistgop.jpg"></center>'
+								'"I''ll scream and when the teachers arrive, I will tell them you tried to rape me." He fumes and leans in real close. "You''ll regret this slut! I promise." He relents and leaves with the others following him, all giving you looks you would rather not think about.'
+								act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+							end
+						else
+							'<br>You don''t have enough willpower to resist.'
 						end
-					else
-						'<br>You don''t have enough willpower to resist.'
+						act 'Go to the men''s room with them':gt 'gschool_events', 'toilet_bj'
 					end
-					act 'Go to the men''s room with them':gt 'gschool_events', 'toilet_bj'
+				else
+					act 'Resist (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 				end
-			else
-				act 'Resist (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+				act 'Go to the men''s room with them': gt 'gschool_events', 'toilet_bj'
 			end
-			act 'Go to the men''s room with them': gt 'gschool_events', 'toilet_bj'
+		elseif break_rand <= 16:
+			cla
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/leavingsch.jpg"></center>'
+			'As you''re leaving school, you pass by one of the classrooms and you think you hear something inside.'
+			act 'Ignore it and leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
+			act 'Take a peek': gt 'gschool_events', 'afterschool_classroom_events'
+		else
+			gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 		end
-	elseif break_rand <= 16:
-		cla
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/leavingsch.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you''re leaving school, you pass by one of the classrooms and you think you hear something inside.'
-		act 'Ignore it and leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
-		act 'Take a peek': gt 'gschool_events', 'afterschool_classroom_events'
-	else
-		gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 	end
 end
 

locations/gschool_girls_bathroom.qsrc

@@ -41,7 +41,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/smoke'+ rand(1,3) +'.jpg"></center>'
-			'You pull out a cigarette and light it, take a long drag and hold it in for a while. You immediately feel yourself relaxing, the smoke''s familiar tingling in your lungs taking the edge off. This feels much better than going to class.'
+			'You pull out a cigarette and light it before taking a long drag and holding it for a while. You immediately feel yourself relaxing, the smoke''s familiar tingling in your lungs taking the edge off. This feels much better than going to class.'
 			i = rand(1,100)
 			if i <= 25:
 				gt 'gschool_girls_bathroom', 'girls'
@@ -66,10 +66,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bathroom2':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	if school_bunk = 0:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/usephone'+ rand(1,2) +'.jpg"></center>'
-		'For the rest of the period, you play on your phone. Despite several instances of boredom and indecision that leave you wishing you could just go out, you find it very relaxing to be your own master and by the time the bell rings, you are in a far better mood than before.'	
+		'You play on your phone for the rest of the period. Despite several instances of boredom and indecision that leave you wishing you could just go out, you find it very relaxing to be your own master and by the time the bell rings, you''re in a far better mood than before.'	
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/smoke'+ rand(1,3) +'.jpg"></center>'
-		'You spend the rest of the period playing on your phone while you smoke. The games on your phone are boring, and once or twice you hear somebody walking around out in the corridor, causing your heart to skip a beat when you realize they might smell the smoke, but despite all that, you find this use of the period very relaxing and by the time the bell rings, you are in a far better mood than before.'
+		'You spend the rest of the period playing on your phone while you smoke. The games on your phone are boring, and once or twice you hear somebody walking around out in the corridor, causing your heart to skip a beat when you realize they might smell the smoke, but despite all that, you find this use of the period very relaxing and by the time the bell rings, you''re in a far better mood than before.'
 	end
 	act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl1':
 	jump_counter = 0
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/girlsbathroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'After a few minutes, you hear the bathroom door open - someone else is in the bathroom with you! You carefully peek out, half-expecting to see a teacher, but see <<$rand_girl>>. Relieved and smiling, you exit the stall and greet her. She turns around, slightly startled at first but then breaking into a smile when she see you. Within seconds, the two of you are chatting away about school, boys, clothes, makeup and anything else that strikes your fancy, having all but forgotten about the fact that you are sitting in the school bathroom and before you know it, the bell rings. You both stop and look up out of reflex, then bid each other farewell and head to your next class.'		
+	'After a few minutes, you hear the bathroom door open - someone else is in the bathroom with you! You carefully peek out, half-expecting to see a teacher, but see <<$rand_girl>>. Relieved and smiling, you exit the stall and greet her. She turns around, slightly startled at first but then breaking into a smile when she sees you. Within seconds, the two of you are chatting away about school, boys, clothes, makeup and anything else that strikes your fancy, having all but forgotten about the fact that you''re sitting in the school bathroom and before you know it, the bell rings. You both stop and look up out of reflex, then bid each other farewell and head to your next class.'		
 	act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
 
@@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl2':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/bathroom/girlsbathroom.jpg"></center>'
-	'After a couple of minutes, you hear the bathroom door quietly open and close. Soft footsteps echo back and forth and you know someone else is in the bathroom with you. You peek out of your stall and see Sonia standing at the mirror, applying makeup. Relieved, bored and starved for company, you open the stall door. "Hey Sonia, what''s up?"'
+	'After a few minutes, you hear the bathroom door quietly open and close. Soft footsteps echo back and forth and you know someone else is in the bathroom with you. You peek out of your stall and see Sonia standing at the mirror, applying makeup. Relieved, bored and starved for company, you open the stall door. "Hey Sonia, what''s up?"'
 	*nl
 	'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, you cutting class?" she asks while looking at you from the mirror.'
 	'"Yeah, I couldn''t take another boring class, I needed a little fun." you tell her with a smile.'
@@ -144,7 +144,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl2':
 			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/school/sonialick.jpg"></center>'
 			'The treatment she gives your clit and nipples turns your panties into a soaked mess and your entire body is tense now, still a ways away from release but too far gone to even think about stopping now. She pushes you back into the stall and briefly covers your mouth with hers, her sweet perfume tickling your nose with the promise of sexual bliss, your tongues wrestling with each other as you practically tear eachother''s clothes off. Sonia sits you down on the edge of the toilet and spreads your legs wide; the smoldering look she gives you as she kneels down between them sends waves of excitement through your body. The girl takes her time as she kisses her way down from your breasts to your navel, to your pubic mound... then past your sex, down your inner thigh. Just as you open your mouth to protest, her tongue takes a lingering lap at your lips.'
-			*nl
 			'For all the cock she is rumored to have sucked, she is mind-numbingly good at licking pussy, turning the sound you meant to utter into a sigh of pleasure. You briefly wonder if the two skills are related before her magic mouth and fingers put you in a state beyond coherence. You can feel the tension in your body taking palpable form, concentrating more and more in your lower stomach, building up. As you get closer and closer to climax, she slips two of her small fingers into your pussy, finger-fucking you while she licks, sucks and flicks your clit with her tongue. The sensation is overwhelming, the timing impeccable, hitting the right spot and rhythm in a way no man could. She somehow even holds you on the edge for a few more seconds before your body starts shaking in orgasm and you scream out in unbridled lust.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 10, 'lesbian'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', -5, 'lesbian'
@@ -182,15 +181,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl3':
 	*nl
 	if grupTipe ! 4:
 		'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you: Two girls are talking, and you recognize the voices as Lena and Lera''s. Most of the other girls in school avoid them, as they like to bully them and even some of the boys. Trying to be quiet, you pull your feet up - you really don''t want to draw their attention and catch you here, alone in the bathroom. Unfortunately, you''ve forgotten about your phone sitting in your lap: As you raise your legs so they can''t see your feet under the stall, it slides off your lap and clatters onto the floor.'
-		*nl
 		'The room turns eerily silent as you hold your breath, your heartbeat so loud in your ears that it drowns out the sound of them approaching. The stall door then suddenly slams open. Lena and Lera stand on each side of the open stall, cigarettes in their mouths, looking right at you. "Well well, look what we have here, Lena. A scared little bunny hiding in a stall." Lera says with a smirk.'
-		*nl
 		'Lena leans in, taking a closer look at you. "Is that right? Are you a scared little bunny, <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Without waiting for you to answer, she glances at Lera. "Maybe she thinks she''s a bad girl, trying to cut class. How about we show her what happens to bad little girls?" She laughs gleefully and Lera joins in. You have a really bad feeling about what they might want to do to you.'
 	else
 		'After a few minutes, you hear someone else in the bathroom with you: Two girls are talking, and you recognize the voices as Lena and Lera''s. You consider going out to talk to them. All and all, they treat you pretty well, but sometimes they can be pretty mean and demeaning. You know you are the low girl on the totem pole in the gopniks, but it would be nice if they treated you better. Still, they do make sure no one else messes with you, and when they''re in a good mood, it''s a blast hanging out with them, so it''s not all bad.'
-		*nl
 		'Before you can make up your mind though, you hear their footsteps heading your way and you realize you forgot to lift your feet up. Suddenly, the door is pushed open. Lena and Lera stand on each side of the open stall, cigarettes in their mouths, looking right at you. "Well well, look what we have here, Lena. Our favorite little bunny hiding in a stall." Lera says with a smirk.'
-		*nl
 		'Lena leans in, taking a closer look at you. "Is that right? Are you a scared little bunny, <<$pcs_nickname>>?" Without waiting for you to answer, she glances at Lera. "I bet she thinks she''s a bad girl for cutting class. How about we show her what happens to bad little girls?" She starts laughing and Lera joins in. You''re not sure how you feel about this; they are a lot of fun, but their idea of fun can also be pretty damn mean. Part of you is strangely excited, but you''re also worried about what comes next.'
 	end
 	gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
@@ -328,9 +323,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'girl3':
 	  !!Lead to an event during break where Sveta is confronted by Vitek, but is defended by the other jocks?
 	    act 'Fuck off':
 		  *clr & cla
-		  npc_rel['A20'] -= 5
-		  npc_rel['A21'] -= 5
-		  grupvalue[4] -= 3
+		  npc_rel['A20'] -= 10
+		  npc_rel['A21'] -= 10
+		  grupvalue[4] -= 5
 		  '<center><b><font color="maroon">Girls bathroom</font></b></center>'
 		  '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/image_needed.png"></center>'
 		  'You step out of the stall and look the two girls up and down. You know the game they''re playing, and you want nothing to do with it. You grab the cigarette from Lera and throw it into the toilet. "You need to get out of my face and fuck off... bitch." you snarl as you get up in Lera''s face and forcefully shove her against the stall, causing her to fall to the floor. Lena''s enraged snarl gives her away and you turn to dodge her incoming right hook before kicking her hard in the stomach, causing her to crumple to the floor next to Lera.'
@@ -1065,7 +1060,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'caught2':
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'dom'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'He enjoys your blowjob in silence for several minutes.'
-					if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+					if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 						act 'Cum':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/makar/sex/school/caughtcum.jpg"></center>'

locations/gschool_grounds.qsrc

@@ -245,7 +245,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 
 		if Enable_tablemap = 0:
 			if anushkaFirstvisit = 0 and meet_after_school = 1: '<a href="exec: gt ''anushka'', ''meet_after_school''">Anushka</a> is leaning against a tree just in front of the school.'
-			if LariskaQW['story'] >= 5 and cheerleaders_on = 0: '<a href="exec:minut += 1 & gt ''LariskaGo''">Lariska</a> impatiently walks back and fourth across the courtyard, as if she''s waiting for someone.'
+			if LariskaQW['story'] >= 5 and cheerleaders_on = 0: 'You see <a href="exec:minut += 1 & gt ''LariskaGo''">Lariska</a> impatiently walks back and fourth across the courtyard, as if she''s waiting for someone.'
+			if christinaQW['subpath'] >= 4 and cheerleaders_on = 0: '<a href="exec:minut += 1 & gt ''Zvereva_house_events'', ''Chris_walk_home''">Christina Zvereva</a> is walking across the school courtyard, looking irritated.'
 			if JuliaMilLernQW >= 1: '<a href="exec:minut += 1 & gt ''JuliaMilGo''">Julia</a> is sitting out on the courtyard, reading a book.'
 			if NatbelQW['QWstage'] > 0: '<a href="exec:minut += 1 & gt ''NatBelGo''">Natasha</a> is standing in a corner.'
 			if artemLernQW >= 1 and artemVitokQW ! 2 and artemblok = 0 and artlie ! 2 and artembrokenheart ! 1: '<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''artem_events'', ''start''">Artem</a> is waiting for you near the school entrance.'
@@ -274,6 +275,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 			st_count=0 & $show_table=''
 			if anushkaFirstvisit = 0 and meet_after_school = 1: gs 'show_table', '<a href="exec: gt ''anushka'', ''meet_after_school''">Anushka Konstantinov</a>', '5'
 			if LariskaQW['story'] >= 5 and cheerleaders_on = 0: gs 'show_table', '<a href="exec:minut += 1 & gt ''LariskaGo''">Lariska Gruzdev</a>', '5'
+			if christinaQW['subpath'] >= 4 and cheerleaders_on = 0: gs 'show_table', '<a href="exec:minut += 1 & gt ''Zvereva_house_events'', ''Chris_walk_home''">Christina Zvereva</a>', '5'
 			if JuliaMilLernQW >= 1: gs 'show_table', '<a href="exec:minut += 1 & gt ''JuliaMilGo''">Julia Milova</a>', '5'
 			if NatbelQW['QWstage'] > 0: gs 'show_table', '<a href="exec:minut += 1 & gt ''NatBelGo''">Natasha Belova</a>', '5'
 			if artemLernQW >= 1 and artemVitokQW ! 2 and artemblok = 0 and artlie ! 2 and artembrokenheart ! 1: gs 'show_table', '<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''artem_events'', ''start''">Artem Chebotarev</a>', '5'
@@ -335,6 +337,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sports':
 	menu_off = 0
 	killvar '$locclass'
 	*clr & cla
+	gs 'Zvereva_schedule'
 	gs 'stat'
 	if month > 3 and month < 11:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/grounds/field.jpg"></center>'
@@ -393,8 +396,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sports':
 		end
 	end
 
-	gs 'family'
-	
 	! Giving football preference, since there''s no indoor option for it.
 	if temper => 15 and sunWeather = 1 and hour > 8 and hour < 12 and week = 6 and fbpickupDay + 14 <= daystart and bbpickupDay ! daystart:
 		*nl
@@ -403,6 +404,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sports':
 		*nl
 		'As you pass by the sports field, you notice that most of the jocks have gathered around the <a href="exec: gt ''bbgameout'', ''start''">basketball court</a>.'
 	end
+
+	gs 'family'
+	if chrisloc = 16: 'Christina and Lina are here, stretching for the race coming up.'
 end
 
 !!School building

locations/gschool_jock_chats.qsrc

@@ -61,10 +61,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar':
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
 		if npc_rel['A149'] >= 50:
 			'"Hey, <<$pcs_nickname>>. So I''ve been noticing you''ve been eying me." Lazar winks.'
-			'You blush. "No... no I havn''t."'
-			'He confidently continues. "Are say I''m not good looking?" You start to stammer and he laughs, showing he is just messing with you. You proceed to talk about a variety of topics, mostly sports.'
+			'You blush. "No... no I haven''t."'
+			'He confidently continues. "Are you saying I''m not good looking?" You start to stammer and he laughs, showing he is just messing with you. You proceed to talk about a variety of topics, mostly sports.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
-			'You approach and try to talk with him, but he flat ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
+			'You approach and try to talk with him, but he flat out ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
 		else
 			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>." Lazar smirks, bringing everyone''s attention to you.'
 			'You glance around, waiting for someone to start picking on you. "Hi, I just wanted to say hi."'
@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar':
 			'You laugh. "You wish... Are any of the girls dumb enough to fall for that?"'
 			'He confidently continues. "Nothing to fall for, it''s a simple fact. You don''t have to hide it." He lifts up his shirt and shows off his six pack, which gets the attention of most of the girls. You have to admit that he has a great body. You proceed to talk about a variety of topics, mostly sports.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A149'] <= 20:
-			'You approach and try to talk with him, but he flat ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants you to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
+			'You approach and try to talk with him, but he flat out ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants you to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
 		else
 			'"Well well, if it isn''t <<$pcs_nickname>>. Get lost? Or maybe you''re too drunk to find the stairwell?" Lazar asks with a laugh, bringing everyone''s attention to you.'
 			'You sigh. "I just wanted to say hi."'
@@ -91,7 +91,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar':
 			'"Looks like the loser is lost." someone comments as you approach.' 
 			'"Nah, I bet even Lesco and Petia can''t stand being around her and, honestly, who can blame them?" Lazar replies, which gets the group laughing so hard you know it''s pointless to even try and talk to him.'
 		else
-			'You approach and try to talk to him, but he flat ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
+			'You approach and try to talk to him, but he flat out ignores you and pretends you''re not there. After several minutes of this, he finally sighs loudly. "Can''t you take a fucking hint? No one wants to talk to you!" He then returns to ignoring you and you walk away.'
 		end
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -123,15 +123,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'svyatoslav':
 		elseif npc_rel['A8'] <= 20:
 			'He gives you a dirty look as you approach. "I''ve got nothing to say to you, so go bother someone else." You try talking to him, but he just gets more annoyed with you, so you finally give up and leave.'
 		else
-			'You approach Svyatoslav and smile. He starts talking about working out and staying fit, and before long, starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or maybe he just wants to bang any girl in school? It''s hard to tell.'
+			'You walk up to him and start chatting. You talk about working out and staying fit before he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or that he just wants to get in any girl''s panties so he has something to brag about to the other jocks.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 2:
 		if npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
-			'You approach him and smile. The two of you quickly start talking about working out and staying fit, and before long, he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or maybe he just wants to bang any girl in school? It''s hard to tell.'
+			'You walk up to him and start chatting. You talk about working out and staying fit before he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or that he just wants to get in any girl''s panties so he has something to brag about to the other jocks.'
 		elseif npc_rel['A8'] <= 20:
 			'He gives you a dirty look as you approach. "I''ve got nothing to say to you, so go bother someone else." You try talking to him, but he just gets more annoyed with you, so you finally give up and leave.'
 		else
-			'You approach Svyatoslav and smile. The two of you quickly start talking about working out and staying fit, and before long, he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or maybe he just wants to bang any girl in school? It''s hard to tell.'
+			'You walk up to him and start chatting. You talk about working out and staying fit before he starts flirting with you. You get the feeling he has a thing for you, or that he just wants to get in any girl''s panties so he has something to brag about to the other jocks.'
 		end
 	elseif grupTipe = 3:
 		if npc_rel['A8'] >= 50:
@@ -459,10 +459,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'christina':
 		end
 	end
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
-	if christinaQW['blackmail'] = 0 and christinaQW['pre_bm'] = 0 and christinaQW['pre_fight'] = 0 and christinaQW['fight'] = 0 and christinaQW['bully'] >= 60:
+	if christinaQW['blackmail'] = 0 and christinaQW['pre_bm'] = 0 and christinaQW['pre_fight'] = 0 and christinaQW['fight'] = 0 and christinaQW['subpath'] = 0 and christinaQW['bully'] <= 40:
 		act 'Think about Christina': gt 'Zvereva_events', 'christina_decide1'
 	end
-	if christinaQW['subpath'] = 0 and christinaQW['bully'] <= 40:
+	if christinaQW['blackmail'] = 0 and christinaQW['pre_bm'] = 0 and christinaQW['pre_fight'] = 0 and christinaQW['fight'] = 0 and christinaQW['subpath'] = 0 and christinaQW['bully'] >= 60:
 		act 'Think about Christina': gt 'Zvereva_events', 'christina_decide2'
 	end
 end
@@ -560,25 +560,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina':
 			end
 		elseif grupTipe = 2:
 			if npc_rel['A23'] >= 70:
-				'Albina has a friendly, yet awkward conversation with you. You both talk about your shared interests, but when you bring up family life she fiercely avoids the subject, eventually refusing to speak with you anymore and storming off. You don''t know what her problem is, but she''s always been sensitive when it comes to discussing her home life.'
+				'Albina has a friendly, yet awkward conversation with you. You both talk about the sports you enjoy and which of the jocks have caught your attention lately, but when you bring up family life she fiercely avoids the subject, eventually refusing to speak with you anymore and storming off. You don''t know what her problem is, but she''s always been sensitive when it comes to discussing her home life.'
 			elseif npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
 				'Albina scoffs at you. "I don''t like you, I barely tolerate you being in the same social group as me, so why would I want to talk to you?" You can tell she isn''t waiting for an answer, so you back off before she causes a scene.'
 			else
 				'Albina sighs and begrudgingly starts chatting with you. She spends a lot of the conversation with her arms crossed and makes no effort to hide her boredom. She doesn''t dislike you, but it''s obvious that she''s just tolerating your presence and humouring you with conversation.'
 			end
 		elseif grupTipe = 3:
-			if npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
+			if npc_rel['A23'] >= 70:
+				'"You know you remind me of a character from LOL?" you tell her and she looks at you in confusion.'
+				'"League of Legends? The online strategy game?" you continue and she looks even more confused.'
+				'Before you can explain, she puts a finger against your lips and shushes you. "I don''t play any of that dumb geeky shit, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I only play fighting games like Tekken and Mortal Kombat. It helps me relax when people are... annoying me."'
+				'Catching her drift, you change the subject to something you think she''ll be more interested in.'
+			elseif npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
 				'Albina rolls her eyes and crosses her arms. "This isn''t your stop, <<$pcs_firstname>>. The train to Geeksville terminates over there." She motions towards the door to the classroom that the nerds hang out in. "So get back on board and piss off!"'
 			else
 				'Albina sighs and begrudgingly starts chatting with you. She spends a lot of the conversation with her arms crossed and makes no effort to hide her boredom. She doesn''t dislike you, but it''s obvious that she''s just tolerating your presence and humouring you with conversation.'
 			end
 		elseif grupTipe = 4:
-			if npc_rel['A23'] <= 20:
-				'Albina recoils back from you with a look of utter contempt on her face. "What the hell do <i>you</i> want? Go find the other knuckle brained morons. The zoo is over there." She motions towards the stairway that the gopniks usually hang out in before returning to her phone and ignoring you.'
-			else
-				'Albina stares at you, seemingly in confusion. "Uhh, can I help you?"
-				"I just wanted to talk is all," you reply and she sighs and begrudgingly starts chatting with you. She spends a lot of the conversation with her arms crossed and makes no effort to hide her boredom. It''s obvious that she''s just tolerating your presence and humouring you with a conversation she doesn''t actually care about.'
-			end
+			'Albina glares at you with a look of utter contempt on her face. "What the hell do you want? Go find the other knuckle brained morons. The zoo is over there." She motions towards the stairway that the gopniks usually hang out in before returning to her phone and ignoring you.'
+			'"Fucking stuck up rich bitch..." you mutter as you walk away, but she doesn''t hear you.'
 		else
 			'Albina is on her phone as you approach. She looks up at you before returning her attention to her phone and ignoring you. After a few seconds, she looks up at you again and stares in confusion. "What do you want loser?" She then laughs. "Wait, you want to talk to <i>me</i>? As if that will ever happen! Fuck off and go hang out with the other losers where you belong." She shoos you away with a motion of her hand before going back to her phone.'
 		end

locations/gschool_lessons1.qsrc

@@ -7,9 +7,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 	intel_exp += rand(0,1)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class<<rand(1,2)>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk into the classroom and take a seat farthest to the right, next to a window. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one. Mr. Yenotin enters the classroom, and just as he is about to close the door, one of your classmates grabs the door from outside the room. Mr. Yenotin turns to the tardy student and informs them that they are late and that next time he will have to report them. This instruction is followed by an awkward wink and the student is allowed in to find a seat.  All the students know that he never reports the tardy students. As everyone settles in, Mr. Yenotin does a roll call and then opens a grammar book, telling you to open your textbooks to where you left off last lesson.'
-	*nl
-	'After a while, he tells the class to do the assignments on the last page of the chapter. He starts walking up and down the classroom, mostly talking to the students about off topic things like how their time off was often disrupting them from thier focus. He''s always trying to impress the students with his endeavors, but no one really believes what he says because most of it sounds exaggerated or simply not possible. When someone has a real question he''s quick to answer as fair as possible without being arrogant, no matter what kind of question it is.'
+	'You walk into the classroom and take a seat farthest to the right, next to a window. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one before Mr. Yenotin enters the classroom. Just as he''s about to close the door, one of your classmates grabs the door from outside the room. Mr. Yenotin turns to the tardy student and informs them that they are late and that next time he will have to report them. This instruction is followed by an awkward wink and the student is allowed in to find a seat. Everyone knows that he never reports the tardy students. As everyone settles in, Mr. Yenotin does a roll call before opening a grammar book, telling you to open your textbooks to where you left off last lesson.'
+	'After a while, he tells the class to do the assignments on the last page of the chapter as he starts walking up and down the classroom, mostly talking to the students about off topic things like how their time off was often disrupting them from their focus. He''s always trying to impress the students with his endeavors, but no one really believes what he says because most of it sounds exaggerated or simply not possible. When someone has a real question he''s quick to answer as fair as possible without being arrogant, no matter what kind of question it is.'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', iif(grupTipe = 4 and traits['nerd_status'] = 0, 'hard', iif(traits['nerd_status'] > 0, 'easy', 'medium'))
 	if traits['nerd_status'] = 2: will_cost = will_cost / 2
@@ -42,10 +41,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 	act 'Don''t pay attention in class':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bored.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mr. Yenotin''s lecture has brought the whole class to inattention, most of your classmates are paying more attention to the clock than to the lesson.'
-		'All of a sudden you hear a loud bang, making the whole class jump up from their chairs.'
-		'Like a well trained unit, everyone in the room turns to look, only to see Lesco on the floor, his desk overturned; his cellphone sliding across the floor before clattering against the wall. Silence is soon replaced by laughter. The eyes of the entire class on him, Lesco struggles to act nonchalant as he works to quickly return his desk to an upright position and gather the items that had fallen to the floor.'
-		'Mr. Yenotin approaches Lesco, you''re certain he''ll get a scolding, but to your dismay Mr. Yenotin starts joking with Lesco instead. He shares an embarrassing story about how the same thing happened to him once, except there were no phones in his time. No one is buying his story and instead are focusing their attention on the gopniks. They''re laughing loudly, wondering what Lesco was doing when he fell.'
+		'Mr. Yenotin''s lecture has brought the whole class to inattention. Most of your classmates are paying more attention to the clock than to the lesson when you suddenly hear a loud bang, making the whole class jump up from their chairs.'
+		'Like a well trained unit, everyone in the room turns to see Lesco on the floor, his desk overturned as his cellphone slides across the floor before clattering against the wall. Silence is soon replaced by laughter. The eyes of the entire class on him, Lesco struggles to act nonchalant as he works to quickly return his desk to an upright position and gather the items that had fallen to the floor.'
+		'Mr. Yenotin approaches Lesco and you''re certain he''ll get a scolding, but to your dismay Mr. Yenotin starts joking with Lesco instead. He shares an embarrassing story about how the same thing happened to him once, except there were no phones in his time. No one is buying his story and are instead focusing their attention on the gopniks. They''re laughing loudly, wondering what Lesco was doing when he fell.'
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 		
 		act 'Draw dick in margin':
@@ -57,7 +55,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Flash boobs at Svyatoslav(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Svyatoslav(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A152'] += 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -66,11 +64,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You notice Svyatoslav glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you when Mr. Yenotin''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits to him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
+				'You notice Svyatoslav glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you when Mr. Yenotin''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash boobs at Svyatoslav (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Svyatoslav (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end	
 		
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -84,7 +82,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and head towards Mr. Yenotin''s desk. You make a point of acting like you are checking one of the books for something. With a final glance to make sure Mr. Yenotin isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to the class. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing and draw each other''s attention to it. Most of them either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and head towards Mr. Yenotin''s desk. You make a point of acting like you''re checking one of the books for something. With a final glance to make sure Mr. Yenotin isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to the class. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and draw each other''s attention to it. Most of them either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 				end
 			else
@@ -103,7 +101,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and head towards Mr. Yenotin''s desk.  You make a point of acting like you are checking one of the books for something. With a final glance to make sure Mr. Yenotin isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to the class. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing and draw each other''s attention to it. Most of them either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and head towards Mr. Yenotin''s desk.  You make a point of acting like you''re checking one of the books for something. With a final glance to make sure Mr. Yenotin isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to the class. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and draw each other''s attention to it. Most of them either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 				end
 			else
@@ -120,7 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'While Mr. Yenotin''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while still sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of the rest either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
+					'While Mr. Yenotin''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while still sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 				end
 			else
@@ -137,7 +135,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and head towards Mr. Yenotin''s desk. You make a point of acting like you are checking one of the books for something. With a final glance to make sure Mr. Yenotin isn''t looking, you turn to face the class like you are about to walk back to your seat, but you pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of them either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and head towards Mr. Yenotin''s desk. You make a point of acting like you''re checking one of the books for something. With a final glance to make sure Mr. Yenotin isn''t looking, you turn to face the class like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or even laugh at your antics. All but Lesco, who stares with his mouth open.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 				end
 			else
@@ -182,7 +180,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 					dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' You fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place, you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' You fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place, you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 				end
 			else
@@ -207,7 +205,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 				else
@@ -231,7 +229,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 				else
@@ -243,14 +241,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 		act 'Tease Svyatoslav':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get Svyatoslav''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction. Then you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits, threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch stretches your uniform around your smaller breasts to accent what you do have. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
-			'Svyatoslav glances around, then leans over a bit to say. "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>! Show me a little more."'
-			'Before you can decide what to do Sonia, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
+			'You get Svyatoslav''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction before you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits, threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch stretches your uniform around your smaller breasts to accent what you do have. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
+			'Svyatoslav glances around before leaning over. "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>! Show me a little more."'
+			'Before you can decide what to do, Sonia, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
 			act 'Sonia''s suggestion':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Sonia leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits." she says with a giggle.'
-				'You are a bit taken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
+				'Sonia leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits," she says with a giggle.'
+				'You''re taken aback by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
 				'She grins. "To tease him of course, just like your stretch. Go on, do it! Or flash him your panties."'
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -258,24 +256,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Sonia had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+						'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Sonia had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Refuse to flash (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 				end
-				act 'Flash your boobs':
+				act 'Flash your breasts':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A8'] += 1
 					gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 1, 1
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb2.jpg"></center>'
-					'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking. Then you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples harden sharply from the excitement. Svyatoslav stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
+					'You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking before you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples harden sharply from the excitement as Svyatoslav stares at your bare breasts, looking almost entranced by them.'
 					act 'Put them away':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Sonia to giggle and Svyatoslav to shake his head, obviously already missing your tits. Several other students look over as if they just realized they missed something. You ignore their looks, Svyatoslav''s stare and Sonia''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
+						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Sonia to giggle and Svyatoslav to shake his head. Several other students look over as if they just realized they missed something. You ignore their looks, Svyatoslav''s stare and Sonia''s giggles and wait for the lesson to end.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 				end
@@ -285,14 +283,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 						gs 'flash', 'panties', 'indoors', 1, 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You turn towards Svyatoslav so you are sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off your panties to Svyatoslav, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
+						'You turn towards Svyatoslav so you''re sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little to show off a glimpse of your panties to Svyatoslav, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-								'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+								'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 							end
 						else
@@ -303,18 +301,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 							npc_rel['A8'] += 1
 							gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull your skirt up so your panties are exposed and Svyatoslav grins wide. You can tell he is hoping to see more by the way he is looking at you.'
+							'You pull your skirt up so your panties are exposed and Svyatoslav grins wide. You can tell he''s hoping to see more by the way he''s looking at you.'
 							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep3.jpg"></center>'
-								'Just as you are about to cover up, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, give me a peek at that pussy." Svyatoslav whispers to you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
+								'Just as you''re about to cover up, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, give me a peek at that pussy..." he whispers at you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
 								gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 								if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 									act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few moments, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few moments, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 									end
 								else
@@ -327,11 +325,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 									gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'indoors', 3, 1
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-									'"Then let go and I will show you." you say with a sly smile. He pauses for a moment, but then lets go of your panties and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Svyatoslav and anyone else who happens to look your way. Sonia tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Svyatoslav''s pants.'
+									'"Then let go and I''ll show you..." you say with a sly smile. He pauses for a second, but then lets go of your panties and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Svyatoslav and anyone else who happens to look your way. Sonia tries to sneak a peek as well as you see the bulge growing in Svyatoslav''s pants.'
 									act 'Put your pussy away':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Svyatoslav looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did has sparked your arousal, the evidence of which is currently soaking your panties and poking through your shirt. You find the remainder of class to be a little less boring.'
+										'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of the class again. Svyatoslav looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did has sparked your arousal, the evidence of which is currently soaking your panties and poking through your shirt. You find the remainder of the class to be a little less boring.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 									end
 								end
@@ -347,11 +345,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-						'You turn towards Svyatoslav so you are mostly facing him as you sit in your seat sideways and quickly pull up your skirt, flashing your pan'
+						'You turn towards Svyatoslav so you''re facing him as you sit in your seat sideways and quickly pull up your skirt, exposing your pussy.'
 						act 'Put your pussy away':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-							'After a couple of moments you pull your panties back in place, close your legs, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Svyatoslav looks crest fallen obviously hoping for it to last longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did has sparked your arousal the evidence of which is currently soaking your panties and poking through your top. This of course keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
+							'After a few seconds, you pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of the class again. Svyatoslav looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did has sparked your arousal, the evidence of which is currently soaking your panties and poking through your shirt. This keeps the rest of the class from being boring.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 						end
 					end
@@ -370,9 +368,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
-					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you and so you decide to take your panties off, just for something to do. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.' 
-					'At first, you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your bottom.  Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-					'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
+					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you and so decide to take your panties off, just for something to do. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.' 
+					'At first, you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your ass. Much to your surprise, nobody notices and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
+					'You step out of them, but as you''re bending down to pick them up, you realize some of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 				end
 			else
@@ -387,7 +385,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 		daydream = rand(1,4)
 		if daydream = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/caughtsleeping.jpg"></center>'
-			'Today''s lesson is dragging on and you find yourself drifting off constantly. All of a sudden you hear Mr. Yenotin clapping and without any hesitation, you also begin clapping. It doesn''t take long time before you realize that you''re the only one clapping. You feel your cheeks getting warm as you start blushing.'
+			'Today''s lesson is dragging on and you find yourself drifting off constantly. You suddenly hear Mr. Yenotin clapping and without any hesitation, you also begin clapping. It doesn''t take long for you to realize that you''re the only one clapping and you feel your cheeks getting warm as you start blushing.'
 			'"Welcome back Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Now, please pay attention. You don''t want to miss today''s topic since it''s going to be on the exam."'
 			act 'Reluctantly pay attention':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -419,7 +417,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 							grupvalue[3] -=1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 							'"It''s not like I''m the one interrupting the lesson. That would be you." you answer brashly, feeling pretty confident.'
-							'Mr. Yenotin walks back to the front of the class, but your smug smile drops when he opens the door. "OK <<$pcs_lastname>>, you''ve had your fun. Now get to the principal''s office!"'
+							'Mr. Yenotin walks back to the front of the class, but your smug smile drops when he opens the door. "Okay <<$pcs_lastname>>, you''ve had your fun. Now get to the principal''s office!"'
 							act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 						end
 					else
@@ -447,8 +445,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 		elseif daydream = 3:
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mr. Yenotin is talking about the history of the Russian language and it''s dragging on. You nod off from time to time and you''re having a hard time keeping awake.'
-			'All of a sudden, you find yourself in the Middle Ages walking around in a castle. You''re look around and see soldiers, clergymen and farmers going about their lives. In one corner, you see a girl your age waving you over to her. You happily run over, but just as you''re about to reach her, a clergyman stops you and speaks to you in a language you can''t seem to understand.'
+			'Mr. Yenotin is talking about the history of the Russian language and it''s dragging on. You nod off from time to time and you''re having a hard time staying awake.'
+			'All of a sudden, you find yourself in the Middle Ages walking around in a castle. You look around and see soldiers, clergymen and farmers going about their lives. In one corner, you see a girl your age waving you over to her. You happily run over, but just as you''re about to reach her, a clergyman stops you and speaks to you in a language you can''t seem to understand.'
 			'You''re panicking and try to answer back, but he doesn''t seem to understand you and is getting more and more agitated as time goes on. By now, there''s quite a crowd gathered that are listening to what the clergyman is saying. He''s pointing at you and talking angrily. Two soldiers appear through the crowd of people and the man starts explaining something. They turn to you, once again speaking in the strange language.'
 			*nl
 			'You look at them with a pleading look, trying to tell them that you don''t belong here, but they grab you by the arms and forcefully drag you away while you scream. They carry you over to a pillory and strip you of all your clothes before they lock you in.'
@@ -463,11 +461,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			'"I''m sorry Mr. Yenotin, I''ll be quiet." you reply, but it''s too late. Mr. Yenotin is insisting that you walk up to the chalkboard and carry on with the lesson instead. You''re now standing in front of the class, blushing as he sits down in your seat.'
 			*nl
 			'"Well? We''re waiting. Tell us all about grammar." he pushes on. You take a deep breath, but as you''re about to speak, your voice cracks and the whole class starts laughing.'
-			'You are wondering what to do when the bell suddenly rings, startling you awake from your nightmare.'
+			'You''re wondering what to do when the bell suddenly rings, startling you awake from your nightmare.'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	end
-	act'Play with your phone':
+	act 'Play with your phone':
 		*clr & cla
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/phone.jpg"></center>'
@@ -502,7 +500,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 						grupvalue[3] += 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/takephone.jpg"></center>'
 						'You decide it''s not worth it and silently hand your phone over to him.'
-						'He walks back to the front of the class and tosses your phone in a drawer in his desk. "You can have it back after class <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
+						'He walks back to the front of the class and tosses your phone in a drawer in his desk. "You can have it back after class, <<$pcs_lastname>>."'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 					gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self'
@@ -565,7 +563,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/geography/geography.jpg"></center>'
 	openpage = rand(1,250)
 	'You walk into the classroom and see Mrs. Sokoloff sitting by her desk. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one under her watchful eye. Some of them get a friendly smile while others get a stern look.'
-	*nl
 	'Without wasting any time, she sternly tells the class to open their textbooks. "I hope you have all done your homework." Mrs. Sokoloff is a no nonsense teacher. She expects discipline and hard work and the ones able to abide by her rules are treated very kindly.'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', iif(grupTipe = 4 and traits['nerd_status'] = 0, 'hard', iif(traits['nerd_status'] > 0, 'easy', 'medium'))
@@ -599,8 +596,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 	act 'Don''t pay attention in class':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bored.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mrs. Sokoloff''s lecture has fallen into a droning rhythm that has brought you, and most of your classmates, into something of a trance as you slowly approach the end of class.'
-		'That comes to an abrupt halt when a bang from the front desk nearly startles you out of your chair.'
+		'Mrs. Sokoloff''s lecture has fallen into a droning rhythm that has brought you, and most of your classmates, into something of a trance as you slowly approach the end of class. That comes to an abrupt halt when a bang from the front desk nearly startles you out of your chair.'
 		'Without any hesitation, Mrs. Sokoloff starts shouting at Vitek, who is fast asleep. Her eyes sharpen as she approaches his desk. She slams her hand on his desk while Vitek struggles to act nonchalant as he works to quickly return to his senses.'
 		'Mrs. Sokoloff scowls at him, and is about to offer a few stern words when the bell rings. He''ll likely get a talking to, but as class is over, you won''t get to listen in. One of the girls whispers that Vitek is in deep trouble now.'
 		
@@ -615,7 +611,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Flash boobs at Artem(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Artem(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A152'] += 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -624,11 +620,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You notice Artem glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits to him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
+				'You notice Artem glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash boobs at Artem (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Artem (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
 			
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -642,7 +638,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you are doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you flip your skirt back down before he gets his phone up.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you''re doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you flip your skirt back down before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 				end
 			else
@@ -661,7 +657,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you are doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you flip your skirt back down before he gets his phone up. '
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you''re doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you flip your skirt back down before he gets his phone up. '
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 				end
 			else
@@ -678,7 +674,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'While Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, showing off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you are doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up. '
+					'While Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, showing off your panties to anyone that looks your way. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you''re doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up. '
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 				end
 			else
@@ -695,7 +691,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you are doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you flip your skirt back down before he gets his phone up. '
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while Andrey, Valentin, Vanya and Lazar grin at what you''re doing. Stasya starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Vitek tries to take a picture, but you flip your skirt back down before he gets his phone up. '
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 				end
 			else
@@ -707,7 +703,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 			gs 'phone_selfies', 'Phone_selfie_totals'
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/takeselfie.jpg"></center>'
-			'While looking at your phone you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
+			'While looking at your phone, you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
 			act 'Regular selfie':
 				*clr & cla
 				if Enable_Android = 1:
@@ -739,7 +735,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 					i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 					dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 				end
 			else
@@ -764,7 +760,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 					end
 				else
@@ -801,13 +797,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
 			'You get Vitek''s attention by smiling at him when he looks your direction. Then you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch stretches your uniform around your smaller breasts to accent what you do have. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
-			'Vitek glances around then leans over a bit to say "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>! Show me a little more."'
-			'Before you can decide what to do Stasya, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
+			'Vitek glances around before leaning over. "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>! Show me a little more."'
+			'Before you can decide what to do, Stasya, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
 			act 'Stasya''s suggestion.':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Stasya leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits." she says with a giggle.'
-				'You are a bit taken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
+				'Stasya leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits," she says with a giggle.'
+				'You''re taken aback by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
 				'She grins. "To tease him of course, just like your stretch. Go on, do it! Or flash him your panties."'
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -815,24 +811,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head and Vitek frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Stasya had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+						'You shake your head and Vitek frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Stasya had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Refuse to flash (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 				end
-				act 'Flash your boobs':
+				act 'Flash your breasts':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A9'] += 1
 					gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 1, 1
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb2.jpg"></center>'
-					'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking. Then you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples harden from the excitement. Vitek stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
+					'You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking before you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples harden from the excitement as Vitek stares at your bare breasts, looking almost entranced by them.'
 					act 'Put them away':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Stasya to giggle and Vitek to shake his head, obviously already missing your tits. Several other students look over as if they just realized that they missed something. You ignore their looks, Vitek''s stare and Stasya''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
+						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Stasya to giggle and Vitek to shake his head. Several other students look over as if they just realized that they missed something. You ignore their looks, Vitek''s stare and Stasya''s giggles and wait for the lesson to end.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 					end
 				end
@@ -843,14 +839,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You turn towards Vitek so you are sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off your panties a little to Vitek, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
+						'You turn towards Vitek so you''re sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little, showing off a glimpse of your panties to Vitek, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-								'You shake your head and Vitek frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+								'You shake your head and Vitek frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 							end
 						else
@@ -861,18 +857,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 							npc_rel['A9'] += 1
 							gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed. Vitek grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he is hoping to see more by the way he is looking at you.'
+							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed. Vitek grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he''s hoping to see more by the way he''s looking at you.'
 							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep3.jpg"></center>'
-								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy." Vitek whispers to you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
+								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy." he whispers at you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
 								gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 								if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 									act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Vitek frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Vitek frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 									end
 								else
@@ -885,11 +881,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 									gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'indoors', 3, 1
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-									'"Well let go and I will show you." you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses a moment, then lets go of your panties and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Vitek and anyone else who happens to look your way. You can see the bulge growing in Vitek''s pants.'
+									'"Well let go and I''ll show you," you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses for second, then lets go of your panties and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Vitek and anyone else who happens to look your way. You can see the bulge growing in Vitek''s pants.'
 									act 'Put your pussy away':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'After a couple of minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Vitek looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class.  The thrill of the events has sparked your arousal.  The evidence is currently soaking your panties and poking through your top. The remainder of class is a little less boring.'
+										'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of the class again. Vitek looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of the events has sparked your arousal, the evidence of which is currently soaking your panties and poking through your shirt. The remainder of class is a little less boring.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 									end
 								end
@@ -911,9 +907,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'geography':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
-					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so you decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.' 
-					'At first you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your bottom.  Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-					'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
+					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you and so decide to take your panties off, just for something to do. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.' 
+					'At first, you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your ass. Much to your surprise, nobody notices and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
+					'You step out of them, but as you''re bending down to pick them up, you realize some of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'geography'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1092,7 +1088,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
 	openpage = rand(1,250)
 	'You walk into the classroom and see Mrs. Sokoloff sitting by her desk. The rest of your classmates walk in one by one under her watchful eye. Some of the students get a friendly smile while others get a stern look.'
-	*nl
 	'Without wasting time, she sternly tells the class to open their textbooks. "I hope you all have done your homework." Mrs. Sokoloff is a no nonsense teacher. She expects discipline and hard work and the ones able to abide by her rules are treated very kindly.'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', iif(grupTipe = 4 and traits['nerd_status'] = 0, 'hard', iif(traits['nerd_status'] > 0, 'easy', 'medium'))
@@ -1126,8 +1121,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 	act 'Don''t pay attention in class':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bored.jpg"></center>'
-		'Mrs. Sokoloff''s lecture has fallen into a droning rhythm that has brought you, and most of your classmates, into something of a trance as you slowly approach the end of the class.'
-		'That comes to an abrupt halt when a bang from the front desk nearly startles you out of your chair.'
+		'Mrs. Sokoloff''s lecture has fallen into a droning rhythm that has brought you, and most of your classmates, into something of a trance as you slowly approach the end of the class. That comes to an abrupt halt when a bang from the front desk nearly startles you out of your chair.'
 		'Without any hesitation, Mrs. Sokoloff starts shouting at Radomir, who''s fast asleep. Her eyes sharpen as she approaches his desk. She slams her hand on his desk while Radomir struggles to act nonchalant as he works to quickly return to his senses.'
 		'Mrs. Sokoloff scowls at him, and is about to offer a few stern words when the bell rings. He''ll likely get a talking to, but as class is over, you won''t get to listen in. One of the girls whipsers that Radomir is in deep trouble now.'
 		
@@ -1142,7 +1136,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Flash boobs at Petka(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Petka(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A152'] += 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -1151,11 +1145,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You notice Petka glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits at him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
+				'You notice Petka glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash boobs at Petka (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Petka (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
 		
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -1169,7 +1163,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass while the rest of the class either grin or smile at what you are doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass while the rest of the class either grin or smile at what you''re doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1188,7 +1182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you while the rest of the class either grin or smile at what you are doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up. '
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you while the rest of the class either grin or smile at what you''re doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up. '
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1205,7 +1199,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'While Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, showing off your panties to anyone that looks your way. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while the rest of the students either grin or smile at what you are doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+					'While Mrs. Sokoloff''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, showing off your panties to anyone that looks your way. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while the rest of the students either grin or smile at what you''re doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1222,19 +1216,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but instead you pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while the rest of the class either grin or smile at what you are doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up. '
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mrs. Sokoloff''s desk. After making sure Mrs. Sokoloff isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties while the rest of the class either grin or smile at what you''re doing. Lina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did while Roman tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up. '
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 				end
 			else
 				act 'Get up and flash panties (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end
 		end
-			
+		
 		act 'Take selfie':
 			gs 'phone_selfies', 'Phone_selfie_totals'
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/takeselfie.jpg"></center>'
-			'While looking at your phone you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
+			'While looking at your phone, you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
 			act 'Regular selfie':
 				*clr & cla
 				if Enable_Android = 1:
@@ -1327,14 +1321,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 		act 'Tease Roman':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get Roman''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction. Then you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch stretches your uniform around your smaller breasts to accent what you do have. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
-			'Roman glances around then leans over a bit to say "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
-			'Before you can decide what to do Lera, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
+			'You get Roman''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction before you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch stretches your uniform around your smaller breasts to accent what you do have. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
+			'Roman glances around before leaning over. "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
+			'Before you can decide what to do, Lera, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
 			act 'Lera''s suggestion':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Lera leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits." she says with a giggle.'
-				'You are a bit taken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
+				'Lera leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits," she says with a giggle.'
+				'You''re taken aback by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
 				'She grins. "To tease him of course, just like your stretch. Go on, do it! Or flash him your panties."'
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -1342,24 +1336,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head and Roman frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Lera had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+						'You shake your head and Roman frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Lera had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Refuse to flash (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 				end
-				act 'Flash your boobs':
+				act 'Flash your breasts':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A157'] += 1
 					gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 1, 1
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb2.jpg"></center>'
-					'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking. Then you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement. Roman stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
+					'You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking before you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement. Roman stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
 					act 'Put them away':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Lera to giggle and Roman to shake his head, obviously already missing your tits. Several other students look over as if they just realized they just missed something. You ignore their looks, Roman''s stare and Lera''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
+						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Lera to giggle and Roman to shake his head. Several other students look over as if they just realized they just missed something. You ignore their looks, Roman''s stare and Lera''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 					end
 				end
@@ -1370,14 +1364,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You turn towards Roman so you are sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off your panties a little, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
+						'You turn towards Roman so you''re sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little, showing off a glimpse of your panties, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-								'You shake your head and Roman frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+								'You shake your head and Roman frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 							end
 						else
@@ -1388,18 +1382,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 							npc_rel['A157'] += 1
 							gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Roman, who grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he is hoping to see more by the way he is looking at you.'
+							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Roman, who grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he''s hoping to see more by the way he''s looking at you.'
 							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep3.jpg"></center>'
-								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy." Roman whispers to you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
+								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy," he whispers at you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
 								gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 								if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 									act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Roman frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Roman frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 									end
 								else
@@ -1412,11 +1406,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 									gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'indoors', 3, 1
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-									'"Well let go and I will show you." you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, then lets go of your panties and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Roman and anyone else who happens to look your way. Lera tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Roman''s pants.'
+									'"Well let go and I''ll show you," you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, then lets go of your panties and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Roman and anyone else who happens to look your way. Lera tries to sneak a peek as well as you see the bulge growing in Roman''s pants.'
 									act 'Put your pussy away':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'After a couple of minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Roman looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of the events has sparked your arousal.  The evidence is currently soaking your panties and poking through your shirt. This keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
+										'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of the class again. Roman looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of the events has sparked your arousal, the evidence of which is currently soaking your panties and poking through your shirt. This keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 									end
 								end
@@ -1439,8 +1433,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
 					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so you decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.'  
-					'At first you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your bottom.  Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-					'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
+					'At first you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your ass. Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
+					'You step out of them, but as you''re bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1495,7 +1489,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about since you keep dozing off.'
 				'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Mrs. Sokoloff call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
-				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mrs. Sokoloff scolds you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
+				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other students snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mrs. Sokoloff scolds you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
 				'It was an embarrassing experience, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'history'
@@ -1505,7 +1499,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. Mrs. Sokoloff is droning on about the Tsar''s family and their life.'
 			'You close your eyes as you fantasize about living at that time as a noble. You''re in a large room in your underwear while an entourage of women and girls run around presenting a number of dresses for you to wear to the party.'
 			'You''re having a hard time picking out a specific dress as you really want to impress a certain duke. You turn to your head maiden with a dejected sigh. "So many choices, what should I wear?"'
-			'"The lady will look fabulous in whatever she chooses." the head maiden answers.'
+			'"The lady will look fabulous in whatever she chooses," the head maiden answers.'
 			'As you''re about to pick out a dress, you suddenly jolt awake while blurting out your choice. The person sitting closest to you looks at you confused, but luckily no one else hears what you said.'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		else
@@ -1513,12 +1507,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'history':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 			'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. Mrs. Sokoloff is talking about a grand female leader from the Middle Ages. You''re finding her story pretty boring and keep dozing off.'
 			'All of a sudden, you find yourself on a battlefield riding a horse. You seem to be wearing a heavy suit of armor and you''re riding up and down a flank as you''re trying to amass the troops for an attack.'
-			'You are just about to give a grandiose speech when everything goes quiet as you hear church bells ringing loudly in the distance.'
+			'You''re just about to give a grandiose speech when everything goes quiet as you hear church bells ringing loudly in the distance.'
 			'You twitch in your seat upon hearing the class bell ringing.'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	end
-	act'Play with your phone':
+	act 'Play with your phone':
 		*clr & cla
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/phone.jpg"></center>'

locations/gschool_lessons2.qsrc

@@ -33,7 +33,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				compskl_exp += rand(0,1)
 				intel_exp += rand(0,1)
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/ask.jpg"></center>'
-				if grupTipe=3:
+				if grupTipe= 3:
 					'Mr. Ivanov nods approvingly. He happily spends some extra time explaining the topic again to you, and answers any extra questions you might have. You feel like you learned a lot, thoroughly understanding today''s lessons now.'
 				else
 					'Mr. Ivanov audibly sighs. "Why are you unable to grasp this? I know you''re not the smartest student, but this is really very simple. Even a small child should be able to grasp it." He goes on to explain the part you asked about again, but he does so in a completely belittling manner.'
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		end
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Flash boobs at Artem (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Artem (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A2'] += 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -70,12 +70,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You notice Artem glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Ivanov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits at him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you''re doing.' 
-				'Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone what you just did. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
+				'You notice Artem glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Ivanov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing.' 
+				'Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash boobs at Artem (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Artem (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end	
 		
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -89,8 +89,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Ivanov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Ivanov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone in looking. A couple of the other students notice what you''re doing.' 
-					'Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass while Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone what you just did. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up. '
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Ivanov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Ivanov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone in looking. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing.' 
+					'Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass while Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up. '
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 				end
 			else
@@ -109,8 +109,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Ivanov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Ivanov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. A couple of the other students notice what you''re doing.' 
-					'Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your ass while Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone what you just did. Vasily tries to take a picture but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Ivanov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Ivanov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing.' 
+					'Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your ass while Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone. Vasily tries to take a picture but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 				end
 			else
@@ -127,8 +127,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'While Mr. Ivanov''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, showing off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A couple of the others students notice what you''re doing.' 
-					'Artem just stares with his mouth wide open, Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone what you just did. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
+					'While Mr. Ivanov''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, showing off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A few of the others students notice what you''re doing.' 
+					'Artem just stares with his mouth wide open, Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 				end
 			else
@@ -145,8 +145,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Ivanov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Ivanov isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but you instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking.' 
-					'Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your ass, Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone what you just did. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Ivanov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Ivanov isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking.' 
+					'Artem''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your ass, Sonia grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Anushka and Alyona smile about it and Lizaveta starts texting on her phone. Vasily tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 				end
 			else
@@ -190,7 +190,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 					dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 				end
 			else
@@ -251,14 +251,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		act 'Tease Vasily':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get Vasily''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction. Then you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch finally helps your uniform stretch around your breasts to accent what little you do have for breasts. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
-			'Vasily glances around then leans over a bit to say "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
-			'Before you can decide what to do Sonia who watched it all gets your attention.'
+			'You get Vasily''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction before you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch finally helps your uniform stretch around your breasts to accent what little you do have. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
+			'Vasily glances around before leaning over. "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
+			'Before you can decide what to do, Sonia, who watched it all gets your attention.'
 			act 'Sonia''s suggestion':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Sonia leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits." she says with a giggle.'
-				'You are a bit taken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
+				'Sonia leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits," she says with a giggle.'
+				'You''re taken aback by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
 				'She grins. "To tease him of course, just like your stretch. Go on, do it! Or flash him your panties."'
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -272,17 +272,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				else
 					act 'Refuse to flash (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 				end
-				act 'Flash your boobs':
+				act 'Flash your breasts':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A11'] += 1
 					gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 2, 1
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb2.jpg"></center>'
-					'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking. Then you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement. Vasily stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
+					'You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking before you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement as Vasily stares at your bare breasts, looking almost entranced by them.'
 					act 'Put them away':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Sonia to giggle and Vasily to shake his head, obviously already missing your tits. Several other students look over as if they just realized they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Vasily''s stare and Sonia''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
+						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Sonia to giggle and Vasily to shake his head. Several other students look over as if they just realized they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Vasily''s stare and Sonia''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 					end
 				end
@@ -292,14 +292,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 						gs 'flash', 'panties', 'indoors', 2, 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You turn towards Vasily so you are sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off your panties to Vasily, who grins wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
+						'You turn towards Vasily so you''re sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little, showing off a glimpse of your panties to Vasily, who grins wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-								'You shake your head and Vasily frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+								'You shake your head and Vasily frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 							end
 						else
@@ -310,18 +310,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 							npc_rel['A11'] += 1
 							gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed. He grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he is hoping to see more by the way he is looking at you.'
+							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed. He grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he''s hoping to see more by the way he''s looking at you.'
 							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep3.jpg"></center>'
-								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy." Vasily whispers as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
+								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy," he whispers as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
 								gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 								if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 									act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Vasily frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Vasily frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 									end
 								else
@@ -334,11 +334,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 									gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'indoors', 3, 1
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-									'"Well let go and I will show you." you tell himw ith a sly smile. He pauses a moment, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Vasily and anyone else who happens to look your way. Sonia tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Vasily''s pants.'
+									'"Well let go and I''ll show you," you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Vasily and anyone else who happens to look your way. Sonia tries to sneak a peek as well as you see the bulge growing in Vasily''s pants.'
 									act 'Put your pussy away':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'After a couple of minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Vasily looks crest fallen obviously hoping for it to last longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class but the thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
+										'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of class again. Vasily looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class but the thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 									end
 								end
@@ -359,9 +359,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
-					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.  At first you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your bottom.'  
-					'Much to your surprise, no one notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-					'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
+					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly. At first, you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your ass.'  
+					'Much to your surprise, no one notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
+					'You step out of them, but as you''re bending over to pick them up, you realize a few of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 				end
 			else
@@ -370,13 +370,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act'Daydream':
+	act 'Daydream':
 		*clr & cla
 		daydream = rand(1,4)
 		if daydream = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/caughtsleeping.jpg"></center>'
 			'Today''s lessons doesn''t particularly interest you and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while, you notice Mr. Ivanov has stopped talking and is looking at you intently, asking you to pay attention. This is apparently the third time he has asked; you missed the first two while you were lost in your own thoughts. The whole class is looking at you.'
-			if grupTipe=3:
+			if grupTipe= 3:
 				'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, please pay attention, this is very important. Today''s topic is going to be on the exam."'
 			else
 				'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, if you don''t want to listen and learn, then I suggest you stop coming to class. Now stop wasting my time and pay attention!"'
@@ -390,7 +390,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				'You roll your eyes at him when he turns his back and sit through the rest of the lesson in silence. Despite your best efforts, you struggle to pay attention and don''t learn anything.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 			end
-			act'Try to focus on the lesson':
+			act 'Try to focus on the lesson':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'grades', 'class_activity_attributes', 'school', 'comp', pcs_intel
 				grupvalue[4] -= 1
@@ -398,7 +398,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 				compskl_exp += rand(0,2)
 				intel_exp += rand(0,1)
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/payattention.jpg"></center>'
-				'You don''t want to get in trouble so you straighten up in your chair. "Sorry." Mr. Ivanov gives you one final look and then goes back to teaching the class, you do your best to pay attention for the rest of class.'
+				'You don''t want to get in trouble so you straighten up in your chair and apologize. Mr. Ivanov gives you one final look before he goes back to teaching the class as you do your best to pay attention.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 			end
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -412,7 +412,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 					grupvalue[4] += 1
 					grupvalue[3] -= 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bored.jpg"></center>'
-					'"Oh please do continue your super fascinating lesson. I don''t think there''s enough condescending arrogance in your voice though." you answer boldly.'
+					'"Oh please do continue your super fascinating lesson. I don''t think there''s enough condescending arrogance in your voice though," you answer boldly.'
 					'Some of your classmates burst into loud laughter while others are stunned into silence. Mr. Ivanov turns and gives the rest of class a hard look. "SILENCE!" he loudly booms before turning back to you.'
 					'"You think you''re being funny Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? Well you''re taking your smart mouth to the principal right now."'
 					gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'medium'
@@ -471,7 +471,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 			    'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you keep dozing off.'
 			    'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Mr. Ivanov call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
 			    *nl
-		        'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Ivanov tells you the correct answer. "Pathetic. I honestly wonder why you even bother coming to school at all if you can''t answer such a simple question. You''ll be flipping burgers after you graduate." he says in disgust.'
+		        'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other students snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Ivanov tells you the correct answer. "Pathetic. I honestly wonder why you even bother coming to school at all if you can''t answer such a simple question. You''ll be flipping burgers after you graduate." he says in disgust.'
 			    'It was an embarrassing experience, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
@@ -537,11 +537,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 							'When Mr. Ivanov arrives at your desk, he sternly asks "I''m not going to ask twice <<$pcs_lastname>>. Hand it over!"'
 							'You give him a sly smile as you hand over your phone with the last picture you took still on the screen.'
 							if grupTipe = 3:
-								'He looks at the screen and shakes his head before stuffing your phone in his pocket. "You are better than this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I urge you not to start down this path." he says before returning to the front of the class and continuing his lesson.'
+								'He looks at the screen and shakes his head before stuffing your phone in his pocket. "You''re better than this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I urge you not to start down this path." he says before returning to the front of the class and continuing his lesson.'
 							else
-								'He looks at the screen and doesn''t react at first. He walks back to the front of the class, looks at the image a final time then puts the phone in his desk while shaking his head.'+iif(npc_rel['A69'] >+50, ' "You are better than this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I urge you not to start down this path." He then continues his lesson.', ' "I expected nothing less from you <<$pcs_lastname>>. You never fail to fall down to your lowest potential." He then continues his lesson.')
-!!this is added to the above if Sveta is not a nerd, but I am commenting it out for now because I need to write the after school scene first.
-!!'He adds to you "Come see me after school if you want your phone back, or I can just return it to your parents."'
+								'He looks at the screen and doesn''t react at first. He walks back to the front of the class, looks at the image a final time then puts the phone in his desk while shaking his head.'+iif(npc_rel['A69'] >+50, ' "You''re better than this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I urge you not to start down this path." He then continues his lesson.', ' "I expected nothing less from you <<$pcs_lastname>>. You never fail to fall down to your lowest potential." He then continues his lesson.')
+								!!this is added to the above if Sveta is not a nerd, but I''m commenting it out for now because I need to write the after school scene first.
+								!! if grupTipe ! 3:
+								!!'"Come see me after school if you want your phone back, or I can just return it to your parents."'
 							end
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'computer'
 						end
@@ -560,8 +561,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'computer':
 							'You deftly shove the phone in your bra, and smile fiendishly as you see the indecisiveness on your teacher''s face.'
 							'You pretend it''s a perfectly normal place to store your phone, and use your cute voice as you tell him, "Is there a problem, Mr. Ivanov? Go ahead, take my phone if it''s not allowed." You thrust your chest forward and the outline of your phone is visible through the fabric.'
 							'Realizing he can''t retrieve your phone without causing any awkward situations, he returns to the front of the class in defeat. "I expected nothing less from you Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. You never fail to fall down to your lowest potential." You pull your phone back out as he resumes his lesson, looking somewhat annoyed.'
-!!this is added to the above if Sveta is not a nerd, but I am commenting it out for now because I need to write the afterschool scene first.
-!!'He adds to you "Come see me after school if you want your phone back, or I can just return it to your parents."'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 						end
 					elseif $braworntype ! 'none' and will_cost > pcs_willpwr:
@@ -632,7 +631,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 		end
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Flash boobs at Fedor (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Fedor (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A5'] += 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -641,11 +640,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You notice Fedor glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits to him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
+				'You notice Fedor glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash boobs at Fedor (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Fedor (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end	
 		
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -659,7 +658,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Andrey and Vanya grin, Stasya gives you a annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Andrey and Vanya grin, Stasya gives you an annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 				end
 			else
@@ -678,7 +677,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your ass, Andrey and Vanya grin, Stasya gives you a annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your ass, Andrey and Vanya grin, Stasya gives you an annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 				end
 			else
@@ -695,7 +694,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'While Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Andrey and Vanya, Stasya gives you a annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'While Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Andrey and Vanya grin, Stasya gives you an annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 				end
 			else
@@ -712,7 +711,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but you instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Andrey and Vanya grin, Stasya gives you a annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Andrey and Vanya grin, Stasya gives you an annoyed look when Andrey reacts and Irina starts texting on her phone.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 				end
 			else
@@ -724,7 +723,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 			gs 'phone_selfies', 'Phone_selfie_totals'
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/takeselfie.jpg"></center>'
-			'While looking at your phone you  decided now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
+			'While looking at your phone you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
 			act 'Regular selfie':
 				*clr & cla
 				if Enable_Android = 1:
@@ -756,7 +755,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 					i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 					dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' You fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it''s finally back in place, you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 				end
 			else
@@ -781,7 +780,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 					end
 				else
@@ -804,7 +803,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 				else
@@ -824,9 +823,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
-					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you and decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.  At first you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your bottom.'  
-					'Much to your surprise, no one notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-					'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
+					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you and decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly. At first, you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your ass.'  
+					'Much to your surprise, no one notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
+					'You step out of them, but as you''re bending over to pick them up, you realize a few of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 				end
 			else
@@ -835,7 +834,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act'Daydream':
+	act 'Daydream':
 		*clr & cla
 		daydream = rand(1,6)
 		if daydream = 1:
@@ -874,8 +873,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 							grupvalue[4] += 1
 							grupvalue[3] -= 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bitchflip.jpg"></center>'
-							'"What good would that do? It''s not like I''m the one interrupting your class. That would be you. Just leave me alone.'
-							'Miss Orlov doesn''t know what to say and looks like she is going to cry. After composing herself, she decides to just continue her lesson. You hear one of the boys behind you call you a bitch, so you turn around and flip him off.'
+							'"What good would that do? It''s not like I''m the one interrupting your class. That would be you. Just leave me alone."'
+							'Miss Orlov doesn''t know what to say and looks like she''s going to cry. After composing herself, she decides to just continue her lesson. You hear one of the boys behind you call you a bitch, so you turn around and flip him off.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 						end
 					else
@@ -899,7 +898,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'science':
 				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you keep dozing off.'
 				'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Miss Orlov call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
 				*nl
-				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Miss Orlov tells you the correct answer. "You''re a smart girl, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I know you know this stuff. You only have to apply yourself and the sky is the limit for you. So please pay attention." she says, trying to encourage you.'
+				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other students snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Miss Orlov tells you the correct answer. "You''re a smart girl, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I know you know this stuff. You only have to apply yourself and the sky is the limit for you. So please pay attention." she says, trying to encourage you.'
 				'It was an embarrassing experience having everyone staring at you, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
@@ -1011,7 +1010,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 	chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/classmusic.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit in the classroom and listen to Mr. Vasilyev go on about how great music is while you wait for class to start. You do have to commend the fact that he is always upbeat and positive about teaching and encourages all of his students to take part.'
+	'You sit in the classroom and listen to Mr. Vasilyev go on about how great music is while you wait for class to start. He''s always upbeat and positive about teaching and encourages all of his students to take part.'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', iif(grupTipe = 4 and traits['nerd_status'] = 0, 'hard', iif(traits['nerd_status'] > 0, 'easy', 'medium'))
 	if traits['nerd_status'] = 2: will_cost = will_cost / 2
@@ -1028,7 +1027,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			if traits['nerd_status'] < 3: gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/attention.jpg"></center>'
-			'You listen attentively to Mr. Vasilyev for the duration of the class. Today''s lesson was interesting and informative, and you feel you learned a lot about the history of music and famous artist.'
+			'You listen attentively to Mr. Vasilyev for the duration of the class. Today''s lesson was interesting and informative, and you feel you learned a lot about the history of music and famous artists.'
 			act 'Ask a question about the lesson':
 				*clr & cla
 				instrmusic_exp += rand(0,1)
@@ -1061,7 +1060,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Flash boobs at Petka (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Petka (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A6'] += 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -1070,11 +1069,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You notice Petka glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits to him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
+				'You notice Petka glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who stares with his mouth open. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash boobs at Petka (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Petka (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end	
 		
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -1088,7 +1087,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you are doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you''re doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1107,7 +1106,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you are doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you''re doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1124,7 +1123,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'While Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you are doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
+					'While Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you''re doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1141,7 +1140,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but you instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you are doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Petka''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Katja looks shocked then grins at what you''re doing, Bella gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Lariska and Lina smile about it before Lina starts texting on her phone. Lavrenti tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1153,7 +1152,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			gs 'phone_selfies', 'Phone_selfie_totals'
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/takeselfie.jpg"></center>'
-			'While looking at your phone you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
+			'While looking at your phone, you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
 			act 'Regular selfie':
 				*clr & cla
 				if Enable_Android = 1:
@@ -1185,7 +1184,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 					dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'Feeling particularily brash,you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+					'Feeling particularily brash,you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' You fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it''s finally back in place, you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1210,7 +1209,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1234,7 +1233,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1246,14 +1245,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 		act 'Tease Lavrenti':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
-			'You get Lavrenti''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction. Then you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch finally helps your uniform stretch around your breasts to accent what little you do have for breasts. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
-			'Lavrenti glances around then leans over a bit to say "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
-			'Before you can decide what to do Katja, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
+			'You get Lavrenti''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction before you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your <<$titsize>> breasts to thrust out as you do.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your uniform stretches to its limits threatening to pop buttons. ', ' The stretch finally helps your uniform stretch around your breasts to accent what little you do have. ')+'He watches you intently while you bite your lower lip looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch you pretend to act all innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
+			'Lavrenti glances around before leaning over. "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
+			'Before you can decide what to do, Katja, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
 			act 'Katja''s suggestion.':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb1.jpg"></center>'
-				'Katja leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits." she says with a giggle.'
-				'You are a bit taken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
+				'Katja leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits," she says with a giggle.'
+				'You''re aback by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
 				'She grins. "To tease him of course, just like your stretch. Go on, do it! Or flash him your panties."'
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -1261,24 +1260,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 						*clr & cla
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head and Lavrenti frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Katja had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+						'You shake your head and Lavrenti frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Katja had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 					end
 				else
 					act 'Refuse to flash (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 				end
-				act 'Flash your boobs':
+				act 'Flash your breasts':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A155'] += 1
 					gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 2, 1
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb2.jpg"></center>'
-					'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking. Then you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement. Lavrenti stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
+					'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking before you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare <<$titsize>> breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement. Lavrenti stares at your bare breasts, looking almost entranced by them.'
 					act 'Put them away':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Katja to giggle and Lavrenti to shake his head, obviously already missing your tits. Several other students look over as if they just realized they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Lavrenti''s stare and Katja''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
+						'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Katja to giggle and Lavrenti to shake his head. Several other students look over as if they just realized they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Lavrenti''s stare and Katja''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 					end
 				end
@@ -1289,14 +1288,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep1.jpg"></center>'
-						'You turn towards Lavrenti so you are sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off your panties a little to Lavrenti, who grins wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
+						'You turn towards Lavrenti so you are sitting in your seat sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little, showing off a glimpse of your panties to Lavrenti, who grins wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-								'You shake your head and Lavrenti frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+								'You shake your head and Lavrenti frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 							end
 						else
@@ -1307,18 +1306,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 							npc_rel['A155'] += 1
 							gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep2.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Lavrenti. He grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he is hoping to see more by the way he is looking at you.'
+							'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Lavrenti. He grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he''s hoping to see more by the way he''s looking at you.'
 							act 'Continue':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep3.jpg"></center>'
-								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>! Show me your pussy." Lavrenti whispers to you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
+								'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>! Show me your pussy," he whispers at you as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
 								gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 								if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 									act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 										*clr & cla
 										gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Lavrenti frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+										'You forcefully pull his hand away and Lavrenti frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 									end
 								else
@@ -1331,11 +1330,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 									gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'indoors', 3, 1
 									gs 'stat'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-									'Well let go and I''ll show you." you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses a moment, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Lavrenti and anyone else to see who happens to look your way. Katja tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Lavrenti''s pants.'
+									'Well let go and I''ll show you," you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Lavrenti and anyone else to see who happens to look your way. Katja tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Lavrenti''s pants.'
 									act 'Put your pussy away':
 										*clr & cla
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-										'After a couple of minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Lavrenti looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
+										'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of the class again. Lavrenti looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
 										act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 									end
 								end
@@ -1358,8 +1357,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
 					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so you decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.'  
-					'At first you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your bottom.  Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-					'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
+					'At first, you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your ass.  Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
+					'You step out of them, but as you''re bending over to pick them up, you realize a few of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1368,7 +1367,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act'Daydream':
+	act 'Daydream':
 		*clr & cla
 		daydream = rand(1,4)
 		if daydream = 1:
@@ -1410,8 +1409,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 							grupvalue[4] += 1
 							grupvalue[3] -= 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/payattention.jpg"></center>'
-							'"What good would that do? I''m not interrupting your class. Go back to your boring lecture and leave me alone." you answer brashly, having no intention of getting up.'
-							'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you will get out of my class NOW!" he demands, pointing at the door. You scoff and begrudingly leave the class.'
+							'"What good would that do? I''m not interrupting your class. Go back to your boring lecture and leave me alone!" you answer brashly, having no intention of getting up.'
+							'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you will get out of my class NOW!" he demands while pointing at the door. You scoff and begrudingly leave the class.'
 							act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 						end
 					else
@@ -1434,7 +1433,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you keep dozing off.'
 				'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Mr. Vasilyev call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
-				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Vasilyev chides you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
+				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other students snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Vasilyev chides you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
 				'It was an embarrassing experience, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'music'
@@ -1445,7 +1444,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'music':
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	end
-	act'Play with your phone':
+	act 'Play with your phone':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/phone.jpg"></center>'
 		'You take out your phone and begin to play a game, hoping the boring lesson will be over soon.'
@@ -1585,7 +1584,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Flash boobs at Lesco (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Lesco (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				npc_rel['A5'] += 1
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -1594,11 +1593,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 				gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You notice Lesco glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits at him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who continues to stare at you with his mouth open.'
+				'You notice Lesco glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing and most of them either grin, smile or laugh at your antics. All but Lesco of course, who continues to stare at you with his mouth open.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Flash boobs at Lesco (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Flash your breasts at Lesco (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
 		
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -1612,7 +1611,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at your naked ass while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at your naked ass while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone about what you just did.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1631,7 +1630,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at you while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at you while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone about what you just did.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1648,7 +1647,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'While Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at your panties while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'While Miss Orlov''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at your panties while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone about what you just did.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1665,7 +1664,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but you instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at your panties while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone at once. You are sure she is texting everyone about what you just did.'
+					'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Miss Orlov''s desk. After making sure Miss Orlov isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Lesco and Artem''s mouths drop open as they just stare at your panties while Dan, Lavrenti and Lazar grin. Irina starts texting on her phone, likely telling everyone about what you just did.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1676,7 +1675,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 		act 'Take selfie':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/takeselfie.jpg"></center>'
-			'While looking at your phone you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
+			'While looking at your phone, you decide now would be a good time to take a selfie, but what kind of selfie should you take?'
 			act 'Regular selfie':
 				*clr & cla
 				i = rand(1,classroom_clotot)
@@ -1698,7 +1697,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					i = rand(1,classroom_titflash)
 					dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' Your fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it is finally back in place you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+					'Feeling particularily brash, you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and might be useful for teasing someone later. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like.'+iif(pcs_cupsize >= 30, ' You fight with your blouse to cover yourself back up. Once it''s finally back in place, you take a look around and see a few grinning faces among your classmates. ', '')+'You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1718,7 +1717,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 						i = rand(1,classroom_pussyflash)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone later to tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1742,7 +1741,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1763,8 +1762,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
 					'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so you decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly.'  
-					'At first you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your bottom.  Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-					'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize a couple of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
+					'At first, you have to work against your own weight as you pull them past your ass. Much to your surprise, nobody notices the movement and you carry on. Once you get them past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
+					'You step out of them, but as you''re bending over to pick them up, you realize a few of the other students have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them into your purse and ignore the stares.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'science'
 				end
 			else
@@ -1773,7 +1772,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 		end
 	end
 	
-	act'Daydream':
+	act 'Daydream':
 		*clr & cla
 		daydream = rand(1,4)
 		if daydream = 1:
@@ -1811,8 +1810,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 							grupvalue[4] += 1
 							grupvalue[3] -= 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bitchflip.jpg"></center>'
-							'"What good would that do? It''s not like I''m the one interrupting your class. That would be you. Just leave me alone.'
-							'Miss Orlov doesn''t know what to say and looks like she is going to cry. After composing herself, she decides to just continue her lesson. You hear one of the boys behind you call you a bitch, so you turn around and flip him off.'
+							'"What good would that do? It''s not like I''m the one interrupting your class. That would be you. Just leave me alone!"'
+							'Miss Orlov doesn''t know what to say and looks like she''s going to cry. After composing herself, she decides to just continue her lesson. You hear one of the boys behind you call you a bitch, so you turn around and flip him off.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
 						end
 					else
@@ -1836,7 +1835,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you keep dozing off.'
 				'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Miss Orlov call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, and realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
 				*nl
-				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Miss Orlov tells you the correct answer. "You''re a smart girl, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I know you know this stuff. You only have to apply yourself and the sky is the limit for you. So please pay attention." she says, trying to encourage you.'
+				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other students snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Miss Orlov tells you the correct answer. "You''re a smart girl, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I know you know this stuff. You only have to apply yourself and the sky is the limit for you. So please pay attention." she says, trying to encourage you.'
 				'It was an embarrassing experience having everyone staring at you, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'biology'
@@ -1853,7 +1852,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'biology':
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	end
-	act'Play with your phone':
+	act 'Play with your phone':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/phone.jpg"></center>'
 		'You take out your phone and begin to play a game, hoping the boring lesson will be over soon.'
@@ -1949,7 +1948,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'arina_dream':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/arina/sex/dream/dream1.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you walk up to her desk, you notice the lighting is reddish and there is a Saint Andrew''s cross in front of the chalkboard, with a variety of sex toys scattered across her desk. She takes a seat on the edge of her desk. "Get down on your knees and lick my shoes clean."'
 	'"What?" You ask, shocked at her request.'
-	'"Lick my shoes clean or your punishment will be even worse." she sternly tells you. You can''t help yourself and so pick up her foot and start licking her shoes.'
+	'"Lick my shoes clean or your punishment will be even worse!" she sternly tells you. You can''t help yourself and so pick up her foot and start licking her shoes.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'BDSM', 3, 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Further punishment':

locations/gschool_lessons3.qsrc

@@ -8,8 +8,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/classlit.jpg"></center>'
 	'"I want everyone quiet and in a seat!" Ms. Braakman demands as she finishes writing today''s lesson plan on the chalkboard. The room lets out a collective groan as they see the mountain of work they have to do today.'
-	'"She''s always piling on the work and expects everyone to have it finished by the end of class." you overhear a girl complain with a heavy sigh.'
-	'Clearing her throat, Ms. Braakman raises her voice to speak over the noise "The sooner everyone takes out their textbooks, the quicker we can get started. Who knows, maybe we''ll finish early and you''ll have some free time." Hearing this, the room settles down and soon the lesson begins.'
+	'"She''s always piling on the work and expects everyone to have it finished by the end of class!" you overhear a girl complain with a heavy sigh.'
+	'Clearing her throat, Ms. Braakman raises her voice to speak over the noise. "The sooner everyone takes out their textbooks, the quicker we can get started. Who knows, maybe we''ll finish early and you''ll have some free time." Hearing this, the room settles down and the lesson begins.'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', iif(grupTipe = 4 and traits['nerd_status'] = 0, 'hard', iif(traits['nerd_status'] > 0, 'easy', 'medium'))
 	if traits['nerd_status'] = 2: will_cost = will_cost / 2
@@ -38,19 +38,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 				elseif $boy = 'A140':
 					'Upon being called on, Lizaveta quickly hides her phone under her desk, an innocent smile gracing her face as Ms. Braakman glares at her. "Uh... what page are we on?" she asks with a nervous chuckle. There''s a few scattered laughs, but Ms. Braakman quickly silences the room. A nearby girl points out the right page number and paragraph, and with a smile Lizaveta starts reading as if nothing happened.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A156':
-					'"Give me a fucking break..." Arkadi mutters under his breath. Either Ms. Braakman didn''t hear him, or she''s choosing to avoid confrontation with the gopnik since she continues to wait in silence. Realizing there''s no avoiding it, Arkadi clears his throat and begins reading; his voice is flat and at times he pretends not to be able to pronounce a word just to annoy the teacher. Fed up with his antics, Ms. Braakman cuts him off, sarcastically thanks him for reading and quickly chooses a more competent student. With a triumphant smile, the gopnik closes his book and relaxes into his seat.'
+					'"Give me a fucking break..." Arkadi mutters under his breath. Either Ms. Braakman didn''t hear him, or she''s choosing to avoid confrontation since she continues to wait in silence. Realizing there''s no avoiding it, Arkadi clears his throat and begins reading; his voice is flat and at times he pretends not to be able to pronounce a word just to annoy the teacher. Fed up with his antics, Ms. Braakman cuts him off, sarcastically thanks him for reading and quickly chooses a more competent student. With a triumphant smile, Arkadi closes his book and relaxes into his seat.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A157':
-					'Roman scoffs. "Fuck that." he says nonchalantly. You can feel the tension growing as Ms. Braakman narrows her eyes and tells him again to read, only to be met with a taunting smile and silent defiance from the gopnik. After what feels like an eternity, Ms. Braakman chooses a different student and continues on with the lesson like nothing ever happened.'
+					'Roman scoffs. "Fuck that," he says nonchalantly. You can feel the tension growing as Ms. Braakman narrows her eyes and tells him again to read, only to be met with a taunting smile and silent defiance from the gopnik. After what feels like an eternity, Ms. Braakman chooses a different student and continues with the lesson like nothing happened.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A144':
-					'Anushka throws her head back and sighs dramatically. "The quicker you read, the sooner this will be over." Ms. Braakman insists. Hearing this, Anushka straightens up and starts to read, taking Ms. Braakman''s comment literally and speaking so fast that you can barely understand her.'
+					'Anushka throws her head back and sighs dramatically. "The quicker you read, the sooner this will be over," Ms. Braakman insists. Hearing this, Anushka straightens up and starts to read, taking Ms. Braakman''s comment literally and speaking so fast that you can barely understand her.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A6':
-					'Pekta obediently reads the passage and does so without any mistakes. "It''s always a pleasure to hear you read. If only your fellow students took their studies as seriously as you." Ms. Braakman compliments. Petka smiles slightly, but you can tell that he doesn''t like being openly complimented by the teacher, especially when students start to groan and call him a teacher''s pet.'
+					'Pekta obediently reads the passage and does so without any mistakes. "It''s always a pleasure to hear you read. If only your fellow students took their studies as seriously as you." Ms. Braakman compliments. Petka smiles slightly, but you can tell that he doesn''t like being openly complimented by the teacher, especially when the others giggle and call him a teacher''s pet.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A152':
-					'You watch Feofan frantically hide the comic book he was secretly reading before trying to find the right passage to read. "Save the cartoons for after class." Ms. Braakman warns him. Feofan starts to correct her, but the laughter from the other students silences him.'
+					'You watch Feofan frantically hide the comic book he was secretly reading before trying to find the right passage. "Save the cartoons for after class, Mr. Krupin," Ms. Braakman warns him. Feofan starts to correct her, but the laughter from the other students silences him.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A159':
-					'"Can''t you pick someone else?" Petia asks, slumping back into his seat. "I don''t even know what page we''re on." He garners a few laughs, but Ms. Braakman is quick to reprimand him, reminding him that if he keeps this up he''ll end up in detention and fail her class.'
+					'"Can''t you pick someone else?" Petia asks, slumping back into his seat. "I don''t even know what page we''re on!" He garners a few laughs, but Ms. Braakman is quick to reprimand him, reminding him that if he keeps this up he''ll end up in detention and fail her class.'
 				elseif $boy = 'A145':
-					'You look over to see Ekaterina has her head down, presumably asleep. Ms. Braakman asks her again, but the gopnik doesn''t respond. "We can always continue the lesson during detention." she threatens. After a moment, Ekaterina slowly sits up and lazily stretches before asking a nearby student for the page number and reading as instructed.'
+					'You look over and notice that Ekaterina has her head down, presumably asleep. Ms. Braakman asks her again, but the gopnik doesn''t respond. "We can always continue the lesson during detention..." she threatens. After a few seconds, Ekaterina slowly sits up and lazily stretches before asking a nearby student for the page number and reading as instructed.'
 				end
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
@@ -68,16 +68,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 			*nl
 			'"<<$pcs_lastname>>!!"'
 			*nl
-			'Hearing your name called, you snap back to reality just in time to see Ms. Braakman staring daggers at you from the front of the class. The scattered laughter from students causes you to squirm slightly in your seat.'
-			*nl
-			'"I''ve called your name three times now! If you want to sleep, you can do it during detention." she warns while pointing to the door.'
+			'Hearing your name called, you snap back to reality to see Ms. Braakman staring daggers at you from the front of the class. The scattered laughter from students causes you to squirm slightly in your seat.'
+			'"I''ve called your name three times now! If you want to sleep, you can do it during detention," she warns while pointing to the door.'
 			act 'Apologize':
 				*clr & cla
 				grupvalue[1] -=1
 				grupvalue[4] -=1
 				grupvalue[3] +=1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big137.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Sorry, Ms. Braakman." you mumble quietly as you sit up straight and refocus on the lesson. Satisfied, Ms. Braakman returns to teaching with a small smile.'
+				'"Sorry, Ms. Braakman..." you mumble quietly as you sit up straight and refocus on the lesson. Satisfied, Ms. Braakman returns to teaching with a small smile.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -91,15 +90,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 					grupvalue[4] +=1
 					grupvalue[3] -=1
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/pc/reactions/eyeroll.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You roll your eyes and sigh heavily, "I can''t help it. You just keep talking and talking." Your unexpected response causes the room to go quiet. "Everything you say is just so pointless. When am I ever going to need to know this stuff?" you ask rhetorically. "Never. Never is the answer."'
+					'You roll your eyes and sigh heavily. "I can''t help it. You just keep talking and talking..." Your unexpected response causes the room to go quiet. "Everything you say is just so pointless. When am I ever going to need to know this stuff?" you ask rhetorically. "Never. Never is the answer."'
 					'The whole class starts to ''ooh'' in disbelief at your bold response. Arkadi, Roman and Anushka''s laughter can probably be heard all the way down the hall.'
 					'Ms. Braakman''s face turns red and her expression darkens, a mixture of rage and embarrassment. "Get out of my class and report to the principal''s office right now!" she barks.'
 					act 'Go to the principal''s office':
 						*clr & cla
 						demerit +=5
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/pc/reactions/smirk.mp4"></video></center>'
-						*nl
-						'"Fine by me." you say with a smirk as you get up from your seat. You saunter past your fellow students and to the front of the class, where you flash Ms. Braakman a mockingly sweet smile before exiting the classroom.'
+						'"Fine by me," you say with a smirk as you get up from your seat. You saunter past your fellow students and to the front of the class, where you flash Ms. Braakman a mockingly sweet smile before exiting the classroom.'
 						act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 					end
 				end
@@ -118,16 +116,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 				'As Ms. Braakman continues talking, you find yourself unable to stay awake. You''re just on the edge of falling completely asleep when you''re snapped back to reality by the teacher calling your name. "Well? What''s the answer?" she asks with a smug smile.'
 				'You didn''t catch what the question was, so you take a quick look around the room and piece together an answer you hope is right. Unfortunately, you answer incorrectly, which Ms. Braakman is happy to point out to the entire class.'
-				'"A perfect example of how to fail my class." she smirks as the others begin to laugh at you.'
+				'"A perfect example of how to fail my class," she smirks as the others begin to laugh at you.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'literature'
 		elseif daydream = 3 and npc_rel['A144'] >= 50 and anush_sex >= 15 and hotcat >= 6 and $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You are bored out of your mind and can barely pretend to be paying attention. You notice Anushka watching you out of the corner of your eyes for a few minutes before she stops and starts writing something on a piece of paper.'
+			'You are bored out of your mind and can barely pretend to be paying attention. You notice Anushka watching you out of the corner of your eye for a few minutes before she stops and starts writing something on a piece of paper.'
 			act 'So bored': 
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom2.jpg"></center>'
-				'After a few seconds Anushka stops writing, tears the paper out of her notebook, folds it up and then passes it over to you. You take a look around to make sure no one is looking before taking the note from her.'
+				'After a few seconds Anushka stops writing, tears the paper out of her notebook, folds it up and passes it over to you. You take a look around to make sure no one is looking before taking the note from her.'
 				act 'Read the note':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom3.jpg"></center>'
@@ -144,7 +142,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom1.jpg"></center>'
 								'You shake your head and she frowns at you, then sighs as she rolls her eyes. She stops paying attention to you and you try your best to focus on the class, no matter how boring it is.'
-								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
+								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'literature'
 							end
 						else
 							act 'Refuse (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -166,11 +164,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 		else
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
-			'You fell asleep and the end of class bell wakes you up. You slowly get up and stretch before heading to your next class.'
+			'You fell asleep and the bell wakes you up. You slowly get up and stretch before heading to your next class.'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	end
-	act'Play with your phone':
+	act 'Play with your phone':
 		*clr & cla
 		act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/phone.jpg"></center>'
@@ -224,7 +222,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/nopanties_upskirt.jpg"></center>'
 								'With a mischievous smile, you deftly slide your phone under your skirt and spread your legs to take a picture of your bare pussy. Ms. Braakman stops in front of your desk, her hands on her hips as she stares daggers at you.'
 								'"Hand it over." she orders, one of her hands now held out in front of you. You obediently hand over your phone to her without argument. When she sees the screen is still on, she smiles smugly. "You were texting, weren''t you? Of course you were, that''s all you kids do these days. Well, I''m sure you wouldn''t mind if I shared with the class what you were--"'
-								'You can barely keep a straight face as you watch Ms. Braakman''s expression change from smug to confusion and then anger in a matter of seconds. You silently wait for her to order you out of the class and to the principal''s office, but she looks lost in her own thoughts as she continues to stare at the screen for a long moment. When she finally snaps back to reality, you could have sworn you saw a twinkle of excitement and longing in her eyes.'
+								'You can barely keep a straight face as you watch Ms. Braakman''s expression change from smug to confusion and then anger in a matter of seconds. You silently wait for her to order you out of the class and to the principal''s office, but she looks lost in her own thoughts as she continues to stare at the screen. When she finally snaps back to reality, you could have sworn you saw a twinkle of excitement and longing in her eyes.'
 								'"I don''t want to see you doing such things in my class again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! You can have this back after class." She says sharply, but the way she licks her lips afterwards speaks of something else. Without another word, she turns the screen off and returns to the front of the class to resume the lesson.'
 							end
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'getphone'
@@ -246,7 +244,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 							'"If you want my phone, go ahead and take it." you reply in a mockingly sweet voice as you thrust your chest out. Your teacher''s eyes darken dangerously, and you start to think you''ve won this fight, but your bluff is called as one of Ms. Braakman''s hands plunges into your shirt. "Ms. Braakman, I didn''t know today''s lesson would be so hands on!" you tease as you feel her hand slip inside your bra. Your smile widens as you hear the class erupt with cheering and laughter.'
 							'"You think you''re clever, don''t you?" she whispers, her voice low so only you can hear. You try to respond, but your words get caught in your throat as she starts to tease one of your nipples between her fingertips. Suddenly, she''s no longer searching but groping, her skillful fingers carefully moving between each breast until both of your sensitive buds are hard and straining almost uncomfortably against your bra. You can''t help but shift slightly in your seat as you feel a tightening sensation in your lower belly and an aching throb between your legs.'
 							*nl
-							'"Don''t make me remind you of your place, little girl." Ms. Braakman''s warning is punctuated painfully as she gives a sharp pinch and tug to one of your nipples, eliciting a soft whimper from you. Having gotten her point across, she removes her hand and with it your phone. "You can get this back after class."'
+							'"Don''t make me remind you of your place, little girl!" Ms. Braakman''s warning is punctuated painfully as she gives a sharp pinch and tug to one of your nipples, eliciting a soft whimper from you. Having gotten her point across, she fishes your phone out and removes her hand from your shirt. "You can get this back after class."'
 							'Flustered and aroused, you regain your senses and remember that you''re sitting in class right now. You look around the room, but it seems like her groping went unnoticed and was seen as her fishing out your phone like you challenged her to do.'
 							act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'getphone'
 						end
@@ -274,7 +272,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature_late':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel1.jpg"></center>'
 		if lit_late_counter > 15:
-			'When you open the door and walk in, Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you. Ms. Braakman addresses you with a cold tone. "Late again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Obviously, you''re not listening to me, so maybe the principal can help you understand good timekeeping. Get to her office now young lady!" she says as she points to the door behind you.'
+			'When you open the door and walk in, Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you as she addresses you with a cold tone. "Late again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Obviously, you''re not listening to me, so maybe the principal can help you understand good timekeeping. Get to her office now young lady!" she says as she points to the door behind you.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -291,12 +289,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature_late':
 			end
 			act 'Do as she says':
 				*clr & cla
-				 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel2.jpg"></center>'
-				 'Knowing she will force you to go anyway, you choose to avoid embarrassing yourself again and avert her fiery gaze as you begrudingly turn and leave the room. The door slams behind you once you step out.' 
-				 gs 'gschool_office', 'principal'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel2.jpg"></center>'
+				'Knowing she''ll force you to go anyway, you choose to avoid embarrassing yourself again and avert her fiery gaze as you begrudingly turn and leave the room. The door slams behind you once you step out.' 
+				gs 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 		elseif lit_late_counter > 10:
-			'When you open the door and walk in Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you. Ms. Braakman addresses you in a cold tone. "You''re late again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. You obviously haven''t learned your lesson. Come here now young lady!" she says as she points in front of her desk.'
+			'When you open the door and walk in, Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you as she addresses you in a cold tone. "You''re late again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. You obviously haven''t learned your lesson. Come here now young lady!" she says as she points in front of her desk.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -305,7 +303,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature_late':
 					demerit += 10
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/sleeppun2.jpg"></center>'
-					'You shake your head and then take your seat at your desk instead. Her eyes flicker with fury when you disobey her and she walks over and twists your ear. "You will learn your place in my classrom <<$pcs_lastname>>. Now get out and go to the principal!" she yells while pointing at the door.'
+					'You shake your head and take your seat at your desk instead. Her eyes flicker with fury when you disobey her and she walks over and twists your ear. "You will learn your place in my classroom <<$pcs_lastname>>. Now get out and go to the principal!" she yells while pointing at the door.'
 					act 'Go to principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 				end
 			else
@@ -313,13 +311,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature_late':
 			end
 			act 'Do as she says':
 				*clr & cla
-				 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel2.jpg"></center>'
-				 'You walk up and she drags a desk and chair to her desk so they are facing the class. "Sit." she orders while tapping the desk. You sheepishly sit down and your classmates start snickering at you. "Since you can never be on time and keep rudely interrupting my class, you will now experience the full power of my wrath."'
-				 '"From now on, every time you are even one minute late to my class, you will sit right here in front of your classmates. Maybe their stares will convince you to be here on the double." she says smugly before resuming her lesson. You are forced to sit through the lesson while your classmates look at you with their mocking gazes.'
-				 act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons3', 'literature'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel2.jpg"></center>'
+				'You walk up and she drags a desk and chair to her desk so they are facing the class. "Sit!" she orders while tapping the desk. You sheepishly sit down and your classmates start snickering at you. "Since you can never be on time and keep rudely interrupting my class, you will now experience the full power of my wrath."'
+				'"From now on, every time you are even one minute late to my class, you will sit right here in front of your classmates. Maybe their stares will convince you to be here on the double," she says smugly before resuming her lesson. You are forced to sit through the lesson while your classmates look at you with their mocking gazes.'
+				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons3', 'literature'
 				end
 		elseif lit_late_counter > 5:
-			'When you open the door and walk in, Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you. Ms. Braakman addresses you in a cold tone. "Late again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? I warned you I would not tolerate this. Now come up here right now young lady!" she says as she points in front of her desk.'
+			'When you open the door and walk in, Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you as she addresses you in a cold tone. "Late again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>? I warned you I would not tolerate this. Now come up here right now young lady!" she says as she points in front of her desk.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'pay'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -338,18 +336,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature_late':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel2.jpg"></center>'
 				'As you walk up, she grabs a chair and puts it in front of her desk, right in front of the whole class. She motions for you to sit. "Take a seat, young <<$pcs_lastname>>. You can sit here until you apologize to the class for disrupting the lesson."'
-				'"What? This is outrageous! It''s unfair!" you protest, but Ms. Braakman isn''t interested. She again points to the seat and so you begrudingly sit down and face the stares and snickers of your classmates for several seconds. "What do you have to say?" Ms. Braakman asks. "Sorry for being late and interrupting you." you reply.'
-				'"Goood. Now get to your desk and pay attention!" she snarls. You sheepishly stand and walk to your desk as your classmates continue to snicker at you. Ms. Braakman then resumes her lesson.'
+				'"What? This is outrageous! It''s unfair!" you protest, but Ms. Braakman isn''t interested. She again points to the seat and you begrudingly sit down and face the stares and snickers of your classmates for several seconds. "What do you have to say?" Ms. Braakman asks.' 
+				'"Sorry for being late and interrupting you..." you begrudingly reply.'
+				'"Good. Now get to your desk and pay attention!" she snarls. You sheepishly stand and walk to your desk as your classmates continue to snicker at you. Ms. Braakman then resumes her lesson.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons3', 'literature'
 			end
 		else
-			'When you open the door and walk in, Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you. Ms. Braakman addresses you in a cold tone. "You''re late Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I will not tolerate students being late to my class." Several of your classmates smirk while a few look annoyed that you interrupted class.'
+			'When you open the door and walk in, Ms. Braakman stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you as she addresses you in a cold tone. "You''re late Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I will not tolerate students being late to my class." Several of your classmates smirk while a few look annoyed that you interrupted class.'
 			act 'Apologize':
 				*clr & cla
 				demerit += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You look down a bit. "Sorry, I was running late and time just got away from me."'
+				'You look down. "Sorry, I was running late and time just got away from me."'
 				'She shakes her head slightly and frowns. "I will have to report this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Now take your seat."'
 				act 'Take your seat': gt 'gschool_lessons3', 'literature'
 			end
@@ -358,7 +357,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature_late':
 				demerit += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latel1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You roll your eyes a bit, but say nothing in response. She narrows her eyes at you a little and frowns. "I will have to report this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, now take your seat. You have interrupted class enough."'
+				'You roll your eyes, but say nothing in response. She narrows her eyes at you and frowns. "I will have to report this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, now take your seat. You have interrupted class enough."'
 				act 'Take your seat': gt 'gschool_lessons3', 'literature'
 			end
 		end
@@ -372,7 +371,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 	agil_exp += rand(0,1)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/classart.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit in the classroom and listen to Mr. Vasilyev go on about how great art is. You will give him one thing. He is always upbeat and positive about teaching and encourages all of his students to take part.'
+	'You sit in the classroom and listen to Mr. Vasilyev go on about how great art is. He''s always upbeat and positive about teaching and encourages all of his students to take part.'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', iif(grupTipe = 4 and traits['nerd_status'] = 0, 'hard', iif(traits['nerd_status'] > 0, 'easy', 'medium'))
 	if traits['nerd_status'] = 2: will_cost = will_cost / 2
@@ -409,12 +408,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 		bored = rand(1,4)
 		if bored=1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bored.jpg"></center>'
-			'Mr. Vasilyev has gone on one of his exhaustively long and indepth explanations about one of the art styles, how it influenced society in all sorts of ways and in return was influenced by current events. You thought this class was about art, not history.'
-			*nl
-			'That comes to an abrupt end when a loud crash in the room nearly startles you out of your chair.'
-			'As one, everyone in the room turns to look, only to see Svyatoslav on the floor, his desk overturned; his cellphone sliding across the floor before clattering against the wall. Silence is soon replaced by laughter. The eyes of the entire class on him, Svyatoslav struggles to act nonchalant as he works to quickly return his desk to an upright position and gather the items that had fallen to the floor.'
-			*nl
-			'Just as he reaches for his phone, Anushka snatches it up off the floor and starts looking at it. "Ooooh what''s this? Whose panties are these Svyatoslav?" He grabs hold of her and attempts to wrestle his phone away from her as she keeps talking. Her voice is strained a bit as Svyatoslav easily overpowers her, but you have to give it to her. She doesn''t make it easy on him, holding onto the phone as long as she can.'
+			'Mr. Vasilyev has gone on one of his exhaustively long and indepth explanations about one of the art styles, how it influenced society in all sorts of ways and in return was influenced by current events. You thought this class was about art, not history. That comes to an abrupt end when a loud crash in the room nearly startles you out of your chair.'
+			'Everyone in the room turns to see Svyatoslav on the floor, his desk overturned as his cellphone slides across the floor before clattering against the wall. Silence is soon replaced by laughter. The eyes of the entire class on him, Svyatoslav struggles to act nonchalant as he works to quickly return his desk to an upright position and gather the items that had fallen to the floor.'
+			'Just as he reaches for his phone, Anushka snatches it off the floor and starts looking at it. "Ooooh what''s this? Whose panties are these Svyatoslav?" He grabs hold of her and attempts to wrestle his phone away from her as she keeps talking. Her voice is strained a bit as Svyatoslav easily overpowers her, but she doesn''t make it easy on him, holding onto the phone for as long as she can.'
 			temp = rand(0,5)
 			if temp=0:
 				'"White cotton panties by the look of it. Must be Julia''s." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down. You notice Julia blushing as you wonder how Anushka knows her panties.'
@@ -423,7 +419,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			elseif temp = 2:
 				'"Oooooh. It looks like Albina''s leopard print g-string." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down. You notice Albina closing her knees together as she scratches her desk and glares at Svyatoslav with fiery eyes. He starts frantically apologizing to her as you wonder how Anushka knows her panties.'
 			elseif temp = 3:
-				'"Black and yellow ''Slippery when wet'' panties." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down as Anushka laughs. "Those are mine!" She grins at Erast, places a hand on his chest and looks him right in the eyes. "If you wanted to see, then all you had to do was ask." she says as she hikes up her skirt to show off her black and yellow panties. Mr. Vasilyev opens his jacket wide to try and block the view.'
+				'"Black and yellow ''Slippery when wet'' panties." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down as Anushka laughs. "Those are mine!" She grins at Svyatoslav, places a hand on his chest and looks him right in the eyes. "If you wanted to see, then all you had to do was ask," she says as she hikes up her skirt to show off her black and yellow panties. Mr. Vasilyev opens his jacket wide to try and block the view.'
 			elseif temp = 4:
 				'"Natasha''s rather stylish red cotton panties by the looks of it." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down. You notice Natasha blushing as you wonder how Anushka knows her panties.'
 			elseif temp = 5:
@@ -431,15 +427,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			end
 			killvar 'temp'
 			*nl
-			'Once Svyatoslav has his phone back and Mr. Vasilyev has the class calmed down, he calls both of them up to his desk, looks at the phone and talks quietly to both of them. He is obviously reprimanding Svyatoslav about taking panty shots and Anushka about disrespecting people''s privacy. Svyatoslav looks slightly abashed, while Anushka just looks bored.'
+			'Once Svyatoslav has his phone back and Mr. Vasilyev has the class calmed down, he calls both of them up to his desk, looks at the phone and talks quietly to both of them, reprimanding Svyatoslav about taking panty shots and Anushka about disrespecting people''s privacy. Svyatoslav looks slightly abashed, while Anushka just looks bored.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
-		elseif bored=2 and npc_rel['A155'] >= 50 and hotcat >= 6 and $pantyworntype ! 'none':
+		elseif bored= 2 and npc_rel['A155'] >= 50 and hotcat >= 6 and $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom1.jpg"></center>'
 			''
 			act 'So bored': 
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You are bored out of your mind and can barely pretend to be paying attention. You notice Anushka watching you out of the corner of your eyes for a few minutes before she stops and starts writing something on a piece of paper.'
+				'You are bored out of your mind and can barely pretend to be paying attention. You notice Anushka watching you out of the corner of your eye for a few minutes before she stops and starts writing something on a piece of paper.'
 				act 'Read the note':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom3.jpg"></center>'
@@ -489,7 +485,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			
 			gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-				act 'Flash boobs at Feofan (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+				act 'Flash your breasts at Feofan (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A152'] += 1
 					gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -497,11 +493,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 					gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 2, 1
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You notice Feofan glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits to him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed breasts. A couple of the other students notice what you''re doing. Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
+					'You notice Feofan glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing. Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 				end
 			else
-				act 'Flash boobs at Feofan (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+				act 'Flash your breasts at Feofan (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end	
 			
 			if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -514,7 +510,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 						gs 'flash', 'butt', 'indoors', 2, 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 					end
 				else
@@ -532,7 +528,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 						gs 'flash', 'panties', 'indoors', 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 					end
 				else
@@ -548,7 +544,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 						gs 'flash', 'panties', 'indoors', 1, 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 2
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'While Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A couple of the other students notice what you''re doing. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
+						'While Mr. Vasilyev''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way. A few of the other students notice what you''re doing. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 					end
 				else
@@ -564,7 +560,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 						gs 'flash', 'panties', 'indoors', 1, 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but you instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Vasilyev''s desk. After making sure Mr. Vasilyev isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking. Feofan''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Zinaida gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away and Katja smiles at you. Svyatoslav tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 					end
 				else
@@ -608,7 +604,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You think that taking a selfie of your bare bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'You think that taking a selfie of your bare bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 					end
 				else
@@ -633,7 +629,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 							i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 							dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-							'You feel the excitement growing inside you at the idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+							'You feel the excitement growing inside you at the idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 						end
 					else
@@ -657,7 +653,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 							i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 							dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-							'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+							'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 						end
 					else
@@ -669,14 +665,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			act 'Tease Svyatoslav':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
-				'You get Svyatoslav''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction. Then you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your boobs to thrust out as you do. As he watches you, you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you act innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
+				'You get Svyatoslav''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction before you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your breasts to thrust out as you do. As he watches you, you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you act innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
 				'Svyatoslav glances around then leans over a bit to say "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
-				'Before you can decide what to do Anushka, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
+				'Before you can decide what to do, Anushka, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
 				act 'Anushka''s suggestion':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb1.jpg"></center>'
-					'Anushka leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits." she says with a giggle.'
-					'You are a bit taken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
+					'Anushka leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits," she says with a giggle.'
+					'You''re taken aback by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
 					'She grins. "To tease him of course, just like your stretch. Go on, do it! Or flash him your panties."'
 					gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -684,24 +680,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-							'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Anushka had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+							'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Anushka had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 						end
 					else
 						act 'Refuse to flash (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 					end
-					act 'Flash your boobs':
+					act 'Flash your breasts':
 						*clr & cla
 						npc_rel['A8'] += 1
 						gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 2, 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb2.jpg"></center>'
-						'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking. Then you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement. Svyatoslav stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
+						'You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking before you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement as Svyatoslav stares at your bare breasts, looking almost entranced by them.'
 						act 'Put them away':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Anushka to giggle and Svyatoslav to shake his head, obviously already missing your tits. Several other students look over as if they just realized that they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Svyatoslav''s stare and Anushka''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
+							'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Anushka to giggle and Svyatoslav to shake his head. Several other students look over as if they just realized that they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Svyatoslav''s stare and Anushka''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 						end
 					end
@@ -712,14 +708,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 							gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You turn towards Svyatoslav so you are sitting sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off your panties a little, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
+							'You turn towards Svyatoslav so you''re sitting sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little, showing off a glimpse of your panties, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
 							gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 							if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 								act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-									'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+									'You shake your head and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
 									act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 								end
 							else
@@ -732,7 +728,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 								gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep2.jpg"></center>'
-								'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Svyatoslav, who grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he is hoping to see more by the way he is looking at you.'
+								'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Svyatoslav, who grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he''s hoping to see more by the way he''s looking at you.'
 								act 'Continue':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep3.jpg"></center>'
@@ -743,7 +739,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 											*clr & cla
 											gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-											'You forcefully pull his hand away and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+											'You forcefully pull his hand away and Svyatoslav frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 											act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 										end
 									else
@@ -756,11 +752,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 										gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'indoors', 3, 1
 										gs 'stat'
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-										'"Well let go and I''ll show you." you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Svyatoslav and anyone else who happens to look this way. Anushka tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Svyatoslav''s pants.'
+										'"Well let go and I''ll show you," you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Svyatoslav and anyone else who happens to look this way. Anushka tries to sneak a peek as well as you see the bulge growing in Svyatoslav''s pants.'
 										act 'Put your pussy away':
 											*clr & cla
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-											'After a couple of minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Svyatoslav looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
+											'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of the class again. Svyatoslav looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
 											act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 										end
 									end
@@ -781,7 +777,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 						gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
-						'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so you decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly. Once they get past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles. You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize that a few people have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them in your purse and ignore the stares.'
+						'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so you decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly. Once they get past your knees you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles. You step out of them, but as you''re bending over to pick them up, you realize that a few people have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them in your purse and ignore the stares.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 					end
 				else
@@ -832,8 +828,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 							grupvalue[4] += 1
 							grupvalue[3] -= 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/payattention.jpg"></center>'
-							'"What good would that do? I''m not interrupting your class. Go back to your boring lecture and leave me alone." you answer brashly, having no intention of getting up.'
-							'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you will get out of my class NOW!" he demands, pointing at the door. You scoff and begrudingly leave the class.'
+							'"What good would that do? I''m not interrupting your class. Go back to your boring lecture and leave me alone!" you answer brashly, having no intention of getting up.'
+							'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you will get out of my class NOW!" he demands while pointing at the door. You scoff and begrudingly leave the class.'
 							act 'Go to the principal''s office': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 						end
 					else
@@ -854,7 +850,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you keep dozing off.'
 				'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Mr. Vasilyev call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
-				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Vasilyev chides you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
+				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other students snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Vasilyev chides you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
 				'It was an embarrassing experience, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
@@ -1002,7 +998,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			act 'So bored': 
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom2.jpg"></center>'
-				'After a few seconds Anushka stops writing, tears the paper out of her notebook, folds it up and then passes it over to you. You take a look around to make sure no one is looking before taking the note from her.'
+				'After a few seconds Anushka stops writing, tears the paper out of her notebook, folds it up and passes it over to you. You take a look around to make sure no one is looking before taking the note from her.'
 				act 'Read the note':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom3.jpg"></center>'
@@ -1019,7 +1015,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom1.jpg"></center>'
 								'You shake your head and she frowns at you, then sighs as she rolls her eyes. She stops paying attention to you and you try your best to focus on the class, no matter how boring it is.'
-								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
+								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 							end
 						else
 							act 'Refuse (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
@@ -1053,7 +1049,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			
 			gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-				act 'Flash boobs at Fedor(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+				act 'Flash your breasts at Fedor(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 					*clr & cla
 					npc_rel['A152'] += 1
 					gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -1062,12 +1058,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashboobs1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You notice Fedor glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Kuznetsov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and expose your tits to him. His mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed breasts.' 
-					'A couple of the other students notice what you''re doing. Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Paulina smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
+					'You notice Fedor glancing over at you a few times and decide to play with him. The next time he looks over at you while Mr. Kuznetsov''s back is turned, you pull your shirt open and his mouth drops open in shock as he stares at your exposed <<$titsize>> breasts.' 
+					'A few of the other students notice what you''re doing. Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Pauline smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but you close your shirt before he gets his phone up.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 				end
 			else
-				act 'Flash boobs at Fedor (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+				act 'Flash your breasts at Fedor (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end
 			
 			if $pantyworntype = 'none':
@@ -1081,8 +1077,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashbutt1.jpg"></center>'
-						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Kuznetsov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking.' 
-						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Paulina smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Kuznetsov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your naked ass to anyone looking.' 
+						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your naked ass, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Pauline smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1101,8 +1097,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesb' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Kuznetsov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking.' 
-						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Paulina smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Kuznetsov isn''t looking, you pull up the back of your skirt and expose your panty clad ass to anyone looking.' 
+						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Pauline smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but you drop your skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1120,7 +1116,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesd' + rand(1,5) + '.jpg"></center>'
 						'While Mr. Kuznetsov''s back is turned, you spread your legs wide and pull up the front of your skirt while sitting at your desk, which shows off your panties to anyone that looks your way.' 
-						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Paulina smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Dan tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
+						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at your panties, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Pauline smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. A couple of the other students notice what you are doing. Dan tries to take a picture, but you close your legs before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1137,8 +1133,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/flashpantiesf' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you are checking one of the books near Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Kuznetsov isn''t looking, you turn like you are about to walk back to your seat, but you instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking.' 
-						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Paulina smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but your drop you skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
+						'Near the end of class, you get up and act like you''re checking one of the books near Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. After making sure Mr. Kuznetsov isn''t looking, you turn like you''re about to walk back to your seat, but instead pull up your skirt and expose your panties to anyone looking.' 
+						'Fedor''s mouth drops open and he just stares at you, Anushka grins, Viktoria gives you a slightly disgusted look before turning away, Vitek and Pauline smile about it and Dimka starts texting on his phone, likely telling everyone in school what you just did. Dan tries to take a picture, but your drop you skirt back in place before he gets his phone up.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1182,7 +1178,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 						i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 						dynamic 'school_classroom_titflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/titflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'Feeling particularily brash,you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your tits. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+						'Feeling particularily brash,you decide taking a selfie of your bare breasts in the middle of class is a great idea. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open your shirt and expose your breasts. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed breasts until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1207,7 +1203,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 							i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 							dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-							'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+							'You can feel the excitement in your pussy as you imagine yourself baring it in class to take a selfie of it. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it should be fun and could be fun to send to someone and tease them with it. You glance around and when everyone is busy, you pull open up your skirt and pull your panties aside until your pussy is exposed. You take a couple of quick selfies of your exposed pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 						end
 					else
@@ -1231,7 +1227,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 							i = rand(1,temp_selfietot)
 							dynamic 'school_classroom_pussyflash[<<i>>] = 1'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/activities/phone/selfies/school_classroom/pussyflash/<<i>>.jpg"></center>'
-							'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you will share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
+							'You can feel yourself getting wet as you imagine taking a selfie of yourself while not wearing your panties. Maybe you''ll share it, maybe not, but either way it could be fun. You glance around and when everyone looks busy, you pull open up your skirt, exposing your already bare pussy. You take a couple of quick selfies of your pussy until you get one you really like. You save that one to your phone and delete the rest.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev1', 'russian'
 						end
 					else
@@ -1243,14 +1239,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			act 'Tease Dan':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/tease.jpg"></center>'
-				'You get Dan''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction. Then you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your boobs to thrust out as you do. As he watches you, you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you act innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
-				'Dan glances around then leans over a bit to say "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
-				'Before you can decide what to do Anushka, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
+				'You get Dan''s attention by smiling at him when he looks in your direction before you lean back in your chair and stretch your arms back over your head, causing your breasts to thrust out as you do. As he watches you, you bite your lower lip, looking all coy and seductive to him. Once you finish your stretch, you act innocent, like you didn''t do anything.'
+				'Dan glances around before leaning over. "Come on, don''t be like that <<$pcs_nickname>>. Show me a little more."'
+				'Before you can decide what to do, Anushka, who watched it all, gets your attention.'
 				act 'Anushka''s suggestion.':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb1.jpg"></center>'
 					'Anushka leans over and whispers in your ear. "Flash him your tits." she says with a giggle.'
-					'You are a bit taken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
+					'You''re ataken back by her words. "Why would I do that?" you ask.'
 					'She grins. "To tease him of course, just like your stretch. Go on, do it! Or flash him your panties."'
 					gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -1258,23 +1254,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-							'You shake your head and Dan frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Anushka had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+							'You shake your head and Dan frowns. He obviously heard or guessed what Anushka had tried to get you to do. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 						end
 					else
 						act 'Refuse to flash (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 					end
-					act 'Flash your boobs':
+					act 'Flash your breasts':
 						*clr & cla
 						npc_rel['A10'] += 1
 						gs 'flash', 'tits', 'indoors', 2, 1
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb2.jpg"></center>'
-						'She has a point. You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking. Then you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement. Dan stares at your bare tits, looking almost entranced by them.'
+						'You glance around and wait until no one but the two of them are looking before you lean back and pull up your shirt to expose your bare breasts. Your nipples get hard from the excitement as Dan stares at your bare breasts, looking almost entranced by them.'
 						act 'Put them away':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-							'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Anushka to giggle and Dan to shake his head, obviously already missing your tits. Several other students look over as if they have realized they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Dan''s stare and Anushka''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
+							'You pull your shirt down quickly when another student looks over, which causes Anushka to giggle and Dan to shake his head. Several other students look over as if they have realized they have missed something. You ignore their looks, Dan''s stare and Anushka''s giggles and wait for class to end.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 						end
 					end
@@ -1284,14 +1280,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 							gs 'flash', 'panties', 'indoors', 2, 1
 							gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep1.jpg"></center>'
-							'You turn towards Dan so you are sitting sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off your panties, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
+							'You turn towards Dan so you''re sitting sideways while facing him. You pull your skirt up a little showing off a glimpse of your panties, which makes him grin wide. He motions for you to pull your skirt up higher to give him a better view.'
 							gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 							if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 								act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teaseb3.jpg"></center>'
-									'You shake your head and Dan frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+									'You shake your head and Dan frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 									act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 								end
 							else
@@ -1302,18 +1298,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 								npc_rel['A10'] += 1
 								gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 1
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep2.jpg"></center>'
-								'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Dan, who grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he is hoping to see more by the way he is looking at you.'
+								'You pull your skirt up more so your panties are exposed to Dan, who grins wide as he stares at your panty covered pussy. You can tell he''s hoping to see more by the way he''s looking at you.'
 								act 'Continue':
 									*clr & cla
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep3.jpg"></center>'
-									'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy." he whispers as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
+									'Just then, he reaches over, grabs the front of your panties and tries to pull them down to get a look at your pussy. You grab his hand just in time to stop him from doing it. "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, show me your pussy," he whispers as he keeps trying to tug your panties down.'
 									gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 									if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 										act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 											*clr & cla
 											gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-											'You forcefully pull his hand away and Dan frowns as you pull your skirt back down and then turn back to face the front of class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for class to be over.'
+											'You forcefully pull his hand away and Dan frowns as you pull your skirt back down and turn back to face the front of the class. After a few minutes, the class goes back to normal and you find yourself once more bored and waiting for the lesson to be over.'
 											act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 										end
 									else
@@ -1325,11 +1321,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 										gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 										gs 'flash', 'pussy', 'indoors', 3, 1
 										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep4.jpg"></center>'
-										'"Well let go and I''ll show you." you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Dan and anyone else who happens to look this way. Anushka tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Dan''s pants from here.'
+										'"Well let go and I''ll show you," you tell him with a sly smile. He pauses, but then lets go and keeps watching. You lean back and lift one leg as you reach down and pull your panties aside to reveal your pussy to Dan and anyone else who happens to look this way. Anushka tries to sneak a peek as well. You can see the bulge growing in Dan''s pants from here.'
 										act 'Put your pussy away':
 											*clr & cla
 											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/teasep5.jpg"></center>'
-											'After a couple of minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and then turn to face the front of class again. Dan looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
+											'After a few minutes, you pull your panties back in place, pull your skirt back down and turn to face the front of the class again. Dan looks crestfallen, obviously hoping for it to have lasted longer, but you ignore his pleading looks and look to the front of the class. The thrill of what you just did keeps the rest of class from being boring.'
 											act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 										end
 									end
@@ -1351,7 +1347,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 						gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 5
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/removepanties.jpg"></center>'
 						'While sitting at your desk feeling bored, you notice no one is looking at you, so you decide to take your panties off. You reach under your skirt and pull them down slowly. Once they get past your knees, you open your legs slightly and your panties fall down around your ankles.' 
-						'You step out of them and as you are bending over to pick them up, you realize that people have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them in your purse and ignore the stares.'
+						'You step out of them, but as you''re bending over to pick them up, you realize that people have noticed. You quickly pick up your panties, stuff them in your purse and ignore the stares.'
 						act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1394,12 +1390,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bored.jpg"></center>'
 					'"Do I really have to sit here and listen to you drone on and on about tools?" you answer boldly.'
 					'The whole class bursts into loud laughter and Mr. Kuznetsov has a rough time getting everyone to quieten down.'
-					'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you will see me after class." he says in a stern voice. Maybe you shouldn''t have mouthed off to him. He is the assistant Headmaster after all.'
+					'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you will see me after class!" he says in a stern voice. Maybe you shouldn''t have mouthed off to him. He is the assistant Headmaster after all.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of class':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop1.jpg"></center>'
 						'At the end of class, you walk up to Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. "You wanted to see me?"'
-						'He looks up at you for a moment before saying. "Come to my office after school so we can talk about this. If not, I will be calling your mother to school tomorrow." He then dismisses you.'
+						'He glares up at you. "Come to my office after school so we can talk about this. If not, I''ll be calling your mother to school tomorrow." He then dismisses you.'
 						Kuznetsov_punishment = 1
 						act 'Go to next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 					end
@@ -1420,14 +1416,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
 				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you keep dozing off.'
 				'You''re snapped back to consciousness when you hear Mr. Kuznetsov call your name. Everyone is looking at you expectantly, and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
-				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other kids snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Kuznetsov chides you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
+				'You take your best guess at what they might be asking. Some of the other students snicker when you say something that''s obviously wrong. Mr. Kuznetsov chides you for sleeping in class and asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer.'
 				'It was an embarrassing experience, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the period.'
 			end
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'shop'
 		else
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
-			'You fell asleep and the end of class bell wakes you up.'
+			'You fell asleep and the bell wakes you up.'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	end
@@ -1484,7 +1480,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/nopanties_upskirt.jpg"></center>'
 							end
 							'You decide to have some fun. You quickly slide the phone between your legs and snap some photos under your skirt.'
-							'Mr. Vasilyev arrives at your desk. "Unless you''re listening to some music, then what is more important than paying attention in my class? Hand it over."'
+							'Mr. Kuznetsov arrives at your desk. "What is more important than paying attention in my class? Hand it over."'
 							'"Wouldn''t you like to know!" you tease. You hand over your phone with the last picture you took still on the screen.'
 							'You hold in a laugh when you see the wide eyed and shocked look on his face when he sees what''s on the screen. He blushes a bright red as he hastily turns the screen off and returns to the front of the class.'
 							'He composes himself and gets ready to continue the lesson.'
@@ -1510,7 +1506,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 									Kuznetsov_punishment = 1
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/ruslan/sex/pshop1.jpg"></center>'
 									'At the end of class, you walk up to Mr. Kuznetsov''s desk. "You wanted to see me?"'
-									'He looks up at you for a moment before saying "Come to my office after school so we can talk about this. If not, I will be calling your mother to school tomorrow." He then dismisses you.'
+									'He glares up at you. "Come to my office after school so we can talk about this. If not, I''ll be calling your mother to school tomorrow." He then dismisses you.'
 									act 'Go to next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 								end
 							end

locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

@@ -14,14 +14,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big26.jpg"></center>'
 	if VK = 1:
 		VKrand = rand(1,2)
-		'You sit down in your seat just as Mr. Tsarev stands up to begin his lesson. He casually leans against the desk, then crosses his arms as he begins the lesson. "Today we will be learning about problem solving. The most important thing about solving a problem is to know what answer you are looking for, especially with word problems. You will need to know the question that you need to answer. Here is an example: If Anna had four bottle caps and Dina had two pebbles, then how many bottle caps do they have in total? Anyone?"'
+		'You sit in your seat just as Mr. Tsarev stands up to begin his lesson. He casually leans against the desk, then crosses his arms as he begins the lesson. "Today we will be learning about problem solving. The most important thing about solving a problem is to know what answer you are looking for, especially with word problems. You will need to know the question that you need to answer. Here is an example: If Anna had four bottle caps and Dina had two pebbles, then how many bottle caps do they have in total? Anyone?"'
 		*nl
 		if VKrand = 1:
 			'A few students raise their hands and Mr. Tsarev points to Arkadi, who answers "They have six of course because four plus two equals six." Mr. Tsarev chuckles as he replies "Of course four plus two is six, but are those the number of BOTTLE CAPS they have? The correct answer is no. Anna has four bottle caps and Dina has two PEBBLES, not bottle caps. You need to pay better attention to the actual question." Some of the other boys begin laughing at Arkadi while some of the girls giggle.'
-		    'Mr. Tsarev continues. "Do not let the numbers fool you. Understanding the question is the most important part of answering it. Now I''m going to hand out some sheets with multiple choice questions and all of you will have 10 minutes to answer each one." He reaches for some papers then begins handing them out while Arkadi crosses his arms, trying to ignore some of the others laughing at him.'
+		    'Mr. Tsarev continues. "Do not let the numbers fool you. Understanding the question is the most important part of answering it. Now I''m going to hand out some sheets with multiple choice questions and all of you will have 10 minutes to answer each one." He reaches for some papers and begins handing them out while Arkadi crosses his arms, trying to ignore some of the others laughing at him.'
 		else
 			'A few students raise their hands and Mr. Tsarev points to Natalia, who answers "The answer is four because Anna is the only one with bottle caps. Dina only has pebbles, which might as well not be mentioned as it does not pertain to the answer needed." Mr. Tsarev tilts his head in surprise at Natalia''s answer while Christina whispers to one of the other girls. "Wow, she is really smart. Is she studying to be a teacher or something?"'
-		    'Mr. Tsarev nods his head then responds. "Precisely. The involvement of Dina was only to deceive the one answering the question, which is why it is referred to as a ''trick question''. Now I would like to see who was paying attention and who was dozing off. I will be handing out some sheets with multiple choice questions and all of you will have 10 minutes to answer each one." He reaches for some papers on his desk then begins handing them out.'
+		    'Mr. Tsarev nods his head then responds. "Precisely. The involvement of Dina was only to deceive the one answering the question, which is why it is referred to as a ''trick question''. Now I would like to see who was paying attention and who was dozing off. I will be handing out some sheets with multiple choice questions and all of you will have 10 minutes to answer each one." He reaches for some papers on his desk and begins handing them out.'
 		end
 	elseif VK = 2:
 		VK = rand(1,3)
@@ -34,42 +34,55 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			else
 				$mathNikoimg = 'images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg'
 			end
-			'Mr. Tsarev pauses, then turns to the door as Niko casually strolls in. Mr. Tsarev crosses his arms then says "Late again I see. What is the reason for it this time?" Niko takes a second to collect his thoughts then says'
+			'Mr. Tsarev pauses and turns to the door as Niko casually strolls in. Mr. Tsarev crosses his arms. "Late again I see. What is the reason for it this time?" Niko takes a second to collect his thoughts.'
 			killvar '$mathNikoimg'
 			*nl
 			if VK = 1:
-				'"I was on my way to class when this crazy old lady began shouting at me, so I asked her what is wrong. She told me that I stepped on her dress when I was nowhere near her. She created a big scene and I had to deal with that, which is why I arrived late." Mr. Tsarev sighs then shakes his head. "So an old woman screamed at you and created a big scene because you stepped on her dress which you didn''t actually step on? Do I have that right?"'
-				'Niko shrugs then continues walking toward his seat while Mr. Tsarev says "Fine, try not to anger any more old ladies, will you?" Niko uses his thumb to point to Christina as he jokingly replies "I can''t control when Christina gets angry at me." Christina recoils, obviously caught off guard and offended by his comment. She lifts up her fist then punches Niko several times in the arm before Mr. Tsarev breaks it up with a stern voice. "Hey, knock it off you two! Niko, sit down before I send you to the principal''s office!"'
-				'Niko casually sits down while rubbing his arm, then opens his mouth to speak, only to get cut off by Mr. Tsarev. "Not another word! Alright, let''s get back to the lesson, unless someone would like to visit the principal''s office instead?" He looks to Niko, who shakes his head. The class remains silent as Mr. Tsarev begins handing out worksheets. He''s obviously not in a good mood.'
+				'"I was on my way to class when this crazy old lady began shouting at me, so I asked her what was wrong. She told me that I stepped on her dress when I was nowhere near her. She created a big scene and I had to deal with that, which is why I''m late." Mr. Tsarev sighs and shakes his head. "So an old woman screamed at you and created a big scene because you stepped on her dress, which you didn''t actually step on? Do I have that right?"'
+				'Niko shrugs and continues walking toward his seat while Mr. Tsarev says "Fine, but try not to anger any more old ladies, will you?" Niko uses his thumb to point to Christina as he jokingly replies "I can''t control when Christina gets angry at me." Christina recoils, obviously caught off guard and offended by his comment. She lifts her fist and punches Niko several times in the arm before Mr. Tsarev breaks it up with a stern voice. "Hey, knock it off you two! Niko, sit down before I send you to the principal''s office!"'
+				'Niko casually sits down while rubbing his arm and opens his mouth to speak, only to get cut off by Mr. Tsarev. "Not another word! Alright, let''s get back to the lesson, unless someone would like to visit the principal''s office instead?" He looks at Niko, who shakes his head, and the class remains silent as Mr. Tsarev begins handing out worksheets. He''s obviously not in a good mood.'
 			elseif VK = 2:
-				'"While I was on my way to class, some braindead bimbo spilled her coffee on my uniform so I was forced to head back home to clean up. You wouldn''t want me to arrive covered in coffee right?" Mr. Tsarev sighs before responding. "So you couldn''t run home and change your shirt before the start of class?" Niko replies. "Well I had to clean the coffee from my hair as well as restyle it and that takes time."'
-				'Christina chimes in. "Why even bother washing the coffee off? You always look like a greasy punk anyway." Niko leans toward Christina and says "You don''t have to play hard to get. If you want my attention, then you need only ask." Christina whispers back in a seductive voice. "I should tell you that I''ve been looking for a handsome, strong and sexy man in my life..." "Ohh yeah?" Niko whispers in reply. '
-				'Christina then replies. "That''s why I have no interest in dating losers like you." She then laughs in Niko''s face as he clenches his fist before walking to his seat. Mr. Tsarev interrupts. "Are you two love birds done? Can we begin the lesson now?" Christina continues laughing as Niko remains silent, obviously upset. Mr. Tsarev begins handing out some worksheets to the class. As he hands Niko a sheet, he quips "Try to leave earlier so that you can arrive here on time. It''s not hard."'
+				'"While I was on my way to class, some braindead bimbo spilled her coffee on my uniform, so I had to head back home to clean up. You wouldn''t want me to arrive covered in coffee, right?" Mr. Tsarev sighs before responding. "So you couldn''t run home and change your shirt before the start of class?"'
+				'"Well I had to clean the coffee from my hair as well as restyle it and that takes time," Niko replies.'
+				'Christina chimes in. "Why even bother washing the coffee off? You always look like a greasy punk anyway."'
+				*nl
+				'Niko leans toward Christina and says "You don''t have to play hard to get. If you want my attention, then you need only ask."' 
+				'"I should tell you that I''ve been looking for a handsome, strong and sexy man in my life..." she whispers in a seductive tone. "Oh yeah?" Niko whispers in reply.'
+				'"That''s why I have no interest in dating losers like you!" she laughs in his face and he clenches his fist before walking to his seat.'
+				*nl
+				'"Are you two love birds done? Can we begin the lesson now?" Mr. Tsarev interrupts and Christina continues laughing as Niko remains silent, obviously upset. Mr. Tsarev begins handing out some worksheets to the class. As he hands Niko a sheet, he quips "Try to leave earlier so that you can arrive here on time. It''s not hard."'
 			else
-				'"There must have been a power outage in my house this morning because my alarm wasn''t working." Mr. Tsarev looks at him with an intrigued look. "Strange, I haven''t heard about any power outages this morning." Niko shrugs as he responds. "It might be a faulty wire in my house or something." Mr. Tsarev crosses his arms. "Why do all these things seem to happen to you before my class?" Niko shrugs again before saying "I guess that I''m just unlucky." Igor scoffs before adding "Don''t you ever get tired of lying? You''re really bad at it."'
-				'Niko turns to Igor and quickly approaches him before grabbing onto his collar. "You have something to say to me faggot? I''ll knock your teeth out." Igor leans back with a frightful look on his face as he replies "No, no I didn''t... I''m sorry, I''m sorry." Mr. Tsarev slams a textbook on his desk before shouting "Nikolai! Knock it off and either get in your seat or go to the principal''s office!" Niko slightly lunges forward to trick Igor into thinking that he will punch him, which ends up working.'
-				'Igor pulls back and covers his face with his arms. Niko then chuckles before walking to his seat. "Enough interruptions, let us begin today''s lesson. I hope you''ve all been studying because today''s lesson will have many tough questions for you to answer." Mr. Tsarev says as he begins handing out some worksheets to the class.'
+				'"There must have been a power outage in my house this morning because my alarm wasn''t working."'
+				'Mr. Tsarev looks at him with an intrigued look. "Strange, I haven''t heard about any power outages this morning."' 
+				'Niko shrugs as he responds. "It might be a faulty wire in my house or something."' 
+				*nl
+				'Mr. Tsarev crosses his arms. "Why do all these things seem to happen to you before my class?"' 
+				'Niko shrugs again before saying "I guess I''m just unlucky." Igor scoffs before adding "Don''t you ever get tired of lying? You''re really bad at it."'
+				'Niko turns to Igor and quickly approaches him before grabbing onto his collar. "You have something to say to me, faggot? I''ll knock your teeth out!" Igor leans back with a frightful look on his face as he replies "No, no I didn''t... I''m sorry, I''m sorry."' 
+				*nl
+				'Mr. Tsarev slams a textbook on his desk before shouting "Nikolai! Knock it off and either get in your seat or go to the principal''s office!" Niko slightly lunges forward to trick Igor into thinking that he will punch him, which ends up working. Igor pulls back and covers his face with his arms as Niko chuckles before walking to his seat. "Enough interruptions, let us begin today''s lesson. I hope you''ve all been studying because today''s lesson will have many tough questions for you to answer." Mr. Tsarev says as he begins handing out some worksheets to the class.'
 			end
 		else
-			'Dimka scoffs as he says "Why would they do that? That sounds stupid to me." Mr. Tsarev responds "Ahh Dmitri, it was nice of you to raise your hand and volunteer to answer my next question." Dimka facepalms as Mr. Tsarev continues. "If the current time is 4am and you have a dentist appointment at 2pm, then how long do you have to wait until your dentist appointment begins? Remember that you need to calculate the numbers while keeping the 12 hour timezones in mind."'
-			*nl
-			'<a href="exec:gs ''shortgs'',''img msg'',''images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big1.jpg''">Dimka</a> responds "If it is really 4am, then I would probably go to sleep and figure it out in the morning." Many of the students, along with Mr. Tsarev, begin laughing. "That wasn''t exactly the answer I was looking for, but I can forgive it. The answer for that question was ten hours." He grabs a piece of chalk then begins writing on the chalkboard; "A simple way of figuring it out is by looking at the arrival time. The time for arriving is 2pm, which means that it is two hours after twelve.'
-			*nl
-			'Those added together equals fourteen. Lastly, we need to subtract the current time from this to eliminate the time already passed. Fourteen minus four equals ten, giving us our answer." "Yeah that''s... real simple." Dimka sarcastically replies. Igor laughs as Mr. Tsarev responds with a smirk on his face. "With practice it will be. Speaking of which, I will begin handing out some simple problems for you to solve." He reaches for some papers on his desk and begins handing them out.'
+			'Dimka scoffs as he says "Why would they do that? That sounds stupid to me."' 
+			'Mr. Tsarev chuckles. "Ahh Dmitri, it was nice of you to raise your hand and volunteer to answer my next question." Dimka facepalms as Mr. Tsarev continues. "If the current time is 4am and you have a dentist appointment at 2pm, then how long do you have to wait until your dentist appointment begins? Remember that you need to calculate the numbers while keeping the 12 hour timezones in mind."'
+			'"If it is really 4am, then I would probably go to sleep and figure it out in the morning." Many of the students, along with Mr. Tsarev, begin laughing. "That wasn''t exactly the answer I was looking for, but I can forgive it. The answer for that question was ten hours." He grabs a piece of chalk and begins writing on the chalkboard; "A simple way of figuring it out is by looking at the arrival time. The time for arriving is 2pm, which means that it is two hours after twelve.'
+			'Those added together equals fourteen. Lastly, we need to subtract the current time from this to eliminate the time already passed. Fourteen minus four equals ten, giving us our answer."' 
+			'"Yeah that''s... real simple." Dimka sarcastically replies and Igor laughs as Mr. Tsarev responds with a smirk on his face. "With practice it will be. Speaking of which, I will begin handing out some simple problems for you to solve." He reaches for some papers on his desk and begins handing them out.'
 		end
 	elseif VK = 3:
 		VKrand = rand(1,3)
-		'You walk into the classroom and sit down at your desk just as Mr. Tsarev gets up to begin today''s lesson. "Alright, I would like to know how much you all know of numbers. Can anyone tell me what is the smallest number in existence?"'
-		*nl
+		'You walk into the classroom and sit at your desk just as Mr. Tsarev gets up to begin today''s lesson. "Alright, I would like to know how much you all know of numbers. Can anyone tell me what the smallest number in existence? is"'
 		if VKrand = 1:
-			'Christina raises her hand and Mr. Tsarev points to her. "Miss Zvereva." Christina answers. "Isn''t the smallest number the size of Igor''s dick?" Igor recoils in shock as Mr. Tsarev, with a stern look on his face, responds "No that is not the answer and I would appreciate it if you would take this question seriously.'
+			'Christina raises her hand and Mr. Tsarev points to her. "Miss Zvereva."' 
+			'"Isn''t the smallest number the size of Igor''s dick?" she answers and Igor recoils in shock as Mr. Tsarev, with a stern look on his face, responds "No that is not the answer and I would appreciate it if you would take this question seriously.'
 		elseif VKrand = 2:
-			'Natasha raises her hand and says "Isn''t that a trick question? Numbers have no ending point, so finding the lowest number shouldn''t be possible." Mr. Tsarev nods his head approvingly before responding. "That is correct. Numbers are without end, so finding a lowest point is impossible."'
+			'Natasha raises her hand and says "Isn''t that a trick question? Numbers have no ending point, so finding the lowest number shouldn''t be possible."' 
+			'Mr. Tsarev nods his head approvingly before responding. "That is correct. Numbers are without end, so finding a lowest point is impossible."'
 		else
-			'No one raises their hand, so Mr. Tsarev points out Igor, who looks around the room in confusion before saying "Uhh, it''s negative infinity right?" Mr. Tsarev shakes his head before responding. "Is infinity a number?"' 
-			'"Um I guess so... right?" Igor replies. "No it is not. Infinity is a never ending stream sequence of numbers, not a singular number." Mr. Tsarev replies.'
+			'No one raises their hand, so Mr. Tsarev points out Igor, who looks around the room in confusion before saying "Uhh, it''s negative infinity right?" Mr. Tsarev shakes his head. "Is infinity a number?"' 
+			'"Um I guess so... Right?" Igor asks sheepishly.' 
+			'"No, it is not. Infinity is a never ending stream sequence of numbers, not a singular number." Mr. Tsarev replies.'
 		end
-		*nl
 		'The smallest number in existence is... nothing. There is no smallest number. Numbers can go beyond negative in an infinite cycle and infinity has no bottom point, so finding the smallest number is an impossibility during an infinite cycle. I will be handing out some worksheet with negative and positive number problems. Try to answer as many as possible in the next 15 minutes." He then begins handing out worksheets to the class.'
 	end
 	if dimaRevenge = 1:
@@ -95,7 +108,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 					intel_exp += rand(1,2)
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
 					'You take a second to ask a question about a part of the lesson that you don''t fully understand. Mr. Tsarev nods approvingly then says "Sure thing, we can go over the solution again and I will show you the many ways that you can find the solution to these problems." He happily spends some time explaining the topic in greater detail and answers any questions you might have, teaching you some new ways of solving many problems in the process.'
-					*nl
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'math'
 				end
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'math'
@@ -117,7 +129,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/nightmares/class/rest.jpg"></center>'
-				'You can feel the day dragging on so slowly, so you rest your head on the desk, trying your best to focus on anything but today''s lesson. The light occasionally creeps in between your arms, so you keep re-adjusting until it stops, causing you to feel at peace as you slumber through the lesson.'
+				'You can feel the day dragging on slowly, so you rest your head on the desk, trying your best to focus on anything but today''s lesson. The light occasionally creeps in between your arms, so you keep re-adjusting until it stops, causing you to feel at peace as you slumber through the lesson.'
 				act 'Wake up':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs'stat'
@@ -130,16 +142,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/sleeping.jpg"></center>'
-				'You are far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you continuously doze off. After what feels like a few seconds, you suddenly hear Mr. Tsarev call your name. Everyone''s eyes are on you as you nervously ask "What?" Mr. Tsarev replies "I asked you for the answer to my question."'
+				'You''re far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you continuously doze off. After what feels like a few seconds, you suddenly hear Mr. Tsarev call your name. Everyone''s eyes are on you. "I asked you for the answer to my question," Mr. Tsarev tells you.'
 				*nl
 				if (VKrand = 1 and npc_rel['A2'] >= 80) or (VKrand = 1 and grupTipe = 3):
-					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was when you faintly hear "Psst!" You look toward Artem to see him holding up a paper scrap behind his seat which has the answer written out. You confidently look toward Mr. Tsarev before telling him the correct answer, resulting in a surprised look on his face before he says "Hmm. Very good, but do try to keep your head up during class, okay?" You give him a nod before he continues his lesson.'
+					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was when you faintly hear "Psst!" You look at Artem and see him holding up a paper scrap behind his seat which has the answer written out. You confidently look toward Mr. Tsarev before telling him the correct answer, resulting in a surprised look on his face before he says "Hmm. Very good, but do try to keep your head up during class, okay?" You give him a nod before he continues his lesson.'
 				elseif (VKrand = 2 and npc_rel['A12'] >= 80) or (VKrand = 2 and grupTipe = 3):
-					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was when you hear Natalia ask Mr. Tsarev "Why was the problem structured like that? I thought that finding X came after finding Y" Mr. Tsarev turns to Natalia and says "There is no order in which one we find first. I just used the one earlier in the equation. You can always choose the one that you solve as long as you end up solving both before reaching the second half of the problem."'
+					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was when you hear Natalia ask Mr. Tsarev "Why was the problem structured like that? I thought that finding X came after finding Y?" Mr. Tsarev turns to Natalia and says "There is no order in which one we find first. I just used the one earlier in the equation. You can always choose the one that you solve as long as you end up solving both before reaching the second half of the problem."'
 					'Natalia nods with a smile as Mr. Tsarev turns around and continues his lesson, completely forgetting about you. Natalia turns to you with a warm smile then turns back toward Mr. Tsarev for the rest of the class.'
 				elseif VKrand = 3 and NikoLuv >= 2 and npc_grupTipe['A189'] = 4:
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/crash.mp4"></video></center>'
-					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was when you suddenly hear Evgeny let out a yelp as his chair is pulled out from under him, causing him to fall to the ground. Mr. Tsarev recoils in shock before suddenly shouting "NIKOLAI! WHAT HAS GOTTEN INTO YOU!?" Niko and most of the class are laughing loudly as Mr. Tsarev shouts out "NIKOLAI GO TO THE PRINCIPAL''S OFFICE NOW!" Niko packs his stuff in his bag then heads toward the door, giving you a wink as he passes by.'
+					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was when you suddenly hear Evgeny let out a yelp as his chair is pulled out from under him, causing him to fall to the ground. Mr. Tsarev recoils in shock before suddenly shouting "NIKOLAI! WHAT HAS GOTTEN INTO YOU!?" Niko and most of the class are laughing loudly as Mr. Tsarev shouts out "NIKOLAI GO TO THE PRINCIPAL''S OFFICE NOW!" Niko packs his stuff in his bag and heads toward the door, giving you a wink as he passes by.'
 				elseif class['school_math_grade'] >= 80:
 					'You nervously look around the room, not knowing what the question was. You pretend to clear your throat while you quickly study the equation on the board, then quickly solve the problem in your head before answering the question correctly. Mr. Tsarev gives you a satisfied nod before responding "Very good, but try and keep your head up during class, if you don''t mind."'
 				else
@@ -147,9 +159,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 					gs'stat'
 					'<center><b><font color=#00BFFF><<"Anatoly E. Tsarev">></font></b></center>'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big26.jpg"></center>'					
-					'You are feeling far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you continuously doze off. After what feels like a few minutes, you suddenly hear Mr. Tsarev call your name. Everyone''s eyes are on you and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
-					'You take your best guess at what Mr. Tsarev asking. Some of your classmates snicker at your obviously wrong answer as Mr. Tsarev says "Sleeping in class huh? You are never going to get anywhere in life that way, unless you end up working as a politician."'
-					'He then cluckles to himself before saying "Just try to stay awake this time." Before continuing his lesson, he asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer. You still feel embarrassed, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the lesson.'
+					'You''re feeling far too tired to pay attention in class today. You don''t even know what the lesson is about as you continuously doze off. After what feels like a few minutes, you suddenly hear Mr. Tsarev call your name. Everyone''s eyes are on you and you realize that you were just asked a question about the topic.'
+					'You take your best guess at what Mr. Tsarev was asking and some of your classmates snicker at your obviously wrong answer as Mr. Tsarev says "Sleeping in class, huh? You''re never going to get anywhere in life that way, unless you end up working as a politician."'
+					'He then chuckles to himself before saying "Just try to stay awake this time." Before continuing his lesson, he asks for someone else to inform you of the correct answer. You still feel embarrassed, but the sudden adrenaline surge helps you to stay awake for the rest of the lesson.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'math'
 				end
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessonsev2', 'math'
@@ -157,7 +169,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/caughtsleeping.jpg"></center>'
-				'Today''s lesson doesn''t particularly interest you and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while, you notice that Mr. Tsarev has paused his lesson and is giving you a stern look. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, maybe you would like to explain what I have just went over?" You give him a puzzled look while trying to figure out what to say; feeling embarrassed, not knowing what to say and having the class stare at you.'
+				'Today''s lesson doesn''t particularly interest you and you find yourself drifting off constantly. After a while, you notice that Mr. Tsarev has paused his lesson and is giving you a stern look. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, maybe you would like to explain what I have just went over?" You give him a puzzled look while trying to figure out what to say. You feel embarrassed having the class stare at you.'
 			    act 'Reluctantly pay attention':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'grades', 'class_activity_attributes', 'school', 'math', pcs_intel
@@ -178,7 +190,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 						grupvalue[3] -= 1
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/kickedout.jpg"></center>'
-						'"Of course. Please continue your super-fascinating lesson. Just keep it a bit upbeat please. If you talk any slower, I might fall asleep!" You answer boldly.'
+						'"Of course. Please continue your super-fascinating lesson. Just keep it a bit upbeat please. If you talk any slower, I might fall asleep!" you answer boldly.'
 						'The whole class bursts into laughter and Mr. Tsarev has a rough time getting everyone to quiet down. "Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, do you find this kind of behavior amusing? Or are you just seeking attention? Try to answer this question for yourself while you head to the principal''s office." He then points to the door.'
                         gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'resist', 'medium'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -191,8 +203,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 								grupvalue[3] -= 2
 								gs'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bitchflip.jpg"></center>'
-								'"What good would that do? I''m not interrupting your classes, so just leave me alone. I''m having some... girl problems." You answer brashly, not having any intentions of getting up. Mr. Tsarev sighs then shakes his head. "If you are having some personal issues, then I won''t punish you for that, but do try to pay attention if you can. I am only trying to prepare you all for the future."'
-								'You remain silent as Mr. Tsarev turns around and continues his lesson. You obviously have no interest in learning anything today. You hear one of the boys behind you mutter "It must be that time of the month." then giggle as you turn around to flip him off.'
+								'"What good would that do? I''m not interrupting your class, so just leave me alone. I''m having some... girl problems," you answer brashly, not having any intentions of getting up. Mr. Tsarev sighs and shakes his head. "If you''re having some personal issues, then I won''t punish you for that, but do try to pay attention if you can. I''m only trying to prepare you all for the future."'
+								'You remain silent as Mr. Tsarev turns around and continues his lesson. You obviously have no interest in learning anything today. You hear one of the boys behind you mutter "It must be that time of the month..." You turn around to flip him off.'
 							    act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 							end
 						else
@@ -213,23 +225,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 			'The day seems to be dragging in and you find yourself constantly staring at the clock, waiting for the class to finally be over. You decide to play on your phone to pass the time.'
 		    if VK = 1 and (christinaQW['fight'] = -1 or christinaQW['subpath'] >= 2) and salocatnow >= 5:
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A18', 'loathe'
-				'As you are browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina reading; "Hey there piggy, are you looking up discounts on Peremech so that you can shove them down your throat? Why don''t you lose some weight before the teachers decide to add bovine etiquette to the curriculum because they may feel it necessary to teach the students how to talk to a cow like you?" You can feel your face flushing in embarrassment while reading Christina''s hurtful comments. You quickly turn off your phone and try not to make eye contact with Christina for the rest of the lesson.'
+				'As you''re browsing the web, you receive a text message from Christina reading; "Hey there piggy, are you looking up discounts on Peremech so that you can shove them down your throat? Why don''t you lose some weight before the teachers decide to add bovine etiquette to the curriculum because they may feel it necessary to teach the students how to talk to a cow like you?" You can feel your face flushing in embarrassment while reading Christina''s hurtful comments. You quickly turn off your phone and try not to make eye contact with Christina for the rest of the lesson.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			elseif VK = 2 and NataliaPavlovaQW >= 10:
-				'You are browsing the web when you suddenly receive a text message from Natalia depicting your name and her''s inside of a heart together. You turn to Natalia to see a big smile on her face as she gazes into your eyes. You return the smile before replying with "You are so precious to me, Natalia." Natalia quickly replies "I am so happy that I have you in my life." You reply to Natalia. "Ohhh you are just so cute. Muah." Natalia giggles before turning back to Mr. Tsarev while occasionally turning back toward you and smiling.'
+				'You''re browsing the web when you suddenly receive a text message from Natalia depicting your names inside a heart together. You turn to Natalia and see a big smile on her face as she gazes into your eyes. You return the smile before exchanging some flirty messages with her. Natalia giggles before turning back to Mr. Tsarev while occasionally turning back toward you and smiling.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			elseif VK = 3 and NikoVolkovQW >= 5 and npc_grupTipe['A189'] = 4:
-				'While you are browsing the internet, you receive a text message from Niko reading; "Who is this beautiful creature I see? This precious gem sitting in front of me? I gaze at her with eyes so amazed, will she not turn around and return my gaze?" You giggle before turning around to face Niko to see him with a loving smile. You then type back. "You are so sweet Niko." Niko gives you a wink before laying back in his seat.'
+				'While you''re browsing the internet, you receive a text message from Niko reading; "Who is this beautiful creature I see? This precious gem sitting in front of me? I gaze at her with eyes so amazed, will she not turn around and return my gaze?" You giggle before turning around to face Niko, who has a loving smile on his face. You then type back "You''re so sweet, Niko." and he gives you a wink before laying back in his seat.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			elseif VK = 4 and npc_rel['A25'] >= 80:
-				'As you continue browsing the web, you suddenly receive a text message with an image attachment from Sonia reading; "Sooo pretty. What do you think?" The image is of a high quality pair of high heels. They look very expensive. You type back "Those heels look very... you." Sonia replies. "I was thinking of wearing those with my blue skirt. Do you think that they will look good together?" You reply. "They would look great together. The colors would compliment each other very well." Sonia giggles as she messages you back.'
-			    '"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>, I was worried that they were a bit too much on the eyes." You give Sonia a smile as she returns it. Sonia then turns back toward the teacher while continuing to cruise the internet.'
+				'As you continue browsing the web, you suddenly receive a text message with an image attachment from Sonia reading; "Sooo pretty. What do you think?" The image is of a high quality pair of high heels. They look very expensive.' 
+				'"Those heels look very... you." you text back.' 
+				'"I was thinking of wearing those with my blue skirt. Do you think that they will look good together?"'
+				'"They would look great together. The colors would compliment each other very well." you reply.'
+			    '"Thanks <<$pcs_nickname>>, I was worried that they were a bit too much on the eyes." You give Sonia a smile before she turns back towards the teacher while continuing to browse the internet.'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			else
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><b><font color=#00BFFF><<"Anatoly E. Tsarev">></font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big26.jpg"></center>'
-				'As you are browsing the web, you notice Mr. Tsarev giving you a stern look. He seems to have noticed that you''re not paying attention to his lesson.'
+				'As you''re browsing the web, you notice Mr. Tsarev giving you a stern look. He seems to have noticed that you''re not paying attention to his lesson.'
 				act 'Put your phone away':
 					*clr & cla
 					grupvalue[3] += 1
@@ -249,7 +264,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 						demerit += 5
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/caughtonphone.jpg"></center>'
-						'You decide to try your luck and continue using your phone. Mr. Tsarev pauses the lesson then begin walking toward your desk.'
+						'You decide to try your luck and continue using your phone. Mr. Tsarev pauses the lesson and begins walking toward your desk.'
 						act 'Hand over the phone':
 							*clr & cla
 							grupvalue[4] -= 1
@@ -291,7 +306,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math':
 								gs'stat'
 								demerit += 5
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/nophone.jpg"></center>'
-								'You deftly shove the phone in your bra then smile fiendishly as you see the indecisiveness on his face. Pretending that it''s a perfectly normal place to store your phone, you tease him in an innocent tone. "Is there a problem, Mr. Tsarev? Do you want my phone? You can take it if you want." You slowly thrust your chest forward, raising your breast toward him, giving him a nice view of your ample cleavage; the outline of your phone very visible through the fabric.'
+								'You deftly shove the phone in your bra and smile fiendishly as you see the indecisiveness on his face. Pretending that it''s a perfectly normal place to store your phone, you tease him in an innocent tone. "Is there a problem, Mr. Tsarev? Do you want my phone? You can take it if you want." You slowly thrust your chest forward, the outline of your phone visible through the fabric.'
 								'Mr. Tsarev seems flabbergasted by your actions. He remains silent for a few seconds before shaking his head, turning around and walking back to the front of the class. It seems that he realized that it''s not worth the effort to take your phone away from you without causing all sorts of awkward situations. You pull your phone back out of your bra and continue browsing the web as the lesson goes on.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 							end
@@ -312,16 +327,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math_late':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/late.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you walk down the halls of the school, they are completely empty. You pass by several classes already underway as you make your way down to math class. You finally arrive at the door to your class and you can hear Mr. Tsarev already starting today''s lesson inside.'
+	'As you walk down the halls of the school, they are completely empty. You pass by several classes already underway as you make your way down to math class. You finally arrive at the door to your class and can hear Mr. Tsarev already starting today''s lesson inside.'
 	act 'Go into class':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latem1.jpg"></center>'
-		'When you open the door and walk in, Mr. Tsarev stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you. "So good of you to join us Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>." Several of the kids smirk while a few look annoyed that you have interrupted the class or that you are getting away with being late.'
-		act 'Say you''re sorry':
+		'When you open the door and walk in, Mr. Tsarev stops talking and everyone turns their eyes towards you. "So good of you to join us Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>." Several of your classmates smirk while a few look annoyed that you interrupted the class or that you''re getting away with being late.'
+		act 'Apologize':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latem2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You look down a bit. "Sorry I was running late. Time just got away from me."'
-			'He shakes his head slightly and sighs a bit. "Very well Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Please take your seat and try not to let it happen again."'
+			'You look down. "Sorry I was running late. Time just got away from me."'
+			'He shakes his head slightly and sighs. "Very well Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Please take your seat and try not to let it happen again."'
 			act 'Take your seat': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'math'
 		end
 		act 'Say nothing':
@@ -329,7 +344,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'math_late':
 			demerit += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/late/latem2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You roll your eyes a bit, but say nothing in response. He shakes his head slightly and frowns. "I will have to report this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Now please take your seat. You have interrupted class enough."'
+			'You roll your eyes, but say nothing in response. He shakes his head slightly and frowns. "I will have to report this Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Now please take your seat. You have interrupted class enough."'
 			act 'Take your seat': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'math'
 		end
 	end
@@ -341,8 +356,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 	intel_exp += rand(0,1)
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/classlit.jpg"></center>'
-	*nl
-	'"Everyone sit down, class is starting." Ms. Braakman says in English, her voice thick with a Russian accent. A few students take their seat, but most of the class continues socializing as if they didn''t hear her. "Class is starting, now take a seat!" she repeats loudly in Russian. The groups reluctantly scatter and everyone settles into their seats.'
+	'"Everyone sit down, class is starting." Ms. Braakman says in English, her voice thick with a Russian accent. A few students take their seat, but most of the class continues socializing as if they didn''t hear her. "Class is starting, now take a seat!" she repeats loudly in Russian and the groups reluctantly scatter as everyone settles into their seats.'
 	if dimaRevenge = 1:
 		act 'Continue': gt 'dimaRevenge', 1
 	else
@@ -359,7 +373,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 				if traits['nerd_status'] < 3: gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'self'
 				gs 'stat'				
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/work2.jpg"></center>'
-				*nl
 				'You actively take part in the lesson, raising your hand to answer questions, following along in your textbook and working quietly on the worksheets when given them.'
 				act 'Keep working':
 					*clr & cla
@@ -381,7 +394,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A15', 'like'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talkgirl' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
 						'"I saw this video of an American girl dancing all sexy and stuff, and I''m thinking of learning the dance. Next time I go to the community center, I''ll show up all the girls and steal their boyfriends!" she jokes with a playful smile, but you notice a wicked twinkle in her eyes.'
-						*nl
 						'Vicky''s bubbly personality makes her easy and fun to talk to, and you end up spending the rest of class smiling and laughing with her.'
 						act 'Finish class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 					end
@@ -390,11 +402,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 						chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A20', 'like'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talkgirl' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'Lena sighs heavily, "Fuck, what''s taking her so long?"'
-						*nl
+						'Lena sighs heavily. "Fuck, what''s taking her so long?"'
 						'"Who are you waiting for?" you ask.'
-						*nl
-						'"Lera! She had to go take a piss but she''s taking forever." she snaps back. "Her tongue probably needed a break anyways..." she mumbles quietly after a moment, a small smile spreading across her face.'
+						'"Lera! She had to go take a piss, but she''s taking forever!" she snaps back. "Her tongue probably needed a break anyways..." she mumbles quietly as a small smile spreads across her face.'
 						act 'Finish class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 					end
 					act 'Lera':
@@ -418,10 +428,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 						chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A3', 'like'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talkboy' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'With a confident smile, Ivan starts to tell you about a recent match he had at the community center. "This kid I''ve never seen before comes up to me and starts talking shit, saying my form is bad and that I couldn''t hit someone even if they were standing still right in front of me!" he says with a scoff. "I told him to put his money where his mouth is and get in the ring, and guess what happened?"'
-						*nl
+						'With a confident smile, Ivan starts telling you about a recent match he had at the community center. "This kid I''ve never seen before comes up to me and starts talking shit, saying my form is bad and that I couldn''t hit someone even if they were standing still right in front of me!" he says with a scoff. "I told him to put his money where his mouth is and get in the ring, and guess what happened?"'
 						'"You beat the crap out of him?" you say with a smile.'
-						*nl
 						'Ivan laughs and you can see his chest puff out slightly. "Of course! The best part is that his girlfriend was there to see it happen, and while he was lying on the mat knocked out, she gave me her number."'
 						act 'Finish class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 					end
@@ -430,7 +438,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 						chrsm_exp += rand(1,2)
 						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A22', 'like'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talkgirl' + rand(1,3) + '.jpg"></center>'
-						'"God, this place is more like a daycare than a high school." Bella says, scoffing in disgust. A moment later, a group of students start talking and laughing loud enough to disrupt the class. "See what I mean?" she adds as she rolls her eyes. "They''re practically adults, but they act so childish. I hate it. They need to act their age, like I do."'
+						'"God, this place is more like a daycare than a high school!" Bella says, scoffing in disgust. A few seconds later, a group of students start talking and laughing loud enough to disrupt the class. "See what I mean?" she adds as she rolls her eyes. "They''re practically adults, but they act so childish. I hate it. They need to act their age, like I do."'
 						act 'Finish class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 					end
 					act 'Veronika':
@@ -449,15 +457,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 							'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							if NikoPayback > 0:
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-								'As you approach Niko, he sneers at you before saying "What do you want?" You carefully reply with "Hey I just want to talk." He scoffs then says "Fine, why not?" You and Niko spend the next few minutes having a strained conversation until the end of the class.'
+								'Niko sneers at you as you approach. "What do you want?"'
+								'"I just want to talk," you reply and he scoffs before nodding. You spend the next few minutes having a strained conversation until the end of the class.'
 							elseif NikoVolkovQW >= 5:
 								gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A189', 'like'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-								'As you approach Niko, he gives you a warm smile before saying "My princess graces with me with her presence. How can be of assistance?" You giggle before replying "I have spare time and I can''t think of a better use of my time then spending it with you." Niko chuckles then grabs onto your hand, lifting it toward his face and giving it a soft kiss before saying "Your wish is my command." You both spend the next few minutes chatting while exchanging loving glares until the end of the class.'
+								'As you approach Niko, he gives you a warm smile. "My princess graces with me with her presence. How can be of assistance?"' 
+								'You giggle. "I have spare time and I can''t think of a better use of it than spending it with you." Niko chuckles and grabs onto your hand, lifting it toward his face and giving it a soft kiss before saying "Your wish is my command." You both spend the next few minutes chatting while exchanging loving glares until the end of the class.'
 							else
 								gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A189', 'like'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-								'As you approach Niko, he gives you a warm smile before saying "Ahh a lovely princess decides to grace me with her presence. How can I be of assistance?" You giggle before replying "You''re so weird, I just want to chat for a bit okay?" Niko chuckles then grabs onto your hand, lifting it toward his face and giving it a soft kiss before saying "Your wish is my command." You both begin chatting until the end of the class.'
+								'As you approach Niko, he gives you a warm smile. "Ahh a lovely princess decides to grace me with her presence. How can I be of assistance?"' 
+								'You giggle. "You''re so weird! I just want to chat for a bit, okay?" Niko chuckles and grabs onto your hand, lifting it toward his face and giving it a soft kiss before saying "Your wish is my command." You both begin chatting until the end of the class.'
 							end
 							act 'Finish class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 						end
@@ -465,7 +476,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 				end
 			end
 		else
-			 act 'Listen attentively (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Listen attentively (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
 		
 		act'Daydream':
@@ -477,17 +488,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 				*nl
 				'"<<$pcs_lastname>>!"'
 				*nl
-				'Hearing your name called, you snap back to reality just in time to see Ms. Braakman staring daggers at you from the front of the class. The scattered laughter from students causes you to squirm slightly in your seat.'
-				*nl
-				'"I''ve called your name three times now! If you want to sleep, you can do it during detention." she warns as she points to the door.'
+				'Hearing your name being called, you snap back to reality to see Ms. Braakman staring daggers at you from the front of the class. The scattered laughter from students causes you to squirm slightly in your seat.'
+				'"I''ve called your name three times now! If you want to sleep, you can do it during detention!" she warns as she points to the door.'
 				act 'Apologize':
 					*clr & cla
 					grupvalue[1] -= 1
 					grupvalue[4] -= 1
 					grupvalue[3] += 1
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big137.jpg"></center>'
-					*nl
-					'"Sorry, Ms. Braakman." you mumble quietly as you sit up straight and refocus on the lesson. Satisfied, Ms. Braakman returns to teaching with a small smile.'
+					'"Sorry, Ms. Braakman..." you mumble quietly as you sit up straight and refocus on the lesson. Satisfied, Ms. Braakman returns to teaching with a small smile.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 				gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
@@ -501,14 +510,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 						grupvalue[4] += 1
 						grupvalue[3] -= 1
 						'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/pc/reactions/eyeroll.mp4"></video></center>'
-						'You roll your eyes and sigh heavily. "I can''t help it, you just keep talking and talking." Your unexpected response causes the room to go quiet. "Everything you say is just so pointless. When am I ever going to need to know this stuff?" you ask rhetorically. "Never. Never is the answer."'
+						'You roll your eyes and sigh heavily. "I can''t help it, you just keep talking and talking..." Your unexpected response causes the room to go quiet. "Everything you say is just so pointless. When am I ever going to need to know this stuff?" you ask rhetorically. "Never. Never is the answer."'
 						'The whole class starts to ''ooh'' in disbelief at your bold response. Arkadi, Roman and Anushka''s laughter can probably be heard all the way down the hall.'
 						'Ms. Braakman''s face turns red and her expression darkens, a mixture of rage and embarrassment. "Get out and report to the principal''s office right now!" she barks.'
 						act 'Go to the principal''s office':
 							*clr & cla
 							demerit += 5
 							'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/pc/reactions/smirk.mp4"></video></center>'
-							'"Fine by me." you say with a smirk as you get up from your seat. You saunter past your fellow students and to the front of the class where you flash Ms. Braakman a mockingly sweet smile before exiting the classroom.'
+							'"Fine by me," you say with a smirk as you get up from your seat. You saunter past your fellow students and to the front of the class where you flash Ms. Braakman a mockingly sweet smile before exiting the classroom.'
 							act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_office', 'principal'
 						end
 					end
@@ -572,7 +581,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 							grupvalue[4] -= 1
 							grupvalue[3] += 1
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/bored.jpg"></center>'
-							'Realizing it isn''t worth it, you hand over your phone without argument. "You can have this back after class." Ms. Braakman says as she walks back to the blackboard.'
+							'Realizing it isn''t worth it, you hand over your phone without argument. "You can have this back after class," Ms. Braakman says as she walks back to the blackboard.'
 							act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'getphone'
 						end
 						gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'self'
@@ -594,7 +603,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/literature/nopanties_upskirt.jpg"></center>'
 									'With a mischievous smile, you deftly slide your phone under your skirt and spread your legs to take a picture of your bare pussy. Ms. Braakman stops in front of your desk, her hands on her hips as she stares daggers at you.'
 								    '"Hand it over." she orders, one of her hands now held out in front of you. You obediently hand over your phone to her without argument. When she sees the screen is still on, she smiles smugly. "You were texting, weren''t you? Of course you were, that''s all you kids do these days. Well, I''m sure you wouldn''t mind if I shared with the class what you were--"'
-								    'You can barely keep a straight face as you watch Ms. Braakman''s expression change from smug to confusion and then anger in a matter of seconds. You silently wait for her to order you out of the class and to the principal''s office, but she looks lost in her own thoughts as she continues to stare at the screen for a long moment. When she finally snaps back to reality, you could have sworn you saw a twinkle of excitement and longing in her eyes.'
+								    'You can barely keep a straight face as you watch Ms. Braakman''s expression change from smug to confusion and then anger in a matter of seconds. You silently wait for her to order you out of the class and to the principal''s office, but she looks lost in her own thoughts as she continues to stare at the screen. When she finally snaps back to reality, you could have sworn you saw a twinkle of excitement and longing in her eyes.'
 								    '"I don''t want to see you doing such things in my class again Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! You can have this back after class." She says sharply, but the way she licks her lips afterwards speaks of something else. Without another word, she turns the screen off and returns to the front of the class to resume the lesson.'
 									act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'getphone'
 								end
@@ -616,7 +625,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 							    '"If you want my phone, go ahead and take it." you reply in a mockingly sweet voice as you thrust your chest out. Her eyes darken dangerously as you think you''ve won, but your bluff is called as one of Ms. Braakman''s hands plunges into your shirt. "Ms. Braakman, I didn''t know today''s lesson would be so hands on!" you tease as you feel her hand slip inside your bra. Your smile widens as you hear the class erupt with cheering and laughter.'
 							    '"You think you''re clever, don''t you?" she whispers, her voice low so only you can hear. You try to respond, but your words get caught in your throat as she starts to tease one of your nipples between her fingertips. Suddenly, she''s no longer searching but groping, her skillful fingers carefully moving between each breast until both of your sensitive buds are hard and straining almost uncomfortably against your bra. You can''t help but shift slightly in your seat as you feel a tightening sensation in your lower belly and an aching throb between your legs.'
 							    *nl
-							    '"Don''t make me remind you of your place, little girl." Ms. Braakman''s warning is punctuated painfully as she gives a sharp pinch and tug to one of your nipples, eliciting a soft whimper from you. Having gotten her point across, she removes her hand and with it your phone. "You can get this back after class."'
+							    '"Don''t make me remind you of your place, little girl!" Ms. Braakman''s warning is punctuated painfully as she gives a sharp pinch and tug to one of your nipples, eliciting a soft whimper from you. Having gotten her point across, she grabs your phone and removes her hand from your shirt. "You can get this back after class."'
 							    'Flustered and aroused, you regain your senses and remember that you''re sitting in class right now. You look around the room, but it seems like her groping went unnoticed and was seen as her fishing out your phone like you challenged her to do.'
 								act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'getphone'
 							end
@@ -1066,7 +1075,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'postphys':
 			act 'Keep watching':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/cum/cocksuck3.jpg"></center>'
-				'The coach grabs Christina''s head and starts face fucking her. She grips his legs, obviously trying to get him to slow down, but he doesn''t relent, as gagging sounds fill the room.'
+				'The coach grabs Christina''s head and starts face fucking her. She grips his legs, obviously trying to get him to slow down, but he doesn''t relent as gagging sounds fill the room.'
 				'The sounds and sight start making you wet, but you aren''t here to masturbate, so you keep taking as many pictures as you can.'
 				'Pavlovich seems to reach his limit and pulls out, ordering her to keep her mouth open before he shoots thick ropes of cum into her mouth.'
 				'Deciding you have enough evidence, and not wanting to play your hand just yet, you quietly close the door and sneak off, extremely pleased with yourself.'
@@ -1145,9 +1154,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/chris_sveta.jpg"></center>'
 				'You try slipping out in the crowd, hoping to avoid getting involved, but a hand grabs you, drags you back to the middle of the room and shoves you down next to Sonia. "Look girls, now we''ve got TWO sluts to have fun with!" Lera says mockingly before walking up to you and spreading her pussy, her clit exposed and awaiting your tongue as you stare up at her.'
-				*nl
 				'"What? You''ll suck the boys off, but won''t eat us out? Aren''t dick and pussy the same thing to you? Get to it you fucking whore!" Lera says and delivers a stinging smack to your face. With no way to escape, you resign yourself to the humiliation and start licking Lera''s pussy. She wants more, however, and grabs your hair in her hands before she starts roughly grinding her crotch against your face, smearing you with her wetness before starts quickly rubbing her clit. A shower of pussy juice then splashes across your face as Lera orgasms hard. When she''s done, she pulls your head up by your chin and slaps you. "Good slut." is all she says before Pauline takes her place.'
-				*nl
 				'The group of girls surrounding you is too big for you to tell how much time passes or how many girls cum on you, but eventually they have all had a turn with you or Sonia and start throwing crude insults at both of you. Sonia doesn''t care and is furiously fingering herself next to you. Once the girls have gone, you ignore Sonia and run for a shower, cleaning the sticky juices from your face and hair.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -8, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'group', 'humiliation'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1169,9 +1176,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/chris_sveta.jpg"></center>'
 				'You try slipping out in the crowd, hoping to avoid getting involved, but a hand grabs you, drags you back to the middle of the room and shoves you down next to Sonia. You look up, and to your despair, see that it was Christina. "Let''s make it a party girls! Now we have TWO sluts to eat us out!" she says mockingly before walking up to you and spreading her pussy, her clit exposed and awaiting your tongue.'
-				*nl
 				'With no way to escape, you resign yourself to the humilation and start licking Christina''s pussy. She wants more, however, and grabs your hair in her hands before she starts roughly grinding her crotch against your face, smearing you with her wetness before starts quickly rubbing her clit. A shower of pussy juice then splashes across your face as she orgasms hard, then slams your face back into her crotch. "Lick me clean bitch! I want you to drink every last drop of my cum!" When she''s finally done, she pulls your head up by your chin and slaps you hard. "Good slut." is all she says before another girl takes her place.'
-				*nl
 				'The group of girls surrounding you is too big for you to tell how much time passes or how many girls cum on you, but eventually they have all had a turn with you or Sonia and start throwing crude insults at both of you. Sonia doesn''t care and is furiously fingering herself next to you. Once the girls have gone, you ignore Sonia and quickly run for a shower, cleaning the sticky juices from your face and hair.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', -8, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'group', 'humiliation'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1200,7 +1205,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 			act 'Stay':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/sonia_busted_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You choose to stay and watch to see what happens. Lera, Pauline, Christina and Lina are among the large group of girls surrounding Lena and Sonia, either watching in interest or filming it. Lariska is quietly standing off to the side, clearly not wanting to get involved but not wanting to leave Christina''s side either. Lena is enjoying having Sonia go down on her and really makes her eat her out before she pulls Sonia off of her and orgasms, squirting across Sonia''s face. When she is finished, she gives Sonia a firm slap and moves to the side, inviting someone else to have a go. Lera, who has been masturbating as she watches, walks up to Sonia and also squirts on her before sitting on her face and making her eat her pussy as she rides through her orgasm Once her orgasm has passed, she climbs off of Sonia and gives her a stinging slap on the face. "Good for nothing whore!" she snarls before stepping aside to let Christina take her place.'
+				'You choose to stay and watch to see what happens. Lera, Pauline, Christina and Lina are among the large group of girls surrounding Lena and Sonia, either watching in interest or filming it. Lariska is quietly standing off to the side, clearly not wanting to get involved but not wanting to leave Christina''s side either. Lena is enjoying having Sonia go down on her and really makes her eat her out before she pulls Sonia off of her and orgasms, squirting across Sonia''s face. When she is finished, she gives Sonia a firm slap and moves to the side, inviting someone else to have a go. Lera, who has been masturbating as she watches, walks up to Sonia and also squirts on her before sitting on her face and making her eat her pussy as she rides through her orgasm. Once her orgasm has passed, she climbs off of Sonia and gives her a stinging slap on the face. "Good for nothing whore!" she snarls before stepping aside to let Christina take her place.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', -3
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Stop watching':
@@ -1244,7 +1249,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/shower/nudepic.jpg"></center>'
 			'You try to ignore their insults, but it really gets under your skin and it shows. Seeing their effectiveness, they re-double their abuse, taunting you more and more.'
 			'"If I''ve got a landing strip, what does she have? A farmer''s field?!" Bella says.'
-			'"She probably lets it grow out like that because she doesn''t want to let boys know she''s got beef curtains down there." Stasya says.'
+			'"She probably lets it grow out like that because she doesn''t want to let boys know she''s got beef curtains down there," Stasya says.'
 			'"Ha! Are you kidding? What boy would want to fuck a furball like that? They probably see it and run away!" Irina says.'
 			'They cackle to themselves while you miserably douse your head under the shower, trying to drown out their hurtful words.'
 			act 'Return to the locker room': gt 'gschool_post_shower', 'post_shower'
@@ -1253,20 +1258,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/shower/postphyssho1.jpg"></center>'
 			if grupTipe = 3 or grupTipe = 5:
-				'"Fuck off!" you hiss at them, twisting the faucet open a little harder than you intended to. Unfortunately, your reaction seems to have the opposite effect you hoped for and they double down now that they know they''re getting under your skin.'
-				'Bella steps up and gets in your face. "What did you say to me? Watch your mouth, unless you want us to ruin your life bitch."'
-				'You won''t meet her gaze, you know the popular girls could destroy your reputation in a heart beat, so you just start taking your shower and ignore them as best you can.'
+				'"Fuck off!" you hiss at them, twisting the faucet open a little harder than you intended. Unfortunately, your reaction seems to have the opposite effect you hoped for and they double down now that they know they''re getting under your skin.'
+				'Bella steps up and gets in your face. "What did you say to me? Watch your mouth, unless you want us to ruin your life, bitch."'
+				'You don''t meet her gaze. You know the popular girls could destroy your reputation in a heartbeat, so you just start taking your shower and ignore them as best you can.'
 				*nl
-				'"That''s the only kind of fuck you can get with a <i>jungle</i> like that down there!" Irina says.'
+				'"That''s the only kind of fuck you can get with a <i>jungle</i> like that down there!" Irina taunts.'
 				'"She probably has a little guide in there telling you where to find her pussy under all that!" Bella says.'
-				'"A machete to hack your way through too!" Stasya says.'
+				'"And a machete to hack your way through too!" Stasya adds.'
 				'They cackle in sadistic glee and you spend the rest of your shower blushing, your face somehow feeling hotter than the water streaming down it.'
 			elseif grupTipe = 4 or grupTipe = 2:
-				'"Fuck off!" you hiss at them, twisting the faucet open a little harder than you intended to. Unfortunately, your reaction seems to have the opposite effect you hoped for and they double down now that they know they''re getting under your skin.'
-				'"That''s the only kind of fuck you can get with a <i>jungle</i> like that down there!" Irina says.'
+				'"Fuck off!" you hiss at them, twisting the faucet open a little harder than you intended. Unfortunately, your reaction seems to have the opposite effect you hoped for and they double down now that they know they''re getting under your skin.'
+				'"That''s the only kind of fuck you can get with a <i>jungle</i> like that down there!" Irina taunts.'
 				'"She probably has a little guide in there telling you where to find her pussy under all that!" Bella says.'
 				*nl
-				'"A machete to hack your way through too!" Stasya says.'
+				'"And a machete to hack your way through too!" Stasya adds.'
 				'You stop and take a few steps closer to them, with your hands balled up into fists. They stop their cackling when you get close. "I said fuck off!"'
 				'They all take a step back before Bella smirks. "What, can''t take a joke? Fine fine, don''t get your panties in a twist." They leave you in peace for the rest of the shower and instead spend the time gossiping about a variety of stuff..'
 			else
@@ -1283,7 +1288,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/home/bathroom/dush.mp4"></video></center>'
 			'You roll your eyes and ignore them completely, turning on the faucet and rinsing your hair. They continue to sling insults at you, but you pay them no mind, picking up the soap and beginning to scrub your body.'
-			*nl
 			'After a few more tries, they realize that they aren''t going to get any reaction out of you and turn back to conversing amongst themselves, finally letting you shower in peace.'
 			act 'Return to the locker room': gt 'gschool_post_shower', 'post_shower'
 		end
@@ -1461,8 +1465,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 							npc_rel['A23'] -= 5
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
-							'"Sorry, I was just admiring what great shape you''re in. I didn''t mean anything by it." you say while shaking your head.'
-							'She just shrugs. "Whatever." she grumbles before she starts getting dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
+							'"Sorry, I was just admiring what great shape you''re in. I didn''t mean anything by it," you say while shaking your head.'
+							'She just shrugs. "Whatever," she grumbles before she starts getting dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
 							gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -1506,7 +1510,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
 								'You pull away from her and step back. "What are you doing?"'
-								'She gives you a confused stare. "I thought... never mind." she says while shaking her head. She starts to get dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
+								'She gives you a confused stare. "I thought... never mind," she says while shaking her head. She starts to get dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
 								gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -1531,8 +1535,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 							npc_rel['A23'] -= 5
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
-							'"Sorry, I was just admiring what great shape you''re in. I didn''t mean anything by it." you say while shaking your head.'
-							'She just shrugs. "Whatever." she grumbles before she starts getting dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
+							'"Sorry, I was just admiring what great shape you''re in. I didn''t mean anything by it," you say while shaking your head.'
+							'She just shrugs. "Whatever," she grumbles before she starts getting dressed while ignoring you. You start getting dressed yourself and as soon as she is done, she walks out, leaving you alone in the locker room.'
 							gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -1648,7 +1652,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/lockerflash.jpg"></center>'
 		'Several other girls come in from the showers together, wearing their towels. A girl picks up her phone and holds it up to take their picture. When Anushka sees this, she stops, with a lewd smile, and pulls her towel wide open, showing off her naked body as the girl takes the picture. Several girls giggle at Anushka''s antics while others whistle or cat call.'
-		*nl
 		'You take your clothes out of your locker and start putting them on. This takes longer than expected, however, since you get distracted several times while getting dressed - sometimes by other girls engaging you in a brief conversation, sometimes by someone or something catching your eye. By the time you''re finished, most of the other girls have already left.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 	elseif gymdress = 2:
@@ -1657,7 +1660,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locselfiedan.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'Bella is at the mirror, taking a selfie of herself trying to look sexy. As she does, Albina walks up beside her and then starts to dance next to her, bending over and grinding her ass against her. She can''t help but laugh and grind back, and soon both of them are teasing each other and laughing, along with many of the other girls in the locker room that saw the whole thing.'
-		*nl
 		'You take your clothes out of your locker and start putting them on. This takes longer than expected, however, since you get distracted several times while getting dressed - sometimes by other girls engaging you in a brief conversation, sometimes by someone or something catching your eye. By the time you are finished, most of the other girls have already left the locker room.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 	elseif gymdress = 3:
@@ -1697,10 +1699,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 	elseif gymdress = 5:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/boysraid.jpg"></center>'
-		'You start to get dressed, most of the girls around you still in their underwear or naked when the locker room door bursts open. You and everyone else turn to see Vitek and Dan standing in the doorway and leering at all the pretty girls in the locker room. Several girls cover up, a few run around the corner out of view and others yell at them, which only makes them laugh. Albina, wearing only a rather eyecatching bright pink g-string thong, walks up to them and blocks the doorway. "Get the fuck out of here." she says in a low, menacing tone.'
+		'You start to get dressed, most of the girls around you still in their underwear or naked when the locker room door bursts open. You and everyone else turn to see Vitek and Dan standing in the doorway leering at everyone. Several girls cover up, a few run around the corner out of view and others yell at them, which only makes them laugh. Albina, wearing only her g-string thong, walks up to them and blocks the doorway. "Get the fuck out of here!" she says in a low, menacing tone.'
 		'Dan snorts. "Or what?"'
 		'Albina, not backing down, says "Do you really want to find out?" Everyone can hear the implied threat and considering her fearsome temper and willingness to get violently physical, Dan backs off.'
-		'Vitek, however, just laughs. "Don''t get your panties in a twist. We just wanted to know if any of you girls wanted to take part in a ''private workout.''" he says lewdly and reaches out to her exposed breast.'
+		'Vitek, however, just laughs. "Don''t get your cute little thong in a twist. We just wanted to know if any of you girls wanted to take part in a ''private workout.''" he says lewdly and reaches out to her exposed breast.'
 		'You see Albina''s fist clench before she grabs his hand and painfully twists it. "How''s this for a workout?" she shouts before swiftly swinging her leg up and kicking Vitek straight in the balls. He yelps in pain and almost collapses before hobbling out of the doorway, clutching his crotch. Dan backs out behind him and Albina slams the door. "Fucking perverted assholes." With that taken care of, the girls go back to getting dressed. You notice most of them do it quicker than normal, seemingly afraid of a repeat visit.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 	elseif gymdress = 6:
@@ -1718,7 +1720,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 	elseif gymdress = 7:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/alynushwedgie.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you finish getting dressed, you turn around to see Aylona sneak up behind Anushka, grab hold of her panties with both hands and yank them up, giving Anushka a major wedgie. Several other girls laugh as Anushka tries to get away and push Aylona''s hands back down so her panties aren''t all the way up her ass crack. After a little bit of struggling and Anushka calling Aylona all kinds of names, Aylona finally lets go and collapses on one of the benches laughing as Anushka half heartedly cusses her out as she picks her panties out of her ass crack.'
+		'As you finish getting dressed, you turn around to see Alyona sneak up behind Anushka, grab hold of her panties with both hands and yank them up, giving Anushka a major wedgie. Several other girls laugh as Anushka tries to get away and push Aylona''s hands back down so her panties aren''t all the way up her ass crack. After a little bit of struggling and Anushka calling Aylona all kinds of names, Aylona finally lets go and collapses on one of the benches laughing as Anushka half heartedly cusses her out as she picks her panties out of her ass crack.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 	elseif gymdress = 8:
 		*clr & cla
@@ -1755,9 +1757,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 	elseif gymdress <= 16:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/nerdoutcast.jpg"></center>'
-		if (grupTipe = 3 or grupTipe = 5) and $pantyworntype ! 'none' and christinaQW['blackmail'] < 2 and christinaQW['fight'] = 0:
-			'Just as you finish dressing, you feel someone grab the back of your panties. Before you can say or do anything, you feel your panties get yanked up hard, painfully digging into your ass crack and against your clit. You hear the other girls all laugh as you struggle to free yourself. As you try and get up, you almost lose your balance as the person keeps pulling your panties up higher. You are finally able to pull yourself free and turn to see Christina laughing at you. "Fucking loser, likely the closest anything has been to rubbing your clit."'
+		if $pantyworntype ! 'none' and christinaQW['subpath'] >= 2:
+			'Just as you finish dressing, you feel someone grab the back of your panties. Before you can say or do anything, you feel your panties get yanked up hard, painfully digging into your ass crack and against your clit. You hear the other girls all laugh as you struggle to free yourself. As you try and get up, you almost lose your balance as the person keeps pulling your panties up higher.'
+			'You are finally able to pull yourself free and turn to see Christina laughing at you. "Well, pet, anything to say?"'
+			'Looking down to avoiding eye contact as much as possible, you mumble "Thank you, Christina."'
 			gs 'pain', 1, 'asscheeks', 'ache'
+			gs 'stat'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
+		elseif (grupTipe = 3 or grupTipe = 5) and $pantyworntype ! 'none' and christinaQW['blackmail'] < 2 and christinaQW['fight'] = 0:
+			'Just as you finish dressing, you feel someone grab the back of your panties. Before you can say or do anything, you feel your panties get yanked up hard, painfully digging into your ass crack and against your clit. You hear the other girls all laugh as you struggle to free yourself. As you try and get up, you almost lose your balance as the person keeps pulling your panties up higher.'
+			'You are finally able to pull yourself free and turn to see Christina laughing at you. "Fucking loser, likely the closest anything has been to rubbing your clit."'
+			gs 'pain', 1, 'asscheeks', 'ache'
+			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Ignore her':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/change.jpg"></center>'

locations/gschool_lessonsev3.qsrc

@@ -537,6 +537,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'english':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/english/events/badlanguage.jpg"></center>'
 					'"Sure, repeat after me: I''m a worthless cock-sleeve who enjoys being a cum dump for all the boys in school."'
 					'Lera and Lena seem surprised with how much you say, but you reassure them it''s a really good insult; the worst of the worst. With a smile, they repeat the sentence, completely unaware of what they''re actually saying.'
+					'You glance over and see Albina smirking. To most people''s surprise, she is rather fluent in English and seems impressed with you.'
 					act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
 			else

locations/gschool_lunch.qsrc

@@ -369,7 +369,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'events':
 				end
 			end
 		end
-	elseif npc_rel['A144'] >= 50 and anush_sex >= 10 and hotcat >= 6 and stat['virgin'] = 0 and rand(0,5) = 0:
+	elseif npc_rel['A144'] >= 50 and anush_sex >= 10 and hotcat >= 6 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0 and rand(0,5) = 0:
 		pcs_horny += 20
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/want.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you are leaving the canteen, Anushka grabs you and pushes you up against the wall. She starts kissing you passionately while one of her hands slides up your skirt and starts rubbing your clit. You can hear several of your fellow classmates whistling, hooting and hollering, but right now you don''t really care. She breaks the kiss just long enough to moan into your ear. "I want to fuck you, come with me." she whispers as her fingers slide up into your pussy.'

locations/gschool_office.qsrc

@@ -615,7 +615,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore2':
 				'She rises just a bit and then uses her hand to tilt the dildo down to your mouth. "That wasn''t too bad, <<$pcs_lastname>>. All you have to do now is suck my dick clean, and then you can go. Or maybe you''d rather...?" She leaves the exact alternative unspoken, but you have no doubt as to what she is alluding to, and while you''d rather be doing anything else than sucking a large dildo your headmaster just violated your ass with, it beats getting fucked up your sore ass with it again.'
 				*nl
 				'With the choice rather easy, you obediently open your mouth and start sucking it clean, ignoring both the taste and the throbbing pain in your bowels as best you can.'
-				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 2, 'lesbian', 'humiliation', 'sub'
+				gs 'arousal', 'dildo_suck', 2, 'lesbian', 'humiliation', 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Get out':

locations/gschool_sex.qsrc

@@ -408,7 +408,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Anush_kiss':
 		'It doesn''t take long until she is on her knees sucking them both off, shortly followed by the boys fucking her. It is pretty clear you are not invited to take part. Unsure what else to do, you simply sit there waiting until they finish, wondering how badly you fucked up. Once they finish, the three of them head out, talking to each other and ignoring you. You know you''ve got some work to do to repair your relationship with them. That is, if you even want to.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
-	if stat['virgin'] = 0:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/sex/l4undress.jpg"></center>'
@@ -730,7 +730,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'storagesex':
 				'You open your mouth and wrap your lips around his shaft. You start bobbing your head and sucking his dick for a few minutes before he says "Stand up so I can fuck you."'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 				gs 'stat'
-				if stat['virgin'] = 0:
+				if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 					act 'Let him':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/teacher/victor/sex/storage6.jpg"></center>'
@@ -904,7 +904,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lazar_lockerroom':
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_sex', 'lazar_lockerroom_cum'
 		end
-		if stat['virgin'] = 0:
+		if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 			act 'Mount him':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'boyStat', 'A149'
@@ -1070,7 +1070,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_lockerroom':
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Make him lick you': gt 'gschool_sex', 'petka_eatpussy'
-			if stat['virgin'] = 0:
+			if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 				act 'Ride him': gt 'gschool_sex', 'petka_ride'
 			end
 			act 'Suck him off':
@@ -1094,7 +1094,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_lockerroom':
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'dom'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Make him lick your ass': gt 'gschool_sex', 'petka_eatpussy'
-			if stat['virgin'] = 0:
+			if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 				act 'Ride him': gt 'gschool_sex', 'petka_ride'
 				act 'Tell him to fuck you': gt 'gschool_sex', 'petka_fuck'
 			end
@@ -1334,13 +1334,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_eatpussy':
 		'You put your foot down and step away from him. Turning away from him, you put one foot on the bench and bend over slightly. You look back at him expectantly as he crawls over and starts licking your pussy from behind. "No, lick my asshole." you command. He doesn''t even hesitate and immediately starts lapping away at your hole. You feel empowered and very turned on, making a boy do what you want.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'rimming', 5, 'dom'
 		gs 'stat'
-		if stat['virgin'] = 0:
+		if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 			act 'Ride him': gt 'gschool_sex', 'petka_ride'
 			act 'Tell him to fuck you': gt 'gschool_sex', 'petka_fuck'
 		end
 		act 'Tell him to fuck your ass': gt 'gschool_sex', 'petka_anal'
 	end
-	if stat['virgin'] = 0:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 		act 'Ride him': gt 'gschool_sex', 'petka_ride'
 		act 'Tell him to fuck you': gt 'gschool_sex', 'petka_fuck'
 	end

locations/gschool_socialchg1.qsrc

@@ -327,7 +327,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ivan_fedor_naked':
 				'Their eyes roam all over your naked body and you feel more than a bit of a thrill from it. "Yeah you do, and no you have nothing to be ashamed of." Ivan says. "Yeah, you have every reason to be proud." Fedor adds before they exchange looks and grin at you.'
 				'You arch a brow at them. "What?"'
 				'They exchange looks again and Ivan speaks up. "Would you want to go somewhere more private where we could...appreciate your body even more?" You know exactly what he means.'
-				if stat['virgin'] = 0:
+				if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 					act 'Sure': gt 'gschool_socialchg1', 'ivanfedor_threesome'
 				end
 				act 'No thanks':

locations/hookup.qsrc

@@ -436,7 +436,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj_react1.2':
 				'"Ugh! Seriously?" Despite just blowing his load in your mouth, he looks somewhat upset. "I told you, I wanted to fuck, not just get a blowjob."'
 			end
 			
-			if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+			if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 				act'Sorry, saving myself for marriage':
 					hookup['virgin'] = 1
 					cla & *clr
@@ -496,7 +496,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj_react2':
 		'"Mmmm. Tasty."'
 		if rand(0,1) = 0 and hookup['fuck'] ! 1:
 			'"Aww man, I never got to fuck you."'
-			if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+			if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 				act'Sorry, saving myself for marriage':
 					hookup['virgin'] = 1
 					cla & *clr
@@ -659,7 +659,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bj2':
 			'"Well, that was fun, but I should get going," you say, standing up.'
 			if rand(0,1) = 0:
 				'"Seriously?" he says, sitting up in bed. "We never even got to fuck."'
-				if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+				if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 					act'Sorry, saving myself for marriage':
 						hookup['virgin'] = 1
 						cla & *nl
@@ -1031,7 +1031,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lick_pussy':
 							'He pulls away from you, seeming pretty disappointed.'
 							gs'hookup_after','pre'
 						end
-						if pcs_vag > 0 and hookup['bj'] < 2:
+						if (pcs_vag > 0 and stat['think_virgin'] ! 0) and hookup['bj'] < 2:
 							act'Round 2?':
 								cla & *clr
 								'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/misc/round2.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -1042,7 +1042,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lick_pussy':
 							end
 						elseif hookup['virgin'] = 1:
 							gs'hookup_virgin','virginity_take'
-						elseif stat['virgin'] = 0:
+						elseif stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 							act'Ask him to fuck you':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[$npclastsaved]>>''s Bedroom</font></b></center>'
@@ -1063,7 +1063,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lick_pussy':
 				end
 			else
 				'"So, ready to fuck?"'
-				if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+				if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 					act'I''m saving my virginity':
 						if daystage = 1 or daystage = 4:
 							$hookup['tonight_or_today'] = 'tonight'
@@ -1833,7 +1833,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'position_choose':
 		'You give him a few more jerks before throwing your legs over his, holding his cock between your thighs.'
 		'"I think it''s time to go for a ride," you grin, gently slapping his hardon against your belly.'
 		act'Put him inside you':
-			if stat['virgin'] = 1:gt'hookup_virgin','cowgirl_virg_norm1'
+			if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:gt'hookup_virgin','cowgirl_virg_norm1'
 			cla & *clr
 			gs'arousal','vaginal',1,'no_orgasm_msg'
 			gs'stat'
@@ -1936,7 +1936,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'position_he_choose':
 end
 
 $VirginHookUp = {
-	if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 		act'Wait I''m a virgin!': gt 'hookup_virgin', 'start'
 	end
 }

locations/hookup_sex.qsrc

@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		$hookupposition = 'cowgirl'
 		'You give him a few more jerks before throwing your legs over his, holding his cock between your thighs.'
 		'"I want you inside me," you whisper, lowering yourself down onto his cock.'
-		if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+		if pcs_vag = 0:
 			act'Ride him':gt'hookup_virgin','cowgirl_virg_norm1'
 		else
 			act'Ride him':gt'hookup_sex','cowgirl_norm1'
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'miss_norm1':
 	$hookup['position'] = 'miss'
-	if stat['virgin'] = 1:gt'hookup_virgin','miss_virg_norm1'
+	if pcs_vag = 0:gt'hookup_virgin','miss_virg_norm1'
 	gs'arousal','vaginal',rand(4,8),'no_orgasm_msg'
 	gs'stat'
 	
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'miss_hard1':
 	$hookup['position'] = 'miss'
-	if stat['virgin'] = 1:gt'hookup_virgin','miss_virg_hard1'
+	if pcs_vag = 0:gt'hookup_virgin','miss_virg_hard1'
 	if mesec > 0:
 		if hookup['condom'] = 1:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/vag/miss/blood_condom1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -338,7 +338,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'doggy_norm1':
 	$hookup['position'] = 'doggy'
-	if stat['virgin'] = 1:gt'hookup_virgin','doggy_virg_norm1'
+	if pcs_vag = 0:gt'hookup_virgin','doggy_virg_norm1'
 	gs'arousal','vaginal',1,'no_orgasm_msg'
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/shared/sex/vag/doggy/enter1.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -464,7 +464,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'doggy_hard1':
 	$hookup['position'] = 'doggy'
-	if stat['virgin'] = 1:gt'hookup_virgin','doggy_virg_hard1'
+	if pcs_vag = 0:gt'hookup_virgin','doggy_virg_hard1'
 	minut += rand(4,8)
 	gs'arousal','vaginal',1,'no_orgasm_msg','rough'
 	gs'stat'
@@ -599,7 +599,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'cowgirl_norm1':
 	$hookup['position'] = 'cowgirl'
 	hookup['orgasm'] = orgasm
-	if stat['virgin'] = 1:gt'hookup_virgin','cowgirl_virg_norm1'
+	if pcs_vag = 0:gt'hookup_virgin','cowgirl_virg_norm1'
 	if pcs_horny >= 80 + rand(0,15): $orgasm_or = 'yes'
 	gs'arousal','vaginal',rand(4,8),'no_orgasm_msg'
 	if $orgasm_or ! '': $orgasm_or = ''
@@ -626,7 +626,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cowgirl_hard1':
 	$hookup['position'] = 'cowgirl'
 	hookup['orgasm'] = orgasm
 	if pcs_horny >= 80 + rand(0,15): $orgasm_or = 'yes'
-	if stat['virgin'] = 1:gt'hookup_virgin','cowgirl_virg_norm1'
+	if pcs_vag = 0:gt'hookup_virgin','cowgirl_virg_norm1'
 	gs'arousal','vaginal',rand(4,8),'no_orgasm_msg'
 	gs'stat'
 	if $orgasm_or ! '': $orgasm_or = ''

locations/hunters.qsrc

@@ -1,5 +1,5 @@
 # hunters
-!2021/05/02
+!!2022/05/06
 if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'

locations/igorev.qsrc

@@ -247,7 +247,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'din_sex':
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Continue':gt 'igorEv', 'din_igor_end'
 			end
-			if stat['virgin'] = 0 and Igorsex >= 1:
+			if stat['think_virgin'] = 0 and Igorsex >= 1:
 				act 'Tell him to fuck you in the pussy':
 					cls
 					Igorsex += 1

locations/igorhome.qsrc

@@ -541,7 +541,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom1':
 								'"Well, I hope he''ll get out of his shell and I''m sure the two of you will have a great relationship..."'
 								'You finish by saying if Igor has any questions you''ll make sure to send him Gemorgen''s way...'
 								act 'Leave the living room': gt 'igorhome','hallway'
-							elseif stat['virgin'] = 0:
+							elseif stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 								'"I hope something will happen soon as he''s been avoiding the best part of our relationship..." you say a bit discouraged.'
 								'"Don''t worry I''ll have a talk with him. He''s innocent like a little lamb. He probably doesn''t know how to make a move..."'
 								'You begin thanking him but he stops you and says he should be thanking you as he never thought Igor would end up with an attractive girl as you.'
@@ -675,12 +675,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'livingroom3':
 						'"Well, I''m sure you''re quite the teacher... I''m just glad Igor has found someone to look after him..."'
 						'You wink at the father as not to worry. You grab Igor by the arm, and the two of you leave the living room feeling relieved that you''ve told Gemorgen.'
 						act 'Leave the living room': gt 'igorhome','hallway'
-					elseif stat['virgin'] = 0:
+					elseif stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 						'"I hope something will happen soon he''s been avoiding that part of our relationship..." you say a bit disappointed.'
 						'"Don''t worry I''ll have a talk man to man. He''s innocent like a little lamb. He probably doesn''t know what to do..."'
 						'Igor blushes while you thank the father for wanting to help out. The two of you leave the living room.'
 						act 'Leave the living room': gt 'igorhome','hallway'
-					elseif stat['virgin'] = 1:
+					elseif stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 						'"No, I''m still a virgin and I''m not ready yet to lose it yet and Igor is really understanding. One day maybe but not right now..."'
 						'Gemorgen looks a bit disappointed at Igor but doesn''t say anything since his son as he doesn''t want to jeopardize the relationship...'
 						act 'Leave the living room': gt 'igorhome','hallway'

locations/intro_initialization.qsrc

@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ showobjs 0
 $coatworntype = 'none'
 coatwornnumber = 0
 
-if $ARGS[1] ! 'CSB' and goth_clothing ! 1:
+if $ARGS[1] ! 'CSB' and school_clothing ! 1:
 	cheap_panties[1] = 1
 	cheap_bras[1] = 1
 	$pantyworntype = 'cheap'
@@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ if $ARGS[1] ! 'CSB' and goth_clothing ! 1:
 end
 
 !!	Starting clothing set
-if goth_clothing = 1:
+if school_clothing = 1:
 	cats_panties[28] = 1
 	cats_bras[28] = 1
 	$pantyworntype = 'cats'

locations/intro_initialization_city.qsrc

@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@ danilovich_swimsuit[3] = 1
 danilovich_swimsuit_h[3] = 60
 danilovich_swimsuit_b[3] = pcs_hips
 
-if goth_clothing = 1:
+if school_clothing = 1:
 	cats_panties[28] = 1
 	cats_bras[28] = 1
 	$pantyworntype = 'cats'

locations/journal_quests.qsrc

@@ -38,25 +38,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		'<center><h1>Christina Zvereva</h1></center>'
 		*nl
 		if christinaQW['subpath'] >= 1 or christinaQW['fight'] >= 1 or christinaQW['pre_fight'] >= 1 or christinaQW['blackmail'] >= 1 or christinaQW['pre_bm'] >= 1:
-			if christinaQW['subpath'] >= 3:
-				'Christina owns me now. After gym class, she makes me do things in the showers. I am sure it''s only the beginning, too...'
-			elseif christinaQW['subpath'] = 2:
-				if christinaQW['fight'] = -1:
-					'I challenged Christina ... and lost. I have a feeling that is going to catch up to me somehow...'
-				else
-					'I submitted myself to Christina''s control. I have to wait and see what the future brings...'
-				end
-			else
-				'I heard Christina trains Lina by the lake after school. I should pay them a visit after school sometime.'
-			end
 			if christinaQW['fight'] >= 1 or christinaQW['pre_fight'] >= 1:
 				if christinaQW['fight'] = 1:
 					'I fought Christina and won! She cannot touch me now, and if I demand it, she will give it, or get another beating.'
 				else
 					'I have decided I''m going to beat the crap out of Christina. I should do it afterschool, but in front of the school too, so everybody sees it happen.'
 				end
-			end
-			if christinaQW['blackmail'] >= 1 or christinaQW['pre_bm'] >= 1:
+			elseif christinaQW['blackmail'] >= 1 or christinaQW['pre_bm'] >= 1:
 				if christinaQW['blackmail'] >= 2:
 					'I have managed to successfully blackmail Christina. She can''t touch me now, or I will ruin her.'
 				elseif christinaQW['blackmail'] = 1:
@@ -64,6 +52,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				else
 					'I should wait and see what opportunities come up to get some dirt on Christina.'
 				end
+			else
+				if christinaQW['subpath'] >= 5:
+					'I followed Christina home. I can visit whenever I want for now, as long as I follow her rules. More will come, I''m sure. Once Alaratt stops slacking!'
+				elseif christinaQW['subpath'] = 4:
+					'Christina told me to follow her home after school, I should talk to her once school gets out.'
+				elseif christinaQW['subpath'] = 3:
+					'Christina owns me now. After gym class, she makes me do things in the showers. I am sure it''s only the beginning, too...'
+				elseif christinaQW['subpath'] = 2:
+					if christinaQW['fight'] = -1:
+						'I challenged Christina ... and lost. I have a feeling that is going to catch up to me somehow...'
+					else
+						'I submitted myself to Christina''s control. I have to wait and see what the future brings...'
+					end
+				else
+					'I heard Christina trains Lina by the lake after school. I should pay them a visit after school sometime.'
+				end
 			end
 		elseif christinaQW['bully'] <= 40 or christinaQW['bully'] >= 60:
 			'I should try and talk to Christina at school.'
@@ -339,8 +343,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		elseif katjaQW['QWstage'] > 2:
 			if npc_sex['A14'] = 0:
 				'I''ve kissed Katja, but not gone any further.'+iif(katjaQW['slut'] < 20, ' Katja needs to loosen up a little before she will go any further. Maybe I should try to push her a little when kissing or getting her to be naked at the beach?', ' I think it''s possible that she will go further if the opportunity comes up when hanging out at her home.')
-			end
+			else
 				'While Katja is a shy girl, she is still quite strong willed, and will not do anything sexual if not in the mood. Fortunately for me, it''s pretty easy to determine if she is aroused by how red her face is.'
+			end
 
 			if katjaQW['school_kiss'] = 0 and katjaQW['QWstage'] > 2 and katjaQW['knows_masterbation'] + katjaQW['knows_BJ'] + katjaQW['knows_sex'] + katjaQW['knows_anal']+ katjaQW['knows_cuni'] >= 2:
 				'I should try to kiss Katja at school.'
@@ -366,49 +371,51 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					'You should' +iif(katjaQW['strapon_bj'] = 0, '; make Katja give your strap-on a blowjob', '')+ +iif( katjaQW['strapon_vag'] = 0, '; fuck Katja''s pussy with your strap-on', '')+ +iif(katjaQW['strapon_ass'] = 0, '; fuck Katja in the ass with your strap-on', '')+'.'
 				end
 
-				if katjaQW['knows_BJ'] = 0 or katjaQW['knows_sex'] = 0 or katjaQW['knows_anal'] = 0:
-					'If I keep telling Katja about my sexual experiences, she might want to try something with me.'
-				end
+				if katjaQW['boy_block'] = 0:
+					if katjaQW['knows_BJ'] = 0 or katjaQW['knows_sex'] = 0 or katjaQW['knows_anal'] = 0:
+						'If I keep telling Katja about my sexual experiences, she might want to try something with me.'
+					end
 
-				if ((katjaQW['knows_BJ'] + katjaQW['knows_sex']) >= 2 and katjaQW['QWstage'] < 4) or ((katjaQW['knows_BJ'] + katjaQW['knows_anal']) >= 2 and katjaQW['anal_quest'] = 0):
-					'Katja wants to ask you something at her home, but she needs to be in the right mood before she will ask.'
-				end
+					if ((katjaQW['knows_BJ'] + katjaQW['knows_sex']) >= 2 and katjaQW['QWstage'] < 4) or ((katjaQW['knows_BJ'] + katjaQW['knows_anal']) >= 2 and katjaQW['anal_quest'] = 0):
+						'Katja wants to ask you something at her home, but she needs to be in the right mood before she will ask.'
+					end
 
-				if katjaQW['anal_quest'] = 2:
-					if  IvanShowerQW = 11:
-						'I should find a place where we can get Ivan to take Katja''s anal virginity. Maybe we can catch him at the beach or at school when he is looking at us kissing.'
-					else
-						'I need to seduce and have anal sex with Ivan before I can have him take Katja''s anal virginity. See Ivan''s quest for how to do this.'
+					if katjaQW['anal_quest'] = 2:
+						if  IvanShowerQW = 11:
+							'I should find a place where we can get Ivan to take Katja''s anal virginity. Maybe we can catch him at the beach or at school when he is looking at us kissing.'
+						else
+							'I need to seduce and have anal sex with Ivan before I can have him take Katja''s anal virginity. See Ivan''s quest for how to do this.'
+						end
 					end
-				end
 
-				if katjaQW['QWstage'] = 5:
-					if katjaQW['marcus_asked'] = 0:
-						if Marcus_sextype > 0:
-							'I should ask Marcus about being Katja''s first during break at school.'
+					if katjaQW['QWstage'] = 5:
+						if katjaQW['marcus_asked'] = 0:
+							if Marcus_sextype > 0:
+								'I should ask Marcus about being Katja''s first during break at school.'
+							else
+								'I need to seduce and have sex with Marcus before I can ask him to be Katja''s first. I could try at the disco.'
+							end
 						else
-							'I need to seduce and have sex with Marcus before I can ask him to be Katja''s first. I could try at the disco.'
+							'Marcus has agreed to be Katja''s first, so I should talk with Katja at her room to set it up.'
 						end
-					else
-						'Marcus has agreed to be Katja''s first, so I should talk with Katja at her room to set it up.'
 					end
-				end
 
-				if katjaQW['birth_control_start_day'] = 0 and katjaQW['QWstage'] >= 6:
-					'I should get Katja on birth control, then I could take her on some wilder sex adventures once she''s ready.'
-				elseif katjaQW['QWstage'] < 6 or katjaQW['anal_quest'] < 3 or katjaQW['slut'] <= 100:
-					'I should continue to corrupt Katja. There might be more things I can push her to do.'
-				elseif katjaQW['QWstage'] = 6:
-					'Katja wants to talk to me about something at her home. She needs to be somewhat horny to ask me'
-				elseif katjaQW['park_sex'] = 0:
-					'I should take Katja to the park to get her to to hook up with random guys.'
-				elseif katjaQW['park_sex'] = 1:
-					'I took Katja to the park and she had sex with a random guy. Maybe if we go again I could get her to have sex with several guys.'
-				elseif katjaQW['park_sex'] = 2:
-					'Katja had a threesome in the park with two random guys. We should go again and see where things end up.'
-				else
-					'You''ve managed to turn Katja from an innocent virgin into a complete slut that will have orgies with random people you meet in the park.'
-					'You have unlocked all the scenes with Katja that are in the game at this time' +iif(NatbelQW['QWstage'] < 8, ', except a scene started by going to the market which requires you to advance Natasha''s quest line.', '.')
+					if katjaQW['birth_control_start_day'] = 0 and katjaQW['QWstage'] >= 6:
+						'I should get Katja on birth control, then I could take her on some wilder sex adventures once she''s ready.'
+					elseif katjaQW['QWstage'] < 6 or katjaQW['anal_quest'] < 3 or katjaQW['slut'] <= 100:
+						'I should continue to corrupt Katja. There might be more things I can push her to do.'
+					elseif katjaQW['QWstage'] = 6:
+						'Katja wants to talk to me about something at her home. She needs to be somewhat horny to ask me'
+					elseif katjaQW['park_sex'] = 0:
+						'I should take Katja to the park to get her to to hook up with random guys.'
+					elseif katjaQW['park_sex'] = 1:
+						'I took Katja to the park and she had sex with a random guy. Maybe if we go again I could get her to have sex with several guys.'
+					elseif katjaQW['park_sex'] = 2:
+						'Katja had a threesome in the park with two random guys. We should go again and see where things end up.'
+					else
+						'You''ve managed to turn Katja from an innocent virgin into a complete slut that will have orgies with random people you meet in the park.'
+						'You have unlocked all the scenes with Katja that are in the game at this time' +iif(NatbelQW['QWstage'] < 8, ', except a scene started by going to the market which requires you to advance Natasha''s quest line.', '.')
+					end
 				end
 			end
 		end

locations/katjaEvDin.qsrc

@@ -590,7 +590,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kuni_dom':
 						'No matter how used to being throat fucked you are, she makes you gag. She buries it to the base in your throat and leaves it there until you start to gag, before going back to roughly fucking your mouth. Each time she makes you gag, you can hear her giggle, clearly enjoying herself.'
 						'With tears running down your cheeks and saliva dripping from your mouth, she finally pulls your head away by your hair. "Okay, I think we got this wet enough, don''t you? Ready for round two?"'
 
-						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'rough', 'deepthroat'
+						gs 'arousal', 'dildo_suck', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'rough', 'deepthroat'
 						gs 'stat'
 
 						gs 'willpower', 'vaginal', 'resist', 'hard'
@@ -706,10 +706,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kiss_events':
 			act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
 	elseif katjaQW['school_kiss'] >= 2:
-		'While you kissed Katja, someone came nearby sighed loudly, probably, appreciating the view.'
-		'"How beautiful," again it was Ivan, he was waiting for you or something. Not being distracted, you continued to kiss Katja.'
-		'"Look, look, lesbians." one guy yelled and pointed at Katja and you.'
-		act 'Glare at the moron':gt 'katjaEvDin', 'moron'
+		if ($loc = 'pav_disco' and discoenable['A3'] = 1) or $loc ! 'pav_disco':
+			'While you kissed Katja, someone came nearby sighed loudly, probably, appreciating the view.'
+			'"How beautiful," again it was Ivan, he was waiting for you or something. Not being distracted, you continued to kiss Katja.'
+			'"Look, look, lesbians." one guy yelled and pointed at Katja and you.'
+			act 'Glare at the moron':gt 'katjaEvDin', 'moron'
+		else
+			act 'Return to dance': gt 'pav_disco'
+		end
 	end
 end
 

locations/kendra.qsrc

@@ -8,15 +8,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_room_start':
 	kendraflag = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/island/university/dorm/kendraroom/room.jpg"></center>'
-	'There are two beds, one on each side of the window. There are various pictures and posters hanging on both sides of the room. One side also has a string of large lights hanging up as well. Just down from the beds on each side are two desks, against each wall. Both are decorated with slight differences. Near the door is a small couch and two wardrobes.'
-	'As you walk in the room, she follows behind you as says. "What should I do with you today slave?" You know it is a rhetorical question and she really doesn''t want you to answer. As you turn to look at her, you can tell she has something in mind that will likely either humiliate you are turn you into her submissive. "Maybe I will have you do my nails, or maybe lick my ass, perhaps I will fuck you, or find someone to fuck you, so many choices." Perhaps if you just go now you can avoid it, or maybe you should stay and submit to her every whim, it might be fun.'
+	'There are two beds, one on each side of the window, along with various pictures and posters hanging on both sides of the room. A string of large lights hang from one of the walls and just down from the beds on each side are two desks, both decorated with slight differences. A small couch and two wardrobes are near the door.'
+	'As you walk in the room, she follows behind you. "What should I do with you today, slave?" You know it''s a rhetorical question and she really doesn''t want you to answer. As you turn to look at her, you can tell she has something in mind that will likely either humiliate you or turn you into her submissive pet. "Maybe I''ll have you do my nails, or maybe lick my ass? Perhaps I''ll fuck you, or find someone to fuck you. So many choices..."'
 	act 'I should get going':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A84', 'loathe'
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big84.jpg"></center>'
-		'You look over at the clock in her room. "I should really get going, sorry to have bothered you."'
-		'She looks at you very annoyed. "What is this? I don''t have time for games. Don''t come back unless you are serious about playing." Then she grabs you by the arm and shoves you out the door, closing it behind you.'
+		'You look over at the clock. "I should really get going. Sorry to have bothered you."'
+		'She looks at you with a very annoyed glare. "What is this? I don''t have time for games. Don''t come back unless you''re serious about playing!" She grabs you by the arm and shoves you out the door, closing it behind you.'
 		act 'Go to eighth floor': gt 'uni_dorm', 'eighth_floor'
 	end
 	act 'Submit to your mistress':
@@ -77,16 +77,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_room_0':
 	gs 'stat'
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/femdom/femdom1.jpg"></center>'
-	'She goes over and sits on the bed, then kicks off her shoes. "Come over here and paint my toenails slave." You walk over and sit on the bed, she hands you some polish. You start putting on the polish only to have her smack you slightly. "No, not good enough start over." You get out the polish remover and clean her nails and repeat the process several times before she seems to be happy.'
+	'She sits on her bed and kicks off her shoes. "Come here and paint my toenails, slave." You walk over and sit on the bed as she hands you some polish. You start applying some, only to have her smack you. "No, not good enough! Start over!" You grab the polish remover and clean her nails before repeating the process several times until she''s happy.'
 	act 'Finish her toenails':
 		*clr & cla
 		minut += 15
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/femdom/femdom1a.jpg"></center>'
-		'She looks down as you are finishing up the last toes on her other foot. "I suppose that is good enough. Now hurry up and finish, I got things to do."'
-		'"Yes mistress." You don''t rush and make sure you do a good job finishing her toenails, you blow on them until they dry.'
-		'Once you have finally finished she pushes you off the bed. "Now go!"'
-		'You stand up. "Yes mistress." Then you walk to the door and leave.'
+		'She looks down as you''re finishing up. "I suppose that''s good enough. Now hurry up and finish, I''ve got things to do."'
+		'"Yes, mistress." You don''t rush and make sure you do a good job finishing her toenails, blowing on them until they dry.'
+		'Once you''ve finally finished, she pushes you off the bed. "Now go!"'
+		'"Yes, mistress." You stand and walk over to the door before leaving.'
 		act 'Go to eighth floor': gt 'uni_dorm', 'eighth_floor'
 	end
 end
@@ -97,10 +97,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_room_1':
 	*clr & cla
 	kendra_dom += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/femdom/femdom2_' + rand(1,2) + '.jpg"></center>'
-	'She goes over and sits on the couch. "Come over here and clean my boots slave." You walk over and kneel down next to the couch, you start to grab some tissue to clean her boots but she stops you. "No use your tongue."'
-	'You nod a bit. "Yes mistress." Then you start licking her boots clean, once you finish one you start on the other. A few times she smacks you on top of the head and points out a spot you missed, that you have to go back over.'
-	'Once you have finally finished cleaning her boots she looks them over one last time and then points to the door. "Now go slave."'
-	'You stand up. "Yes mistress." Then you walk to the door and leave.'
+	'She walks over and sits on the couch. "Come here and clean my boots, slave." You walk over and kneel next to the couch before grabbing some tissue to clean her boots, but she stops you. "No! Use your tongue."'
+	'You nod. "Yes, mistress." You start licking her boots clean as she smacks you on the head and points out any spots you''ve missed.'
+	'Once you''ve finally finished cleaning her boots, she looks them over before pointing to the door. "Good girl. Now leave, slave."'
+	'"Yes, mistress." You stand and walk over to the door before leaving.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 30, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'feet'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -113,10 +113,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_room_2':
 	*clr & cla
 	kendra_dom += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/femdom/femdom3.jpg"></center>'
-	'She goes over and grabs a bowl of water, with some other stuff. Then she sits on the couch. "Come over here and clean my feet slave." You walk over and kneel down next to the couch, you add a little soap to the water. Then use the cloth and water in the bowl to clean her feet'
-	'She mostly ignores you and reads a magazine. Once you have finally finished cleaning her feet she looks them over and says. "Kiss them."'
-	'You do as she says and kiss her feet, when you have kissed them enough, she then points to the door. "Now go slave."'
-	'You stand up. "Yes mistress." Then you walk to the door and leave.'
+	'She grabs a bowl of water before she sits on the couch. "Come here and clean my feet, slave." You walk over and kneel next to the couch, adding soap to the water before using the cloth to clean her feet.'
+	'She mostly ignores you and reads a magazine. Once you''ve finished, she looks them over. "Kiss them."'
+	'You do as she says and kiss her feet before she points to the door. "Now go slave."'
+	'"Yes, mistress." You stand and walk over to the door before leaving.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 30, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'feet'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -129,10 +129,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_room_3':
 	*clr & cla
 	kendra_dom += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/femdom/femdom4.jpg"></center>'
-	'She goes over and sits on the couch. "Come over here and clean my feet slave." You start to go get the bowl of water when she says. "No use your tongue."'
-	'You nod a bit. "Yes mistress." You walk back over and kneel next to the couch. You remove her boots and then start licking her feet, after a bit you suck on her toes and lick her feet and legs half way up her calves there the boots had ended.'
-	'Once you licked every cm of her feet and lower legs, then points to the door. "Now go slave."'
-	'You stand up. "Yes mistress." Then you walk to the door and leave.'
+	'She walks over and sits on the couch. "Come here and clean my feet, slave." You go to grab the bowl of water when she snaps her fingers. "No! Use your tongue."'
+	'You nod. "Yes, mistress." You walk over and kneel next to the couch before removing her boots and licking her feet. You then start sucking on her toes while continuing to lick her feet and legs.'
+	'Once you''ve licked every inch of her feet and lower legs, she points to the door. "Now go, slave."'
+	'"Yes, mistress." You stand and walk over to the door before leaving.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 30, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'feet'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -145,10 +145,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_room_4':
 	*clr & cla
 	kendra_dom += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/femdom/femdom5.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once inside she leads you over to her bed, then she opens the night stand and pulls out a collar. Which she promptly and tightly buckles around your neck, making it a little hard for you to breath and swallow. With that firmly in place she gets out a leash and attaches it to the collar. She pushes you down as she says. "Get down, like a good slave." You get down on your hands and knees. Then she leads you around the dorm room for a bit, before she finally takes you out into the hall. She leads you down the communal kitchen area and then to the lounge, where she gets some snacks and drinks for herself. Several people notice the two of you, some laugh, some just ignore it, while others give you or sometimes both of you disgusted looks.'
-	*nl
-	'Finally you make it back to the room, where she sits on the couch to watch a little tv while you stay on your hands and knees next to the couch waiting for her. After a bit she finally points to the door. "Now go slave, but put your collar and leash away first."'
-	'You stand up taking off the collar and leash, you walk over and put them back in the draw she got them from. "Yes mistress." Then you walk to the door and leave.'
+	'Once inside, she leads you over to her bed where she opens the night stand and pulls out a collar which she promptly and tightly buckles around your neck, making it a little hard for you to breathe. With the collar firmly in place, she pulls out a leash and attaches it to the collar before pushing you down. "Get on all fours like a good slave."' 
+	'You get down on your hands and knees and she leads you around the room for a few minutes before she takes you out into the hall. She leads you down to the communal kitchen area and then into the lounge, where she gets some snacks and drinks for herself. Several people notice the two of you; some laugh, some ignore it and others give you or sometimes both of you disgusted looks.'
+	'When you finally make it back to her room, she sits on the couch to watch TV while you stay on your hands and knees next to the couch waiting for her. After a few minutes, she finally points to the door. "You can go slave, but put your collar and leash away first."'
+	'"Yes, mistress." You stand up and take off the collar and leash before walking over and putting them back in the drawer where they belong. You then walk over to the door and leave.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 30, 'sub', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -161,13 +161,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_room_5':
 	*clr & cla
 	kendra_dom += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/femdom/femdom6.jpg"></center>'
-	'She goes over and pulls her chair away from her desk before sitting down on it."Come over here slave." You walk over and stand next to her, she suddenly grabs you and pulls you across her lap, before you even know what is happening she starts spanking you.'
-	'"You are such a worthless and bad slave." She says as she keeps spanking you.'
-	'You grit your teeth against the pain. "I''m sorry mistress." You don''t even know what you did to upset her, she isn''t telling you and you know it would only make matters worse if you asked.'
+	'She walks over and pulls her chair away from her desk before sitting on it. "Come over here slave." You walk over and stand next to her before she suddenly grabs you and pulls you across her lap. Before you even know what''s happening, she starts spanking you.'
+	'"You''re such a worthless slave!" she says as she keeps spanking you.'
+	'You grit your teeth against the pain. "I''m sorry, mistress!" You don''t even know what you did to upset her and you don''t dare ask.'
 	*nl
-	'She starts pulling your clothes off, until she leaves you bare butt exposed, then she starts spanking you even harder. After some time it really starts to sting, you don''t know how long she has spanked you, long enough she seems to be getting tired.'
-	'Finally she pushes you off her lap into the floor, as she stands up, she points to the door. "Now go slave."'
-	'You stand up and get dressed again. "Yes mistress." Then you walk to the door and leave.'
+	'She starts pulling your clothes off until your ass is exposed, then she starts spanking you even harder. After some time, it really starts to sting.'
+	'She finally stops and pushes you off her lap onto the floor. She then stands up and points sternly at the door. "Now go slave."'
+	'"Yes, mistress." You quickly stand up and get dressed before walking over to the door and leaving.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 30, 'sub', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'pain', 2, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -181,13 +181,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_room_6':
 	*clr & cla
 	kendra_dom += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/femdom/femdom7.jpg"></center>'
-	'She goes over and pulls her chair away from her desk. She grabs a paddle that was laying on her desk before sitting down on the chair."Come over here slave." You walk over and lay yourself across her lap. You already know what she plans to do, at once she start paddling your ass.'
-	'"You are such a worthless and bad slave." She says as she keeps spanking you.'
-	'You grit your teeth against the pain. "I''m sorry mistress." You don''t even know what you did to upset her, she isn''t telling you and you know it would only make matters worse if you asked.'
+	'She walks over and pulls her chair away from her desk before she grabs a paddle that was sitting on her desk before sitting on the chair. "Come over here slave." You walk over and lay yourself across her lap. You already know what she plans to do.'
+	'"You''re such a worthless slave!" she says as she starts paddling your ass.'
+	'You grit your teeth against the pain. "I''m sorry, mistress!" You don''t even know what you did to upset her and you don''t dare ask.'
 	*nl
-	'She starts pulling your clothes off, until she leaves you bare butt exposed, then she starts spanking you even harder. After some time it really starts to sting, you don''t know how long she has spanked you, long enough she seems to be getting tired.'
-	'Finally she pushes you off her lap into the floor, as she stands up, she points to the door. "Now go slave."'
-	'You stand up and get dressed again. "Yes mistress." Then you walk to the door and leave.'
+	'She starts pulling your clothes off until your ass is exposed, then she starts spanking you even harder. After some time, it really starts to sting.'
+	'She finally stops and pushes you off her lap onto the floor. She then stands up and points sternly at the door. "Now go slave."'
+	'"Yes, mistress." You quickly stand up and get dressed before walking over to the door and leaving.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 30, 'sub', 'humiliation'
 	gs 'pain', 3, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -201,13 +201,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_room_7':
 	*clr & cla
 	kendra_dom += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/femdom/femdom8.jpg"></center>'
-	'She goes over and sits on the couch. "Come over here." You walk over next to her. "Strip!" she commands you.'
-	'You nod a bit. "Yes mistress." Then your remove your clothes and strip down.'
-	'Once you naked she points to the floor right in front of her. "Get on your hands and knees."'
+	'She walks over and sits on the couch. "Come here." You walk over to her. "Strip!" she commands.'
+	'"Yes, mistress." You nid and start removing your clothes.'
+	'Once you''re naked, she points at the floor in front of her. "Get on your hands and knees."'
 	*nl
-	'You do as she commands, once in place she puts her feet up on your back. Then she leans back and start texting on her phone. Occasionally she laughs or makes comments about whoever she is texting but she never speaks to you.'
-	'Once a hour or so has passed she removes her feet from your back and then points to the door. "Now go slave."'
-	'You stand up and get dressed. "Yes mistress." Then you walk to the door and leave.'
+	'You do as she commands and once you''re in place, she puts her feet up on your back before she leans back and starts texting on her phone. She occasionally laughs or makes comments about whoever she''s texting, but she never speaks to you.'
+	'Once an hour or so has passed, she removes her feet from your back and points to the door. "Now go slave."'
+	'"Yes, mistress." You stand and get dressed before walking over to the door and leaving.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 60, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'inhibition'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -220,10 +220,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_room_8':
 	*clr & cla
 	kendra_dom += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/femdom/femdom9.jpg"></center>'
-	'She goes over and sits on the couch. "Come over here and strip." You walk over and strip naked while standing next to her. Once you are fully naked she says. "Now lick my shoes clean."'
-	'You kneel down. "Yes mistress." Then you start licking her shoes and feet clean, once you finish one you start on the other. A few times she smacks you on top of the head and points out a spot you missed, that you have to go back over.'
-	'Once you have finally finished cleaning her shoes and feet, she looks them over one last time and then points to the door. "Now go slave."'
-	'You stand up. "Yes mistress." Then you walk to the door and leave.'
+	'She walks over and sits on the couch. "Come here and strip." You walk over and strip naked while standing next to her. Once you''re fully naked, she smiles. "Now lick my shoes clean."'
+	'"Yes, mistress." You kneel down and start licking her shoes and feet clean as she smacks you on the head and points out any spots you''ve missed.'
+	'Once you''ve finished cleaning her shoes and feet, she looks them over before pointing at the door. "Now go slave."'
+	'"Yes, mistress." You stand up and walk over to the door before leaving.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 30, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'feet', 'inhibition'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -236,12 +236,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_room_9':
 	*clr & cla
 	kendra_dom += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/femdom/femdom10.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once inside she leads you over to her bed, then she turns toward you and says. "Strip!"'
-	'As you strip you reply. "Yes mistress." She opens the night stand and pulls out a collar. Once you are fully naked she tightly buckles it around your neck, making it a little hard for you to breath and swallow. With that firmly in place she gets out a leash and attaches it to the collar. She pushes you down as she says. "Get down, like a good slave." You get down on your hands and knees.'
+	'Once inside, she leads you over to her bed and commands you to strip.'
+	'"Yes, mistress." You start stripping as she opens the night stand and pulls out a collar that she tightly buckles it around your neck, making it a little hard for you to breathe. With the collar firmly in place, she pulls out a leash and attaches it to the collar before pushing you down. "Get down on all fours like a good slave."'
 	*nl
-	'Then she leads you around the dorm room for a bit, before she gets out the bowl and fills it with water. She places it down in front of you as she sits on the couch and starts texting on her phone. "Drink!" You start lapping up the water as best you can, once you are finished you just sit there quietly until she notices you again.'
-	'After a bit she finally points to the door. "Now go slave, but put your collar and leash away first."'
-	'You stand up taking off the collar and leash, you walk over and put them back in the draw she got them from. "Yes mistress." Then you walk to the door and leave.'
+	'You get down on your hands and knees and she leads you around the room for a few minutes before she grabs a bowl and fills it with water. She places it down in front of you as she sits on the couch and starts texting on her phone. "Drink!" You start lapping up the water as best you can bnefore sitting quietly until she notices you.'
+	'After a while, she finally points to the door. "You can go now slave, but put your collar and leash away first."'
+	'"Yes, mistress." You stand up and take off the collar and leash before walking over and putting them back in the drawer where they belong. You then walk over to the door and leave.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 30, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'inhibition'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -254,14 +254,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_room_10':
 	*clr & cla
 	kendra_dom += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/femdom/femdom11.jpg"></center>'
-	'She goes over and sits down on the couch. "Come over here slave." You walk over and stand next to her. "Now strip!"'
-	'As you strip you reply. "Yes mistress." Once you are naked she pulls you over her laps and starts spanking your bare ass with her hand.'
-	'"You are such a worthless and bad slave." She says as she keeps spanking you.'
+	'She walks over and sits on the couch. "Come here slave." You walk over and stand next to her. "Now strip!"'
+	'"Yes, mistress." Once you''re naked, she pulls you over her lap and starts spanking your bare ass with her hand.'
+	'"You''re such a worthless slave!" she says as she keeps spanking you.'
 	*nl
-	'You grit your teeth against the pain. "I''m sorry mistress." You don''t even know what you did to upset her, she isn''t telling you and you know it would only make matters worse if you asked.'
-	'After some time it really starts to sting, you don''t know how long she has spanked you, long enough she seems to be getting tired.'
-	'Finally she pushes you off her lap into the floor, as she stands up, she points to the door. "Now go slave."'
-	'You stand up and get dressed again. "Yes mistress." Then you walk to the door and leave.'
+	'You grit your teeth against the pain. "I''m sorry, mistress!" You don''t even know what you did to upset her and you don''t dare ask.'
+	'It''s really starting to sting when she finally pushes you off her lap onto the floor. She then stands up and points sternly at the door. "Now go slave."'
+	'"Yes, mistress." You stand up and get dressed before walking over to the door and leaving.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 30, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'inhibition'
 	gs 'pain', 2, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -275,33 +274,33 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_room_11':
 	*clr & cla
 	kendra_dom += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/femdom/femdom12.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you enter you notice another African girl sitting on the couch as well. You assume another student and a friend of Kendra''s. Kendra goes over and sits down on the coffee table. "Come over here slave." You walk over and stand next to her. "Now strip!"'
-	'You glance at the other girl and then you strip, as you reply. "Yes mistress."'
+	'As you enter, you notice another African girl sitting on the couch as well. You assume she''s another student or just a friend of Kendra''s. Kendra walks over and sits on the table. "Come here, slave." You walk over and stand next to her. "Now strip!"'
+	'You glance at the other girl as you strip. "Yes, mistress."'
 	*nl
-	'The other girl laughs. "I can''t believe you get these white bitches to do this shit.'
-	'Once you are naked she pulls you over her laps and starts spanking your bare ass with a paddle. "I just train them to accept their natural place, deep down they all know where their place is and they crave us to put them their." Then she turns her face to you. "Don''t you slave."'
+	'The other girl laughs. "I can''t believe you get these white bitches to do this shit!"'
+	'Once you''re naked, she pulls you over her lap and starts spanking your bare ass with a paddle. "I just train them to accept their natural place. Deep down, they all know where they belong and they crave for us to put them there." She turns her face to you. "Don''t you, slave?"'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'inhibition', 'group'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Yes mistress':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/femdom/femdom7.jpg"></center>'
 		'You nod. "Yes mistress, I do." They both laugh at your response.'
-		'She paddles you even harder now. You grit your teeth against the pain. "You should have seen what I did to that boy from biology."'
-		'"Which one?" Her friend asks.'
-		'"You know the one that was so confident, always hitting on us. Expecting us to to just fall to our knees and suck his dick the first day in class." She replies to her friend.'
+		'She paddles you even harder and you grit your teeth against the pain. "You should have seen what I did to that boy from biology."'
+		'"Which one?" her friend asks.'
+		'"You know the one that was so confident and always hitting on us, expecting us to just fall to our knees and suck his dick the first day in class?" she replies.'
 		*nl
-		'"Oh ... him... yeah I remember him. What did you do to him?" Her friend asks.'
-		'Kendra laughs as she keeps paddling you, they almost seem to have forgotten you was here. "I fucked him with a strapon until I had an orgasm."'
-		'"OH MY GOD! You did not." Her friend says in shock.'
+		'"Oh... Him. Yeah, I remember him. What did you do to him?"'
+		'Kendra laughs as she keeps paddling you. They almost seem to have forgotten that you''re here. "I fucked him with a strapon until I had an orgasm."'
+		'"OH MY GOD! You did not!" her friend says in shock.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'inhibition', 'group'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Listen':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/femdom/femdom12.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Oh I did, here look." She stops paddling you a moment to pull out her phone to show here friend. You can''t see what is on it but you can hear some grunting noise coming from the phone. They both start laughing.'
-			'"I can''t believe you got him to do that, next time you do that, call me. I want to fuck him." Soon they are talking about things they would like to do to this mysterious guy, while Kendra paddles you. After some time it really starts to sting, you don''t know how long she has spanked you, long enough she seems to be getting tired.'
-			'Finally she pushes you off her lap into the floor, as she stands up, she points to the door. "Now go slave."'
-			'You stand up and get dressed again. "Yes mistress." As you walk to the door, the two of them are still talking about the guy.'
+			'"Oh yes I did. Look." She stops paddling you to pull out her phone. You can''t see what''s on it, but you can hear some grunting as they both start laughing.'
+			'"I can''t believe you got him to do that. Call me next time you do that. I want to fuck him as well." They soon start talking about things they would like to do to this mysterious guy while Kendra continues paddling you. After some time, it really starts to sting and she seems to be getting tired.'
+			'She pushes you off her lap onto the floor and points sternly at the door. "Now go slave."'
+			'"Yes, mistress." You quickly stand up and get dressed. As you walk to the door, the two of them continue talking about the guy.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'inhibition', 'group'
 			gs 'pain', 3, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -316,48 +315,48 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_couch':
 	*clr & cla
 	kendra_dom += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/couch/lezdom1.jpg"></center>'
-	'She goes over and sits down on the couch. "Come over here slave." You walk over and stand next to her. "Now sit!"'
-	'She gets up on her knees on the couch sitting on the heels of her feet and turns to face you, with one look you know she wants you to do the same, so you do. As you do she starts to kiss you softly, you return the kisses. She takes your hands and pulls them over to her breasts so you start playing with them as the two of you kiss. With out warning she suddenly pulls away breaking the kiss. "Get on all fours."'
+	'She walks over and sits on the couch. "Come here, slave." You walk over and stand next to her. "Now sit!"'
+	'She sits up on the couch and turns to face you. You know she wants you to do the same, so you do. As you do, she starts to kiss you softly and you return the kiss. She then takes your hands and pulls them over to her breasts, so you start playing with them as the two of you kiss.' 
+	'Without warning, she then suddenly pulls away and breaks the kiss. "Get on all fours."'
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
-	act 'On all fours':
+	act 'Get on all fours':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/couch/lezdom2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You so as you are told and get in your hands and knees, she kneels down next to you and slaps your ass hard and starts spanking you. Each open handed smack causes your butt cheeks to sting.'
+		'You do as you''re told and get on your hands and knees as she kneels down next to you and starts spanking you. Each open handed smack causes your ass cheeks to sting.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 		gs 'pain', 1, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Get spanked more':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/couch/lezdom3.jpg"></center>'
-			'After several minutes of that she stops and takes off her clothes and then pulls your clothes aside enough to bare your ass, before going back to spanking your bare ass cheeks.'
+			'After several minutes of this, she stops and takes off her clothes before pulling your clothes aside to expose your ass and going back to spanking your now bare ass cheeks.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 			gs 'pain', 1, 'asscheeks', 'spank'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Eat pussy':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/couch/lezdom4.jpg"></center>'
-				'Once your ass is cherry red she stops and leans back on the couch, spreading her legs wide, exposing her pussy to you. "Come over here and lick my pussy slave." She commands you, so you turn and crawl over to her and start licking her pussy.'
+				'Once your ass is red and stinging, she stops and leans back on the couch, spreading her legs wide and exposing her pussy to you. "Come here and lick my pussy, slave!" she commands, so you turn and crawl over to her.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Keep licking':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/couch/lezdom5.jpg"></center>'
-					'She grabs you by the back of the head and forces your face into her crotch. "Fuck me with your tongue." You do as she commands and stick your tongue into her hot wet twat, fucking it as best you can with your tongue as she grinds her crotch against your face. Minutes go by before she grabs you by the hair and pulls you face away from her crotch, then she turns over onto all fours. "Eat my ass."'
+					'She grabs you by the back of the head and forces your face into her crotch. "Fuck me with your tongue." You do as she commands and stick your tongue into her wet pussy, fucking it as best you can with your tongue as she grinds her crotch against your face. Minutes go by before she grabs you by the hair and pulls you away from her crotch. She then turns over onto all fours. "Eat my ass."'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Lick ass':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/couch/lezdom6.jpg"></center>'
-						'You put your face between her butt cheeks and start licking her asshole, she moans as you lick her butthole and grinds her butt back against you face as you keep licking. With out warning she stands up and drags you up on the couch onto your back.'
+						'You put your face between her ass cheeks and start licking her asshole. She moans as you lick her hole and grinds against your face as you keep licking. Without warning, she then stands up and drags you up on the couch.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'rimming_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Lay back':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/couch/lezdom7.jpg"></center>'
-							'Once you have laid back on the couch, she straddles your face and sits on it, you start licking her pussy and asshole, which ever hole is right above your mouth as she grind her crotch into your face. She starts moaning loudly, her thighs tighten against the sides or your face as you feel her muscles spasm. Her twat soaks your face in her juices as she cums hard, you keep licking her through her orgasm and for several minutes afterwards as she just lays on top of you.'
-							*nl
-							'Finally she gets up and starts to clean herself up. "You may go now." You know that is her way to tell you to leave, you gather up your clothes and get dressed before you leave her dorm room.'
+							'On your back on the couch, she straddles your face and you alternate between licking her pussy and her asshole as she grinds her crotch into your face. She starts moaning loudly and her thighs tighten against your head as you feel her muscles spasm. She soaks your face in her juices as she cums hard and you keep licking her through her orgasm.
+							For several minutes afterwards, she just sits on top of you before she finally gets up and starts to clean herself up. "You may go now." You quickly gather up your clothes and get dressed before you leave her room.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -375,50 +374,50 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_bed':
 	*clr & cla
 	kendra_dom += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/bed/massage1.jpg"></center>'
-	'She goes over and sits on the bed. "Come over here and give me a massage slave." You walk over and sit on the bed, behind her and start massaging her shoulders and upper back. Some time later once you have massaged her she says. "My shoulder still hurts, I think I pulled something, kiss it and make it better." You do as your are told and start kissing her shoulder, her soft moans cause you to slowly work you way over to kissing her neck as well.'
+	'She walks over and sits on the bed. "Come over here and give me a massage, slave." You walk over and sit on the bed behind her and start massaging her shoulders and upper back. Some time later, you''ve finished your massage. "My shoulder still hurts. I think I pulled something, kiss it and make it better." You do as you''re told and start kissing her shoulder, her soft moans causing you to slowly work your way over to kissing her neck as well.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'massage_give', 20, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Get kissed':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/bed/massage2.jpg"></center>'
-		'She turns her body as you was kissing up near her ear and faces you, she leans in and kissing you on the lips. You return her kiss, not noticing her filming the  two of you on her phone at first. She breaks the kiss and gets off the bed, when you start to follow she motions you to stop. She holds up her phone filming you. "Show my your tits slave."'
+		'She turns her body as you''re kissing her ear and faces you before leaning in and kissing you on the lips. You return her kiss, not noticing her filming the two of you on her phone at first. She then breaks the kiss and gets off the bed, but motions for you to stop when you start to follow. She holds up her phone. "Show my your tits, slave!"'
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Show your tits':
+		act 'Show her':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/bed/massage3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You expose your tits to her and she laughs as she files you with your breasts exposed for a bit. Then she places her phone down and pulls off her own shirt exposing her own breasts now, she climbs back on the bed as she says. "Come over here and suck my tits."'
+			'You expose your breasts to her and she laughs as she films you for a few minutes before she places her phone down and pulls off her own shirt, exposing her own breasts now before she climbs back on the bed. "Come here and suck my tits."'
 			gs 'arousal', 'foreplay_give', 3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Suck her tits':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/bed/massage4.jpg"></center>'
-				'You do as you are told and start sucking on one and then the other breast, you use your hands to massages her breasts as you suckle them. As you do that she pulls her shorts off and then her panties off tossing them aside, leaving her completely naked. She starts pulling your clothes off as well, you stop what you are doing long enough to help her get you mostly stripped naked as well. With that done she lays back on the bed and spreads her legs wide. "Get over here and eat my pussy."'
+				'You do as you''re told and start sucking on her breasts while using your hands to massage them. As you do, she pulls her shorts and panties off and tosses them aside before she starts pulling your clothes off as well. You stop what you''re doing long enough to help her before she lays back on the bed and spreads her legs wide. "Eat my pussy, slave."'
 				gs 'arousal', 'foreplay_give', 3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Eat pussy':
+				act 'Eat her pussy':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/bed/massage5.jpg"></center>'
-					'You lean forward while on your knees until your breasts are against the bed and your face is between her legs, you start licking her dark twat and twirling her clit around with your pink tongue, you reach up to squeeze her breasts with one of your hands as you lick her pussy.'
+					'You lean forward until your face is between her legs and start licking her pussy and twirling your tongue around her clit while reaching up to squeeze her breasts with one of your hands.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Keep licking':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/bed/massage6.jpg"></center>'
-						'You slip your tongue between her pussy''s lips, plunging it as deeply as you can inside of her, she moans louder as you do, you alternate between tongue fucking her and licking her clit, the whole time your hand massages and squeezes her breasts. "Oh fuck, I''m close, lay back." She says as she pushes you back.'
+						'You slip your tongue between her pussy''s lips, plunging it as deeply as you can inside her, causing her to moan louder as you alternate between tongue fucking her and licking her clit. "Oh fuck, I''m close. Get on your back."'
 						gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Lay back':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/bed/massage7.jpg"></center>'
-							'You do as you are told and lay back, you are barely on your back when she lifts one of your legs straight up and throws one of her legs over you. She straddles you until her clit is against yours and starts rubbing back and forth against you. You moan in pleasure as she does, she starts getting louder and louder.'
+							'You do as you''re told and she lifts one of your legs straight up and throws one of her legs over you. She straddles you until her clit is against yours and starts rubbing back and forth against you. You both moan in pleasure as she does.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'trib', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Finish':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/bed/massage8.jpg"></center>'
-								'She rubs against you more frantically until she finally cries out and her buddy shudders, you feels her wetness pour over your own pussy. She shutters for several moments before she gets off you, then pull you up into a kiss. Once she breaks the kiss she gets up and starts getting cleaned up. When she looks at you sitting on her bed still she says. "Don''t just sit there, get out, I''m done with you today." You quickly get cleaned up and dressed and hurry out of her dorm room, just as she is finishing getting dressed herself.'
+								'She rubs against you more frantically until she finally cries out and her body shudders. You feel her wetness pour over your own pussy as she shudders for several seconds before she climbs off you and pulls you into a kiss. Once she breaks the kiss, she gets up and starts getting cleaned up while staring at you. "Don''t just sit there. Get out! I''m done with you today!" You quickly get cleaned up and dressed before hurrying out of the room.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -439,44 +438,44 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_couch_strap':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/couch/strapon/couch_strap1.jpg"></center>'
-	'She goes over and sits down on the couch, you follow her over. After she sits she gives a look to the spot next to her on the couch so you sit as well. With that she starts texting on her phone while making a bit of small talk, mostly asking how classes was. Then she starts asking if you have been having sex lately and what you have been doing or if you have anyone you fancy. You talk like this for several minutes just like you are friends hanging out.'
+	'She walks over and sits on the couch, you follow her over. She motions to the spot next to her on the couch, so you obediently sit next to her as she starts texting on her phone while making small talk, mostly asking how your classes went before she starts asking if you''ve been having sex lately or if anyone has taken your fancy. You talk like this for several minutes as if you''re just two friends hanging out.'
 	act 'Keep talking':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/couch/strapon/couch_strap2.jpg"></center>'
-		'With no warning she leans over and kisses you and starts to fondle your breasts, as the two of you keep kissing she starts removing some of her clothes then some of yours. You quickly don''t need to be told and start doing the same, removing your own clothes and helping her remove her''s until you are both naked. Then she slides you off the couch until you are on the floor on your knees and she leans back on the couch spreading her legs.'
+		'With no warning, she suddenly leans over and kisses you while fondling your breasts. As the two of you keep kissing, she starts removing some of her clothes before removing some of yours. Once you''re both naked, she slides you off the couch onto your knees and leans back on the couch, spreading her legs.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Eat pussy':
+		act 'Eat her pussy':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/couch/strapon/couch_strap3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You lean forward placing your face between her legs and start licking her clit and then her slit. You work your tongue and lips all over her pussy, even plunging your tongue into her wet twat to tongue fuck her. Several minutes of this goes by until she pulls you away from her, she turns over on the couch and gets on all fours, then grabs you by the hair and pulls your face towards her ass.'
+			'You lean forward and start licking her clit, working your tongue all over her pussy and plunging it into her to tongue fuck her. Several minutes of this go by until she pulls you away from her and turns over onto all fours before grabbing you by the hair and pulling your face towards her ass.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act 'Eat ass':
+			act 'Eat her ass':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/couch/strapon/couch_strap4.jpg"></center>'
-				'With your face pulled between her cheeks you start licking her asshole, she holds you by the hair and pulls your face in tighter against her butt the more you lick, by the sounds of her moans she is really enjoying it. A couple of minutes later she lets go of you and stands up. "Stay there on the floor, play with your self. I will be right back." Then she moves off behind a changing screen in the room, you stay sitting on your feet while you start to rub your clit.'
+				'With your face between her cheeks, you start licking her asshole as she holds you by the hair and pulls your face in tighter against her. By the sounds of her moans, she''s really enjoying it. A few minutes later, she lets go of you and stands up. "Stay there and play with yourself. I''ll be right back." She disappears behind a changing screen in the room while you start to slowly rub your clit.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'rimming_give', 3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Masturbate':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/couch/strapon/couch_strap5.jpg"></center>'
-					'You sit there and masturbate for a couple of minutes until Kendra emerges from behind the screen wearing a strapon harness with a fairly large black dildo attached to it. The dildo looks nearly as long as your forearm, at least not a thick. She stops right next to you with the dildo right next to your face, pointed right at your mouth.'
+					'You masturbate for a few minutes until Kendra emerges from behind the screen wearing a strapon harness with a fairly large black dildo attached to it. The dildo looks nearly as long as your forearm, and almost as thick. She walks up to you with the dildo pointed right at your mouth.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'masturbate', 3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Suck strapon':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/couch/strapon/couch_strap6.jpg"></center>'
-						'You open your mouth and she sticks the large dildo in your mouth you can barely fit your mouth around the black shaft. She strokes the base of the dildo like it is a real cock. "That''s right slut, suck my big black cock." You do as you are told as you keep rubbing your clit.'
+						'You part your lips and she shoves the dildo into your mouth. She strokes the base of the dildo like it was a real cock. "That''s right slut, suck my big black cock." You do as you''re told as you keep rubbing your clit.'
 						*nl
 						if pcs_vag ! 0:
-							'"Thats it get it nice and wet. So when I fuck that little wet pussy of yours it slides in balls deep nice and easy." She thrusts her hips a bit fucking your mouth with the strapon, before she steps back popping it out of your mouth as she points to the couch. "Get on the couch, slut!" She commands. As you start to get on the couch, she grabs you by the hips from behind and gets you to get on the couch on your knees. Then she pushes your forward bending you over in front of her.'
+							'"That''s it, get it nice and wet. When I fuck that little wet pussy of yours, I want it to slide in balls deep nice and easy." She thrusts her hips and starts fucking your mouth with the strapon before she steps back, popping it out of your mouth as she points to the couch. "Get on the couch, slut!" As you get to your feet, she grabs you by the hips and places you on the couch on your knees before she pushes you forward, bending you over in front of her.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 							gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', -3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 							gs 'stat'
 							act 'Get on the couch': gt 'kendra', 'kendra_couch_strap_vag'
 						else
-							'"Don''t worry my little pet, I''m not going to take your virginity, I have something special in mind for that." She caresses the side of your face as she thrusts the dildo in your mouth, fucking it with the strapon. "Thats it get it nice and wet. So when I fuck that little asshole of yours it slides in balls deep nice and easy." She says before stepping back, popping the dildo out of your mouth as she points to the couch. "Get on the couch, slut!" She commands. As you start to get on the couch, she grabs you by the hips from behind and gets you to get on the couch on your knees. Then she pushes your forward bending you over in front of her.'
+							'"Don''t worry my little pet, I''m not going to take your virginity. I have something special in mind for that." She caresses the side of your face as she thrusts the dildo into your mouth. "That''s it, get it nice and wet so when I fuck that little asshole of yours, it slides in balls deep nice and easy," she says before stepping back, popping the dildo out of your mouth as she points to the couch. "Get on the couch, slut!" As you get to your feet, she grabs you by the hips and places you on the couch on your knees before she pushes you forward, bending you over in front of her.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 							gs 'arousal', 'clit_finger', -3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -494,13 +493,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_couch_strap_vag':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'boyStat', 'D7'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/couch/strapon/couch_strap7.jpg"></center>'
-	'She steps up behind you, placing one foot on the couch as she does. The inner thigh of her leg up on the couch brushing against the outside of your hip, as you feel her slide the tip of the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo against your wet slit. Getting the tip of the dildo and your twat wetter the more she does it, then with out a word she pushes it about half way into you, causing you to gasp and moan as it fills you up, as she starts fucking you with it. You can hear a vibrating sound, obviously her harness has a built in vibrator for her pleasure.'
+	'She steps up behind you, placing one foot on the couch as she does. Her inner thigh brushes against your hip as you feel her slide the tip of the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo against your wet slit before she pushes it into you, causing you to moan as she starts fucking you with it. You can hear the built in vibrator on her harness vibrating as she fucks you.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'rough'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Get pounded':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/couch/strapon/couch_strap8.jpg"></center>'
-		'She steadily works herself deeper until she is fucking your balls deep with the dildo, she thrusts hard and fast at first. Then she starts pulling the long dildo nearly completely out of you before slamming it back in as deep as it will go, her hips slapping against your butt cheeks with each thrust. Over and over she does this, until finally she does pull completely out of you, leaving your pussy feeling suddenly very empty.'
+		'She steadily works herself deeper until she''s fucking you balls deep with the dildo. She thrusts hard and fast at first before she starts pulling the dildo nearly completely out of you before slamming it back in as deep as it will go, her hips loudly slapping against your ass with each thrust. She does this over and over until she eventually pulls out of you, leaving your pussy feeling very empty.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'rough'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Get butt fucked': gt 'kendra', 'kendra_couch_strap_anal'
@@ -512,22 +511,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_couch_strap_anal':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'boyStat', 'D7'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/couch/strapon/couch_strap9.jpg"></center>'
-	'Kendra starts rubbing the large wet head of the dildo against your asshole, you feel her squirt a little lube in the crack of your butt where it runs down to where she is rubbing the tip of the dildo against your asshole lubing both you and it up. She holds onto your hips with one hand while the other guides the dildo, with no warning she suddenly thrusts forward with her hips while using her one hand to jerk you backwards by your hips.'
-	*nl
-	'You yelp a little and try to pull away as the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo stretches your butthole, but she quickly grabs onto both of your hips with her hands not letting you pull away. "Stop trying to pull away from me or I will see just how many hours I can fuck your ass before I pass out." You stop resisting believing she would do it, she moans as she starts fucking your butt, the built in vibrator in her harness obviously making her really enjoy this.'
+	'You feel Kendra squirt some lube onto your ass before she starts rubbing the head of the dildo against your asshole. She then suddenly thrusts forward while using her hand to jerk you backwards.'
+	'You yelp and try to pull away as the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo stretches your ass, but she quickly grabs onto you and holds you tightly. "Stop trying to pull away or we''ll see just how long I can fuck your ass before I pass out." You stop resisting and she starts fucking your ass, the built in vibrator in her harness obviously making her really enjoy this.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'rough'
 	gs 'stat'
-	act 'Get ass wrecked':
+	act 'Rough anal':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/couch/strapon/couch_strap10.jpg"></center>'
-		'She drives the massive long dildo deep in your butt until her hips start slapping against your butt cheeks with each thrust. For several minutes this goes on, as she moans louder and louder before she almost falls on top of you with the dildo buried deep in your ass. She feel her body shaking as she has a orgasm. She takes a shuddering breath. "My god that was amazing, I hope for you sake you enjoyed that half as much as I did." And just to assert her dominance even more she pulls back and start thrusting the dildo inside your butt again for a little bit again before she finally pulls it out, leaving your ass gapping and feeling empty and full at the same time.'
+		'She drives the dildo deep in your asshole until her hips start slapping against your ass with each thrust. This goes on for several minutes, Kendra moaning louder and louder until she almost falls on top of you. You feel her body shaking as she has an orgasm. "My god, that was amazing. I hope for your sake that you enjoyed that half as much as I did." Asserting her dominance even more, she pulls back and start thrusting the dildo inside your ass again before she finally pulls it out, leaving your ass gaping and feeling empty.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'rough'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Aftermath':
 			*clr & cla
 			minut += 5
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/couch/strapon/couch_strap11.jpg"></center>'
-			'Once she has pulled the dildo out of your butt she grabs you by the hair and pulls you off the couch onto the floor again. There you sits on your knees and feet as before. She squats down next to you as she strokes her dildo. "I love fucking that little ass of yours, one of these days I am going to fuck raw, fuck it until I am too exhausted to fuck you anymore." Then she kisses you for a few moments. Once she breaks the kiss she stands up and starts taking off the harness, with it off she hands it to you. "Clean it up before you leave." You take the harness and dildo and clean them up, as you do she gets dressed and sits back down on the couch to watch some tv, with the harness clean you get dressed again yourself, as you finish she gives you a look and flicks her eyes towards the door. You understand what she wants, so once you are ready you walk towards the door and leave.'
+			'Once she''s pulled the dildo out of you, she grabs you by the hair and pulls you off the couch onto the floor. You sit on your knees as she squats down next to you and strokes her dildo. "I love fucking that little ass of yours. One of these days, I''m going to fuck it raw until I''m too exhausted to continue." She then leans in and kisses you for a few seconds before breaking the kiss. She stands up and removes the harness before handing it to you. "Clean this up before you leave."' 
+			'You take the harness and start cleaning the dildo as Kendra gets dressed and sits on the couch to watch TV. Once it''s clean, you get dressed and Kendra flicks her eyes towards the door. You quickly walk towards the door and leave.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 1, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -543,38 +542,39 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_bed_strap':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/bed/strapon/bed_strap1.jpg"></center>'
-	'She goes over and sits on the bed. "Come over here slave." You walk over and sit on the bed, she reaches up and caresses your cheek and your neck, soon she leans in and kisses you, the two of you start kissing and removing each others clothes. With her fully naked she leans back on the bed and spreads her legs, pulling your head between her legs.'
+	'She sits on her bed. "Come over here, slave." You walk over and sit on the bed as she reaches up and caresses your cheek and your neck before leaning in and kissing you as you start removing each other''s clothes. Once she''s undressed, she leans back on the bed and spreads her legs pulling your head between them.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'kiss', 3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
-	act 'Eat pussy':
+	act 'Eat her pussy':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/bed/strapon/bed_strap2.jpg"></center>'
-		'You start licking her pussy, making it even wetter than it already is. You suck on her clit as well, giving ever part of her twat attention. The more you do the more she moans and the wetter she gets.'
+		'You start licking her pussy and sucking on her clit, giving every part of her some attention. The longer you do this, the more she moans and the wetter she gets.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Keep licking':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/bed/strapon/bed_strap3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You keep teasing her pussy with your tongue and lips, she moans louder and louder until she finally tenses up. Closing her thighs against the side of your head, you are pretty sure she just had a orgasm, moments latter she relax''s and get up. She rolls off the bed and opens her nightstand to pull out a strapon harness with a massive black dildo attached to it, nearly the size and length of your forearm. Once she has the harness in place she walks over and rubs the tip against your lips.'
+			'You keep teasing her pussy with your tongue and she moans louder and louder until she finally tenses up. She tightly squeezes her thighs against the side of your head before she relaxes and sits up. She rolls off the bed and opens her nightstand to pull out a strapon harness with a massive black dildo attached to it, nearly the size and length of your forearm. Once she has the harness in place, she walks over and rubs the tip against your lips.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni_give', 3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act 'Suck strapon':
+			act 'Suck it':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/bed/strapon/bed_strap4.jpg"></center>'
-				'You open your mouth as wide as you can and can barely get your mouth around the massive dildo. "That''s it you dirty slut, suck my big black cock." Kendra says as you take the dildo as deep as you can in your mouth.'
+				'You open your mouth as wide as you can, but can barely get your mouth around the massive dildo. "That''s it, you dirty slut. Suck my big black cock!" she says as you take the dildo as deep as you can into your mouth.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Keep sucking':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/bed/strapon/bed_strap5.jpg"></center>'
 					if pcs_vag ! 0:
-						'"Thats it get it nice and wet. So when I fuck that little wet pussy of yours it slides in balls deep nice and easy." She thrusts her hips a bit fucking your mouth with the strapon, she reaches over your back and starts slapping your ass as she fucks your mouth. "Turn around, slut!" She commands. As you start to turn around, she grabs you by the hips from behind and gets you up on your knees, so you are on fours in front of her.'
+						'"That''s it, get it nice and wet so when I fuck that little pussy of yours, it slides in balls deep nice and easy." She thrusts her hips and starts fucking your mouth with the strap-on as she reaches over and starts slapping your ass. "Turn around, slut!" she commands. As you start to turn around, she grabs you by the hips and gets you up on your knees so you''re on all fours in front of her.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bdsm', -3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Get fucked': gt 'kendra', 'kendra_bed_strap_vag'
 					else
-						'"Don''t worry my little pet, I''m not going to take your virginity, I have something special in mind for that." She caresses the side of your face as she thrusts the dildo in your mouth, fucking it with the strapon. "Thats it get it nice and wet. So when I fuck that little asshole of yours it slides in balls deep nice and easy." She says before stepping back, popping the dildo out of your mouth as she points to the couch. "Turn around, slut!" She commands. As you start to turn around, she grabs you by the hips from behind and gets you up on your knees, so you are on fours in front of her.'
+						'"Don''t worry my little pet, I''m not going to take your virginity. I have something special in mind for that." She caresses the side of your face as she thrusts the dildo into your mouth. "That''s it, get it nice and wet so when I fuck that little asshole of yours, it slides in balls deep nice and easy," she says before stepping back, popping the dildo out of your mouth and pointing at the couch. "Turn around, slut!" she commands.' 
+						'As you start to turn around, she grabs you by the hips and gets you up on your knees so you''re on all fours in front of her.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bdsm', -3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -591,13 +591,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_bed_strap_vag':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'boyStat', 'D7'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/bed/strapon/bed_strap6.jpg"></center>'
-	'She steps up behind you, as you feel her slide the tip of the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo against your wet slit. Getting the tip of the dildo and your twat wetter the more she does it, then with out a word she pushes it about half way into you, causing you to gasp and moan as it fills you up, as she starts fucking you with it. You can hear a vibrating sound, obviously her harness has a built in vibrator for her pleasure.'
+	'She steps up behind you and you feel her slide the tip of the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo against your wet slit. She pushes it into you, causing you to moan as she starts fucking you with it. You can hear the built in vibrator on her harness vibrating as she fucks you.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'rough'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Get pounded':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/bed/strapon/bed_strap7.jpg"></center>'
-		'She steadily works herself deeper until she is fucking your balls deep with the dildo, she thrusts hard and fast at first. Then she starts pulling the long dildo nearly completely out of you before slamming it back in as deep as it will go, her hips slapping against your butt cheeks with each thrust. Over and over she does this, until finally she does pull completely out of you, leaving your pussy feeling suddenly very empty.'
+		'She steadily works herself deeper until she''s fucking you balls deep with the dildo. She thrusts hard and fast at first before she starts pulling the dildo nearly completely out of you before slamming it back in as deep as it will go, her hips loudly slapping against your ass with each thrust. She does this over and over until she eventually pulls out of you, leaving your pussy feeling very empty.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'rough'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Get butt fucked': gt 'kendra', 'kendra_bed_strap_anal'
@@ -609,22 +609,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_bed_strap_anal':
 	*clr & cla
 	gs 'boyStat', 'D7'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/bed/strapon/bed_strap8.jpg"></center>'
-	'Kendra squirts a little lube in the crack of your butt where it runs down to where she is rubbing the tip of the dildo against your asshole lubing both you and it up. She holds onto your hips with one hand while the other guides the dildo, with no warning she suddenly thrusts forward with her hips while using her one hand to jerk you backwards by your hips.'
-	*nl
-	'You yelp a little and try to pull away as the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo stretches your butthole, but she quickly grabs onto both of your hips with her hands not letting you pull away. "Stop act like you don''t love this, you wouldn''t keep coming back if you wasn''t a complete buttslut." You stop resisting she has a point if you don''t enjoy it why do you keep coming back? She moans as she starts fucking your butt, the built in vibrator in her harness obviously making her really enjoy this.'
+	'You feel Kendra squirt some lube onto your ass before she starts rubbing the head of the dildo against your asshole. She then suddenly thrusts forward while using her hand to jerk you backwards.'
+	'You yelp and try to pull away as the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> dildo stretches your ass, but she quickly grabs onto you and holds you tightly. "Stop acting like you don''t love this! You wouldn''t keep coming back if you weren''t a complete buttslut." You stop resisting and she starts fucking your ass, the built in vibrator in her harness obviously making her really enjoy this.' 
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'rough'
 	gs 'stat'
-	act 'Get ass wrecked':
+	act 'Rough anal':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/bed/strapon/bed_strap9.jpg"></center>'
-		'She drives the massive long dildo deep in your butt until her hips start slapping against your butt cheeks with each thrust. For several minutes this goes on, as she moans louder and louder before she almost falls on top of you with the dildo buried deep in your ass. She feel her body shaking as she has a orgasm. She takes a shuddering breath. "My god that was amazing, I hope for you sake you enjoyed that half as much as I did." And just to assert her dominance even more she pulls back and start thrusting the dildo inside your butt again for a little bit again before she finally pulls it out, leaving your ass gapping and feeling empty and full at the same time.'
+		'She drives the dildo deep in your asshole until her hips start slapping against your ass with each thrust. This goes on for several minutes, Kendra moaning louder and louder until she almost falls on top of you. You feel her body shaking as she has an orgasm. "My god, that was amazing. I hope for your sake that you enjoyed that half as much as I did." Asserting her dominance even more, she pulls back and start thrusting the dildo inside your ass again before she finally pulls it out, leaving your ass gaping and feeling empty.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'rough'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Suck strapon':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/lezdom/bed/strapon/bed_strap10.jpg"></center>'
-			'Once she has pulled the dildo out of your butt she grabs you by the hair and pulls you around until you are sitting on the edge of the bed next to her. She squats in the floor next to the edge of the bed and detaches the dildo from the harness then shoves it in your mouth. "Thats right suck my dildo clean you disgusting whore." You suck on the the dildo for a couple of minutes before she pulls it out of your mouth and drops it on the bed, as she starts taking off the harness. "Clean it up before you leave." You take the harness and dildo and clean them up, as you do she gets dressed and sits on the couch to watch some tv, with the harness clean you get dressed again yourself, as you finish she gives you a look and flicks her eyes towards the door. You understand what she wants, so once you are ready you walk towards the door and leave.'
+			'She grabs you by the hair and pulls you around until you''re sitting on the edge of the bed next to her. She squats on the floor next to the edge of the bed and detaches the dildo from the harness before shoving it in your mouth. "That''s right, suck my dildo clean you disgusting whore!"'
+			'You take the harness and start cleaning the dildo as Kendra gets dressed and sits on the couch to watch TV. Once it''s clean, you get dressed and Kendra flicks her eyes towards the door. You quickly walk towards the door and leave.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -639,23 +639,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_gloryhole':
 	minut += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Then she smiles. "I know just the thing. Come on." Then she takes you by the hand and leads you out of her dorm room. You go down the hall and back into the elevator together, riding down to the first floor and out of the building. She leads you across the quad, texting on her phone as she leads you to a campus public toilet, she shoves you inside the restroom. "Down there, to the last stall." She says as she pushes you along to the last stall, as you open it you immediately notice the hole in the wall.'
+	'She smiles. "I know just the thing. Come on." She takes you by the hand, leads you out of her dorm room, and into the elevator. Once outside, she leads you across the quad, texting on her phone as she drags you into one of the campus toilets. She pushes you along to the last stall and you immediately notice the hole in the wall when you open the door.'
 	act 'Get choked':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory2.jpg"></center>'
-		'She follows you into the stall and then closes the door. Suddenly she grabs you from behind by the throat and starts choking you, you can still breath but just barely. She leans in and whispers in your ear as she keeps choking you. "What ever dick comes through that hole you are going to suck and keep sucking until who ever it is cums in your mouth and then you are going to swallow it down. You are going to keep doing this until I get bored, got it?" You are unable to speak so you just nod.'
+		'She follows you into the stall and closes the door before suddenly grabbing you by the throat and choking you. You can barely breathe as she leans in and whispers in your ear. "You''re going to suck whatever dick comes through that hole until whoever it is cums in your mouth and you''re going to swallow it. You''ll keep doing this until I get bored, got it?" You''re unable to speak, so you just nod.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bdsm', 2, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Accept your fate':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory3.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Good." She says as she lets go of you and then roughly turns you around till you are facing her. She smiles and reaches up and jerks your top down exposing your breasts. You instinctively cover up with your hands. "Put your hands down." She commands.'
+			'"Good," she says as she lets go of you before roughly turning you around. She smiles and reaches up before jerking your top down, exposing your breasts. You instinctively cover up with your hands. "Get your hands down!" she commands.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 2, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'humiliation'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Stop covering up':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory4.jpg"></center>'
-				'You drop your hands from your exposed tits, Kendra pulls out her phone and starts taking your picture. After a couple of minutes of taking pictures of you topless she grabs you by the hair. "Looks like the first one arrived." She turns you by the hair towards the wall and you see a black dick poking through it. She forces you down to your knees in front of it.'
+				'You drop your hands as Kendra pulls out her phone and starts taking your picture. After a few minutes of this, she grabs you by the hair. "Looks like the first one has arrived." She turns you towards the wall and you see a black dick poking through it. She forces you down on your knees in front of it.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'humiliation'
 				gs 'stat'
 				if kendra_dom >= 17 and pcs_vag ! 0:
@@ -676,37 +676,36 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_gloryhole_suck1':
 	kendra_dom += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory5.jpg"></center>'
-	'You open your mouth and start sucking the strangers dick. You can hear soft moans from the other side as you suck the dick, you feel Kendra''s hands on the sides of your head as you are bopping back and forth on the cock, pushing you to take the dick deeper.'
+	'You open your mouth and start sucking the stranger''s dick. You can hear soft moans from the other side and feel Kendra''s hands on the sides of your head pushing you to take the dick deeper.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
-	act 'Deep throat':
+	act 'Deepthroat':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory6.jpg"></center>'
-		'You take it a bit deeper, Kendra forces your head all the way forward until you feel your lips touch his balls, causing you to gag as the dick slides down your throat. You understand so start doing it on your own so she doesn''t force you to do it.'
+		'Kendra forces your head forward and you take it deeper until you feel your lips touching his balls, causing you to gag as the dick slides down your throat. Understanding what she wants, you start deepthroating the dick.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Deep throat on your own':
+		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory7.jpg"></center>'
-			'Once you start deep throating enough on your own she removes her hands from your head and is silent, you glance over as you keep sucking the cock taking it as deep as you can and notice she has her phone out filming you.'
+			'She removes her hands from your head and silently watches you. You glance over as you take it as deep as you can and notice that she''s filming you on her phone.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory8.jpg"></center>'
-				'You try to ignore her filming you but you can''t help but blush, still you focus on sucking the guy off as best you can. You can hear him starting to moan louder and louder as you keep up the pace.'
+				'You try to ignore her, but you can''t help but blush as you continue sucking the guy off as best you can. You hear him starting to moan louder as you keep up the pace.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Suck till he cums':
+				act 'Suck until he cums':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory_mouth.jpg"></center>'
 					if rand(1,4) = 1:
 						minut += 7
-						'You pick up the pace as you suck him off and your efforts are awarded with the sounds of him moaning even louder a few moments later you feel him cum in your mouth, his salty loud filling it. You stroke his dick, milking ever last drop out of it. "Don''t swallow it, not yet. Now show me." Kendra tells you, so you turn and open your mouth showing it full of cum to her. "Good girl, now swallow it down." You do as you are told and swallow it, you glance over and see the hole is now empty.'
-						*nl
-						'You wipe the bit of cum dribble off your chin, as you do Kendra raps on the wall. You wait for several minutes and nothing happens. She sighs a bit. "Well looks like everyone else is busy, maybe next time we can find you more dicks to suck." Then she gets up and walks out, leaving you in the stall alone. You get off your knees and fix your top, you walk out of the stall and check yourself in the mirror before walking out of the restroom.'
+						'You pick up the pace and your efforts are rewarded with the sound of him moaning as you feel him cum in your mouth. You stroke his dick, milking every last drop out of it. "Don''t swallow it yet. Show me!" Kendra demands, so you turn and show her your mouth full of cum. "Good girl. Now swallow it." You do as you''re told and swallow before glancing over and noticing the hole is now empty.'
+						'You wipe the cum dribbling off your chin as Kendra raps on the wall. You wait for several minutes, but nothing happens and she sighs. "Well, looks like everyone else is busy. Maybe we can find you more dicks to suck next time?" She stands up and walks out, leaving you in the stall alone. You get off your knees and fix your top before walking out of the stall and checking yourself in the mirror before walking out of the restroom.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 0
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -715,9 +714,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_gloryhole_suck1':
 						act 'Leave': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 					else
 						minut += 2
-						'You pick up the pace as you suck him off and your efforts are awarded with the sounds of him moaning even louder a few moments later you feel him cum in your mouth, his salty loud filling it. You stroke his dick, milking ever last drop out of it. "Don''t swallow it, not yet. Now show me." Kendra tells you, so you turn and open your mouth showing it full of cum to her. "Good girl, now swallow it down." You do as you are told and swallow it, you glance over and see the hole is now empty.'
-						*nl
-						'You wipe the bit of cum dribble off your chin, as you do Kendra raps on the wall. You wait for several minutes and nothing happens. Then just as it looks like she is about to give up another black dick pops through the hole and Kendra smiles. "Well get to work slut." She says to you.'
+						'You pick up the pace and your efforts are rewarded with the sound of him moaning as you feel him cum in your mouth. You stroke his dick, milking every last drop out of it. "Don''t swallow it yet. Show me!" Kendra demands, so you turn and show her your mouth full of cum. "Good girl. Now swallow it." You do as you''re told and swallow before glancing over and noticing the hole is now empty.'
+						'You wipe the cum dribbling off your chin as Kendra raps on the wall. You wait for several minutes, but nothing happens. Just as it looks like she''s about to give up, another black dick pops through the hole and Kendra smiles. "Well? Get to work, slut!" she demands.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 0
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -735,25 +733,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_gloryhole_suck1a':
 	gs 'boyStat', $npclastgenerated
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory7.jpg"></center>'
-	'You open your mouth and start sucking the next strangers dick. You can hear soft moans from the other side as you suck the dick, you glance over as you keep sucking the cock taking it as deep as you can and notice she still has her phone out filming you.'
+	'You open your mouth and start sucking the next stranger''s dick. You can hear soft moans from the other side and glance over to see that she still has her phone out filming you.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory8.jpg"></center>'
-		'You ignore her filming you at this point you are getting use to it and instead you focus on sucking the guy off as best you can. You can hear him starting to moan louder and louder as you keep up the pace.'
+		'You ignore her and instead focus on sucking the guy off as best as you can. You can hear him starting to moan louder as you keep up the pace.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
-		act 'Suck till he cums':
+		act 'Suck until he cums':
 			*clr & cla
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory_mouth.jpg"></center>'
 			if rand(1,4) = 1:
 				minut += 7
-				'You pick up the pace as you suck him off and your efforts are awarded with the sounds of him moaning even louder a few moments later you feel him cum in your mouth, his salty loud filling it. You stroke his dick, milking ever last drop out of it. "Don''t swallow it, not yet. Now show me." Kendra tells you, so you turn and open your mouthing showing it full of cum to her. "Good girl, now swallow it down." You do as you are told and swallow it, you glance over and see the hole is now empty.'
-				*nl
-				'You wipe the bit of cum dribble off your chin, as you do Kendra raps on the wall. You wait for several minutes and nothing happens. She sighs a bit. "Well looks like everyone else is busy, maybe next time we can find you more dicks to suck." Then she gets up and walks out, leaving you in the stall alone. You get off your knees and fix your top, you walk out of the stall and check yourself in the mirror before walking out of the restroom.'
+				'You pick up the pace as you suck him off and your efforts are rewarded with the sound of him moaning as you feel him cum in your mouth. You stroke his dick, milking every last drop out of it. "Don''t swallow it yet. Show me!" Kendra demands, so you turn and show her your mouth full of cum. "Good girl. Now swallow it." You do as you''re told and swallow before glancing over and noticing the hole is now empty.'
+				'You wipe the cum dribbling off your chin as Kendra raps on the wall. You wait for several minutes, but nothing happens and she sighs. "Well, looks like everyone else is busy. Maybe we can find you more dicks to suck next time?" She stands up and walks out, leaving you in the stall alone. You get off your knees and fix your top before walking out of the stall and checking yourself in the mirror before walking out of the restroom.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 0
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -762,9 +759,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_gloryhole_suck1a':
 				act 'Leave': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 			else
 				minut += 2
-				'You pick up the pace as you suck him off and your efforts are awarded with the sounds of him moaning even louder a few moments later you feel him cum in your mouth, his salty loud filling it. You stroke his dick, milking ever last drop out of it. "Don''t swallow it, not yet. Now show me." Kendra tells you, so you turn and open your mouthing showing it full of cum to her. "Good girl, now swallow it down." You do as you are told and swallow it, you glance over and see the hole is now empty.'
-				*nl
-				'You wipe the bit of cum dribble off your chin, as you do Kendra raps on the wall. Almost at once another black dick pops through the hole and Kendra smiles. "It''s your lucky day, seems they are lining up for you." She says to you.'
+				'You pick up the pace and your efforts are rewarded with the sound of him moaning as you feel him cum in your mouth. You stroke his dick, milking every last drop out of it. "Don''t swallow it yet. Show me!" Kendra demands, so you turn and show her your mouth full of cum. "Good girl. Now swallow it." You do as you''re told and swallow before glancing over and noticing the hole is now empty.'
+				'You wipe the cum dribbling off your chin as Kendra raps on the wall. Almost at once, another black dick pops through the hole and Kendra smiles. "It''s your lucky day, slut! It seems like they''re lining up for you."'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 				gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 0
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -781,36 +777,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_gloryhole_suck2':
 	*clr & cla
 	kendra_dom += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory5.jpg"></center>'
-	'You know the drill at this point and go down on your knees mostly on your own and start sucking the strangers dick right away. You can hear soft moans from the other side as you suck the dick, you feel Kendra''s hands on the sides of your head as you are bopping back and forth on the cock, pushing you to take the dick deeper.'
+	'You know the drill at this point and get down on your knees to start sucking the stranger''s dick right away. You can hear soft moans from the other side and feel Kendra''s hands on the sides of your head pushing you to take the dick deeper.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
-	act 'Deep throat':
+	act 'Deepthroat':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory6.jpg"></center>'
-		'You take it until you feel your lips touch his balls, causing you to gag as the dick slides down your throat. Her hands arn''t needed but she keeps them in place apparently making sure you don''t stop deep throating it.'
+		'Kendra forces your head forward and you take it deeper until you feel your lips touching his balls, causing you to gag as the dick slides down your throat. Understanding what she wants, you start deepthroating the dick.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Suck him':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory7.jpg"></center>'
-			'You deep throat the dick as you hear her say. "We''re going to make you into a porn star yet." You glance over as you keep sucking the cock taking it as deep as you can and notice is filming you again, you ignore it as well.'
+			'You deepthroat the dick as you hear her say "We''re going to make you into a porn star yet." You glance over and notice she''s filming you again. You do your best to ignore it as you continue to suck the dick.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory8.jpg"></center>'
-				'You focus on sucking the guy off as best you can. You can hear him starting to moan louder and louder as you keep up the pace. You don''t even pay any attention to nor really even notice Kendra filming you, on your knees sucking some strangers dick in a public restroom.'
+				'You focus on sucking the guy off as best you can as you hear him starting to moan louder. You don''t pay any attention to Kendra continuing to film you.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 				gs 'stat'
-				act 'Suck till he cums':
+				act 'Suck until he cums':
 					*clr & cla
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory_mouth.jpg"></center>'
 					if rand(1,4) = 1:
 						minut += 7
-						'You pick up the pace as you suck him off and your efforts are awarded with the sounds of him moaning even louder a few moments later you feel him cum in your mouth, his salty loud filling it. You stroke his dick, milking ever last drop out of it. Before she can even tell you, you turn towards her and open and open your mouth showing it full of cum to her. "Good girl, now swallow it down." You do as you are told and swallow it, you glance over and see the hole is now empty.'
-						*nl
-						'You wipe the bit of cum dribble off your chin, as you do Kendra raps on the wall. You wait for several minutes and nothing happens. She sighs a bit. "Well looks like everyone else is busy, maybe next time we can find you more dicks to suck." Then she gets up and walks out, leaving you in the stall alone. You get off your knees and fix your top, you walk out of the stall and check yourself in the mirror before walking out of the restroom.'
+						'You pick up the pace as you suck him off and your efforts are rewarded with the sound of him moaning as you feel him cum in your mouth. You stroke his dick, milking every last drop out of it. "Don''t swallow it yet. Show me!" Kendra demands, so you turn and show her your mouth full of cum. "Good girl. Now swallow it." You do as you''re told and swallow before glancing over and noticing the hole is now empty.'
+						'You wipe the cum dribbling off your chin as Kendra raps on the wall. You wait for several minutes, but nothing happens and she sighs. "Well, looks like everyone else is busy. Maybe we can find you more dicks to suck next time?" She stands up and walks out, leaving you in the stall alone. You get off your knees and fix your top before walking out of the stall and checking yourself in the mirror before walking out of the restroom.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 0
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -819,9 +814,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_gloryhole_suck2':
 						act 'Leave': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 					else
 						minut += 2
-						'You pick up the pace as you suck him off and your efforts are awarded with the sounds of him moaning even louder a few moments later you feel him cum in your mouth, his salty loud filling it. You stroke his dick, milking ever last drop out of it. Before she can even tell you, you turn towards her and open and open your mouth showing it full of cum to her. "Good girl, now swallow it down." You do as you are told and swallow it, you glance over and see the hole is now empty.'
-						*nl
-						'You wipe the bit of cum dribble off your chin, as you do Kendra raps on the wall. Almost at once another black dick pops through the hole and Kendra smiles. "Well get to work slut." She says to you.'
+						'You pick up the pace and your efforts are rewarded with the sound of him moaning as you feel him cum in your mouth. You stroke his dick, milking every last drop out of it. "Don''t swallow it yet. Show me!" Kendra demands, so you turn and show her your mouth full of cum. "Good girl. Now swallow it." You do as you''re told and swallow before glancing over and noticing the hole is now empty.'
+						'You wipe the cum dribbling off your chin as Kendra raps on the wall. Almost at once, another black dick pops through the hole and Kendra smiles. "It''s your lucky day, slut! It seems like they''re lining up for you."'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 0
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -843,26 +837,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_gloryhole_suck2a':
 			gt 'kendra', 'kendra_gloryhole_fuck'
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory9.jpg"></center>'
-			'You start to wrap your lips around the next cock when you feel Kendra grab you by the hair and pull you up, into a standing position. Confused you stand up, plus it hurts when she pulls your hair. As you stand the starts stripping off your clothes, soon you are mostly naked.'
+			'You start wrapping your lips around the next cock when you suddenly feel Kendra grab your hair and pull you up. As you stand, she starts stripping off your clothes until you''re mostly naked.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Wait':
 				*clr & cla
 				temp_glory_fuck = 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory10.jpg"></center>'
-				'Kendra turns you around until you are facing you. "Fuck that cock." She tells you. You are surprised for a moment but she grabs you and bends you over and pushes you back until you feel the dick poking against your butt. You reach back and grab the dick and help line it up as you push back, you feel the cock slide inside of you, causing you to moan softly as it does.'
+				'She then forcefully turns you around. "Fuck that cock." You''re surprised by her demand, but she doesn''t wait for an answer as she bends you over and pushes you back until you feel the dick pressing against your ass. You reach back and grab the dick before lining it up and pushing yourself back. The cock slowly slides inside you, causing you to moan softly as it does.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 3, 'sub'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Fuck the cock':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory11.jpg"></center>'
-					'You push back until your butt is against the wall, you start moving back and forth fucking the cock of the stranger on the other side of the wall, you don''t know if you feel shame at what you are doing or excited by the act. You can feel Kendra''s hands running along your body.'
+					'You push back until your ass is against the wall and start moving back and forth, fucking the cock. You don''t know if you feel shame or excitement at what you''re doing as you feel Kendra''s hands running along your body.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 3, 'sub'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Keep fucking':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory12.jpg"></center>'
-						'As you keep fucking the strangers dick you start moaning louder and louder yourself, at least part of you is really loving this. Kendra''s hands continue to run along your body but you barely notice as you focus on the strangers cock filling your twat as you take him.'
+						'You start moaning louder as you continue fucking the stranger''s dick. Kendra''s hands continue to run along your body, but you barely notice as you focus on the stranger''s cock filling you as you take him deeper.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 3, 'sub'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Fuck until he cums':
@@ -870,9 +864,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_gloryhole_suck2a':
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory13.jpg"></center>'
 							if rand(1,4) = 1:
 								minut += 7
-								'You pick up the pace as you fuck him and your efforts are awarded with the sounds of him moaning even louder a few moments later you feel him cum in your pussy, his loud filling you. You keep bouncing on his dick, milking ever last drop out of it of cum out of it with your pussy. Kendra gets down to take a look between your legs, you feel the dick getting soft and then pulling out of you, you can feel his cumming running out of you. "Good girl." Kendra says to you as you glance over, you see the hole is now empty.'
-								*nl
-								'Kendra raps on the wall. You wait for several minutes and nothing happens. She sighs a bit. "Well looks like everyone else is busy, maybe next time we can find you more dicks." Then she gets up and walks out, leaving you in the stall alone. You fix your clothes before walking out of the stall and check yourself in the mirror, once you are sure you are presentable you head back to the quad.'
+								'You pick up the pace as you fuck him and your efforts are rewarded with the sounds of him moaning even louder as you feel him cum in your pussy. You continue bouncing on his dick, milking every last drop out of it with your pussy. Kendra gets down to take a look as you feel the dick pulling out of you before his cum starts running out of you. "Good girl," Kendra says as you glance over and notice that the hole is now empty.'
+								'Kendra raps on the wall and you wait for several minutes, but nothing happens and she sighs. "Looks like everyone else is busy. Maybe we can find you more dicks next time?" She gets up and walks out, leaving you in the stall alone. You fix your clothes before walking out of the stall and checking yourself in the mirror before leaving the restroom.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 3, 'sub'
 								gs 'cum_call', 'vaginal', 0
 								gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -881,9 +874,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_gloryhole_suck2a':
 								act 'Leave': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 							else
 								minut += 2
-								'You pick up the pace as you fuck him and your efforts are awarded with the sounds of him moaning even louder a few moments later you feel him cum in your pussy, his loud filling you. You keep bouncing on his dick, milking ever last drop out of it of cum out of it with your pussy. Kendra gets down to take a look between your legs, you feel the dick getting soft and then pulling out of you, you can feel his cumming running out of you. "Good girl." Kendra says to you as you glance over, you see the hole is now empty.'
-								*nl
-								'Kendra raps on the wall. Almost at once you feel another hard dick poking against you and Kendra smiles. "It''s your lucky day, seems they are lining up for you." She says to you.'
+								'You pick up the pace as you fuck him and your efforts are rewarded with the sounds of him moaning even louder as you feel him cum in your pussy. You keep bouncing on his dick, milking every last drop out of it with your pussy. Kendra gets down to take a look as you feel the dick pulling out of you before his cum starts running out of you. "Good girl," Kendra says as you glance over and notice that the hole is now empty.'
+								'Kendra raps on the wall and you almost instantly feel another dick pushing against you as Kendra smiles. "It''s your lucky day, slut! It seems like they''re lining up for you."'
 								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 3, 'sub'
 								gs 'cum_call', 'vaginal', 0
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -897,26 +889,25 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_gloryhole_suck2a':
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory7.jpg"></center>'
 		if temp_glory_fuck >= 1:
-			'Kendra turns you around and pushes you back down to your knees in front of this cock. You open your mouth and start sucking the next strangers dick. You can hear soft moans from the other side as you suck the dick, you glance over as you keep sucking the cock taking it as deep as you can and notice she still has her phone out filming you.'
+			'Kendra turns you around and pushes you back down on your knees. You open your mouth and start sucking the next stranger''s dick. You can hear soft moans from the other side and glance over to see that she still has her phone out filming you.'
 		else
-			'You open your mouth and start sucking the next strangers dick. You can hear soft moans from the other side as you suck the dick, you glance over as you keep sucking the cock taking it as deep as you can and notice she still has her phone out filming you.'
+			'You open your mouth and start sucking the next stranger''s dick. You can hear soft moans from the other side and glance over to see that she still has her phone out filming you.'
 		end
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory8.jpg"></center>'
-			'You ignore her filming you at this point you are getting use to it and instead you focus on sucking the guy off as best you can. You can hear him starting to moan louder and louder as you keep up the pace.'
+			'You ignore her filming you and instead focus on sucking the guy off as best you can. You can hear him starting to moan louder and louder as you keep up the pace.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
-			act 'Suck till he cums':
+			act 'Suck until he cums':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory_mouth.jpg"></center>'
 				if rand(1,4) = 1:
 					minut += 7
-					'You pick up the pace as you suck him off and your efforts are awarded with the sounds of him moaning even louder a few moments later you feel him cum in your mouth, his salty loud filling it. You stroke his dick, milking ever last drop out of it. "Don''t swallow it, not yet. Now show me." Kendra tells you, so you turn and open your mouthing showing it full of cum to her. "Good girl, now swallow it down." You do as you are told and swallow it, you glance over and see the hole is now empty.'
-					*nl
-					'You wipe the bit of cum dribble off your chin, as you do Kendra raps on the wall. You wait for several minutes and nothing happens. She sighs a bit. "Well looks like everyone else is busy, maybe next time we can find you more dicks to suck." Then she gets up and walks out, leaving you in the stall alone. You get off your knees and fix your top, you walk out of the stall and check yourself in the mirror before walking out of the restroom.'
+					'You pick up the pace as you suck him off and your efforts are awarded with the sounds of him moaning even louder as you feel him cum in your mouth. You stroke his dick, milking every last drop out of it. "Don''t swallow yet. Show me!" Kendra demands, so you turn and show her your mouth full of cum. "Good girl. Now swallow it." You do as you''re told and swallow it before glancing over and noticing that the hole is now empty.'
+					'You wipe the cum dribbling off your chin as Kendra raps on the wall. You wait for several minutes, but nothing happens and sighs. "Looks like everyone else is busy. Maybe we can find you more dicks to suck next time?" She gets up and walks out, leaving you in the stall alone. You get off your knees and fix your top, She stands up and walks out, leaving you in the stall alone. You get off your knees and fix your top before walking out of the stall and checking yourself in the mirror before walking out of the restroom.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 0
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -924,9 +915,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_gloryhole_suck2a':
 					act 'Leave': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 				else
 					minut += 2
-					'You pick up the pace as you suck him off and your efforts are awarded with the sounds of him moaning even louder a few moments later you feel him cum in your mouth, his salty loud filling it. You stroke his dick, milking ever last drop out of it. "Don''t swallow it, not yet. Now show me." Kendra tells you, so you turn and open your mouthing showing it full of cum to her. "Good girl, now swallow it down." You do as you are told and swallow it, you glance over and see the hole is now empty.'
-					*nl
-					'You wipe the bit of cum dribble off your chin, as you do Kendra raps on the wall. Almost at once another black dick pops through the hole and Kendra smiles. "It''s your lucky day, seems they are lining up for you." She says to you.'
+					'You pick up the pace as you suck him off and your efforts are rewarded with the sounds of him moaning even louder as you feel him cum in your mouth. You stroke his dick, milking every last drop out of it. "Don''t swallow yet. Show me!" Kendra demands, so you turn and show her your mouth full of cum. "Good girl. Now swallow it." You do as you''re told and swallow it before glancing over and noticing that the hole is now empty.'
+					'You wipe the cum dribbling off your chin as Kendra raps on the wall. Almost at once, another black dick pops through the hole and Kendra smiles. "It''s your lucky day, slut! It seems they''re lining up for you."'
 					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 3, 'sub'
 					gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', 0
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -944,19 +934,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_gloryhole_fuck':
 	*clr & cla
 	temp_glory_fuck = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory10.jpg"></center>'
-	'You don''t have to be told what to do. You just reach back and grab the dick and help line it up as you push back, you feel the cock slide inside of you, causing you to moan softly as it does.'
+	'You don''t have to be told what to do. You reach back and grab the dick to help line it up as you push back. You feel the cock slowly slide inside you, causing you to moan softly as it does.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 3, 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Fuck the cock':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory11.jpg"></center>'
-		'You push back until your butt is against the wall, you start moving back and forth fucking the cock of the stranger on the other side of the wall, you don''t know if you feel shame at what you are doing or excited by the act. You can feel Kendra''s hands running along your body.'
+		'You push back until your ass is against the wall and start moving back and forth, fucking the cock. You don''t know if you feel shame or excitement at what you''re doing as you feel Kendra''s hands running along your body.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 3, 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Keep fucking':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory12.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you keep fucking the strangers dick you start moaning louder and louder yourself, at least part of you is really loving this. Kendra''s hands continue to run along your body but you barely notice as you focus on the strangers cock filling your twat as you take him.'
+			'You start moaning louder as you continue fucking the stranger''s dick. Kendra''s hands continue to run along your body, but you barely notice as you focus on the stranger''s cock filling you as you take him deeper.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 3, 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Fuck until he cums':
@@ -964,9 +954,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_gloryhole_fuck':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/gloryhole/first_glory13.jpg"></center>'
 				if rand(1,4) = 1:
 					minut += 7
-					'You pick up the pace as you fuck him and your efforts are awarded with the sounds of him moaning even louder a few moments later you feel him cum in your pussy, his loud filling you. You keep bouncing on his dick, milking ever last drop out of it of cum out of it with your pussy. Kendra gets down to take a look between your legs, you feel the dick getting soft and then pulling out of you, you can feel his cumming running out of you. "Good girl." Kendra says to you as you glance over, you see the hole is now empty.'
-					*nl
-					'Kendra raps on the wall. You wait for several minutes and nothing happens. She sighs a bit. "Well looks like everyone else is busy, maybe next time we can find you more dicks." Then she gets up and walks out, leaving you in the stall alone. You fix your clothes before walking out of the stall and check yourself in the mirror, once you are sure you are presentable you head back to the quad.'
+					'You pick up the pace as you fuck him and your efforts are rewarded with the sounds of him moaning even louder as you feel him cum in your pussy. You continue bouncing on his dick, milking every last drop out of it with your pussy. Kendra gets down to take a look as you feel the dick pulling out of you before his cum starts running out of you. "Good girl," Kendra says as you glance over and notice that the hole is now empty.'
+					'Kendra raps on the wall and you wait for several minutes, but nothing happens and she sighs. "Looks like everyone else is busy. Maybe we can find you more dicks next time?" She gets up and walks out, leaving you in the stall alone. You fix your clothes before walking out of the stall and checking yourself in the mirror before leaving the restroom.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 3, 'sub'
 					gs 'cum_call', 'vaginal', 0
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -975,9 +964,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_gloryhole_fuck':
 					act 'Leave': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 				else
 					minut += 2
-					'You pick up the pace as you fuck him and your efforts are awarded with the sounds of him moaning even louder a few moments later you feel him cum in your pussy, his loud filling you. You keep bouncing on his dick, milking ever last drop out of it of cum out of it with your pussy. Kendra gets down to take a look between your legs, you feel the dick getting soft and then pulling out of you, you can feel his cumming running out of you. "Good girl." Kendra says to you as you glance over, you see the hole is now empty.'
-					*nl
-					'Kendra raps on the wall. Almost at once another black dick pops through the hole and Kendra smiles. "It''s your lucky day, seems they are lining up for you." She says to you.'
+					'You pick up the pace as you fuck him and your efforts are rewarded with the sounds of him moaning even louder as you feel him cum in your pussy. You keep bouncing on his dick, milking every last drop out of it with your pussy. Kendra gets down to take a look as you feel the dick pulling out of you before his cum starts running out of you. "Good girl," Kendra says as you glance over and notice that the hole is now empty.'
+					'Kendra raps on the wall and you almost instantly feel another dick pushing against you as Kendra smiles. "It''s your lucky day, slut! It seems like they''re lining up for you."'
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 3, 'sub'
 					gs 'cum_call', 'vaginal', 0
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -993,39 +981,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_male_slave':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/femdom/femdom_male1.jpg"></center>'
 	if kendra_male_slave = 1:
-		'You liked watching last time and you kinda got off watching a guy get dominated and fucked by a girl. You wonder how she manages it, as you walk across the room and take a seat on one of the beds, to watch. Kendra closes the door and then walks over to the boy, she smacks him in the face and then shoves him backwards, until the back of his head is resting on the seat of the couch. Then she straddles his face and sits on it. "Lick my pussy slut and you better get me off. If not, I''m going to fuck you until you can''t sit." She says with a evil laugh, she really loves dominating others.'
-		*nl
-		'She starts moaning and really starting to ride his face after a couple of minutes, apparently she is struggling a bit to keep from cumming. Just as it sounds like she is about to have a orgasm she suddenly gets off him and stands up. "Times up, you almost made it this time." You are certain she gave him less time than last time to get her off, he looks crestfallen that he failed again.'
+		'You liked watching last time and got off watching a guy being dominated by a girl. You wonder how she manages it as you walk across the room and take a seat on one of the beds to watch. Kendra closes the door and walks back over to the boy, where she smacks him in the face and shoves him backwards until the back of his head is resting on the seat of the couch. She then straddles his face and sits on it. "Lick my pussy, slut! You better get me off or I''m going to fuck you until you can''t sit," she says with an evil laugh.'
+		'She starts moaning and really starts riding his face, apparently struggling to stop herself from cumming. Just as it sounds like she''s about to have an orgasm, she suddenly gets off him and stands up. "Time''s up. You almost made it this time." You''re certain she gave him less time than last time to get her off; he looks crestfallen that he failed again.'
 	else
-		'You decided you want to see this, most guys you know would never let a girl dominate them like this. You wonder how she manages it, as you walk across the room and take a seat on one of the beds, to watch. Kendra closes the door and then walks over to the boy, she smacks him in the face and then shoves him backwards, until the back of his head is resting on the seat of the couch. Then she straddles his face and sits on it. "Lick my pussy bitch, you better get me off. If not, no lube for you." She says with a evil laugh, you can''t help but notice she loves being in control.'
-		*nl
-		'She starts moaning and really starting to ride his face after a couple of minutes, apparently he knows how to eat pussy well. Just as it sounds like she is about to have a orgasm she suddenly gets off him and stands up. "Times up, you almost made it this time." You notice he looks a little let down, apparently he really thought he was going to get her off this time.'
+		'You decide you want to see this, curious about how and why a guy would let a girl dominate them like this. You wonder how she manages it as you walk across the room and take a seat on one of the beds to watch. Kendra closes the door and walks back over to the boy, where she smacks him in the face and shoves him backwards until the back of his head is resting on the seat of the couch. She then straddles his face and sits on it. "Lick my pussy, bitch! You better get me off or there''ll be no lube for you!" she says with an evil laugh.'
+		'She starts moaning and really starts riding his face; he apparently knows how to eat pussy. Just as it sounds like she''s about to have an orgasm, she suddenly gets off him and stands up. "Time''s up. You almost made it this time." You notice he looks a little disappointed.'
 	end
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Keep watching':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/femdom/femdom_male2.jpg"></center>'
-		'She grabs him by the hair and pulls his face to her fake cock. "Suck it bitch!" He opens his mouth at once obeying her with out question. She sticks the fake black cock in his mouth, he closes his lips tightly around it and starts sucking it. He looks like he really knows what he is doing, you idly wonder how many times he has done this. "Mhm you are such a good little cock sucker." She says to him as she places a hand on his head and starts fucking his throat, causing him to gag.'
+		'She grabs him by the hair and pulls his face to her fake cock. "Suck it, bitch!" He immediately opens his mouth, obeying her without question. She shoves the fake black cock in his mouth and he closes his lips tightly around it and starts sucking. He looks like he really knows what he''s doing and you idly wonder how many times he''s done this. "Mhm... You''re such a good little cock sucker," she says to him as she places a hand on his head and starts fucking his throat, causing him to gag.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Keep watching':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/femdom/femdom_male3.jpg"></center>'
-			'She pulls his head away and then sits down on the couch, only to grab his head and pull it over. He already has his mouth open and she shoves the dildo back in his mouth. He starts bobbing his head up and down sucking her fake cock. After a few moments she grabs his head and forces him to take the full length of the dildo in his mouth, once more making him gag. "That''s right slut, gag on my dick. You better get it nice and wet, because that is the only lube your going to get." For several more minutes she keeps forcing him to deep throat her.'
+			'She pulls his head away and sits down on the couch, only to grab his head and pull him over. He already has his mouth open and she shoves the dildo back in before he starts bobbing his head up and down. After a few seconds, she grabs his head and forces him to take the full length of the dildo into his mouth, once more making him gag. "That''s right slut, gag on my dick. You better get it nice and wet, because that''s the only lube you''re getting!" She forces him to deepthroat her for the next few minutes.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Keep watching':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/femdom/femdom_male4.jpg"></center>'
 				if kendra_male_slave = 1:
-					'She pulls his head away again and stands up once more. She places one knee on the couch and the other foot on the floor. "Time to fuck your boipussy." She tells him, he seems to know what that means. He climbs on the couch, as he does she turns him away from her and bends over until his elbows are also on the couch, presenting his ass to her. She gets up behind him and spits on his ass, then says. "That''s more than you deserve." She scoots forward a bit closer behind him, she reaches down and does something to the harness and you can hear the vibrating sound coming from it and a soft moan from her.'
-					*nl
-					'Taking hold of the dildo with one hand to line it up, she sticks it between his butt cheeks. As she does that he tenses up just before, she thrusts her hips forward, causing him to cry out in pain. "Shut up bitch, I know you love it, you know you love it, even <<$pcs_nickname>> knows you love getting your ass fucked by a big hard cock." She says with a laugh, then she grabs onto both of his hips with her hands and plunges herself all the way into him. She hangs onto his hips as she roughly, rapid fire hammers his ass with her fake black cock. She starts moaning in pleasure, as he grunts and hisses in pain. The more he grunts and hisses in pain the harder she fucks him, you can see his limp dick violently bouncing around, with each savage thrust she takes.'
+					'She pulls his head away again before standing up. "Time to fuck your boy pussy," she tells him and he climbs on the couch. As he does, she turns him away from her and bends him over, presenting his ass to her. She gets up behind him and spits on his ass. "That''s more than you deserve." She scoots forward a bit closer behind him before reaching down and doing something to the harness. You can hear the vibrating sound coming from it and a soft moan from her.'
+					'Taking hold of the dildo with one hand to line it up, she sticks it between his ass cheeks. He tenses up before she thrusts her hips forward, causing him to cry out in pain. "Shut up, bitch! We both know you love it, even <<$pcs_nickname>> knows you love getting your ass fucked by a big hard cock!" she says with a laugh before she grabs onto his hips and plunges herself all the way into him. She hangs onto his hips as she roughly hammers his ass with her fake cock. She starts moaning in pleasure as he grunts and hisses in pain. You can see his limp dick violently bouncing around with each savage thrust she takes.'
 				else
-					'She pulls his head away again and stands up once more. She places one knee on the couch and the other foot on the floor. "Get on the couch slut!" She tells him, he climbs on the couch, as he does she turns him away from her. He places one knee on the couch and one foot on the floor just like she did, the she pushes him forward until his elbows are also on the couch, with his ass facing her. She spits on his ass, then says. "Never say I am not a kind mistress." She scoots forward a bit closer behind him, she reaches down and does something to the harness and you can hear the vibrating sound coming from it and a soft moan from her.'
-					*nl
-					'Taking hold of the dildo with one hand to line it up. He tenses up as she does and a moment later she thrusts her hips forward and he cries out in pain. "Shut up bitch, this is what you get for being so bad at eating pussy. Maybe this will motivate you better next time." She says with a angry snarl, then she grabs onto both of his hips with her hands and plunges herself all the way into him. She hangs onto his hips as she roughly, rapid fire hammers his ass with her fake black cock. She starts moaning in pleasure, as he grunts and hisses in pain. The more he grunts and hisses in pain the harder she fucks him, you can see his limp dick violently bouncing around, with each savage thrust she takes.'
+					'She pulls his head away again before standing up. "Get on the couch, slut!" she tells him and he climbs on the couch. As he does, she turns him away from her and pushes him forward until his ass is facing her. She spits on his ass. "Never say I''m not a kind mistress." She then scoots forward a bit closer behind him before reaching down and doing something to the harness and you can hear the vibrating sound coming from it and a soft moan from her.'
+					'He tenses up as she lines the dildo up with his asshole. A few seconds later, she thrusts her hips forward and he cries out in pain. "Shut up, bitch! This is what you get for being so bad at eating pussy. Maybe this will motivate you better next time!" she says with an angry snarl before she grabs onto his hips and plunges herself all the way into him. She hangs onto his hips as she roughly hammers his ass with her fake cock. She starts moaning in pleasure as he grunts and hisses in pain. You can see his limp dick violently bouncing around with each savage thrust she takes.'
 				end
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1033,29 +1017,27 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra_male_slave':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/university/girl/kendra/sex/femdom/femdom_male5.jpg"></center>'
 					if kendra_male_slave = 1:
-						'As she hammers away at his ass, he starts puffing out his breath similar to how you have seen women told to do while giving birth, he stops hissing in pain, while he still grunts you would say they are almost turning into moans of pleasure, it seems he really is starting to learn to enjoy it, it even looks like his dick is semi hard as he it bouncing back and forth with each one of her thrusts.'
-						*nl
-						'You can hear the sounds of slapping of flesh of her hips against her butt cheeks over her moans, and his groans and puffing breath. After a few more minutes of this she starts moaning even louder. Moments later she cries out obviously having a orgasm, knowing her better you think her orgasm is more from mental side, she just loves to dominate others, the built in vibrator you are sure helped, but you are just as sure she would cum either way.'
+						'As she hammers away at his ass, he stops hissing in pain while his grunts are almost turning into moans of pleasure; it even looks like his dick is semi hard as it bounces back and forth with each of her thrusts.'
+						'After a few more minutes of this, she starts moaning even louder before she cries out in orgasm. You''re sure the built in vibrator helped.'
 						*nl
-						'She slows down during her orgasm but doesn''t stop. Leaning forward she grabs his chin with one hand and forces his head up and to the side to look directly at you. "Look at her." He does as she commands'
-						'"Would you like her to fuck you too?" She asks him while looking at you as well'
-						'He blushes at her words but respond to her. "Yes mistress I would love that."'
+						'She slows down during her orgasm, but doesn''t stop. She leans forward and grabs his chin before forcing his head up and to the side to look directly at you. "Look at her." He does as she commands.'
+						'"Would you like her to fuck you too?" she asks him while looking at you.'
+						'He blushes at her words, but responds to her. "Yes mistress, I would love that."'
 						*nl
-						'She gives you a confident grin as she replies to him. "I know you would slut, maybe next time we will take turns fucking you, would you like that?"'
-						'He blushes more at her words but you also notice the precum leaking out of his dick. "Oh yes mistress please, I would love that."'
-						'She throws her head back and laughs. "But not today, I''m not finished with you." She says as she starts to savagely fuck him again. Then she glances over to you with a wicked grin. "You maybe go slave."'
-						'"Yes mistress." You nod and get up, walking over to the door, the sounds her her fucking him filling the room. As you open the door to leave.'
+						'She gives you a confident grin as she replies to him. "I know you would, slut. Maybe next time we''ll take turns fucking you. Would you like that?"'
+						'He blushes even more, but you also notice the precum leaking out of his dick. "Oh yes please, mistress! I would love that!"'
+						'She throws her head back and laughs. "Not today, bitch. I''m not finished with you," she says as she starts to savagely fuck him again while glancing at you with a wicked grin. "You may go, slave."'
+						'"Yes mistress." You nod and get up before walking over to the door, the sounds her her fucking him filling the room as you open the door to leave.'
 					else
 						kendra_male_slave = 1
-						'As she hammers away at his ass, you notice he starts leaning forward and down more and more. Gently trying to pull away from her relentless fucking she is giving him. She seems to have noticed as well, as she tightens her grips on his hips and yanks him back. "Don''t pull away from me slut." As she says that she pulls her own hips way back and then slams them forward causing him to cry out again.'
-						*nl
-						'Then she goes back to savagely fucking him again, you can hear the slapping of flesh of her hips against her butt cheeks over his groans and her moans. After a few more minutes of this she starts moaning even louder. Moments later she cries out obviously having a orgasm, you don''t know if it was a mental orgasm from dominating someone like that or the vibrator of the harness that made her cum or maybe both. Either way she fucks him through her orgasm and then slows down as she comes down off it. Finally she stops, leaning forward she grabs his chin with one hand and forces his head up and to the side to look directly at you. "Look at her." He does as she commands'
+						'As she hammers away at his ass, you notice he starts leaning forward, gently trying to pull away from the relentless fucking she''s giving him. She seems to have noticed as well as she tightens her grip on his hips and yanks him back. "Don''t pull away from me, slut!" She then pulls her own hips back and slams them forward, causing him to cry out again.'
+						'She then goes back to savagely fucking him again, the sound of flesh slapping against flesh drowning out their moan and groans. After a few more minutes of this, she starts moaning even louder as she cries out in orgasm. She fucks him through her orgasm before she stops and grabs his chin, forcing his head up and to the side to look directly at you. "Look at her." He does as she commands.'
 						*nl
-						'"How does it make you feel to know she just watched you get fucked like a slut by your ebony mistress and her big black cock? Think she is going to go around telling everyone what a sissy slut you are?"'
-						'He blushes at her words but respond to her. "I love getting fucked by your black cock mistress."'
-						'She gives you a confident grin. "I know you do slut, maybe next time I will let her fuck you too, would you like that?"'
-						'She throws her head back and laughs, before looking at you. "Soon I will break you just like I broke him. Now leave."'
-						'You nod and get up. "Yes mistress." As you open the door to leave, you hear them starting to grunt again, you look back and see she has started fucking him again. You know better than to stay, so you open the door and leave.'
+						'"How does it make you feel knowing that she just watched you get fucked like a slut by your ebony mistress and her big black cock? Think she''s going to go around telling everyone what a sissy slut you are?"'
+						'He blushes at her words, but responds to her. "I love getting fucked by your black cock, mistress."'
+						'She gives you a confident grin. "I know you do, slut. Maybe next time I''ll let her fuck you too. Would you like that?"'
+						'She throws her head back and laughs before looking at you. "I''ll break you just like I broke him. Now leave."'
+						'You nod and get up. "Yes mistress." As you open the door to leave, you hear them starting to grunt again and look back to see that she''s started fucking him again. You know better than to stay, so you open the door and leave.'
 					end
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'

locations/kompMFC.qsrc

@@ -842,7 +842,7 @@ else
 	'One of the visitors asks in broken English: "You have dildo or vibrator? I want to see you fuck you!"'
 	'You frown at the camera and apologize: "I''m sorry, but no. I don''t have anything like that..."'
 	'The visitor replies: ":( :( :(. OK, maybe you use hand or fingers then yes?"'
-	if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 		act 'Do as he asks':
 			cls
 			mfcclients = 0

locations/kotovSex.qsrc

@@ -14,7 +14,7 @@ If $ARGS[0] = '':
 		end
 		'Vitek begins to grope you, while he aggressively kisses you on your lips. He grunts: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, take off your clothes."'
 
-		if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+		if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 			if SchoolAtestat = 0:
 				act '"I''m still a virgin!"':
 					cla

locations/ludahome.qsrc

@@ -939,7 +939,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_luda':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/luda/talk.jpg"></center>'
 						'You are a little shocked you didn''t know they had an open relationship "You are in an open relationship? You mean you can sleep with other people?"'
 						'She laughs at your reaction "Yes and no it doesn''t bother me and it doesn''t bother him. We know we love each other and sex is just sex."'
-						if (fame['pav_slut'] >= 100 or LudaQW['KnowsSexActive'] >= 10) and LudaQW['olu_offer'] = 0 and stat['virgin'] = 0:
+						if (fame['pav_slut'] >= 100 or LudaQW['KnowsSexActive'] >= 10) and LudaQW['olu_offer'] = 0 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 							'You nod a bit "Yeah OK I guess I can see that."'
 							'Then she stops and seems to be considering something before saying "Actually I am kinda glad of it, the man has amazing stamina and just loves sex, he can''t get enough of it honestly. Don''t get me wrong I love sex but he wears me out, so I am glad he can burn up some of that sexual energy with other women."'
 							'You are a little surprised by that, but it does explain why she is OK with sharing him "I see Auntie." You say with a sly smile of understanding.'

locations/mey_home.qsrc

@@ -95,7 +95,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		end
 
 		! Vic calls in the shower
-		if mesec = 0 and stat['virgin'] = 0 and mey_vika['bath_qw'] = 1 and mey_vika['bath_qw_day'] ! daystart and rand(0,1) = 0 and locat['Vicky'] = 9:
+		if mesec = 0 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0 and mey_vika['bath_qw'] = 1 and mey_vika['bath_qw_day'] ! daystart and rand(0,1) = 0 and locat['Vicky'] = 9:
 			gs 'mey_vika_events', 'bath_qw1'
 			exit
 		end

locations/mey_tamara_events.qsrc

@@ -605,7 +605,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'party2':
 		'By now you''re really bored and feel left out.	Tamara is too absorbed by the conversation, not paying you any attention.'
 
 		if alko >= 3:
-			if mesec = 0 and stat['virgin'] = 0 and mey_tamara['drink_qw'] = 0:
+			if mesec = 0 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0 and mey_tamara['drink_qw'] = 0:
 				act 'Search for an adventure':
 					minut += rand(30,40)
 					gs 'stat'

locations/mey_vika_events.qsrc

@@ -155,7 +155,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'play_game_wish0':
 
 	pcs_horny += iif(pcs_horny < 60,40,20)
 	gs 'stat'
-	if stat['virgin'] = 0:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 		act 'Further':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/meynolds/sex/vika_game1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -788,7 +788,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'beach_event0':
 					'"I need to go and cool off." He says, and goes for a swim.'
 
 					! check celostnosti
-					if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+					if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 						! if virgin go to the beach
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += rand(60,90)
@@ -1286,7 +1286,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gym0':
 											'"Time to hit the shower! Won''t you join me, <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 
 
-											if mesec = 0 and stat['virgin'] = 0 and mey_vika['bath_qw'] = 1 and mey_vika['bath_qw_day'] ! daystart:
+											if mesec = 0 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0 and mey_vika['bath_qw'] = 1 and mey_vika['bath_qw_day'] ! daystart:
 												!act 'Join Vicky in the shower':
 												!	gt 'mey_vika_events', 'bath_common',1
 												!end
@@ -1391,7 +1391,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bath_qw0':
 	'Vicky grabs her nose...'
 	'"You smell really bad, <<$pcs_nickname>>! You need a bath, you smell like an animal at the zoo! Let me fix you a bath! Come on, the bathtub is already filling up." Vicky grabs your hand and starts pulling you along, not paying attention if you''re having any objections.'
 
-	if mesec = 0 and stat['virgin'] = 0:
+	if mesec = 0 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 		act 'Take a bath':
 			mey_vika['bath_qw'] = 1
 			mey_vika['bath_qw_day'] = daystart
@@ -1415,7 +1415,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bath_qw1':
 	'Standing in the hallway in her shorts and a short top Vicky confronts you, pointing at the stairs.'
 	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! No excuses you''re taking a bath now! Come with me!"'
 
-	if mesec = 0 and stat['virgin'] = 0:
+	if mesec = 0 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 		act 'Take a bath':
 			gt 'mey_vika_events', 'bath_common',1
 		end

locations/mirafather.qsrc

@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ else
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/sex/mira/mirafathersex.jpg"></center>'
 						*nl
 						pose = 0
-						if mesec = 0 and stat['virgin'] = 0:
+						if mesec = 0 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 							gs 'dinsex', 'boy_puts_condom'
 							gs 'dinsex','vaginal_sex',10
 							gs 'dinsex','sexcum'
@@ -224,7 +224,7 @@ else
 					end
 					*nl
 					if temp_mf < 5:
-						if mesec = 0 and stat['virgin'] = 0 and rand(0,2) < 2:
+						if mesec = 0 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0 and rand(0,2) < 2:
 							gs 'dinsex', 'boy_puts_condom'
 							gs 'dinsex','vaginal_sex',10
 							gs 'dinsex','sexcum'

locations/mitka.qsrc

@@ -102,7 +102,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_chat':
 	if npc_QW['A63'] = 0:
 		*nl
 		'Mitka scratches his balls and adds with a grin: "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, do you want to have some fun?"'
-		if stat['virgin'] = 1:
+		if stat['think_virgin'] = 1:
 			gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 				act 'I don''t know. My mother is obsessed with me staying a virgin. (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -190,9 +190,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sex_chat':
 		*nl
 		'Mitka scratches his balls and adds with a grin: "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, do you want to have some fun?"'
 		mitkarand = rand(1,10)
-		if (mitkarand = 1 or (mitkarand < 5 and stat['virgin'] = 0)) and mesec = 0:
+		if (mitkarand = 1 or (mitkarand < 5 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0)) and mesec = 0:
 			'"How about you let me fuck you today?" Mitka asks.'
-			if stat['virgin'] = 1: 
+			if stat['think_virgin'] = 1: 
 				gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 					act 'No, I''m still a virgin. (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':

locations/mitkabuh.qsrc

@@ -463,7 +463,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'solo_1to9':
 	'You are way too drunk and can barely stand. Mitka, noticing your condition, grabs you by the waist. "Well, well little <<$pcs_nickname>>, had a bit too much to drink? Come with me."'
 	
 	mitkarand = rand(1,10)
-	if (mitkarand = 1 or (mitkarand < 5 and stat['virgin'] = 0)) and mesec = 0:
+	if (mitkarand = 1 or (mitkarand < 5 and stat['think_virgin'] = 0)) and mesec = 0:
 		act 'You nod and slur your words... mumbling something as you fall into his waiting arms':
 			*clr & cla
 			if pcs_vag = 0:

locations/motherkafeboss.qsrc

@@ -456,7 +456,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'first_sex2':
 	cla & *clr
 	slavafuck += 1
-	if stat['virgin'] = 0:
+	if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/cafe/pre.jpg"></center>'
 		'Pushing you backwards onto the table, Borislav now lines up his cock to fuck your pussy.'
 		act'Cry':

locations/music_buskingevents.qsrc

@@ -58,7 +58,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'calculate_tips':
 		
 	ml_time_loc_mod = (ml_location_mod + ml_time_mod)	
 
-	ml_tipsmax = ((pcs_instrmusic + pcs_vokal + pcs_perform + ((hotcat-4)*35)) * ml_time_loc_mod)/5	
+	ml_tipsmax = ((pcs_instrmusic + pcs_vokal + pcs_perform + ((hotcat-4)*35)) * ml_time_loc_mod)/50	
 
 	ml_tipsearned = (max(rand(ml_time_loc_mod,ml_tipsmax),0)*ml_buskingtime) / 60
 

locations/olu.qsrc

@@ -64,7 +64,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'olusex':
 				end
 			end
 		end
-		if stat['virgin'] = 0:
+		if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 			act 'No':
 				*clr & cla
 				OluQW['vaginal'] += 1
@@ -273,7 +273,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'seduction_strip':
 					end
 				end
 			end
-			if stat['virgin'] = 0:
+			if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 				act 'Ok':
 					*clr & cla
 					OluQW['think_virgin'] = 0
@@ -415,7 +415,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'olusex1':
 							end
 						end
 					end
-					if stat['virgin'] = 0:
+					if stat['think_virgin'] = 0:
 						act 'Ok':
 							*clr & cla
 							OluQW['think_virgin'] = 0