74 Commits 71de3535dd ... 9a477b0e65

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  KevinSmarts 9a477b0e65 Merge remote-tracking branch 'Violet_Kitten/master' 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts b2c60fc99b [fixed] Duplicate options to talk to Niko after school 4 years ago
  VioletKitten 2611bcf777 [changed] Swapped image call to remove duplicate image. 4 years ago
  VioletKitten 5255ba637e [added] Added missing intro trigger for Niko. 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts 6e5d678b07 [fixed] Schedule won't place the family members in the house if they should be in the village 4 years ago
  VioletKitten dcb0f7a7d9 [changed] Giving Niko afterschool events, higher priority. 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts a59a726023 [fixed] Couldn't talk to several groups if not wearing uniform. Now you cheaters can still talk to them. 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts 38e7e51a1e Merge remote-tracking branch 'Violet_Kitten/master' 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts 2413636887 [fixed] String variable missing a $ 4 years ago
  VioletKitten af43fc2e44 [fixes] Wrong goto commands. 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts 60c6272773 Merge remote-tracking branch 'Violet_Kitten/master' 4 years ago
  VioletKitten fcb2c13bf6 [fixes] Image paths were misspelled. 4 years ago
  sovietmercader 0460a2e3ef [text edit] more typos in miroslava 4 years ago
  VioletKitten af67f9dda2 [fixes] Removed extra apostrophe and added a missing one. 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts 57981962ba [fixed] Natalia info wasn't available but her link was, from nutluck 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts 0628227d19 Merge remote-tracking branch 'sovietmercader/master' 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts 1488faafbc [fixed] Brother sex was available when mom was in the room 4 years ago
  sovietmercader 8b405766f7 [fixed] mira walk naked event would make clothes disappear 4 years ago
  sovietmercader f9b8a094dc [text edit] typo in miroslava 4 years ago
  sovietmercader c490349432 [fixed] zero out mira guest variable when at the grandparents yard without mira 4 years ago
  sovietmercader c1838edc6d [fixed] old quest stage numbers when talking with mira 4 years ago
  sovietmercader 39adeb2dbf [fixed] invite mira to drink with the boys rain or shine also no longer able to avoid the intial meadow conversation with mira when taking her there the first time 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts 0fffb898fc Merge remote-tracking branch 'Violet_Kitten/master' 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts e9948115c4 [fixed] value set too high 4 years ago
  VioletKitten 4bcad3669c [fixed] Wrong location name. 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts 553baf3fe4 [added] Notes about clothing to journal to hopfully reduce queries. 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts abe2ddb9eb [fixed] Extra check in file just duplicates checks and causes problems 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts db750cc243 [Fixed] Bad code, sent it to the naughty step 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts 0576d024e3 [fixed] typo 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts 4981eca04e [fixed] wrong number in array 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts e08773ff1a [fixed] Some piercings missing from the management menu and cleared the screen when managing piercings to make it easier 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts c066663c7a [fixed] Fixes from the analyser 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts 7e124e1d69 [fixed] Stuff missing from schedule and Mother file auto-returned almost everything 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts bae6484193 [fixed] missing apostrophe 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts 721889eccd [fixed] missing apostrophe 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts 7631742a15 [fixed] Breakfast table setting of doom is really fixed this time. Honest 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts aefb80083a [fixed] missing $ 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts c96de38b4c [fixed] Mom should be stuck in a table setting loop of doom. 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts 80f894274a [fixed] was showing PC nickname and not Mom's 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts 4af6153f0b [fixed] Wrong image link 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts 42274ccd85 [fixed] missing apostrophe 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts a8159bf749 [fixed] Gopniks uniform reaction should work if not wearing uniform 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts d5cd0aac27 Merge remote-tracking branch 'sovietmercader/master' 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts a963f2d2fa Merge remote-tracking branch 'James_Dixon/master' 4 years ago
  JamesDixon1776 2267abf4d6 [textedit]Edited and proofed 4 years ago
  sovietmercader aca3255b82 [fixed] analyzer issues 4 years ago
  sovietmercader 6bed0a0a61 [fixed] hitchiking bjs can now stop off in gadukino 4 years ago
  sovietmercader afd4635818 [fixed] block forest event with Mira and Mitka if you dont know Mira yet 4 years ago
  JamesDixon1776 5ccf297ecd [textedit]Edited and proofed 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts 18b16407ae Revert "Upload files to 'locations'" 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts e350868345 Merge remote-tracking branch 'James_Dixon/master' 4 years ago
  JamesDixon1776 06e1198dd3 [reverted]Reverted to original 4 years ago
  JamesDixon1776 4e4c8b9477 [textedit]Edited and proofed 4 years ago
  JamesDixon1776 a92df0f778 [textedit]Edited and proofed 4 years ago
  JamesDixon1776 49c131f818 Revert "Delete 'locations/AlbFatherQW.qsrc'" 4 years ago
  JamesDixon1776 95bcf95de4 Revert "Delete 'locations/AlbStarsEnd.qsrc'" 4 years ago
  JamesDixon1776 a1d4458e82 [textedit]AleksandraGo.qsrc edited and proofred 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts 56ffe211c7 Merge remote-tracking branch 'sovietmercader/master' 4 years ago
  JamesDixon1776 a83dd39854 [text edit]alexgang.qrsc 4 years ago
  JamesDixon1776 4247e418a3 Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/Kevin_Smarts/glife 4 years ago
  JamesDixon 1239a7db28 Upload files to 'locations' 4 years ago
  JamesDixon 0f57f90242 Delete 'locations/AlbStarsEnd.qsrc' 4 years ago
  JamesDixon 7fc766206f Delete 'locations/AlbFatherQW.qsrc' 4 years ago
  JamesDixon 8ce0f87d76 Upload files to 'locations' 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts f112f154c6 Merge remote-tracking branch 'Violet_Kitten/master' 4 years ago
  KevinSmarts ed1839e586 [fixed] rand selector for anal set wrong and a couple of typos 4 years ago
  sovietmercader 8f3f29db11 [fixed] 3 pictures for blank screens when talking to mira 4 years ago
  VioletKitten c0ae1b547f [fixed] Removed "Work in Progress" lock on 'Vicky Talk' scene. 4 years ago
  VioletKitten 0e900d72c9 Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/Kevin_Smarts/glife 4 years ago
  VioletKitten fb60b6264c Merge branch 'master' of https://git.catrenelle.com/Kevin_Smarts/glife 4 years ago
  VioletKitten 02d4a1b169 Revert "[fixed] Added missing goto command." 4 years ago
  JamesDixon 8f900a3fc4 Upload files to 'locations' 4 years ago
  VioletKitten e5924fb997 [fixes] Updated outdated code. 4 years ago
  VioletKitten 958b123f47 [fixed] Added missing goto command. 4 years ago

+ 6 - 6
locations/AleksandraGo.qsrc

@@ -4,22 +4,22 @@ if npc_QW['A231'] = 1:
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A231'']>></font></b></center>'
 !!Image needed	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big62.jpg"></center>'
-	'You walk up to <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> and she asks you, "Are you ready to head to my house? Once I finish changing, we''ll head to the library."'
-	'You nod your head and say "Yes, I''m ready.  Let''s go."'
+	'You walk up to <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> and she asks you, "Are you ready to head to my house? Once I finish changing we''ll go to the library."'
+	'You nod your head and say, "Yes, I''m ready, so let''s go."'
 	act 'Go to <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>''s home':gt 'AleksandraHome', 'pre_library' & minut += 15
 elseif npc_QW['A231'] = 3:
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A231'']>></font></b></center>'
 !!Image needed	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big62.jpg"></center>'
 	'You walk up to <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> and she asks you, "Are you ready to head to my house?"'
-	'You nod your head and say "Yes, I''m ready.  Let''s go."'
+	'You nod your head and say, "Yes, I''m ready, so let''s go."'
 	act 'Go to <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>''s home':gt 'AleksandraHome', 'study_confront' & minut += 15
 elseif npc_QW['A231'] = 5:
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A231'']>></font></b></center>'
 !!Image needed	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big62.jpg"></center>'
 	'You walk up to <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> and she asks you in a hesitant tone, "Are you ready to head to my house?"'
-	'You nod your head and say "Yes, I''m ready.  Let''s go."'
+	'You nod your head and say "Yes, I''m ready, so let''s go."'
 	act 'Go to <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>''s home':gt 'AleksandraHome', 'secret_confront' & minut += 15
 elseif npc_QW['A231'] > 5:
 	npc_rel[$static_num] += 5
@@ -30,8 +30,8 @@ elseif npc_QW['A231'] > 5:
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A231'']>></font></b></center>'
 !!Image needed	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big62.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you walk up to <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> and she smiles and says, "Hey <<pcs_nickname>>, there you are."'
-	'Once you finally meet up with each other, she leans in an gives you a brief kiss on the lips. Once you break off the kiss, she asks "Are you ready to head to my house?"'
-	'You nod your head and say "Yes, I''m ready.  Let''s go."'
+	'Once you finally reach her, she leans in an gives you a brief kiss on the lips. You reluctantly break off the kiss and she asks, "Are you ready to head to my house?"'
+	'You nod your head and say "Yes, I''m ready, so let''s go."'
 	act 'Go to <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>''s home':gt 'AleksandraHome', 'bedroom' & minut += 15
 end
 

+ 117 - 14
locations/AleksandraHome.qsrc

@@ -18,7 +18,110 @@ gs 'stat'
 if $args[0] = 'pre_library':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Home of <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A231'']>></font></b></center>'
 !!Image needed and folder	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/alexHome/living_room.jpg"></center>'
-	'When you finally arrive at <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>''s home, you take a moment to admire the decour.  It''s rather plain, but quite clean.'
+	'When you finally arrive at <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>''s home you take a moment to admire the decour.  It''s rather plainly furnished and decorated, but it''s quite clean.'
+	'<<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> turns to you and says, "I''m going to head to my room to change. Please make your self at home in the meantime."'
+	'"No problem, I will just wait here on the sofa," you reply.'
+	act 'Wait for <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>>':
+		*clr & cla
+		minut += 8
+		gs 'stat'
+		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Home of <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A231'']>></font></b></center>'
+!!Image needed		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/aleksandra/library_outfit.jpg"></center>'
+		'After about 5 or so minutes, <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> finally returns from her room. She has ditched her school uniform for a crop top and denim skirt which is a stark contrast to what she normally wears.'
+		'"Sorry about the outfit. I really need to do laundry and I didn''t have many options available. It''s so warm today that I needed to wear something that''s cooler than our uniform. Shall we head to the library now," <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> asks.'
+		'Caught a little off guard by her outfit it takes you a couple of seconds to collect your thoughts.  You eventually do and reply, "Sure, let''s go."'
+		act 'Go to the library': gt 'AleksandraHome', 'library' & minut += 10
+	end	
+end
+if $args[0] = 'library':
+	$loc = 'gdkbibl'
+	$location_type = 'public_indoors'
+	$menu_loc = 'gdkbibl'
+	$menu_arg = ''
+	gs 'stat'
+	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Community center library</font></b></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/library/gdkbibl.jpg"></center>'
+	'You arrive at the library and you can see <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>''s face light up. It becomes very obvious that this is her favorite place to be. You walk through the stacks of books with her occasionally pulling out a book that she thinks would be good for you to read.'
+	'Being rather indecisive you just can''t make up your mind and keep answering her suggestions with a maybe. Eventually, <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>> starts to get a little annoyed at you, but continues on, none the less, with her suggestions.'
+	act 'Continue looking':
+		cla
+		minut += 20
+		'After about 20 minutes of searching, <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> finally pulls a romance novel off the shelf that captures your interest. You agree that this is the book you want and start heading towards the desk to check it out of the library.'
+		act 'Check out the romance novel':
+			cla
+			minut += 5
+			w_book += 1
+			gs 'stat'
+			'You finish checking out the novel and start heading towards the exit. <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> mentions that she has to use the bathroom before heading home and you to go as well.'
+			act 'Go to the bathroom':
+				minut += 5
+				$metka = 'womens'
+				$loc = 'gdktoilet'
+				$metkaM = 'womens'
+				$locM = 'gdktoilet'
+				$menu_loc = 'gdktoilet'
+				$menu_arg = 'womens'
+				$location_type = 'bathroom'
+				*clr & cla
+				gs 'stat'
+				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Women''s Room</font></b></center>'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/womens/bathroom_women.jpg"></center>'
+				'You both arrive at the bathroom and briefly split up into your separate stalls to take care of your business. You didn''t have to go that bad, so you finish first then exit the stall to begin washing your hands.'
+				'While you''re washing your hands you hear a screech come from <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>>''s stall. Thinking that there could be something wrong you knock on the door. You ask her if everything is alright. She opens the door then points to a hole in the wall.'
+				'"Some guy stuck his dick through that hole and asks if there was someone that could give him a good time."'
+				act 'Look back at <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>':
+					*clr & cla
+					'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[$static_num]>> <<$npc_lastname[$static_num]>></font></b></center>'
+!!Image needed		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/aleksandra/skirt-bulge.jpg"></center>'
+					npc_QW['A231'] = 2
+					'When you look back at <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>> to confirm that she should ignore the glory hole and you realize that she hadn''t finished putting her skirt back on. As a result you think you see a dick sticking out of the bottom of the skirt.'
+					'Caught completely off guard, you quickly look away without saying anything. You turn to the glory hole. You yell through it calling the guy on the other side a pervert and to grow up. You both exit the bathroom and start getting ready to leave.'
+					act 'Say goodbye':
+						*clr & cla
+						minut += 10
+						gs 'stat'
+						'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A231'']>></font></b></center>'
+!!Image needed			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/aleksandra/library_outfit.jpg"></center>'
+						'You both stand near the door to leave the community center after leaving the bathroom. <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> says, "Thanks for coming to check on me when I screamed. You''re a really good friend <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+						'"No problem <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>>, you would do the same for me right," you ask.'
+						if week = 5: 
+							$day_temp = 'Monday'
+						else
+							$day_temp = 'tomorrow'
+						end
+						'She replies, "Definitely. I''m going to walk home now. I''ll see you in school <<$day_temp>> <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+						'"See you <<$day_temp>> <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>>."'
+						killvar $day_temp
+						act 'Stay at the Commuity Center': gt 'gdk'
+					end
+				end
+			end
+		end
+	end
+end
+
+--- AleksandraHome ---------------------------------!!npc_QW['A231'] = -1: you outed alex to the school 
+!!npc_QW['A231'] = 0: initial
+!!npc_QW['A231'] = 1: library invite
+!!npc_QW['A231'] = 2: accidentally saw cock
+!!npc_QW['A231'] = 3: confront alex
+!!npc_QW['A231'] = 4: confirmed trans
+!!npc_QW['A231'] = 5: talk trans
+!!npc_QW['A231'] = 6: relationship started
+!!npc_QW['A231'] = 7: gave blowjob
+!!npc_QW['A231'] = 8: had sex
+!!npc_QW['A231'] = 9: had anal sex
+!!npc_QW['A231'] = 10: pregnant by alex
+
+$location_type = 'indoors'
+menu_off = 1
+gs 'stat'
+
+if $args[0] = 'pre_library':
+	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Home of <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A231'']>></font></b></center>'
+!!Image needed and folder	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/alexHome/living_room.jpg"></center>'
+	'When you finally arrive at <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>''s home you take a moment to admire the decour.  It''s rather plainly furnished and decorated, but it''s quite clean.'
 	'<<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> turns to you and says "I''m going to head to my room to change. Please make your self at home in the meantime."'
 	'"No problem, I will just wait here on the sofa" you reply.'
 	act 'Wait for <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>>':
@@ -27,9 +130,9 @@ if $args[0] = 'pre_library':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><b><font color="maroon">Home of <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A231'']>></font></b></center>'
 !!Image needed		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/aleksandra/library_outfit.jpg"></center>'
-		'After about 5 or so minutes, <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> finally returns from her room. She has ditched her school uniform for a crop top and denim skirt, a stark contrast to what she normally wears.'
-		'"Sorry about the outfit. I really need to do laundry and I didn''t have many options available. It''s so warm today that I needed to wear something cooler than our uniform. Shall we head to the library now?" <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> says.'
-		'Caught a little off guard by her outfit, it takes you a couple of seconds to collect your thoughts.  You eventually do and reply "Sure, let''s go."'
+		'After about 5 or so minutes, <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> finally returns from her room. She has ditched her school uniform for a crop top and denim skirt which is a stark contrast to what she normally wears.'
+		'"Sorry about the outfit. I really need to do laundry and I didn''t have many options available. It''s so warm today that I needed to wear something cooler than our uniform. Shall we head to the library now," <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> asks.'
+		'Caught a little off guard by her outfit it takes you a couple of seconds to collect your thoughts.  You eventually do and reply, "Sure, let''s go."'
 		act 'Go to the library': gt 'AleksandraHome', 'library' & minut += 10
 	end	
 end
@@ -42,8 +145,8 @@ if $args[0] = 'library':
 	gs 'themes', 'indoors'
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Community center library</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/library/gdkbibl.jpg"></center>'
-	'You arrive at the library and you can see <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>''s face light up. It becomes very obvious that this is her favorite place to be. You walk through the stacks, with her occasionally pulling out a book that she thinks would be good.'
-	'Being rather indecisive, you can''t make up your mind and keep answering with a maybe. Eventually <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>> starts to get a little annoyed, but continues on none the less with her suggestions.'
+	'You arrive at the library and you can see <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>''s face light up. It becomes very obvious that this is her favorite place to be. You walk through the stacks with her occasionally pulling out a book that she thinks would be good for you to read.'
+	'Being rather indecisive you just can''t make up your mind and keep answering her suggestions with a maybe. Eventually <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>> starts to get a little annoyed, but continues on none the less with her suggestions.'
 	act 'Continue looking':
 		cla
 		minut += 20
@@ -53,7 +156,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'library':
 			minut += 5
 			w_book += 1
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You finish checking out the novel and start heading towards the exit. <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> mentions that she has to use the bathroom before heading home, and you say that you might as well go as well.'
+			'You finish checking out the novel and start heading towards the exit. <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> mentions that she has to use the bathroom before heading home and you say that you might as well go as well.'
 			act 'Go to the bathroom':
 				minut += 5
 				$metka = 'womens'
@@ -67,30 +170,30 @@ if $args[0] = 'library':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Women''s Room</font></b></center>'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/bathroom/womens/bathroom_women.jpg"></center>'
-				'You both arrive at the bathroom and briefly split up into your separate stalls to take care of your business. You didn''t have to go that bad, so you finish first and exit the stall to begin washing your hands.'
-				'While you''re washing your hands, you hear a screech come from <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>>''s stall. Thinking that there could be something wrong, you knock on the door and ask her if everything is alright. She opens the door and points to a hole in the wall.'
+				'You both arrive at the bathroom and briefly split up to go into your separate stalls. You didn''t have to go that bad, so you finish first then exit the stall to begin washing your hands.'
+				'While you''re washing your hands you hear a screech come from <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>>''s stall. Thinking that there could be something wrong you knock on the door and ask her if everything is alright. She opens the door and points to a hole in the wall.'
 				'"Some guy stuck his dick through that hole and asked if there was someone here that could give him a good time."'
 				act 'Look back at <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>>':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[$static_num]>> <<$npc_lastname[$static_num]>></font></b></center>'
 !!Image needed		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/aleksandra/skirt-bulge.jpg"></center>'
 					npc_QW['A231'] = 2
-					'When you look back at <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>> to confirm that she should ignore the glory hole, you realize that she hadn''t finished putting her skirt back on. As a result, you think you see a dick sticking out of the bottom of the skirt.'
-					'Caught completely off guard, you quickly look away without saying anything. You turn to the glory hole and yell through it, calling the guy on the other side a pervert and to grow up. You then both exit the bathroom and start getting ready to leave.'
+					'When you look back at <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>> to confirm that she should ignore the glory hole you realize that she hadn''t finished putting her skirt back on. As a result you think you see a dick sticking out of the bottom of the skirt.'
+					'Caught completely off guard you quickly look away without saying anything. You turn to the glory hole and yell through it. You end up calling the guy on the other side a pervert and for him to grow up. You then both exit the bathroom then start getting ready to leave the library.'
 					act 'Say goodbye':
 						*clr & cla
 						minut += 10
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><b><font color="maroon"><<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A231'']>></font></b></center>'
 !!Image needed			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/aleksandra/library_outfit.jpg"></center>'
-						'You both stand near the door to leave the community center after leaving the bathroom. <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> says "Thanks for coming to check on me when I screamed. You''re a really good friend <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
-						'"No problem <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>>, you would do the same for me right?" you reply.'
+						'You both stand near the door to leave the community center after leaving the bathroom. <<$npc_firstname[''A231'']>> says, "Thanks for coming to check on me when I screamed. You''re a really good friend <<$pcs_nickname>>."'
+						'"No problem <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>>, you would do the same for me right," you ask.'
 						if week = 5: 
 							$day_temp = 'Monday'
 						else
 							$day_temp = 'tomorrow'
 						end
-						'"Definitely. I''m going to start walking home now. I''ll see you in school <<$day_temp>> <<$pcs_nickname>>." she replies'
+						'"Definitely. I''m going to start walking home now. I''ll see you in school <<$day_temp>> <<$pcs_nickname>>," she answers'
 						'"See you <<$day_temp>> <<$npc_nickname[''A231'']>>."'
 						killvar $day_temp
 						act 'Stay at the Commuity Center': gt 'gdk'

+ 183 - 184
locations/AnalPR.qsrc

@@ -1,184 +1,183 @@
-# AnalPR
-
-if $ARGS[0] = '1':
-	$metka = $ARGS[0]
-	$loc = $CURLOC
-    $location_type = 'event'
-	menu_off = 1
-
-	*clr & cla
-	prosti = 0
-	money += ProsMoney*100
-	gs'stat'
-	gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal'
-
-	if pcs_ass < dick:
-		$analsex = 'Your anus stretches painfully while he fills your ass with his shaft, and you wince and beg him to take it easy for a little while. Fortunately, he listens. Once he feels he gave you enough time to adapt, he begins to move his hips. Slowly at first, but his thrusts accelerate more and more as he gets closer to his orgasm.'
-		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'rough', 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
-		gs 'stat'
-	end
-
-	if pcs_ass >= dick:
-		pcs_horny += pcs_ass
-		$analsex = 'Your anus has no difficulty adjusting to the size of his member, and it actually feels fairly pleasant when he shoves his length in. Your anus clasps around the base of his cock from time to time, and the man begins to thrust his hips against yours enthusiastically when he notices you can take it.'
-		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
-		gs 'stat'
-	end
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/anal/doggy/anal30.jpg"></center>'
-	'You immediately feel the man''s hands on your ass cheeks when you get on your hands and knees in the back seat. The man confidently guides his condom-covered cock to your sphincter, and slowly thrusts all of his <<dick>> centimeters inside you.'
-	'<<$analsex>>'
-	'After a few minutes of fucking your ass, the man groans and you feel his hips spasming against yours. He pulls out of you and takes the filled condom off his slowly shrinking cock.'
-	'The man ties a knot in the condom and tosses it out of the window carelessly.'
-	spafinloc = 3
-	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
-	gs 'arousal', 'end'
-	gs 'cum_manage'
-	gs 'stat'
-
-	act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = '2':
-	$metka = $ARGS[0]
-	$loc = $CURLOC
-    $location_type = 'event'
-	menu_off = 1
-	
-	*clr & cla
-	prosti = 0
-	gs'stat'
-	gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal'
-
-	if pcs_ass < dick:
-		$analsex = 'You feel a sharp pain and wince when the man pushes the tip of his <<dick>> centimeter member past your sphincter, and continues to work most of his length inside you. Fortunately, he listens when you beg him to go slow.<br>The guy holds still for a moment so your ass can get used to how far it''s being stretched out. After a little while you don''t think it''s going to get any better, and you tell the man he can start to fuck you with a forced, fake smile on your face.<br>He''s still careful at first, but soon forgets about your suffering and accelerates more and more. The man groans loudly while he hammers his cock inside your ass, ignoring your crying and mewling underneath him.'
-		gs 'arousal', 'anal', -5, 'rough', 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
-		gs 'stat'
-	end
-	if pcs_ass >= dick:
-		pcs_horny += pcs_ass
-		$analsex = 'Your anus has no difficulty adjusting to the size of his member, and it actually feels fairly pleasant when he shoves his length in. Your anus clasps around the base of his cock from time to time, and the man begins to thrust his hips against yours enthusiastically when he notices you can take it.'
-		gs 'arousal', 'anal', -5, 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
-		gs 'stat'
-	end
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/anal/mis/cowl<<rand(1, 6)>>.jpg"></center>'
-
-	'As soon as you lie down on the hood of the car, the man parts your legs and eagerly presses the tip of his cock against your anus.'
-	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
-	gs 'stat'
-	if klismaday ! daystart:
-		act 'Continue':gt'AnalPR','3'
-	else
-		money += 2000
-
-		cumanalRand = RAND(0,2)
-		if cumanalRand = 0:
-			spafinloc = 4
-			gs 'cum_manage'
-
-			'Suddenly the man groans loudly, and abruptly pulls his member out of your stretched anus. The sudden emptiness feels strange, but you smile seductively at the man while he jerks himself off over your ass cheeks. When he''s done covering your buttocks with his seed, he lets out a satisfied sigh and gives you your money.'
-			
-			act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
-		elseif cumanalRand = 1:
-			spafinloc = 7
-			gs 'cum_manage'
-
-			'Suddenly the man groans loudly, and abruptly pulls his member out of your stretched anus. The sudden emptiness feels strange, but you smile seductively at the man while he jerks himself off over your ass cheeks. Then the bastard suddenly aims his cock at your clothes, and shoots his load all over them!<br>You silently curse him, but force yourself to keep smiling as he lets out a satisfied sigh and gives you your money.'
-			
-			act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
-		elseif cumanalRand = 2:
-			spafinloc = 3
-			gs 'cum_manage'
-
-			'Suddenly the man groans loudly, and he holds still with his cock deep inside you. Then he very slowly pulls out, and a trickle of his sperm slowly runs out of your slightly gaping ass.'
-			'He admires his work for a moment, before giving the money he owes you with a satisfied smile on his face.'
-			
-			act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
-		end
-		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
-		gs 'arousal', 'end'
-		gs 'stat'
-		killvar 'cumanalRand'
-	end
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = '3':
-	*clr & cla
-	menu_off = 1
-	gs'stat'
-
-	'When the man stops, you think it''s because he came. Instead, you hear swearing.'
-	'"What the fuck!? What kind of dirty whore are you, this is disgusting!" he yells.'
-	'When you turn around, you see the problem: his dick is covered in shit! You should really give yourself an enema first, if you want to sell your ass like this...'
-	'The man shouts angrily: "Get lost, whore... you''re lucky I''m letting you leave without beating you up! You can forget about your money!"'
-
-	act 'Leave quietly':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
-	act 'Insist he pays anyway':gt'AnalPR','4'
-	if pcs_intel >= 50:act 'Apologize and make amends':gt'AnalPR','5'
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = '4':
-	*clr & cla
-	menu_off = 1
-	money += ProsMoney * 100
-	pcs_mood -= 30
-	pcs_health -= pcs_health/5
-	pcs_throat += 1
-	gs'stat'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bjr.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Hey, I did what you wanted! You owe m-" you begin, but he doesn''t let you finish. The man angrily punches you in the stomach, making you double over in pain.'
-	'"Fine! You''ll get your money... but you will correct your mistake, whore!" he snarls angrily.'
-	'He kneels down and thrusts his smelly cock all the way into your mouth, and says with a mean grin: "Start sucking, slut. It''s not coming out until it''s completely clean!"'
-	'The taste and stench are terrible, and you really have to fight the urge to not vomit. You barely manage, partially because you''re afraid of what he would do otherwise...'
-	'A few minutes later, long after you licked and sucked his cock clean, the man is still fucking your throat violently. Then finally, he groans and cums inside your mouth.'
-	'He scoffs at you when he pulls away, while you roll to your stomach and dry heave a few times. That was disgusting!'
-	'He carelessly throws the money he owes you onto the ground and drives off, without saying another word.'
-	spafinloc = 12
-	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'rough', 'deepthroat', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
-	gs 'arousal', 'end'
-	gs 'cum_manage'
-	gs 'stat'
-
-	act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = '5':
-	*clr & cla
-	menu_off = 1
-	pcs_throat += 1
-	gs'stat'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bjr1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You understand perfectly why he''s upset... that wasn''t very smart of you. You''ll have to think of a solution fast!'
-	'"I''m sorry, sir! Please allow me to make it up to you..." you tell him, while you drop to your knees obediently. This is going to be unpleasant, but you have to do something to keep him happy!'
-	'The man watches in disgust as you close your lips around his dirty cock. The taste and smell is awful! He''s still upset, but you can see his anger slowly fade away when you lick his dirty cock clean. It''s fully erect again by now, and you can tell he''s still very horny despite your mishap.'
-	'He then says: "Good enough. Lie down in the grass."'
-	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
-	gs 'stat'
-	act 'Let him fuck you':gt'AnalPR','6'
-end
-
-if $ARGS[0] = '6':
-	*clr & cla
-	menu_off = 1
-	pcs_vag = pcs_vag + 1
-	money += ProsMoney*110
-	gs'stat'
-
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/car/sexcar20.jpg"></center>'
-	'You lie down obediently, giving the man a humble look as he takes place between your legs. He quickly put a condom on, not taking any more chances with you. You still have that awful taste in your mouth, but do your best to focus on giving the man pleasure.'
-	'The man drives his cock deep inside you and begins to fuck your pussy using long, firm strokes. He groans every time his hips slap against yours, and the intensity with which he fucks you makes you cry out as well.'
-	'After a few minutes, the man groans and you feel his hips spasming against yours. He pulls out of you and takes the filled condom off his slowly shrinking cock.'
-	'While you lay on the grass, recovering from all the things you just had to do to not lose your customer, he theatrically throws a number of bills onto your body one by one. He''s smiling again, and is clearly in a good mood. He even added a little extra!'
-	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'rough', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
-	gs 'arousal', 'end'
-	gs 'cum_manage'
-	gs 'stat'
-
-	act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
-end
-
---- AnalPR ---------------------------------
-
+# AnalPR
+
+if $ARGS[0] = '1':
+	$metka = $ARGS[0]
+	$loc = $CURLOC
+    $location_type = 'event'
+	menu_off = 1
+
+	*clr & cla
+	prosti = 0
+	money += ProsMoney*100
+	gs'stat'
+	gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal'
+
+	if pcs_ass < dick:
+		$analsex = 'Your anus stretches painfully as he fills your ass with his meaty shaft. You wince and beg him to take it easy for a little while. Fortunately, he listens to your request. You feel your anus muscles relax which signals that he can go much faster. He goes slow at first then slowly gains momentum as he pushes closer to his orgasm.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'rough', 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
+		gs 'stat'
+	end
+
+	if pcs_ass >= dick:
+		pcs_horny += pcs_ass
+		$analsex = 'Your anus has no difficulty adjusting to the size of his member. It actually feels fairly pleasant when he shoves his full length in. Your anus grips his cock from time to time in response to your building orgasm. The man begins to thrust his hips against your ass enthusiastically when he notices you are enjoying your ass being reamed.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 5, 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
+		gs 'stat'
+	end
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/anal/doggy/anal30.jpg"></center>'
+	'You immediately feel the man''s hands on your ass cheeks when you get on your hands and knees in the back seat. The man confidently guides his condom-covered cock to your sphincter and slowly thrusts all of his <<dick>> centimeters inside you.'
+	'<<$analsex>>'
+	'After a few minutes of fucking your ass, the man groans and you feel his hips spasming against your ass. He pulls out of you then takes the filled condom off his slowly shrinking cock.'
+	'The man ties a knot at the open end of the condom to carelessyly toss it out of the window.'
+	spafinloc = 3
+	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
+	gs 'cum_manage'
+	gs 'stat'
+
+	act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = '2':
+	$metka = $ARGS[0]
+	$loc = $CURLOC
+    $location_type = 'event'
+	menu_off = 1
+	
+	*clr & cla
+	prosti = 0
+	gs'stat'
+	gs 'arousal', 'auto_lube', 'anal'
+
+	if pcs_ass < dick:
+		$analsex = 'You feel a sharp pain and wince when the man pushes the tip of his <<dick>> centimeter member past your sphincter. He continues to work most of his length inside you. Fortunately, he listens when you beg him to go slow.<br>The guy holds still for a moment so your ass can get used to how far it''s being stretched out. After a little while, you don''t think it''s going to get any better, so you tell the man he can start to fuck you with a forced, fake smile on your face.<br>He''s still careful at first, but soon forgets about your suffering and accelerates more and more. The man groans loudly while he hammers his cock inside your ass. He ignores your crying and mewling coming from underneath him.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'anal', -5, 'rough', 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
+		gs 'stat'
+	end
+	if pcs_ass >= dick:
+		pcs_horny += pcs_ass
+		$analsex = 'Your anus has no difficulty adjusting to the size of his member. It actually feels fairly pleasant when he shoves his length in. Your anus grips the full length of his cock from time to time in response to your moaning. He begins to thrust his hips against your ass enthusiastically when he notices you are enjoying being fucked in the ass.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'anal', -5, 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
+		gs 'stat'
+	end
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/anal/mis/cowl<<rand(1, 6)>>.jpg"></center>'
+
+	'As soon as you lie down on the hood of the car, the man parts your legs and eagerly presses the tip of his cock against your anus.'
+	gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
+	gs 'stat'
+	if klismaday ! daystart:
+		act 'Continue':gt'AnalPR','3'
+	else
+		money += 2000
+
+		cumanalRand = RAND(0,2)
+		if cumanalRand = 0:
+			spafinloc = 4
+			gs 'cum_manage'
+
+			'Suddenly the man groans loudly and abruptly pulls his member out of your stretched anus. The sudden emptiness feels strange, but you smile seductively at the man as he jerks himself off over your ass cheeks. When he''s done covering your buttocks with his seed he lets out a satisfied sigh and gives you your money.'
+			
+			act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
+		elseif cumanalRand = 1:
+			spafinloc = 7
+			gs 'cum_manage'
+
+			'Suddenly the man groans loudly and abruptly pulls his member out of your stretched anus. The sudden emptiness feels strange, but you smile seductively at the man while he jerks himself off over your ass cheeks. Then the bastard suddenly aims his cock at your clothes to shoot his load all over them!<br>You silently curse him, but force yourself to keep smiling as he lets out a satisfied sigh and places your money next to you.'
+			
+			act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
+		elseif cumanalRand = 2:
+			spafinloc = 3
+			gs 'cum_manage'
+			'Suddenly the man groans loudly and he holds still with his cock deep inside you. He very slowly pulls out which results in a trickle of his sperm to slowly run out of your slightly gaping ass.'
+			'He admires his work for a moment before giving the money he owes you with a satisfied smile on his face.'
+			
+			act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
+		end
+		gs 'arousal', 'anal', 10, 'sub', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
+		gs 'arousal', 'end'
+		gs 'stat'
+		killvar 'cumanalRand'
+	end
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = '3':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	gs'stat'
+
+	'When the man stops you think it''s because he came, instead, you hear swearing.'
+	'"What the fuck!? What kind of dirty whore are you? This is disgusting!" he yells.'
+	'When you turn around you see the problem. His dick is covered in shit! You should have really given yourself an enema first if you want to sell your ass like this...'
+	'The man shouts angrily, "Get lost you whore... you''re lucky I''m letting you leave without beating you up! You can forget about your money!"'
+
+	act 'Leave quietly':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
+	act 'Insist he pays anyway':gt'AnalPR','4'
+	if pcs_intel >= 50:act 'Apologize and make amends':gt'AnalPR','5'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = '4':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	money += ProsMoney * 100
+	pcs_mood -= 30
+	pcs_health -= pcs_health/5
+	pcs_throat += 1
+	gs'stat'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bjr.jpg"></center>'
+	'"Hey, I did what you wanted! You owe m-," you begin to say, but he doesn''t let you finish. The man angrily punches you in the stomach which makes you double over in pain.'
+	'"Fine! You''ll get your money... but you will correct your mistake you whore," he snarls angrily.'
+	'He kneels down then thrusts his smelly cock all the way into your mouth. He says with a mean grin, "Start sucking slut. It''s not coming out until it''s completely clean!"'
+	'The taste and stench are terrible. You really have to fight the urge to not vomit. You barely manage partially because you''re afraid of what he would do otherwise...'
+	'A few minutes later, long after you licked and sucked his cock clean the man is still fucking your throat violently. He finally groans and cums inside your mouth.'
+	'He scoffs at you when he pulls away as you roll to your stomach and dry heave a few times. That was disgusting!'
+	'He carelessly throws the money he owes you onto the ground then drives off without saying another word.'
+	spafinloc = 12
+	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'rough', 'deepthroat', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
+	gs 'cum_manage'
+	gs 'stat'
+
+	act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = '5':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	pcs_throat += 1
+	gs'stat'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bjr1.jpg"></center>'
+	'You understand perfectly why he''s upset... that wasn''t very smart of you. You''ll have to think of a solution fast!'
+	'"I''m sorry sir! Please allow me to make it up to you...," you tell him as you drop to your knees obediently. This is going to be unpleasant, but you have to do something to keep him happy!'
+	'The man watches in disgust as you close your lips around his dirty cock. The taste and smell is awful! He''s still upset, but you can see his anger slowly fade away when you lick his dirty cock clean. It''s fully erect again by now and you can tell he''s still very horny despite your mishap.'
+	'He then says, "Good enough. Lie down in the grass."'
+	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
+	gs 'stat'
+	act 'Let him fuck you':gt'AnalPR','6'
+end
+
+if $ARGS[0] = '6':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	pcs_vag = pcs_vag + 1
+	money += ProsMoney*110
+	gs'stat'
+
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/sex/car/sexcar20.jpg"></center>'
+	'You lie down obediently while giving the man a humble look as he takes his place between your legs. He quickly put a condom on not taking any more chances with you. You still have that awful taste in your mouth, but do your best to focus on giving the man pleasure.'
+	'The man drives his cock deep inside you and begins to fuck your pussy using long, firm strokes. He groans every time his hips slap against your buttocks and the intensity with which he fucks you makes you cry out as well.'
+	'After a few minutes, the man groans and you feel his hips spasming against your body. He pulls out of you and takes the filled condom off his slowly shrinking cock.'
+	'While you lay on the grass recovering from all the things you just had to do to not lose your customer. He theatrically throws a number of bills onto your body one by one. He''s smiling again and is clearly in a good mood. He''s even added a little extra!'
+	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 10, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'rough', 'unknown', 'prostitution'
+	gs 'arousal', 'end'
+	gs 'cum_manage'
+	gs 'stat'
+
+	act 'Continue':gt $locSex, $metkaSex
+end
+
+--- AnalPR ---------------------------------
+

+ 1 - 1
locations/FedorEv2.qsrc

@@ -280,7 +280,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Movie 3':
 	pcs_mood += 20
 	minut += 30
 	gs 'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/movies/seat2.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/cinema/kino_1.jpg"></center>'
 	'You and Fedor continue to watch the movie until the credits eventually roll and then most people in the theater start to leave and you and Fedor wait for most of the people to leave while chatting about your favorite part on the movie then Fedor gets up and throws out the popcorn bags and cups.'
 	
 	act 'Finish date': gt 'FedorEv2', 'Movie 4'

+ 28 - 27
locations/NikoDates.qsrc

@@ -391,7 +391,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 2':
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head as you respond, "No way. I''m not that kind of girl. I told you that." Niko get noticeably angry. "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''m not asking you to donate one of your kidneys. Just give a quick.." You cut him off. "I SAID NO!"' 'Niko grabs your head then begins pushing it toward his crotch, as he says, "Come on <<pcs_nickname>>, it wont take long."' 
+						'You shake your head as you respond, "No way. I''m not that kind of girl. I told you that." Niko get noticeably angry. "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''m not asking you to donate one of your kidneys. Just give a quick.." You cut him off. "I SAID NO!" Niko grabs your head then begins pushing it toward his crotch, as he says, "Come on <<pcs_nickname>>, it wont take long."'
 
 						act 'Continue':
 							*clr & cla
@@ -555,7 +555,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date Rape':
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile1.jpg"></center>'							
 							'Niko kisses your leg, "You were a bit wild, it was a side of you that I haven''t seen before, and I liked it." You reply, "Really? well I guess I could try cutting loose a bit more often." Niko pats your ass gently as he replies, "Now that''s what I like to hear! So would you like some cereal? I have plenty downstairs." You shake your head, "No I need head back home, but thanks for the offer." You give Niko a kiss before walking out the room where Niko guides you out of the door.'
 
-							act 'Walk to the residential district':minut += 5 and gt 'pavResidential'
+							act 'Walk to the residential district':minut += 5 & gt 'pavResidential'
 						end
 					end	
 				end	
@@ -803,40 +803,41 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Home':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/3/home/home4.jpg"></center>'
 					'You eagerly begin pulling down Niko''s pants, causing his hard cock to swing out, almost hitting you in the face. You begin slowly stroking the shaft before Niko grabs the back of your head, and pushes his dick into your mouth, causing you to gag for a second before the feeling passes, and you begin sucking on Niko''s dick.' 
 
-				act 'Continue sucking Niko''s penis':
-					*clr & cla
-					gs'stat'					
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/3/home/home5.jpg"></center>'
-					'Niko brushes your hair from your face as he stares into your eyes with a very satisfied grin. You spend the next few minutes, sucking on Niko''s warm hard dick, feeling it occasionally throb in your mouth. Eventually Niko lets out a moan before pulling you off his dick then lifting you up, and dropping you onto the couch before lining up his dick with your vaginal lips.'	
-					gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
-					gs'stat'
-
-					act 'Vaginal':
+					act 'Continue sucking Niko''s penis':
 						*clr & cla
+						gs'stat'					
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/3/home/home5.jpg"></center>'
+						'Niko brushes your hair from your face as he stares into your eyes with a very satisfied grin. You spend the next few minutes, sucking on Niko''s warm hard dick, feeling it occasionally throb in your mouth. Eventually Niko lets out a moan before pulling you off his dick then lifting you up, and dropping you onto the couch before lining up his dick with your vaginal lips.'	
+						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 						gs'stat'
-						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/3/home/home6.jpg"></center>'
-						'Niko pushes his dick inside of you, causing a rush of pleasure, feeling his hard cock pushing it''s way inside you. You lay back enjoying the thrusts, as you continue to stare into Niko''s eyes, feeling his lustful gaze almost hypnotizing you into submission, wanting him to fuck you harder while feeling helpless to stop it, but also feeling satisfaction in that feeling.' 
-						gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
-						gs'stat'
-						act 'Ponder':
+
+						act 'Vaginal':
 							*clr & cla
 							gs'stat'
-							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/3/home/home7.jpg"></center>'
-							'<font color=#FF00FF>What is this feeling? Why do I want him to have this power over me? Niko is so rough with me right now, but He is so strong, and dominant. I only want to please him. Am I wrong in feeling this?</font> Niko suddenly pulls out of you, as he groans, and begins covering your stomach with his seed. You let out a load moan, as you feeling the warmth of his cum wash over you.'
-							gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', 'A189', 1
+							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/3/home/home6.jpg"></center>'
+							'Niko pushes his dick inside of you, causing a rush of pleasure, feeling his hard cock pushing it''s way inside you. You lay back enjoying the thrusts, as you continue to stare into Niko''s eyes, feeling his lustful gaze almost hypnotizing you into submission, wanting him to fuck you harder while feeling helpless to stop it, but also feeling satisfaction in that feeling.' 
 							gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
-							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs'stat'
-
-							act 'Continue':
+							act 'Ponder':
 								*clr & cla
 								gs'stat'
-								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/home/livingroom/couch.jpg"></center>'
-								'Niko climbs off of you then heads to the kitchen for a few seconds, and comes back with a beer. Niko sits on the couch next to you and says, "You were great <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you wanna wash up, the bathroom is two rooms down that way. After you''re done, meet me at the front door, and I''ll escort you out." Niko leans over and gives you a kiss on the cheek.'
-								act 'Wash up':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoDates', 'Bathroom'
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/3/home/home7.jpg"></center>'
+								'<font color=#FF00FF>What is this feeling? Why do I want him to have this power over me? Niko is so rough with me right now, but He is so strong, and dominant. I only want to please him. Am I wrong in feeling this?</font> Niko suddenly pulls out of you, as he groans, and begins covering your stomach with his seed. You let out a load moan, as you feeling the warmth of his cum wash over you.'
+								gs 'cum_call', 'stomach', 'A189', 1
+								gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5
+								gs 'arousal', 'end'
+								gs'stat'
+
+								act 'Continue':
+									*clr & cla
+									gs'stat'
+									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/home/livingroom/couch.jpg"></center>'
+									'Niko climbs off of you then heads to the kitchen for a few seconds, and comes back with a beer. Niko sits on the couch next to you and says, "You were great <<$pcs_nickname>>. If you wanna wash up, the bathroom is two rooms down that way. After you''re done, meet me at the front door, and I''ll escort you out." Niko leans over and gives you a kiss on the cheek.'
+									act 'Wash up':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'NikoDates', 'Bathroom'
+								end
 							end
-						end
-					end	
+						end	
+					end
 				end
 			end	
 		end

+ 10 - 9
locations/NikoWhore.qsrc

@@ -1,3 +1,4 @@
+
 # NikoWhore
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
@@ -267,15 +268,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 																			*clr & cla
 																			gs'stat'															
 																			'<center><b><h4><font color="blue"><<"Fyodor [Fedor] Kozlov">></font></h4></b></center>'
-																			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorangry.jpg"></center'
+																			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/fedor/fedorev/fedorangry.jpg"></center>'
 																			'Dan shows Fedor the video of you sucking off Niko then confessing your love to him. Fedor''s face grows red with anger. "You..You bitch! How could you just use me like that?" You lower your head, "I..." You can''t collect your words. Fedor grabs the back of your neck then pushes you toward Vitek who catches you, "Have fun with her. I don''t want her anymore." Dan pats Fedor on the back, as he responds, "Why don''t you join us? We were just about to show her off to everyone else." Fedor nods as the gopniks lead you to the stairwell.'
 																			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 2, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'exhibitionism'
 																			gs 'stat'
 																			act 'Enter cafeteria':gt 'NikoWhore', 'Exposed'
 																		end
-																	else
-																		act 'Enter cafeteria':gt 'NikoWhore', 'Exposed'
 																	end
+																else
+																	act 'Enter cafeteria':gt 'NikoWhore', 'Exposed'
 																end
 															end	
 														end	
@@ -820,7 +821,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 															gs 'arousal', 'end'
 															gs 'stat'
 
-															act 'Go to class':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'class'
+															act 'Go to class':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'bulding'
 														end
 													end	
 												end	
@@ -849,7 +850,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 														'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/kiss2.mp4"></video></center>'
 														'You lean forward then give Niko a passionate kiss. After the kiss, Niko says, "You are such a incredible girl. I always feel so lucky to have you, now don''t forget to meet me after school. I will be waiting in the courtyard." You nod your head, as Niko turns around then walks out of the restroom. You quickly get dressed then follow him out.'
 
-														act 'Go to class':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'class'
+														act 'Go to class':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'bulding'
 													end
 												end	
 
@@ -865,7 +866,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/ouch.jpg"></center>'
 													'You quickly push Niko away. "Fuck you! You are just lying to me like you always do! I''m not trusting you anymore! Stay away from me!" Niko gets noticeably angry, "You ungrateful bitch! I have done so much for you, and spent so much on you. You better fucking apologize!" You nod your head. "Sure, I''ll apologize." You take two steps forward then ram your knee into Niko''s balls then spit on him before grabbing your clothes, and walking out of the restroom.'
 
-													act 'Go to class':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'class'
+													act 'Go to class':gs 'clothing', 'wear_last_worn' & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'bulding'
 												end
 											end
 										end	
@@ -920,7 +921,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame 2':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/charmer1.jpg"></center>'		
 			'You tighten your arms around Niko, as he kisses your neck firmly. "Everything will be alright. I will find a way to fix this, just follow my lead and everything will be alright, ok?" You reply, "I will do whatever you say Nikolai, just please stay with me. I need you now more than ever." Niko responds, "Don''t worry <<$pcs_firstname>>, I''m not going anywhere, now let''s get you to class." Niko guides you to your first class.'
 
-			act 'Go to class':minut += 5 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'class'
+			act 'Go to class':minut += 5 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'bulding'
 		end
 	end	
 
@@ -946,7 +947,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame 2':
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/kiss2.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'You lean forward then give Niko a passionate kiss. After the kiss, Niko says, "You are such a incredible girl. I always feel so lucky to have you, now don''t forget to meet me after school. I will be waiting in the courtyard." You nod, as Niko turns around then walks away. You quickly get dressed then follow him to the hallway.'
 
-				act 'Go to class':minut += 5 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'class'
+				act 'Go to class':minut += 5 & gt 'gschool_lessons', 'bulding'
 			end
 		end	
 
@@ -961,7 +962,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame 2':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/school/restroom/ouch.jpg"></center>'
 			'You quickly push Niko away. "Fuck you! You are just lying to me like you always do! I''m not trusting you anymore! Stay away from me!" Niko gets noticeably angry, "You ungrateful bitch! I have done so much for you, and spent, so much on you. You better fucking apologize!" You nod your head. "Sure, I''ll apologize." You take two steps forward then ram your knee into Niko''s balls then spit on him before grabbing your clothes, and walking away.'
 
-			act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'class'
+			act 'Go to class':gt 'gschool_lessons', 'bulding'
 		end
 	end
 end

+ 1 - 1
locations/Nord.qsrc

@@ -162,7 +162,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'redlight':
 	else
 		'A shop for sex toys is closed and will open at 11:00.'
 	end
-	if bordel > 0 and hour >= 20 or bordel > 0 and hour <= 3:'Inside the courtyard is the entrance to the <a href="exec:gt ''bordel''">brothel</a>.'
+	if bordel > 0 and (hour >= 20 or hour <= 3):'Inside the courtyard is the entrance to the <a href="exec:gt ''bordel''">brothel</a>.'
 
 	act 'Return to the Industrial Region (0:05)': minut += 5 & gt 'Nord'
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/_attributes_school.qsrc

@@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 56:
 	CloBimbo = 1
 elseif ARGS[1] = 57:
 	CloQuality = 4
-	CloThinness = 5
+	CloThinness = 3
 	CloTopCut = 1
 	CloStyle2 = 4
 	CloSkirtShortness = 3

File diff suppressed because it is too large
+ 220 - 219
locations/abduction.qsrc


+ 149 - 149
locations/abductionCustomer.qsrc

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomerGateBuyout':
 	menu_off = 1
 	'Your master approaches you, "Hello, slave slut."'
-	'"I have a customer here, who came to rent you for a while. Do whatever he asks of you."'
+	'"I have a customer here that came to rent you for a while. Do whatever he asks of you."'
 	buyout = 1
 	act 'Yes, Master.':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomerGo'
 end
@@ -22,13 +22,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomerGo':
 	gs 'stat'
 	i = rand(1,3)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/ledonfour<<i>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Your master removes your regular chains and puts you on a leash.'
+	'Your master removes your regular chains and attaches a leash to your collar.'
 	'You are being led up the stairs into the house above your cellar.'
-	'When you came into the hall, your master orders you on your knees: "Kneel slave, and continue on your four legs, like a bitch you are."'
+	'When you enter the hall your master orders you on your knees, "Kneel slave then continue on your four legs just like the bitch you are."'
 	if pcs_vag = 0:
-		'You are led to a different room where the customer awaits. Your leash is handed to him.'
+		'You are led to the room where your customer awaits. Your leash is handed to him.'
 	else
-		'You are led to a different room where the customer awaits. Your leash is handed to him and your master leaves, closing the door behind him.'
+		'You are led to the room where your customer awaits. Your leash is handed to him and your master leaves. The only room door closes behind him leaving you alone with your customer.'
 	end
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer'
 end
@@ -174,35 +174,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer':
 		$bName = 'Leonid'
 		$bSurname = 'Nosov'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorekneel1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you are led to the room as usual, you see the man standing opposite to you.'
+		'As you are led to the room, as usual, you see the man standing opposite of you.'
 		'Right away you can see that he is just another bastard coming here to use your <<age>> years young body.'
-		'Your master leaves you in the center of the room, still kneeling with the leash attached to your collar.'
-		'As the door closes behind him, the customer slowly turns and you can finally see his face.'
+		'Your master leaves you in the center of the room. You are still kneeling with the leash attached to your collar.'
+		'As the door closes behind him the customer slowly turns, so you can finally see his face.'
 		act 'Look at his face':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-buyout1'
 	else
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorekneelmaster.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'The customer is a <<$heightType>> <<$bodyType>> <<$raceType>>.'
-		'Kneeling in front of him, you look up into his eyes and see a <<$charType>> look in his eyes.'
-		'You look back down and see his crotch directly in front of you. It''s obvious that he has something <<$dick_girth>> in his pants.'
+		'Kneeling in front of him, you look up into his eyes and see a <<$charType>> look there.'
+		'You then look down and see his crotch directly in front of you. It''s obvious that he has something <<$dick_girth>> in his pants.'
 	end
 
 	if pcs_vag = 0:
-		'Your master tells the customer: "So this is her. You can make sure she''s a virgin, her hymen is intact."'
+		'Your master tells the customer, "So this is her. You can make sure she''s a virgin as her hymen is intact."'
 		'"I believe you. She''s not the first virgin slut that you''ve delivered to me, is she?"'
 		'"No, she definitely is not! How many has it been so far, four, five?"'
-		'"In your establishment, I have paid for six virgins in total. This one is the seventh.'
+		'"In your establishment I have paid for six virgins in total. This one is the seventh.'
 		if age < 17:
 			'"Good number. Good slut, too. She''s only <<age>> years old, I suppose her vagina will be especially tight."'
 			'"That''s how I like it."'
 		else
-			'"Good number. Good slut, too."'
+			'"Good number. She''s a good slut, too."'
 			'"We will see."'
 		end
 		act 'Sob and wait':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-virgin1'
 	else
 		if buyout = 0:
-			'He is clearly expecting you to start doing something. You decide to:'
-			act 'Show him your assets':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-show'
+			'He is clearly expecting you to start work in pleasuring him. You decide to:'
+			act 'Show him your beautiful body':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-show'
 			act 'Unzip his pants':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-unzip'
 		end
 	end
@@ -212,14 +212,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-buyout1':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/leonid/leonid.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you look up at his face a chill runs down your spine - you know him!'
 	'You remember this man from one of the parent-school conferences. It''s Dimka''s dad, <<$bName>>..'
-	'And obviously he recognizes you too: "Oh... what the... who do we have here? Isn''t this the known missing person, <<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>?'
-	'With a trembling voice only a few words leave your mouth: "Th...that''s me mister <<$bSurname>>.."'
-	'"The police has already given up searching for you, you know. As if they made any effort, though..."'
+	'And obviously he recognizes you too, "Oh... what the... who do we have here? Isn''t this the known missing person, <<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>?'
+	'With a trembling voice only a few words leave your mouth, "Th...that''s me mister <<$bSurname>>.."'
+	'"You do realize that the police have already given up searching for you. As if they made any effort though..."'
 	'"I-I don''t even know how long I''ve been here. The only thing I remember is being a plaything for these perverts..."'
-	'After these words there is a short period of silence. You just keep kneeling like you are trained to, straightening your back with your breasts jutting forward so to give your customers something nice to look at.'
+	'After these words there is a short period of silence. You just keep kneeling, as you are trained with your back straight and breasts jutting forward, so you give your customers something nice to look at.'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorekneel2.jpg"></center>'
 	'Then suddenly the look on <<$bName>>''s face changes from surprised to something else.'
-	'He comes up to you and gently caresses your face: "Plaything, you say? And do you like it?"'
+	'He comes up to you and gently caresses your face, "Plaything, you say? And do you like it?"'
 	'Surprised by such a question you wait with your answer:'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'hard'
@@ -242,20 +242,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-buyout2':
 	'"I rather you wouldn''t let her know how I ended up."'
 	'"This establishment really gets the job done. I must commend the owner."'
 	'With these words he leaves the room. You can hear an echo of a discussion between him and your master.'
-	'After a while <<$bName>> comes back: "Let''s go <<$pcs_firstname>>.". He grabs your leash and leads you outside the room and into the hallway.'
+	'After a while <<$bName>> comes back, "Let''s go <<$pcs_firstname>>.". He grabs your leash and leads you outside the room to enter into the hallway.'
 	'"B-but... where are you taking me? I have never been in this part of the house before."'
-	'"You still don''t understand, slut? I own you now. I''ve bought you, I paid for you, you are my property. My slavegirl."'
-	'Surprised, you can only think; better be used by one man than by many random ones.'
-	'Still naked and collared, he leads you outside to his car and stuffs you into the trunk.'
+	'"You still don''t understand, do you slut? I own you now. I''ve bought you. I paid for you. You are now my property. You are... my slavegirl."'
+	'Surprised you can only think, it''s better to be used by one man than by many random ones.'
+	'You are still naked and collared as he leads you outside to his car. You are forced to get into his trunk.'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-buyoutLeave'
 end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-buyout3':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoreleonid1.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'"In that case let''s have some fun, before we go straight to business."'
-	'He slaps your face so hard you lose your balance and fall down on the floor.'
+	'"In that case let''s have some fun before we get straight to business."'
+	'He slaps your face so hard that you lose your balance and fall face first into the floor.'
 	'You are taken by surprise by the blow - you had started to think that you were finally about to be saved from all of this.'
-	'But <<$bName>> seems to be as perverted as all the other men that have used you previously.'
-	'Stepping above you as you helplessly lay on the floor, he opens his zipper and pulls his dick out of his pants.'
+	'However, <<$bName>> seems to be as perverted as all the other men that have used you previously.'
+	'Stepping above you as you helplessly lie on the floor, he opens his zipper to pull out his dick.'
 	'You can clearly see his <<dick>> cm long <<$dick_girth>> dick swing above you in the air.'
 	act 'Suck on it':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-suckTip'
 	gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
@@ -273,35 +273,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-buyout3':
 end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-buyout4':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorefuckanalroughleonid2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are left lying on the floor, <<$bName>>''s cum still flowing out of your gaping ass.'
-	'He goes through the door and you can hear an echo of a discussion between him and your master.'
-	'In a few minutes <<$bName>> comes back: "I really like you <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
-	'He grabs your leash and leads you outside the room and into the hallway.'
+	'You are left lying on the floor while <<$bName>>''s cum still flowing out of your gaping ass.'
+	'He goes through the door. You can hear an echo of your master''s and his voices discussing something you can''t make out.'
+	'In a few minutes <<$bName>> comes back, "I really like you <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
+	'He grabs your leash and leads you outside the room to enter into the hallway.'
 	'"B-but... where are you taking me? I have never been in this part of the house."'
-	'"You still don''t understand, slut? I own you now. I''ve bought you, I paid for you, you are my property. My slavegirl."'
-	'Surprised, you can only think; better be used by one man then by many random ones.'
-	'Still naked and collared, he leads you outside to his car and stuffs you into the trunk.'
+	'"You still don''t understand, do you slut? I own you now. I''ve bought you. I paid for you. You are now my property. You are... my slavegirl."'
+	'Surprised you can only think, it''s better to be used by one man than by many random ones.'
+	'You are still naked and collared as he leads you outside to his car. You are forced to get into his trunk.'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-buyoutLeave'
 end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-buyoutLeave':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/garage.jpg"></center>'
-	'Stuffed in the trunk you can hear the sound of the engine as he drives you somewhere unknown.'
-	'After about thirty minutes the car stops.'
-	'<<$bName>> opens the trunk. You appear to be in an underground parking garage.'
-	'You climb out, still naked and collared like a bitch. It seems he doesn''t care about your feelings at all.'
-	'He takes your leash and leads you through a door upstairs into a room that looks like an office.'
+	'Stuffed inside of the trunk you can only hear the sound of the engine and the pavement below as he drives you somewhere unknown.'
+	'After an unknown amount of time, the sound of the pavement stops and the engine shuts off. Their echoes from bouncing off the walls cease leaving only silence.'
+	'<<$bName>> opens the trunk. Your eyes blink to adjust to the dimly lit area and you that you are in a parking garage. There are no open spaces between the current level and the above one, so you think to yourself that this is underground.'
+	'You climb out still naked and collared like a bitch. It seems he doesn''t care about your feelings at all.'
+	'He takes your leash and leads you while you are on all fours up the stairs. You both exit through the upstairs stairwell door into a room that appears to be an office.'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'leonid', 'firstTime'
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin1':
 	minut += 10
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorevirgin1.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Your master leaves and you start to shiver.'
-	'"Don''t worry slut, it will hurt only a lot!" the customer is clearly enjoying himself.'
-	'You run to the far corner of the room, a futile attempt to get as far away from him as you can.'
-	'He walks up to you and grabs you, dragging you to the center of the room, where a sort of bench stands.'
-	'You are bound to the bench, your legs spread as wide as they go, giving him ideal access to your naked virgin pussy.'
-	'Your head is bound so that you have an unobstructed view on your own pussy. Probably to make sure you watch as he tears it apart.'
+	'Your master leaves and your body starts to shiver.'
+	'"Don''t worry slut, because this will only hurt a lot," the customer says. He is clearly enjoying himself.'
+	'You run to the far corner of the room. It''s a futile attempt to get as far away from him as you can.'
+	'He walks up to you and grabs you by the hair. He drags you as a painful, terrified scream emits from your throat to something that looks like a bench in the center of the room.'
+	'He forcefully yanks your hair to make you climb onto the bench like structure. He punches you in the stomach and you collapse. He flips you over onto your back and binds your arms above your head with handcuffs. He follows with putting your legs into stirrups then follows with legcuffs to hold you in place. You realize that this gives him unlimited access to your virgin pussy.'
+	'Your head is bound so that you have an unobstructed view on your own pussy. This is to ensure that you watch as he tears your terrorified cunt apart.'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-virgin2'
 end
@@ -309,7 +309,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin2':
 	minut += 2
 	pcs_mood = 5
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorevirgin2.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'He starts to undress, finishing off with his pants. As he pulls them down, you can finally can see his naked member fall out.'
+	'He starts to slowly undress, with his back to you, to enhance your terror. With a clink on the floor you can tell that his pants, holding a belt, hits the concrete floor. He slowly turns around to face you and you can finally see his naked body. His cock sways for a moment before stopping in front of your face.'
 	'"With renewed terror you start to cry, because the sight of his <<dick>> cm thick <<$dick_girth>> phallus is just terrifying."'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-virgin3'
@@ -317,19 +317,19 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin3':
 	minut += 10
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorevirgin3.jpg"></center>'
-	'He starts jerking his member, looking at you, bound and helpless, slowly making his cock hard.'
+	'He starts to jerk his cock, all the while looking at your eyes then to your bound and helpless nude body. The sight slowly makes his cock hard.'
 	'In his eyes you can see he relishes looking at you in your despair.'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-virgin4'
 end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin4':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorevirgin4.jpg"></center>'
-	'Finally he reaches for you, bringing the tip of his phallus in front of your pussy.'
-	'He covers his <<$dick_girth>> member in a thick layer of lube and starts slowly pressing against the opening of your vagina.'
-	'With his hands he spreads your pussy lips, easing the entry for his member.'
-	'"Now behold, girl. You are about to become a woman!"'
-	'He pushes it in with a single long trust, almost all the way inside your virgin pussy.'
-	'A terrible pain spreads throughout your lower body, a trickle of red blood running down the shaft of his cock.'
+	'He, finally, reaches for you and brings the tip of his phallus to the entrace of your virgin pussy.'
+	'He covers his <<$dick_girth>> member in a thick layer of lube then starts to slowly press against the opening of your vagina.'
+	'With his hands he spreads your pussy lips apart to help ease the entry for his member.'
+	'"Now behold girl. You are about to become a woman," he exclaims.'
+	'He pushes it in with a single long thrust that almost hits the bottom of your virgin cunt.'
+	'A terrible pain rips through your body that begins where your hymen was. It spreads like a fire throughout your body. A trickle of red blood runs down the shaft of his cock.'
 	pcs_vag += 1
 	stat['vaginal'] += 1
 	pain['vaginal'] += 20
@@ -339,9 +339,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin4':
 end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin5':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorevirgin5.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'He leaves his cock inside you, enjoying your facial expressions and the sight of blood coating his cock.'
-	'Then he removes it, renewing your pain and enjoying himself again.'
-	'Being content with his accomplishment, he enters your pussy again and this time he fucks you brutally, often hitting your cervix with his <<dick>> cm long thick <<$dick_girth>> dick.'
+	'He leaves his cock inside you. He looks directly at your face to enjoy the expression that is on your face that is the reaction to you seeing your blood that is coating his cock.'
+	'He then slams his cock back into you. The pain you feel is renewed while he grunts in pleasure the shows he is enjoying himself.'
+	'He feels accomplishment in his handiwork and sneers at you. He brutally thrusts into your pussy over and over again. He often hits your cervix with his <<dick>> cm long thick <<$dick_girth>> dick.'
 	pain['vaginal'] += 10
 	pain['cervix'] += 10
 	pain['tummy'] += 10
@@ -352,21 +352,21 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin6':
 	minut += 5
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorevirgin6.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'"And now whore, you will receive your first cum, as the breeder you were always supposed to be and that you are about to become."'
-	'With new tears streaming down your cheeks, he spurts his <<$cumType>> amount of sperm <<dick>> cm deep inside your belly.'
+	'"And now whore you will receive your first cum. You will become the breeder you were always supposed to be."'
+	'As renewed tears streams down your cheeks he spurts his <<$cumType>> amount of sperm <<dick>> cm deep inside your pussy. You can feel hit your cervix and you shudder at the thought of you getting intionally pregnant from this monster.'
 	gs 'cum_call', 'pussy', 'deflowering pervert'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Cry more':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-virgin7'
 end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin7':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorevirgin7.jpg"></center>'
-	'He rests with his dick deep inside you for a while, again enjoying the sight of your sobbing and despair.'
-	'"As his <<$dick_girth>> member becomes flaccid, he grabs a dildo that looks almost exactly like his own dick, probably having been modeled after it."'
-	'"The gift I just gave you, my cum, is not meant to just drip out of you. You will receive another gift. One that will keep it inside you."'
-	'With these words he lifts your ass in the air so the cum doesn''t flow out and pushes the dildo shaped after his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock all the way inside you, and then a little bit further. The dildo is pushed so deep into you that only its brightly coloured end is peeking out of your sorry hole.'
-	'When it''s in, he takes some pieces of duct tape and wraps it over your pussy, covering your lips and keeping the dildo firmly stuck inside.'
-	'He unties you from the bench, but tightens your hands behind your back, probably to keep you from removing the shaft.'
-	'"Now run, slut, and enjoy my gifts even more!" He leaves laughing.'
+	'He rests with his dick deep inside you for a while. He is enjoying the sight of your cries and the despair in your situation.'
+	'"As his <<$dick_girth>> member becomes flaccid it slides free of your abused pussy. He reaches out of sight and brings into view a dildo that looks almost exactly like his own dick. You think that it has probably been modeled from it."'
+	'"My cum that I just gave youis not meant to just drip out of you. You will receive another gift from me. One that will keep my present inside you."'
+	'With these words he lifts your ass in the air so the cum doesn''t flow out then brutally shoves the dildo, shaped after his <<dick>> cm <<$dick_girth>> cock, all the way inside you. The dildo is pushed so deep into you that only its brightly coloured base is peeking out of your abused hole.'
+	'When it''s in he takes some pieces of duct tape and wraps it over your pussy to cover your lips. This keeps the dildo firmly stuck inside.'
+	'He uncuffs you from the bench, but pulls your arms to be behind your back. This is probably to keep you from removing the shaft.'
+	'"Now run slut and enjoy my gifts even more," He leaves laughing.'
 	pain['vaginal'] += 10
 	pain['cervix'] += 10
 	pain['belly'] += 20
@@ -377,11 +377,11 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin8':
 	minut += 10
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorevirgin8.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your master comes in and finds you struggling on the ground, trying to shake the <<$dick_girth>> dildo out of you.'
-	'"Stop it, girl. You are just making it worse."'
+	'Your master comes in and finds you struggling on the ground. You are trying to shake the <<$dick_girth>> dildo out of you.'
+	'"Stop it... girl. You''ll just make it worse."'
 	'He grabs your leash and leads you back down to your cell.'
-	'As you follow the master by the leash, the plugged <<$dick_girth>> dildo moves inside you, causing you unpleasant sensations and pain.'
-	'Finally you are back at your bed.'
+	'As you follow your master, the plugged <<$dick_girth>> dildo moves inside you causing you further unpleasant sensations and pain.'
+	'Finally, you are back at your bed.'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Lie down':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-virgin9'
 end
@@ -390,7 +390,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin9':
 	pcs_sleep += 70
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorevirgin9.jpg"></center>'
 	'Still having your hands bound you are put on your bed and tied to the wall on a short leash.'
-	'Your master leaves and you are left lying on the bed, still having your vagina plugged with this <<dick>> cm long <<$dick_girth>> dildo.'
+	'Your master leaves and you are left lying on the bed. Your vagina is still plugged by this <<dick>> cm long <<$dick_girth>> dildo.'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Try to rest':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-virgin10'
 end
@@ -401,13 +401,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-virgin10':
 	'The sound of your master coming downstairs wakes you up.'
 	'You must have fallen asleep from the exhaustion.'
 	*nl
-	'Kneel and stick your ass high in the air, slut.'
+	'Kneel and stick your ass high in the air slut.'
 	'You are so desperate that you don''t even think about not doing what he orders you to do.'
-	'You just stick your ass as high as possible, pointing it so he has good access to both your ass and your ruthlessly plugged deflowered pussy.'
-	'Your master kneels down, removes the duct tape with a single pull and puts his fingers inside you, grabbing the stuck dildo.'
-	'Slowly he takes it out. Remnants of your virgin blood and the customer''s sperm are smeared all over it.'
-	'Your empty vagina gives you a rush of relief.'
-	'Your master unties you, adjusts your leash and as he leaves he tells you: "Be glad that you can be deflowered only once, silly girl."'
+	'You just stick your ass as high as possible. It points so he has good access to both your ass and your ruthlessly plugged deflowered pussy.'
+	'Your master kneels down to remove the duct tape with a single pull. You yelp in pain from the tiny pubic hairs that get ripped out with the tape. He puts his fingers inside you to grab the stuck dildo.'
+	'Slowly, he takes it out. Remnants of your virgin blood and the customer''s sperm are smeared all over it.'
+	'Your empty vagina gives you a rush of relief as the cool air rushes in to fill the void.'
+	'Your master unties you then adjusts your leash. As he leaves, he tells you, "Be glad that you can be deflowered only once you silly girl."'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abduction', 'abdRoom'
 end
@@ -417,7 +417,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-unzip':
 	minut += 2
 	gs 'stat'
 	'You reach towards his crotch and slowly start to unzip his trousers.'
-	'Pressing your face underneath his crotch, you pull down his shorts and a <<$dick_girth>> member falls out, landing directly on your face with a slapping sound.'
+	'Pressing your face underneath his crotch, you pull down his shorts and a <<$dick_girth>> member falls out. It lands directly onto your face with a slapping sound.'
 	if dick > 15 and dick < 25:
 		*nl
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/unzip1.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -425,7 +425,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-unzip':
 	elseif dick >= 25:
 		*nl
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/unzip2.mp4"></video></center>'
-		'You stare at his <<$dick_girth>> cock with horror, imagining what terrible things this sizeable penis will do to your tender body.'
+		'You stare at his <<$dick_girth>> cock with horror. You image what terrible things this sizeable penis will do to your tender body.'
 	elseif dick < 15 and pcs_throat > dick:
 		*nl
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/unzip3.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -469,8 +469,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-show':
 	minut += 10
 	i = rand(1,5)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoretease<<i>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You decide to tease the customer by showing him your sexy assets by jiggling your girly parts.'
-	'After some time behaving like a slut, it is obvious that he wants something more.'
+	'You decide to tease the customer by showing him your sexy breasts and jiggle them.'
+	'After some time of behaving like a slut, it is obvious that he wants something more.'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-unzip'
 end
 
@@ -488,18 +488,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-suckTip':
 
 	if $charType = 'sadistic':
 		if buyout = 1:
-			'<<$bName>> is starting to get very grumpy, obviously he''s not happy that all you can do is suck the tip of his cock.'
+			'<<$bName>> is starting to get very grumpy. He''s obviously he''s not happy that all you can do is suck the tip of his cock.'
 		else
-			'The customer is starting to get very grumpy, obviously he''s not happy that all you can do is suck the tip of his cock.'
+			'Your customer is starting to get very grumpy. He''s obviously not happy that all you can do is suck the tip of his cock.'
 		end
-		'Suddenly, without any warning, he takes a step back, pulling his <<$dick_girth>> member out of your mouth.'
-		'With an angry look in his eyes he slaps your face very hard, knocking you down to the cold floor.'
-		'He jumps on top of you with a piece of rope and ties you up.'
-		'"Even here one must train the slaves himself!" He shouts at you, forcing his <<$dick_girth>> dick all the way down your throat.'
-		'With your hands tied up you are unable to resist and all you can do is struggle to avoid suffocating as best you can...'
+		'Suddenly... without any warning, he takes a step back which pulls his <<$dick_girth>> member out of your mouth.'
+		'With an angry look in his eyes he slaps your face very hard which knocks you to the cold floor.'
+		'He jumps on top of your chest and with a piece of rope he ties you up.'
+		'"Even here, one must train the slaves himself," He shouts at you. He forces his <<$dick_girth>> dick all the way down your throat.'
+		'With your hands tied up you are unable to resist. All you can do is struggle to avoid suffocating as best you can...'
 		act 'Endure':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-suckForced'
 	elseif $charType = 'neutral':
-		'The customer seems displeased by your performance. You are starting to worry about what he''ll do if you don''t satisfy him well enough...'
+		'Your customer seems displeased by your performance. You are starting to worry about what he''ll do if you don''t satisfy him well enough...'
 		forceChance = rand(1, 100)
 		if forceChance <= 70:
 			act 'Continue sucking the tip':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-suckForced'
@@ -534,7 +534,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-suckTip':
 			end
 		end
 	elseif $charType = 'kind':
-		'The customer seems pleased by your sucking skills, so you continue to tease the tip of his <<$dick_girth>> cock, looking at him with as much sensual abandon that you can muster under the present conditions.'
+		'Your customer seems pleased by your sucking skills, so you continue to tease the tip of his <<$dick_girth>> cock. You look at him with as much sensual abandon that you can muster under the present conditions.'
 		act 'Continue sucking the tip':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-fuck'
 	end
 end
@@ -545,8 +545,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-suckForceself':
 	gs 'stat'
 	i = rand(1,3)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoreblowjobselfforced<<i>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'Knowing you will probably hurt yourself, you force yourself on his <<dick>> cm long cock all the way down to the balls anyway.'
-	'You start gagging and saliva is everywhere, but the customer seems more content now.'
+	'Knowing you will probably hurt yourself you force yourself on his <<dick>> cm long cock all the way down to be balls deep.'
+	'You start gagging and saliva freely flows from your stuffed mouth. Your customer seems more content now.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 15, 'sub', 'rough', 'deepthroat'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-fuck'
 end
@@ -560,13 +560,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-suckForced':
 	i = rand(1,6)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoreblowjobforced<<i>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	if buyout = 1:
-		'<<$bName>> starts growling and suddenly pulls his cock out of your mouth.'
+		'<<$bName>> growls and suddenly pulls his cock out of your mouth.'
 	else
-		'The customer starts growling and suddenly pulls his cock out of your mouth.'
+		'Your customer growls and suddenly pulls his cock out of your mouth.'
 	end
 	'"What kind of slave are you when you can''t swallow my <<$dick_girth>> dick?"'
-	'He ties you up and forces his cock down your throat, showing you little to no concern.'
-	'You start to gag as he keeps pushing his member deep inside you, sometimes leaving you on the brink of passing out.'
+	'He ties you up and forces his cock down your throat. He shows you little to no concern for your wellbeing.'
+	'You start to gag as he keeps pushing his member deep inside you. Sometimes it leaves you on the brink of passing out.'
 	vagOrAss = rand (0,1)
 	if buyout = 1:
 		act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-fuckAnalRough'
@@ -585,7 +585,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-suckDeep':
 	gs 'stat'
 	i = rand(1,6)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhoreblowjob<<i>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-	'You swallow his <<$dick_girth>> cock all the way down to the balls.'
+	'You swallow his <<$dick_girth>> cock all the way down to his balls.'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-fuck'
 end
 
@@ -595,20 +595,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-fuck':
 	gs 'stat'
 	endPunishment = 0
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorecockremoved.jpg"></center>'
-	'It seems the customer is done with fucking your mouth as he removes his dick and steps back a bit, looking at you with a <<$charType>> appetite in his eyes.'
+	'It seems the customer is done with fucking your mouth as he removes his dick then steps back a bit. He looks at you with a <<$charType>> appetite in his eyes.'
 	if charType = 'sadistic':
-		'"What should I do to you next, bitch?"'
+		'"What should I do to you next bitch?"'
 	else
-		'So how do you want it next, love?'
+		'So how do you want it next love?'
 	end
-	'You are not entirely sure if he means that as a question or if he''s just saying that to himself.'
+	'You are not entirely sure if he means that as a rhetorical question or not.'
 
 	if $charType = 'sadistic':
 		*nl
-		'You want to answer him, but the moment you open your mouth to talk, he slaps your face very hard, knocking you down on the cold floor.'
-		'"You thought I''m really interested in your slutty opinion?" He says laughing.'
+		'You want to answer him, but the moment you open your mouth to talk he slaps your face very hard. This knocks you down to the cold floor. Tears erupt from your eyes in response.'
+		'"You thought I''m really interested in your slutty opinion," He questionly laughing.'
 		'"A whore, and on top of that a slave whore, has no right to have an opinion."'
-		'You are unable to do anything except whimper like a small child. He ties you up and you know that it''s going to get even worse now.'
+		'You are unable to do anything, except whimper like a small child. He ties you up and you know that it''s going to get even worse now.'
 		vagOrAss = rand (0,1)
 		if vagOrAss = 0:
 			act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-fuckRough'
@@ -662,7 +662,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-beg':
 	minut += 2
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorebeg1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Please be kind to me sir, I''m so afraid and sore... please!'
+	'Please be kind to me sir. I''m so afraid and sore... please!'
 	if dick >= 15:'"I''m very afraid of your <<$dick_girth>> penis sir!"'
 	*nl
 	bekindChance = rand(1, 100)
@@ -679,7 +679,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-beg':
 		'A slave has no right to ask what will happen to it!'
 		hardChance = rand(1, 100)
 		if hardChance <= 50:
-			'"I will fuck you however I want, so shut up, bitch!"'
+			'"I will fuck you however I want, so shut up bitch!"'
 			if vagOrAss = 0:	
 				act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-fuckRough'
 			else
@@ -702,7 +702,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-fuckAnal':
 	i = rand(1,5)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorefuckanal<<i>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'The customer puts some lubricant on his <<$dick_girth>> cock and penetrates your ass.'
-	'He doesn''t care much about your feelings but he''s also not exactly hurting you on purpose.'
+	'He doesn''t care much about your feelings, but he''s also not exactly hurting you on purpose.'
 	*nl
 	if dick > pcs_ass:
 		pain['asshole'] += assDMG
@@ -731,10 +731,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-fuckAnalRough':
 	else
 		'The man takes you by your leash and positions your body as if it''s just meat to be used.'
 	end
-	'What comes next is an excruciatingly rough anal fuck that clearly shows he has no regard for all the pain you have to endure, whatsoever.'
+	'What comes next is an excruciatingly rough anal fuck that clearly shows he has no regard for all the pain you have to endure.'
 	*nl
 	if assDMG <= 0 :
-		'Fortunately his <<$dick_girth>> dick is not enough to damage your anus and intestines, not more than usual, anyway.'
+		'Fortunately, his <<$dick_girth>> dick is not enough to damage your anus and intestines, no more than usual, anyway.'
 		if buyout = 1:
 			act 'Be silent':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-cumAss'
 		else
@@ -745,7 +745,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-fuckAnalRough':
 			end
 		end
 	elseif assDMG <= 2:
-		'His <<$dick_girth>> dick is too big for you and you suffer a lot of stretching pain, as it bumps against your intestinal walls.'
+		'His <<$dick_girth>> dick is too big for you and you suffer a lot of stretching pain as it bumps against your intestinal walls.'
 		pain['asshole'] += assDMG
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-fuckAnalDeep'
@@ -769,23 +769,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-fuckAnalDeep':
 	'His member is <<$dick_girth>> and your ass is unable to accommodate it.'
 	if $charType = 'sadistic':
 		*nl
-		'But he doesn''t care about that, even though he is obviously aware of it, and fucks you furiously hard.'
-		'"How do like my <<$dick_girth>> cock inside you, bitch?"'
-		'"Is it deep enough for you, or should I push a bit more?"'
-		'Obviously he''s enjoying this a lot. Doing this is probably the reason he came to this slave house.'
+		'But he doesn''t care about it, even though he is obviously aware, as he fucks you furiously hard.'
+		'"How do like my <<$dick_girth>> cock inside you bitch?"'
+		'"Is it deep enough for you or should I push a bit more?"'
+		'Obviously, he''s enjoying this a lot. Doing this is probably the reason he came to this slave house.'
 		*nl
 	end
 	'With every stroke of his dick deep inside your intestines, you feel as if it''s your very stomach being poked by it.'
 	'A large bulge is noticeable every time he shoves it more than half the way inside you.'
 	*nl
 	if buyout = 1:
-		'After about half an hour of deep anal banging, <<$bName>> is about to cum.'
+		'After about a half an hour of deep anal banging, <<$bName>> is about to cum.'
 	else
-		'After about half an hour of deep anal banging, the man is about to cum.'
+		'After about a half an hour of deep anal banging, the man is about to cum.'
 	end
 
 	if (endPunishment = 1 or $charType = 'sadistic') and buyout = 0:
-		'"Now, I will feed you my seed, you unruly anal slave."'
+		'"Now, I will feed you my seed you unruly anal slave."'
 		act 'Be silent':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-cum'
 	elseif buyout = 1:
 		act 'Be silent':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-cumAss'
@@ -803,18 +803,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-fuckNormal':
 	if vagDMG <= 0:
 		'He''s not gentle, but it isn''t a very rough fuck either.'
 		'You have no problems accommodating his <<$dick_girth>> dick.'
-		'For some moments, you almost seem to enjoy it.'
+		'For some of the moments you almost seem to enjoy it.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 30, 'sub'
 		act 'Be silent':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-cumGate'
 	elseif vagDMG <= 2:
-		'His <<$dick_girth>> dick is too big for you and you suffer a lot of stretching pain, as it bumps against your vaginal walls.'
+		'His <<$dick_girth>> dick is too big for you and you suffer a lot of stretching pain as it bumps against your vaginal walls.'
 		pain['vaginal'] += vagDMG
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 30, 'sub', 'rough'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-fuckDeep'
 	else
 		'His <<$dick_girth>> dick is insanely big for you.'
-		'The tip of his cock even penetrates your cervix, or at least it seems like it to you. The pain is almost unbearable!'
+		'The tip of his cock even penetrates your cervix or at least it seems like it to you. The pain is almost unbearable!'
 		pain['vaginal'] += vagDMG
 		pain['cervix'] += vagDMG
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 30, 'sub', 'rough'
@@ -829,9 +829,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-fuckRough':
 	i = rand(1,5)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorefuckrough<<i>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	'The man takes you by your leash and positions your body as if it''s just meat to be used.'
-	'What comes next is an excruciatingly rough fuck that clearly shows he has no regard for all the pain you have to endure, whatsoever.'	
+	'What comes next is an excruciatingly rough fuck that clearly shows he has no regard for all the pain you have to endure.'	
 	if vagDMG <= 0:
-		'Fortunately his <<$dick_girth>> dick is not enough to damage your vagina, not more than usual, anyway.'
+		'Fortunately, his <<$dick_girth>> dick is not enough to damage your vagina, no more than usual, anyway.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 30, 'sub', 'bound'
 		if $charType = 'sadistic':
 			act 'Be silent':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-cum'
@@ -839,16 +839,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-fuckRough':
 			act 'Be silent':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-cumGate'
 		end
 	elseif vagDMG <= 2:
-		'His <<$dick_girth>> dick is too big for you and you suffer a lot of stretching pain, as it bumps against your vaginal walls.'
+		'His <<$dick_girth>> dick is too big for you and you suffer a lot of stretching pain as it bumps against your vaginal walls.'
 		pain['vaginal'] += vagDMG
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 30, 'sub', 'bound', 'rough'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-fuckDeep'
 	else
 		'His <<$dick_girth>> dick is insanely big for you.'
-		'The tip of his cock even penetrates your cervix, or at least it seems like it to you. The pain is almost unbearable!'
+		'The tip of his cock even penetrates your cervix or at least it seems like it to you. The pain is almost unbearable!'
 		'He seems to notice it too and realizes why you''re groaning so loudly.'
-		'Enjoying your suffering, he pushes his dick even deeper inside and you squeal like a pig being slaughtered.'
+		'Enjoying your suffering, he pushes his dick even deeper inside and you squeal like a pig being stuck.'
 		pain['vaginal'] += vagDMG * 2
 		pain['cervix'] += vagDMG * 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 30, 'sub', 'bound', 'rough'
@@ -867,16 +867,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-fuckDeep':
 	if $charType = 'sadistic':
 		*nl
 		'But he doesn''t care about that, even though he is obviously aware of it, and fucks you furiously hard.'
-		'"How do like my <<$dick_girth>> cock inside you, bitch?"'
-		'"Is it deep enough for you, or should I push a bit more?"'
+		'"How do like my <<$dick_girth>> cock inside you bitch?"'
+		'"Is it deep enough for you or should I push a bit more?"'
 		'"Do you feel me entering your cervix?"'
 		'Obviously he''s enjoying this a lot. Doing this is probably the reason he came to this slave house.'
 		*nl
 	end
-	'With every stroke of his dick deep inside your vagina, you feel as if it''s your very cervix being penetrated.'
+	'With every stroke of his dick deep inside your vagina you feel as if it''s your very cervix being penetrated.'
 	'A large bulge is noticeable every time he shoves it more than half the way inside you.'
 	*nl
-	'After about half an hour of deep vaginal banging, the man is about to cum.'
+	'After about half an hour of deep vaginal banging the man is about to cum.'
 	
 	if endPunishment = 1 or $charType = 'sadistic':
 		'"Now, I will feed you my seed, unruly fuck slave."'
@@ -963,14 +963,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-cumPussy':
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorecumpussy<<i>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	if vagDMG > 0:
 		'As he delivers his <<$cumType>> amount of cum inside your vagina, you can feel the tip of his <<$dick_girth>> cock at your cervix and even a bit inside it.'
-		'His bursting cum penetrates through the cervix directly into your womb, causing you both pain and a weird warm sensation.'
+		'His bursting cum penetrates through the cervix directly into your womb which causes you both pain and a weird warm sensation.'
 		pain['cervix'] += vagDMG
 		gs 'stat'
 	end
 	*nl
 	if cumVol = 3:
 		'With his <<$dick_girth>> dick buried inside your pussy, the customer delivers his <<$cumType>> amount of sperm inside you.'
-		'When he takes it out, some of the sperm drips out of you.'
+		'When he takes it out, some of the sperm drips out of your cunt.'
 	elseif cumVol = 4:
 		'With his <<$dick_girth>> dick buried deep inside your pussy, his tip touches your cervix.'
 		'He pumps your vagina full of his <<$cumType>> amount of sperm.'
@@ -981,13 +981,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-cumPussy':
 		'It feels painful but the warm sensation is weird and nothing like what you have felt before.'
 		'You feel as if your inner parts are stretching from the <<$cumType>> amount of cum being pumped into you.'
 		*nl
-		'When he pulls his <<$dick_girth>> cock out, a bulge is noticeable on the lower part of your belly.'
-		'The customer looks at it with joy and punches at the bulge with his fist.'
-		'The cum burst out of your pussy as if it shot out from an uncorked champagne bottle.'
+		'When he pulls his <<$dick_girth>> cock out the lower part of your belly bulges noticably.'
+		'The customer looks at it with joy then punches at your bulge with his fist.'
+		'The cum bursts out of your pussy as if it shot out from an uncorked champagne bottle.'
 		pain['cervix'] += 20
 		pain['tummy'] += 40
 	else
-		'The customer cums inside you. When he takes his <<$dick_girth>> cock out, a small part of his <<$cumType>> amount of sperm drips out of you.'
+		'The customer cums inside you. When he takes his <<$dick_girth>> cock out a small part of his <<$cumType>> amount of sperm drips out of your pussy.'
 	end
 
 	pcs_vag += 1
@@ -1002,7 +1002,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-cumAss':
 	i = rand(1,5)
 	'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/slavewhorecumass<<i>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 	if assDMG > 0:
-		'As he cums inside your anus, you can feel the banging of his <<$dick_girth>> cock against your intestinal wall.'
+		'As he cums inside your anus you can feel the banging of his <<$dick_girth>> cock against your intestinal wall.'
 		'A moving bulge is visible on your otherwise flat stomach as the phallus moves inside you.'
 		'His bursting cum fills you and it seems as if it went backwards up to your very stomach.'
 		pain['asshole'] += assDMG
@@ -1012,20 +1012,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-cumAss':
 	if cumVol = 3:
 		'His <<$dick_girth>> member is buried in your intestines.'
 		if buyout = 1:
-			'When <<$bName>> shoots his <<$cumType>> amount of cum, you can feel the warmth spreading inside you...'
+			'When <<$bName>> shoots his <<$cumType>> amount of cum you can feel the warmth spreading inside you...'
 		else
-			'When he shoots his <<$cumType>> amount of cum, you can feel the warmth spreading inside you...'
+			'When he shoots his <<$cumType>> amount of cum you can feel the warmth spreading inside you...'
 		end
 		'After his dick is removed, part of the sperm drips out of your gaping hole.'
 	elseif cumVol = 4:
-		'His <<$dick_girth>> member is buried <<dick>> centimeters deep inside your intestines, sometimes even hitting your intestinal walls.'
+		'His <<$dick_girth>> member is buried <<dick>> centimeters deep inside your intestines sometimes even hitting your intestinal walls.'
 		if buyout = 1:
-			'When <<$bName>> shoots his <<$cumType>> amount of cum inside you, you can feel your stomach growing larger...'
+			'When <<$bName>> shoots his <<$cumType>> amount of cum inside, you can feel your stomach grow larger...'
 		else
-			'When he shoots his <<$cumType>> amount of cum inside you, you can feel your stomach growing larger...'
+			'When he shoots his <<$cumType>> amount of cum inside the lower part of your belly bulges noticably...'
 		end
 		'You feel very full, even after he pulls his <<$dick_girth>> dick out of you.'
-		'After a few seconds a large portion of his <<$cumType>> amount of cum spurts out of you as if from a garden hose.'
+		'After a few seconds, a large portion of his <<$cumType>> amount of cum spurts out of you as if from a garden hose.'
 	elseif cumVol >= 5:
 		if buyout = 1:
 			'<<$bName>> <<$dick_girth>> member is buried <<dick>> centimeters deep inside your intestines. With each stroke hitting your intestinal walls forcefully.'
@@ -1036,8 +1036,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-cumAss':
 			'His <<$dick_girth>> member is buried <<dick>> centimeters deep in your intestines. With each stroke hitting your intestinal walls forcefully.'
 			'You feel an increasing amount of pressure and stretching pain as he pumps your intestines with a <<$cumType>> amount of cum.'
 			*nl
-			'When he pulls his <<$dick_girth>> cock out, a bulge is noticeable on the lower part of your belly.'
-			'The customer looks at it with joy and punches at the bulge with his fist.'
+			'When he pulls his <<$dick_girth>> cock out, the lower part of your belly bulges noticably.'
+			'The customer looks at it with joy then punches at the bulge with his fist.'
 			'The cum burst out of your pussy as if it shot out from an uncorked champagne bottle.'
 		end
 		pain['tummy'] += 20
@@ -1074,7 +1074,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-cumMouth':
 	if throatDMG > 0:
 		'Your aching throat is penetrated again.'
 		'He buries his <<$dick_girth>> cock to the hilt inside you.'
-		'While he''s cumming directly down your gullet, you can feel the pulsing of his member, painfully stretching your already sore throat.'
+		'While he''s cumming directly down your gullet you can feel the pulsing of his member. It painfully stretches your already sore throat.'
 		pain['throat'] += throatDMG
 		gs 'stat'
 	end
@@ -1088,7 +1088,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-cumMouth':
 		pcs_hydra += 40
 	elseif cumVol => 5:
 		'You are being pumped like a water bag. His <<$cumType>> amount of jizz fills your stomach and gullet.'
-		'You probably won''t need another meal today..'
+		'You probably won''t need another meal today...'
 		pcs_energy += 100
 		pcs_hydra += 90
 	else
@@ -1133,7 +1133,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-end':
 		'The customer goes to the bathroom and your master soon returns to you.'
 		act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-endPunishment'
 	elseif buyout = 1:
-		'<<$bName>> leaves you lying on the ground, his cum still dripping out of your ass.'
+		'<<$bName>> leaves you lying on the ground. His cum still dripping out of your ass.'
 		act 'Continue':gt 'abductionCustomer', 'abdCustomer-endPunishment'
 	else
 		'The customer goes to the bathroom and you are immediately lead back to the basement.'
@@ -1145,8 +1145,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-endPunishment':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/shared/abduction/sex/kneelingslave1.jpg"></center>'
 	'After the customer is done with you, he calls for your master.'
 	'He tells your master how unruly you were and that further training should be applied to you.'
-	'Then he leaves.'
-	'Kneeling you look up at your master, only to see a grim face. You can tell something bad will happen.'
+	'He then leaves.'
+	'Kneeling, you look up at your master only to see his grim face. You can tell something bad will happen.'
 	act 'Be led back to the basement':gt 'abduction', 'abdFailedCustomer'
 end
 

+ 34 - 34
locations/agentned.qsrc

@@ -17,18 +17,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Kirsanova Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'The head office of the largest real estate agency in the area.'
+	'This is the head office of the largest real estate agency in the Leningrad Oblast.'
 	*nl
-	'At the reception you notice a banner, which is written in large print:'
-	'"Please note, that all transactions of purchases and sales are made exclusively through your bank account. Rent payments excluded."'
+	'At the reception you notice a large print banner,'
+	'"Please be aware that all sales transactions are made exclusively through your bank account. Rent payments excluded from this policy."'
 
 	if home_owned[1] = 1 and ArendHouseSL > 0:
 		*nl
-		'You have <B><<ArendHouseSL>> days</B> rental on your St. Petersburg apartment remaining. '+iif(money >= home_rent[1],'You can make a rent <a href="exec:money -= home_rent[1] & home_owned[1] = 1 & ArendHouseSL += ArendHouseSL_due & gs ''$menu_obnovit''">payment</a> in cash.','You can''t afford to pay rent at the moment')+''
+		'You have <B><<ArendHouseSL>> days</B> rental on your St. Petersburg apartment remaining. '+iif(money >= home_rent[1],'You can make a rent <a href="exec:money -= home_rent[1] & home_owned[1] = 1 & ArendHouseSL += ArendHouseSL_due & gs ''$menu_obnovit''">payment</a> in cash.','You can''t afford to pay your rent at the moment')+''
 	end
 	if home_owned[4] > 0 and ArendHouseSL4 > 0:
 		*nl
-		'You have <B><<ArendHouseSL4>> days</B> rental on your Pushkin apartment. '+iif(money >= home_rent[4],'You can make a rent <a href="exec:money -= home_rent[4] & home_owned[1] = 1 & ArendHouseSL4 += ArendHouseSL_due & gs ''$menu_obnovit''">payment</a> in cash.','You can''t afford to pay rent at the moment')+''
+		'You have <B><<ArendHouseSL4>> days</B> rental on your Pushkin apartment. '+iif(money >= home_rent[4],'You can make a rent <a href="exec:money -= home_rent[4] & home_owned[1] = 1 & ArendHouseSL4 += ArendHouseSL_due & gs ''$menu_obnovit''">payment</a> in cash.','You can''t afford to your pay rent at the moment')+''
 	end
 
 	if home_owned[1] = 2 or home_owned[3] > 0 or home_owned[5] = 1:
@@ -36,7 +36,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		'You own the following property:'
 		*nl
 		if home_owned[1] = 2: 'An apartment in St. Petersburg residential area'
-		if home_owned[1] = 3: 'An apartment in St. Petersburg residential area, that is currently occupied by your tenants'
+		if home_owned[1] = 3: 'An apartment in St. Petersburg residential area which is currently occupied by your tenants'
 		if home_owned[3] > 0: 'An cottage located in the cooperative village'
 		if home_owned[5] = 1: 'A plot of land in the St. Petersburg suburbs'
 		*nl
@@ -51,7 +51,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		if home_owned[1] = 1:
 			act 'Cancel the lease of the city apartment':
 				cla & *nl
-				'Warning: You won''t be able to return to your apartment, when you cancel the lease.'
+				'Attention: You won''t be able to return to your apartment when you cancel the lease.'
 				
 				act 'Return': gt'agentned', 'start'
 				act 'Cancel it': home_owned[1] = 0 & gs 'set_home', 4 & gt'agentned', 'start'
@@ -59,7 +59,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		end
 		act 'Cancel the lease of the apartment in Pushkin':
 			cla & *nl
-			'Warning: You won''t be able to return to your apartment, when you cancel the lease.'
+			'Attention: You won''t be able to return to your apartment when you cancel the lease.'
 			
 			act 'Return': gt'agentned', 'start'
 			act 'Cancel it': home_owned[4] = 0 & gs 'set_home', 1 & gt'agentned', 'start'		
@@ -96,15 +96,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy':
 		end
 
 		if home_owned[3] = 0:
-			'There is a holiday cottage with an adjacent allotment in the village, for <<$home_value_txt[3]>> <b>₽</b>.'
+			'There is a holiday cottage with an adjacent allotment in the village for <<$home_value_txt[3]>> <b>₽</b>.'
 			*nl
 			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= home_value[3]:act 'Buy the cottage in the village': gt 'agentned','buy_dacha'
 		end
 
 		if home_owned[5] = 0:
-			'There is a plot in the suburbs with planning permission for a mansion for <<$home_value_txt[5]>> <b>₽</b>.'
+			'There is a plot of land in the suburbs with planning permission for a mansion for <<$home_value_txt[5]>> <b>₽</b>.'
 			*nl
-			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= home_value[5]:act 'Buy the plot in the suburbs': gt 'agentned','buy_Mansion'
+			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= home_value[5]:act 'Buy the land plot in the suburbs': gt 'agentned','buy_Mansion'
 		end
 	else
 		'We currently have no properties listed for sale.'
@@ -136,7 +136,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sell':
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 			minut += 30
-			'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the sale of your renovated apartment, with a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value1/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
+			'You spend thirty minutes filling out the paperwork for the sale of your renovated apartment. You will suffer a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value1/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
 			home_owned[1] = 0
 			ArendHouseSL = 0
 			if bankaccount = 1:
@@ -158,7 +158,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sell':
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 			minut += 30
-			'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the sale of your apartment, with a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value1/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
+			'You spend thirty minutes filling out the paperwork for the sale of your apartment. You will suffer a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value1/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
 			home_owned[1] = 0
 			ArendHouseSL = 0
 			if bankaccount = 1:
@@ -180,7 +180,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sell':
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 			minut += 30
-			'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the sale of your small cottage, with a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value3/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
+			'You spend thirty minutes filling out the paperwork for the sale of your small cottage. You will suffer a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value3/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
 			home_owned[3] = 0
 			if bankaccount = 1:
 				karta += home_value3/100*95
@@ -201,7 +201,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sell':
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 			minut += 30
-			'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the sale of the renovated cottage, with a loss of 1around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value3/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
+			'You spend thirty minutes filling out the paperwork for the sale of your small cottage. You will suffer a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value3/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
 			home_owned[3] = 0
 			if bankaccount = 1:
 				karta += home_value3/100*95
@@ -222,7 +222,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'sell':
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 			minut += 30
-			'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the vacant plot, with a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value5/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
+			'You spend thirty minutes filling out the paperwork for the vacant plot. You will suffer a loss of around 5% for fees and taxes. <<home_value5/100*95>> <b>₽</b> has been paid into your bank account.'
 			home_owned[5] = 0
 			if bankaccount = 1:
 				karta += home_value5/100*95
@@ -263,12 +263,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent':
 	act 'Return':gt'agentned', 'start'
 	
 	if home_owned[1] > 0 and home_owned[4] > 0:
-		'We currently have no properties for rent.'
+		'We currently have no properties listed for rent.'
 	elseif home_owned[1] = 0 and home_owned[4] = 0:
 		*nl
 		'There are two properties available for rent.'
 		*nl
-		'There is an apartment in the city residential area, and an apartment in Pushkin available'
+		'There are two apartments for available to rent. They are located in the city residential area and in Pushkin.'
 		act 'View the city apartment details': gt 'agentned', 'rent_cityres'
 		act 'View the Pushkin apartment details': gt 'agentned', 'rent_pushkin'
 	elseif home_owned[1] = 0:
@@ -287,8 +287,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_cityres':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'"We have a flat available right now in the residential area of St. Petersburg." The receptionist says as he starts pulling out the paperwork. "Rent is <<$home_rent_txt[1]>> ₽ and leases have to be renewed every 30 days, which can be taken automatically from your account or you can come in and pay directly. Last but not least, you have to make your first payment up front at signing."'
-	'<br>He pulls out a pen and slides the paperwork onto the counter. "Interested? We can get you moved in right away."'
+	'"We have a flat available right now in the St. Petersburg residential area." The receptionist says as he starts pulling out the paperwork, "Rent is <<$home_rent_txt[1]>> ₽ and leases have to be renewed every 30 days. Payment will be automatically deducted from your account or you can come into the office to pay. When you sign for the lease you must make your first month''s rental payment upfront."'
+	'<br>He pulls out a pen and slides the paperwork onto the counter. "Interested? You can move in right away," he calmly says.'
 
 	if money >= home_rent[1] or karta >= home_rent[1]:
 		act 'Agree and pay':
@@ -304,7 +304,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_cityres':
 			if ARRSIZE('home_owned') = 0:
 				gs 'set_home', 1
 			else
-				$set_homeyn = input("Whould you like to set this as your new home? (yes/no)")
+				$set_homeyn = input("Would you like to set this as your new home? (yes/no)")
 				if $set_homeyn = 'yes': gs 'set_home', 1
 				killvar '$set_homeyn'
 			end
@@ -313,13 +313,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_cityres':
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'You take the pen and start filling out the paperwork. Half an hour later, you’re handing over the money and getting the keys to your new apartment.'
+			'You take the pen then start filling out the paperwork. After writing for half an hour, you hand over the money and receive the keys to your new apartment.'
 
 			act 'Return':gt'agentned', 'start'
 		end
 	else
 		*nl
-		'You do not have enough money with you or in your bank account to rent this.'
+		'You do not have enough money with you or in your bank account to pay the rent.'
 	end
 	
 	act 'Decline':
@@ -329,7 +329,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_cityres':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'You shake your head, "Actually, I need more time to think about this."'
-		'<br>The receptionist seems a bit miffed, but says nothing as he grabs the paperwork and stuffs it back in a drawer.'
+		'<br>The receptionist seems a bit miffed, but says nothing as he takes back the paperwork and stuffs it back into his desk drawer.'
 
 		act 'Return':gt'agentned', 'start'
 	end
@@ -342,8 +342,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_pushkin':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'"We have a small apartment available right now in Pushkin’s city center. It’s a little bit pricey, but it’s been recently renovated to be more modern, and it looks quite nice. You won’t find a place like that outside of Pushkin." The receptionist says as he starts pulling out the paperwork. "Rent is <<$home_rent_txt[4]>> ₽ and leases have to be renewed every 30 days, which can be taken automatically from your account or you can come in and pay directly. Last but not least, you have to make your first payment up front at signing."'
-	'<br>He pulls out a pen and slides the paperwork onto the counter. "Interested? We can get you moved in right away."'
+	'"We have a small apartment available right now that is in Pushkin’s city center. It’s a little bit pricey, but it’s been recently renovated to be more modern. It looks quite nice, so you won’t find a place like that outside of Pushkin." The receptionist says as he starts pulling out the paperwork. "Rent is <<$home_rent_txt[4]>> ₽ and leases have to be renewed every 30 days, which can be taken automatically from your account or you can come in and pay directly. Last, but not least, you have to make your first payment up front at signing."'
+	'<br>He pulls out a pen and slides the paperwork onto the counter. "Interested? You can move in right away," he calmly says.'
 	
 	if money >= home_rent[4] or karta >= home_rent[4]:
 		act 'Agree and pay':
@@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_pushkin':
 			if ARRSIZE('home_owned') = 0:
 				gs 'set_home', 4
 			else
-				$set_homeyn = input("Whould you like to set this as your new home? (yes/no)")
+				$set_homeyn = input("Would you like to set this as your new home? (yes/no)")
 				if $set_homeyn = 'yes': gs 'set_home', 4
 				killvar '$set_homeyn'
 			end
@@ -367,7 +367,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_pushkin':
 			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 			*nl
-			'You take the pen and start filling out the paperwork. An hour later, you’re handing over the money and getting the keys to your new apartment.'
+			'You take the pen and start filling out the paperwork. After writting for an hour, you hand over the money and receive the keys to your new apartment.'
 
 			act 'Return':gt'agentned', 'start'
 		end
@@ -384,7 +384,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rent_pushkin':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo.jpg"></center>'
 		*nl
 		'You shake your head, "Actually, I need more time to think about this."'
-		'<br>The receptionist seems a bit miffed, but says nothing as he grabs the paperwork and stuffs it back in a drawer.'
+		'<br>The receptionist seems a bit miffed, but says nothing as he takes back the paperwork and stuffs it back into his desk drawer.'
 
 		act 'Return':gt'agentned', 'start'
 	end
@@ -400,7 +400,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy_cityres':
 	if ARRSIZE('home_owned') = 0:
 		gs 'set_home', 1
 	else
-		$set_homeyn = input("Whould you like to set this as your new home? (yes/no)")
+		$set_homeyn = input("Would you like to set this as your new home? (yes/no)")
 		if $set_homeyn = 'yes': gs 'set_home', 1
 		killvar '$set_homeyn'
 	end
@@ -408,7 +408,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy_cityres':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork to buy an apartment in the residential area. <<$home_value_txt[1]>> <b>₽</b> has been removed from your bank account.'
+	'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork to buy the apartment in the residential area. <<$home_value_txt[1]>> <b>₽</b> has been removed from your bank account.'
 
 	act 'Return':gt'agentned', 'start'
 end
@@ -423,7 +423,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy_dacha':
 	if ARRSIZE('home_owned') = 0:
 		gs 'set_home', 3
 	else
-		$set_homeyn = input("Whould you like to set this as your new home? (yes/no)")
+		$set_homeyn = input("Would you like to set this as your new home? (yes/no)")
 		if $set_homeyn = 'yes': gs 'set_home', 3
 		killvar '$set_homeyn'
 	end
@@ -432,7 +432,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy_dacha':
 	'<center><b><font color = maroon>Real Estate Agency</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/realestate/agenstvo_paperwork.jpg"></center>'
 	*nl
-	'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the purchase of a cottage with a garden on the co-op 5km up the north road. <<$home_value_txt[3]>> <b>₽</b> has been removed from your bank account.'
+	'You spend half an hour filling in the paperwork for the purchase of a cottage with a garden in the co-op. It''s located 5km away from St. Petersburg. <<$home_value_txt[3]>> <b>₽</b> has been removed from your bank account.'
 
 	act 'Return':gt'agentned', 'start'
 end
@@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'buy_Mansion':
 	if ARRSIZE('home_owned') = 0:
 		gs 'set_home', 5
 	else
-		$set_homeyn = input("Whould you like to set this as your new home? (yes/no)")
+		$set_homeyn = input("Would you like to set this as your new home? (yes/no)")
 		if $set_homeyn = 'yes': gs 'set_home', 5
 		killvar '$set_homeyn'
 	end

+ 16 - 16
locations/alexgang.qsrc

@@ -5,17 +5,17 @@ menu_off = 1
 frost = 0
 minut += 30
 gs 'stat'
-'Arriving at Alexei''s apartment, he offers you various alcoholic beverages before sitting down at a table in the living room to chat, as always.'
-'Suddenly, the doorbell rings and Alexei walks out to answer it. You hear a man''s voice in the hallway: "Hello Alexei, I hope I''m not disturbing?" Alexey answers, "Not at all, my friend. Come in."'
+'After arriving at Alexei''s apartment, he offers you various alcoholic beverages before sitting down at a table in the living room to chat as he always does.'
+'Suddenly, the doorbell rings and Alexei walks towards the door to answer it. You hear a man''s voice in the hallway, "Hello Alexei, I hope I''m not disturbing?" He answers, "Not at all, my friend. Come in."'
 
 if alexgangbang = 0:
-	'You''re a little surprised and wondering who it could be. Then you see Alexander E., the nightclub owner, enter the room. He greets you and sits down on a chair.'
-	'Alexei pours alcohol into three glasses, and you spend some time drinking and talking together. Before long, Alexander asked you to call him by his nickname: Sasha.'
-	'After a while, though, Alexei puts the bottle aside and pulls his dick out of his pants. "Come over here, <<$pcs_firstname>>", he says. You look at him in surprise and glance at Sasha. Alexei urges you on, "C''mon, don''t worry, everything is fine."'
+	'You''re a little surprised and wondering who it could be, but then you see Alexander, the nightclub owner, enter the room. He greets you as he sits down on a chair.'
+	'Alexei pours alcohol into three glasses and hands them out. All of you spend some time drinking and talking together. Before long, Alexander asked you to call him by his nickname, Sasha.'
+	'After a while, Alexei puts the bottle aside to pull out his dick from his pants. "Come over here <<$pcs_firstname>>", he commands. You look at him in surprise then glance at Sasha. Alexei urges you on, "C''mon and get over here. Don''t worry since everything is fine."'
 else
-	'You see Alexander E., the nightclub owner, enter the room. He greets you and sits down on a chair.'
-	'Alexei pours alcohol in three glasses, and you spend some time drinking, talking, laughing.'
-	'After a while, Alexei puts the bottle aside and pulls his dick out of his pants. "Get over here, <<$pcs_firstname>>", he says.'
+	'You see Alexander, the nightclub owner, enter the room. He greets you as he sits down on a chair.'
+	'Alexei pours alcohol in three glasses in which you spend some time drinking, talking, and laughing together.'
+	'After a while, Alexei puts the bottle aside to pull out his dick from his pants. "Get over here <<$pcs_firstname>>", he commands.'
 end
 
 act 'Get on your knees and give head':
@@ -23,13 +23,13 @@ act 'Get on your knees and give head':
 	alexgangbang += 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/blowjob/bj<<rand(29, 41)>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'Kneeling before him, you pull Alexei''s pants all the way down and take a firm grasp of his erect cock.'
+	'Kneeling before him, you pull Alexei''s pants all the way down then take a firm grasp of his erect cock.'
 	'Leaning in closer, you give it a quick kiss with your <<$liptalk>> before guiding it into your mouth.'
-	'As you suck on his hard dick, Alexei relaxes in his chair, letting you take care of his needs.'
-	'Suddenly, he removes his penis from your mouth, pulls you up on your feet and leads you to the bedroom.'
+	'As you suck on his hard dick, he relaxes in his chair and lets you take care of his needs.'
+	'Suddenly, he removes his penis from your mouth and pulls you up on your feet. He leads you to his bedroom.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 	gs 'stat'
-	'Alexei lifts you up and puts you down in front of the bed where Sasha has seated himself. He puts you on all fours, facing Sasha who is starting to unbutton his pants, leaving no doubt as to what you''re expected to do.'
+	'Alexei lifts you up to put you down in front of the bed where Sasha has seated himself. He tells you to get on all fours with your head placed before Sasha. Sasha who starts to unbutton his pants which leaves no doubt as to what you''re expected to do.'
 
 	act 'Give Sasha a blowjob':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -45,12 +45,12 @@ act 'Get on your knees and give head':
 		swallow += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/group/gang<<rand(16, 25)>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'Standing on all fours, you start sucking Sasha''s limp cock. As you lick, suck and roll your tongue around his dick, you can feel it slowly stiffening in your mouth.'
+		'Kneeling on all fours, you start sucking Sasha''s limp cock. As you lick, suck, and roll your tongue, while using the shaft with your hands, around his dick that you can feel it slowly stiffen in your mouth.'
 		gs 'dinSex', 'wear_condom'
-		'The position you''re in doesn''t make it easy for you to move your head the right way. However, with some determination you manage to keep Sasha''s cock in your mouth.'
+		'The position you''re in doesn''t make it easy for you to move your head up and down. However, with some determination you manage to keep Sasha''s cock in your mouth with the help of your hands.'
 		gs 'dinsex','vaginal_sex',10
-		'After a while, you feel Sasha''s hard cock begin to throb in your mouth. With a low grunt, he thrusts his hips forward and you feel his sperm coat the insides of your mouth.'
-		'He doesn''t cum a whole lot, and you easily manage to swallow all of it, but that doesn''t diminish the inherent thrill of the threesome you just had.'
+		'After a while, you feel Sasha''s hard cock begin to throb in your mouth and hands. With a low grunt, he thrusts his hips forward and you feel his sperm coat the insides of your mouth.'
+		'He doesn''t cum a whole lot, so you can easily manage to swallow all of it. It still doesn''t diminish the inherent thrill of the threesome you just participated in.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'group'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'

+ 3 - 3
locations/brother.qsrc

@@ -189,7 +189,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 			if father_go = 1:
 				if brotherSex < 5 and brotherkiss >= 1 and brotherkisstalk < 1:
 					act'Talk about the kiss':gt 'brother', 'kiss_talk'
-				elseif brotherkisstalk = 1 or brotherSex > 4:
+				elseif brotherkisstalk = 1 or brotherSex > 4 and momloc ! 19:
 					act'Make out with your brother':gt 'brother2', 'kiss'
 				end
 				if NatbelQW['KolkaTease'] = 1:
@@ -294,7 +294,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				'Your brother is playing video games.'
 			end
 
-			if hour >= 23 and hour < 24 and brotherSex > 4 and brotherNightSex ! daystart:
+			if hour = 23 and brotherSex > 4 and brotherNightSex ! daystart and momloc ! 19:
 				'As you approach your sleeping brother, he suddenly opens his eyes and looks at you.'
 				!!sub/dom dialog needs fixing
 				!!if sub > 0 or (evgenQW >= 4 and pav_slut >= 75):
@@ -324,7 +324,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				!!end
 			end
 
-			if father_go = 1 and hour >= 18 and hour < 23 and brotherSex > 4 and brotherEvSex ! daystart:
+			if father_go = 1 and hour >= 18 and hour < 23 and brotherSex > 4 and brotherEvSex ! daystart and momloc ! 19:
 				'When you get close, Kolka turns to you.'
 				!!sub/dom dialog needs fixing
 				!!if sub > 0 or (evgenQW >= 4 and pav_slut >= 75):

+ 1 - 1
locations/din_pav.qsrc

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ $koncepodos1 = {
     '"You want to rent it"?'
     '"I want to look at it first. If its too much hassle to do your job I can leave."'
     '"OK then you can go look at the apartment. It''s upstairs, room 17. I will not go with you, my legs ache."'
-    'What an unpleasant man. He has you sign a registrar and then says, "Follow me <<pcs_firstname>>."'
+    'What an unpleasant man. He has you sign a registrar and then says, "Follow me <<$pcs_firstname>>."'
     'You follow him through the dimly lit lobby and down a corridor. You can hear barely discernible sounds from various apartments, merging into ghostly mutterings that ste the hair on the back of your neck on end. You hear what sounds like a whisper, "Run."'
     'Stopping by an old dresser the old man rummages through a drawer, "Looks like you are in luck, my dear..."'
     'The old man puts a key in hand, "Here."'

+ 12 - 11
locations/din_van.qsrc

@@ -825,7 +825,7 @@ $pirNips = {
 	:loopnipple_pir
 		if dyneval('RESULT = PirsF<<i>>_owned') = 1:*p '<a href="exec:pirsF = <<i>> & pierWearCount += 1 & dynamic $pirManage"><img src="images/pc/body/piercings/f<<i>>.jpg"	height="250" ></a>'
 		i += 1
-	if i <= 4:jump 'loopnipple_pir'
+	if i <= 7:jump 'loopnipple_pir'
 }
 
 $pirNavel = {
@@ -845,16 +845,17 @@ $pirPubic = {
 	:looppubic_pir
 		if dyneval('RESULT = PirsG<<i>>_owned') = 1:*p '<a href="exec:pirsG = <<i>> & pierWearCount += 1 & dynamic $pirManage"><img src="images/pc/body/piercings/g<<i>>.jpg"	height="250" ></a>'
 		i += 1
-	if i <= 7:jump 'looppubic_pir'
+	if i <= 10:jump 'looppubic_pir'
 }
 
 $pirManage = {
 	cla
 	menu_off = 1
+	'<center>Piercing Management</center>'
 	*nl
 	if pirsA > 0:
 		if pirsA < 10000:
-			'<center><a href="exec:pirsA = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove tongue piercing</a>.</center>'
+			'<center><a href="exec:*clr & cla & pirsA = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove tongue piercing</a>.</center>'
 		else
 			'<center><a href="exec:dynamic $pirTongue">Insert tongue piercing</a>.</center>'
 		end
@@ -862,7 +863,7 @@ $pirManage = {
 	end
 	if pirsB > 0:
 		if pirsB < 10000:
-			'<center><a href="exec:pirsB = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove lip piercing</a>.</center>'
+			'<center><a href="exec:*clr & cla & pirsB = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove lip piercing</a>.</center>'
 		else
 			'<center><a href="exec:dynamic $pirLip">Insert lip piercing</a>.</center>'
 		end
@@ -870,7 +871,7 @@ $pirManage = {
 	end
 	if pirsC > 0:
 		if pirsC < 10000:
-			'<center><a href="exec:pirsC = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove ear piercings</a>.</center>'
+			'<center><a href="exec:*clr & cla & pirsC = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove ear piercings</a>.</center>'
 		else
 			'<center><a href="exec:dynamic $pirEars">Insert ear piercings</a>.</center>'
 		end
@@ -878,7 +879,7 @@ $pirManage = {
 	end
 	if pirsD > 0:
 		if pirsD < 10000:
-			'<center><a href="exec:pirsD = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove nose piercing</a>.</center>'
+			'<center><a href="exec:*clr & cla & pirsD = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove nose piercing</a>.</center>'
 		else
 			'<center><a href="exec:dynamic $pirNose">Insert nose piercing</a>.</center>'
 		end
@@ -886,7 +887,7 @@ $pirManage = {
 	end
 	if pirsE > 0:
 		if pirsE < 10000:
-			'<center><a href="exec:pirsE = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove eyebrow piercing</a>.</center>'
+			'<center><a href="exec:*clr & cla & pirsE = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove eyebrow piercing</a>.</center>'
 		else
 			'<center><a href="exec:dynamic $pirBrow">Insert eyebrow piercing</a>.</center>'
 		end
@@ -894,7 +895,7 @@ $pirManage = {
 	end
 	if pirsF > 0:
 		if pirsF < 10000:
-			'<center><a href="exec:pirsF = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove nipple piercings</a>.</center>'
+			'<center><a href="exec:*clr & cla & pirsF = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove nipple piercings</a>.</center>'
 		else
 			'<center><a href="exec:dynamic $pirNips">Insert nipple piercings</a>.</center>'
 		end
@@ -902,7 +903,7 @@ $pirManage = {
 	end
 	if pirsN > 0:
 		if pirsN < 10000:
-			'<center><a href="exec:pirsN = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove navel piercing</a>.</center>'
+			'<center><a href="exec:*clr & cla & pirsN = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove navel piercing</a>.</center>'
 		else
 			'<center><a href="exec:dynamic $pirNavel">Insert navel piercing</a>.</center>'
 		end
@@ -910,7 +911,7 @@ $pirManage = {
 	end
 	if pirsG > 0:
 		if pirsG < 10000:
-			'<center><a href="exec:pirsG = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove pussy piercings</a>.</center>'
+			'<center><a href="exec:*clr & cla & pirsG = 10000 & pierWearCount -= 1 & dynamic $pirManage">Remove pussy piercings</a>.</center>'
 		else
 			'<center><a href="exec:dynamic $pirPubic">Insert pussy piercings</a>.</center>'
 		end
@@ -1096,7 +1097,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'private':
 		'<a href="exec:dynamic $use_bcream & gt $loc, $metka">Apply breast cream.</a> Uses left: <<bcream_have>>.'
 	end
 
-	if pirsA + pirsB + pirsC + pirsD + pirsE + pirsF + pirsN + pirsG + pirsGL > 0:'<a href="exec:dynamic $pirManage">Manage your piercings</a>'
+	if pirsA + pirsB + pirsC + pirsD + pirsE + pirsF + pirsN + pirsG + pirsGL > 0:'<a href="exec:*clr & cla & dynamic $pirManage">Manage your piercings</a>'
 
 	if fillimplant = 1 and siliconeBag >= 1:'<a href="exec:cls & siliconeBag -= 1 & silicone += 10 & gt $loc, $metka">Inject silicone into your breast implants.</a>'
 	if fillimplant = 1 and silicone >= 20:'<a href="exec:cls & silicone -= 10 & gt $loc, $metka">Drain silicone from your breast implants.</a>'

+ 3 - 3
locations/ender.qsrc

@@ -240,7 +240,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'loss':
 			mood -= 10
 			christinaphotos = 3
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girls/christina/beach/onall4s.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/christina/beach/onall4s.jpg"></center>'
 			'Now spread those legs so we can get a nice shot of that disgusting pussy and dirty ass of yours." You blush with shame but do as she says, she takes several more pictures laughing the whole time. "You are going to do anything I want any time I say it from now on or everyone in school will see these and I will kick your ass again, right?" You meekly nod on the verge of tears.'
 			*nl
 			'Then you feel a swift kick from behind, between your open legs, as Christina kicks you in the twat hard. You cry out and tears running down your cheeks as you grab your crotch and roll over onto your side with your legs squeezed closed. "Then say it! Say you are a little cunt and will do anything I say anytime I say it." Christina demands as she towers over you.'
@@ -414,7 +414,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'win':
 		fightEnding = 0
 		Win += 1
 		mood += 10
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girls/christina/beach/losefight.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/christina/beach/losefight.jpg"></center>'
 		'Christina is a hell of a fighter, she is fast, hits harder than most boys and knows what she is doing. Yet despite all that she just isn''t a match for you. You finally land a few hard blows and she goes down gasping for breath, holding up her hand in a signal of no more, you smirk as she lays beaten at your feet. You reach down and pull her phone out of her pocket and then heave it as far as you can out into the lake where it plops into the water. Lina seems to be stunned that you beat Christina and she looks a little afraid of you. "Now neither you you seen me here naked right? And since I wasn''t here, that means I didn''t beat you ass, but from now on we both know who''s the bitch don''t we?" You say to both of them. Lina nods quickly Christina a little slower but she nods as well. With that you walk away from the two of them as Lina helps Christina back to her feet.'
 		act 'Walk off': gt 'gLake'
 	end
@@ -716,7 +716,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'surrender':
 			mood -= 10
 			christinaphotos = 3
 			gs 'stat'
-			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girls/christina/beach/onall4s.jpg"></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/christina/beach/onall4s.jpg"></center>'
 			'Now spread those legs so we can get a nice shot of that disgusting pussy and dirty ass of yours." You blush with shame but do as she says, she takes several more pictures laughing the whole time. "You are going to do anything I want any time I say it from now on or everyone in school will see these and I will kick your ass again, right?" You meekly nod on the verge of tears.'
 			*nl
 			'Then you feel a swift kick from behind, between your open legs, as Christina kicks you in the twat hard. You cry out and tears running down your cheeks as you grab your crotch and roll over onto your side with your legs squeezed closed. "Then say it! Say you are a little cunt and will do anything I say anytime I say it." Christina demands as she towers over you.'

+ 356 - 350
locations/family_schedule.qsrc

@@ -8,387 +8,393 @@ anyaloc = 0
 kolloc = 0
 
 !!---ANYA---------------------------------------
-
-if week <= 5:
-	if hour = 6 and minut < 45:
-		!!Asleep
-		anyaloc = 1
-	elseif hour = 7 and minut < 15:
-		!!Family breakfast
-		anyaloc = 2
-	elseif hour = 7 and minut < 30:
-		!!Helping mom clean up
-		anyaloc = 3
-	elseif hour < 8:
-		!!In Bedroom
-		anyaloc = 4
-	elseif hour = 8 and minut < 20:
-		!!Shower*
-        anyaloc = 5
-	elseif hour = 8 and minut < 30:
-		!!Walk to work
-		anyaloc = 6
-	elseif hour < 16:
-		!!Work
-		anyaloc = 7
-	elseif hour = 16 and minut < 10:
-		!!Walk home from work
-		anyaloc = 8
-	elseif hour < 18:
-		!!Personal activities: Relaxing in bedroom, working out at the community center, etc (this is also the time frame Roma comes over some times)
-		anyaloc = func('shortgs', 'rand_pick', '', 9, 10, 11)
-	elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
-		!!Family dinner
-		anyaloc = 12
-	elseif hour < 22:
-		!!Goes out to hang out with friends/Roma (this could be random so sometimes she stays home to give Sveta more time to talk to her)
-		anyaloc = func('shortgs', 'rand_pick', '', 13, 14, 15)
-	else
-		!!In her room
-		anyaloc = 15
-	end
-else
-	if week = 7 and hour < 2:
-		!!Goes to a party
-		anyaloc = 24
-	elseif week = 7 and hour = 2 and minut < 20:
-		!!In her room drunk after party
-		anyaloc = 25
-	elseif hour < 9:
-		!!Asleep
-		anyaloc = 1
-	elseif hour = 9 and minut < 20:
-		!!Eat something in kitchen
-		anyaloc = 16
-	elseif hour = 9 and minut < 40:
-		!!Shower*
-        anyaloc = 5
-	elseif hour < 10:
-		!!In Bedroom
-		anyaloc = 4
-	elseif hour < 16:
-		!!On nice days goes to the beach, sometimes goes to the city with friends, or stays at home watching tv or reading etc
-        anyaloc = rand(17,19)
-	elseif hour = 16 and minut < 15:
-		!!Walk to community center
-		anyaloc = 20
-	elseif hour = 17 and minut < 45:
-		!!Works out at the community center
-		anyaloc = 21
-	elseif hour < 18:
-		!!Walk home
-		anyaloc = 22
-	elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
-		!!Family dinner
-		anyaloc = 12
-    elseif hour < 19:
-		if week = 7:
-			!!helps mom clean up after dinner
-			anyaloc = 23
+!! sister_opr_indorf = 1 means Anya is in the village
+if sister_opr_indorf = 0:
+	if week <= 5:
+		if hour = 6 and minut < 45:
+			!!Asleep
+			anyaloc = 1
+		elseif hour = 7 and minut < 15:
+			!!Family breakfast
+			anyaloc = 2
+		elseif hour = 7 and minut < 30:
+			!!Helping mom clean up
+			anyaloc = 3
+		elseif hour < 8:
+			!!In Bedroom
+			anyaloc = 4
+		elseif hour = 8 and minut < 20:
+			!!Shower*
+			anyaloc = 5
+		elseif hour = 8 and minut < 30:
+			!!Walk to work
+			anyaloc = 6
+		elseif hour < 16:
+			!!Work
+			anyaloc = 7
+		elseif hour = 16 and minut < 10:
+			!!Walk home from work
+			anyaloc = 8
+		elseif hour < 18:
+			!!Personal activities: Relaxing in bedroom, working out at the community center, etc (this is also the time frame Roma comes over some times)
+			anyaloc = func('shortgs', 'rand_pick', '', 9, 10, 11)
+		elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
+			!!Family dinner
+			anyaloc = 12
+		elseif hour < 22:
+			!!Goes out to hang out with friends/Roma (this could be random so sometimes she stays home to give Sveta more time to talk to her)
+			anyaloc = func('shortgs', 'rand_pick', '', 13, 14, 15)
 		else
-			!!Goes to a party
-			anyaloc = 24
+			!!In her room
+			anyaloc = 15
 		end
 	else
-		if week = 7:
-			!!in her room 
-			anyaloc = 15
-		else
+		if week = 7 and hour < 2:
 			!!Goes to a party
 			anyaloc = 24
+		elseif week = 7 and hour = 2 and minut < 20:
+			!!In her room drunk after party
+			anyaloc = 25
+		elseif hour < 9:
+			!!Asleep
+			anyaloc = 1
+		elseif hour = 9 and minut < 20:
+			!!Eat something in kitchen
+			anyaloc = 16
+		elseif hour = 9 and minut < 40:
+			!!Shower*
+			anyaloc = 5
+		elseif hour < 10:
+			!!In Bedroom
+			anyaloc = 4
+		elseif hour < 16:
+			!!On nice days goes to the beach, sometimes goes to the city with friends, or stays at home watching tv or reading etc
+			anyaloc = rand(17,19)
+		elseif hour = 16 and minut < 15:
+			!!Walk to community center
+			anyaloc = 20
+		elseif hour = 17 and minut < 45:
+			!!Works out at the community center
+			anyaloc = 21
+		elseif hour < 18:
+			!!Walk home
+			anyaloc = 22
+		elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
+			!!Family dinner
+			anyaloc = 12
+		elseif hour < 19:
+			if week = 7:
+				!!helps mom clean up after dinner
+				anyaloc = 23
+			else
+				!!Goes to a party
+				anyaloc = 24
+			end
+		else
+			if week = 7:
+				!!in her room 
+				anyaloc = 15
+			else
+				!!Goes to a party
+				anyaloc = 24
+			end
 		end
 	end
 end
 
-
-
 !!---MOM--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
-
-if week <= 5:
-	if hour < 5 or (hour = 5 and minut < 30):
-		!!Asleep, if Sveta knocks she''ll ask to wake Kolka
-		momloc = 1
-	elseif hour = 5 and minut < 50:
-		!!shower
-		momloc = 2
-	elseif hour < 6 or (hour = 6 and minut < 10):
-		!! Getting dressed in her room and wakes Vladimir, if Sveta walks by she''ll ask to wake Kolka (Occasional morning quicky)
-		momloc = 3
-	elseif hour = 6 or (hour = 7 and minut < 30):
-		momloc = 4
-		if hour = 6 and minut < 40:
-			!! Make Breakfast
-			momloc[1] = 1
-		elseif hour = 6 and minut < 45:
-			!! Set breakfast table - ask Sveta to do it if she comes into the kitchen at that time
-			momloc[1] = 2
-		elseif hour = 6 or (hour = 7 and minut < 15):
-			!! Family breakfast
-			momloc[1] = 3
-		else
-			!! Clean up breakfast table
-			momloc[1] = 4
-		end
-	elseif hour = 7 or (hour = 8 and minut < 10):
-		!!Cleaning random room in the house
-		!!variable set in cikl
-		momloc = momcleaning
-	elseif hour = 8 and minut < 30:
-		!! Walking to work
-		momloc = 5
-	elseif hour < 16 and week < 5:
-		!!Working in the cafe. On Friday she stays until 18:00
-		momloc = 6
-	elseif hour = 16 and minut < 40 and week < 5:
-		!!Buying groceries for dinner and other stuff needed for home at the supermarket
-		momloc = 7
-	elseif hour < 17 and week < 5:
-		!!Walking home
-		momloc = 8
-	elseif hour = 17 and minut < 50 and week = 5:
-		!!Working in the cafe. On Friday she stays until 17:50
-		momloc = 9
-	elseif hour < 18 and week = 5:
-		!!Walking home
-		momloc = 10
-	elseif hour < 18:
-		!!Making dinner (On Friday she brings home leftovers from the cafe)
-		momloc = 11
-	elseif hour < 19:
-		!! Cleaning dinner table/Doing dishes
-		momloc = 12
-	elseif hour < 20:
-		if week = 1:
-			!! Visiting Luda on mondays for 3 hours
-			momloc = 20
+!!indorf = 1 means mom is in the village
+if indorf = 0:
+	if week <= 5:
+		if hour < 5 or (hour = 5 and minut < 30):
+			!!Asleep, if Sveta knocks she''ll ask to wake Kolka
+			momloc = 1
+		elseif hour = 5 and minut < 50:
+			!!shower
+			momloc = 2
+		elseif hour < 6 or (hour = 6 and minut < 10):
+			!! Getting dressed in her room and wakes Vladimir, if Sveta walks by she''ll ask to wake Kolka (Occasional morning quicky)
+			momloc = 3
+		elseif hour = 6 or (hour = 7 and minut < 30):
+			momloc = 4
+			if hour = 6 and minut < 40:
+				!! Make Breakfast
+				momloc[1] = 1
+			elseif hour = 6 and minut < 45:
+				!! Set breakfast table - ask Sveta to do it if she comes into the kitchen at that time
+				momloc[1] = 2
+			elseif hour = 6 or (hour = 7 and minut < 15):
+				!! Family breakfast
+				momloc[1] = 3
+			else
+				!! Clean up breakfast table
+				momloc[1] = 4
+			end
+		elseif hour = 7 or (hour = 8 and minut < 10):
+			!!Cleaning random room in the house
+			!!variable set in cikl
+			momloc = momcleaning
+		elseif hour = 8 and minut < 30:
+			!! Walking to work
+			momloc = 5
+		elseif hour < 16 and week < 5:
+			!!Working in the cafe. On Friday she stays until 18:00
+			momloc = 6
+		elseif hour = 16 and minut < 40 and week < 5:
+			!!Buying groceries for dinner and other stuff needed for home at the supermarket
+			momloc = 7
+		elseif hour < 17 and week < 5:
+			!!Walking home
+			momloc = 8
+		elseif hour = 17 and minut < 50 and week = 5:
+			!!Working in the cafe. On Friday she stays until 17:50
+			momloc = 9
+		elseif hour < 18 and week = 5:
+			!!Walking home
+			momloc = 10
+		elseif hour < 18:
+			!!Making dinner (On Friday she brings home leftovers from the cafe)
+			momloc = 11
+		elseif hour < 19:
+			!! Cleaning dinner table/Doing dishes
+			momloc = 12
+		elseif hour < 20:
+			if week = 1:
+				!! Visiting Luda on mondays for 3 hours
+				momloc = 20
+			else
+				!! (cleaning the bathroom, sweeping, mopping, dusting, watching TV, taking a bath, etc in different rooms)
+				momloc = momcleaning2
+			end
+		elseif hour < 22:
+			if week = 1:
+				!! Visiting Luda on mondays for 3 hours
+				momloc = 20
+			else
+				!! Watches TV with Vladimir
+				momloc = 13
+			end
 		else
-			!! (cleaning the bathroom, sweeping, mopping, dusting, watching TV, taking a bath, etc in different rooms)
-			momloc = momcleaning2
-		end
-	elseif hour < 22:
-		if week = 1:
-			!! Visiting Luda on mondays for 3 hours
-			momloc = 20
-		else
-			!! Watches TV with Vladimir
-			momloc = 13
+			!! Sleep (Small chance she and step dad have sex before sleep)
+			momloc = 1
 		end
 	else
-		!! Sleep (Small chance she and step dad have sex before sleep)
-		momloc = 1
-	end
-else
-	if hour < 5 or (hour = 5 and minut < 30):
-		!! Sleep
-		momloc = 1
-	elseif hour = 5 and minut < 50:
-		!! Shower, if Sveta knocks she''ll ask to wake Kolka
-		momloc = 2
-	elseif hour < 6 or (hour = 6 and minut < 10):
-		!! Getting dressed in her room and wakes Vladimir, if Sveta walks by she''ll ask to wake Kolka (Occasional morning quicky)
-		momloc = 3
-	elseif hour = 6 or (hour = 7 and minut < 30):
-		momloc = 4
-		if hour = 6 and minut < 40:
-			!! Make Breakfast
-			momloc[1] = 1
-		elseif hour = 6 and minut < 45:
-			!! Set breakfast table - ask Sveta to do it if she comes into the kitchen at that time
-			momloc[1] = 2
-		elseif hour = 6 or (hour = 7 and minut < 15):
-			!! Family breakfast
-			momloc[1] = 3
-		else
-			momloc[1] = 4
-			!! Clean up breakfast table
-		end
-	elseif hour = 11:
-		!!Cleaning random room in the house/laundry
-!! cleaning kitchen only one in use atm
-		momloc = 23
-	elseif hour = 11 and minut < 30:
-		!! Takes the car to town
-		momloc = 14
-	elseif hour < 12 and minut < 30:
-		!! Gets her nails done/hair cut at the salon or such things - On Sunday goes to the church during these hours
-		if week = 5:
-			momloc = 15
-		else
+		if hour < 5 or (hour = 5 and minut < 30):
+			!! Sleep
+			momloc = 1
+		elseif hour = 5 and minut < 50:
+			!! Shower, if Sveta knocks she''ll ask to wake Kolka
+			momloc = 2
+		elseif hour < 6 or (hour = 6 and minut < 10):
+			!! Getting dressed in her room and wakes Vladimir, if Sveta walks by she''ll ask to wake Kolka (Occasional morning quicky)
+			momloc = 3
+		elseif hour = 6 or (hour = 7 and minut < 30):
+			momloc = 4
+			if hour = 6 and minut < 40:
+				!! Make Breakfast
+				momloc[1] = 1
+			elseif hour = 6 and minut < 45:
+				!! Set breakfast table - ask Sveta to do it if she comes into the kitchen at that time
+				momloc[1] = 2
+			elseif hour = 6 or (hour = 7 and minut < 15):
+				!! Family breakfast
+				momloc[1] = 3
+			else
+				momloc[1] = 4
+				!! Clean up breakfast table
+			end
+		elseif hour = 11:
+			!!Cleaning random room in the house/laundry
+	!! cleaning kitchen only one in use atm
+			momloc = 23
+		elseif hour = 11 and minut < 30:
+			!! Takes the car to town
+			momloc = 14
+		elseif hour < 12 and minut < 30:
+			!! Gets her nails done/hair cut at the salon or such things - On Sunday goes to the church during these hours
+			if week = 5:
+				momloc = 15
+			else
+				momloc = 16
+			end
+		elseif hour = 13 and minut < 30 and week = 6:
 			momloc = 16
-		end
-	elseif hour = 13 and minut < 30 and week = 6:
-		momloc = 16
-	elseif hour < 14:
-		!! Walks around different shops, looking at and buying stuff - On Sunday goes to church during these hours
-		momloc = 15
-	elseif hour < 17:
-		!!Helping out Sergey/Luda, going to Kolka's games?
-		momloc = rand(14,15)
-	elseif hour < 18:
-		!! Making dinner
-		momloc = 11
-	elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
-		!!Family dinner (same as the family breakfast, Sveta doesn''t have to join it but we can have some family interactions like mom and step dad asking about how school was etc)
-		momloc = 12
-	elseif hour < 19:
-		!! Cleaning dinner table/Doing dishes
-		momloc = 13
-	elseif hour < 21:
-		!!Says she goes to see her sister, in reality sometimes see's her sister of fucks around with different people. - Sunday goes to evening mass
-		if week = 5:
-			momloc = 17
+		elseif hour < 14:
+			!! Walks around different shops, looking at and buying stuff - On Sunday goes to church during these hours
+			momloc = 15
+		elseif hour < 17:
+			!!Helping out Sergey/Luda, going to Kolka's games?
+			momloc = rand(14,15)
+		elseif hour < 18:
+			!! Making dinner
+			momloc = 11
+		elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
+			!!Family dinner (same as the family breakfast, Sveta doesn''t have to join it but we can have some family interactions like mom and step dad asking about how school was etc)
+			momloc = 12
+		elseif hour < 19:
+			!! Cleaning dinner table/Doing dishes
+			momloc = 13
+		elseif hour < 21:
+			!!Says she goes to see her sister, in reality sometimes see's her sister of fucks around with different people. - Sunday goes to evening mass
+			if week = 5:
+				momloc = 17
+			else
+				momloc = 18
+			end
+		elseif hour < 22:
+			!! Watches TV with Vladimir
+			momloc = 19
 		else
-			momloc = 18
+			!! Sleep (Small chance she and step dad have sex before sleep)
+			momloc = 1
 		end
-	elseif hour < 22:
-		!! Watches TV with Vladimir
-		momloc = 13
-	else
-		!! Sleep (Small chance she and step dad have sex before sleep)
-		momloc = 1
 	end
 end
 
 !!----STEPFATHER------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
-
-if week <= 5:
-	if hour = 6 and minut < 10:
-		!! Sleep
-		sdadloc = 1
-	elseif hour = 6 and minut < 45:
-		!!Getting ready, sometimes has quicky
-		sdadloc = 1
-	elseif hour = 7 and minut < 15:
-		!!family breakfast
-		sdadloc = 4
-	elseif hour = 7 and minut < 30:
-		!!Reads paper in kitchen
-		sdadloc = 4
-	elseif hour = 8 and minut < 30:
-		!!Watching TV
-        sdadloc = 13
-	elseif hour = 8 and minut < 45:
-		!! shave/get dressed
-		sdadloc = 5 
-	elseif hour = 17 and minut < 45:
-		!! Work (includes lunch time)
-		sdadloc = 0	
-	elseif hour < 18:
-		!! Sets the table for dinner
-		sdadloc = 4
-	elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
-		!! Family dinner
-		sdadloc = 4
-	elseif hour = 19 and minut < 45:
-		!! In garage or spending time with Misha
-		sdadloc = 8
-	elseif hour = 21 and minut < 45:
-		!! Watch tv in living room
-		sdadloc = 13
-    elseif hour < 22:
-		!! Take shower
-		sdadloc = 5	
-	else
-		!! Sleep - (small chance mom and step dad have sex before actually going to sleep)
-		sdadloc = 1
-	end
-else
-	if hour = 6 and minut < 45:
-		sdadloc = 1
-	elseif hour = 7 and minut < 15:
-		sdadloc = 1
-	elseif hour = 7 and minut < 30:
-		sdadloc = 1
-	elseif hour < 8:
-		sdadloc = 5
-	elseif hour < 9:
-        sdadloc = 13
-	elseif hour < 11:
-		sdadloc = 8
-!!I assume that he meet misha/sergey in the garage		
-	elseif hour = 11 and minut < 10:
-		if week = 6:
+!!indorf = 1 means stepdad is in the village
+if indorf = 0:
+	if week <= 5:
+		if hour = 6 and minut < 10:
+			!! Sleep
+			sdadloc = 1
+		elseif hour = 6 and minut < 45:
+			!!Getting ready, sometimes has quicky
+			sdadloc = 1
+		elseif hour = 7 and minut < 15:
+			!!family breakfast
+			sdadloc = 4
+		elseif hour = 7 and minut < 30:
+			!!Reads paper in kitchen
+			sdadloc = 4
+		elseif hour = 8 and minut < 30:
+			!!Watching TV
+			sdadloc = 13
+		elseif hour = 8 and minut < 45:
+			!! shave/get dressed
+			sdadloc = 5 
+		elseif hour = 17 and minut < 45:
+			!! Work (includes lunch time)
+			sdadloc = 0	
+		elseif hour < 18:
+			!! Sets the table for dinner
+			sdadloc = 4
+		elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
+			!! Family dinner
+			sdadloc = 4
+		elseif hour = 19 and minut < 45:
+			!! In garage or spending time with Misha
 			sdadloc = 8
-!!I assume that he meet misha/sergey in the garage			
+		elseif hour = 21 and minut < 45:
+			!! Watch tv in living room
+			sdadloc = 13
+		elseif hour < 22:
+			!! Take shower
+			sdadloc = 5	
 		else
-			sdadloc = 0
+			!! Sleep - (small chance mom and step dad have sex before actually going to sleep)
+			sdadloc = 1
 		end
-	elseif hour < 13:
-		if week = 6:
+	else
+		if hour = 6 and minut < 45:
+			sdadloc = 1
+		elseif hour = 7 and minut < 15:
+			sdadloc = 1
+		elseif hour = 7 and minut < 30:
+			sdadloc = 1
+		elseif hour < 8:
+			sdadloc = 5
+		elseif hour < 9:
+			sdadloc = 13
+		elseif hour < 11:
 			sdadloc = 8
-!!I assume that he meet misha/sergey in the garage			
-		else
-			sdadloc = 16
-		end
-	elseif hour = 13 and minut < 10:
-		if week = 6:
+	!!I assume that he meet misha/sergey in the garage		
+		elseif hour = 11 and minut < 10:
+			if week = 6:
+				sdadloc = 8
+	!!I assume that he meet misha/sergey in the garage			
+			else
+				sdadloc = 0
+			end
+		elseif hour < 13:
+			if week = 6:
+				sdadloc = 8
+	!!I assume that he meet misha/sergey in the garage			
+			else
+				sdadloc = 16
+			end
+		elseif hour = 13 and minut < 10:
+			if week = 6:
+				sdadloc = 8
+	!!I assume that he meet misha/sergey in the garage			
+			else
+				sdadloc = 0
+			end	
+		elseif hour < 18:
 			sdadloc = 8
-!!I assume that he meet misha/sergey in the garage			
+		elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
+			sdadloc = 4
+		elseif hour < 22:
+			sdadloc = 13
 		else
-			sdadloc = 0
-		end	
-	elseif hour < 18:
-		sdadloc = 8
-	elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
-		sdadloc = 4
-	elseif hour < 22:
-		sdadloc = 13
-	else
-		sdadloc = 1
+			sdadloc = 1
+		end
 	end
 end
 
 !!---KOLKA------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
-
-if week <= 5:
-	if hour = 6 and minut < 45:
-		kolloc = 13
-	elseif hour = 7 and minut < 15:
-		kolloc = 4
-	elseif hour < 8:
-		kolloc = 0
-	elseif hour < 14:
-		kolloc = 0
-	elseif hour = 16 and minut < 45:
-        kolloc = func('shortgs', 'rand_pick', '', 10, 11, 12)
-	elseif hour < 17:
-		kolloc = 0
-	elseif hour < 18:
-		kolloc = 13
-	elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
-		kolloc = 4
-	elseif hour = 18 and minut < 45:
-		kolloc = 0
-	elseif hour < 21:
-		kolloc = 10
-	elseif hour = 21 and minut < 15:
-		kolloc = 5
-	elseif hour < 23:
-		kolloc = 13
-	else
-		kolloc = 13
-	end
-else
-	if hour = 6 and minut < 45:
-		kolloc = 13
-	elseif hour = 7 and minut < 15:
-		kolloc = 4
-	elseif hour < 10:
-		kolloc = 13
-	elseif hour = 13 and minut < 10:
-		kolloc = 13
-	elseif hour < 18:
-        kolloc = func('shortgs', 'rand_pick', '', 8, 10, 11, 12)
-	elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
-		kolloc = 4
-	elseif hour < 21:
-		kolloc = func('shortgs', 'rand_pick', '', 10, 11, 12)
-	elseif hour = 21 and minut < 15:
-		kolloc = 5
-	elseif hour < 23:
-		kolloc = 13
+!!indorf = 1 means kolka is in the village
+if indorf = 0:
+	if week <= 5:
+		if hour = 6 and minut < 45:
+			kolloc = 13
+		elseif hour = 7 and minut < 15:
+			kolloc = 4
+		elseif hour < 8:
+			kolloc = 0
+		elseif hour < 14:
+			kolloc = 0
+		elseif hour = 16 and minut < 45:
+			kolloc = func('shortgs', 'rand_pick', '', 10, 11, 12)
+		elseif hour < 17:
+			kolloc = 0
+		elseif hour < 18:
+			kolloc = 13
+		elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
+			kolloc = 4
+		elseif hour = 18 and minut < 45:
+			kolloc = 0
+		elseif hour < 21:
+			kolloc = 10
+		elseif hour = 21 and minut < 15:
+			kolloc = 5
+		elseif hour < 23:
+			kolloc = 13
+		else
+			kolloc = 13
+		end
 	else
-		kolloc = 13
+		if hour = 6 and minut < 45:
+			kolloc = 13
+		elseif hour = 7 and minut < 15:
+			kolloc = 4
+		elseif hour < 10:
+			kolloc = 13
+		elseif hour = 13 and minut < 10:
+			kolloc = 13
+		elseif hour < 18:
+			kolloc = func('shortgs', 'rand_pick', '', 8, 10, 11, 12)
+		elseif hour = 18 and minut < 30:
+			kolloc = 4
+		elseif hour < 21:
+			kolloc = func('shortgs', 'rand_pick', '', 10, 11, 12)
+		elseif hour = 21 and minut < 15:
+			kolloc = 5
+		elseif hour < 23:
+			kolloc = 13
+		else
+			kolloc = 13
+		end
 	end
 end
 

+ 5 - 2
locations/furi.qsrc

@@ -38,11 +38,14 @@ act 'Try to get a lift':
 	furi_driver = rand(1,20)
 
 	if nroad = 0:
-		'"Excuse me, sir?" you ask the driver. "I need to go to Pavlovsk, could you give me a lift if you''re going in that direction?"'
+		'"Excuse me, sir?" you ask the driver. "I need a ride, could you give me a lift?"'
 		furi_recog_city = rand(1,200)
+	elseif nroad = 10:
+		'"Excuse me, sir?" you ask the driver. "I need a ride, could you give me a lift?"'
+		furi_recog_gad = rand(1,200)
 	elseif nroad = 20:
 		furi_recog_pav = rand(1,200)
-		'"Excuse me, sir?" you ask the driver. "I need to go to St. Petersburg, could you give me a lift if you''re going in that direction?"'
+		'"Excuse me, sir?" you ask the driver. "I need a ride, could you give me a lift?"'
 	end
 	if furi_recog =< furibj:
 		if (furibj / 10) >= furi_driver:

+ 6 - 10
locations/furisex.qsrc

@@ -52,12 +52,10 @@ elseif furisex = 6:
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
 	
-	act 'Leave his truck':
 	furisex = 0
-
-	if nroad = 0:nroad = 20 & gt 'pavCommercial'
-	if nroad = 20:nroad = 0 & gt 'nord'
-	end
+	if nroad ! 20: act 'Have him drop you off in Pavlovsk': gt 'pavCommercial'
+	if nroad ! 10: act 'Have him drop you off in Gadukino': gt 'gadukino'
+	if nroad ! 0: act 'Have him drop you off in St. Petersburg': gt 'nord'
 elseif furisex = 100:
 	if furibj >= 5:
 		'The driver starts the engine and unzips his trousers. His semi-hard cock flops out and without further instruction you reach over and jerk him a few times to get him properly stiff.'
@@ -137,12 +135,10 @@ elseif furisex = 101:
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
 	
-	act 'Leave his truck':
 	furisex = 0
-
-	if nroad = 0:nroad = 20 & gt 'pavCommercial'
-	if nroad = 20:nroad = 0 & gt 'nord'
-	end
+	if nroad ! 20: act 'Have him drop you off in Pavlovsk': gt 'pavCommercial'
+	if nroad ! 10: act 'Have him drop you off in Gadukino': gt 'gadukino'
+	if nroad ! 0: act 'Have him drop you off in St. Petersburg': gt 'nord'
 end
 
 --- furisex ---------------------------------

+ 1 - 0
locations/gaddvor.qsrc

@@ -43,6 +43,7 @@ if $ARGS[0]='':
 		if grandmaQW['chore_feed_chickens'] = 1 or (hour >= 6 and hour < 20 and month >= 4 and month <= 10):'In the yard there are several <a href="exec:gt ''gaddvor'',''chickens''">chickens</a> running around.'
 
 		if mira_guest = 1: Miraloc = 7 & 'Your friend <a href="exec: gt ''miroslava'', ''Start''">Mira</a> stands next to you.'
+		if MiraLoc ! 7: mira_guest = 0
 
 		act '<b>Leave and go into the village</b>':minut += 5 & gt 'gadukino'
 		if 	grandpaQW['chore_clean_yard'] = 1:

+ 1 - 1
locations/gadforest.qsrc

@@ -128,7 +128,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'forest_edge':
 	! Events with or without Mira
 	if foresteventrand <= 8 and hour >= 8 and hour <= 20 and month >= 4 and month <= 10 and gadboyday ! daystart:
 		if mitkaday ! daystart:
-			gt 'gadforest_event', 'mitka_temporary_event'
+			if MiraLoc = 3: gt 'gadforest_event', 'mitka_temporary_event'
 		!	gt 'mitka_forest_1', 'mitka'
 		!elseif kolyambaday ! daystart:
 		!	gt 'mitka_forest_1', 'kolyamba'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gadforest_event.qsrc

@@ -157,7 +157,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'mira_nude_event':
 		if pcs_inhib < 50:inhib_exp += rand(2,4)
 		npc_rel['A60'] += 5
 		gs 'underwear', 'remove'
-		gs 'clothing', 'strip', 'gadforest'
+		gs 'clothing', 'strip', 'forest_edge'
 		gs 'exhibitionism', 3
 		gs 'stat'
 

+ 17 - 0
locations/gschool_chats.qsrc

@@ -65,6 +65,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
 					'When you walk in the room goes dead silent and everyone is staring at you. Several of the nerds blush at your scandalous display of flesh from your uniform or lack therefor of. The nerds all close ranks, making sure not to give you a space to walk up to them and talk to them. The outcasts on the other hand don''t seem to care as much.'
 				end
 			end
+		else
+			'You are using the school uniform cheat and not wearing uniform, therefore there are no reactions to your uniform'
+			*nl
+			gs 'gschool_groups', 'nerds'
 		end
 		*nl
 		'The outcasts are mostly hiding away from everyone else, hoping that no one will pick on them today.'
@@ -160,9 +164,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		end
+	else
+		'You are using the school uniform cheat and not wearing uniform, therefore no one can react to your uniform.'
+		gs 'gschool_groups', 'gopniks'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
 end
 
+
+if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks2':
+end
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'cooljocks':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 5
@@ -272,6 +284,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cooljocks':
 			'Christina steps forward. "Get out of here with your whorish clothes, no one wants you around." You hear several murmers of agreement from most of the rest, it looks like even Igor, Katja, Vicky, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+'Stasya, Lizaveta, Marcus, Andrey, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+'Svyatoslav, Lariska, Lina, Veronika, Lazar, Erast, and Vanya appear to agree. They either give you the cold shoulder or refuse to meet your eyes. Feeling unwelcome you turn around and leave.'
 			act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		end
+	else
+		'You are using the school uniform cheat so no one reacts to your uniform, this could be good or bad.'
+		gs 'gschool_groups', 'popular'
+		gs 'gschool_groups', 'jocks'
+		act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
 end
 

+ 43 - 0
locations/gschool_chats2.qsrc

@@ -312,6 +312,47 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'zinaida':
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'natalia':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	if NikoEv >= 17 and VKNatFollowup = 0:VKNatFollowup = 1
+	gs 'stat'
+	'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/npc_headshots/big240.jpg"></center>'
+	if VKAftermathEvent > 0 and VKNatFollowup = 0:
+		npc_rel['A240'] += 1
+		VKNatFollowup = 1
+		'You sit down next to Natalia and she quickly turns to you with a warm smile as she says, "<<$pcs_nickname>> It''s so great to see you! I hope that you are feeling better. You have been through so much." You give her a forced smile as you reply, "I''m fine Nat. Thank you for caring." Natalia smile turns to a frown as she responds, "You''re still having the nightmares aren''t you? I am looking for a way to help you with those. I plan on asking my mother for something. She used to get a lot of nightmares when she was young so she may know of some good ways to get rid of them." You place you hand on her shoulder then say, "Don''t worry about me Nat. I''ll be fine." Nat places her and on yours then nods before you get up then head back to class.'
+	elseif NikoEv >= 17 and VKNatFollowup = 1:
+		npc_rel['A240'] += 1
+		VKNatFollowup = 2
+		'You approach Natalia and her eyes immediately light up as she says, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! It''s always good to see you. I hope things have been going better with Niko." You give her an approving nod before she says, "Well if you ever need to talk about anything then please stop by. I always look forward to chatting with you." You then rub on Natalia''s shoulder as gives you a warm smile before you get up, to go to your next class.'
+	elseif npc_rel['A240'] >= 50 and pav_slut < 100:
+		npc_rel['A240'] += 1
+		VK = rand(1,5)
+		if VK = 1:
+			'You see Natalia drawing something in her notebook but she quickly closes it when she sees you then says, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, how are you doing today?" You reply, "I doing great today, I just stopped by to chat with you. Do you have some time to chat?" She happily nods as she says, "For you? Of course!" You and Natalia spend the next few minutes chatting about your interests.'
+		elseif VK = 2:
+			'Natalia sits quietly staring at the other students chatting, looking very lonely. You approach her and wave. Natalia''s eyes immediately light up as she says, "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>> it''s so great to see you. Would you like to chat for awhile?" You nod then replay, "Of course I would." You both spend the next few minutes, swapping stories while laughing and joking.'
+		elseif VK = 3:
+			'You see Natalia chatting with Zinaida, "Come on Natalia,  you have to download this game. It is free to play. There is no reason to not try it out." Natalia replies, "I just don''t really have time to download it. I..." Zin quickly responds, "Well you have time right now. I''m trying to get you into this game so that I can help you power level. All you need to do is..." Sensing that Nat is uncomfortable with the conversation, you approach Natalia then say, "Hey Nat the guidance counselor want to see you about something. You shouldn''t keep her waiting." Natalia gives you a approving nod then says, "Okay I better go. See you Zin and you <<$pcs_firstname>>. Bye" She leaves as Zin hollers, "But we were....Fine." She then turns around and returns to her game.'
+		elseif VK = 4:
+			'As you approach Natalia, she closes her notebook then waves at you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, come and have a seat." You sit down next to Natalia then discuss current events while occasionally gossiping about your classmates.'
+		else		
+			'You can see Natalia tidying up her back when you sit down next to her. She immediately pauses what she is doing then turns to you with an instant smile on her face as she says, "Oh hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, I didn''t notice you there. I''m sorry." You place your hand on her shoulder then reply, "Relax there is nothing to be sorry for. How have you been?" Natalia nods as you both spent the next few minute chatting about various topics.'
+		end
+	elseif npc_rel['A240'] <= 20 and pav_slut < 100:
+		'You s Natalia and as soon as she notices you, she quickly packs her stuff then begins walking away. She doesn''t seem to like you and has no intention of changing that.'
+	elseif pav_slut >= 100 and VKAftermathEvent = 0:
+		'As you approach Natalia she takes one look at you then packs up her things before quickly walking away from you. She obviously does not want to be seen with you.'
+	else
+		npc_rel['A240'] += 1
+		'You approach Natalia then sit down next to her as she quietly looks up at you. She says nothing as you begin discussing current events. Natalia listens and occasionally adds into the conversation.'
+	end
+
+	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
+end
+
 if $ARGS[0] = 'petia':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1
@@ -456,5 +497,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lesco':
 	act 'Time for the next class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 end
 
+
+
 --- gschool_chats2 ---------------------------------
 

+ 19 - 18
locations/gschool_grounds.qsrc

@@ -33,6 +33,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 	
 	if InvitationToDimkaNYparty = 1 and day = 31 and day = nyp_day: act 'Follow Dimka to the New Year''s party at his home': killvar 'InvitationToDimkaNYparty' & minut += 30 & gt 'sny', '3'
 
+	if hour = 14 and week < 6 and kanikuli = 0:
+
+		if NikoDate_Day ! daystart:
+			if week = 1 and NikoIntro = 0:
+				gt 'NikoEv', 'Intro'			
+			elseif NikoVolkovQW = 5 and NikoEv = 6 and NikoDate = 0:
+				gt 'NikoDates', 'After School'
+			elseif NikoVolkovQW = 5 and NikoEv = 8 and NikoDate = 0:
+				gt 'NikoDates', 'After School 2'
+			elseif NikoVolkovQW = 10 and NikoEv = 22:
+				gt 'NikoEv2', 'Recovery'
+			end
+		end
+	end	
+	
 	if week < 6 and hour = 14 and kanikuli = 0 and afterschool_day ! daystart:
 		afterschool_day = daystart
 		if rand(0,3) = 0:
@@ -130,7 +145,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 				if minut < 30:
 					'It''s too early for school now.'
 				else
-					if NikoEv = 10: gt 'NikoDates', 'Walk Of Shame'
+					if NikoEv = 10: gt 'NikoWhore', 'Walk Of Shame'
 					act 'Wait for class': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'bulding'
 				end
 			elseif hour = 7:
@@ -218,20 +233,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 
 	if hour = 14 and week < 6 and kanikuli = 0:
 
-		if NikoDate_Day ! daystart:
-			if NikoVolkovQW = 5 and NikoEv = 6 and NikoDate = 0:
-				gt 'NikoDates', 'After School'
-			elseif NikoVolkovQW = 5 and NikoEv = 8 and NikoDate = 0:
-				gt 'NikoDates', 'After School 2'
-			elseif (NikoVolkovQW = 5 and NikoDate = 1) or NikoEv = 11:
-				'You can see <a href="exec: gt ''NikoEv'', ''Niko Dates''">Nikolai Volkov</a> smoking outside of the school.'
-			elseif NikoVolkovQW = 10 and NikoEv >= 17 and NikoEv <= 20:
-				'<a href="exec: gt ''NikoEv2'', ''Events''">Nikolai Volkov</a> is smoking outside of the school.'
-			elseif NikoVolkovQW = 10 and NikoEv = 22:
-				gt 'NikoEv2', 'Recovery'
-			end
-		end
-
 		if ivan_afterschool = 1: act 'Meet Ivan after school': gt 'gschool_sex', 'afterschool'
 
 		if LinaSlut > 0 and rand(1,10) < 3: 'You see Lina, Dan and Vasily leaving the school together.'
@@ -259,7 +260,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 			elseif fedorKozlovQW >= 10:
 				'You can see <a href="exec: gt ''FedorEv'', ''Start''">Fedor</a> with his backpack around his arm, standing by himself.'
 			end
-			if NikoVolkovQW = 5 and NikoDate = 1 and NikoDate_Day ! daystart or NikoEv = 11 and NikoDate_Day ! daystart:
+			if NikoVolkovQW = 5 and NikoDate = 1 and NikoDate_Day ! daystart or NikoEv = 11:
 				'You can see <a href="exec:gt ''NikoEv'', ''Niko Dates''">Nikolai Volkov</a> smoking outside of the school.'
 			elseif NikoVolkovQW = 10 and NikoEv >= 17 and NikoEv <= 20 and NikoDate_Day ! daystart:
 				'<a href="exec:gt ''NikoEv2'', ''Events''">Nikolai Volkov</a> is smoking outside of the school.'	
@@ -281,9 +282,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'main':
 			end
 			if IgorLoverQW > 0 and igorkruglovday ! daystart and IdorBlock = 0: gs 'show_table', '<a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''igorhome'', ''entrance''">Igor Kruglov</a>', '5'
 			if fedorKozlovQW >= 10 and kotovVSkozlov = 1:
-				gs 'show_table', '<a href="exec: gt ''FedorEv'', ''Strela Chat''">', '5'
+				gs 'show_table', '<a href="exec: gt ''FedorEv'', ''Strela Chat''">Fedor</a>', '5'
 			elseif fedorKozlovQW >= 10 and fedorkozqw = 2 and FedorLuv < -4:
-				gs 'show_table', '<a href="exec: gt ''FedorEv2'', ''Fedor Breakup''">', '5'
+				gs 'show_table', '<a href="exec: gt ''FedorEv2'', ''Fedor Breakup''">Fedor</a>', '5'
 			elseif fedorKozlovQW >= 10:
 				gs 'show_table', '<a href="exec: gt ''FedorEv'', ''Start''">Fedor</a>', '5'
 			end

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_lunch.qsrc

@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break':
 			gt 'NikoPayback', 'Payback'
 		elseif NikoPayback = 2 and NikoPayback_Day ! daystart:
 			gt 'NikoPayback', 'Payback 2'
-		elseif NikoVolkovQW = 10 and NikoEv = 14 and VKWip = 100:
+		elseif NikoVolkovQW = 10 and NikoEv = 14:
 			lunch_event = daystart
 			gt 'NikoEv2', 'Vicky Talk'	
 		elseif NikoVolkovQW = 10 and NikoEv = 16 and VKWip = 100:

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_socialchg1.qsrc

@@ -679,7 +679,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'beg_christina':
 		christinaphotos = 1		
 		gs 'pain', 1, 'labia', 'kick'
 		gs 'stat'
-		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girls/christina/beach/onall4s.jpg"></center>'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/christina/beach/onall4s.jpg"></center>'
 		'You reluctantly nod your head and meekly agree. "Ok." You tell her.'
 		'"That''s right bitch, I own your ass now, Now roll over and get on your hands and knees." You reluctantly do as she says and get down on your hands and knees.'
 		'She walks behind you. "Now spread those legs so we can get a nice shot of that disgusting pussy and dirty ass of yours." You blush with shame but do as she says, she takes several more pictures laughing the whole time. "You are going to do anything I want any time I say it from now on or everyone in school will see these pictures." You meekly nod on the verge of tears.'

+ 20 - 0
locations/journal.qsrc

@@ -92,6 +92,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'records':
 	$tab_text += '<br><center><a href="exec: gt ''journal'', ''locations''">Locations</a></center>'
 	$tab_text += '<br><center><a href="exec: gt ''journal'', ''friends_family''">Friends & Family</a></center>'
 	if SchoolAtestat = 0 and storyline = 1: $tab_text += '<br><center><a href="exec: gt ''journal'', ''school''">School</a></center>'
+	$tab_text += '<br><center><a href="exec: gt ''journal'', ''clothing''">Clothing information</a></center>'
 	
 	$tab_text += '<center><h2>Relationships</h2></center>'
 
@@ -727,5 +728,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $metka
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'clothing':
+	'<center>Clothing information</center>'
+	*nl
+	'Clothing has a strength value, this decreases by 1 every day you wear that outfit. At 0 it is ruined and you will have to throw it away.'
+	'You can attempt to fix outfits when strength is very low and you have a high enough sewing skill. Clothes you throw away will appear again in the shop.'
+	*nl
+	'Quality of clothing is ranked in this order:'
+	'	This crappy quality outfit'
+	'	This very low quality outfit'
+	'	This low quality outfit'
+	'	This average quality outfit'
+	'	This reasonable quality outfit'
+	'	This good quality outfit'
+	'	This is an outstanding quality outfit'
+
+	act 'Go back': gt 'journal', 'records'
+	act 'Put your notebook down': gt $loc, $metka
+end
+
 --- journal ---------------------------------
 

+ 18 - 10
locations/kuhrPar.qsrc

@@ -26,15 +26,22 @@ minut += 1
 gs 'stat'
 gs 'kit_din'
 gs 'themes', 'indoors'
-if momloc[1] = 2:
-	npc_rel['A29'] += 1
-	cla & *clr
-	minut += 5
-	gs'stat'
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/gotovka.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> turns to you. "<<npc_nickname>> please set the table for breakfast." You sigh and grab the dishes.'
-	act 'set the table for breakfast': gt 'kuhrPar'
-	exit
+gs 'family_schedule'
+if momloc = 4:
+	if momloc[1] = 1:
+		'You <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is here, busy making breakfast.'
+	elseif momloc[1] = 2:
+		npc_rel['A29'] += 1
+		cla & *clr
+		minut += 5
+		gs'stat'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/gotovka.jpg"></center>'
+		'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> turns to you. "<<$pcs_nickname>> please set the table for breakfast." You sigh and grab the dishes.'
+		act 'set the table for breakfast': gt 'kuhrPar'
+		exit
+	elseif momloc[1] = 4:
+		'Your <a href="exec:gt''mother''"><<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>></a> is here clearing away the breakfast dishes.'
+	end
 end
 '<center><b><font color="maroon">Kitchen</font></b></center>'
 '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/home/kuhrpar.jpg"></center>'
@@ -47,7 +54,8 @@ elseif hour = 18 and minut <= 30 and indorf = 0:
 else
 	'The kitchen is not very impressive, but it has everything your family needs. Since everyone can''t always join for family meals, <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> usually pre-cooks some meals and stores them in the fridge, to be handy for later. Of course, you could also just have a snack if you''re not that hungry.'
 end
-gs 'family_schedule'
+if momloc = 11: 'Your <a href="exec:gt''mother''"><<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>></a> is here making diner.'
+if momloc = 13: 'Your <a href="exec:gt''mother''"><<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>></a> is here cleaning up after diner.'
 if momloc = 23: 'Your <a href="exec:gt''mother''"><<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>></a> is here cleaning.'
 
 if hour = 7 and breakfast_day ! daystart and indorf = 0: 

+ 2 - 2
locations/ludahome.qsrc

@@ -541,7 +541,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'luda_mom_talk':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/ludahome/luda_nat.jpg"></center>'
 		'You take a seat next to them. "Sure sounds great." You tell her.'
-		'You see your <<$pcs_nickname>> give you a friendly smile, while Luda fills a cup with tea and offers it to you asking "What have you been up to dear?" Before you can even answer, your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> does and she embellishes things. She makes it sound like things at home and what''s going on are better than they really are. You get the feeling she is trying to impress her sister on how great her family is, so you simply sit back and sip your tea. After a while they start talking about other of things, so you can finally join in. Your <<$pcs_nickname>> still cuts you off sometimes and answers for you, perhaps afraid you will shatter this illusion she is building up of your family.'
+		'You see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> give you a friendly smile, while Luda fills a cup with tea and offers it to you asking "What have you been up to dear?" Before you can even answer, your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> does and she embellishes things. She makes it sound like things at home and what''s going on are better than they really are. You get the feeling she is trying to impress her sister on how great her family is, so you simply sit back and sip your tea. After a while they start talking about other of things, so you can finally join in. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> still cuts you off sometimes and answers for you, perhaps afraid you will shatter this illusion she is building up of your family.'
 		act 'Get up from the table': gt 'ludahome', 'kitchen'
 		act 'Keep chatting': gt 'ludahome', 'luda_mom_talk', 1
 	elseif ARGS[1] = 1:
@@ -798,7 +798,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'chat_luda':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/luda/talk.jpg"></center>'
 					'You look at your Aunt and then tell her "I know my <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is a slut, I can''t believe she is such a hypocrite."'
-					'Luda looks a little surprised by your words "<<$pcs_nickname>> you should say that about your mother."'
+					'Luda looks a little surprised by your words "<<$pcs_nickname>> you should not say that about your mother."'
 					'You laugh a little "Why? It''s true." You dare her to deny it.'
 					'She sighs a little "Maybe so but it is still not nice to say. While I havn''t always agreed with her choices, she is human and makes mistakes and while she might be hard on you girls. She does it out of love because she wants what is best for you."'
 					'You decided it is best to just change the subject.'

+ 2 - 2
locations/meadow.qsrc

@@ -68,9 +68,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 		end
 	end
 
-	if MiraLoc = 2:
+	if MiraLoc = 2 and meadow ! 2:
 		act 'Go back to the forest': minut += 20 & MiraLoc = 3 & gt 'gadforest', 'forest_edge'
-	else
+	elseif meadow ! 2:
 		act 'Go back to the forest': minut += 20 & gt 'gadforest', 'forest_edge'
 	end
 

+ 19 - 9
locations/miroslava.qsrc

@@ -289,7 +289,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Start' or $ARGS[0] = '':
 			end
 		end
 
-		if npc_rel['A60'] >= 15 and hour >= 20 and npc_QW['A60'] = 0 and sunWeather = 1 and MiraLoc ! 3:
+		if npc_rel['A60'] >= 15 and hour >= 20 and npc_QW['A60'] = 0 and MiraLoc ! 3:
 			act 'Ask if she''s met the local boys?':
 				menu_off = 1
 				*clr & cla
@@ -995,7 +995,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 			minut += 2
 			pcs_horny += 10
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira3.jpg"></center>'
-			'You coldly tell Mira that you saw her when she fucked Mitka in your meadow. You remind her that she swore not to tell anyone about your secret place. Mira turns red and flutters her eyes at you trying to look innocent as she mumbles that she''s sorry about breaking her promise. Mira asks if there is any way to make amends. You smile and remind her that she promised you three wishes if she ever revealed the meadow to anyone. Mira meekly nods her head confirming that she does indeed remember making that promise and is ready to fullfil them.'
+			'You coldly tell Mira that you saw her when she fucked Mitka in your meadow. You remind her that she swore not to tell anyone about your secret place. Mira turns red and flutters her eyes at you trying to look innocent as she mumbles that she''s sorry about breaking her promise. Mira asks if there is any way to make amends. You smile and remind her that she promised you three wishes if she ever revealed the meadow to anyone. Mira meekly nods her head confirming that she does indeed remember making that promise and is ready to fulfill them.'
 
 			gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'force'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -1008,6 +1008,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira3.jpg"></center>'
 					act 'Tell her to show you her pussy':
 						*clr & cla
+						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/miraqw3.jpg"></center>'
+						*nl
 						'"To start, you will pull down your panties and show me your pussy, and tell me what it felt like fucking Mitka in my meadow." you tell her sternly, "I want to know what is so special about his dick that you would exchange it for our friendship."'
 						'Mira gasps in shock from the sting in your words and jumps to her feet. She stares at you stupified and you can see the protest welling up in her but you don''t give her time to recover.'
 						'"If you want us to stay friends, you had better stick to the deal, and if you can''t keep your word then our friendship is over." you state, glaring at her angrily.'
@@ -1049,7 +1051,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 				npc_rel['A60'] -= 1
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/mira3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You say you want to see Mitka fuck her ass because she told him your secret. Mira jumps to her feet from the suggestion and just looks at you, but you don''t give her time to recover and continue to emphasize further, Recalling that a deal is a deal, and if your word doesn''t matter, then out friendship will end. Miroslav blushes and hesitantly shifts from foot to foot. You decide to go for broke, turn around and start to leave...'
+				'You say you want to see Mitka fuck her ass because she told him your secret. Mira jumps to her feet from the suggestion and just looks at you, but you don''t give her time to recover and continue to emphasize further, Recalling that a deal is a deal, and if your word doesn''t matter, then our friendship will end. Mira blushes and hesitantly shifts from foot to foot. You decide to go for broke, turn around and start to leave...'
 				' - Wait, so it''s screaming you in the back of Mira, but you pretend to not notice and go on.'
 				' - Well, <<$pcs_nickname>>, - after a couple of seconds until you hear a hysterical scream from Mira, I''ll think of something!'
 
@@ -1057,9 +1059,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 			end
 		end
 	elseif npc_QW['A60'] = 4 and Mira4day ! daystart:
-
+		*clr & cla
+		minut += 10
+		gs 'stat'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/miraqw4a.jpg"></center>'
+		*nl
 		act 'Remind her that she has not atoned for bringing Mitka to the meadow':
-			cla
+			*clr & cla
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/village/mira/miraqw4b.jpg"></center>'
+			*nl
 			'You remind Mira that you are still not satified with her atonement and she asks you what you want her to do.'
 
 			act 'Tell her that you want to watch as Mitka fucks her in the ass':
@@ -1104,11 +1112,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'miratalk':
 		gs 'stat'
 		if MiraLoc ! 1:gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 		if MiraLoc = 1:gs 'miroslava', 'mira_river'
-		if npc_QW['A60'] < 20 and npc_QW['A63'] < 13:
+		if npc_QW['A60'] < 3 and npc_QW['A63'] < 11:
+			'You have ten minutes of fun talking about all sorts of trivia.'
+		elseif npc_QW['A60'] < 16 and npc_QW['A63'] < 11:
+			'You spend ten minutes talking about trivia, Mira can''t seem to focus and barely looks you in the eyes. She seems distracted by other thoughts.'
+		elseif npc_QW['A60'] < 20 and npc_QW['A63'] < 11:
 			'You spend ten minutes talking about trivia, you often refer to Mira as a whore, but she just pretends not to hear.'
-		elseif (npc_QW['A60'] >= 20 and npc_QW['A60'] < 30) and npc_QW['A63'] < 13:
-			'You spend ten minutes talking about trivia, Mira tries her best not to look you in the eyes, she seems distracted by other thoughts.'
-		elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 30 and npc_QW['A63'] < 13:
+		elseif npc_QW['A60'] >= 20 and npc_QW['A63'] < 11:
 			'You spend ten minutes talking about trivia, but Mira isn''t listening, all she wants to talk about is sex.'
 		else
 			'You have ten minutes of fun talking about all sorts of trivia.'

+ 215 - 219
locations/mother.qsrc

@@ -291,261 +291,257 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 			end
 		end
 
-		if momloc = 23:
-			! schedule copied from #family - should be identical.
-			act 'Chat':
-				*clr & cla
-				minut+=rand(10,15)
-				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', 'like'
-				gs'stat'
-				'<center><b><font color = maroon>Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> Natasha is still quite young and attractive. She''s only <<motherAge>> years. She works at the station cafe.'
-				if npc_rel['A29'] < 20: 'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> can''t stand you, and she avoids you as much as she can.'
-				if npc_rel['A29'] >= 20 and npc_rel['A29'] < 40: 'You and <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> have a tense relationship.'
-				if npc_rel['A29'] >= 40 and npc_rel['A29'] < 60: 'You have a normal relationship with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>.'
-				if npc_rel['A29'] >= 60 and npc_rel['A29'] < 80: 'You have a good relationship with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>.'
-				if npc_rel['A29'] >= 80: 'You have a great relationship with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>.'
-				act 'Continue': gt 'mother'
-				if npc_rel['A29'] < 20:
-					dynamic $d_mother[1]
-				exit
-				elseif npc_rel['A29'] >= 20 and npc_rel['A29']<40:
-					dynamic $d_mother[2]
-				exit
-				elseif npc_rel['A29'] >= 40:
-					dynamic $d_mother[3]
-				end
+		act 'Chat':
+			*clr & cla
+			minut+=rand(10,15)
+			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', 'like'
+			gs'stat'
+			'<center><b><font color = maroon>Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
+			'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> Natasha is still quite young and attractive. She''s only <<motherAge>> years. She works at the station cafe.'
+			if npc_rel['A29'] < 20: 'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> can''t stand you, and she avoids you as much as she can.'
+			if npc_rel['A29'] >= 20 and npc_rel['A29'] < 40: 'You and <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> have a tense relationship.'
+			if npc_rel['A29'] >= 40 and npc_rel['A29'] < 60: 'You have a normal relationship with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>.'
+			if npc_rel['A29'] >= 60 and npc_rel['A29'] < 80: 'You have a good relationship with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>.'
+			if npc_rel['A29'] >= 80: 'You have a great relationship with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>.'
+			act 'Continue': gt 'mother'
+			if npc_rel['A29'] < 20:
+				dynamic $d_mother[1]
+			exit
+			elseif npc_rel['A29'] >= 20 and npc_rel['A29']<40:
+				dynamic $d_mother[2]
+			exit
+			elseif npc_rel['A29'] >= 40:
+				dynamic $d_mother[3]
 			end
+		end
 
-			act 'Ask for some money':
-				*clr & cla
-				minut += 5
-				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-				'You ask your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> for some money.'
+		act 'Ask for some money':
+			*clr & cla
+			minut += 5
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
+			'You ask your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> for some money.'
 
-				if SchoolAtestat = 0:
-					if motherPayDay = daystart:
-						'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> frowns: "Again, <<$pcs_nickname>>? Did you forget I already gave you money today? Don''t be greedy!"'
-						act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
-					else
-						!! determines how much Sveta receives depending on relationship and grades
-						if npc_rel['A29'] >= 80:
-							moneyfrommom90 = 300
-							moneyfrommom70 = 150
-						elseif npc_rel['A29'] >= 60:
-							moneyfrommom90 = 250
-							moneyfrommom70 = 100
-						elseif npc_rel['A29'] >= 40:
-							moneyfrommom90 = 200
-							moneyfrommom70 = 50
-						end
-						
-						if npc_rel['A29'] >= 40:
-							gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', 'dislike'
-							motherPayDay = daystart
-
-							if pcs_grades >= 90:
-								money += moneyfrommom90
-								'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> smiles and gives you <<moneyfrommom90>> <b>₽</b>: "Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve earned it. I''m glad you''re doing such a good job in school."'
-								act 'Thank her':gt 'mother'
-							elseif pcs_grades >= 70:
-								money += moneyfrommom70
-								'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> reluctantly gives you <<moneyfrommom70>> <b>₽</b>: "When you do better in school, I will give you more. In the meantime, this is all you deserve!"'
-								act 'Thank her':gt 'mother'
-							else
-								'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> scoffs, and shakes her head: "Money? No way, <<$pcs_nickname>>. With how poorly you are doing in school, the only thing you deserve is the belt. You can have some money when you improve your grades, until then you get nothing."'
-								act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
-							end
+			if SchoolAtestat = 0:
+				if motherPayDay = daystart:
+					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> frowns: "Again, <<$pcs_nickname>>? Did you forget I already gave you money today? Don''t be greedy!"'
+					act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
+				else
+					!! determines how much Sveta receives depending on relationship and grades
+					if npc_rel['A29'] >= 80:
+						moneyfrommom90 = 300
+						moneyfrommom70 = 150
+					elseif npc_rel['A29'] >= 60:
+						moneyfrommom90 = 250
+						moneyfrommom70 = 100
+					elseif npc_rel['A29'] >= 40:
+						moneyfrommom90 = 200
+						moneyfrommom70 = 50
+					end
+					
+					if npc_rel['A29'] >= 40:
+						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', 'dislike'
+						motherPayDay = daystart
+
+						if pcs_grades >= 90:
+							money += moneyfrommom90
+							'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> smiles and gives you <<moneyfrommom90>> <b>₽</b>: "Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''ve earned it. I''m glad you''re doing such a good job in school."'
+							act 'Thank her':gt 'mother'
+						elseif pcs_grades >= 70:
+							money += moneyfrommom70
+							'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> reluctantly gives you <<moneyfrommom70>> <b>₽</b>: "When you do better in school, I will give you more. In the meantime, this is all you deserve!"'
+							act 'Thank her':gt 'mother'
 						else
-							if (motherKnowWhore >= 1 or motherKnowSpravka >= 1) and npc_rel['A29'] < 40:
-								'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> can''t believe you would even ask, and shouts angrily: "Whores don''t get money from me! Get out of here, run to your stud and go ask him!"'
-							else
-								'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> scowls, shaking her head: "Why should I give you anything? Go get a job, you''ll get nothing from me." She really doesn''t like you very much.'
-							end
+							'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> scoffs, and shakes her head: "Money? No way, <<$pcs_nickname>>. With how poorly you are doing in school, the only thing you deserve is the belt. You can have some money when you improve your grades, until then you get nothing."'
 							act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
 						end
-						killvar 'moneyfrommom90'
-						killvar 'moneyfrommom70'
+					else
+						if (motherKnowWhore >= 1 or motherKnowSpravka >= 1) and npc_rel['A29'] < 40:
+							'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> can''t believe you would even ask, and shouts angrily: "Whores don''t get money from me! Get out of here, run to your stud and go ask him!"'
+						else
+							'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> scowls, shaking her head: "Why should I give you anything? Go get a job, you''ll get nothing from me." She really doesn''t like you very much.'
+						end
+						act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
 					end
-				else
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shakes her head: "You are old enough to earn your own money <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can''t keep depending on me forever. Get a job."'
-				end	
-			end
+					killvar 'moneyfrommom90'
+					killvar 'moneyfrommom70'
+				end
+			else
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shakes her head: "You are old enough to earn your own money <<$pcs_nickname>>, you can''t keep depending on me forever. Get a job."'
+			end	
+		end
 
-			act 'Ask about your biological father':
-				*clr & cla
-				minut += 5
-				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
+		act 'Ask about your biological father':
+			*clr & cla
+			minut += 5
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 
-				if npc_rel['A29'] < 80:
-					'You barely have any memories of your real father, and are curious about him. When you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> in the kitchen you decide to ask: "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>... about my real father... what was he like? What happened between you two?"'
-					'You seem to have struck a sore spot. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s face saddens, and after a few seconds she replies: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I don''t want to talk about him, it brings back too many bad memories. Just know that Vladimir, your stepfather, raised you and Anya as if they were his own daughters."'
-				else
-					'You barely have any memories of your real father, and are curious about him. When you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> in the kitchen you decide to ask: "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>... about my real father... what was he like? What happened between you two?"'
-					'You seem to have struck a sore spot. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s face saddens, and after a few seconds she replies: "I have no idea where Mikhail is and what he does now, I haven''t seen him in many years. We went to the same school when we were young, and were dating back then... nothing serious. Things weren''t great between us, but then I got pregnant with your sister Anya. Our parents forced us to get married. We tried to make the most of it, and for a while things didn''t seem so bad. A few months after I had you, we got into a huge argument though. We decided we couldn''t live together any more, and got divorced." You can''t help but notice she won''t tell you what the argument was about, but you don''t interrupt her. It''s rare enough to get her to talk about your real father as it is.'
-					'"A year later I married Vladimir, your stepfather. We had Kolka together, but Vladimir always treated you and Anya as if they were his own daughters too. He looked after you, bathed you, told you stories at night and took you for walks whenever he could." Those memories seem to have cheered her up, and she has a serene smile on her face. "Vladimir really is a wonderful man..." she adds, while you thank her for the story.'
-				end
-				act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
+			if npc_rel['A29'] < 80:
+				'You barely have any memories of your real father, and are curious about him. When you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> in the kitchen you decide to ask: "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>... about my real father... what was he like? What happened between you two?"'
+				'You seem to have struck a sore spot. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s face saddens, and after a few seconds she replies: "<<$pcs_nickname>>, I don''t want to talk about him, it brings back too many bad memories. Just know that Vladimir, your stepfather, raised you and Anya as if they were his own daughters."'
+			else
+				'You barely have any memories of your real father, and are curious about him. When you see your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> in the kitchen you decide to ask: "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>... about my real father... what was he like? What happened between you two?"'
+				'You seem to have struck a sore spot. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s face saddens, and after a few seconds she replies: "I have no idea where Mikhail is and what he does now, I haven''t seen him in many years. We went to the same school when we were young, and were dating back then... nothing serious. Things weren''t great between us, but then I got pregnant with your sister Anya. Our parents forced us to get married. We tried to make the most of it, and for a while things didn''t seem so bad. A few months after I had you, we got into a huge argument though. We decided we couldn''t live together any more, and got divorced." You can''t help but notice she won''t tell you what the argument was about, but you don''t interrupt her. It''s rare enough to get her to talk about your real father as it is.'
+				'"A year later I married Vladimir, your stepfather. We had Kolka together, but Vladimir always treated you and Anya as if they were his own daughters too. He looked after you, bathed you, told you stories at night and took you for walks whenever he could." Those memories seem to have cheered her up, and she has a serene smile on her face. "Vladimir really is a wonderful man..." she adds, while you thank her for the story.'
 			end
+			act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
+		end
 
-			act 'Ask for some new clothes':
-				*clr & cla
-				minut += 5
-				gs 'stat'
-				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
-				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
-				'You wait until your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is in a good mood, and then quickly swoop in: "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I have nothing nice to wear. Can I please have some new clothes?"'
-				if pav_prostitute >= 100 and motherKnowWhore >= 1:
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is outraged by the suggestion. "Really <<$pcs_nickname>>? You have lots of customers, and you''re still asking me for clothes? You should have plenty of whore money, you can afford them yourself. Besides, I don''t know where to buy clothes for a whore."'
+		act 'Ask for some new clothes':
+			*clr & cla
+			minut += 5
+			gs 'stat'
+			'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
+			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
+			'You wait until your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is in a good mood, and then quickly swoop in: "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I have nothing nice to wear. Can I please have some new clothes?"'
+			if pav_prostitute >= 100 and motherKnowWhore >= 1:
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is outraged by the suggestion. "Really <<$pcs_nickname>>? You have lots of customers, and you''re still asking me for clothes? You should have plenty of whore money, you can afford them yourself. Besides, I don''t know where to buy clothes for a whore."'
 
-					act 'Move away from her':gt $loc, $metka
-				else
-					if SchoolAtestat = 0:
-						if npc_rel['A29'] >= 80:
-							if motherClotheMonth ! month:
-								'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> lets out an exasperated sigh and throws her hands in the air. "Here we go again... <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I have nothing to wear!" she says, mocking your voice in a high pitch. You both laugh. "Alright then <<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s go see if we can find something."'
-
-								act 'Go to the store':
-									cla
-									npc_rel['A29'] = 70
-									motherClotheMonth = month
-									minut += 30
+				act 'Move away from her':gt $loc, $metka
+			else
+				if SchoolAtestat = 0:
+					if npc_rel['A29'] >= 80:
+						if motherClotheMonth ! month:
+							'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> lets out an exasperated sigh and throws her hands in the air. "Here we go again... <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I have nothing to wear!" she says, mocking your voice in a high pitch. You both laugh. "Alright then <<$pcs_nickname>>, let''s go see if we can find something."'
+
+							act 'Go to the store':
+								cla
+								npc_rel['A29'] = 70
+								motherClotheMonth = month
+								minut += 30
+								gs 'stat'
+								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/clothes_shopping.jpg"></center>'
+								'Going clothes shopping with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is always an interesting experience. You never get to pick your own clothes, but she brings you clothes that she thinks would suit you and lets you try them on. You would argue but her taste in clothing is actually very good, always picking out cute outfits for you to wear that are quite trendy too. You directly go towards the changing booths, wondering what she''ll bring you this time.'
+
+								act 'Try on the clothes she brings you':
+									*clr & cla
 									gs 'stat'
-									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/clothes_shopping.jpg"></center>'
-									'Going clothes shopping with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> is always an interesting experience. You never get to pick your own clothes, but she brings you clothes that she thinks would suit you and lets you try them on. You would argue but her taste in clothing is actually very good, always picking out cute outfits for you to wear that are quite trendy too. You directly go towards the changing booths, wondering what she''ll bring you this time.'
-
-									act 'Try on the clothes she brings you':
-										*clr & cla
-										gs 'stat'
-										loop_counter = 0
-										:markbuyclomother
-										loop_counter += 1
-										'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/dressing_room.jpg"></center>'
-										if loop_counter = 300:
-											'After 30 minutes of trying on various outfits you are unable to find any that you either don''t already own or that you are willing to wear.'
+									loop_counter = 0
+									:markbuyclomother
+									loop_counter += 1
+									'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/dressing_room.jpg"></center>'
+									if loop_counter = 300:
+										'After 30 minutes of trying on various outfits you are unable to find any that you either don''t already own or that you are willing to wear.'
+									else
+										numrand = rand(1, 413)
+
+										gs 'clothing_attributes', 'cheap', numrand
+										!!not prostitute
+										if CloStyle = 4:jump 'markbuyclomother'
+										!!Sveta can wear it and not too revealing
+										if CloInhibit > pcs_inhib or CloInhibit > 30:jump 'markbuyclomother'
+
+										if cheap[numrand] = 0:
+											cheap[numrand] = 1
+											cheapH[numrand] = 50
+											cheapB[numrand] = pcs_hips
+											'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/clothing/1cheap/<<numrand>>.jpg"></center>'
 										else
-											numrand = rand(1, 413)
-
-											gs 'clothing_attributes', 'cheap', numrand
-											!!not prostitute
-											if CloStyle = 4:jump 'markbuyclomother'
-											!!Sveta can wear it and not too revealing
-											if CloInhibit > pcs_inhib or CloInhibit > 30:jump 'markbuyclomother'
-
-											if cheap[numrand] = 0:
-												cheap[numrand] = 1
-												cheapH[numrand] = 50
-												cheapB[numrand] = pcs_hips
-												'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/pc/clothing/1cheap/<<numrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-											else
-												jump 'markbuyclomother'
-											end
+											jump 'markbuyclomother'
 										end
+									end
 
-										'You enter a changing booth and spend 30 minutes trying on various outfits: short ones, long ones, light ones, dark ones... Then finally her eyes light up, and she beams: "This one! This one is perfect!" She buys the outfit for you, and you go back home together. You thank your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and give her a hug.'
+									'You enter a changing booth and spend 30 minutes trying on various outfits: short ones, long ones, light ones, dark ones... Then finally her eyes light up, and she beams: "This one! This one is perfect!" She buys the outfit for you, and you go back home together. You thank your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and give her a hug.'
 
-										act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
-									end
+									act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
 								end
-							else
-								'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> sadly shakes her head: I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, our budget is limited and we already went clothes shopping this month. You''ll have to manage with what you have in your closet for a little while, maybe we can go again next month."'
-								act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
 							end
 						else
-							'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shakes her head: "I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, money is tight. We just can''t afford it right now."'
+							'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> sadly shakes her head: I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, our budget is limited and we already went clothes shopping this month. You''ll have to manage with what you have in your closet for a little while, maybe we can go again next month."'
 							act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
 						end
 					else
-						'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shakes her head: "No <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re old enough to earn your own money and buy your own clothes. Get a job if you want new clothes."'
+						'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shakes her head: "I''m sorry <<$pcs_nickname>>, money is tight. We just can''t afford it right now."'
 						act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
 					end
+				else
+					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shakes her head: "No <<$pcs_nickname>>, you''re old enough to earn your own money and buy your own clothes. Get a job if you want new clothes."'
+					act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
 				end
 			end
+		end
 
-			act 'Offer to help around the house':
-				*clr & cla
-				minut += 60
-				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', rand(1,5)
-				pcs_mood -= 10
-				delin_beh -= 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadukino for the summer
-				TotalMomPom += 1
+		act 'Offer to help around the house':
+			*clr & cla
+			minut += 60
+			gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', rand(1,5)
+			pcs_mood -= 10
+			delin_beh -= 1 &!counter for getting sent to Gadukino for the summer
+			TotalMomPom += 1
+			gs 'stat'
+			MomPom += 1
+			:MomPom_jump
+			if MomPom = 1:
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/dishes.jpg"></center>'
+				'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to do the dishes. You spend an hour washing the dishes in the kitchen.'
+			elseif MomPom = 2:
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/cooking.jpg"></center>'
+				'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to help cook for tonight''s meals. You spend an hour in the kitchen helping out with the cooking.'
+			elseif MomPom = 3:
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/sweep.jpg"></center>'
+				'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to clean the floor. You spend an hour sweeping the floors of the apartment.'
+			elseif MomPom = 4:
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/laundry.jpg"></center>'
+				'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to do a load of laundry. You spend an hour taking a load of clothes to the laundry and washing them, before bringing them home and folding them.'
+			elseif MomPom = 5:
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/iron.jpg"></center>'
+				'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to iron some clothes. You spend an hour in the hallway ironing clothes.'
+			elseif MomPom = 6:
+				sdacharand = rand(10, 50)
+				money += sdacharand
 				gs 'stat'
-				MomPom += 1
-				:MomPom_jump
-				if MomPom = 1:
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/dishes.jpg"></center>'
-					'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to do the dishes. You spend an hour washing the dishes in the kitchen.'
-				elseif MomPom = 2:
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/cooking.jpg"></center>'
-					'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to help cook for tonight''s meals. You spend an hour in the kitchen helping out with the cooking.'
-				elseif MomPom = 3:
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/sweep.jpg"></center>'
-					'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to clean the floor. You spend an hour sweeping the floors of the apartment.'
-				elseif MomPom = 4:
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/laundry.jpg"></center>'
-					'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to do a load of laundry. You spend an hour taking a load of clothes to the laundry and washing them, before bringing them home and folding them.'
-				elseif MomPom = 5:
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/iron.jpg"></center>'
-					'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to iron some clothes. You spend an hour in the hallway ironing clothes.'
-				elseif MomPom = 6:
-					sdacharand = rand(10, 50)
-					money += sdacharand
-					gs 'stat'
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/grocery.jpg"></center>'
-					'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to run to the store, and buy some groceries. You head to the store and purchase the food, hauling the heavy bags home. The groceries cost you <<sdacharand>> <b>₽</b>, she gives you some money to cover the cost when you return home.'
-					'You have gain a few rubles for your effort.'
-				elseif MomPom = 7:
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/pharmacy.jpg"></center>'
-					'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
-					'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to go to the pharmacy, to get some medicine. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s sister, Lyudmila, works there and always gives your family the medicine you need for free. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gave you a list of the items you need, and when you enter the pharmacy you see your aunt Luda behind the counter as always. She smiles when she recognizes you. "Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>! How are you? I hope everything is okay?"'
-					'"Hello aunt!" You greet her back, and have a chat with her before you give her list your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> made. Aunt Luda quickly gathers the items your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> wrote down, gathers them in a paper bag and hands the bag over to you. "Here you go, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Have a nice day, tell your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> I said hi!"'
-					'You say you will and wave her goodbye. When you come home, you give your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> the bag. After a few minutes you realize you forgot to pass on aunt Luda''s regards to your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, but decide to not bother now.'
-				elseif MomPom = 8:
-					MomPom = 1
-					jump 'MomPom_jump'
-				end
-				act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/grocery.jpg"></center>'
+				'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to run to the store, and buy some groceries. You head to the store and purchase the food, hauling the heavy bags home. The groceries cost you <<sdacharand>> <b>₽</b>, she gives you some money to cover the cost when you return home.'
+				'You have gain a few rubles for your effort.'
+			elseif MomPom = 7:
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/pharmacy.jpg"></center>'
+				'You offer to help your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> out around the house.'
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asks you to go to the pharmacy, to get some medicine. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>''s sister, Lyudmila, works there and always gives your family the medicine you need for free. Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gave you a list of the items you need, and when you enter the pharmacy you see your aunt Luda behind the counter as always. She smiles when she recognizes you. "Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>! How are you? I hope everything is okay?"'
+				'"Hello aunt!" You greet her back, and have a chat with her before you give her list your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> made. Aunt Luda quickly gathers the items your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> wrote down, gathers them in a paper bag and hands the bag over to you. "Here you go, <<$pcs_nickname>>! Have a nice day, tell your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> I said hi!"'
+				'You say you will and wave her goodbye. When you come home, you give your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> the bag. After a few minutes you realize you forgot to pass on aunt Luda''s regards to your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, but decide to not bother now.'
+			elseif MomPom = 8:
+				MomPom = 1
+				jump 'MomPom_jump'
 			end
+			act 'Continue':gt 'mother'
+		end
 
-			if npc_QW['A29'] = 1 and npc_rel['A29'] >= 20 and $loc = 'kuhrPar':
-				act 'Try to reconcile':
-					*clr & cla
-					'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
-					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
+		if npc_QW['A29'] = 1 and npc_rel['A29'] >= 20 and $loc = 'kuhrPar':
+			act 'Try to reconcile':
+				*clr & cla
+				'<center><b><font color="maroon">Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, Natasha <<$pcs_lastname>></font></b></center>'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 
-					mqwtRand = rand(1, 10)
+				mqwtRand = rand(1, 10)
 
-					if mqwtRand <= 2:
-						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', -rand(1,5)
-						minut += 30
-						'You try to have a talk with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, to hopefully patch up your horrible relationship. You''re not sure whether you said something wrong, or whether she''s just in a bad mood, but your attempt to reconcile backfired horribly; within moments the conversation turns into a screaming contest, and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> ends up disliking you even more.'
+				if mqwtRand <= 2:
+					gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', -rand(1,5)
+					minut += 30
+					'You try to have a talk with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, to hopefully patch up your horrible relationship. You''re not sure whether you said something wrong, or whether she''s just in a bad mood, but your attempt to reconcile backfired horribly; within moments the conversation turns into a screaming contest, and your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> ends up disliking you even more.'
 
-						act 'Leave her be for now':gt $loc, $metka
-					elseif mqwtRand > 2 and mqwtRand <= 8:
-						gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', 'like'
-						minut += 30
-						'You try to have a talk with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, to try and patch up your horrible relationship. Despite your best efforts, the whole half-hour conversation consists mainly of a fairly aggressive monologue from your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> about morality, diseases and what awaits you in the future, if you do not change your ways. Still, there is some improvement in your relationship.'
+					act 'Leave her be for now':gt $loc, $metka
+				elseif mqwtRand > 2 and mqwtRand <= 8:
+					gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A29', 'like'
+					minut += 30
+					'You try to have a talk with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, to try and patch up your horrible relationship. Despite your best efforts, the whole half-hour conversation consists mainly of a fairly aggressive monologue from your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> about morality, diseases and what awaits you in the future, if you do not change your ways. Still, there is some improvement in your relationship.'
 
-						act 'Leave her be for now':gt $loc, $metka
-					elseif mqwtRand > 8:
-						gt'mother','motherQW_2'
-					end
+					act 'Leave her be for now':gt $loc, $metka
+				elseif mqwtRand > 8:
+					gt'mother','motherQW_2'
 				end
 			end
-			gs 'mother', 'pregreact'
-		else
-			gt $loc, $metka
+		end
+		gs 'mother', 'pregreact'
 		end
 	end
 
@@ -1738,7 +1734,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'condom_steal':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/mom/mother.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you walk through the corridors you overhear some annoyed exhales coming form your parents room, you quickly take a peek seeing your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> rummaging through some of the stuff, "Where the hell are they..." you hear her quietly say, "I know I put them here, I always put them here..."'
 		'Not noticing you she keeps rummaging as you quietly slip out not wanting to bring attention to yourself...'
-	elseif $ARGS[0] = 'talk':
+	elseif $ARGS[1] = 'talk':
 		! Mom talking to step dad about the missing condoms
 		*clr & cla
 		motherQW['con_steal_talk'] = daystart

+ 8 - 0
locations/pirsingsalon.qsrc

@@ -130,6 +130,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'tongue_pir':
 			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 3000:
 				act 'Buy this piercing for 3000 <b>₽</b> (card)':
 					'You buy the piercing.'
+					cla
 					karta -= 3000
 					dynamic 'pirsA<<i>>_owned = 1'
 					act 'Return':gt 'pirsingsalon', 'pirsyaz'
@@ -216,6 +217,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lip_pir':
 			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 4000:
 				act 'Buy this piercing for 4000 <b>₽</b> (card)':
 					'You buy the piercing.'
+					cla
 					karta -= 4000
 					dynamic 'pirsB<<i>>_owned = 1'
 					act 'Return':gt 'pirsingsalon', 'pirsgub'
@@ -302,6 +304,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'ears_pir':
 			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 1000:
 				act 'Buy these earrings for 1000 <b>₽</b> (card)':
 					'You buy the earrings.'
+					cla
 					karta -= 1000
 					dynamic 'pirsC<<i>>_owned = 1'
 					act 'Return':gt 'pirsingsalon', 'pirsysh'
@@ -388,6 +391,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nose_pir':
 			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 2000:
 				act 'Buy this piercing for 2000 <b>₽</b> (card)':
 					'You buy the piercing.'
+					cla
 					karta -= 2000
 					dynamic 'pirsD<<i>>_owned = 1'
 					act 'Return':gt 'pirsingsalon', 'pirsnos'
@@ -474,6 +478,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'brow_pir':
 			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 2000:
 				act 'Buy this piercing for 2000 <b>₽</b> (card)':
 					'You buy the piercing.'
+					cla
 					karta -= 2000
 					dynamic 'PirsE<<i>>_owned = 1'
 					act 'Return':gt 'pirsingsalon', 'pirsbro'
@@ -560,6 +565,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nip_pir':
 			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 6000:
 				act 'Buy these piercings for 6000 <b>₽</b> (card)':
 					'You buy the piercings.'
+					cla
 					karta -= 6000
 					dynamic 'pirsF<<i>>_owned = 1'
 					act 'Return':gt 'pirsingsalon', 'pirssos'
@@ -646,6 +652,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'belly_pir':
 			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 7000:
 				act 'Buy this piercing for 7000 <b>₽</b> (card)':
 					'You buy the piercing.'
+					cla
 					karta -= 7000
 					dynamic 'PirsN<<i>>_owned = 1'
 					act 'Return':gt 'pirsingsalon', 'pirspyp'
@@ -732,6 +739,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pubic_pir':
 			if karta + bankDebtLimit >= 10000:
 				act 'Buy this piercing for 10,000 <b>₽</b> (card)':
 					'You buy the piercing.'
+					cla
 					karta -= 10000
 					dynamic 'pirsG<<i>>_owned = 1'
 					act 'Return':gt 'pirsingsalon', 'pirsvla'

+ 3 - 2
locations/road.qsrc

@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 
 	if nroad = 0:
 		'You''re on the outskirts of St. Petersburg. You see a number of crudely made huts near the trees, a bunch of homeless people must have sought shelter here.'
-		'A <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''furi''">lorry</a> is parked next to the road. The driver is currently taking a break, and is having a cigarette. He could probably bring you to Pavlovsk, for a price...'
+		'A <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''furi''">lorry</a> is parked next to the road. The driver is currently taking a break, and is having a cigarette. He could probably bring you to Gadukino or Pavlovsk, for a price...'
 	elseif nroad = 1:
 		'You''re not very far from St. Petersburg. You see a bunch of <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''psiklin'',''start''">luxury houses</a> not far from the road. That settlement looks like it''s very expensive to live in.'
 	elseif nroad = 2:
@@ -113,6 +113,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		display_bb = 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'You see a <a href="exec:gt ''train'', ''village''">railway platform</a> not far from the road. In the same direction, a dirt road leads to the village of <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''gadukino''">Gadukino</a>.'
+		'A <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''furi''">lorry</a> is parked next to the road. The driver is currently taking a break, and is having a cigarette. He could probably bring you to Pavlovsk or St. Petersburg, for a price...'
 		!if npc_QW['A60'] > 15 and gadriver_gang = 2:
 		!	'You and Mira can both <a href="exec:gt ''gadprostitutes'', ''start''">prostitute</a> yourselves around here.'
 		!elseif npc_QW['A60'] > 15:
@@ -141,7 +142,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '':
 		'You are on the outskirts of the <a href="exec:minut += 15 & gt ''liam''">old town</a> district of Pavlovsk about a five minutes down a cobblestone road is the old town center. It''s a fairly popular for tourists to explore with much of its old architecture still intact.'
 	elseif nroad = 20:
 		'The main road ends at the provincial town of Pavlovsk. You can see the castle in the distance.'
-		'A <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''furi''">lorry</a> is parked next to the road. The driver is currently taking a break, and is having a cigarette. He could probably bring you to St. Petersburg, for a price...'
+		'A <a href="exec:minut += 5 & gt ''furi''">lorry</a> is parked next to the road. The driver is currently taking a break, and is having a cigarette. He could probably bring you to Gadukino or St. Petersburg, for a price...'
 		'A small road leads to an almost hidden old <a href="exec:gt ''brothel'', ''lobby''">hotel</a>. Usually tourists use it when passing by or when visiting the old town of Pavlovsk.'
 	end
 end

+ 1 - 1
locations/shop.qsrc

@@ -614,7 +614,7 @@ end
 
 if $shoplocation = 'Anya':
 	cla
-	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/sister.jpg"></center>'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/resident/anya/anyabusywork.jpg"></center>'
 	gs 'sister_chat', 'checks'
 	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, do not disturb me at work, can''t you see I have customers?""'
 	act '<B>Move away</B>':gt'shop','start'

+ 2 - 0
locations/sitrPar.qsrc

@@ -90,6 +90,8 @@ elseif momloc = 24:
 		act 'leave': 'korrPar'
 	end
 	exit
+elseif momloc = 19:
+	'Your <a href="exec:gt''mother''"><<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>></a> is here watching TV with Vladimir.'
 end
 
 if ocpd_room = 0 and breastpump = 1 and bp_unbox <= 0:

+ 3 - 3
locations/therapist.qsrc

@@ -358,7 +358,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoFuck':
 	!ride
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sex/hypnofucksit<<rand(1,2)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 		$hypnofuck = '"Yes, sit on my lap, I want you to do the work for now."<br>He masturbates a little, then takes his hands away from his massive dick. "I want you to take it into your hands and lower yourself onto it. Take it deep into your pussy."<br>You do as he says, stepping above him with spread legs, then taking his massive pole into your hands you fit his tool into the entrance of your body. You feel yourself getting wet according to <i>Master</i>''s instruction, then take a deep breath and push your body onto his pole.'
-		$hypnofuck2 = 'He grabs your hips, moving your body to the rithm he wants you to ride him, and it is fast. Fast, deep and hard, without any regard to you, or that he actually bumps into your cervix in this position. You just ride him like a cowboy, or in this case cowgirl.'
+		$hypnofuck2 = 'He grabs your hips, moving your body to the rhythm he wants you to ride him, and it is fast. Fast, deep and hard, without any regard to you, or that he actually bumps into your cervix in this position. You just ride him like a cowboy, or in this case cowgirl.'
 	end
 	'<font color=brown>'
 	$hypnofuck
@@ -410,12 +410,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'hypnoAnal':
 	$cumdesciption3 = 'cum filled ass'
 	$cumdesciption2 = 'ass is full of fresh sperm, slowly leaking out of you'
 	gs 'cum_call', 'anus', 'A186', 2, 0, 15000, 60
-	randpos = rand(0,3)
+	randpos = rand(0,2)
 	'<font color=brown>'
 	if randpos = 0:
 	!on your back
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/clinic/therapist/sex/hypnoanalback<<rand(1,2)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
-		$hypnofuck = 'You walk to him, and he takes your hand and pushes you ontoour back.<br>"You look beautiful. I will fuck you so hard like a teenage boy," he says. "You will take it like a trooper. Unfortunately my wife lost all of her appeal, so I have to satisfy myself with your little rosebud."<br>He grabs your legs and genty pushes your legs apart, then kneeling between your legs he forces his dick through your muscles.'
+		$hypnofuck = 'You walk to him, and he takes your hand and pushes you on to your back.<br>"You look beautiful. I will fuck you so hard like a teenage boy," he says. "You will take it like a trooper. Unfortunately my wife lost all of her appeal, so I have to satisfy myself with your little rosebud."<br>He grabs your legs and genty pushes your legs apart, then kneeling between your legs he forces his dick through your muscles.'
 		$hypnofuck2 = 'He pounds deep into your ass, and the hard surface does not make it comfortable for you. You wince a few times while his balls rhythmically slap your asscheeks, laboring above you. You feel his sweat dripping down on your tits as you spread your leg as wide as possible to give him as much access as possible.'
 	elseif randpos = 1:
 	!on your back, couch

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