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Text edits for porn studio as part of revamp

Vengeance11 3 years ago
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4 changed files with 216 additions and 228 deletions
  1. 10 10
      locations/AlbStars.qsrc
  2. 162 174
      locations/pornfilm.qsrc
  3. 19 19
      locations/pornhist.qsrc
  4. 25 25
      locations/pornstudio.qsrc

+ 10 - 10
locations/AlbStars.qsrc

@@ -440,7 +440,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cab_home':
 	if $ARGS[1] <> 'no_clean':
 		cumspclnt = 20
 		gs 'cum_cleanup'
-		'Before the taxi arrives, you enter the bathroom and clean yourself up before getting dressed.'
+		'While waiting for the taxi, you gather up your clothes and enter the bathroom. You clean yourself up at the sink as best as you can before getting dressed. You feel incredibily dirty and the only thing you want right now is a thorough shower when you get home.'
 	end
 
 	act 'Leave': gt 'pav_residential'
@@ -448,7 +448,7 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'whore1':
 	menu_off = 1
-	minut += 5
+	minut += 70
 	gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'the Armenian', rand(18,32)
 	$AlbinaQW['Cust'] = $npclastgenerated
 	gs 'boyStat', $AlbinaQW['Cust']
@@ -475,7 +475,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore1':
 				cls
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/smroom/event/rought/oral1.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'The man begins to very roughly fuck your mouth, his tip continually slamming into your throat.'
-				'He holds a tight grip on your head and you are forced to endure it. Drool is running from your mouth and tears run from your eyes as you gag and splutter on his cock.'
+				'He holds a tight grip on your head and you are forced to endure it. Drool is dripping from your mouth and tears run from your eyes as you gag and splutter on his cock.'
 				'Your distress doesn''t concern the man but appears to arouse him even further, which just makes him go even faster.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'bj', 10, 'sub', 'deepthroat', 'rough'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -492,7 +492,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore1':
 						'He pulls out of your mouth and roughly pulls your head up by your hair, forcing you to look up at him. "Now swallow it like the good little cum whore that you are."'
 						*nl
 						'You do as you''re told and show him your empty mouth. You make out his perverted and sadistic grin through your tear filled eyes before he suddenly thrusts his cock back into your mouth and starts deepthroating you again, not caring as you choke and gag once more on his dick.'
-						'After a few minutes of this, he is seemingly finished with you and throws you to the floor. You lay there catching your breath as the man goes to the bathroom.'
+						'After a few minutes of this, he is seemingly finished with you and throws you to the floor. You lay there catching your breath as the man walks off, no longer interested in you.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', -1, 'sub', 'humiliation', 'rough'
 						gs 'cum_call', 'mouth_swallow', $AlbinaQW['Cust']
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
@@ -524,7 +524,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore1':
 				cls
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/apartment/shulginhome/smroom/event/rought/dog1.mp4"></video></center>'
 				'The man climbs in behind you. He spreads your ass and you feel him spit on your anus before pressing his cock against it.'
-                'You let out a pained squeal and thrash your legs as he pushes his entire length deep into your unprepared ass. As he roughly and painfully grinds in and out of your hole, he reaches forward and starts pulling on your mouth with his fingers. After a few minutes, he removes his fingers, only to stuff your panties in your mouth before he leans in close to your ear.'
+                'You let out a pained squeal and thrash your legs as he pushes his entire length deep into your unprepared ass. As he roughly and painfully grinds in and out of your hole, he reaches forward and starts pulling on your mouth with his fingers. After a few minutes, he removes his fingers, only to stuff your panties in your mouth and pin your arms behind your back before he leans in close to your ear.'
                 '"Yeah, keep squirming like that bitch! It just makes you tighter!" Muffled by your panties, you whimper in distress at the pain he is inflicting on you, but he just laughs and fucks you even harder.'
                 *nl				
 				'After what feels like an eternity, you feel his cock twitching inside you and a warmth floods your ass. He pulls out and a sticky mix of cum and saliva trickles from your ravaged anus, which throbs in immense pain.'
@@ -569,7 +569,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore1':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'whore2':
-	minut += 5
+	minut += 60
 	gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'the Armenian', rand(18,32)
 	$AlbinaQW['Cust'] = $npclastgenerated
 	gs 'boyStat', $AlbinaQW['Cust']
@@ -715,7 +715,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore2':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'whore3':
-	minut += 5
+	minut += 60
 	gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'the man', rand(18,23)
 	$AlbinaQW['Cust'] = $npclastgenerated
 	gs 'boyStat', $AlbinaQW['Cust']
@@ -846,7 +846,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore3':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'whore4':
-	minut += 5
+	minut += 60
 	gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'the man', rand(18,32)
 	$AlbinaQW['Cust'] = $npclastgenerated
 	$npc_thdick[$AlbinaQW['Cust']] = 'massive'
@@ -978,7 +978,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore4':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'whore5':
-	minut += 5
+	minut += 60
 	gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'the man', rand(18,32)
 	$AlbinaQW['Cust'] = $npclastgenerated
 	$npc_thdick[$AlbinaQW['Cust']] = 'massive'
@@ -1135,7 +1135,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'whore5':
 end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'whore6':
-	minut += 5
+	minut += 60
 	gs 'npcgeneratec', 0, 'the man', rand(24,40)
 	$AlbinaQW['Cust'] = $npclastgenerated
 	gs 'boyStat', $AlbinaQW['Cust']

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+ 162 - 174
locations/pornfilm.qsrc


+ 19 - 19
locations/pornhist.qsrc

@@ -63,19 +63,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pdetail':
 		end
 		' <b>Income:</b> <font size=2><<pornfilmCash[i]>>₽</font>'
 		if pornfilmacting[i] < 15:
-			' <b>Acting:</b> <font size=2>You were so obviously fake as a bad boobjob. Have you got paid for this?</font>'
+			' <b>Acting:</b> <font size=2>Your acting was as fake as a bad boobjob. Did you got paid for this?</font>'
 		elseif pornfilmacting[i] < 30:
-			' <b>Acting:</b> <font size=2>You were acting quite fake, but it were passable.</font>'
+			' <b>Acting:</b> <font size=2>You were acting quite fake, but it was passable.</font>'
 		elseif pornfilmacting[i] < 45:
 			' <b>Acting:</b> <font size=2>You probably could have done better, but at least you were not totally unconvincing.</font>'
 		elseif pornfilmacting[i] < 60:
-			' <b>Acting:</b> <font size=2>You were actually acting, even if not totally convincingly.</font>'
+			' <b>Acting:</b> <font size=2>You were actually acting, even if it wasn''t entirely convincing.</font>'
 		elseif pornfilmacting[i] < 75:
 			' <b>Acting:</b> <font size=2>You were acting really well.</font>'
 		elseif pornfilmacting[i] < 90:
 			' <b>Acting:</b> <font size=2>As a professional actress, everybody believed your every gesture and sentence.</font>'
 		else
-			' <b>Acting:</b> <font size=2>Your performance was phenomenal. You may actually win some award with this one.</font>'
+			' <b>Acting:</b> <font size=2>Your performance was phenomenal. You may actually win some awards with this one.</font>'
 		end
 		if pornfilmvnesh[film] >= 200:
 			' <b>Look:</b> <font size=2>Amazingly beautiful.</font>'
@@ -145,77 +145,77 @@ $pornfilmdesc = {
 		pfactor = 1
 		actbonus = 1
 		$tags = 'blowjob, facial'
-		$pfilmtext = 'You blew a guy and got a facial.'
+		$pfilmtext = 'You gave a guy a blowjob and got a facial.'
 	elseif film_type = 3:
 		pfType = 0
 		pcash = 50
 		pfactor = 1
 		actbonus = rand(1,2)
 		$tags = 'blowjob, vaginal, facial'
-		$pfilmtext = 'You blew and fucked a guy, then got a facial.'
+		$pfilmtext = 'You gave a guy a blowjob and he fucked before giving you a facial.'
 	elseif film_type = 4:
 		pfType = 0
 		pcash = 60
 		pfactor = 1
 		actbonus = rand(1,2)
 		$tags = 'blowjob, facial, vaginal, anal'
-		$pfilmtext = 'You blew a guy and he fucked your pussy and ass, getting a facial.'
+		$pfilmtext = 'You a guy a blowjob and he fucked your pussy and ass before giving you a facial.'
 	elseif film_type = 5:
 		pfType = 0
 		pcash = 70
 		pfactor = 2
 		actbonus = rand(1,3)
 		$tags = 'facial, vaginal, anal, blowjob, creampie'
-		$pfilmtext = 'A guy fucked your pussy and ass, giving you an anal creampie while you sucked off an another guy, getting a facial.'
+		$pfilmtext = 'A guy fucked your pussy and ass and came in your ass while you sucked off an another guy who gave you a facial.'
 	elseif film_type = 6:
 		pfType = 0
 		pcash = 90
 		pfactor = 2
 		actbonus = rand(1,3)
 		$tags = 'DP, vaginal, anal, blowjob, facial, swallowing'
-		$pfilmtext = 'A guy fucked your pussy and ass while you sucked off his friend, got double penetrated, getting a facial and swallowing a load.'
+		$pfilmtext = 'A guy fucked your pussy and ass while you sucked off another guy. They then double penetrated you before cumming on your face. You swallowed their loads.'
 	elseif film_type = 7:
 		pfType = 1
 		pcash = 80
 		pfactor = 1
 		actbonus = rand(1,2)
 		$tags = 'vaginal, creampie'
-		$pfilmtext = 'You blew and fucked a guy, getting a creampie.'
+		$pfilmtext = 'You gave a guy a blowjob before he fucked you and gave you a creampie.'
 	elseif film_type = 8:
 		pfType = 1
 		pcash = 100
 		pfactor = 2
 		actbonus = rand(1,2)
 		$tags = 'DP, vaginal, anal, creampie'
-		$pfilmtext = 'Two guys fucked you in double penetration, getting a double creampie.'
+		$pfilmtext = 'Two guys fucked you in double penetration before giving you a double creampie.'
 	elseif film_type = 9:
 		pfType = 1
 		pcash = 90
 		pfactor = 2
 		actbonus = rand(1,3)
 		$tags = 'blowjob, vaginal, swallowing, creampie'
-		$pfilmtext = 'Two guys fucked your pussy and mouth, getting a creampie and swallowing cum.'
+		$pfilmtext = 'Two guys fucked your pussy and mouth. One gave you a creampie and the other came in your mouth and you swallowed.'
 	elseif film_type = 10:
 		pfType = 1
 		pcash = 120
 		pfactor = 4
 		actbonus = rand(2,3)
 		$tags = 'vaginal, cumshot'
-		$pfilmtext = 'Four guys fucked your pussy and they all cum on your body and face.'
+		$pfilmtext = 'Four guys fucked your pussy and they all ejaculated on your body and face.'
 	elseif film_type = 11:
 		pfType = 1
 		pcash = 150
 		pfactor = 4
 		actbonus = rand(2,3)
 		$tags = 'vaginal, creampie'
-		$pfilmtext = 'Four guys fucked your pussy, getting four creampies.'
+		$pfilmtext = 'Four guys fucked your pussy, giving you four creampies.'
 	elseif film_type = 12:
 		pfType = 0
 		pcash = 150
 		pfactor = 4
 		actbonus = rand(2,3)
 		$tags = 'anal, creampie'
-		$pfilmtext = 'Four guys fucked your ass, getting four anal creampies.'
+		$pfilmtext = 'Four guys fucked your ass, giving you four anal creampies.'
 	elseif film_type = 13:
 		pfType = 1
 		pcash = 150
@@ -229,22 +229,22 @@ $pornfilmdesc = {
 		pfactor = 50
 		actbonus = rand(1,2)
 		$tags = 'vaginal, anal, blowjob, cumshot, facial, swallowing'
-		$pfilmtext = 'Fifty of your fans fucked you however they could. Almost everyone came in your pussy.'
-		$pstory = 'You called out to your fans on the internet that they have an opportunity to fuck you and cum in or on you free of charge. Of course they flocked to you.'
+		$pfilmtext = 'Fifty of your fans fucked you however they could. Almost all of them came in your pussy.'
+		$pstory = 'You called out to your fans on the internet, giving them an opportunity to fuck you however they like.'
 	elseif film_type = 15:
 		pfType = 0
 		pcash = 50
 		pfactor = 1
 		actbonus = rand(1,2)
 		$tags = 'blowjob, anal, creampie'
-		$pfilmtext = 'You blew a guy and he fucked your ass, giving you an anal creampie.'
+		$pfilmtext = 'You gave a guy a blowjob before he fucked your ass and gave you an anal creampie.'
 	elseif film_type = 16:
 		pfType = 0
 		pcash = 50
 		pfactor = 1
 		actbonus = rand(1,2)
 		$tags = 'blowjob, anal, cumshot'
-		$pfilmtext = 'You blew a guy and he fucked your ass. He came over your ass.'
+		$pfilmtext = 'You gave a guy a blowjob and he fucked your ass. He came over your ass.'
 	elseif film_type = 17:
 		pfType = 0
 		pcash = 50

+ 25 - 25
locations/pornstudio.qsrc

@@ -21,7 +21,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 		exit
 	end
 
-	'Manager''s office open.'
+	'The manager''s office is open.'
 
 	act 'Go to the manager': gt 'pornstudio', 'manager'
 
@@ -68,7 +68,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				if konvert = 0:
 					workDolg = 200000
 					workDolgDay = 7
-					'Digging through your things you begin to panic. No envelope. You search again, but to your despair, you can''t find it. You stand there, unable to speak.'
+					'Digging through your things, you begin to panic. No envelope. You search again, but to your despair, you can''t find it. You stand there, unable to speak.'
 					'The manager grabs his phone and makes a call. You can''t hear exactly what he is saying because your heart is beating so loud, but he soon hangs up.'
 					'"You are very lucky that the boss is in a good mood. He has given you one week to recover his losses."'
 					'"You have until next Friday evening to bring me 200,000 <b>₽</b>. Do this and we''re done, you will never work for us again.'
@@ -184,18 +184,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pa':
 					if k < 14:jump 'repeating'
 					if ftypecount[1] = ftypecount[0]:
 						if ftypecount[0] = ftypecount[2]:
-							'You are known from your <<$ftypecount[0]>>, <<$ftypecount[1]>> and <<$ftypecount[2]>> scenes.'
+							'You are known for your <<$ftypecount[0]>>, <<$ftypecount[1]>> and <<$ftypecount[2]>> scenes.'
 						else
-							'You are known from your <<$ftypecount[0]>> and <<$ftypecount[1]>> scenes.'
+							'You are known for your <<$ftypecount[0]>> and <<$ftypecount[1]>> scenes.'
 						end
 					else
-						'You are known from your <<$ftypecount[0]>> scenes.'
+						'You are known for your <<$ftypecount[0]>> scenes.'
 					end
 				end
 
 				if film < 10 and porn_fame < 10:
 
-					'"By the way, if you wanted, I could completely remove them from our systems - for a good price of course." the guy whispers.'
+					'"By the way, if you wanted, I could completely remove them from our systems - for the right price of course." the guy whispers.'
 
 					act 'Tell me more':
 						cla
@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'delivery':
 			workDisk = 1
 			minut += 15
 			gs 'stat'
-			'You slip into a jeep by the entrance, and are driven to the sauna.'
+			'You slip into a car by the entrance, and are driven to the sauna.'
 
 			if saunasex = 1:
 				'You recall going to this sauna. You had some pretty energetic sex here.'
@@ -272,8 +272,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'delivery':
 				'This sauna is located near your home. You find it strange that you didn''t notice it before.'
 			end
 
-			'You go to the sauna, and are introduced to the local managers. It is explained to you who you need to deliver to, and reminded that it is necessary to return the envelope the same day you receive it.'
-			'"Don''t forget to use secure transport. We''ll see you on Fridays and don''t fuck up."'
+			'You go to the sauna, and are introduced to the local managers. It is explained to you who you need to deliver to, and are reminded that it is necessary to return the envelope the same day you receive it.'
+			'"Don''t forget to use secure transport. We''ll see you on Fridays. <i>Don''t</i> fuck up."'
 
 			act 'Leave':bomzQW = 2 & gt 'city_residential'
 		end
@@ -402,10 +402,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'manager':
 	! Your first ever movie offer
 		if firstoffer = 0:
 			firstoffer = 1
-			'"So, you''re the new girl? As luck would have it, we are looking for a brand new girl for our next shoot. It''s called ''Girls Jerk Guys #36''."'
+			'"So, you''re the new girl? As luck would have it, we''re looking for a brand new girl for our next shoot. It''s called ''Girls Jerk Guys #36''."'
 			'"For 500 <b>₽</b>, you have to jerk a guy off and have him cum on your tits."'
 		else
-			'"Hello. Since you are brand new, all I can offer is an introductory movie called ''Girls Jerk Guys #36''."'
+			'"Hello. Since you''re brand new, all I can offer you is an introductory movie called ''Girls Jerk Guys #36''."'
 			'"For 500 <b>₽</b>, you have to jerk a guy off and have him cum on your tits."'
 		end
 
@@ -770,13 +770,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'first':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/casting/casting0.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit down on the sofa and greet the boss. "I see it''s your first time with us. Do you want to be a porn star?'
+	'You sit down on the sofa and greet the boss. "I see it''s your first time with us. So, you want to be a porn star?'
 
 	if pcs_inhib < 40 and (money <= 500 and karta <= 500 and home_owned[2] = 0) or (narkoman = 1 or SLomka > 0):
-		'While you do not feel confident enough showing off your body, you are desperate for money, and are willing to do anything to earn it.'
+		'While you don''t feel confident enough showing off your body, you are desperate for money, and are willing to do anything to earn it.'
 		act 'Continue': gt 'pornstudio', 'yes'
 	elseif pcs_inhib < 40:
-		'You do not feel confident enough to start a career in porn. You should gain some confidence showing off your body first.'
+		'You don''t feel confident enough to start a career in porn. You should gain some confidence showing off your body first.'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'pornstudio', 'start'
 	else
 		act 'Continue': gt 'pornstudio', 'yes'
@@ -788,7 +788,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'yes':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/casting/casting0.jpg"></center>'
-	'You sit down on the sofa and greet the boss. "I see it''s your first time with us. Do you want to be a porn star?"'
+	'You sit down on the sofa and greet the boss. "I see it''s your first time with us. So, you want to be a porn star?"'
 	act 'Yes':
 		cla
 		minut += 5
@@ -823,7 +823,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'yes':
                 
 				act 'Grab your clothes and run out': gt 'pornstudio', 'start'
 
-				act 'Lie down on the sofa and spread your legs':
+				act 'Lie down':
 					cla & *clr
 					minut += 5
 					gs 'stat'
@@ -860,7 +860,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'yes':
 
 									if $pfname <= 0:$pfname = '<<$pcs_nickname>> BimboStar'
 
-									'"<<$pfname>>, wonderful name. Now listen. Before shooting starts, you have to pass the medical examination. If we find any sign of a sexually transmitted disease, you are out, no exceptions."'
+									'"<<$pfname>>, wonderful name. Now listen. Before shooting starts, you have to pass a medical examination. If we find any sign of a sexually transmitted disease, you are out, no exceptions."'
 									'"There we go, you''re now registered. We are quite big in the industry, shooting about four films a day, so you can choose what you to be in. Anal or gangbang, it''s your choice, just remember to take care of your health. If you get sick or something, just cancel the shoot. You can do this up to the day of the shooting."'
 									'"Come see me when you want a contract. And welcome to the world of pornography...<<$pfname>>."'
 
@@ -921,7 +921,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'medical':
              !! pornvnesh uses the same calc as pcs_apprnc except the clothing bonus is hard coded (to 900 and then reduced) and the glasses penalty is removed
 				pornvnesh = pcs_apprncbase + (pcs_apprncbase * 3 / 5) + mopkoef + (pcs_hairbsh * 10) + lipbalmKoef + (pcs_breath * 5) - sweatKoef - dyevmod - hairkoef - legkoef
 				'A skinny white-haired woman is waiting for you in the dressing room.'
-				'You take a thorough shower, carefully washing yourself, and get an enema too. You then get your hair and make-up done.'
+				'You take a thorough shower before getting an enema. You then get your hair and make-up done.'
 
 				act 'Go to the set': gt 'pornfilm', '<<pf>>'
 			end
@@ -1011,9 +1011,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'postvideo':
 		if succubusflag = 1:
 !!			May add a check to clear unprotfilm based on sucpcinfo (the PC knows Succubae are immune to STD''s)
 			if pfcash > 0:
-				$tmp = '"I almost can''t believe <i>they</i> paid <i>me</i> <<pfcash>><b>₽</b> for a wonderful meal!"'
+				$tmp = '"I almost can''t believe they paid me <<pfcash>><b>₽</b> for such a wonderful meal!"'
 			else
-				$tmp = '"And they think I''m doing this for free, when really they''re paying in other coin!"'
+				$tmp = '"And they think I''m doing this for free. If only they knew they were paying me in another way..."'
 			end
 			'You let slip a satisfied smirk and think to yourself, <<$tmp>>'
 		elseif knowpreg = 0 and thinkpreg = 0 and pillcon2 < 1000:
@@ -1021,7 +1021,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'postvideo':
 !!			Left "ppreg" pending its eventual use
 			if ppreg = 0:
 				if pfcash > 0:
-					$tmp = ' Was <<pfcash>> <b>₽</b> worth the risk of getting impregnated by a porn actor you''ll probably never see again?'
+					$tmp = ' Was <<pfcash>> <b>₽</b> worth the risk of getting impregnated by a seedy porn actor you''ll probably never see again?'
 				else
 					$tmp = 'You didn''t even get paid to risk pregnancy! You''ll likely never see the guy again.'
 				end
@@ -1104,7 +1104,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 				act 'Continue':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/film_0.jpg"></center>'
-					'"Then she shoots the scenes, an interesting and exciting process. The films we shoot...'
+					'"Then she shoots the scenes, an interesting and exciting process that can take hours. The films we shoot...'
 					
 					act 'Continue':
 						*clr & cla
@@ -1114,9 +1114,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '1':
 						act 'How and where it is all sold?':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/pierre_2.jpg"></center>'
-							'"We have guys at the sauna in the residential area and in the sex shop. We''re thinking of moving in on the university as well- and not just selling our films there. We could possibly shoot a few films on campus. If they helped us, it would be good for profits, entitle us to dividends and more."'
+							'"We mostly sell it digitally on our premium websites, but we have guys at the sauna in the residential area and in the sex shop for those who want to buy physically. We''re thinking of moving in on the university as well- and not just selling our films there. We could possibly shoot a few films on campus. If they helped us, it would be good for profits, entitle us to dividends and more."'
 
-							act 'Is it legal?':
+							act 'Is that legal?':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/ment_0.jpg"></center>'
 								'"It doesn''t matter since we bribe the cops. Maybe in the future you will be able to help us with that? In the meantime, I''ve told you everything you need to know."'
@@ -1163,7 +1163,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = '2':
 	gs 'stat'
 
 	if pcs_apprnc < carrar:
-		'"You don''t have what it takes, sorry."'
+		'"You don''t have what it takes. Sorry."'
 	elseif pcs_apprnc >= carrar:
 		actr = 1
 

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