Came to change one event, ended up finding other stuff.

locations/gschool_gossip.qsrc

@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gossip':
 		'Two boys are watching a video on a phone. You hear Albina''s loud screaming echoing from the screen.'
 		'"Just look at Albina going all out on Karine at the last game. Vicky had to stop her from punching the girl''s lights out!"'
 		'"I''m guessing she''s off the squad then?"'
-		'"Oh she''s done. You don''t cross Albina like that by skipping out on practice. Word is her parents found out about her skipping class to spend time with that asshole guy she was seeing and sent her to live with her super strict aunt in Moscow."'
+		'"Oh she''s done. You don''t cross Albina like that. Word is her parents found out about her skipping class to spend time with that asshole guy she was seeing and sent her to live with her super strict aunt in Moscow."'
 		'"Damn, poor girl. I heard Albina only put her on the squad because of her puppies. That said, there''s a few hot chicks I''d like to see replace her."'
 		'The boys start discussing who they''d like to see in "that hot cheerleading outfit."'
 	else
@@ -481,7 +481,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mixed':
 		if christinaQW['dompath'] >= 6:
 			'"Did you hear Christina was kicked off the cheerleading team?"'
 			'"Really? How come?"'
-			'"Between the rumors about Christina blowing the coach, and her face getting fucked up from her fight with <<$pcs_nickname>>, Albina didn''t want her anymore."'
+			'"Between the rumors about Christina blowing the coach, and her face getting fucked up from her fight with <<$pcs_nickname>>, Albina finally had an excuse to get rid of her. Things were tense between them, even before all of this."'
+			'I heard they had a heated argument in the locker room and almost came to blows. Now that''s a fight I''d pay to see!"'
 		else
 			'"Is Lariska only on the cheerleading squad because Christina is there? She seems to enjoy volleyball more than dancing."'
 			'"Well she does follow Christina around like a lost puppy, so maybe you''re right."'
@@ -638,7 +639,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys':
 		'"I never took Fedor for a cocksucker, but it does explain why he used to spent so much time with Ivan. You don''t think Ivan is..."'
 		'"No way! After Fedor sucked Shulga''s dick, Ivan punched the first guy who asked him "Isn''t that your friend?""'
 		'"Whoa. I''m glad I didn''t ask him that. You might have just saved me from a broken jaw."'
-		'"Speaking of broken jaws, we should probally stop talking before he hears us."'
+		'"Speaking of broken jaws, we should probably stop talking before he hears us."'
 	elseif chat_rand = 34 and fedorKozlovQW = -15 and kotovLoveQW > 0:
 		'"Do you feel like Fedor has been acting extremely odd since that day in the courtyard?."'
 		'"Yeah, he dresses all emo and never talks to anyone."'
@@ -712,7 +713,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys':
 			'"That''s just sick, I like it. Alright, I''m in."'
 		end
 	elseif chat_rand = 40:
-		'"So I heard that the cheerleaders have lesbian orgies with each other in the locker room."'
+		'"I heard that the cheerleaders have lesbian orgies with each other in the locker room."'
 		'"Are you for real? I wish I could watch Albina eating Bella''s pussy. That would be so fucking hot."'
 		'"Tell me about it. Maybe they make Lariska lick them all out?"'
 		'They nod to each other as they debate over who the hottest cheerleader is.'
@@ -742,12 +743,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'boys':
 	    'As you walk down the hallway, you see a group of boys from another class gawking at Albina, who has her back turned to them. As you get closer, you can hear them whispering to each other.'
         '"Come on, you know you want it!" you hear one of them say.'
         '"I don''t know. Is worth it?"'
-        '"An ass like that is always worth it. You''ve had a crush on her for as long as I know. Just go flirt with her. She might surprise you."'
+        '"An ass like that is always worth it! Just go flirt with her. She might surprise you."'
         *nl
         'His friends pushes him towards her and she turns to face him. "Uh, hey. Do you wear space pants to gym class... because your ass is out of this world." he asks with a crack in his voice, but still making a cringey attempt to act smooth.'
         'Everyone, upon seeing or hearing what''s happening, turn and await Albina''s reaction. She is unimpressed by the attempted flirting, crossing her arms and laughing.'
         '"No, I wear volleyball shorts because my ass is out of your league!" she answers before she stares him right in the eyes. "You have 3 seconds to get out of my sight. One..."'
-        'He doesn''t need to be told twice and flees in a panic, his laughing friends following close behind. You have never seen anyone run so fast in your life. Albina just smirks and turns back to what she was doing.'
+        'He doesn''t need to be told twice and flees in a panic, his friends following close behind. You have never seen anyone run so fast in your life. Albina just smirks and turns back to what she was doing.'
 	else
 		gs 'gschool_gossip', 'boys'
 	end

locations/gschool_lessons3.qsrc

@@ -132,11 +132,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'literature':
 				act 'Read the note':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom3.jpg"></center>'
-					'The note says "Meet me in the bathroom" with a little heart after it. You glance over to here and mouth "When?" and she replies "Now." You silently mouth to her. "Why?"'
+					'The note says "Meet me in the bathroom" with a little heart after it. You glance over at her and mouth "When?" and she replies "Now." You then silently mouth "Why?" to her.'
 					act 'Oh that''s why':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom4.jpg"></center>'
-						'Her answer to your question is to put her fingers in a V shapes one on each side of her mouth and stick her tongue between them, making the universal sign for eating pussy. For a moment, you are surprised but then you remember that this is Anushka. If anyone would ask someone to leave in the middle of class for sex, it would be her.'
+						'Her answer to your question is to put her fingers in a V shape on her mouth and stick her tongue between them, making the universal sign for eating pussy. For a moment, you are surprised but then you remember that this is Anushka. If anyone would ask someone to leave in the middle of class for sex, it would be her.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'action', 'resist', 'medium'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -415,26 +415,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 			'Mr. Vasilyev has gone on one of his exhaustively long and indepth explanations about one of the art styles, how it influenced society in all sorts of ways and in return was influenced by current events. You thought this class was about art, not history.'
 			*nl
 			'That comes to an abrupt end when a loud crash in the room nearly startles you out of your chair.'
-			'As one, everyone in the room turns to look, only to see Erast on the floor, his desk overturned; his cellphone sliding across the floor before clattering against the wall. Silence is soon replaced by laughter. The eyes of the entire class on him, Erast struggles to act nonchalant as he works to quickly return his desk to an upright position and gather the items that had fallen to the floor.'
+			'As one, everyone in the room turns to look, only to see Svyatoslav on the floor, his desk overturned; his cellphone sliding across the floor before clattering against the wall. Silence is soon replaced by laughter. The eyes of the entire class on him, Svyatoslav struggles to act nonchalant as he works to quickly return his desk to an upright position and gather the items that had fallen to the floor.'
 			*nl
-			'Just as he reaches for his phone, Anushka snatches it up off the floor and starts looking at it. "Oooo what''s this? Who''s panties are these Erast?" He grabs hold of her and attempts to wrestle his phone away from her, trying to be gentle as possible, as she keeps talking. Her voice is strained a bit as Erast easily overpowers her, but you have to give it to her. She doesn''t make it easy on him, holding onto the phone as long as she can.'
+			'Just as he reaches for his phone, Anushka snatches it up off the floor and starts looking at it. "Ooooh what''s this? Whose panties are these Svyatoslav?" He grabs hold of her and attempts to wrestle his phone away from her as she keeps talking. Her voice is strained a bit as Svyatoslav easily overpowers her, but you have to give it to her. She doesn''t make it easy on him, holding onto the phone as long as she can.'
 			temp = rand(0,5)
 			if temp=0:
 				'"White cotton panties by the look of it. Must be Julia''s." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down. You notice Julia blushing as you wonder how Anushka knows her panties.'
 			elseif temp = 1:
 				'"Some expensive looking white lacy panties. Are they yours Katja?" Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down. You notice Katja blushing as you wonder how Anushka knows her panties.'
 			elseif temp = 2:
-				'"Oooooh. It looks like Albina''s leopard print g-string." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down. You notice Albina closing her knees together and giving them both a deathly cold stare. Erast starts frantically apologizing to her as you wonder how Anushka knows her panties.'
+				'"Oooooh. It looks like Albina''s leopard print g-string." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down. You notice Albina closing her knees together as she scratches her desk and glares at Svyatoslav with fiery eyes. He starts frantically apologizing to her as you wonder how Anushka knows her panties.'
 			elseif temp = 3:
 				'"Black and yellow ''Slippery when wet'' panties." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down as Anushka laughs. "Those are mine!" She grins at Erast, places a hand on his chest and looks him right in the eyes. "If you wanted to see, then all you had to do was ask." she says as she hikes up her skirt to show off her black and yellow panties. Mr. Vasilyev opens his jacket wide to try and block the view.'
 			elseif temp = 4:
-				'"Natasha''s rather stylish red cotton panties by the look of it." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down. You notice Natasha blushing as you wonder how Anushka knows her panties.'
+				'"Natasha''s rather stylish red cotton panties by the looks of it." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down. You notice Natasha blushing as you wonder how Anushka knows her panties.'
 			elseif temp = 5:
-				'"What is that? Comic book character panties? They can only be Zinaida''s." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down. You see the mortified look on Zinaida''s face as you wonder how Anushka knows her panties.'
+				'"What is that? Comic book character panties? They can only be Zinaida''s." Mr. Vasilyev is desperately trying to get the class to calm down. You see the mortified look on Zinaida''s face before she buries her head on her desk as you wonder how Anushka knows her panties.'
 			end
 			killvar 'temp'
 			*nl
-			'Once Erast has his phone back and Mr. Vasilyev has the class calmed down, he calls both of them up to his desk, looks at the phone and talks quietly to both of them. He is obviously reprimanding Erast about taking panty shots and Anushka about disrespecting people''s privacy. Erast looks slightly abashed, while Anushka just looks bored.'
+			'Once Svyatoslav has his phone back and Mr. Vasilyev has the class calmed down, he calls both of them up to his desk, looks at the phone and talks quietly to both of them. He is obviously reprimanding Svyatoslav about taking panty shots and Anushka about disrespecting people''s privacy. Svyatoslav looks slightly abashed, while Anushka just looks bored.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 		elseif bored=2 and npc_rel['A155'] >= 50 and hotcat >= 6 and $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom1.jpg"></center>'
@@ -450,7 +450,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'art':
 					act 'Oh that''s why':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom4.jpg"></center>'
-						'Her answer to your question is to put her fingers in a V shapes one on each side of her mouth and stick her tongue between them, making the universal sign for eating pussy. For a moment, you are surprised but then you remember that this is Anushka. If anyone would ask someone to leave in the middle of class for sex, it would be her.'
+						'Her answer to your question is to put her fingers in a V shape on her mouth and stick her tongue between them, making the universal sign for eating pussy. For a moment, you are surprised but then you remember that this is Anushka. If anyone would ask someone to leave in the middle of class for sex, it would be her.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'action', 'resist', 'medium'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -996,19 +996,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 		bored = rand(1,4)
 		if bored=1 and npc_rel['A155'] >= 50 and hotcat >= 6 and $pantyworntype ! 'none':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You are bored out of your mind, just trying to pretend like you are paying attention. You notice Anushka watching you out of the corner of your eyes for a few moments then she stops and starts writing something on a piece of paper.'
+			'You are bored out of your mind and can barely pretend to be paying attention. You notice Anushka watching you out of the corner of your eyes for a few minutes before she stops and starts writing something on a piece of paper.'
 			act 'So bored': 
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom2.jpg"></center>'
-				'After a few seconds Anushka stops writing, tears the paper out of her notebook, folders it up and then passes it over to you. You take a look around to make sure no one is looking before taking the note from her. Who passes notes anymore instead of sending a text message on their phones. Anushka is so weird sometimes.'
+				'After a few seconds Anushka stops writing, tears the paper out of her notebook, folds it up and then passes it over to you. You take a look around to make sure no one is looking before taking the note from her.'
 				act 'Read the note':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom3.jpg"></center>'
-					'The note says. Meet me in the bathroom with a little heart after it. You glance over to here and mouth "When?" she silently mouths back "Now." Does she really expect you to ask out of class to use the bathroom? A quick look at her says yes she does, you silently mouth to her. "Why?"'
+					'The note says "Meet me in the bathroom" with a little heart after it. You glance over at her and mouth "When?" and she replies "Now." You then silently mouth "Why?" to her.'
 					act 'Oh that''s why':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom4.jpg"></center>'
-						'Her answer to your question is to put her fingers in a V shapes one on each side of her mouth and stick her tongue between them, making the universal sign for eating pussy. For a moment you are surprised but then you remember this is Anushka, if anyone would ask someone to get out of the middle of class to go meet in the bathroom for sex it would be her. But should you?'
+						'Her answer to your question is to put her fingers in a V shape on her mouth and stick her tongue between them, making the universal sign for eating pussy. For a moment, you are surprised but then you remember that this is Anushka. If anyone would ask someone to leave in the middle of class for sex, it would be her.'
 						gs 'willpower', 'action', 'resist', 'medium'
 						if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 							act 'Refuse (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
@@ -1016,7 +1016,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 								gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom1.jpg"></center>'
-								'No you can''t no matter how bored you are with class you should be skipping class even to go hook up with Anushka in the girls bathroom. You shake your head no and she frowns at you, then sighs as she rolls her eyes. She stops pay attention to you and you try your best to focus on the class, no matter how boring it is.'
+								'You shake your head and she frowns at you, then sighs as she rolls her eyes. She stops paying attention to you and you try your best to focus on the class, no matter how boring it is.'
 								act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gs 'gschool_lessonsev3', 'art'
 							end
 						else
@@ -1026,11 +1026,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/anushka/sex/school/classroom5.jpg"></center>'
-							'You can''t help be grin at her antics, fuck it why not. It beats hanging out in class. You raise your hand until Mr. Kuznetsov see''s you. "Yes <<$pcs_lastname>> What is it?" He asks.'
-							'"I need to use the restroom, Mr. Kuznetsov." You tell him.'
-							'"Why didn''t you go during your break" He says in a annoyed tone.'
-							'"I didn''t need to then, but now I really need to, it''s girl stuff." You tell him, he frowns but then nods and waves towards the door.'
-							'"Fine, but come back quickly, <<$pcs_lastname>>." He says.'
+							'You can''t help be grin at her antics. You raise your hand until Mr. Kuznetsov sees you. "What is it <<$pcs_lastname>>?" he asks.'
+							'"I need to use the restroom, sir." you reply.'
+							'"You should have done that during your break." he says in a slightly exacerbated tone.'
+							'"I really need to go! It''s girl stuff." He sighs and looks at you suspiciously, but then waves towards the door.'
+							'"Very well, but come back quickly please." he says.'
 							act 'Go to the girls restroom': gt 'gschool_lessons3', 'meet_anushka'
 						end
 					end

locations/gschool_lessons4.qsrc

@@ -1057,7 +1057,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'postphys':
 		act 'Listen in on Christina and Coach Pavlovich':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/christina/sex/school/chcoachbj.jpg"></center>'
-			'You sneak up to Coach Pavlovich''s office door to listen to what they''re talking about. You hear Christina saying "Did you miss me, Sir?" '
+			'You sneak up to Coach Pavlovich''s office door to listen to what they''re talking about. You hear Christina saying "Did you miss me, Sir?"'
 			'The coach doesn''t answer her in words, but does in gasps. Deciding you need to take the risk and look, you crack the door open and peek in.'
 			'What you see is like a dream come true; Christina, on her knees naked in front of Pavlovich, sucking his cock for all she''s worth.'
 			+$OpenInnerThought+'"This is exactly what I was looking for!"'+$CloseInnerThought 
@@ -1109,7 +1109,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower':
 	shower_shave = 0
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/change.jpg"></center>'
-	'After taking off all of your clothes, you gather up your towel, washcloth, and soap, and head to the showers; you are greeted by wafts of steam and several girls who are giggling and gossiping among themselves, apparently oblivious to your existence.'
+	'After taking off all of your clothes, you gather up your towel, washcloth and soap, and head to the showers; you are greeted by wafts of steam and several girls who are giggling and gossiping among themselves, apparently oblivious to your existence.'
 	act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'shower2'
 end
 
@@ -1225,7 +1225,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 			act 'Stay':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/sex/sonia_busted_2.jpg"></center>'
-				'You choose to stay and watch to see what happens. Lera, Anushka, Christina and Lina are among the large group of girls surronding Lena and Sonia, either watching in interest or filming it. Lariska is quietly standing off to the side, clearly not wanting to get involved but not wanting to leave Christina''s side either. Lena is enjoying having Sonia go down on her and really makes her eat her out before she pulls Sonia off of her and orgasms, squirting across Sonia''s face. When she is finished, she gives Sonia a firm slap and moves to the side, inviting someone else to have a go. Lera, who has been masturbating as she watches, walks up to Sonia and also squirts on her before sitting on her face and making her eat her pussy as she rides through her orgasm. Christina prepares to take her place as she finishes and steps aside.'
+				'You choose to stay and watch to see what happens. Lera, Anushka, Christina and Lina are among the large group of girls surrounding Lena and Sonia, either watching in interest or filming it. Lariska is quietly standing off to the side, clearly not wanting to get involved but not wanting to leave Christina''s side either. Lena is enjoying having Sonia go down on her and really makes her eat her out before she pulls Sonia off of her and orgasms, squirting across Sonia''s face. When she is finished, she gives Sonia a firm slap and moves to the side, inviting someone else to have a go. Lera, who has been masturbating as she watches, walks up to Sonia and also squirts on her before sitting on her face and making her eat her pussy as she rides through her orgasm. Christina prepares to take her place as she finishes and steps aside.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', -3
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Stop watching':
@@ -1255,7 +1255,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 		end
 	elseif gymshower = 5 and pcs_pubes >= 40:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/postphyssho2.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you step into the shower, some of the girls who are chatting to each other turn to look at you and start guffawing.'
+		'As you step into the shower, some of the girls who are chatting to each other turn to look at you and start laughing.'
 		'"Seriously <<$pcs_nickname>>? Waxing isn''t just for floors you know!"'
 		'"It''s like there''s a gorilla between her legs!"'
 		'"You''d need a chainsaw to mow that lawn!"'
@@ -1264,10 +1264,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 			cla & *clr
 			pcs_mood -= 10
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/nudepic3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You try to ignore their barbs but it really gets under your skin and it shows. Seeing their effectiveness, they re-double their abuse, taunting you more and more.'
+			'You try to ignore their insults, but it really gets under your skin and it shows. Seeing their effectiveness, they re-double their abuse, taunting you more and more.'
 			'"If I''ve got a landing strip, what does she have? A farmer''s field?!"'
 			'"She probably lets it grow out like that because she doesn''t want to let boys know she''s got beef curtains down there."'
-			'"Ha! You kidding? What boy would want to fuck a furball like that? They probably just see it and run away thinking it''s bigfoot!"'
+			'"Ha! Are you kidding? What boy would want to fuck a furball like that? They probably see it and run away!"'
 			'They cackle to themselves while you miserably douse your head under the shower, trying to drown out their hurtful words.'
 			act 'Return to the locker room': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_shower'
 		end
@@ -1275,11 +1275,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shower2':
 		act'Tell them to fuck off':
 			cla & *clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/postphyssho1.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Fuck off, would you!" you hiss at them, twisting the faucet open a little harder than you intended to. Unfortunately, your reaction seems to have the opposite effect you hoped for and they double down now they they know they''re getting under your skin.'
+			'"Fuck off!" you hiss at them, twisting the faucet open a little harder than you intended to. Unfortunately, your reaction seems to have the opposite effect you hoped for and they double down now they they know they''re getting under your skin.'
 			'"That''s probably the only kind of fuck you can get with a <i>jungle</i> like that down there!"'
 			'"You''d need a forest guide just to find her pussy under all that!"'
 			'"A machete to hack your way through too!"'
-			'They cackle in sadistic glee and you spend the rest of your shower fuming, face somehow feeling hotter than the water streaming down it.'
+			'They cackle in sadistic glee and you spend the rest of your shower fuming, your face somehow feeling hotter than the water streaming down it.'
 			act 'Return to the locker room': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_shower'
 		end
 		
@@ -1326,7 +1326,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 				pcs_mood += 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/lazar/sex/school/shower/lazar2.jpg"></center>'
-				'As you are showering, you turn and see Lazar standing there with his hard cock in his hand, stroking it while he watches you shower with a big grin on his face. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>> looking good."'
+				'As you are showering, you turn and see Lazar standing there with his hard cock in his hand, stroking it while he watches you shower with a big grin on his face. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! Looking good."'
 				'You are shocked, but before you can react, he keeps talking. "Why don''t you suck my dick?" he says as he starts walking towards you, still stroking his hard cock. You can''t help but stare at his dick. It is as long and nearly as thick as your forearm.'
 				gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1437,7 +1437,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'long_shower':
 				gs 'stat'
 				if hotcat => 6 and npc_rel['A23'] > 60 and checkoutalbina = 1:
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/school/lockerroom/lockerflirt.jpg"></center>'
-					'As you walk into the locker room, you can tell it is Albina on the phone. She seems to be talking about the Starlets and a new show they will be doing. Once you start drying your hair, you can''t hear what she is saying anymore. As you finish drying your hair, still naked, she comes around to your side of the lockers wearing only a towel. She smiles at you before dropping the towel, revealing her naked, toned body to you. She then turns around, giving you an even better view of her ass. "You like what you see?" she asks teasingly.'
+					'As you walk into the locker room, you can tell it is Albina on the phone. She seems to be talking about the Starlets, but doesn''t sound happy about it. Once you start drying your hair, you can''t hear what she is saying anymore. As you finish drying your hair, still naked, she comes around to your side of the lockers wearing only a towel. She smiles at you before dropping the towel, revealing her naked, toned body to you. She then turns around, giving you an even better view of her ass. "You like what you see?" she asks teasingly.'
 					gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Yes':
@@ -1597,9 +1597,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_shower':
 		act 'Check out Anushka':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/nushpeek.jpg"></center>'
-			'You peek at Anushka, walking in from the shower, still drying herself off. She has a petite build, a variety of tattoos large and small covering her body. Not too skinny, but just about right. Her breasts look to be a solid B or maybe a small C and very perky. Her pussy is completely smooth, you imagine she must have just shaved today or shaves every day for it to look like that.'
+			'You peek at Anushka, who is walking in from the shower and still drying herself off. She has a petite build and has a variety of tattoos large and small covering her body. She is rather slender, her breasts are small and perky and her pussy is completely smooth.'
 			*nl
-			'Suddenly Anushka turns towards you. She follows your gaze and realizes you''re looking at her body, your eyes flick up to make contact with hers. You freeze, realizing you''re caught. Your brain goes into a panic, trying to think of some kind of excuse but she just winks at you and goes back to pretending like nothing happened.'
+			'Anushka suddenly turns towards you. She follows your gaze and realizes you''re looking at her body, your eyes flicking up to make contact with hers. You freeze, realizing you''ve been caught. You panic, trying to think of some kind of excuse, but she just winks at you and goes back to pretending like nothing happened.'
 			gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 3
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Get dressed':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'dress'
@@ -1607,7 +1607,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_shower':
 		act 'Check out Aylona':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/aylpeek.jpg"></center>'
-			'You take a peek at Aylona while she finishes drying herself off. Her body is incredibly thin, all skin, bones, and tattoos, almost anorexic. But as a result she has a flat tummy and small but perky breasts. Between her legs is a neatly trimmed triangle of carpet that matches the drapes. '
+			'You take a peek at Aylona while she finishes drying herself off. Her body is incredibly thin, almost anorexic and is covered in tattoos. However, she has a flat stomach and small but perky breasts. Between her legs is a neatly trimmed triangle of carpet that matches the drapes.'
 			*nl
 			'After a few moments of observation, you let your gaze slip away and turn back to your own clothes.'
 			gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 3
@@ -1619,11 +1619,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_shower':
 			checkoutalbina = 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/albpeek.jpg"></center>'
 			if tits < 2:
-				'You glance at Albina while she pulls her clothes out of her locker. Thin with well toned muscles, a very shapely set of thighs, and ass that''s the envy of every girl in school, she has a great body and you can see why so many guys consider her the prettiest girl in your class. Even her pussy is waxed clean, though obviously not every guy gets to know that. The only thing that seems to put it up for contest is her relatively small chest. Upon inspection, you realize they''re probably not even that small and they have a great supple shape to them. They''re certainly bigger than yours at any rate. But you''ve got one of the smallest busts in class. Maybe you''re not the best point of reference for what''s big and what''s not...'
+				'You glance at Albina while she pulls her clothes out of her locker. She is petite and slender, but has well toned muscles, a very shapely set of thighs and an ass that''s the envy of every girl in school. She has a great body and you can see why so many boys consider her one of the prettiest girls in your class. Her pussy is waxed clean - in fact, you can''t see a single hair on her smooth skin. Upon inspection, you notice her breasts are a little small, but have a nice firm shape to them. Her bust is bigger than yours, but smaller than most of your classmates.'
 			elseif tits = 2:
-				'You glance at Albina while she pulls her clothes out of her locker. Thin with well toned muscles, a very shapely set of thighs, and ass that''s the envy of every girl in school, she has a great body and you can see why so many guys consider her the prettiest girl in your class. Even her pussy is waxed clean, though obviously not every guy gets to know that. The only thing that seems to put it up for contest is her relatively small chest. Upon inspection, you realize they''re not even that small, probably about the same size as your own. And they''ve got great shape too, just the right combination of firmness and softness. But compared to your classmates (who are a bit bigger on average) she''s still got one of the smaller busts in the class, so it''s only natural she''d stack up poorly in direct comparison.'
+				'You glance at Albina while she pulls her clothes out of her locker. She is petite and slender, but has well toned muscles, a very shapely set of thighs and an ass that''s the envy of every girl in school. She has a great body and you can see why so many boys consider her one of the prettiest girls in your class. Her pussy is waxed clean - in fact, you can''t see a single hair on her smooth skin. Upon inspection, you notice her breasts are the same size as your own, with a nice firm shape to them. However, compared to the other girls, she''s got one of the smaller busts in the class.'
 			else
-				'You glance at Albina while she pulls her clothes out of her locker. Thin with well toned muscles, a very shapely set of thighs, and ass that''s the envy of every girl in school, she has a great body and you can see why so many guys consider her the prettiest girl in your class. Even her pussy is waxed clean, though obviously not every guy gets to know that. The only thing that seems to put it up for contest is her relatively small chest. Upon inspection, you realize they''re probably not even that small, still a solid B-cup. And they''re they''ve got great shape too, just the right combination of firmness and softness. But compared to you and your classmates who are a bit bigger on average, she''s still got one of the smaller busts in your grade, so it''s to be expected she''d stack up poorly in direct comparison.'
+				'You glance at Albina while she pulls her clothes out of her locker. She is petite and slender, but has well toned muscles, a very shapely set of thighs and an ass that''s the envy of every girl in school. She has a great body and you can see why so many boys consider her one of the prettiest girls in your class. Her pussy is waxed clean - in fact, you can''t see a single hair on her smooth skin. Upon inspection, you notice her breasts are little small, but have a nice firm shape to them. However, compared to you and your classmates, she''s got one of the smaller busts in the class.'
 			end
 			*nl
 			'After a few moments of observation, you let your gaze slip away and turn back to your own clothes.'
@@ -1634,12 +1634,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_shower':
 		act 'Check out Christina':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/chrispeek.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance at Christina walking across the room after tossing her towel in a bin. Her build is very athletic with a toned body. Every single part of her has great muscle definition, especially her legs which look to die for. In combination with her very busty chest and a neat landing strip between her legs, her figure is rather pleasing, if not conventionally attractive. You could easily imagine her on the cover of a sports magazine promoting some kind of new home workout.'
+			'You glance at Christina walking across the room after tossing her towel in a bin. Her build is very athletic with a toned body. Every single part of her has great muscle definition, especially her legs. In combination with her very busty chest and neat landing strip between her legs, her figure is rather pleasing, if not conventionally attractive. You could easily imagine her on the cover of a sports magazine.'
 			*nl
 			if christinaQW['dompath'] >= 7:
-				'You''ve been keeping an eye on her since your little tussle, making sure she doesn''t cause any trouble. After a few moments, she feels your gaze on her and turns to face you. You give her a look and she reluctantly turns back to her locker, not saying anything.'
+				'You''ve been keeping an eye on her since your little tussle, making sure she doesn''t cause any trouble. After a few minutes, she feels your gaze on her and turns to face you. You give her a look and she reluctantly turns back to her locker, not saying anything.'
 			else
-				'After a few moments, you let your gaze slide away, not wanting to get caught and bitched out by Christina for looking at her.'
+				'After a few minutes, you let your gaze slide away, not wanting to get caught looking at her.'
 			end
 			gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 3
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1648,7 +1648,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_shower':
 		act 'Check out Lariska':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/larpeek.jpg"></center>'
-			'You glance at Lariska as she finishes drying herself off, wrapping her hair in a towel before bundling it around her head. Tall and lanky with narrow hips, plus small perky breasts that easily fit into a sports bra, she''s definitely got a classic runner''s build. Which is a little weird since you''re pretty sure she plays volleyball. You also can''t help but notice that she keeps her bush trimmed and tidy.'
+			'You glance at Lariska as she finishes drying herself off, wrapping her hair in a towel before bundling it around her head. She is tall and lanky with narrow hips, with small perky breasts. She''s definitely got a classic runner''s build. You also can''t help but notice that she keeps her bush trimmed and tidy.'
 			*nl
 			'Letting your gaze wander past her, you turn back to your own locker before anybody catches you staring and reach for your clothes.'
 			gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 3
@@ -1658,9 +1658,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_shower':
 		act 'Check out Lina':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/linpeek.jpg"></center>'
-			'You take a peek at Lina as she starts to pull her thigh high''s on. Slightly more athletic looking than most girls, she has average sized breasts and a neatly trimmed triangle between her legs. She doesn''t stand out in any particular way, but you''d never call her ugly. In fact most boys in school think she''s pretty and you''re inclined to agree. Not sure you have any other adjectives to use for her though. Not for her body anyways...'
+			'You take a peek at Lina as she starts to pull her thigh high''s on. She is slightly more athletic looking than most girls, with average sized breasts and a neatly trimmed triangle between her legs. She doesn''t stand out in any particular way, but you''d never call her ugly. In fact most boys in school think she''s pretty and you''re inclined to agree.'
 			*nl
-			'After a few moments, you look away, not wanting to get caught staring and sucked into an awkward conversation.'
+			'After a few minutes, you look away, not wanting to get caught staring and sucked into an awkward conversation.'
 			gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 3
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Get dressed':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'dress'
@@ -1674,14 +1674,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_shower2':
 	$menu_arg = 'post_shower2'
 	menu_off = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/postphyssho<<rand(1,7)>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'All finished scrubbing, you begin to rinse the soap off, glancing at towards the other girls as you do. Most of them are doing the same as you, quietly cleaning up after gym class, letting the hot water pour over them or soaping up. A few of them are chattering between themselves, teasing or complimenting each other''s bodies.'
+	'Once you finish scrubbing, you begin to rinse the soap off, glancing towards the other girls as you do. Most of them are doing the same as you, quietly showering and letting the hot water pour over them or soaping up. A few of them are chatting amongst themselves, teasing or complimenting each other''s bodies.'
 	act 'Get dressed':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'dress'
 	act 'Check out Anushka':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/nushwatch.jpg"></center>'
-		'Your attention homes in on Anushka, who has already finished her shower and is drying herself off. She has a petite build, a variety of tattoos large and small covering her body. Not too skinny, but just about right. Her breasts look to be a solid B or maybe a small C and very perky. Her pussy is completely smooth, you imagine she must have just shaved today or shaves every day for it to look like that.'
+		'Your attention homes in on Anushka, who has already finished her shower and is drying herself off. She has a petite build and has a variety of tattoos large and small covering her body. She is rather slender, her breasts are small and perky and her pussy is completely smooth.'
 		*nl
-		'Perhaps sensing your gaze, Anushka suddenly turns her head over her shoulder, catching you peeking at her. You freeze, eyes going wide and your mouth going slack, trying to think of some kind of excuse. But before you can say anything, she winks and waggles her ass at you, before striding out of the room towards the lockers as if nothing happened at all. Letting out a breath you didn''t know you were holding, you shake your head and turn off the faucet, heading back to your locker so you can get dressed.'
+		'Perhaps sensing your gaze, Anushka suddenly turns her head over her shoulder, catching you peeking at her. You freeze, your eyes going wide and your mouth going slack as you try to think of some kind of excuse. Before you can say anything, she winks and wiggles her ass at you before striding out of the room towards the lockers as if nothing happened. Letting out a sigh you didn''t know you were holding, you shake your head and turn off the faucet, heading back to your locker so you can get dressed.'
 		gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 3
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Go to the locker room':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'dress'
@@ -1689,9 +1689,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_shower2':
 	act 'Check out Aylona':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/watch1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Your attention homes in on Aylona as she soaps herself up. Her body is incredibly thin, all skin, bones, and tattoos, almost anorexic. But as a result she has a flat tummy and not a single gram of cellulite in her thighs. Your attention is drawn to her small but perky breasts as she soaps them up. By the way they jiggle under her hands, they must be very soft. Between her legs is a neatly trimmed triangle of carpet that matches the drapes.'
+		'Your attention homes in on Aylona as she soaps herself up. Her body is incredibly thin, almost anorexic and is covered in tattoos. Your attention is drawn to her small but perky breasts as she soaps them up. By the way they jiggle under her hands, they must be very soft. Between her legs is a neatly trimmed triangle of carpet that matches the drapes.'
 		*nl
-		'After a few moments of observation, decide you''ve looked enough and turn back to your shower to turn the faucet off. Grabbing a towel, you start drying off as you pad your way back to your locker.'
+		'After a few moments of observation, you decide you''ve looked enough and turn back to your shower to turn the faucet off. Grabbing a towel, you start drying off as you pad your way back to your locker.'
 		gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 3
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Go to the locker room':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'dress'
@@ -1702,14 +1702,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_shower2':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/watch2.jpg"></center>'
 		
 		if tits < 2:
-			'Your attention homes in on Albina, eyes closed as water rains over her head and pours down her face. Her wet body is well toned without even a single excess gram of fat, skin silky smooth from her face to her toes, even between her shapely legs with a cleanly waxed pussy. Not to mention her bubblicious ass that''s the envy of every girl in the school. It''s clear as to why so many boys consider her to be the most attractive girl in your class. The only thing point of contention between them is her relatively small chest. Some of the guys don''t think her breasts are big enough to be the "hottest girl in school." Upon inspection, you realize they''re probably not even that small and they have a great supple shape to them. They''re certainly bigger than yours at any rate. But you''ve got one of the smallest busts in class. Maybe you''re not the best point of reference for what''s big and what''s not...'
+			'Your attention homes in on Albina, her eyes closed as water rains over her head and pours down her face. Her wet body is well toned and shapely, her skin is silky smooth from her face to her toes and she has a firm bubble butt that''s the envy of every girl in the school. It''s clear to you why so many boys consider her to be one of the most attractive girls in your class. She starts soaping up her breasts and upon inspection, you notice they''re rather small, but have a nice firm shape to them. Her bust is bigger than yours, but smaller than most of your classmates.'
 		elseif tits = 2:
-			'Your attention homes in on Albina, eyes closed as water rains over her head and pours down her face. Her wet body is well toned without even a single excess gram of fat, skin silky smooth from her face to her toes, even between her shapely legs with a cleanly waxed pussy. Not to mention her bubblicious ass that''s the envy of every girl in the school. It''s clear as to why so many boys consider her to be the most attractive girl in your class. The only thing point of contention between them is her relatively small chest. Some of the guys don''t think her breasts are big enough to be the "hottest girl in school." Upon inspection, you realize they''re probably not even that small, about the same size as your own. And they''ve got great shape too, just the right combination of firmness and softness. But compared to your classmates (who are a bit bigger on average) she''s still got one of the smaller busts in the class, so it''s only natural she''d stack up poorly in direct comparison.'
+			'Your attention homes in on Albina, her eyes closed as water rains over her head and pours down her face. Her wet body is well toned and shapely, her skin is silky smooth from her face to her toes and she has a firm bubble butt that''s the envy of every girl in the school. It''s clear to you why so many boys consider her to be one of the most attractive girls in your class. She starts soaping up her breasts and upon inspection, you notice they''re the same size as your own, with a nice firm shape to them. However, compared to the other girls, she''s got one of the smaller busts in the class.'
 		else
-			'Your attention homes in on Albina, eyes closed as water rains over her head and pours down her face. Her wet body is well toned without even a single excess gram of fat, skin silky smooth from her face to her toes, even between her shapely legs with a cleanly waxed pussy. Not to mention her bubblicious ass that''s the envy of every girl in the school. It''s clear as to why so many boys consider her to be the most attractive girl in your class. The only thing point of contention between them is her relatively small chest. Some of the guys don''t think her breasts are big enough to be the "hottest girl in school." Upon inspection, you realize they''re probably not even that small, still a solid B-cup. And they''re they''ve got great shape too, just the right combination of firmness and softness. But compared to you and your classmates who are a bit bigger on average, she''s still got one of the smaller busts in your grade, so it''s to be expected she''d stack up poorly in direct comparison.'
+			'Your attention homes in on Albina, her eyes closed as water rains over her head and pours down her face. Her wet body is well toned and shapely, her skin is silky smooth from her face to her toes and she has a firm bubble butt that''s the envy of every girl in the school. It''s clear to you why so many boys consider her to be one of the most attractive girls in your class. She starts soaping up her breasts and upon inspection, you notice they''re a little small, but have a nice firm shape to them. However, compared to you and your classmates, she''s got one of the smaller busts in the class.'
 		end
 		*nl
-		'After a few moments of observation, decide you''ve looked enough and turn back to your shower to turn the faucet off. Grabbing a towel, you start drying off as you pad your way back to your locker.'
+		'After a few minutes of observation, you decide you''ve looked enough and turn back to your shower to turn the faucet off. Grabbing a towel, you start drying off as you pad your way back to your locker.'
 		gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 3
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Go to the locker room':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'dress'
@@ -1718,13 +1718,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_shower2':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/watch3.jpg"></center>'
 		if christinaQW['dompath'] >= 7:
-			'Your attention homes in on Christina as someone calls her name and she turns to look at them. You''ve been keeping an eye on her since your little tussle, making sure she doesn''t cause any trouble. While she''s distracted by conversation, you take the opportunity to survey her from head to toe. Her build is very athletic with a toned body. Every single part of her has great muscle definition, especially her legs which look to die for. In combination with her very busty chest and a neat landing strip between her legs, her figure is rather pleasing, if not conventionally attractive. You could easily imagine her on the cover of a sports magazine promoting some kind of new home workout.'
+			'Your attention homes in on Christina as someone calls her name and she turns to look at them. You''ve been keeping an eye on her since your little tussle, making sure she doesn''t cause any trouble. While she''s distracted by conversation, you take the opportunity to survey her from head to toe. Her build is very athletic with a toned body. Every single part of her has great muscle definition, especially her legs. In combination with her very busty chest and neat landing strip between her legs, her figure is rather pleasing, if not conventionally attractive. You could easily imagine her on the cover of a sports magazine.'
 			*nl
-			'"Yeah, just leave it in my locker," she replies to the girl talking to her. When she turns back she looks directly at you by mistake and realizes you''ve been watching her. You give her a look and she reluctantly turns back to her shower, closing her eyes and drowning her face in the water. Nodding in satisfaction, you turn off your own faucet and grab a towel, drying yourself off on the way back to your locker.'
+			'"Yeah, just leave it in my locker," she replies to the girl talking to her. When she turns back she looks directly at you and realizes you''ve been watching her. You give her a look and she reluctantly turns back to her shower, closing her eyes and drowning her face in the water. Nodding in satisfaction, you turn off your own faucet and grab a towel, drying yourself off on the way back to your locker.'
 		else
-			'Your attention homes in on Christina as someone calls her name and she turns to look at them. While she''s distracted by conversation, you take the opportunity to survey her from head to toe. Her build is very athletic with a toned body. Every single part of her has great muscle definition, especially her legs which look to die for. In combination with her very busty chest and a neat landing strip between her legs, her figure is rather pleasing, if not conventionally attractive. You could easily imagine her on the cover of a sports magazine promoting some kind of new home workout.'
+			'Your attention homes in on Christina as someone calls her name and she turns to look at them. While she''s distracted by conversation, you take the opportunity to survey her from head to toe. Her build is very athletic with a toned body. Every single part of her has great muscle definition, especially her legs. In combination with her very busty chest and neat landing strip between her legs, her figure is rather pleasing, if not conventionally attractive. You could easily imagine her on the cover of a sports magazine.'
 			*nl
-			'"Yeah, just leave it in my locker," she replies to the girl talking to her and begins to turn towards you. Not wanting to get caught peeping, you turn around at the same time and shut off the faucet. It''s time to get dressed anyways. Grabbing a towel, you walk back to your locker, wiping yourself dry on the way.'
+			'"Yeah, just leave it in my locker," she replies to the girl talking to her and begins to turn towards you. Not wanting to get caught peeping, you quickly turn around and shut off the faucet. Grabbing a towel, you walk back to your locker, wiping yourself dry on the way.'
 		end
 		
 		gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 3
@@ -1734,9 +1734,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_shower2':
 	act 'Check out Lariska':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/watch4.jpg"></center>'
-		'Your attention homes in on Lariska, letting the water from the shower pour over her head, rinsing the suds from her body. Tall and lanky with narrow hips, plus small perky breasts that easily fit into a sports bra, she''s definitely got a classic runner''s build. Which is a little weird since you''re pretty sure she plays volleyball. The streams of water running down her belly draws your eyes between her legs, soap collecting and washing through the natural filter of her neatly trimmed bush.'
+		'Your attention homes in on Lariska, who is letting the water from the shower pour over her head, rinsing the suds from her body. She is tall and lanky with narrow hips, with small perky breasts. She''s definitely got a classic runner''s build. The stream of water running down her stomach draws your eyes between her legs, soap collecting and washing through the natural filter of her neatly trimmed bush.'
 		*nl
-		'After a few moments of observation, decide you''ve looked enough and turn back to your shower to turn the faucet off. Grabbing a towel, you start drying off as you pad your way back to your locker.'
+		'After a few minutes of observation, you decide you''ve looked enough and turn back to your shower to turn the faucet off. Grabbing a towel, you start drying off as you pad your way back to your locker.'
 		gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 3
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Go to the locker room':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'dress'
@@ -1744,9 +1744,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'post_shower2':
 	act 'Check out Lina':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/watch1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Your attention homes in on Lina as she soaps herself up. Slightly more athletic looking than most girls, she has average sized breasts and a neatly trimmed triangle between her legs, highlighted by the soap suds collecting in it. She doesn''t stand out in any particular way, but you''d never call her ugly. In fact most boys in school think she''s pretty and you''re inclined to agree. Not sure you have any other adjectives to use for her though. Not for her body anyways...'
+		'Your attention homes in on Lina as she soaps herself up. She is slightly more athletic looking than most girls, with average sized breasts and a neatly trimmed triangle between her legs, highlighted by the soap suds collecting in it. She doesn''t stand out in any particular way, but you''d never call her ugly. In fact most boys in school think she''s pretty and you''re inclined to agree.'
 		*nl
-		'After a few moments of observation, decide you''ve looked enough and turn back to your shower to turn the faucet off. Grabbing a towel, you start drying off as you pad your way back to your locker.'
+		'After a few minutes of observation, you decide you''ve looked enough and turn back to your shower to turn the faucet off. Grabbing a towel, you start drying off as you pad your way back to your locker.'
 		gs'arousal','erotic_nudity', 3
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Go to the locker room':gs 'arousal', 'end' & gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'dress'
@@ -1768,7 +1768,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/lockerflash.jpg"></center>'
 		'Several other girls come in from the showers together, wearing their towels. A girl picks up her phone and holds it up to take their picture. When Anushka sees this, she stops, with a lewd smile, and pulls her towel wide open, showing off her naked body as the girl takes the picture. Several girls giggle at Anushka''s antics while others whistle or cat call. All in all, everyone has a good laugh at the moment.'
 		*nl
-		'You take your clothes out of your locker and start putting them on. This takes longer than expected, however, since you get distracted several times while getting dressed - sometimes by other girls engaging you in a brief conversation, sometimes by someone or something catching your eye. By the time you are finished, most of the other girls have already left the locker room.'
+		'You take your clothes out of your locker and start putting them on. This takes longer than expected, however, since you get distracted several times while getting dressed - sometimes by other girls engaging you in a brief conversation, sometimes by someone or something catching your eye. By the time you''re finished, most of the other girls have already left.'
 		'You can choose another outfit while you''re here.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 	elseif gymdress = 2:
@@ -1824,11 +1824,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dress':
 	elseif gymdress = 5:
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/boysraid.jpg"></center>'
-		'You start to get dressed, most of the girls around you still in their underwear or naked, when the locker room door bursts open. You and everyone else turn to see Vitek and Dan standing in the doorway already dressed and leering at all the pretty girls in the locker room. Several girls cover up, a few run around the corner out of view and others yell at them, which only makes them laugh. Albina, wearing only a rather eyecatching bright pink g-string thong, walks up to them and places her hand on the door. "Get the fuck out of here." she says in a low, menacing tone.'
+		'You start to get dressed, most of the girls around you still in their underwear or naked, when the locker room door bursts open. You and everyone else turn to see Vitek and Dan standing in the doorway and leering at all the pretty girls in the locker room. Several girls cover up, a few run around the corner out of view and others yell at them, which only makes them laugh. Albina, wearing only a rather eyecatching bright pink g-string thong, walks up to them and blocks the doorway. "Get the fuck out of here." she says in a low, menacing tone.'
 		'Dan snorts. "Or what?"'
 		'Albina, not backing down, says "Do you really want to find out?" Everyone can hear the implied threat and considering her fearsome temper and willingness to get violently physical, Dan backs off.'
-		'Vitek, however, just laughs. "Don''t get your panties in a twist. We just wanted to know if any of you girls wanted to take part in a ''private workout.''" he says lewdly.'
-		'"How is this for a workout?" Albina shouts before swiftly swinging her leg up and kicking Vitek straight in the balls. He yelps in pain and hobbles out of the doorway, clutching his crotch. Dan, face full of fear, backs out behind him, and Albina slams the door. "Fucking perverted assholes." With that taken care of, the girls go back to getting dressed. You notice most of them do it quicker than normal, seemingly afraid of a repeat visit.'
+		'Vitek, however, just laughs. "Don''t get your panties in a twist. We just wanted to know if any of you girls wanted to take part in a ''private workout.''" he says lewdly and reaches out to her exposed breast.'
+		'You see Albina''s fist clench before she grabs his hand and painfully twists it. "How''s this for a workout?" she shouts before swiftly swinging her leg up and kicking Vitek straight in the balls. He yelps in pain and almost collapses before hobbling out of the doorway, clutching his crotch. Dan backs out behind him and Albina slams the door. "Fucking perverted assholes." With that taken care of, the girls go back to getting dressed. You notice most of them do it quicker than normal, seemingly afraid of a repeat visit.'
 		'You can choose another outfit while you''re here.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons4', 'post_dress'
 	elseif gymdress = 6: