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  1. 73 21
      locations/albinahome.qsrc
  2. 178 175
      locations/katja_uni.qsrc

+ 73 - 21
locations/albinahome.qsrc

@@ -359,8 +359,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'game':
 	minut += 2
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/albinatalk.jpg"></center>'
-	'You notice the big flat screen TV and both an Xbox and PlayStation in front of it, with rows upon rows of video games underneath them. "You have a lot of games. I wish I could afford a console."'
-	'She smiles at you. "Do you want to play some?"'
+	'You notice the flat screen TV and a games console sitting in front of it. A row of various Tekken and Mortal Kombat games sit underneath them.' 
+	'"I wish I could afford a console..." you mumble out loud.'
+	'She smiles at you. "You want to play a few games?"'
 	act 'No':
 		*clr & cla
 		menu_off = 1
@@ -409,9 +410,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'game':
 				act 'Refuse the bet (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 			end
 		else
-			'You and Albina lie down in front of the TV after picking one of the games. You play while chatting about various things and trash talking each other, although neither of you are giving your full attention to the game. Instead, you are just having fun together.'
+			'You and Albina lie down in front of the TV after picking one of the games. You play while chatting about various things and trash talking each other, although neither of you are giving your full attention to the game. You''re just having fun together.'
 			act 'Finish playing': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
-			act 'Keep playing video games': gt 'albinahome', 'playgame'
+			act 'Keep playing': gt 'albinahome', 'playgame'
 		end
 	end
 end
@@ -428,11 +429,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'playgame':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/game.jpg"></center>'
 	'The two of you keep playing video games and trash talking each other, even bumping each other to try and screw each other up, but neither of you are taking it seriously. You mostly just laugh at the silly mistakes you both make while only partially paying attention to the game.'
 	if hotcat >= 5:
-		'Once you finish the game, Albina turns towards you instead of starting another one. "How about we see who actually is the better gamer?" she asks with a confident smile.'
-		'You laugh and nod. "Sure, but you are so going down."'
+		'Once you finish the game, Albina turns to you instead of starting another one. "How about we see who actually <i>is</i> the better gamer?" she asks with a confident smile.'
+		'You laugh and nod. "Sure, but you''re so going down!"'
 		'She laughs in response. "You''re that sure? Then how about we make it a bit more interesting then?"'
 		'You arch your brow curiously. "What do you have in mind?"'
-		'She grins at you, gets up and walks over to her dresser. She rummages around in it for a moment before pulling out a strapon harness with a large black dildo attached. "The winner gets to use this on the loser... However. They. Want," she says with a smirk.'
+		'She grins at you, gets up and walks over to her dresser. She rummages around in it before pulling out a strapon harness with a large black dildo attached. "The winner gets to use this on the loser... However. They. Want," she says with a smirk.'
 
 		gs 'willpower', 'sex', 'resist', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -463,7 +464,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'playgame':
 		'Albina turns to you. "So, want to lose again?"'
 		'You shove her gently. "Oh please! I was winning!"'
 		act 'Finish playing': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
-		act 'Keep playing video games': gt 'albinahome', 'playgame'
+		act 'Keep playing': gt 'albinahome', 'playgame'
 	end
 end
 
@@ -497,7 +498,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'game_bet':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/game.jpg"></center>'
 		if albplay = 3:
-			'You completely trounce her. She isn''t even close to you in score. Before the game can end, she lets out an exacerbated sigh and tosses her controller down in defeat, knowing she has no chance of beating you. You give her a gloating smirk as she reaches over and grabs the strapon harness before handing it to you. You both undress and you grin as you slide the harness on.'
+			'She doesn''t even come close to beating you. Before the game can end, she lets out an exacerbated sigh and tosses her controller down in defeat, knowing she has no chance. You give her a gloating smirk as she reaches over and grabs the strapon harness before handing it to you. You both undress and you grin as you slide the harness on.'
 			act 'Continue': gt 'albinahome', 'wear_strapon'
 		elseif albplay = 2:
 			'It''s close, but in the end you just manage to win the game. "Yes!" you exclaim triumphantly, and she laughs as she grabs the strapon harness and hands it to you. You both undress and you grin as you slide the harness on.'
@@ -517,7 +518,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'game_bet':
 		menu_off = 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/game.jpg"></center>'
-		'You''re not sure why, but part of you <i>wants</i> her to use the strapon on you, so you purposefully lose the game. Albina looks at you suspiciously with a raised brow, but smiles knowingly and smacks your ass. "Show me your ass <<$pcs_nickname>>! You''re my bitch now!" You both undress and Albina slides the harness on with a smirk on her face.'
+		'You''re not sure why, but part of you <i>wants</i> her to use the strapon on you, so you purposefully lose the game. Albina looks at you suspiciously with a raised brow, but smiles and smacks your ass. "Show me your ass <<$pcs_nickname>>! You''re my bitch now!" You both undress and Albina slides the harness on with a smirk on her face.'
 		act 'Get fucked with the strapon': gt 'albinahome', 'receive_strapon'
 	end
 end
@@ -659,7 +660,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_ass_fucks_you':
 	if stat['anal'] = 0 and stat['anal_strap'] = 0:
 		if stat['anal_dildo'] = 0 and stat['anal_fist'] = 0 and stat['self_fisting_anal'] = 0:
-			!!The player character has never had anything larger than a finger in her ass.
+			!!The player character has never had anything larger than a finger in her ass
 			act 'Anal virgin':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -672,22 +673,39 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'albina_ass_fucks_you':
 				act 'Yes': gt 'albinahome', 'first_anal'
 				act 'No': gt 'albinahome', 'anal_refuse'
 			end
-		else
-			!!The player character has had a dildo or fist (her own or another persons) in her ass.
-			act 'Anal virgin':
+		end
+		if stat['anal_fist'] = 1 or stat['self_fisting_anal'] = 1: 
+			!!The player character has had a fist (her own or another persons) in her ass
+			act 'Only a fist':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/albinaroom.jpg"></center>'
 				'Thoughts race through your head as you look at the huge dildo, and Albina notices your hesitation.'
 				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, have you ever been fucked in the ass before?"'
-				'You feel your cheeks burning bright red. "Well, I''ve used a dildo and I''ve managed to take a fist..."'
+				'You feel your cheeks burning bright red. "Well, I''ve managed to take a fist..."'
 				*nl
-				'Albina looks at you in what you can only describe as awe. "Damn <<$pcs_nickname>>, even I''ve never taken a fist up my ass and I''m the queen of butt stuff."'
+				'Albina looks at you in what you can only describe as awe. "God damn <<$pcs_nickname>>, even I''ve never taken a fist up my ass and I''m the queen of butt stuff!"'
 				'"Is it weird to do that?" you ask with concern.'
 				'"No, not at all! To be honest, I''ve always wanted to try it, but I''ve never found anyone interested in doing it. Maybe that''s about to change..."'
-				'She looks you over with lustful desire before continuing. "It''s good that you''re experimenting back there. It''ll make your first proper butt fuck easier if you''ve had some experience shoving something up there, whether that''s a dildo or a whole fucking hand. I can''t believe you''ve done that..."'
+				'She looks you over with lustful desire before continuing. "Practicing with a dildo makes your first butt fuck easier, but a whole fucking hand?! A cock or dildo would be a breeze for you!"'
 				'She then places a hand on your shoulder. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, be honest with me. Do you want me to fuck your ass? I''ll be as gentle as you want."'
-				act 'Yes': gt 'albinahome', 'first_anal'
+				act 'Yes': gt 'albinahome', 'first_anal1'
+				act 'No': gt 'albinahome', 'anal_refuse'
+			end
+		end
+		if stat['anal_dildo'] = 1:
+			!!The player character has used a dildo on her ass
+			act 'Only a dildo':
+				*clr & cla
+				gs 'stat'
+				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/albinaroom.jpg"></center>'
+				'Thoughts race through your head as you look at the huge dildo, and Albina notices your hesitation.'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, have you ever been fucked in the ass before?"'
+				'You feel your cheeks burning bright red. "Well, I''ve used a dildo..."'
+				*nl
+				'"Oh, a buttslut in training!" she teases. "No, it''s good that you''re experimenting back there. It''ll make your first proper butt fuck easier if you''ve had some experience shoving something up there first."'
+				'She then places a hand on your shoulder. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, be honest with me. Do you want me to try the real thing? I''ll be as gentle as you want."'
+				act 'Yes': gt 'albinahome', 'first_anal1'
 				act 'No': gt 'albinahome', 'anal_refuse'
 			end
 		end
@@ -727,7 +745,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_anal':
 	'"Y-yes, I would. Just promise you''ll be gentle," you reply and Albina smiles.'
 	'"I will. Now get on all fours and bring your ass up as high as you can."'
 	'As you get on all fours, you glance back and see her squirting lube onto her fingers. You shiver when you feel the cold liquid being applied to your asshole and Albina starts massaging it in before you feel her slowly pushing a finger inside you. You moan softly at the sensation as you feel her finger curling up inside you.'
-	'After a few minutes, she pulls her finger out. "Okay, that should be enough. Are you sure you want to do this, <<$pcs_nickname>>? Just because I''m a buttslut doesn''t mean you have to be one too."'
+	'After spending a few minutes fingering you, she pulls her finger out. "Okay, that should be enough. Are you sure you want to do this, <<$pcs_nickname>>? Just because I''m a buttslut doesn''t mean you have to be one too."'
 	'You stare at the dildo hanging between her legs, but steel yourself and nod. "Yes, I want to do this. Just go slow please?"'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_finger', 5, 'lesbian'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -737,11 +755,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_anal':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/anal1.jpg"></center>'
 		'Your heart races as you feel Albina moving in behind you. You instinctively tense up when you feel the head of the dildo pressing against your asshole. "Okay <<$pcs_nickname>>, this is going to feel strange and definitely hurt a little, but you''re going to have to try and relax as best as you can for me," Albina tells you, and you grip the sheets tightly as you do what she says.' 
 		'You feel her start slowly pushing and the pressure builds until the tip of the dildo suddenly pops into your ass, causing you to groan and grit your teeth while gripping the sheets even tighter. It''s a painful sensation and you instinctively feel the urge to pull yourself free. "You okay, <<$pcs_nickname>>? I can take it out if you want?" Albina asks as you feel a stinging pain shooting through you.'
-		'Remembering what she said, you try to relax. "No, I just need a second," you reply as you look back at her and she nods.'
+		'Remembering what she said, you fight the urge to pull away and try to relax. "No, I just need a second," you reply as you look back at her and she nods.'
 		*nl
 		'After taking a few seconds to adjust to the sensation, you nod at Albina. She squirts more lube onto the already slick dildo before placing her hands on your hips. "Okay, just keep your ass relaxed and tell me if it gets too painful. I don''t want you hurting yourself trying to impress me. Got it?"'
 		'You nod and prepare yourself as you feel Albina start slowly pushing the dildo deeper into your ass. You feel yourself being stretched out as she reaches a depth she feels you''ll be comfortable with and starts gently thrusting.'
-		'Despite the shallow depth and Albina being gentle, the pain becomes too much after a few minutes and you ask her to pull out. You sit up on your knees and cluch your ass cheeks in your hands as pain pulses through your stretched asshole.'
+		'Despite the shallow depth and Albina being gentle, the pain becomes too much after a few minutes and you ask her to pull out. You sit up on your knees and clutch your ass cheeks in your hands as pain pulses through your stretched asshole.'
 		'"You lasted longer than I thought you would. Not bad for your first go, <<$pcs_nickname>>," Albina says as she hands you some wipes to clean yourself up. "Next time you lose, maybe we can go deeper and... harder," she adds with a teasing grin as she cleans the dildo and puts it away.'
 		*nl
 		'You slowly get dressed as the stinging pain continues to pulse through your ass. Albina watches with an amused grin. "Don''t worry, it gets less painful the more you do it."'
@@ -753,6 +771,40 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_anal':
 	end
 end
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'first_anal1':
+	*clr & cla
+	menu_off = 1
+	npc_sex['A23'] += 1
+	lesbian += 1
+	gs 'boyStat', 'D3'
+	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/albinahome/albinaroom.jpg"></center>'
+	'"Yes, I would," you reply and Albina smiles.'
+	'"Okay, get on all fours and bring your ass up as high as you can."'
+	'As you get on all fours, you glance back and see her squirting lube onto her fingers. You shiver when you feel the cold liquid being applied to your asshole and Albina starts massaging it in before you feel her slowly pushing a finger inside you. You moan softly at the sensation as you feel her finger curling up inside you.'
+	'After spending a few minutes fingering you, she pulls her finger out. "Okay, that should be enough. Are you sure you want to do this, <<$pcs_nickname>>? Just because I''m a buttslut doesn''t mean you have to be one too."'
+	'You stare at the dildo hanging between her legs, but steel yourself and nod. "Yes, I want to do this."'
+	gs 'arousal', 'anal_finger', 5, 'lesbian'
+	gs 'stat'
+
+	act 'Get your ass fucked':
+		gs 'stat'
+		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/albina/sex/game/anal1.jpg"></center>'
+		'Your heart is racing even though you know what to expect. Albina presses the tip of the dildo against your asshole and you feel the familiar sensation of the pressure building as she pushes forward until the tip of the dildo suddenly pops into your ass, causing you to groan. "You okay, <<$pcs_nickname>>? I can take it out if you want?" Albina asks.'
+		*nl
+		'After taking a few seconds to adjust to the sensation, you nod at Albina. She squirts more lube onto the already slick dildo before placing her hands on your hips. "Okay, just tell me if it gets too painful for you."'
+		'You nod and prepare yourself as you feel Albina slowly push the dildo deeper into your ass and starts thrusting.'
+		'Having had your ass penetrated before, Albina goes a little faster and deeper than you think she normally would have. However, the sensation of actually being buttfucked is still new to you and you soon ask her to stop when it becomes too much.'
+		*nl
+		'"Not bad for your first go, <<$pcs_nickname>>. I bet the prior ''practice'' helped," Albina says as she hands you some wipes to clean yourself up. "Next time you lose, maybe we can go deeper and... harder," she adds with a teasing grin as she cleans the dildo and puts it away.'
+		'You slowly get dressed as Albina watches with an amused grin. "It feels great, doesn''t it? It gets better the more you do it."'
+		'"You would know," you reply with a smirk and she laughs.'
+		gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 10, 'lesbian'
+		gs 'arousal', 'end'
+		gs 'stat'
+		act 'Do something else': gt 'albinahome', 'bedroom'
+	end
+end
+
 if ARGS[0] = 'anal_refuse':
 	*clr & cla
 	menu_off = 1

+ 178 - 175
locations/katja_uni.qsrc

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@
 !!							 So if you want to check if Katja is not wearing panties at school, use katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] >= 5. (katjaTanga, katja_tanga_end)
 
 !! katjaQW['school_kiss'] Increases the first two times you kiss at school, used to trigger the kissing competition in the park. (flag_start_parc)
-									
+	
 !! katjaQW['slut'] a number that increases as Katja becomes more and more sexualy liberated, and allows her to be villing to do more sexual stuff. (katjaSlut)
 !! katjaQW['horny'] a measure of Katja''s arousal. Grows until she has an orgasmn and will determine how willing she is at the moment to have sex.
 !! katjaQW['dom'] a number that tells if Katja is dominant or submissive. 0 is neutral, negative means she is submissive and positive means that she is dominant. In general the absolute value needs to be above 30 before you will see any effect. (katjaDom but not a 1 to 1 translation since that variable was all over the place.)
@@ -37,7 +37,7 @@
 !! npc_vag['A14'] The capacity for Katja to take a dick (or dildo) in the vagina.
 !! npc_ass['A14'] The capacity for Katja to take a dick (or dildo) in her ass. (KatjaAnus)
 
-!! katjaQW['strapon_bj'] = 1 Katja has given a bj to your strap-on.
+!! katjaQW['strapon_bj'] = 1 Katja has given a blowjob to your strap-on.
 !! katjaQW['strapon_vag'] = 1 You have fucked Katja''s pussy with your strap-on.
 !! katjaQW['strapon_ass'] = 1 You have fucked Katja''s ass with your strap-on.
 
@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@
 !! katjaQW['marcus_anal'] = 1 Katja has taken Marcus''s cock in her ass.
 !! katjaQW['marcus_disco'] = 1 Katja and the player character have had a threesome with Marcus at the community center disco.
 
-!! katjaQW['Marcus_day'] is set to daystart if Katja has asked to have a threesome with Marcus. Such that the question will only be asked once per day.
+!! katjaQW['Marcus_day'] is set to daystart if Katja has asked to have a threesome with Marcus so that the question will only be asked once per day.
 
 !! katjaQW['birth_control_start_day'] This is set to the daystart value from the day Katja''s birth control will be effective, if the player tells her to use it. Should be used to check if Katja can become pregnant by a if katjaQW['birth_control_start_day'] ! 0 and katjaQW['birth_control_start_day'] < daystart to make sure she is protected.
 
@@ -62,7 +62,7 @@
 !! katjaQW['knows_BJ'] = 1 You have told Katja that you have given a guy a blowjob (KatjaKnowBJ =1)
 !! katjaQW['knows_sex'] = 1 You have told Katja that you have had vaginal sex with a guy (KatjaKnowSex =1)
 !! katjaQW['knows_anal'] = 1 You have told Katja that you have had anal sex with a guy (KatjaKnowAnal =1)
-!! katjaQW['knows_cuni'] = 1 You have told Katja that have gone down on another girl (KatjaKnowKuni =1)
+!! katjaQW['knows_cuni'] = 1 You have told Katja that you have gone down on another girl (KatjaKnowKuni =1)
 !! katjaQW['know_Pirced_tongue'] = 1 Katja has noticed your tongue piercing (KatjaKnowPirsA =1)
 
 !! katja['school_sex'] = 1 Katja has taken you to a storage room at school to have sex. (katschoolsex)
@@ -73,10 +73,10 @@
 !! KatjaQW['sex_in_the_park_comment'] temporary variable which is set during sex with guys in the park to make sure she gives the right comment before she says goodbye. Will be reset to 0 when going home after sex. (KatjaOhrenet)
 
 !! katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 1 Katja has told you she is going to uni to study teaching.
-!! katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 1 you have told Katja that you are going to the university to study in the teaching program.
+!! katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 1 you have told Katja that you''re going to the university to study in the teaching program.
 !! katjaQW['meet_uni_class'] = 1 You have met Katja in your uni class.
 
-!! katjaQW['lazar_uni_meet'] = 1 You and Katja have meet Lazar at the university cafe.
+!! katjaQW['lazar_uni_meet'] = 1 You and Katja have met Lazar at the university cafe.
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'first_in_class_meet':
 	menu_off = 1
@@ -84,7 +84,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_in_class_meet':
 	if npc_sex['A14'] = 1:
 		if katjaQW['slut'] >= 100 and katjaQW['dom'] > -30:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/class_grope.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you are walking into the lecture hall, you yelp in surprise when a pair of hands snake underneath your arms and grab your breasts, giving a firm squeeze. Before you can turn around, you hear a soft voice from behind you.'
+			'As you''re walking into the lecture hall, you yelp in surprise when a pair of hands snake underneath your arms and grab your breasts, giving them a firm squeeze. Before you can turn around, you hear a soft voice from behind you.'
 			if katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0:
 				!! hornguy added this variable:
 				!! rename it to whatever you want
@@ -92,23 +92,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_in_class_meet':
 					katjaQW['annoyed'] = 1
 					gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'dislike'
 					'"Hey sexy," Katja whispers in your ear. "Why haven''t I seen you since we graduated? And why didn''t you tell me you were starting the teaching program?" She sounds vaguely disappointed.'
-					'"Sorry. I didn''t think it was worth mentioning," you say. "You didn''t tell me were in this program either."' 
+					'"Sorry, I didn''t think it was worth mentioning," you say. "You didn''t tell me were in this program either!"' 
 				else
 					katjaQW['annoyed'] = 2
 					gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'loathe'
-					'"Hey," Katja whispers in your ear. "Why didn''t you tell me that you were joining the teaching program?" She seems annoyed with you. Just as you think this, your suspicions are confirmed when her fingers find your nipples and pinches them hard enough to make you gasp.'
-					'"I''m very sorry," you say, squirming in her arms, trying not to squeal. "I should have told you."'
+					'"Hey," Katja whispers in your ear. "Why didn''t you tell me that you were joining the teaching program?" She seems annoyed with you. Just as you think this, your suspicions are confirmed when her fingers find your nipples and she pinches them hard enough to make you gasp.'
+					'"Sorry," you say, squirming in her arms while trying not to squeal. "I should have told you."'
 				end
 			else
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'like'
 				'"Hey sexy," Katja whispers in your ear. The tone of her voice gives you the impression she''s smiling. "This is going to be so much fun, especially with you here."'
-				'"Yes, it is," you say, looking over your shoulder to smile back at her. "We are going to rule this place."'
+				'"Yes, it is," you say, looking over your shoulder to smile back at her. "We''re going to rule this place."'
 			end
 			if katjaQW['QWstage'] >= 7:
 				if katjaQW['annoyed'] = 1:
 					'"I suppose I''ll just have to forgive you," she says playfully, giving your breasts another gentle squeeze. "Have you seen all the hot guys around? You think we can find '+iif(katjaQW['park_sex'] < 3, 'one or maybe two guys who might have fun with us?', 'enough to satisfy our needs?')+'"'
 				elseif katjaQW['annoyed'] = 2:
-					'"I suppose I''ll just have to forgive you," she says, tone softening to playful and giving your breasts a much more gentle squeeze. "Have you seen all the hot guys around? You think we can find '+iif(katjaQW['park_sex'] < 3, 'one or maybe two guys who might have fun with us?', 'enough to satisfy our needs?')+'"'
+					'"I suppose I''ll just have to forgive you," she says, her tone softening to playful and giving your breasts a much more gentle squeeze. "Have you seen all the hot guys around? You think we can find '+iif(katjaQW['park_sex'] < 3, 'one or maybe two guys who might have fun with us?', 'enough to satisfy our needs?')+'"'
 				else
 					'"Have you seen all the hot guys around?" she asks excitedly, giving your breasts another playful fondle. "You think we can find '+iif(katjaQW['park_sex'] < 3, 'one or maybe two guys who might have fun with us?', 'enough to satisfy our needs?')+'"'
 				end
@@ -124,7 +124,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_in_class_meet':
 					'"Have you seen all the hot guys around?" she asks excitedly, giving your breasts another playful fondle. "Since '+iif(katjaQW['marcus_pussy'] = 1, 'Marcus', '')+iif(katjaQW['marcus_pussy'] + katjaQW['ivan_anal'] = 2, 'and', '')+iif(katjaQW['ivan_anal'] = 1, 'Ivan', '')+' aren''t around, maybe we can find someone to join us sometime?"'
 				end
 				'"Of course," you reply. "Who could say no to two hot chicks like us?"'
-				'"Anyways, we can find boys to fuck later, we should get to class."'
+				'"Anyways, we can find boys to fuck later. We should get to class."'
 				'Katja gives your breast one last squeeze before removing her hands. She seems much bolder than she was before. Maybe getting away from her childhood home has made her less self conscious and more confident?'
 			else
 				'"This is all so exciting!" she squeals. "Is it weird that it''s kind of turning me on? I almost feel like dragging you to an empty room right now."'
@@ -134,23 +134,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_in_class_meet':
 			end
 		elseif katjaQW['slut'] > 50:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/hug.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you are walling into the lecture hall, a pair of arms suddenly wrap themselves around your belly. They pull you back and you feel two soft things pressing against your back.'
+			'As you''re walling into the lecture hall, a pair of arms suddenly wrap themselves around your belly. They pull you back and you feel two soft things pressing against your back.'
 			if katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0:
 				if katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0:
 					katjaQW['annoyed'] = 1
 					gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'dislike'
 					'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>", Katja whispers in your ear. "Why haven''t I seen you since we graduated? And why didn''t you tell me you were starting the teaching program?" She sounds vaguely disappointed.'
-					'"Sorry. I didn''t think it was worth mentioning," you say. "You didn''t tell me were in this program either."' 
+					'"Sorry, I didn''t think it was worth mentioning," you say. "You didn''t tell me were in this program either!"' 
 				else
 					katjaQW['annoyed'] = 2
 					gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'loathe'
 					'"Hey," Katja whispers in your ear. "Why didn''t you tell me that you were joining the teaching program?" Her voice has an edge to it and you can tell she''s <i>very</i> unhappy.'
-					'"I''m very sorry," you say, tensely. "I should have told you,"'
+					'"Sorry," you say tensely. "I should have told you."'
 				end
 			else
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'like'
 				'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>," Katja giggles in your ear. "This is going to be so much fun, especially with you here."'
-				'"Yes, it is," you say, looking over your shoulder to smile back at her. "We are going to rule this place."'
+				'"Yes, it is," you say, looking over your shoulder to smile back at her. "We''re going to rule this place."'
 			end
 			if katjaQW['QWstage'] >= 7:
 				if katjaQW['annoyed'] = 1:
@@ -181,20 +181,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_in_class_meet':
 			if katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0:
 				if katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0:
 					gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'dislike'
-					'As you are walking into the lecture hall, a pair of arms suddenly wrap themselves around you. You turn in surprise and find Katja holding you, an expression on her face that seems caught between a smile and a glare.'
+					'As you''re walking into the lecture hall, a pair of arms suddenly wrap themselves around you. You turn in surprise and find Katja holding you, an expression on her face that seems caught between a smile and a glare.'
 					'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, Why haven''t I seen you since we graduated? And why didn''t you tell me you were starting the teaching program?" Her lips twist a little more towards a frown than a smile.'
-					'"Sorry. I didn''t think it was worth mentioning," you say. "You didn''t tell me were in this program either."' 
+					'"Sorry, I didn''t think it was worth mentioning," you say. "You didn''t tell me were in this program either!"' 
 				else
 					gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'loathe'
-					'As you are walking into the lecture hall, a pair of arms suddenly wrap themselves around your shoulders. You turn in surprise and find Katja holding you, an expression on her face that seems caught between a smile and a glare.'
+					'As you''re walking into the lecture hall, a pair of arms suddenly wrap themselves around your shoulders. You turn in surprise and find Katja holding you, an expression on her face that seems caught between a smile and a glare.'
 					'"Why didn''t you tell me that you were joining the teaching program?" Her lips go from a hybrid to a full on frown.'
-					'"I''m very sorry. I should have told you," you answer.'
+					'"Sorry, I should have told you," you answer.'
 				end
 			else
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'like'
-				'As you are walking into the lecture hall, a pair of arms suddenly wrap themselves around your shoulders. You turn in surprise and find Katja holding you, an open grin on her face.'
+				'As you''re walking into the lecture hall, a pair of arms suddenly wrap themselves around your shoulders. You turn in surprise and find Katja holding you, an open grin on her face.'
 				'"This is going to be so much fun, <<$pcs_nickname>>!" she squeals. "Especially with you here!"'
-				'"Yes, it is. We are going to rule this place," you answer.'
+				'"Yes, it is. We''re going to rule this place," you answer.'
 			end
 			if katjaQW['QWstage'] >= 7:
 				if katjaQW['annoyed'] = 1:
@@ -228,15 +228,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_in_class_meet':
 			if katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0:
 				katjaQW['annoyed'] = 1
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'dislike'
-				'As you are walking into the lecture hall, suddenly somebody pokes you on your shoulder. You turn around and see Katja standing there, looking somewhat annoyed.'
-				'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says flatly. "Why haven''t I seen you since we graduated? I had no idea that you were in this program."'
-				'"Sorry. I didn''t think it was worth mentioning," you say. "You didn''t tell me were in this program either."' 
+				'As you''re walking into the lecture hall, somebody suddenly pokes you on your shoulder. You turn around and see a somewhat annoyed looking Katja.'
+				'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says flatly. "Why haven''t I seen you since we graduated? I had no idea that you were in this program!"'
+				'"Sorry, I didn''t think it was worth mentioning," you say. "Besides, you didn''t tell me were in this program either!"' 
 			else
 				katjaQW['annoyed'] = 2
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'loathe'
-				'As you are walking into the lecture hall, suddenly somebody pokes you on your shoulder. You turn around and see Katja standing there, looking pretty pissed.'
-				'"Why didn''t you tell me that you were joining the teaching program?" she asks. .'
-				'"I''m very sorry. I should have told you," you answer.'
+				'As you''re walking into the lecture hall, somebody suddenly pokes you on your shoulder. You turn around and see a pretty pissed looking Katja.'
+				'"Why didn''t you tell me that you were joining the teaching program?!" she asks.'
+				'"Sorry, I should have told you," you answer.'
 			end
 		end
 		if katjaQW['annoyed'] = 1:
@@ -246,7 +246,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_in_class_meet':
 			'"We should hang out and study together later."'
 			'"Definitely," you reply.'
 		elseif katjaQW['annoyed'] = 2:
-			'Despite herself, she can''t seem to hold onto her anger and a smile breaks through.'
+			'Despite her annoyance, she can''t seem to hold onto her anger and a smile breaks through.'
 			'"Isn''t this exciting?" she asks.'
 			'"Yes, it is," you say.'
 			'"We should hang out and study together later."'
@@ -260,7 +260,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_in_class_meet':
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'	
 		if $start_type = 'city_tg' or $start_type = 'uni_tg':
-			'As you walk into the lecture hall, a pretty redhead comes up to you. "Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, I didn''t know you also decided to study to become a teacher," she says.'
+			'As you walk into the lecture hall, a pretty redhead comes up to you. "Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>! I didn''t know you also decided to study to become a teacher," she says.'
 			'"I thought it would make for an interesting education and a fun career," you say while you try to remember who this girl is.'
 			'"If you want, then we can meet and talk about the lectures and maybe do some studying together," she says.'
 			'"That sounds nice," you reply. She turns around and waves goodbye.'
@@ -270,15 +270,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_in_class_meet':
 				if npc_rel['A14'] >= 50:
 					'As you enter the lecture hall, you hear a voice from behind you. "So are you actually going to study this time around, or are you just here for the sex?" You turn around and see your old classmate, Katja Meynold, with a smile on her face.'
 					'"You could learn a thing or two from me," you say. "It''s going to get awfully boring around here if all you do is study for five years."'
-					'Katja shrugs, "I don''t think it''s going to be boring, and '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I don''t really think you do either since you are here.', 'that wasn''t what you told me earlier when you said you where going to study to become a teacher.')+'"'
-					'"Well, there''s plenty of good looking boys here," you say glancing around, grinning. "I think I''ll have plenty of ways to have fun here."'
-					'"You''re incorrigible," Katja says with smile. "But we could chat about the classes and —if you are serious about becoming a teacher— do some studying together." She then turns around to find a place to sit.'
+					'Katja shrugs. "I don''t think it''s going to be boring, and '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I don''t really think you do either since you are here.', 'that wasn''t what you told me earlier when you said you were going to study to become a teacher.')+'"'
+					'"Well, there''s plenty of good looking boys here," you say while glancing around and grinning. "I think I''ll have plenty of ways to have fun here."'
+					'"You''re incorrigible," Katja says with a smile. "But we could chat about the classes and —if you''re serious about becoming a teacher— do some studying together." She then turns around to find a place to sit.'
 				elseif npc_rel['A14'] <= 20:
 					iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, '"Oh, I didn''t know that my school''s biggest slut would actually choose to study something where you have to be a role model for kids,"', '"See that is the girl I told you about: the biggest slut in my school choosing to study something where you have to be a role model for kids,"')+' you hear somebody say nearby when you walk into the lecture hall.'
 					'As you look around, you see former classmate Katja talking to a girl you don''t recognize. When she sees that you have noticed her, she promptly drags the other girl away from you. Seems you have some work to do if you want to repair your relationship with her.'
 				else
-					'As you are walking into the lecture hall, you suddenly come head to head with your old classmate, Katja. "Oh, hey <<$pcs_nickname>>," Katja says a little hesitantly. "'+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'Oh, I didn''t know that you''d be starting in the teaching program.' , 'I wasn''t sure if you were joking when you said that you would be studying to become a teacher.')+' You do know that a teacher has to be a role model for the kids, so maybe you should try to act like an adult," she says, coming off a little more stern that she looks.'
-					'"I am acting like an adult," you reply. "Sex is a very adult thing to partake in. I am sure your life would also be much better if you tried being more like me."'
+					'As you''re walking into the lecture hall, you suddenly come head to head with your old classmate, Katja. "Oh, hey <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says a little hesitantly. "'+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know that you''d be starting in the teaching program.' , 'I wasn''t sure if you were joking when you said that you would be studying to become a teacher.')+' You do know that a teacher has to be a role model for the kids, so maybe you should try to act like an adult," she says, coming off a little more stern that she looks.'
+					'"I am acting like an adult," you reply. "Sex is a very adult thing to partake in. I''m sure your life would also be much better if you tried being more like me."'
 					'Katja''s face turns very red, and she just says "bye" before turning around to find a seat furthest away from you. You can''t help but get the feeling that she might be more interested in the things you do than she lets on.'
 				end
 			else
@@ -286,40 +286,40 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_in_class_meet':
 					if npc_rel['A14'] >= 50:
 						'"Hi, <<$pcs_nickname>>. '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you had decided to study to become a teacher,', 'I see that you have made your way to our first class,')+'" you hear somebody say from behind. When you turn around, you see your former classmate Katja standing there with a smile on her face.'
 						'"'+iif(katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you were going to take these classes,', 'Yes, it''s important to be here for the first class,')+'" you reply.'
-						'"I think it is going to be so fun and exciting. But it is nice to have friends in the class. We can talk about classes later and maybe study together," she says before saying goodbye and going off to find a place to sit.'
+						'"I think it''s going to be so fun and exciting. It''s nice to have friends in the class. We can talk about classes later and maybe study together," she says before saying goodbye and going off to find a place to sit.'
 					elseif npc_rel['A14'] <= 20:
 						'You see a redheaded girl trying to avoid you, and recognize her as your old classmate Katja. You decide to approach her. "Hi, Katja!" you say.'
 						'"Hi, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she replies, not looking particularly happy. "You know, you could try to be nicer and not just look down on others since you think you are'+iif(grupTipe = 1, ' so cool', ' good at sports')+', that way others might like you more," Katja says before turning around and finding a place to sit.'
 					else
 						'"Hi, <<$pcs_nickname>>. '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you had decided to study to become a teacher,', 'I see that you have made you way to our first class,')+'" you hear somebody say from behind you. When you turn around, you see your former classmate Katja standing there.'
 						'"'+iif(katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you were going to take these classes,', 'Yes, it is important to be here for the first class,')+'" you reply.'
-						'"I think it is going to be so fun and exciting. But it is nice to have somebody you already know in the class. Maybe we can talk about classes later," she says before saying goodbye and finding a place to sit.'
+						'"I think it''s going to be so fun and exciting. It''s nice to have somebody you already know in the class. Maybe we can talk about classes later," she says before saying goodbye and finding a place to sit.'
 					end
 				elseif grupTipe = 3 or grupTipe = 4:
 					if npc_rel['A14'] >= 50:
-						'"Hi, <<$pcs_nickname>>, '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you had decided to study to become a teacher,', 'I see that you have made your way to our first class,')+'" you hear somebody say from behind you. When you turn around, you see your former classmate Katja standing there with a smile on her face.'
+						'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you had decided to study to become a teacher,', 'I see that you have made your way to our first class,')+'" you hear somebody say from behind you. When you turn around, you see your former classmate Katja standing there with a smile on her face.'
 						'"'+iif(katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you were going to take these classes,', 'Yes, it is important to be here for the first class,')+'" you reply.'
-						'"I think it is going to be so fun and exciting. But it is nice to already have somebody you know in the class. I always envied that you '+iif(grupTipe = 3, 'and your group could actually talk about classes and such during breaks, not just empty gossip like with mine.', 'were so free to not just follow social norms. But what a complete waste it was that most you just used it to bully everyone else and be the biggest jerks around.')+' At least now, nobody will look down on us talking together. We can hang out after class and talk or maybe do some studying together," she says before saying goodbye and finding a place to sit.'
+						'"I think it''s going to be so fun and exciting. It''s nice to already have somebody you know in the class. I always envied that you '+iif(grupTipe = 3, 'and your group could actually talk about classes and such during breaks, not just empty gossip like with mine.', 'were so free to not just follow social norms. But what a complete waste it was that most you just used it to bully everyone else and be the biggest jerks around.')+' At least now, nobody will look down on us talking together. We can hang out after class and talk or maybe do some studying together," she says before saying goodbye and finding a place to sit.'
 					elseif npc_rel['A14'] <= 20:
-						'You see a redheaded girl trying to avoid you, and recognize her as your old classmate Katja. You decide to approach her. "Hi, Katja," you say.'
-						'"Hi, <<$pcs_nickname>>," she replies, not looking particularly happy. "You know, you could try to be nicer and'+iif(grupTipe = 1 or grupTipe = 3, ' not just look down on others since you think you are so much smarter than the rest of us,', ' not be such a bully,')+' that way others might like you more," she says before turning around and finding a place to sit.'
+						'You see a redheaded girl trying to avoid you, and recognize her as your old classmate Katja. You decide to approach her. "Hi Katja," you say.'
+						'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>," she replies, not looking particularly happy. "You know, you could try to be nicer and'+iif(grupTipe = 1 or grupTipe = 3, ' not just look down on others since you think you''re so much smarter than the rest of us,', ' not be such a bully,')+' that way others might like you more," she says before turning around and finding a place to sit.'
 					else
-						'"Hi, <<$pcs_nickname>>. '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you had decided to study to become a teacher.', 'I see that you have made your way to our first class,')+'" you hear somebody say from behind you. When you turn around, you see your former class mate Katja standing there.'
+						'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you had decided to study to become a teacher.', 'I see that you have made your way to our first class,')+'" you hear somebody say from behind you. When you turn around, you see your former class mate Katja standing there.'
 						'"'+iif(katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you were going to take these classes,', 'Yes, it is important to be here for the first class,')+'" you reply.'
-						'"I think it is going to be so fun and exciting. But it is nice to have somebody you already know in the class, especially now that nobody is going to judge us for talking simply because we belonged to some stupid cliques in school. Maybe we can talk about classes later," she says before saying goodbye and finding a place to sit.'
+						'"I think it''s going to be so fun and exciting. It''s nice to have somebody you already know in the class, especially now that nobody''s going to judge us for talking simply because we belonged to some stupid cliques in school. Maybe we can talk about classes later?" she says before saying goodbye and finding a place to sit.'
 					end
 				else
 					if npc_rel['A14'] >= 50:
-						'"Hi, <<$pcs_nickname>>. '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you had decided to study to become a teacher,', 'I see that you have made your way to our first class,')+'" you hear somebody say from behind you. When you turn around, you see your former classmate Katja standing there with a smile on her face.'
+						'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you had decided to study to become a teacher,', 'I see that you have made your way to our first class,')+'" you hear somebody say from behind you. When you turn around, you see your former classmate Katja standing there with a smile on her face.'
 						'"'+iif(katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you were going to take these classes,', 'Yes, it is important to be here for the first class,')+'" you reply.'
-						'"I think it is going to be so fun and exciting. But it is nice to have somebody you know in the class. Now hopefully nobody will shun you just because some of the worst people in our old school decided that you were toxic. We can hang out after class and talk or maybe do some studying together," she says before saying goodbye and finding a place to sit.'
+						'"I think it''s going to be so fun and exciting. It''s nice to have somebody you know in the class. Now hopefully nobody will shun you just because some of the worst people in our old school decided that you were toxic. We can hang out after class and talk or maybe do some studying together," she says before saying goodbye and finding a place to sit.'
 					elseif npc_rel['A14'] <= 20:
 						'You see a redheaded girl trying to avoid you, and recognize her as your old classmate Katja. You decide to approach her. "Hi, Katja," you say.'
 						'"Don''t talk to me; you are disgusting!" Katja says before turning around and finding a place to sit far away from you.'
 					else
-						'"Hi, <<$pcs_nickname>>. '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you had decided to study to become a teacher,', 'I see that you have also made your way to our first class,')+'" you hear somebody say from behind you. When you turn around, you see your former classmate Katja standing there.'
+						'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>. '+iif(katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you had decided to study to become a teacher,', 'I see that you have also made your way to our first class,')+'" you hear somebody say from behind you. When you turn around, you see your former classmate Katja standing there.'
 						'"'+iif(katjaQW['know_katja_uni'] = 0, 'I didn''t know you were going to take these classes,', 'Yes, it is important to be here for the first class,')+'" you reply.'
-						'"I think it is going to be so fun and exciting. It was really terrible the way the others treated you in school, just because some people at school decided that you were toxic. I, for one, am glad to put all that behind us and think it is nice to have somebody you already know in the class. Maybe we can talk about classes later," she says before saying goodbye and finding a place to sit.'
+						'"I think it''s going to be so fun and exciting. It was really terrible the way the others treated you in school, just because some people at school decided that you were toxic. I, for one, am glad to put all that behind us and think it''s nice to have somebody you already know in the class. Maybe we can talk about classes later?" she says before saying goodbye and finding a place to sit.'
 					end
 				end
 			end
@@ -330,7 +330,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first_in_class_meet':
 	if katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 0: katjaQW['know_going_to_teaching_degree'] = 1
 
 	!!if katjaQW['QWstage'] > 0:
-	!!out commented until we find all the pictures. 
+	!!Commented out until we find all the pictures. 
 	!!	if katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] > 3:
 	!!		act 'Continue': gt 'katja_uni', 'panty_check', $ARGS[1]
 	!!	else
@@ -347,12 +347,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 	if katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] >= 5 and katjaQW['dom'] > -30:
 		if CloSkirtShortness < 3:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Why are you wearing '+iif( CloSkirtShortness = 0, 'pants', 'such a long skirt')+'?" Katja asks. "I can''t check to see if you are wearing panties or not,"'
+			'"Why are you wearing '+iif( CloSkirtShortness = 0, 'pants', 'such a long skirt')+'?" Katja asks. "I can''t check to see if you''re wearing panties or not!"'
 			'"I am '+iif($pantyworntype = 'none', 'of course not ', '')+'wearing panties," you say.'
 			if $pantyworntype = 'none': 
-				'"What''s the point of not wearing panties when there''s no chance that anyone can get a glimpse of your bare pussy. You can''t even feel the draft," she says. She looks at the clock and starts dragging you towards the toilets. "We have time before class for me to check if you''re lying."'
+				'"What''s the point of not wearing panties when there''s no chance that anyone can get a glimpse of your bare pussy? You can''t even feel the draft," she says. She looks at the clock and starts dragging you towards the toilets. "We have time before class for me to check if you''re lying."'
 			else
-				'"That will not do. Since when did you become a prude?" she asks playfully with a wink. She looks at the clock and starts dragging you towards the toilets, "We have time before class for rectifying this mistake of yours."'
+				'"That will not do. Since when did you become a prude?" she asks playfully with a wink. She looks at the clock and starts dragging you towards the toilets. "We have time before class for rectifying this mistake of yours."'
 			end
 			gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:	
@@ -364,7 +364,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 					katjaQW['dom'] -= 2
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
-					'"No. Not now," you tell Katja while you free yourself from her grip. She looks a little shocked, standing there not knowing what to do. You leave her pondering upon her actions.' 
+					'"No. Not now," you tell Katja as you free yourself from her grip. She looks a little shocked, standing there not knowing what to do. You leave her pondering upon her actions.' 
 					act 'Find a place to sit': gt 'uni_lessons1', $ARGS[1]
 				end
 			else
@@ -380,7 +380,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 				if $pantyworntype = 'none': 
 					katjaQW['horny'] += 10
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 1
-					'Katja moves one of her hands under your skirt and you feel her fingers on your lower lips. "I see that you are still a good girl," she whispers while gently rubbing your clit.'
+					'Katja moves one of her hands under your skirt and you feel her fingers on your lower lips. "I see that you''re still a good girl," she whispers while gently rubbing your clit.'
 					gs 'willpower', 'foreplay', 'resist', 'medium'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:	
 						act 'Remove Katja''s hand (<<will_cost>> Willpower) ':
@@ -390,7 +390,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 							katjaQW['dom'] -= 1
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
-							'"Stop it! Not here," you tell Katja while you remove her hand from under you skirt. She grins at you and moves away to find a place to sit.' 
+							'"Stop it! Not here," you tell Katja as you remove her hand from under your skirt. She grins at you and moves away to find a place to sit.' 
 							act 'Find a place to sit': gt 'uni_lessons1', $ARGS[1]
 						end
 					else
@@ -410,7 +410,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/double_panty_check.jpg"></center>'
 							'You move one of your hands under Katja''s skirt to find her bare and completely smooth pussy and gently start rubbing her pussy lips. "I''m not the only good girl around, it seems," you say. You continue rubbing each others pussies and you can feel that she is starting to get wet.' 
-							'Suddenly, you are disturbed by loud voices very close by, and you remember that you are standing in the classroom with class about to start. You both quickly withdraw your hands and Katja turns to you saying with a grin and wink in her eye, "This is going to be really fun." She then licks her fingers leaves to find a place sit, and you are left wondering what kind of monster you have created.'
+							'Suddenly, you are disturbed by loud voices very close by, and you remember that you''re standing in the classroom with class about to start. You both quickly withdraw your hands and Katja turns to you saying with a grin and wink in her eye, "This is going to be really fun." She then licks her fingers leaves to find a place sit, and you are left wondering what kind of monster you have created.'
 							act 'Find a place to sit': gt 'uni_lessons1', $ARGS[1]
 						end
 					else
@@ -425,13 +425,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/panty_check.jpg"></center>'
-						'You just stand there surprised about how bold Katja has gotten. She continues rubbing your pussy, making it harder for you to keep your voice down.' 
-						'Suddenly, you are disturbed by loud voices close by, and she remembers that you are standing in the classroom with class about to start. She quickly withdraws her hand and turns to you, saying with a grin and wink in her eye, "This is going to be really fun." She then licks her fingers that was just on your pussy and leaves to find a place sit, and you are left wondering what kind of monster you have created.'
+						'You just stand there, surprised about how bold Katja has gotten. She continues rubbing your pussy, making it harder for you to keep your voice down.' 
+						'Suddenly, you are disturbed by loud voices close by, and she remembers that you''re standing in the classroom with class about to start. She quickly withdraws her hand and turns to you, saying with a grin and wink in her eye, "This is going to be really fun." She then licks her fingers and leaves to find a place sit as you are left wondering what kind of monster you have created.'
 						act 'Find a place to sit': gt 'uni_lessons1', $ARGS[1]
 					end
 				else
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 1
-					'Katja moves one of her hands under your skirt and gently touches your panty covered pussy. "What''s that! I can feel panties," she whispers shocked while gently rubbing your pussy through the fabric. "You''ve become a very bad girl." She looks at the clock, "This won''t do. Come with me, we have time before class starts," she says and starts dragging you towards the bathrooms.'
+					'Katja moves one of her hands under your skirt and gently touches your panty covered pussy. "What''s that? I can feel panties," she whispers in shock while gently rubbing your pussy through the fabric. "You''ve become a very bad girl..." She looks at the clock. "This won''t do. Come with me, we have time before class starts," she says and starts dragging you towards the bathrooms.'
 					gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:	
 						act 'Resist Katja (<<will_cost>> Willpower) ':
@@ -443,7 +443,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
-							'"No! Not now," you tell Katja while you free yourself from her grip. She looks a little shocked, standing there not knowing what to do. You leave her pondering her actions.' 
+							'"No! Not now," you tell Katja as you free yourself from her grip. She looks a little shocked, standing there not knowing what to do. You leave her pondering her actions.' 
 							act 'Find a place to sit': gt 'uni_lessons1', $ARGS[1]
 						end
 					else
@@ -459,7 +459,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 				if $pantyworntype = 'none': 
 					katjaQW['horny'] += 10
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 1
-					'Katja moves one of her hands under your skirt and gently touches your bare pussy. "I see that you are still a good girl," she whispers while withdrawing her hand.'
+					'Katja moves one of her hands under your skirt and gently touches your bare pussy. "I see that you''re still a good girl," she whispers while withdrawing her hand.'
 					gs 'willpower', 'foreplay','self', 'easy'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:	
 						act 'Return Katja''s touch (<<will_cost>> Willpower) ':
@@ -472,7 +472,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/double_panty_check.jpg"></center>'
 							'You move one of your hands under Katja''s skirt and find her bare, completely smooth pussy and gently touch it before removing your hand. "I can feel that I''m not the only good girl around here," you say.'
-							'Katja turns to you, saying with a grin and wink, "This is going to be real fun. See you later."'
+							'Katja turns to you and grins. "This is going to be real fun. See you later."'
 							'She turns around and leaves to find a place to sit.'
 							act 'Find a place to sit': gt 'uni_lessons1', $ARGS[1]
 						end
@@ -485,12 +485,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/panty_check.jpg"></center>'
-						'You just stand there surprised about how bold Katja has become. She turns to you, saying with a grin and wink, "This is going to be real fun. See you later." She turns around and leaves to find a place to sit.'
+						'You just stand there, surprised about how bold Katja has become. She turns to you and grins. "This is going to be real fun. See you later." She turns around and leaves to find a place to sit.'
 						act 'Find a place to sit': gt 'uni_lessons1', $ARGS[1]
 					end
 				else
 					gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 1
-					'Katja moves one of her hands under your skirt and gently touches your panty covered pussy. "What''s that! I can feel panties," she whispers shocked while withdrawing her hand. "You''ve become a very bad girl." She looks at the clock, "This won''t do. Come with me, we have time before class starts," she says and starts dragging you towards the bathrooms.'
+					'Katja moves one of her hands under your skirt and gently touches your panty covered pussy. "What''s that! I can feel panties," she whispers shocked while withdrawing her hand. "You''ve become a very bad girl..." She looks at the clock. "This won''t do. Come with me, we have time before class starts," she says and starts dragging you towards the bathrooms.'
 					gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:	
 					act 'Resist Katja (<<will_cost>> Willpower) ':
@@ -502,7 +502,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
-						'"No! Not now," you tell Katja while you free yourself from her grip. She looks a little shocked, standing there not knowing what to do. You leave her pondering her actions.' 
+						'"No! Not now," you tell Katja as you free yourself from her grip. She looks a little shocked, standing there not knowing what to do. You leave her pondering her actions.' 
 						act 'Find a place to sit': gt 'uni_lessons1', $ARGS[1]
 					end
 					else
@@ -516,13 +516,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'	
 				if $pantyworntype = 'none': 
-					'Katja leans in to you and whispers into your ear, "I''m still not wearing panties, are you?"'
-					'"Yes." you answer. "Of course I''m not wearing panties!"'
+					'Katja leans in to you and whispers into your ear, "You''re not wearing panties, are you?"'
+					'"Of course I''m not wearing panties!" you answer.'
 					'"That''s good," she says. "We can check it later. But class comes first." She then turns around and waves while she goes to find a place to sit.' 
 					act 'Find a place to sit': gt 'uni_lessons1', $ARGS[1]
 				else
-					'Katja leans in to you and whispers into your ear, "I''m still not wearing panties, are you?"'
-					'"No," you answer.'
+					'Katja leans in to you and whispers into your ear, "You''re not wearing panties, are you?"'
+					'"Yes..." you answer.'
 					'"What?!" she says looking shocked. She looks at the clock. "This won''t do. Come with me, we have time before class starts," she says and starts dragging you towards the bathrooms.'
 					gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist', 'medium'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:	
@@ -535,7 +535,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
-						'"No! Not now," you tell Katja while you free yourself from her grip. She looks a little shocked, standing there not knowing what to do. You leave her pondering her actions.' 
+						'"No! Not now," you tell Katja as you free yourself from her grip. She looks a little shocked, standing there not knowing what to do. You leave her pondering her actions.' 
 						act 'Find a place to sit': gt 'uni_lessons1', $ARGS[1]
 					end
 					else
@@ -558,7 +558,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 				'"So, I''m still not wearing panties. Are you?" you ask.'
 				'"Yes, of course I am! Why should''t I?" she answers.'
 				'"Because life is more fun without panties," you say.'
-				'Looking at the clock, you see that there is still enough time before class starts to go to the toilet and have her take off her panties.'
+				'Looking at the clock, you see that there''s still enough time before class starts to go to the toilet and have her take off her panties.'
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'force', 'medium'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:	
 					act 'Drag her to the toilet (<<will_cost>> Willpower) ':
@@ -570,9 +570,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
-						'"We are going to do something about this. Come with me," you tell her before grabbing her arm.'
+						'"We''re going to do something about this. Come with me," you tell her before grabbing her arm.'
 						'"No, class is starting!" she answers meekly.'
-						'"We have time. Come on," you say and she gives up resisting, and starts following you to the toilet.' 
+						'"We have time. Come on," you say, and she gives up resisting and starts following you to the toilet.' 
 						act 'Go to the toilet': gt 'katja_uni', 'batroom_katja_panty_remove', $ARGS[1]
 					end
 				else
@@ -588,7 +588,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 				'"Of course I am. Are you?" she says.'
 				'"Yes, but that''s not the point. I thought I had taught you not to wear panties to school," you say.'
 				'"That is totally the point," she says "If you can wear panties, then so can I."'
-				'You can''t fault her logic. Looking at the clock, you see that there is still enough time before class starts to go to the toilet and have her take off her panties.'
+				'You can''t fault her logic. Looking at the clock, you see that there''s still enough time before class starts to go to the toilet and have her take off her panties.'
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'force', 'medium'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:	
 					act 'Drag her to the toilet (<<will_cost>> Willpower) ':
@@ -600,9 +600,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'panty_check':
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
-						'"I think we both need to do something about this. Come with me to the toilet," you tell Katja as you grab her arm.'
+						'"I think we both need to do something about this. Come with me," you tell her and grab her arm.'
 						'"No, class is starting!" she answers meekly.'
-						'"We have time. Come on," you say and she gives up resisting, following you to the toilet.' 
+						'"We have time. Come on," you say, and she gives up resisting and starts following you to the toilet.' 
 						act 'Go to the toilet': gt 'katja_uni', 'batroom_katja_panty_remove', $ARGS[1]
 					end
 				else
@@ -622,14 +622,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'batroom_panty_check':
 	menu_off = 1
 	minut += 3
 	gs 'stat'
-	'You follow Katja out of the lecture hall and quickly find your way to the girls room. After you get inside, you see that they are empty save for the two of you.'
+	'You follow Katja out of the lecture hall and quickly find your way to the girls room. Once you get inside, you see that they are empty save for the two of you.'
 	if $pantyworntype = 'none': 
 		'"So, show me that you''re not wearing panties," Katja says.'
 		'You slowly '+iif(CloSkirtShortness = 0, 'unzip your pants and pull them down ', 'hike up your skirt ')+' so Katja can see your exposed pussy. "See. Are you satisfied?" you ask.'
 		if katjaQW['slut'] >= 100:
 			katjaQW['horny'] += 10
 			
-			'"Well, let me really check it first," she says with a devilish wink as she moves closer and puts her hand on your pussy and gently starts to rub. "Yeah, that does feel like a naked pussy. Remember to wear something appropriate so that we don''t need to go to the bathroom to check in the future," she says, continuing to rub your pussy.'
+			'"Well, let me really check it first," she says with a devilish wink as she moves closer and puts her hand on your pussy and gently starts to rub it. "Yeah, that does feel like a naked pussy. Remember to wear something appropriate so that we don''t need to go to the bathroom to check in the future," she says, continuing to rub your pussy.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 1
 			gs 'willpower', 'foreplay', 'resist', 'medium'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:	
@@ -641,7 +641,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'batroom_panty_check':
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
-					'"Stop it! Not now. We need to go back so we''re not late for class," you tell Katja while you remove her hand from your pussy. She grins at you, then goes back to the lecture hall.' 
+					'"Stop it! Not now. We need to go back so we''re not late for class," you tell her as you remove her hand from your pussy. She grins at you, then heads back to the lecture hall.' 
 					act 'Go back and find a place to sit': gt 'uni_lessons1', $ARGS[1]
 				end
 			else
@@ -660,8 +660,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'batroom_panty_check':
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/bathroom_double_fingering.jpg"></center>'
-					'You move one of your hands under Katja''s skirt and find her bare, completely smooth pussy and gently start rubbing her pussy lips. You continue rubbing each other and you can feel that she is starting to get wet.' 
-					'Katja starts moaning softly. Then she suddenly stops and pulls her self away from you, "Class is starting!" she says in an alarmed voice and runs back to the lecture hall'
+					'You move one of your hands under Katja''s skirt and find her bare, completely smooth pussy and gently start rubbing her pussy lips. You continue rubbing each other and you can feel that she''s starting to get wet.' 
+					'Katja starts moaning softly before she suddenly stops and pulls her self away from you, "Class is starting!" she says in an alarmed voice and runs back to the lecture hall.'
 					'You quickly '+iif(CloSkirtShortness = 0, 'zip up your pants ', 'straighten your skirt ')+'and while rushing back to class, wonder what sort of monster you have created.'
 					act 'Find a place to sit': gt 'uni_lessons1', $ARGS[1]
 				end
@@ -677,8 +677,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'batroom_panty_check':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 
-				'You just stand there surprised about how bold Katja has become. She continues rubbing your pussy, making it harder for you to keep your voice down.' 
-				'After a little while, she stops and says with a grin and wink, "This will do for now, but class is starting soon, so we have to postpone the rest. This is going to be real fun." She then licks her fingers and heads back to the lecture hall.'
+				'You just stand there, surprised about how bold Katja has become. She continues rubbing your pussy, making it harder for you to keep your voice down.' 
+				'After a little while, she stops and says with a grin and wink, "This will do for now as class is starting soon, so we have to postpone the rest. This is going to be real fun." She then licks her fingers and heads back to the lecture hall.'
 				'You quickly '+iif(CloSkirtShortness = 0, 'zip up your pants ', 'straighten your skirt ')+'and while rushing back to class, wonder what sort of monster you have created.'
 				act 'Find a place to sit': gt 'uni_lessons1', $ARGS[1]
 			end
@@ -699,7 +699,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'batroom_panty_check':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/bathroom_double_fingering.jpg"></center>'
 					'You move one of your hands under Katja''s skirt and find her bare, completely smooth pussy and gently touch it before removing your hand. "I can feel that I''m not the only good girl around here," you say.' 
-					'Katja says with a grin and wink, "This is going to be real fun, but class is starting soon so we have to run. See you later," she says and hurries back to the lecture room.'
+					'"This is going to be real fun, but class is starting soon so we have to run. See you later," she says and hurries back to the lecture room.'
 					'You quickly '+iif(CloSkirtShortness = 0, 'zip up your pants ', 'straighten your skirt ')+'and rush back to class.'
 					act 'Find a place to sit': gt 'uni_lessons1', $ARGS[1]
 				end
@@ -712,7 +712,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'batroom_panty_check':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				
-				'You just stand there surprised about how bold Katja has become. She then says with a grin and wink, "This is going to be real fun, but class is starting soon so we got to run. See you later," she says and hurries back to the lecture room.'
+				'You just stand there, surprised about how bold Katja has become. "This is going to be real fun, but class is starting soon so we have to run. See you later," she says and hurries back to the lecture room.'
 				'You quickly '+iif(CloSkirtShortness = 0, 'zip up your pants ', 'straighten your skirt ')+'and rush back to class.'
 				act 'Find a place to sit': gt 'uni_lessons1', $ARGS[1]
 			end
@@ -733,8 +733,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'batroom_panty_check':
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
-					'You push Katja''s face away, "Stop it! Not now. We need to go back so we are not late for class."'
-					'She gets up grinning at you, "Well, I will have to continue this later. But remember no panties in class." Then she turns around and goes back to the lecture hall.'
+					'You push Katja''s face away, "Stop it! Not now. We need to go back so we''re not late for class!"'
+					'She gets up while grinning at you. "Well, I''ll have to continue this later. Remember, no panties in class!" She then turns around and heads back to the lecture hall.'
 					iif(CloSkirtShortness = 0, 'You zip up your pants ', 'You straighten your skirt ')+'and hurry back to class, wondering what sort of monster you have created.' 
 					act 'Go back and find a place to sit': gt 'uni_lessons1', $ARGS[1]
 				end
@@ -751,7 +751,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'batroom_panty_check':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/katja_lick.jpg"></center>'
-				'You just stand there surprised about how bold Katja has become. She continues licking your pussy, making it harder for you to keep your voice down.' 
+				'You just stand there, surprised about how bold Katja has become. She continues licking your pussy, making it harder for you to keep your voice down.' 
 				'After a little while, she stops and gets up and wipes her lips.'
 				'"This will do for now but class is starting soon, so we have to postpone the rest. Remember to not wear panties in class," she winks. "This is going to be real fun. Later."'
 				*nl
@@ -764,7 +764,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'batroom_panty_check':
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_finger', 1
 			gs 'stat'
 			
-			'Katja gets in close and squats down in front of you. She then '+iif(CloSkirtShortness = 0, 'unzips your pants and pulls them down, pulling your panties with them, both sets from your ankles. ', 'lifts your skirt and tugs your panties down. ')+'Instead of getting up, she takes the opportunity to slip a finger inside of your pussy.'
+			'Katja gets in close and squats down in front of you. She then '+iif(CloSkirtShortness = 0, 'unzips your pants and pulls them down, pulling your panties with them, both sets from your ankles. ', 'lifts your skirt and tugs your panties down. ')+'Instead of getting up, she takes the opportunity to slip a finger inside your pussy.'
 			'"<i>Now</i> you''re a good girl," she murmurs.'
 			gs 'willpower', 'foreplay','self', 'easy'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:	
@@ -777,9 +777,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'batroom_panty_check':
 					gs 'arousal', 'end'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/bathroom_double_fingering.jpg"></center>'
-					'You slip a hand under Katja''s skirt and find smooth and naked pussy yourself.'
+					'You slip a hand under Katja''s skirt and find a smooth, naked pussy yourself.'
 					'"It seems I''m not the only good girl around here," you say.' 
-					'"Remember not to wear panties in the future," Katja grins. She stuffs your panties into your purse with a wink. "This is going to be real fun, but class is starting soon so we got to run. See you later," she says and hurries back to the lecture room.'
+					'"Remember not to wear panties in the future," Katja grins. She stuffs your panties into your purse with a wink. "This is going to be real fun, but class is starting soon so we have to run. See you later," she says and hurries back to the lecture room.'
 					'You quickly '+iif(CloSkirtShortness = 0, 'You zip up your pants ', 'You straighten your skirt')+'and rush back to class.'
 					act 'Find a place to sit': gt 'uni_lessons1', $ARGS[1]
 				end
@@ -792,7 +792,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'batroom_panty_check':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
 				
-				'You just stand there surprised about how bold Katja has become. She then says with a grin and wink, "This is going to be real fun, but class is starting soon so we got to run. See you later," she says and hurries back to the lecture room.'
+				'You just stand there, surprised about how bold Katja has become. "This is going to be real fun, but class is starting soon so we have to run. See you later," she says and hurries back to the lecture room.'
 				'You quickly '+iif(CloSkirtShortness = 0, 'zip up your pants ', 'straighten your skirt ')+'and rush back to class.'
 				act 'Find a place to sit': gt 'uni_lessons1', $ARGS[1]
 			end
@@ -808,12 +808,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'batroom_katja_panty_remove':
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
 	katjaQW['pantiesQWstage'] = 5
-	'You drag Katja out of the lecture hall and hurry over to the girls room. After you get inside, you quickly check to see they are empty save for the two of you.'
+	'You drag Katja out of the lecture hall and hurry over to the girls room. Once you get inside, you quickly check to see they are empty save for the two of you.'
 	*nl
 	if $pantyworntype = 'none': 
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/taking_panties_of.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'Confirming you''re alone, you '+iif(CloSkirtShortness > 0, 'pull up your skirt', 'pull down your pants')+', showing Katja your bare pussy. "Now it''s your turn."'
-		'Katja looks around a little hesitantly, but then reaches under her skirt and quickly pulls down her panties. "Satisfied?" she says with a grin holding up her skirt to show her bare pussy.' 
+		'Katja looks around a little hesitantly, but then reaches under her skirt and quickly pulls down her panties. "Satisfied?" she says with a grin, holding up her skirt to show her bare pussy.' 
 		'"Very satisfied!" you answer. "Now remember to not wear panties to class from now on."'
 		iif(CloSkirtShortness > 3, '"Yes, ma''am," Katja says mockingly. ', '"Only if you also wear short skirts," Katja says. ')+'She then stuffs her panties in her purse and says, "Let''s get back to class." You agree and find your way back to the classroom.'
 		act 'Find a place to sit': gt 'uni_lessons1', $ARGS[1]
@@ -823,7 +823,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'batroom_katja_panty_remove':
 		if CloSkirtShortness > 0:
 			'You reach under your skirt and tugging your panties down your legs. Katja is a little hesitant, but quickly follows your lead. You stuff yours into your purse and flip your skirt up, flashing Katja. She smiles back at you, doing the same, if not a little shyly.'
 		else
-			'You slip your thumbs into the bands of your underwear and tug them down with your panties. Katja''s eyes are trained on your pussy the whole time as you kick your ankles out of the leg holes. Moments later, she follows your lead, slipping her panties down her legs. After the panties have come off and you put them into your purses, she flips her skirt, giving you a fleeting view of her cleanshaven pussy.'
+			'You slip your thumbs into the bands of your underwear and tug them down. Katja''s eyes are trained on your pussy the whole time as you kick your ankles out of the leg holes. Moments later, she follows your lead, slipping her panties down her legs. After the panties have come off and you put them into your purses, she flips her skirt, giving you a fleeting view of her cleanshaven pussy.'
 		end
 		'"Much better," you grin. "Let''s make a deal and always go to class like this from now on."'
 		iif(CloSkirtShortness > 3, '"Yes ma''am," Katja says mockingly. ', '"Only if you also wear short skirts," Katja says. ')+'"Let''s get back to class," she continues. You agree and find your way back to the classroom.'
@@ -844,13 +844,13 @@ If $ARGS[0] = 'library':
 		'"What''s up?" you say.'
 		'"Just studying for my classes," she says. "I dont''t want to fall behind."'
 	elseif katjaQW['QWstage'] > 0:
-		'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says with a big mile and She gets up to give you a quick hug before she sits down again.'
+		'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says with a big smile and gets up to give you a quick hug before she sits down again.'
 		'"What''s up?" you say.'
 		'"Just studying for my classes," she says. "I dont''t want to fall behind."'
 	else
 		if fame['city_slut'] > 200:
 			if npc_rel['A14'] >= 50:
-				'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says with a smile. "Are you here to study? Or have you turned the library into you hunting ground?" Katja giggles at her own joke.'
+				'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>," she says with a smile. "Are you here to study? Or have you turned the library into your hunting ground?" Katja giggles at her own joke.'
 			elseif npc_rel['A14'] <= 20:
 				'"Why are you disturbing me?" she scowls. "This is a place to study, so if you''re here to slut it up, then don''t."'
 			else
@@ -862,18 +862,18 @@ If $ARGS[0] = 'library':
 			elseif npc_rel['A14'] <= 20:
 				'"Why are you disturbing me?" she scowls. "Leave me alone. Some of us actually take our studies seriously."'
 			else
-				'"What are you doing here <<$pcs_nickname>>?" she says. "I am trying to study, so I would like some peace and quite" she say looking at you waiting to see your reaction.' 
+				'"What are you doing here <<$pcs_nickname>>?" she says. "I''m trying to study, so I would like some peace and quiet!" she says, waiting to see your reaction.' 
 			end
 		end
 	end
-	act 'Tell har you are sorry to have disturbed and leave': gt 'uni_library', 'start'
+	act 'Apologise and leave': gt 'uni_library', 'start'
 	if $university['enrolled_in'] = 'teaching_studies':	
 		if university['semester_week'] > 0:
 			i = 0
 			:study_loop
 			if $class_list_institution[i] = 'uni_<<$university[''enrolled_in'']>>_semester_<<university[''enrolled_in_semester'']>>':
 				if dyneval ('RESULT = class[''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>_<<$class_list_name[i]>>_optional_weekly_grade_gain'']') < dyneval ('RESULT = class[''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>_<<$class_list_name[i]>>_optional_weekly_max'']'):
-					dynamic '	act ''Ask her study for your <<$class_list_name[i]>> class together'': gt ''katja_uni'', ''studying_ask'', ''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>'', ''<<$class_list_name[i]>>'' '
+					dynamic '	act ''Ask if you can study for your <<$class_list_name[i]>> class together'': gt ''katja_uni'', ''studying_ask'', ''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>'', ''<<$class_list_name[i]>>'' '
 				else
 					*nl
 					'You don''t need to study any more this week for your <<$class_list_name[i]>> class.'
@@ -887,7 +887,7 @@ If $ARGS[0] = 'library':
 			i = 0
 			:exam_loop
 			if $class_list_institution[i] = 'uni_<<$university[''enrolled_in'']>>_semester_<<university[''enrolled_in_semester'']>>' and func('uni_programs', 'exam', 'is_over', $class_list_name[i]) = 0:
-				dynamic '	act ''Ask her study for your <<$class_list_name[i]>> exam together'': gt ''katja_uni'', ''studying_exam_ask'', ''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>'', ''<<$class_list_name[i]>>'' '
+				dynamic '	act ''Ask if you can study for your <<$class_list_name[i]>> exam together'': gt ''katja_uni'', ''studying_exam_ask'', ''<<$class_list_institution[i]>>'', ''<<$class_list_name[i]>>'' '
 			end
 		
 			i += 1
@@ -903,7 +903,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studying_ask':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/studying_alone.jpg"></center>'
 	if npc_rel['A14'] <= 30:
-		'"Why would I study together with you?" she scowls. "You treat me like crap all the time, but suddenly when you need help with classes, you want to hang out? Piss off."'
+		'"Why would I study with you?" she scowls. "You treat me like crap all the time, but when you need help with classes, you suddenly want to hang out? Piss off."'
 		'She returns her attention to her books, pointedly ignoring you.'
 		act 'Leave':
 			minut += 5
@@ -975,7 +975,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studying_exam_ask':
 	cla & *clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/studying_alone.jpg"></center>'
 	if npc_rel['A14'] <= 30:
-		'"Why would I study together with you?" she scowls. "You treat me like crap all the time, but suddenly when you need help with classes, you want to hang out? Piss off."'
+		'"Why would I study with you?" she scowls. "You treat me like crap all the time, but suddenly when you need help with classes, you want to hang out? Piss off."'
 		'She returns her attention to her books, pointedly ignoring you.'
 		act 'Leave':
 			minut += 5
@@ -1005,54 +1005,54 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studying_exam':
 	gs 'exp_gain', 'intel', max(0,rand(-1,1))
 	pcs_mood += (traits['nerd_status']*5 -10)
 	minut += 30
-	'You and Katja start studying for the <<$ARGS[2]>> exam. The library is mostly quiet so you and Katja try to keep you voices down, though she can''t always help herself when she gets excited about the material before realizing her volume and turning red with embarrassment.'
+	'You and Katja start studying for the <<$ARGS[2]>> exam. The library is mostly quiet, so you try to keep your voices down, though she can''t always help herself when she gets excited about the material before realizing her volume and turning red with embarrassment.'
 	if pcs_sleep < 5:
 		no_study = 1
-		'You are so tired that you are constantly falling asleep and Katja tells you to go home and sleep'
+		'You''re so tired that you''re constantly falling asleep and Katja tells you to go home and sleep.'
 	elseif pcs_sleep < 30:
 		study_mod -= 20
-		'You are very tired and have and Katja has to constantly poke you so you stay awake.'
+		'You''re very tired and Katja has to constantly poke you so you stay awake.'
 	end
 	if alko >= 6:
 		no_study = 1
-		'You are so drunk that Katja can''t understand most of what you are saying and after a short while she tells you to go home and sleep it of.'
+		'You are so drunk that Katja can''t understand most of what you are saying and after a short while she tells you to go home and sleep it off.'
 	elseif alko >= 4:
 		study_mod -= 40
-		'You are drunk and have trouble concentrating on what you are reading or what Katja is saying. You mostly just nod and agrees with her.'
+		'You''re drunk and have trouble concentrating on what you''re reading or what Katja is saying. You mostly just nod and agree with her.'
 	elseif alko >= 2:
 		study_mod -= 20
-		'You are feeling a little tipsy, but feel like you are doing great. But Katja seem to be quite skeptical of your explanations and corrects you very often.'
+		'You''re feeling a little tipsy, but feel like you''re doing great. However, Katja seems quite skeptical of your explanations and corrects you very often.'
 	end
 	if mentats_dose >= 1: study_mod += 30
 	If pcs_mood < 50:
 		study_mod -= 20
-		'You are in a bad mood and it clearly affects your studying. Katja tries to cheer you up but it doesn''t help much.'
+		'You''re in a bad mood and it clearly affects your studying. Katja tries to cheer you up, but it doesn''t help much.'
 	end
 	if StrongNarkota > 0 or jointhigh > 0:
 		study_mod -= 40
-		'You are stoned, which makes it hard to concentrate on studying. You mostly just agrees with everything Katja is saying.'
+		'You''re stoned, which makes it hard to concentrate on studying. You mostly just agree with everything Katja is saying.'
 	end
 	if amphHigh > 0: study_mod += 20
 	if pcs_energy < 5:
 		study_mod -= 20
-		'You are extremely hungry and it is hard to think about anything else other than food.'
+		'You''re extremely hungry and it''s hard to think about anything else other than food.'
 	elseif pcs_energy < 10:
 		study_mod -= 10
-		'You are very hungry and it affects your ability to concentrate.'
+		'You''re very hungry and it affects your ability to concentrate.'
 	elseif pcs_energy < 20:
 		study_mod -=10
-		'You are hungry and your thoughts often drift to food, affecting your performance negatively.'
+		'You''re hungry and your thoughts often drift to food, affecting your performance negatively.'
 	end
 	if pcs_horny > 90:
 		study_mod -= 10
-		'You are extremely horny and your thoughts often drift to sex, affecting your ability to study.'
+		'You''re extremely horny and your thoughts often drift to sex, affecting your ability to study.'
 	end
 	if pain['total'] > 90:
 		no_study = 1
-		'You are in so much pain that you can''t study. Katja tells you to go get something for your pain and the go home to sleep'
+		'You''re in so much pain that you can''t study. Katja tells you to get something for your pain and go home to sleep it off.'
 	elseif pain['total'] > 75:
 		study_mod -= 40
-		'You are in so much pain that you have a very hard time concentrating on studying. Katja looks concerned and often ask if there is something she can do to help.'
+		'You''re in so much pain that you have a very hard time concentrating on studying. Katja looks concerned and often asks if there''s something she can do to help.'
 	elseif pain['total'] > 60:
 		study_mod -= 20
 		'Your pain is constantly bothering you and makes it hard to study. Katja is a little concerned about you.'
@@ -1062,7 +1062,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'studying_exam':
  	study_mod = max(0,(rand(30 + study_mod,modifier + study_mod) + 10)/33)
 	if no_study = 1:
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'dislike'
-		'You follow Katja''s advice, and pack your stuff. You are in no condition to study now.'
+		'You follow Katja''s advice, and pack your stuff. You''re in no condition to study right now.'
 	else
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'like'
 		if study_mod = 0:
@@ -1142,7 +1142,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'study_watch':
 	gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'like', 1, 'library_watch'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/studying_alone.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit down and watch Katja study for a while. She will sometimes ask you a question, and you will chat a little. But mostly you just watch her as she works.'
+	'You sit down and watch Katja study for a while. She sometimes asks you a question, but you mostly just watch her as she works.'
 	
 	act 'Continue to watch her':
 		if  katjaQW['QWstage'] >= 6 and hotcat > rand(5,20): 
@@ -1154,7 +1154,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'study_watch':
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/studying_alone.jpg"></center>'
-			'She is finishes ehr studying and gets ready to move on.'	
+			'She finishes her studying and gets ready to move on.'	
 			act 'Say goodbye to Katja and leave the library':
 				minut += 5
 				gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
@@ -1164,10 +1164,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'study_watch':
 					minut += 2
 					gt 'uni_library', 'start'
 				end
-				'"Well, I have to get going now," Katja says, starting to pack up her stuff. "But it was nice having you here"'
+				'"Well, I have to get going now," Katja says, starting to pack up her stuff. "But it was nice having you here."'
 				'She leaves the library, giving you a wave and a smile on the way out.'
 			else
-				'"Well, it looks like the library is closing up," Katja says, reaching to pack up her stuff. "But it was nice having you here"'
+				'"Well, it looks like the library is closing up," Katja says, reaching to pack up her stuff. "But it was nice having you here."'
 				'You leave together, parting ways at the entrance with a wave and a smile.'
 			end
 		end
@@ -1176,14 +1176,14 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dorm_room_invite':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
-	'As you are leaving the last class for today a excited Katja grabs your arm.'
-	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! I bought a new dress and I want to hear you opinion on it. Do you have time to come to my dorm room to see it?"' 
+	'As you''re leaving the last class for today, an excited Katja grabs your arm.'
+	'"<<$pcs_nickname>>! I bought a new dress and I want to hear your opinion on it. Do you have time to come to my dorm room to see it?"' 
 	act 'Go with Katja': gt 'katja_uni', 'dorm_room_walk'
-	act 'Tell Katja you don''t have time':
+	act 'You don''t have time':
 		cla & *clr
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'dislike'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
-		'You tell Katja that you are sorry, but you don''t have time right now. She looks a little sad.'
+		'You tell Katja that you don''t have time right now. She looks a little sad.'
 		'"Okay, another time then..."'
 		act 'Go to the university plaza': gt 'uni_grounds', 'main'
 	end
@@ -1198,14 +1198,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dorm_room_walk':
 	'"... and I bought the <i>cutest</i> dress at the mall. There''s so much variety here! Way more than what we had in Pavlovsk. And I passed the salon, so I thought about getting a mani-pedi but I decided I didn''t have time. There''s more swim shops here too but half of them are super slutty. I don''t know how any girl could wear some of the things they sell. They might as well just be string!"'
 	*nl
 	'As you are walking to the dorms, Katja keeps telling you about her shopping trip yesterday, seeming unusually chatty today. When you reach the elevator, the light above it indicates it''s already on the top floor and you''d have to wait for it to come all the way back down.'
-	'Katja turns to you, saying, "I live on the second floor, so let''s just take the stairs."'
+	'Katja turns to you. "I live on the second floor, so let''s just take the stairs."'
 	act 'Walk up the stairs':
 		cla & *clr
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3, 'lesbian'
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/Stair_case_voyeur.jpg"></center>'
-		'You head up the stairs together and as you get to the second landing, Katja suddenly grabs you by the arm and yanks you backward, stopping you from going any higher. You turn to look at her in confusion and see her eyes are wide.'
-		'Following her gaze up the staircase, you are greeted with the sight of two girls kissing, pressed up against the 2nd floor door. One of them has her hand up the other''s blouse, fondling her breast. In return, the second girl''s hand is under the first''s skirt, and from this angle you can see she''s knuckle deep in pussy. Both of them seem to be trying to see who can get the other''s tongue deeper down the other''s throat.'
+		'You head up the stairs together and as you get to the second landing, Katja suddenly grabs you by the arm and yanks you backwards, stopping you from going any higher. You turn to look at her in confusion and see her eyes are wide.'
+		'Following her gaze up the staircase, you are greeted with the sight of two girls kissing, pressed up against the door. One of them has her hand up the other''s blouse, fondling her breast. In return, the second girl''s hand is under the first''s skirt, and from this angle you can see she''s knuckle deep in her pussy. Both of them seem to be trying to see who can get the other''s tongue deeper down the other''s throat.'
 		*nl
 		'They don''t stop, so engrossed in each other''s bodies that they don''t seem to have noticed you. In turn, the two of you stand there in awkward silence, unable to turn your eyes away from the intimate scene in front of you. Katja squirms next to you, struggling not to make a sound, her breathing labored.'
 		act'Continue':
@@ -1222,24 +1222,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'dorm_room_walk':
 				katjaQW['horny'] = 70
 				gs 'stat'			
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/dorm/dorm_room.jpg"></center>'
-				'You continue up the stairs and into  Katja''s room in complete silence. Her side of the room is a lot less feminine than you would expect from a girl like her. The walls plastered with posters and notes, shelves lined with books. Her roommates side looks barren by comparison.'
+				'You continue up the stairs and into Katja''s room in complete silence. Her side of the room is a lot less feminine than you would expect from a girl like her. The walls are plastered with posters and notes, and her shelves are lined with books. Her roommate''s side looks barren by comparison.'
 				*nl
-				'After you have taking in the look of her room, you turn to look at Katja. She hasn''t said anything since before the staircase and her blush hasn''t faded in the slightest. Just as you are about to say something, she breaks the silence instead.'
-				'"<<$pcs_nickname>> have you ever done that? I mean kissed a girl and..." Her voice falters at the end but she is now looking at you with her big beautiful eyes.'
+				'After you have taking in the look of her room, you turn to look at Katja. She hasn''t said anything since before the staircase and her blush hasn''t faded in the slightest. Just as you''re about to say something, she breaks the silence instead.'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>> have you ever done that? I mean kissed a girl and..." Her voice falters at the end, but she''s now looking at you with her big beautiful eyes.'
 				if girl > 0:
 					act 'Tell Katja you have kissed a girl and gone further': gt 'katja_uni', 'experienced_tell'
 				else
 					act 'Tell Katja you have kissed a girl but not gone further': gt 'katja_uni', 'inexperienced_tell'
 				end
 				act 'Tell Katja that you have not kissed a girl':  gt 'katja_uni', 'no_experienced_tell'
-				act 'Tell Katja that you don''t want to discuss such things.':
+				act 'Tell Katja that you don''t want to discuss such things':
 					cla & *clr
 					gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'loathe'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
-					'You tell that you don''t want to talk about these things, and she looks heartbroken. So to quickly change the conversation you ask her to show you the clothes you came here for.'
-					'She snaps out of it as say, "Just a moment."'
-					act 'Watch her try on her new clothes.': gt 'katja_uni', 'try_clothes'
+					'You tell that you don''t want to talk about these things, and she looks heartbroken. You quickly change the conversation and ask her to show you the clothes she mentioned.'
+					act 'Watch her try on her new clothes': gt 'katja_uni', 'try_clothes'
 				end
 			end
 		end
@@ -1251,9 +1250,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'experienced_tell':
 	gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'like'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
-	'You tell Katja that you have '+iif(girl > 5 or (stat['cuni_give'] + stat['vaginal_finger_give'] + stat['vaginal_fist_give'] + stat['vaginal_dildo_give'] + stat['vaginal_strap_give'] + stat['vaginal_vibe_give']) > 10, 'a lot', 'some')+'experience with having sex with girls.'
+	'You tell Katja that you have '+iif(girl > 5 or (stat['cuni_give'] + stat['vaginal_finger_give'] + stat['vaginal_fist_give'] + stat['vaginal_dildo_give'] + stat['vaginal_strap_give'] + stat['vaginal_vibe_give']) > 10, 'a lot', 'some')+'experience having sex with girls.'
 	'She bites her lip hesitantly.'
-	'"Would you like to kiss me?" she asks, looking at you with her big eyes'
+	'"Would you like to kiss me?" she asks, looking at you with her big eyes.'
 	act 'Kiss Katja':
 		cla & *clr
 		katjaQW['QWstage'] = 3
@@ -1262,7 +1261,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'experienced_tell':
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'like'
 		gs 'stat'		
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_kiss.jpg"></center>'
-		'You move closer to Katja and and slowly put your lips to hers. Your tongue slips into her mouth and finds hers, carefully but eagerly pressing back against yours. You push it further, and you spend the next couple of minutes playing a full game of tonsil hockey.'
+		'You move closer to Katja and and slowly put your lips to hers. Your tongue slips into her mouth and finds hers, carefully but eagerly pressing back against yours. You push it further, and you spend the next few minutes playing a full game of tonsil hockey.'
 		act'Continue':
 			cla & *clr
 			!! IMAGE HERE
@@ -1277,9 +1276,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'experienced_tell':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'	
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
-				'"No, that''s all for today," you tell her. She doesn''t seem completely satisfied you your decision, also doesn''t complain. "Besides, you wanted to show me some clothes, didn''t you?"'
+				'"No, that''s all for today," you tell her. She doesn''t seem completely satisfied with your decision, but doesn''t complain. "Besides, you wanted to show me some clothes, didn''t you?"'
 				'"Oh! Yes!" she squeaks, clearly having forgotten after all the excitement. "Just give me a second!"' 
-				act 'Watch her try on her new clothes.': gt 'katja_uni', 'try_clothes'
+				act 'Watch her try on her new clothes': gt 'katja_uni', 'try_clothes'
 			end
 			act 'Show Katja how women makes love': gt 'katja_uni_sex', 'first_time'
 		end
@@ -1291,9 +1290,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inexperienced_tell':
 	gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'like'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
-	'You tell Katja that you have kissed a girl before but not done anything else.'
+	'You tell Katja that you have kissed a girl before, but not done anything else.'
 	'She bites her lip hesitantly.'
-	'"Would you like to kiss me?" looking at you with her big eyes'
+	'"Would you like to kiss me?" she asks, looking at you with her big eyes.'
 	act 'Kiss Katja':
 		cla & *clr
 		katjaQW['QWstage'] = 3
@@ -1302,13 +1301,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inexperienced_tell':
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'like'
 		gs 'stat'		
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_kiss.jpg"></center>'
-		'You move closer to Katja and and slowly put your lips to hers. Your tongue slips into her mouth and finds hers. She recoils on instinct but you chase after her, making sure her lips never leave yours. You push it further and end up spending the next couple of minutes playing a full game of tonsil hockey.'
+		'You move closer to Katja and and slowly put your lips to hers. Your tongue slips into her mouth and finds hers. She recoils on instinct but you chase after her, making sure her lips never leave yours. You push it further and end up spending the next few minutes playing a full game of tonsil hockey.'
 		'Eventually, the two of you break apart, a thin trail of saliva trailing between her lips and yours.'
 		*nl
 		'"Whoa..." she murmurs. "That was something else..."'
 		'"It was nice," you agree.'
 		'"Nice?! It was more than nice!" Katja giggles. "I''ve never experienced anything like that before. Do... do you think we could do that again? And maybe..."'
-		'She trails off, barely breathing, as if fearing the answer to your questioneither way.'
+		'She trails off, barely breathing, as if fearing the answer to your question either way.'
 		act 'Say no':
 			cla & *clr
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1316,7 +1315,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'inexperienced_tell':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
 			'"No, I think that''s enough for today," you tell her. You watch her visibly deflate, but she doesn''t speak up or complain. "Besides, you wanted to show me some clothes, didn''t you?"'
 			'"Oh! Yes!" she squeaks, clearly having forgotten after all the excitement. "Just give me a second!"' 
-			act 'Watch her try on her new clothes.': gt 'katja_uni', 'try_clothes'
+			act 'Watch her try on her new clothes': gt 'katja_uni', 'try_clothes'
 		end
 		act 'Have sex with Katja': gt 'katja_uni_sex', 'first_time'
 	end
@@ -1329,7 +1328,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'no_experienced_tell':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
 	'You tell Katja that you have never kissed a girl.'
 	'She bites her lip hesitantly.'
-	'"Do you maybe want to... find out what it''s like? Together...?" she asks looking at you with her big eyes.'
+	'"Do you maybe want to... find out what it''s like? Together...?" she asks, looking at you with her big eyes.'
 	act 'Kiss Katja':
 		cla & *clr
 		katjaQW['QWstage'] = 3
@@ -1338,13 +1337,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'no_experienced_tell':
 		gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A14', 'like'
 		gs 'stat'		
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/katja_kiss.jpg"></center>'
-		'You move closer to Katja and and slowly put your lips to hers. The two of you awkwardly bump together, feeling the heat of your blushes radiating off each other''s cheeks. Very, very carefully, you experimentally push your tongue into her mouth. As soon as it touches her lips, she flinches but settles into it and clumsily tries to reciprocate, letting her tongue touch against your''s.'
+		'You move closer to Katja and and slowly put your lips to hers. The two of you awkwardly bump together, feeling the heat of your blushes radiating off each other''s cheeks. Very, very carefully, you experimentally push your tongue into her mouth. As soon as it touches her lips, she flinches but settles into it and clumsily tries to reciprocate, letting her tongue brush against your own.'
 		'Eventually, the two of you break apart, a thin trail of saliva trailing between her lips and yours.'
 		*nl
 		'"Whoa..." she murmurs. "That was something else..."'
 		'"Yeah," is all you can say in return, panting a little.'
 		'"I''ve never experienced anything like that before," Katja giggles. "Do... do you think we could do that again? And maybe..."'
-		'She trails off, barely breathing, as if fearing the answer to your questioneither way.'
+		'She trails off, barely breathing, as if fearing the answer to your question either way.'
 		act 'Say no':
 			cla & *clr
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -1352,7 +1351,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'no_experienced_tell':
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big14.jpg"></center>'
 			'"No, I think that''s enough for today," you tell her. You watch her visibly deflate, but she doesn''t speak up or complain. "Besides, you wanted to show me some clothes, didn''t you?"'
 			'"Oh! Yes!" she squeaks, sitting up, clearly having forgotten after your little ''experience''. "Just give me a second!"'
-			act 'Watch her try on her new clothes.': gt 'katja_uni', 'try_clothes'
+			act 'Watch her try on her new clothes': gt 'katja_uni', 'try_clothes'
 		end
 		act 'Have sex with Katja': gt 'katja_uni_sex', 'first_time'
 	end
@@ -1363,12 +1362,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'try_clothes':
 	minut += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/dorm/showing_clothes1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Katja gets some shopping bags, pulling out the clothes in them and laying them neatly on her bed.'
+	'Katja grabs some shopping bags and starts pulling out the clothes in them before laying them neatly on her bed.'
 	*nl
 	'She starts with first outfit; a short black skirt and a white t-shirt.'
-	'"It looks great, Katja," you smile and she seems to swell with pride, grinning back.'
+	'"It looks great," you smile and she seems to swell with pride, grinning back.'
 	*nl
-	'Katja keeps changing through outfits, showing you what she bought —which is a lot— while you make comments on each one. It''s hard not to be impressed with her sense of fashion. Finally she get the last item she laid out.'
+	'Katja keeps changing through outfits, showing you what she bought —which is a lot— while you make comments on each one. It''s hard not to be impressed with her sense of fashion. She finally get the last item she laid out.'
 	*nl
 	'"This is the dress I told you about!"'
 	act 'Se the dress':
@@ -1376,7 +1375,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'try_clothes':
 		minut += 3
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/dorm/showing_clothes2.jpg"></center>'
-		'Katja takes her time to put on the dress she told you about, and is almost teasing you when she finally let the red dress that fits her curves wonderfully. It looks fantastic on her, and are about to say something when the door opens and a girl steps in.'
+		'Katja takes her time putting the dress on, and is almost teasing you when she finishes slipping on the dress that fits her curves wonderfully. It looks fantastic on her, and you are about to say something when the door opens and a girl steps in.'
 		'"Hi Katja, Maxim had a meeting with one of professors, so I- Oh! You have a guest."'
 		act 'Continue':
 			cla & *clr
@@ -1385,11 +1384,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'try_clothes':
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big260.jpg"></center>'
 			'Katja moves over quickly to introduce you.'
-			'"Sofia! This is <<$pcs_nickname>> my '+iif($university['enrolled_in'] = 'teaching studies', 'friend from my hometown', '')+'. I was just showing her the clothes I bought yesterday." Katja then turns to you, saying "<<$pcs_nickname>>, this is Sofia my roommate."'
-			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>, it is so nice to meet Katja''s friends she doesn''t seem to have a lot of them" Sofia says which clearly make Katja blush. "So '+iif( $university['enrolled_in'] = 'teaching_studies', 'you are also studying to become a teacher like Katja', 'what are you studying')+'?" she ask. '+iif( $university['enrolled_in'] = 'teaching_studies', '"yes"', '"I am '+iif(university[student] = 1, 'in the '+func('uni_programs', 'program_name')+' program', 'not studying at the university')+'" ')+' you answer.'
-			'"Cool. I am '+iif($university['enrolled_in'] = 'nursing', 'also studying to become a nurse, now I notice I do think I have seen you in class.', 'studying to become a nurse.')+' So Katja is showing you her new clothes. I has such a great sense of fashion. Next time I have money to go shopping I should bring her. Did you finish the show or is I disturbing?" she asks Katja. "No we finished, and <<$pcs_nickname>> was a bout to leave." Katja says, looking at you as trying to say she is sorry.'
-			'"That''s right I will be leaving now." you say. "Nice meeting you" Sofia says "Wish we had more time to chat, I barely knows anybody here, just Katja and my boyfriend Maxim. See you again soon. I am sure we will become great friends." she continues.'
-			'You say goodbye to Katja and as you leave the room you can hear that Sofia continues to talk the ear of Katja.' 
+			'"Sofia! This is <<$pcs_nickname>> my '+iif($university['enrolled_in'] = 'teaching studies', 'friend from my hometown', '')+'. I was just showing her the clothes I bought yesterday." She then turns to you. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, this is Sofia, my roommate."'
+			'"Hi <<$pcs_nickname>>! It''s so nice to meet Katja''s friends since she doesn''t seem to have a lot of them," Sofia says, which clearly makes Katja blush. "So '+iif( $university['enrolled_in'] = 'teaching_studies', 'you''re also studying to become a teacher like Katja', 'what are you studying')+'?" she asks. '+iif( $university['enrolled_in'] = 'teaching_studies', '"yes"', '"I''m '+iif(university[student] = 1, 'in the '+func('uni_programs', 'program_name')+' program', 'not studying at the university')+'" ')+' you answer.'
+			'"Cool. I''m '+iif($university['enrolled_in'] = 'nursing', 'also studying to become a nurse. Now that I think about it, I do think I''ve seen you in class.', 'studying to become a nurse.')+' So Katja is showing you her new clothes? She has such a great sense of fashion. Next time I have money to go shopping, I should bring her. Did you finish the show or was I disturbing?"'
+			'"No we''ve finished, and <<$pcs_nickname>> was about to leave," Katja says, looking at you as if trying to say she is sorry.'
+			'"That''s right, I will be leaving now," you say.' 
+			'"Nice meeting you," Sofia says. "I wish we had more time to chat since I barely knows anybody here, just Katja and my boyfriend Maxim. See you again soon. I''m sure we''ll become great friends," she continues.'
+			'You say goodbye to Katja and as you leave the room, you can hear Sofia continuing to talk the ear off Katja.' 
 			act 'Leave': gt 'uni_dorm', 'second_floor'
 		end
 	end
@@ -1404,42 +1405,44 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'katja_lazar_cafe':
 	katjaQW['lazar_uni_meet'] = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/lazar_cafe_uni.jpg"></center>'
-	'As Katja and you sit in the cafeteria eating lunch. While you talk about life at the University, someone suddenly sits down at your table. You glance over and see it is Lazar. "Hey girls what''s up? How''s college life treating you?"'
+	'As you and Katja sit in the cafeteria eating lunch while talking about life at the university, someone suddenly sits down at your table. You glance over and see that it''s Lazar.' 
+	'"Hey girls, what''s up? How''s college life treating you?"'
 	act 'Tell him to get lost':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/lazar_cafe_uni.jpg"></center>'
-		'You frown as he intrudes on your lunch with Katja. "Do you mind Lazar, this was a private conversation."'
-		'He gets up with a frown. "Damn, I just wanted to say hi. You don''t got to be a bitch about it." With that he walks off.'
-		'Katja looks at him walking away a moment and then turns towards you. "That wasn''t very nice." After that Katja is not very talkative, seems she felt you was rude earlier. When she finishes her lunch she gets up and excuses herself and doesn''t invites you to go with her.'
+		'You frown as he intrudes on your lunch with Katja. "Do you mind? This was a private conversation."'
+		'He gets up with a frown. "Damn, I just wanted to say hi. You don''t have to be a bitch about it."'
+		'Katja looks at him walking away before turning to you. "That wasn''t very nice."' 
+		'After that, Katja isn''t very talkative. When she finishes her lunch, she gets up and excuses herself, not bothering to invite you to go with her.'
 		act 'uni_cafe': gt 'uni_cafe'
 	end
 	act 'Talk to him':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/lazar_cafe_uni.jpg"></center>'
 		if  katjaQW['boy_block'] = 0 and (katjaQW['slut'] > 50 or  katjaQW['QWstage'] >= 4):
-			'You smile to Lazar. "Hey you, things are going well. Was just hanging out with Katja here, how are you finding college life?"'
-			'He nods with a big friendly smile. "Good to hear, things are going well. College life is amazing, I thought Secondary school was a blast but this blows that away. By the way you girls are looking nice today, especially you Katja. You know the three of us should totally hang out some night and have some fun."'
+			'You smile at Lazar. "Things are going well. How are you finding college life?"'
+			'He nods with a friendly smile. "Good to hear. College life is amazing! I thought secondary school was a blast, but this blows that away. By the way, you girls are looking nice today, especially you Katja. You know the three of us should totally hang out some night and have some fun..."'
 			*nl
-			'Katja grins at his comment and obvious interest, his body language and way he says things leave no doubt in your mind what he means by fun. You can''t really blame him you suppose, most girls want to hook up with two girls at a time. The three of you talk well paste having finished your lunch, Lazar is charming, friendly and flirty the whole time. Katja seems to respond in kind, it seems you friend is more than a little interested in Lazar, which only encourages him more. Finally each of you need to get going, you say your good byes and everyone gets up.'
+			'Katja grins at his comment and obvious interest, and his body language and way he says things leave no doubt in your mind what he means. The three of you talk well past having finished your lunch; Lazar is charming, friendly and flirty the whole time. Katja seems to respond in kind, which only encourages him more. It''s soon time for you to leave and you all get up from the table.'
 			act 'uni_cafe': gt 'uni_cafe'
 		else
-			'You smile to Lazar. "Hey you, things are going well. Was just hanging out with Katja here, how are you finding college life?"'
-			'He nods with a big friendly smile. "Good to hear, things are going well. College life is amazing, I thought Secondary school was a blast but this blows that away. By the way you girls are looking nice today, especially you Katja. You know the three of us should totally hang out some night and have some fun."'
-			'Katja seems to be in two minds about his comment and obvious interest, his body language and way he says things leave no doubt in your mind what he means by fun. You can''t really blame him you suppose, most girls want to hook up with two girls at a time. The three of you talk well paste having finished your lunch, Lazar is charming, friendly and flirty the whole time. Finally each of you need to get going, you say your good byes and everyone gets up.'
+			'You smile at Lazar. "Things are going well. How are you finding college life?"'
+			'He nods with a friendly smile. "Good to hear. College life is amazing! I thought secondary school was a blast, but this blows that away. By the way, you girls are looking nice today, especially you Katja. You know the three of us should totally hang out some night and have some fun..."'
+			'Katja seems to be in two minds about his comment and obvious interest, and his body language and way he says things leave no doubt in your mind what he means. The three of you talk well past having finished your lunch; Lazar is charming, friendly and flirty the whole time, but it''s soon time for you to leave and you all get up from the table.'
 			act 'uni_cafe': gt 'uni_cafe'
 		end
 	end
 	act 'Be flirty':
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/katja/uni/lazar_cafe_uni.jpg"></center>'
 		if  katjaQW['boy_block'] = 0 and (katjaQW['slut'] > 50 or  katjaQW['QWstage'] >= 4):
-			'You smile to Lazar. "Hey you, things are going well, better now that you are here. Katja and I was just having lunch, you should totally join us. So how are you finding college life, as exciting as I am finding it I hope?"'
-			'He nods with a big friendly smile. "Damn nice, glad things are going so well for you." He says with a wink to you. "College life is amazing, I thought Secondary school was a blast but this blows that away. By the way you girls are looking nice today, especially you Katja. You know the three of us should totally hang out some night and have some fun."'
+			'You smile at Lazar. "Things are going well, even better now that you'' re here. So, are you finding college life as exciting as I am?"'
+			'He nods with a friendly smile. "Damn, glad things are going so well for you," he says with a wink. "College life is amazing! I thought secondary school was a blast, but this blows that away. By the way, you girls are looking nice today, especially you Katja. You know the three of us should totally hang out some night and have some fun..."'
 			*nl
-			'Katja grins at his comment and obvious interest, his body language and way he says things leave no doubt in your mind what he means by fun. You can''t really blame him you suppose, most girls want to hook up with two girls at a time. The three of you talk well paste having finished your lunch, Lazar is charming, friendly and flirty the whole time. Katja seems to respond in kind, it seems you friend is more than a little interested in Lazar, which only encourages him more. Finally each of you need to get going, you say your good byes and everyone gets up.'
+			'Katja grins at his comment and obvious interest, and his body language and way he says things leave no doubt in your mind what he means. The three of you talk well past having finished your lunch; Lazar is charming, friendly and flirty the whole time and Katja seems to respond in kind, which only encourages him more. It''s soon time for you to leave and you all get up from the table.'
 			act 'uni_cafe': gt 'uni_cafe'
 		else
-			'You smile to Lazar. "Hey you, things are going well, better now that you are here. Katja and I was just having lunch, you should totally join us. So how are you finding college life, as exciting as I am finding it I hope?"'
-			'He nods with a big friendly smile. "Damn nice, glad things are going so well for you." He says with a wink to you. "College life is amazing, I thought Secondary school was a blast but this blows that away. By the way you girls are looking nice today, especially you Katja. You know the three of us should totally hang out some night and have some fun."'
+			'You smile at Lazar. "Things are going well, even better now that you''re here. So, are you finding college life as exciting as I am?"'
+			'He nods with a friendly smile. "Damn, glad things are going so well for you," he says with a wink. "College life is amazing! I thought secondary school was a blast, but this blows that away. By the way, you girls are looking nice today, especially you Katja. You know the three of us should totally hang out some night and have some fun..."'
 			*nl
-			'Katja seems to be in two minds about his comment and obvious interest, his body language and way he says things leave no doubt in your mind what he means by fun. You can''t really blame him you suppose, most girls want to hook up with two girls at a time. The three of you talk well paste having finished your lunch, Lazar is charming, friendly and flirty the whole time. Finally each of you need to get going, you say your good byes and everyone gets up.'
+			'Katja seems to be in two minds about his comment and obvious interest, and his body language and way he says things leave no doubt in your mind what he means. The three of you talk well past having finished your lunch; Lazar is charming, friendly and flirty the whole time, but it''s soon time for you to leave and you all get up from the table.'
 			act 'uni_cafe': gt 'uni_cafe'
 		end
 	end