[text edit] clean up swamp_yard

locations/swamp_yard.qsrc

@@ -29,13 +29,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	*nl
 
 
-	'Behind the hut there is a <a href="exec: gt ''swampspring'' ">spring</a>, if you continue a little further down there is a small <a href="exec: gt ''backwater'' ">creek</a> with relatively clean water.'
+	'Behind the hut, there is a <a href="exec: gt ''swampspring'' ">spring</a>. If you continue a little further down, there is a small <a href="exec: gt ''backwater'' ">creek</a> with relatively clean water.'
 
 	if hunters_available = 1:
 		if hunters_were_met = 0:
 			if hunters_outside = 1:
 				'You spot some unfamiliar <a href="exec: gt ''hunters'', ''start'' ">people</a> standing in front of the hut.'
-			end if
+			end
 		else
 			if hunters_outside = 1:
 				if hunters_evening = 1:
@@ -43,26 +43,26 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					'<a href="exec: gt ''hunters'', ''start'' ">Igor and Sergey</a> are standing in the front yard.'
 				else
 					if campfire = 1 and hunters_chattime = 0:
-						'You see hunters are sitting by the <a href="exec: gt ''swamp_yard'', ''campfire''">campfire</a>'
+						'You see the hunters are sitting by the <a href="exec: gt ''swamp_yard'', ''campfire''">campfire</a>'
 					else
 						'You notice the <a href="exec: gt ''hunters'', ''start'' ">hunters</a> standing in the front yard.'
-					end if
-				end if
+					end
+				end
 			else
 				'The camp is quiet, but you can hear the hunters'' voices from the hut.'
-			end if
-		end if
+			end
+		end
 	else
 		if hunters_were_met = 0:
 			'The camp is quiet. There''s nobody here right now, but the camp looks like it is likely in use and not abandoned.'
 		else
 			if hunters_hunting = 1:
 				'The hunters are most likely out hunting for a couple hours. You have the camp to yourself!'
-			else:
+			else
 				'The camp is quiet. The hunters are asleep in the hut.'
-			end if
-		end if
-	end if
+			end
+		end
+	end
 
 
 
@@ -98,13 +98,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'campfire':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/'+iif(DayStage = 2,'campfire_day.jpg','campfire_night.jpg')+'"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'A nice, warm campfire you can sit and relax by. You can use it to cook something or heat up some water to bathe.'
-		'You can also put it out with the bucket if there is enough water in it'
+		'You can also put it out with the bucket if there is enough water in it.'
 
 		if hunters_breakfast = 1 or hunters_lunch = 1:
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanters1.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'Hunters are also sitting around the campfire, talking and joking about all kinds of stuff before heading out hunting'
+			'The hunters are also sitting around the campfire, talking and joking about all kinds of stuff before heading out hunting.'
 
 			act 'Chat (0:30)':
 				gt 'hunter_interactions', 'chat_with_hunters'
@@ -119,7 +119,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'campfire':
 					bushcraft_exp += 1
 					minut += 10
 					*nl
-					'Hunters talk to you about some of their experiences when they first started out'
+					'The hunters talk to you about some of their experiences when they first started out.'
 				else
 					if hunter_lessons > 10 AND hunter_sexual_comfort > 25:
 						!TODO: Prototype implementation for the creekside event, to be revamped
@@ -130,8 +130,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'campfire':
 						act 'Further': gt 'hunter_favors', 'creekside_gangbang_request'
 					else
 						minut += 20
-						'The hunters do not even bother to answer you. You simply sit in awkward silence for twenty minutes before getting to to other business'
-					end if
+						'The hunters do not even bother to answer you. You simply sit in awkward silence for twenty minutes before getting on to other business.'
+					end
 				end
 
 				act 'Further': gt 'swamp_yard', 'campfire'
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'campfire':
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/fireside_drink.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'Hunters are drinking and chatting loudly. You can join them for a chat, or maybe a drink or two if you would like'
+			'The hunters are drinking and chatting loudly. You can join them for a chat, or maybe a drink or two if you would like.'
 			act 'Chat (0:30)':
 				gt 'hunter_interactions', 'chat_with_hunters'
 			end
@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'campfire':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/campfire_put_out.jpg"></center>'
 				*nl
-				'You pour some water to extinguish the campfire'
+				'You pour some water to extinguish the campfire.'
 				campfire = 0
 				minut += 5
 				bucket -= 3
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'campfire':
 				water_heated += 1
 				*nl
 				if water_heated > 5 and (pcs_inhib < 85 or hunter_sexual_comfort > 25):
-					'"It is too tedious to keep heatiing up water", you think to yourself.'
+					'"It is too tedious to keep heating up water", you think to yourself.'
 				else
 					'With the now heated water, you can bathe yourself in the tub.'
 				end
@@ -233,7 +233,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'campfire':
 			act 'Light fire':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/'+iif($clothingworntype ! 'nude','campfire_light.jpg','campfire_light_nude.jpg')+'"></center>'
-				'You use some chopped wood, dry branches and twigs to light a campfire in the firepit'
+				'You use some chopped wood, dry branches and twigs to light a campfire in the firepit.'
 				firewood -= 10
 				campfire = 1
 				minut += 15
@@ -255,7 +255,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'swamp_escape':
 			if rand(0,9)>8: gt 'swamp', 'start' else gt 'swamp','stuck'
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/handshelp.jpg"></center>' & !! instead igorhanter.jpg
-			'As you start moving into the swamp Igor calls after you.'
+			'As you start moving into the swamp, Igor calls after you.'
 
 			!TODO: Different line depending on opinion and slut
 			'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, where are you going? You will get stuck in there!'