10 Commits 8f353fed15 ... 8397b32e49

Author SHA1 Message Date
  rachels 8397b32e49 small fix of the previous fix (spotted by colwyvern) 1 year ago
  Kevin_Smarts 2c6922f00a [text edit] typos fixed by colwyvern 1 year ago
  rachels bdfc0d7715 typos fixed by colwyvern 1 year ago
  rachels 42d32595cc remove superfluous variable call 1 year ago
  rachels 558a4b7184 fix typos 1 year ago
  Kevin_Smarts 5c6023d0c2 [fixed] Reapplied fix for Tamara buying school uniform and it was undone in last commit 1 year ago
  Kevin_Smarts f407d3ba3e [text edit] Tams clean-up phase from Derryth_Love 1 year ago
  Kevin_Smarts af717fb02f [fixed] Range for Tamara school uniform search too high 1 year ago
  Kevin_Smarts e3d4cd92ef Merge remote-tracking branch 'Anya/master' 2 years ago
  Anya bfa83a8667 [fixed] missing code and text edits - needs work still 2 years ago

+ 5 - 5
locations/_attributes_allure_swim_one.qsrc

@@ -279,7 +279,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 31:
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloOnePiece = 1
 	CloInhibit = 15
-	$swimwear_description = 'An indigo color one-piece swimsuit with white floral prinit, it has moderate back coverage.'
+	$swimwear_description = 'An indigo color one-piece swimsuit with white floral print, it has moderate back coverage.'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 32:
 	CloQuality = 4
@@ -288,7 +288,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 32:
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloOnePiece = 1
 	CloInhibit = 15
-	$swimwear_description = 'An lapis color one-piece swimsuit with white floral prinit, it has moderate back coverage.'
+	$swimwear_description = 'An lapis color one-piece swimsuit with white floral print, it has moderate back coverage.'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 33:
 	CloQuality = 4
@@ -297,7 +297,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 33:
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloOnePiece = 1
 	CloInhibit = 20
-	$swimwear_description = 'A fun white one-piece swimsuit with white multi stripe prinit, it has daring cutout and cheeky back coverage.'
+	$swimwear_description = 'A fun white one-piece swimsuit with white multi stripe print, it has daring cutout and cheeky back coverage.'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 34:
 	CloQuality = 4
@@ -342,7 +342,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 38:
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloOnePiece = 1
 	CloInhibit = 10
-	$swimwear_description = 'A pink one-piece strapless swimsuit with stipes, it has full back coverage.'
+	$swimwear_description = 'A pink one-piece strapless swimsuit with stripes, it has full back coverage.'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 39:
 	CloQuality = 4
@@ -513,7 +513,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 57:
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloOnePiece = 1
 	CloInhibit = 10
-	$swimwear_description = 'This lace high-neck one-piece swimsuit in twhite has a very fashionable design.'
+	$swimwear_description = 'This lace high-neck one-piece swimsuit in white has a very fashionable design.'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 58:
 	CloQuality = 4

+ 8 - 8
locations/_attributes_allure_swim_two.qsrc

@@ -313,7 +313,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 39:
 	CloBra = 1
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloInhibit = 25
-	$swimwear_description = 'A sexy bikini set with a trangle top and a side-tie high-leg bottom with moss floral print.'
+	$swimwear_description = 'A sexy bikini set with a triangle top and a side-tie high-leg bottom with moss floral print.'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 40:
 	CloQuality = 3
@@ -337,7 +337,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 42:
 	CloBra = 1
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloInhibit = 20
-	$swimwear_description = 'An aqua colore bikini set with a bralette top and a high-leg high waist bottom.'
+	$swimwear_description = 'An aqua colored bikini set with a bralette top and a high-leg high waist bottom.'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 43:
 	CloQuality = 3
@@ -345,7 +345,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 43:
 	CloBra = 1
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloInhibit = 20
-	$swimwear_description = 'An aqua colore bikini set with a bandeau top and a runched hipster bottom.'
+	$swimwear_description = 'An aqua colored bikini set with a bandeau top and a runched hipster bottom.'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 44:
 	CloQuality = 2
@@ -449,7 +449,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 56:
 	CloBra = 1
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloInhibit = 20
-	$swimwear_description = 'A leavfy print bikini set with a keyhole cutout halter top and a high waist bottom.'
+	$swimwear_description = 'A leafy print bikini set with a keyhole cutout halter top and a high waist bottom.'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 57:
 	CloQuality = 3
@@ -577,7 +577,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 72:
 	CloBra = 1
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloInhibit = 20
-	$swimwear_description = 'A bikini set with a twist bralette top and a v-cut cheeky bottom in the color peacch.'
+	$swimwear_description = 'A bikini set with a twist bralette top and a v-cut cheeky bottom in the color peach.'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 73:
 	CloQuality = 4
@@ -1025,7 +1025,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 128:
 	CloBra = 1
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloInhibit = 20
-	$swimwear_description = 'A cute bikini set that has a ruffled bandeau top and also a ruffled hipspter bottom.'
+	$swimwear_description = 'A cute bikini set that has a ruffled bandeau top and also a ruffled hipster bottom.'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 129:
 	CloQuality = 5
@@ -1033,7 +1033,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 129:
 	CloBra = 1
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloInhibit = 20
-	$swimwear_description = 'A cute bikini set that has a ruffled bandeau top and also a ruffled hipspter bottom.'
+	$swimwear_description = 'A cute bikini set that has a ruffled bandeau top and also a ruffled hipster bottom.'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 130:
 	CloQuality = 5
@@ -1041,7 +1041,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 130:
 	CloBra = 1
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloInhibit = 20
-	$swimwear_description = 'A cute bikini set that has a ruffled bandeau top and also a ruffled hipspter bottom.'
+	$swimwear_description = 'A cute bikini set that has a ruffled bandeau top and also a ruffled hipster bottom.'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 131:
 	CloQuality = 4

+ 1 - 1
locations/_attributes_danilovich_swim_one.qsrc

@@ -108,7 +108,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 12:
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloOnePiece = 1
 	CloInhibit = 10
-	$swimwear_description = 'A women''s performance scoop back and chlorine-resistant one-piece wwimsuit in blue and black.'
+	$swimwear_description = 'A women''s performance scoop back and chlorine-resistant one-piece swimsuit in blue and black.'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 13:
 	CloQuality = 3

+ 40 - 40
locations/_attributes_dolls_shoes.qsrc

@@ -3,241 +3,241 @@
 !!price range from 3 to 5 but please avoid adding too many 5s
 
 if ARGS[1] = 1:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 2:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 3:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 4:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 5:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 3
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 6:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 3
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 7:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 3
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 8:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 2
 	ShoHeels = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 9:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 2
 	ShoHeels = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 10:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 2
 	ShoHeels = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 11:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 1
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 12:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 3
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 3
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 13:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 3
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 3
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 14:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 3
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 15:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 3
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 16:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 17:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 18:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 19:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 20:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 21:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 22:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 23:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 24:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 3
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 25:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 3
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 26:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 27:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 3
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 28:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 29:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 2
 	ShoHeels = 4
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 30:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 4
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 31:
-	ShoStlye = 2
+	ShoStyle = 2
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 4
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 32:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 4
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 33:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 4
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 34:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 4
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 35:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 5
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 36:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 3
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 1
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 37:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 1
 	ShoHeels = 4
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 38:
-	ShoStlye = 0
+	ShoStyle = 0
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 3
 	ShoHeels = 3
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 39:
-	ShoStlye = 2
+	ShoStyle = 2
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 3
 	ShoHeels = 3
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 40:
-	ShoStlye = 2
+	ShoStyle = 2
 	ShoQuality = 4
 	ShoCut = 3
 	ShoHeels = 3

+ 1 - 1
locations/_attributes_gm_coats.qsrc

@@ -4,7 +4,7 @@
 if ARGS[1] = 1:
 	CoatQuality = 2
     CoatWarm = 2
-	$coat_description = 'Moderate: A gigh shine faux fur trim fitted puffer jacket.'
+	$coat_description = 'Moderate: A high shine faux fur trim fitted puffer jacket.'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 2:
 	CoatQuality = 2

+ 3 - 3
locations/_attributes_nerdvana_swim_two.qsrc

@@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 4:
 	CloBra = 1
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloInhibit = 25
-	$swimwear_description = 'A bikini set with cutsy and nerdy print!'
+	$swimwear_description = 'A bikini set with cutesy and nerdy print!'
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 5:
 	CloQuality = 3
@@ -40,7 +40,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 5:
 	CloBra = 1
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloInhibit = 25
-	$swimwear_description = 'A bikini set with cutsy and nerdy print!'
+	$swimwear_description = 'A bikini set with cutesy and nerdy print!'
 
 elseif ARGS[1] = 6:
 	CloQuality = 3
@@ -168,7 +168,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 21:
 	CloBra = 1
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloInhibit = 30
-	$swimwear_description = 'A bikini set with cutsy and nerdy print!'
+	$swimwear_description = 'A bikini set with cutesy and nerdy print!'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 22:
 	CloQuality = 4

+ 1 - 1
locations/_attributes_scandalicious_swim_one.qsrc

@@ -165,7 +165,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 18:
 	CloOnePiece = 1
 	CloInhibit = 20
 	CloBimbo = 1
-	$swimwear_description = 'A pink monokini a bimbette can truely appreciate.'
+	$swimwear_description = 'A pink monokini a bimbette can truly appreciate.'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 19:
 	CloQuality = 2

+ 6 - 6
locations/_attributes_scandalicious_swim_two.qsrc

@@ -122,7 +122,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 15:
 	CloBra = 1
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloInhibit = 25
-	$swimwear_description = 'A filmsy rainbow bikini set, it is tawdry beyond believe!'
+	$swimwear_description = 'A filmsy rainbow bikini set, it is tawdry beyond belief!'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 16:
 	CloQuality = 2
@@ -130,7 +130,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 16:
 	CloBra = 1
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloInhibit = 25
-	$swimwear_description = 'A golden micro bikini set, it is tacky beyond believe!'
+	$swimwear_description = 'A golden micro bikini set, it is tacky beyond belief!'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 17:
 	CloQuality = 2
@@ -210,7 +210,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 26:
 	CloBra = 1
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloInhibit = 30
-	$swimwear_description = 'A red strappy bikini set that showcaes all your curves.'
+	$swimwear_description = 'A red strappy bikini set that showcase all your curves.'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 27:
 	CloQuality = 2
@@ -382,7 +382,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 47:
 	CloBra = 1
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloInhibit = 20
-	$swimwear_description = 'A gold sriped bikini set.'
+	$swimwear_description = 'A gold striped bikini set.'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 48:
 	CloQuality = 2
@@ -447,7 +447,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 55:
 	CloBra = 1
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloInhibit = 30
-	$swimwear_description = 'A printed bikini set challenge the boundary of dencency.'
+	$swimwear_description = 'A printed bikini set challenge the boundary of decency.'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 56:
 	CloQuality = 2
@@ -463,7 +463,7 @@ elseif ARGS[1] = 57:
 	CloBra = 1
 	CloPanties = 1
 	CloInhibit = 40
-	$swimwear_description = 'An itsy bitsy yellow bikini set for the attention-desparate you!'
+	$swimwear_description = 'An itsy bitsy yellow bikini set for the attention-desperate you!'
 	
 elseif ARGS[1] = 58:
 	CloQuality = 2

+ 2 - 2
locations/abductionCustomer.qsrc

@@ -1003,14 +1003,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'abdCustomer-cumAss':
 	elseif cumVol = 4:
 		'His <<$dick_girth>> member is buried <<dick>> centimeters deep inside your intestines, sometimes even hitting your intestinal walls.'
 		if buyout = 1:
-			'As <<$bName>> shoots his load, you can feel a wamth spread inside you...'
+			'As <<$bName>> shoots his load, you can feel a warmth spread inside you...'
 		else
 			'As he shoots his load, you can feel a warmth spread inside you...'
 		end
 		'He pulls out and his cum squirts out of your gaping hole.'
 	elseif cumVol >= 5:
 		if buyout = 1:
-			'<<$bName>>''s <<$dick_girth>> member is buried <<dick>> centimeters deep inside your intestines, with each thrust forcfully hitting your intestinal walls.'
+			'<<$bName>>''s <<$dick_girth>> member is buried <<dick>> centimeters deep inside your intestines, with each thrust forcefully hitting your intestinal walls.'
 		else
 			'The customer''s <<$dick_girth>> member is buried <<dick>> centimeters deep inside your intestines, with each thrust forcefully hitting your intestinal walls.'
 		end

+ 8 - 8
locations/act_extras1.qsrc

@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cadaver':
 			act'Next shot':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/extra/cadaver/2.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Filming ccontinues moving onto a closeup of your face as other actors poke and prod you.'
+				'Filming continues moving onto a closeup of your face as other actors poke and prod you.'
 				act'Next shot':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/extra/cadaver/3.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cadaver':
 						castability += 1
 						'With the discomfort of their fingers pulling up your eyelid and the movement of the camera, you can''t help but blink or twitch your eye, ruining the take. You have to do several additional takes before you manage to get your natural instincts under control and stare lifeless into the camera and finally get an acceptable shot.'
 					else
-						'With your experience in performance, both in physical control and mindset, you keep your entire body completely still as the other actors open your eyelid. The only movement of your body is the dialation of your pupils which would have to be edited out in post production anyways and you manage a perfect take on the first try.'
+						'With your experience in performance, both in physical control and mindset, you keep your entire body completely still as the other actors open your eyelid. The only movement of your body is the dilation of your pupils which would have to be edited out in post production anyways and you manage a perfect take on the first try.'
 					end
 					act'Next shot':
 						cla & *clr
@@ -172,24 +172,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits3':
 	if $acting['role'] = 'Modest Cheerleader':
 		'You are one of the shy and modestly dressed cheerleaders in the locker room when the main character comes to spice up your outfits to inspire the school''s football team to succeed.'
 		*nl
-		'On the director''s signal you do a syncronized cheer with the other girls, pumping up your hand and yelling.'
+		'On the director''s signal you do a synchronized cheer with the other girls, pumping up your hand and yelling.'
 		'<i>"Yayyy!!"</i>'
 		'It''s cheesy and weird and doesn''t make much sense, but it''s you didn''t write it.'
 	elseif $acting['role'] = 'Underwear Cheerleader':
 		'You are one of the shy and modestly dressed cheerleaders in the middle of changing when the main character comes to spice up your outfits to inspire the school''s football team to succeed.'
 		*nl
-		'On the director''s signal you do a syncronized cheer with the other girls, jumping and releasing your long skirt so it falls down and reveals your panties.'
+		'On the director''s signal you do a synchronized cheer with the other girls, jumping and releasing your long skirt so it falls down and reveals your panties.'
 		'<i>"Yayyy!!"</i>'
 		'It''s cheesy and weird and doesn''t make much sense, but it''s you didn''t write it.'
 	elseif $acting['role'] = 'Topless Cheerleader 3':
 		actress['nude_scene'] += 1
 		'You are one of the shy and modestly dressed cheerleaders in the middle of changing when the main character comes to spice up your outfits to inspire the school''s football team to succeed.'
 		if pcs_perform < 20:
-			'On the director''s signal you do a syncronized cheer with the other girls, letting go of your bra and throwing your hands up in the air to reveal your tits.'
+			'On the director''s signal you do a synchronized cheer with the other girls, letting go of your bra and throwing your hands up in the air to reveal your tits.'
 			'<i>"Yayyy!!"</i>'
 			'You actually react to the signal a little bit late and your bra drops after all the other girls have revealed their own breasts. Luckily, no one else seemed to really notice and the shot is accepted without a second take.'
 		else
-			'On the director''s signal you do a syncronized cheer with the other girls, letting go of the clothes you''ve held to your chest to reveal your tits.'
+			'On the director''s signal you do a synchronized cheer with the other girls, letting go of the clothes you''ve held to your chest to reveal your tits.'
 			'<i>"Yayyy!!"</i>'
 			'You cheer on the director''s signal perfectly, your hands going up with all the other girls and your breasts being shown right on cue. You''re not sure if anybody is going to praise you for it, but it still feels good to get it right on the first try.'
 		end
@@ -241,11 +241,11 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'student1':
 	!! IMAGE HERE
-	'You arrive at the set on time and check in with security at the front desk. After confirming that you''re on the list to get on the set, you receive a badge with a misspelt name, and the security guard at the entrance directs you to the side where a few other extras are hanging around. You join them and try to engage them in small talk. They don’’t seem to want to talk, so you pass the time by continuing to study the scene you were given. Your part is just an extra in the background. The camera won’t even be focused on you. <i>But if this is what I have to do to gain a foothold in the industry, I’’ll do it<i> you tell yourself.'
+	'You arrive at the set on time and check in with security at the front desk. After confirming that you''re on the list to get on the set, you receive a badge with a misspelt name, and the security guard at the entrance directs you to the side where a few other extras are hanging around. You join them and try to engage them in small talk. They don''t seem to want to talk, so you pass the time by continuing to study the scene you were given. Your part is just an extra in the background. The camera won’t even be focused on you. <i>But if this is what I have to do to gain a foothold in the industry, I’’ll do it<i> you tell yourself.'
 
 	'Finally, a beautiful assistant director comes over to you to place all you extras on your marks. The set has been built like a classroom, reminding you of your bygone high school days. You wonder what show or film they''re shooting.'
 
-	'"The scene you are doing today is for a film set in a school," she tells you. "Your role is to play one of the dozens of students in the school." She then faces you directly. "You there, You look young and pretty. You’’re assigned to sit directly behind the main stars during the scene.” she says absentmindedly as she walks you over to your assigned desk.'
+	'"The scene you are doing today is for a film set in a school," she tells you. "Your role is to play one of the dozens of students in the school." She then faces you directly. "You there, You look young and pretty. You''re assigned to sit directly behind the main stars during the scene.” she says absentmindedly as she walks you over to your assigned desk.'
 
 	'"Yes." You reply dutifully.'
 

+ 8 - 8
locations/act_extras3.qsrc

@@ -80,7 +80,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cadaver':
 			act'Next shot':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/misc/cadaver/2.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Filming ccontinues moving onto a closeup of your face as other actors poke and prod you.'
+				'Filming continues moving onto a closeup of your face as other actors poke and prod you.'
 				act'Next shot':
 					cla & *clr
 					'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/misc/cadaver/3.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -90,7 +90,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cadaver':
 						castability += 1
 						'With the discomfort of their fingers pulling up your eyelid and the movement of the camera, you can''t help but blink or twitch your eye, ruining the take. You have to do several additional takes before you manage to get your natural instincts under control and stare lifeless into the camera and finally get an acceptable shot.'
 					else
-						'With your experience in performance, both in physical control and mindset, you keep your entire body completely still as the other actors open your eyelid. The only movement of your body is the dialation of your pupils which would have to be edited out in post production anyways and you manage a perfect take on the first try.'
+						'With your experience in performance, both in physical control and mindset, you keep your entire body completely still as the other actors open your eyelid. The only movement of your body is the dilation of your pupils which would have to be edited out in post production anyways and you manage a perfect take on the first try.'
 					end
 					act'Next shot':
 						cla & *clr
@@ -172,24 +172,24 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lockertits3':
 	if $role = 'Modest Cheerleader':
 		'You are one of the shy and modestly dressed cheerleaders in the locker room when the main character comes to spice up your outfits to inspire the school''s football team to succeed.'
 		*nl
-		'On the director''s signal you do a syncronized cheer with the other girls, pumping up your hand and yelling.'
+		'On the director''s signal you do a synchronized cheer with the other girls, pumping up your hand and yelling.'
 		'<i>"Yayyy!!"</i>'
 		'It''s cheesy and weird and doesn''t make much sense, but it''s you didn''t write it.'
 	elseif $role = 'Underwear Cheerleader':
 		'You are one of the shy and modestly dressed cheerleaders in the middle of changing when the main character comes to spice up your outfits to inspire the school''s football team to succeed.'
 		*nl
-		'On the director''s signal you do a syncronized cheer with the other girls, jumping and releasing your long skirt so it falls down and reveals your panties.'
+		'On the director''s signal you do a synchronized cheer with the other girls, jumping and releasing your long skirt so it falls down and reveals your panties.'
 		'<i>"Yayyy!!"</i>'
 		'It''s cheesy and weird and doesn''t make much sense, but it''s you didn''t write it.'
 	elseif $role = 'Topless Cheerleader 3':
 		actress['nude_scene'] += 1
 		'You are one of the shy and modestly dressed cheerleaders in the middle of changing when the main character comes to spice up your outfits to inspire the school''s football team to succeed.'
 		if pcs_perform < 20:
-			'On the director''s signal you do a syncronized cheer with the other girls, letting go of your bra and throwing your hands up in the air to reveal your tits.'
+			'On the director''s signal you do a synchronized cheer with the other girls, letting go of your bra and throwing your hands up in the air to reveal your tits.'
 			'<i>"Yayyy!!"</i>'
 			'You actually react to the signal a little bit late and your bra drops after all the other girls have revealed their own breasts. Luckily, no one else seemed to really notice and the shot is accepted without a second take.'
 		else
-			'On the director''s signal you do a syncronized cheer with the other girls, letting go of the clothes you''ve held to your chest to reveal your tits.'
+			'On the director''s signal you do a synchronized cheer with the other girls, letting go of the clothes you''ve held to your chest to reveal your tits.'
 			'<i>"Yayyy!!"</i>'
 			'You cheer on the director''s signal perfectly, your hands going up with all the other girls and your breasts being shown right on cue. You''re not sure if anybody is going to praise you for it, but it still feels good to get it right on the first try.'
 		end
@@ -241,11 +241,11 @@ end
 
 if $ARGS[0] = 'student1':
 	!! IMAGE HERE
-	'You arrive at the set on time and check in with security at the front desk. After confirming that you''re on the list to get on the set, you receive a badge with a misspelt name, and the security guard at the entrance directs you to the side where a few other extras are hanging around. You join them and try to engage them in small talk. They don’’t seem to want to talk, so you pass the time by continuing to study the scene you were given. Your part is just an extra in the background. The camera won’t even be focused on you. <i>But if this is what I have to do to gain a foothold in the industry, I’’ll do it<i> you tell yourself.'
+	'You arrive at the set on time and check in with security at the front desk. After confirming that you''re on the list to get on the set, you receive a badge with a misspelt name, and the security guard at the entrance directs you to the side where a few other extras are hanging around. You join them and try to engage them in small talk. They don''t seem to want to talk, so you pass the time by continuing to study the scene you were given. Your part is just an extra in the background. The camera won’t even be focused on you. <i>But if this is what I have to do to gain a foothold in the industry, I’’ll do it<i> you tell yourself.'
 
 	'Finally, a beautiful assistant director comes over to you to place all you extras on your marks. The set has been built like a classroom, reminding you of your bygone high school days. You wonder what show or film they''re shooting.'
 
-	'"The scene you are doing today is for a film set in a school," she tells you. "Your role is to play one of the dozens of students in the school." She then faces you directly. "You there, You look young and pretty. You’’re assigned to sit directly behind the main stars during the scene.” she says absentmindedly as she walks you over to your assigned desk.'
+	'"The scene you are doing today is for a film set in a school," she tells you. "Your role is to play one of the dozens of students in the school." She then faces you directly. "You there, You look young and pretty. You''re assigned to sit directly behind the main stars during the scene.” she says absentmindedly as she walks you over to your assigned desk.'
 
 	'"Yes." You reply dutifully.'
 

+ 6 - 6
locations/act_main1.qsrc

@@ -172,7 +172,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude3':
 		'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/main/dramedy/unashamed/nude/3_2.mp4"></video></center>'
 		'"Shit. Well, if I can help at all, you''ll let me know right? Cause you like me, don''t you?"'
 		'You snicker back at Vitaly and reach down to take a big grab of his ass.'
-		'"Oh please, you know I only like you for your sweet fuckable ass." The line is delivered with clear sarcasm to show you''re just teasing, but also avoids the implied quesiton the character was really asking about. "Anyways, I gotta go. I have to pick up my sister from school," you say, getting up to end the scene.'
+		'"Oh please, you know I only like you for your sweet fuckable ass." The line is delivered with clear sarcasm to show you''re just teasing, but also avoids the implied question the character was really asking about. "Anyways, I gotta go. I have to pick up my sister from school," you say, getting up to end the scene.'
 		act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'
 	end
 end
@@ -297,10 +297,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude_sex3':
 			'He''s not actually licking your pussy but you can feel his breath on your clit and it''s <i>very</i> irritating. Your hand didn''t go down because you were acting, you were trying to stop from squirming too much and ruin the shot. It''s like something tickling your face during a haircut. You just want to stop and scratch the itch but now isn''t the time or place.'
 		else
 			gs'arousal','cuni',10
-			'Even while you were filming the close up shot, this extra has been steadily licking your pussy and for fuck''s sake he''s really good at it and it''s fucking distracting! When your hand went down to grab the sheets earlier, that wasn''t acting, that was an unvoluntary reaction. But you guess that''s kind of the whole point of this scene isn''t it?'
-		end
-		'Someone calls out the next line of what the person on the other end of the phone is supposed to be saying.'
-		'"Misha, it''s Yulya, she says she''s not feeling great."'
+			'Even while you were filming the close up shot, this extra has been steadily licking your pussy and for fuck''s sake he''s really good at it and it''s fucking distracting! When your hand went down to grab the sheets earlier, that wasn''t acting, that was an involuntary reaction. But you guess that''s kind of the whole point of this scene isn''t it?'
+ 		end
+ 		'Someone calls out the next line of what the person on the other end of the phone is supposed to be saying.'
+ 		'"Misha, it''s Yulya, she says she''s not feeling great."'
 		'"No no no no no, don''t put Misha on..."'
 		'A different person on set calls out the next line.'
 		'"You can''t make the lunch shift?'
@@ -381,7 +381,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Unashamed_nude_sex5':
 				'You groan hard, trying to imagine what it might feel like for a big cock to suddenly thrust itself inside you and use that image to fuel the reaction you''re trying to emote.'
 			end
 			'"Ugh! Ugh! What? That''s what you''re after? We just went for drinks at the bar the other night! Besides, when have you ever cared about anything other than pussy?"'
-			'"That doesn''t count and you know it Yulya. We fucked in the bathroom that night too unlesss you were too drunk to remember it."'
+			'"That doesn''t count and you know it Yulya. We fucked in the bathroom that night too unless you were too drunk to remember it."'
 			'"Oh for fuck''s sake! Just hurry up and cum already, I can''t deal with this today."'
 			'The argument continues until Vitaly "cums" and you get dressed and leave in a rush. The scene ends with Vitaly looking dejected and unsatisfied alone in the room.'
 			act'Go to break':gt 'studio_events', 'break'

+ 2 - 2
locations/act_minor1.qsrc

@@ -49,7 +49,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'club_flash':
 			*nl
 			'"There''s a problem?"'
 			*nl
-			'"I-it''s a meat market! I mean everyone''s a commodity and i-it''s all about scoring." He looks down at your breasts poking out from the thin brown top costuming picked out for you while he continues speaking. "There''s no room left for just being a person." His look is so distracted and lusftul that you aren''t sure if he''s a good actor or if he''s <i>actually</i> just checking out your tits. Maybe he''s a method actor'
+			'"I-it''s a meat market! I mean everyone''s a commodity and i-it''s all about scoring." He looks down at your breasts poking out from the thin brown top costuming picked out for you while he continues speaking. "There''s no room left for just being a person." His look is so distracted and lustful that you aren''t sure if he''s a good actor or if he''s <i>actually</i> just checking out your tits. Maybe he''s a method actor'
 			act'Continue':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/minor/club_flash/3.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -182,7 +182,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'diner_waitress2':
 		act'"Action!"':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/city/industrial/studio/acting/minor/diner_waitress/2_1.mp4"></video></center>'
-			'The direcotr calls action and you start riding your co-star for all they''re worth as the camera moves in behind you.'
+			'The director calls action and you start riding your co-star for all they''re worth as the camera moves in behind you.'
 			*nl
 			'Per instructions, you can''t actually raise your hips at all or else the camera will see the pad beneath and so you go into a hard rocking motion with your hips, causing your pussy to really rub uncomfortably against it. You moan loudly, faking climax and shake your breasts for the camera while your co-star grabs your ass and facilitates your rocking motion.'
 			act'"Cut!"':

+ 0 - 1
locations/arousal.qsrc

@@ -269,7 +269,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] ! 'end' and $ARGS[0] ! 'checks' and $ARGS[0] ! 'count' and $ARGS[0]
 			gs 'pain', 4-agape, 'asshole', 'stretch'
 			if agape < 3:agape = 3
 		end
-		self_fisting
 	elseif $ARGS[0] = 'anal_dildo':
 		orgasm_flag['anal'] = 1
 		count['anal_dildo'] = 1

+ 1 - 1
locations/booty_call_start.qsrc

@@ -254,7 +254,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'bed_start':
 	!! $npc_apt_bedroom[$boy]
 	cla & *clr
 	if CloDress = 1:booty_call['CloDress'] = 1
-	gs 'shortgs ', 'undress'
+	gs 'shortgs', 'undress'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 2
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay_give', -2
 	gs'stat'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gaddvor.qsrc

@@ -103,7 +103,7 @@ if $ARGS[0]='':
 		menu_off = 1
 		gs 'miroslava', 'miraclothes'
 		'You went out into the yard and noticed Mira standing there.'
-		'"Oh, <<$pcs_nickname>> hi, hope you don’’t mind me visiting. I was bored being home alone." she said smiling.'
+		'"Oh, <<$pcs_nickname>> hi, hope you don''t mind me visiting. I was bored being home alone." she said smiling.'
 		mira_guestday = daystart
 		minut += 5
 		mira_guest = 1

+ 2 - 2
locations/gadhouse.qsrc

@@ -914,7 +914,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 				'"The last time I visited here I was really young. I remember some of the houses, but the clearest memory I have is going swimming with Mitya." you reply.'
 				'"And look how big you''ve become! Just look at you." grandma smiled.'
 				'She begins telling you about the village.'
-				'"The village is small, as you know. You’’ll probably find Mitya by the river or the beach where you can go swimming and sunbathe. There are still some fishermen here in the village if you want to go fishing, ask around after Stepan, he’’ll lend you a fishing rod."'
+				'"The village is small, as you know. You''ll probably find Mitya by the river or the beach where you can go swimming and sunbathe. There are still some fishermen here in the village if you want to go fishing, ask around after Stepan, he’’ll lend you a fishing rod."'
 				'"There is nothing interesting in the village itself. Oh yes... I just remembered... recently a new family moved in, a single parent with his daughter. Could you imagine that, someone new moving in? The girl is about your age. Her father works in the city and from the rumors I''ve heard he''s hardly here because his work forces him to stay in the city most of the time. You''ll probably meet her while you take a walk in the village."'
 				'"In the outskirts of the village is the field where the cattle graze and beyond the field is the forest. You''ll usually find our local hunter Andrew in the forest. He often brings along his friends to hunt, they often stay there for days. They say he built a hut somewhere in the forest. So, if you meet Andrew and his friends out there, don''t be afraid. If you want to go to the forest make sure to ask grandfather first."'
 				'"If you like running, you can take a run on the road leading into the forest. Or you can take a ride on our old bike. I''m pretty sure the bike is in the shed. Make sure to look for it if you''re interested. And if you want to watch your figure, then go to the garden, have some fruit, it''s as healthy as the diet meals you''re eating, if not more healthier."'
@@ -996,7 +996,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'grandma':
 				!Keep the word brigade if you want to change the text. It''s what the people working on the kolkhoz were called.
 				elseif temp = 7:
 					'"One day my mother, rest her soul, sent us four siblings out to the forest for berry gathering", your grandma begins. "We took our berry collectors and headed out. We reached the entrance of the forest pretty quickly and decided that it would be best to split up to complete the task faster. Since we were familiar with the area we all dispersed to our cherished spots and began gathering berries."'
-					'"My favorite spot was a plot surrounded by dense bushes and in the middle of the plot there was a huge stump. It’’s was really a great spot and as I approached I noticed very large number of ripe strawberries. I was rejoicing over the thought that I would gather more than my brothers, slowly gathering the berries and putting them in my berry collector. All of a sudden I hear some rustling behind the bushes. I turn towards the sound, but I''m met with silence. I didn''t notice anyone but I still couldn''t get rid of the eerie feeling."'
+					'"My favorite spot was a plot surrounded by dense bushes and in the middle of the plot there was a huge stump. It''s was really a great spot and as I approached I noticed very large number of ripe strawberries. I was rejoicing over the thought that I would gather more than my brothers, slowly gathering the berries and putting them in my berry collector. All of a sudden I hear some rustling behind the bushes. I turn towards the sound, but I''m met with silence. I didn''t notice anyone but I still couldn''t get rid of the eerie feeling."'
 					'"I shook off the eerie feeling and go back gathering strawberries again. All of a sudden I get this strange feeling... I look up and I see a person squatting on the stump. He''s completely still and just stares at me. I got really scared and ran away screaming and crying towards my brothers. They tried to stop and calm me down, but I just kept on running. My brothers started running after me, trying to keep up. I could hear my oldest brother shouting to run towards the kolkhoz. You see <<$pcs_nickname>> long time ago we had central collective farms that were called kolkhoz, your grandma explains."'
 					'"We were lucky that the farms were close to the forest and didn''t have to run through the woods for long. I kept looking back if this person was following us but there was no sign of him. We knew we were safe when we see the farmers belonging to the brigade. My brothers and I ran up to the foreman and explained to him what had happened. He immediately grabbed the phone and called someone. The other farmers reassured us that we were safe now. After we had calmed down we got sent home. Our mother met as at home, she fed us and comforted me."'
 					'"The following day we were informed that not far from the train station Ratomka some people found dismantled railroad rails. Apparently it was done by the same man that I came across in the forest. I didn''t know it then but before the war our area was prone to sabotage by infiltrators, and staying hidden was easy, as the territory is covered by forest, stretching all the way to the border."'

+ 39 - 49
locations/gschool_grounds.qsrc

@@ -780,51 +780,39 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'change_room':
 	dynamic $tampon
 	gs 'din_van', 'pblc_pee'
 end
-if $ARGS[0] = 'Family extension':
-!! OK however I've gone for 2 paths 1 normal+  low as thinking about it the reactions would also differ slightly if she won (more enthusiastic) or not (more supportive). I''ve also added a 3rd option iof Sveta moves out voluntarily but has a great relationship with Anya and/or a BF/GF. See what you think.
-!! Important track meet at school vs another school - Sveta wins
-!! Text as per the last screenshot in the game (PE teacher raises Sveta's arm in triumph then as she walks away use the attached picture [School run win].
-!! Then instead of just the "Return to town" option add the following:
-!! [If Sveta left home go straight to: [If Sveta has left home] section.
 
+if $ARGS[0] = 'Family extension':
 	if curr_home = 2:
-		!! [If Sveta in normal+ relationship with Kolka]
-		!! call scheduler
 		if npc_rel['A34'] > 50:
-			'You hear your brother shout your name and look round.'
-			'"Sveta... Sveta you won!" Kolka shouts running towards you with a hugh grin. He crashes into you and gives you a big hug.'
+			'You hear your name and turn to find Kolka. "<<$pcs_nickname>>... <<$pcs_nickname>> you won!" Kolka shouts running towards you with a huge grin. He crashes into you and gives you a big hug.'
 			'"Hey, how''s my favourite brother? Thanks for coming, I wasn''t aware you knew I was running."'
-			'Kolka still grinning replies "Hey didn''t you think I spotted you doing all those laps when the school was closed and training at the community centre. You''re always out wearing your sports gear and carying that water bottle so clearly not just meeting friends!"'
+			'Kolka still grinning replies "Hey didn''t you think I spotted you doing all those laps when the school was closed and training at the community center. You''re always out wearing your sports gear and carying that water bottle so clearly not just meeting friends!"'
 		else
-			'Sveta hears her brother shout her name and looks round.'
-			'"Sveta you won well done."'
+			'You hear your name and turn to find Kolka. "<<$pcs_nickname>> you won well done."'
 			'"Hi Kolka. Thanks for coming, I wasn''t aware you knew I was running."'
-			'"Yeah well mum asked me to keep an eye out on what you were doing always out in your sports hear with that water bottle so I asked the coach."'
+			'"Yeah well <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> asked me to keep an eye out on what you were doing always out in your sports hear with that water bottle so I asked the coach."'
 		end
 		minut += 4
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			menu_off = 1
-			'At this point Sveta sees her mum and stepdad approaching.'
+			'At this point Sveta sees her <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and stepdad approaching.'
 			if npc_rel['A29'] > 50:
-				'Your mum approaches you and gives you a big hug. "I know we''ve had our differences but I only want the best for you. I''m so proud of you. Why didn''t you say something"?'
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> approaches you and gives you a big hug. "I know we''ve had our differences but I only want the best for you. I''m so proud of you. Why didn''t you say something"?'
 
 				if npc_rel['A33'] > 50:
 					'You see Anya coming over a little way behind Kolka. "Go girl! Well done. Hey sis you should have told me about this during our nightly chats." She comes over and gives you a big hug.'
 				else
-					'You see Anya coming over a little way behind Kolka. "Well done Sveta. Ummm... Why didn''t you say something, maybe in the evenings before bed that way we''d get to know each other better?"'
+					'You see Anya coming over a little way behind Kolka. "Well done <<$pcs_nickname>>. Ummm... Why didn''t you say something, maybe in the evenings before bed that way we''d get to know each other better?"'
 					'"Thanks Anya and umm... well you''re always reading and I didn''t want to disturb you... Sorry."'
 					'"Hey, don''t worry about it. As said well done but I''d be interested to hear what''s going on with you so don''t worry about disturbing be."'
 					'"Ok thanks Anya... I''ll try." You give her a hug.'
 				end
 
-		!! [Not sure if it is practical but maybe add an option to the nightly chats for Sveta to mention important events to the nightly chats? If not I guess it is covered in smalltalk.]
-		!! [Continuation of if Sveta has a good relationship with mum (stepdad likely to follow mum s lead)]
-
 				'Your stepdad now joins the conversation. "Come on Sveta get showered and changed and we''ll meet you outside the changing rooms."'
 				'"You don''t have to I know money is tight and anyway I''m already so happy you all took the time to come and support me, it means a lot."'
-				'"No I insist. I''ve talked about this with your mum and she agrees. It''s not often we get the chance to do something like this and we think that some quality family time would be good for all of us."'
+				'"No I insist. I''ve talked about this with your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> and she agrees. It''s not often we get the chance to do something like this and we think that some quality family time would be good for all of us."'
 				minut += 4
 				gs 'stat'
 
@@ -837,10 +825,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family extension':
 					act 'Go to a restaurant':
 						*clr & cla
 						'At a local restaurant [Del Parco] you all spend a lovely couple of hours enjoying your meal and the family providing you with encouragement to continue and improve but stressing that they are very proud of what you''ve achieved so far.'
-						'Your dad orders some wine and although your mum gives him a disapproving look he gives you a glass so you can toast your victory.'
+						'Your dad orders some wine and although your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gives him a disapproving look he gives you a glass so you can toast your victory.'
 						'At the end of a very enjoyable meal and some quality family time you thank them again for their kindness and acknowledge that you really appreciate this as you know that money is tight.'
 						'At the end of the meal there''s a big family hug and you all return home.'
-		!! call scheduler
+
 						minut += 4
 						gs 'stat'
 
@@ -848,53 +836,50 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family extension':
 					end
 				end
 			else
-		!![Else if Sveta has a low relationship with mum]
-				'"Sveta you won! Well done!" your mum shouts approaching you.'
+				'"Sveta you won! Well done!" your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> shouts approaching you.'
 				'"Thanks and thanks for coming too."'
-				'Your mum replies "I know that we have our differnces but I haven''t stopped caring about you and I asked Kolka to let me know if he saw you around as I kept seeing you heading out in your sports gear with your waterbottle and wondered what you were doing as clearly not just seeing friends."'
-				'You are a little lost for words so your mum continues "He told me he''s seen you running at the track when the school was closed and training at the community centre so I asked the coach. Anyway I''m so proud of you and why didn''t you say something?"'
-				'When you don''t answer your mum continues "Come on Sveta get showered and changed and I''ll meet you outside the changing rooms." Anya and Kolka give you a friendly wave and leave.'
+				'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> replies "I know that we have our differnces but I haven''t stopped caring about you and I asked Kolka to let me know if he saw you around as I kept seeing you heading out in your sports gear with your waterbottle and wondered what you were doing as clearly not just seeing friends."'
+				'You are a little lost for words so your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> continues "He told me he''s seen you running at the track when the school was closed and training at the community centre so I asked the coach. Anyway I''m so proud of you and why didn''t you say something?"'
+				'When you don''t answer your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> continues "Come on Sveta get showered and changed and I''ll meet you outside the changing rooms." Anya and Kolka give you a friendly wave and leave.'
 				minut += 4
 				gs 'stat'
 
 				act 'Go take your shower':
 					*clr & cla
-					'After showering and changing you head out and greet your mum "Hi mum, thanks for coming it means a lot to me."'
+					'After showering and changing you head out and greet your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> "Hi <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, thanks for coming it means a lot to me."'
 					'"Of course I''d come Sveta I just want the best for you and I''m proud of you and your win. Come on lets go out for a bite to eat and I think we need a chat."'
-					'"You don''t have to mum, I''m so glad you came and I know money is tight."'
+					'"You don''t have to <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I''m so glad you came and I know money is tight."'
 					'"That''s fine Sveta so long as you don''t mind the station cafe. I want to see if we can''t patch things up between us."'
 					minut += 4
 					gs 'stat'
 
 					act 'Go to the cafe':
 						*clr & cla
-						'At a local restaurant [station cafe] your mum selects a corner spot away from the main area so you can keep your chat private.'
+						'At a local restaurant [station cafe] your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> selects a corner spot away from the main area so you can keep your chat private.'
 						'You both initially have some general smalltalk during which she again congratulates you on your win and explains again that she wants the best for you and will help in any way she can but you need to meet her half way.'
-						'You are initially unsure how to respond but after a while in a very low shaky voice says "Mum, I''d love that but why give me such a hard time just because I had sex?"'
+						'You are initially unsure how to respond but after a while in a very low shaky voice says "<<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>>, I''d love that but why give me such a hard time just because I had sex?"'
 						'As your feelings start to come to the surface you continue "Yes I had sex but it doesn''t make me a bad person and what gives you the right to immediately treat me like I''m a whore!? I can do the maths, you were 15 when you had Anya and that''s younger than me!"'
-						'Your mum sighs and a tear starts rolling down her cheek as she slowly replies "I know. Maybe I was a bit harsh but I don''t want you repeating my mistakes. I want you to have the chance to go to university and make a better life for yourself."'
-						'You are getting upset seeing your mum cry and tell her that you''re careful and that you will try your best at school. You also reasure her that you are taking precautions.'
-						'Your mum responds that she accepts she may have been a bit harsh and apologises for that. She explains again that she wants the best for you and will help in any way she can but you need to meet her half way.'
-						'You reply "OK mum I''ll try and yes it would be great to have my mum back."'
-						'Your mum gets up and comes over to you and you both have a big hug "Thanks Sveta, that''s all I can ask and I''ll try to be more supportive too. Just please talk to me if you''re worried about anything."'
-
-						'After the meal and chat you both feel much relieved and emotionally drained but happier.
-		!!				[Reset mum relationship to 50]'
+						'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> sighs and a tear starts rolling down her cheek as she slowly replies "I know. Maybe I was a bit harsh but I don''t want you repeating my mistakes. I want you to have the chance to go to university and make a better life for yourself."'
+						'You are getting upset seeing your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> cry and tell her that you''re careful and that you will try your best at school. You also reasure her that you are taking precautions.'
+						'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> responds that she accepts she may have been a bit harsh and apologises for that. She explains again that she wants the best for you and will help in any way she can but you need to meet her half way.'
+						'You reply "OK <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> I''ll try and yes it would be great to have my <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> back."'
+						'Your <<$npc_nickname[''A29'']>> gets up and comes over to you and you both have a big hug "Thanks Sveta, that''s all I can ask and I''ll try to be more supportive too. Just please talk to me if you''re worried about anything."'
+
+						'After the meal and chat you both feel much relieved and emotionally drained but happier.'
+
 						npc_rel['A29'] = 50
 						minut += 4
 						gs 'stat'
-		!! call scheduler
+
 						act 'Go home': minut += 4 & pavhome_enter = 1 & gt 'din_npc', 'go_home'
 					end
 				end
 			end
 		end
 	else
-	!! Else [If Sveta has left home]
 		if npc_rel['A33'] > 50:
-			!! [If Sveta has a normal+ relationship with Anya]
 			'You hear your sister shout your name and look round.'
-			'"Hey Sveta, go girl well done!" She comes over and gives you a big hug. "This calls for a celebration. Lets go for a few beers... You can always burn it off later hehe."'
+			'"Hey <<$pcs_nickname>>, go girl well done!" She comes over and gives you a big hug. "This calls for a celebration. Lets go for a few beers... You can always burn it off later hehe."'
 			'"Thanks for coming sis, it means a lot."'
 			'"What else girl, I wasn''t going to miss the opportunity and a possible little celebration with my little sis was I?"'
 			'"OK cool, yeah I''m up for that let me go and shower and change first."'
@@ -906,7 +891,6 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family extension':
 				*clr & cla
 				menu_off = 1
 				'A few minutes later you reappear showered and changed and head off to the station cafe'
-	!!			Can''t think of a bar in Pav (which should be added) other than station cafe or seedy hotel which isn''t approproate.** 
 
 				'You both have a few beers over the next couple of hours and spend the time catching up. Both feeling light headed and more than a little tipsy you both leave the cafe and sharing a hug promise to meet up regularly and catch up. You know that you can see Anya at the community center aroung 5pm on Fridays.'
 				minut += 4
@@ -916,8 +900,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family extension':
 			end
 		else
 			if Boyfriend = 0:
-				![Else if Sveta has a low relationship with Anya but has a BF/GF with relationship 100+]
-				'Sveta hears <<name[Boyfriend]>> shout her name and jogs over to meet <<name[Boyfriend]>> and you both embrace with a cuddle and a kiss on the cheek as you''re in public.'
+				if $lover[0] ! '':
+					lover_number = 0
+				elseif $lover[1] ! '':
+					lover_number = 1
+				else
+					lover_number = 2
+				end
+				'Sveta hears <<$lover[lover_number]>> shout her name and jogs over to meet <<$lover[lover_number]>> and you both embrace with a cuddle and a kiss on the cheek as you''re in public.'
 				'"Hey love, well done."'
 				'"Thanks and thanks for coming, it means a lot."'
 				'"What do you think eh? Of course I''d come and support you. Now go and get freshened up and we''ll go out, my treat and you choose."'
@@ -925,7 +915,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family extension':
 				minut += 4
 				act 'Go take your shower':
 					*clr & cla
-					'Rejoinging <<name[Boyfriend]>> you both have a passionate embrace as most folks have gone. <<name[Boyfriend]>> then says "Well done again Sveta, sorry but I have something I have to do that won''t wait. See you soon.'
+					'Rejoining <<$lover[lover_number]>>, you both have a passionate embrace as most folks have gone. <<$lover[lover_number]>> then says "Well done again Sveta, sorry but I have something I have to do that won''t wait. See you soon.'
 					minut += 4
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Go home': minut += 4 & gt 'din_npc', 'go_home'
@@ -938,7 +928,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Family extension':
 			act 'Go home': minut += 4 & gt 'din_npc', 'go_home'
 		end
 	end
-	!! [Play through as per random BF/GF with the option for sex after as per dates. If BF/GF is a LI in the game same initial choices but use where you are on their path for saying goodbye].
 end
+
 --- gschool_grounds ---------------------------------
 

+ 15 - 15
locations/intro_sg_select.qsrc

@@ -96,8 +96,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	gs 'grades', 'createclass', 'school', 'his', 2, 2, 'yes', 'yes', 0, 0
 
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/shared/pre_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'Your name is <<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>, nicknamed <<$pcs_nickname>> by friends and family. Your mother''s name is <<$npc_firstname[''A29'']>> and your biological father left when you were a baby, your mother marrying your stepfather, <<$npc_firstname[''A28'']>>, shortly afterwards.' 
-	'<<$npc_firstname[''A33'']>> is your older sister, who is two years older than you but is still living at home while working at the local grocery store. She chose not to attend university and instead spends most of her free time drinking and going to parties with her friends, much to your mother''s dismay.' 
+	'Your name is <<$pcs_firstname>> <<$pcs_lastname>>, nicknamed <<$pcs_nickname>> by friends and family. Your mother''s name is <<$npc_firstname[''A29'']>> and your biological father left when you were a baby, your mother marrying your stepfather, <<$npc_firstname[''A28'']>>, shortly afterwards.'
+	'<<$npc_firstname[''A33'']>> is your older sister, who is two years older than you but is still living at home while working at the local grocery store. She chose not to attend university and instead spends most of her free time drinking and going to parties with her friends, much to your mother''s dismay.'
 	'You also have a younger half-brother, <<$npc_firstname[''A34'']>>, who is really into sports, especially football, and is shaping up to be a fine athlete. He is a year younger than you and his father is your stepfather.'
 	'Your <<$npc_usedname[''A30'']>> lives in the same building as you do, though you rarely see her except when you pass her in the stairwell. She is your mother''s older sister. <<$npc_usedname[''A54'']>>, as everyone calls him, is best friends with your stepfather. <<$npc_firstname[''A11'']>> <<$npc_lastname[''A11'']>>, your childhood friend, is the same age as you and grew up living in the same apartment building on the floor above yours. His father, <<$npc_firstname[''A112'']>>, is an old friend of your mother.'
 
@@ -448,7 +448,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'nerdqueen':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Queen of the nerds</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/nerd_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'While you love all things nerdy, what you love the most is hanging out with your fellow nerds and doing nerdy things together. This has made you fairly social for a nerd and more general in your areas of knowledge. As you got older and started to develop as a woman, it also made you much more aware of your sexuality than most nerds are comfortable with. As such, you cultivated that awareness more than most and are now more at ease with your body than most of the other nerds.' 
+	'While you love all things nerdy, what you love the most is hanging out with your fellow nerds and doing nerdy things together. This has made you fairly social for a nerd and more general in your areas of knowledge. As you got older and started to develop as a woman, it also made you much more aware of your sexuality than most nerds are comfortable with. As such, you cultivated that awareness more than most and are now more at ease with your body than most of the other nerds.'
 	'By nerd standards, you are confident, dynamic and attractive and this has led to you being the leader of your group of friends. You are more acceptable to other social groups as a result, especially the cool kids, who seem to respect your social skills and looks.'
 	act 'Select another option': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':
@@ -508,7 +508,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'goodstudent':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Good student</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/nerd_2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You just love school, and your grades are more than good enough to attend the university of your choosing after graduation - all you have to do is not let them slip. You have always tried to absorb every bit of knowledge possible and have done everything you can to excel in school. While this attitude has gained you a lot of respect from the other nerds, it didn''t earn you a lot of friends and you never found the time for sports.' 
+	'You just love school, and your grades are more than good enough to attend the university of your choosing after graduation - all you have to do is not let them slip. You have always tried to absorb every bit of knowledge possible and have done everything you can to excel in school. While this attitude has gained you a lot of respect from the other nerds, it didn''t earn you a lot of friends and you never found the time for sports.'
 	'You are often asked to be a tutor and sometimes find yourself forced to do others'' homework for them. You have excellent grades, and your mother is very proud of you. She has shown her appreciation for your hard work by rewarding you with money.'
 	act 'Select another option': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':
@@ -551,7 +551,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'computergeek':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Computer geek</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/nerd_3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You were always into computers, whether it be by playing video games, taking computers apart or learning programing and even hacking. You love everything about computers, but this passion left you little time to make friends - real-life friends, at least. You have managed to befriend many online players that you talk to while you play various video games, however, and you rarely spend any time outdoors, nor money on clothes or other girly stuff. You are far more interested in saving your money for a better computer in order to play even better games.' 
+	'You were always into computers, whether it be by playing video games, taking computers apart or learning programing and even hacking. You love everything about computers, but this passion left you little time to make friends - real-life friends, at least. You have managed to befriend many online players that you talk to while you play various video games, however, and you rarely spend any time outdoors, nor money on clothes or other girly stuff. You are far more interested in saving your money for a better computer in order to play even better games.'
 	'You''ve considered hosting a web series of video games or vlogs - you even took the time to learn how to video edit - but you aren''t sure if you want to put yourself out there like that.'
 	act 'Select another option': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':
@@ -593,7 +593,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'chessplayer':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Avid chess player</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/nerd_4.jpg"></center>'
-	'You were always into chess as a child, and have studied all the great chess masters. You can name them all, as well as their favorite strategies! You find nothing more interesting than matching your wits against someone else''s in a game of chess. It has left you with the ability to often see the consequences of your actions better than most as you are used to looking several moves ahead.' 
+	'You were always into chess as a child, and have studied all the great chess masters. You can name them all, as well as their favorite strategies! You find nothing more interesting than matching your wits against someone else''s in a game of chess. It has left you with the ability to often see the consequences of your actions better than most as you are used to looking several moves ahead.'
 	'All of this has left you with little time to make many friends, and you rarely spend any time outdoors.'
 	act 'Select another option': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':
@@ -721,7 +721,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'dancer':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Avid dancer</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/jock_2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You fell in love with dancing at an early age and never looked back. You spent a lot of your free time trying to improve your skills, and it paid off; you''re actually quite good now!' 
+	'You fell in love with dancing at an early age and never looked back. You spent a lot of your free time trying to improve your skills, and it paid off; you''re actually quite good now!'
 	'<<$npc_firstname[''A11'']>> helpfully pointed out that an added benefit of dance was a greater increase in your flexibility (that is, of course, typical of <<$npc_firstname[''A11'']>>). Your obsession with dancing, however, has had some repercussions on your school performance. You''re a sub-par student, and you haven''t made many friends other than your fellow jocks.'
 	*nl
 	'You are particularly close with <<$npc_firstname[''A23'']>>, who is just as passionate about dancing as you are. You trained a lot together as children and have a mutual respect for each other''s abilities.'
@@ -894,7 +894,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'socialite':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Sociable</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/popular_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You''re friends with all of the important kids at school, which is what really matters. You were very social growing up and enjoyed being around others, often becoming the center of attention.' 
+	'You''re friends with all of the important kids at school, which is what really matters. You were very social growing up and enjoyed being around others, often becoming the center of attention.'
 	'You''ve always had a knack for knowing the right thing to say at the right moment, which led to many other students wanting to be your friend. You can, with a little work, get along with nearly anyone if you put your mind to it.'
 	act 'Select another option': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':
@@ -938,7 +938,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'beautiful':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Beautiful</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/popular_2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You might not be the smartest, be the most social or have the toughest attitude - but what you do have is natural good looks. You blossomed earlier than most girls and the boys took note, especially <<$npc_firstname[''A11'']>>, who started acting differently around you. As you got older your looks only improved, and you are often considered one of the best looking girls wherever you go.' 
+	'You might not be the smartest, be the most social or have the toughest attitude - but what you do have is natural good looks. You blossomed earlier than most girls and the boys took note, especially <<$npc_firstname[''A11'']>>, who started acting differently around you. As you got older your looks only improved, and you are often considered one of the best looking girls wherever you go.'
 	'You are especially popular with the cool kids and jocks.'
 	act 'Select another option': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':
@@ -1048,7 +1048,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'gopnikstart':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Gopnik</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/gopnik_1.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are a gopnik. While you''re still low in the gopnik pecking order, you''ve already proven yourself to them and most of them accept you as an equal. You have problems at home and school due to your antisocial behavior. This is especially true with your mother and stepfather, who see you going down the wrong path.' 
+	'You are a gopnik. While you''re still low in the gopnik pecking order, you''ve already proven yourself to them and most of them accept you as an equal. You have problems at home and school due to your antisocial behavior. This is especially true with your mother and stepfather, who see you going down the wrong path.'
 	'The jocks have a not so friendly rivalry with you and the other gopniks. While you don''t get along, some of them have mutal respect for you.'
 	act 'Select another option': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':
@@ -1095,7 +1095,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'troublemaker':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Troublemaker</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/gopnik_2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are a troublemaker. Nothing makes you happier than causing problems, whether it be petty larceny, getting into fights or vandalism. You live for the thrill of breaking the rules. You get along fairly well with the gopniks and they accept you as a kindred spirit, loving your willingness to jump head first into any and all trouble you run across - and if you can''t find any, you will happily make your own, which keeps things lively.' 
+	'You are a troublemaker. Nothing makes you happier than causing problems, whether it be petty larceny, getting into fights or vandalism. You live for the thrill of breaking the rules. You get along fairly well with the gopniks and they accept you as a kindred spirit, loving your willingness to jump head first into any and all trouble you run across - and if you can''t find any, you will happily make your own, which keeps things lively.'
 	'You have problems at home and school due to your antisocial behavior. This is especially true with your mother and stepfather, who see you going down the wrong path. You are well known to both your teachers and the police.'
 	act 'Select another option': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':
@@ -1152,7 +1152,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'vitekgf':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Vitek''s girlfriend</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/gopnik_3.jpg"></center>'
 	'You are <<$npc_nickname[''A9'']>>''s girlfriend. You love the thrill and danger of hanging out with the gopniks, even if you lack the true attitude yourself. You met <<$npc_nickname[''A9'']>> after he and <<$npc_firstname[''A11'']>> became friends. There was something about his bad boy attitude that drew you in, and you soon found yourself falling for him.'
-	'As you developed, he started to take an interest in you as well and you soon started dating. You''re not technically a gopnik - you are considered more of a wannabe - but the rest of the gopniks seem to accept you anyways. You’’re not sure what would happen if you ever broke up with <<$npc_nickname[''A9'']>>, however, as being his girlfriend and hanging out with the other gopniks has cost you any real, close friends outside of their group.'
+	'As you developed, he started to take an interest in you as well and you soon started dating. You''re not technically a gopnik - you are considered more of a wannabe - but the rest of the gopniks seem to accept you anyways. You''re not sure what would happen if you ever broke up with <<$npc_nickname[''A9'']>>, however, as being his girlfriend and hanging out with the other gopniks has cost you any real, close friends outside of their group.'
 	act 'Select another option': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':
 		traits['nerd_points'] = -10
@@ -1230,7 +1230,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'alternative':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Alternative</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/gopnik_4.jpg"></center>'
 	'You march to your own tune. You do what you want when you want, and do it with a fuck-it-all attitude. The gopniks respect you and for the most part you get along with them. You''re not one of them, however, but rather a kindred spirit looking to walk your own path and raise a little hell along the way.'
-	'Unlike the gopniks, you have far less interest in fighting or causing problems, you''re just looking for a good time - you love to party more than anything else. The cool kids don''t completely look down their nose at you. Even if they don''t approve of your clothes, they respect your love of looking nice and having a good time.' 
+	'Unlike the gopniks, you have far less interest in fighting or causing problems, you''re just looking for a good time - you love to party more than anything else. The cool kids don''t completely look down their nose at you. Even if they don''t approve of your clothes, they respect your love of looking nice and having a good time.'
 	'However, you have problems at home and school due to your behavior. This is especially true with your mother and stepfather, who see you going down the wrong path.'
 	act 'Select another': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':
@@ -1382,7 +1382,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'uglyduckling':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Ugly duckling</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/outcast_2.jpg"></center>'
 	'Some girls blossom early and others have natural good looks - you got neither. In fact, you seem to have been cursed with an androgynous face and body, and have been mistaken for a boy more times than you would care to admit.'
-	'Your body seems to have grown out of sync, leaving you looking odd and, at best, unattractive for most of your life. Now in your teens, your body is starting to even out in growth, but you''re still very androgynous and still considered ugly.' 
+	'Your body seems to have grown out of sync, leaving you looking odd and, at best, unattractive for most of your life. Now in your teens, your body is starting to even out in growth, but you''re still very androgynous and still considered ugly.'
 	'Your lack of good looks has made you a social pariah. Nobody seems to like you or want to spend time with you unless they are making fun of you.'
 	act 'Select another option': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':
@@ -1424,7 +1424,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'goodgirl':
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Good girl</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/1_openings/2_sg/outcast_3.jpg"></center>'
-	'You are a good girl. The kind parents, teachers and adults love, but the other kids hate. You always reminded the teacher to give out homework and would snitch on anyone for doing anything. You also regularly attend church.' 
+	'You are a good girl. The kind parents, teachers and adults love, but the other kids hate. You always reminded the teacher to give out homework and would snitch on anyone for doing anything. You also regularly attend church.'
 	'You love the attention you get from adults, and while you can feel lonely at times, you''re pretty happy knowing you''re a good girl. The nerds seem to tolerate you the most, likely because they almost never misbehave and always do their homework anyways.'
 	act 'Select another option': gt 'intro_sg_select', 'charselect'
 	act 'Confirm this option':

+ 1 - 1
locations/metro_events.qsrc

@@ -922,7 +922,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'train':
 		act 'Leave': gt 'metro', 'start'
 	elseif metrorand = 18:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/shared/metro/sex/les1.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you find a seat, you notice a girl kneeling in her seat; facing the wrong way. Her skirt is pulled up, and her panties are down around her knees. Another girl is squatting behind her eating her pussy. This goes on for several minutes until the first girl finally has an orgasm, once she’’s finished, she gets dressed, and sits by her friend. For the rest of the ride, they keep making out, leaving the car at the next stop.'
+		'As you find a seat, you notice a girl kneeling in her seat; facing the wrong way. Her skirt is pulled up, and her panties are down around her knees. Another girl is squatting behind her eating her pussy. This goes on for several minutes until the first girl finally has an orgasm, once she''s finished, she gets dressed, and sits by her friend. For the rest of the ride, they keep making out, leaving the car at the next stop.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'

+ 39 - 31
locations/mey_tamara_events.qsrc

@@ -31,13 +31,21 @@ if $args[0] = 'first_meet':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><h4><font color="maroon">Tamara Mikhailovna</font></h4></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/meynolds/tamara.jpg"></center>'
-	'You ring on the bell to the Meynold residence. The door opens and you can see Katja and Vicky standing there with their mother. The girls'' mother is a very attractive woman just under "fifty" years old, busty and tastefully dressed even at home, and just like the twins, also a redhead.'
-	'Looking at the mothers'' huge bust, you begin wondering: "Too bad that the twins haven''t inherited their mothers'' biggest asset. It''s a shame having such small breasts instead of having huge breasts as their mother."'
-	'The mother eagerly welcomes you:'
-	'"Hello guys! Hi, Vanya."'
-	'"Vicky, would you like to introduce your girlfriend?"'
-	'You stand there a bit shyly, while Vicky introduces you two. Vicky''s mother smiles warmly and replies:'
-	'"I''m Tamara Mikhailovna. Come in, come in, don''t be shy! Vicky doesn''t invite her friends over very often, so I''m always wondering who her friends are. Well, I won''t disturb you anymore, I''ll be in the kitchen having some tea."'
+	if katjaQW['QWstage'] >= 2:
+		'You ring on the bell to the Meynold residence. The door opens and you can see Katja and Vicky standing there with their mother. The girls'' mother is a very attractive woman just under "fifty" years old, busty and tastefully dressed even at home, and just like the twins, also a redhead.'
+		'Looking at the mothers'' huge bust, you begin wondering: "Too bad that the twins haven''t inherited their mothers'' biggest asset. It''s a shame having such small breasts instead of having huge breasts as their mother."'
+		'The mother eagerly welcomes you:'
+		'"Hello guys! Hi, Vanya. Oh hello <<$pcs_nickname>>, nice to see you again."'
+		'Come in, come in, don''t be shy! I didn''t know you were friends with Vicky as well. such a wonderful surprise. Well, I won''t disturb you further. I''ll be in the kitchen having some tea."'
+	else
+		'You ring on the bell to the Meynold residence. The door opens and you can see Katja and Vicky standing there with their mother. The girls'' mother is a very attractive woman just under "fifty" years old, busty and tastefully dressed even at home, and just like the twins, also a redhead.'
+		'Looking at the mothers'' huge bust, you begin wondering: "Too bad that the twins haven''t inherited their mothers'' biggest asset. It''s a shame having such small breasts instead of having huge breasts as their mother."'
+		'The mother eagerly welcomes you:'
+		'"Hello guys! Hi, Vanya."'
+		'"Vicky, would you like to introduce your girlfriend?"'
+		'You stand there a bit shyly, while Vicky introduces you two. Vicky''s mother smiles warmly and replies:'
+		'"I''m Tamara Mikhailovna. Come in, come in, don''t be shy! Vicky doesn''t invite her friends over very often, so I''m always wondering who her friends are. Well, I won''t disturb you further, I''ll be in the kitchen having some tea."'
+	end
 
 	act 'In the kitchen (1:00)':
 		cls
@@ -54,8 +62,8 @@ if $args[0] = 'first_meet':
 		'"Sighing, she replies:"'
 		'"After the experience I had with my ex-husband, all the desire went away for getting into a new relationship. And there was no time either, I had to earn money and raise my daughters. There was never time to treat myself I was always sacrificing so my daughters could live a good life! Who would want me now, an old battered woman with a rusty roof?"'
 		'You start objecting:'
-		'"What are you saying Tamara, there is nothing called too old! You are a beautiful and a successful woman in your prime age. The men would be running head over heels for you!"'
-		'"Thank you for the kind words. You don''t need to be so formal, <<$pcs_nickname>>. We''re not at work. You can call me aunt Tamara."'
+		'"What are you saying Ms. Mikhailovna, there is nothing called too old! You are a beautiful and a successful woman in your prime age. The men would be running head over heels for you!"'
+		'"Thank you for the kind words. You don''t need to be so formal, <<$pcs_nickname>>. We''re not at work. You can call me Aunt Tamara."'
 		'"Vicky, your girlfriend is wonderful! You should invite <<$pcs_nickname>> here more often!"'
 		'Vicky interrupts your conversation:'
 		'"Mother, you talk too much! You always scare away my friends with your talk."'
@@ -91,32 +99,32 @@ if $args[0] = 'next_meet':
 				'There''s a large vintage nickel plated kettle on the stove boiling, it doesn''t really fit in with the rest of the kitchen setting, but you think as long as it does what it''s supposed to than being visually appealing. The kitchen has a lots of flowers in pots, there''s pots hanging along the walls and pots standing on the floor. The atmosphere is cozy, peaceful and relaxed.'
 			elseif zz_stage = 3:
 				'Aunt Tamara asks you about school, friends, family, and your interests.'
-				'Finally the tea is ready and you''re sitting at a table, happily sipping a lemon fragrant tea, and talk about yourself. You start by telling aunt Tamara about how your father abandoned your mother a long time ago and now you all live with your stepfather. You keep on telling how the stepfather is good to you and your sister. Next you tell her about your sister that was not able to attend the University and now works at the checkout in the supermarket instead...'
+				'Finally the tea is ready and you''re sitting at a table, happily sipping a lemon fragrant tea, and talk about yourself. You start by telling Aunt Tamara about how your father abandoned your mother a long time ago and now you all live with your stepfather. You keep on telling how the stepfather is good to you and your sister. Next you tell her about your sister that was not able to attend the University and now works at the checkout in the supermarket instead...'
 				'Tamara listens with interest, pouring tea and offering you a plate filled with croissants and toast, while on the other plate there''s thinly sliced cheese and ham.'
 			elseif zz_stage = 4:
 				'Your shyness is disappearing more and more and the two of you start excitedly chatting just like old friends, sharing stories.'
-				'You don''t even notice the age difference because aunt Tamara talks ceaselessly to you, telling you about herself. She is the daughter of a naval officer, and the family had to move around all over the country because the father served in the Baltic, Kamchatka and in the Northern Fleet.'
+				'You don''t even notice the age difference because Aunt Tamara talks ceaselessly to you, telling you about herself. She is the daughter of a naval officer, and the family had to move around all over the country because the father served in the Baltic, Kamchatka and in the Northern Fleet.'
 				'Mentioning the North her eyes tighten a bit in a dreamy haze, happily talking about the harsh beauty of those places.'
 				'Tamara tells you that she enjoyed living in the North the most, and she still feels like her soul was left there...'
 			elseif zz_stage = 5:
-				'You can see both Katja''s and Vicky''s small quirks in aunt Tamara. She has preserved the beauty of Katja, sophisticated but not as youthfully naïve as Katja. She is calmer and more sensible than Vicky, even being more sociable and open than the cautious Katja.'
+				'You can see both Katja''s and Vicky''s small quirks in Aunt Tamara. She has preserved the beauty of Katja, sophisticated but not as youthfully naïve as Katja. She is calmer and more sensible than Vicky, even being more sociable and open than the cautious Katja.'
 				'Tamara gets a bottle of wine from the wine cooler and one glass:'
-				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you won''t mind if aunt Tamara has a glass of wine while we have this wonderful conversation?"'
+				'"<<$pcs_nickname>>, you won''t mind if Aunt Tamara has a glass of wine while we have this wonderful conversation?"'
 				'"I have been living a reclusive life instead of just running wild. So that''s made me very distrusting. At work, I''m not dear Tamara, but the big bad "boss", or the strict "businesswoman", I know that the "friendly female staff" are bad mouthing me, they probably think I slept my way up to the top."'
 			elseif zz_stage = 6:
 				'You are laughing at the figurative comparison, Tamara is also smiling.'
 				'"I had a lot of friends here in Pavlovsk in my thirties, but as soon as I learned that I was pregnant the relationships started deteriorating. So I had a hard time talking to someone else but my ex-husband about becoming a mother."'
-				'"Nine months later I gave birth to them. Katja came out first. It is hard for me to bear. " says aunt Tamara tearing up a little. "Katja had us scared for a minute or so because she didn''t make any sounds immediately, it took two slaps from the doctor for her to start screaming."'
+				'"Nine months later I gave birth to them. Katja came out first. It is hard for me to bear. " says Aunt Tamara tearing up a little. "Katja had us scared for a minute or so because she didn''t make any sounds immediately, it took two slaps from the doctor for her to start screaming."'
 				'"Vicky flew out soon after like a cork from a bottle! You know, just like you see on comedy shows on tv."'
 			elseif zz_stage = 7:
 				'Tamara glances at the wall clock.'
 				'"Oh, look at the clock, time really flies by when you''re enjoying yourself! "'
 				'" Look how dark it is outside! "'
 				'"You know what, you can stay the night. I don''t want you to running around this late! "'
-				'You start making excuses, but aunt Tamara''s not listening:'
+				'You start making excuses, but Aunt Tamara''s not listening:'
 				'" You never know who you might meet this late. And my little carrots will be glad. Let''s call your parents and say you''ll be staying here tonight! "'
 				'You insist saying you do not want to impose...'
-				'"Impose? Don''t be silly. In this large house?!" says aunt Tamara.'
+				'"Impose? Don''t be silly. In this large house?!" says Aunt Tamara.'
 				'- No one will be bothered. We have a guest bedroom, it''s always empty. And the rest of us have our own private room here." You longingly remember about your room, which you shared with your sister all your life... "So let''s call your parents and let them know you''re staying, so they don''t worry."'
 			end
 
@@ -128,8 +136,8 @@ if $args[0] = 'next_meet':
 			hour = 22
 			minut = rand(0,59)
 			gs 'stat'
-			'"I''m sorry, aunt Tamara, I must go home or else I''ll get some stern scolding..."'
-			'"Well, I can''t say I''m not disappointed <<$pcs_nickname>>. Don''t stop anywhere on your way home." said a disappointed aunt Tamara.'
+			'"I''m sorry, Aunt Tamara, I must go home or else I''ll get some stern scolding..."'
+			'"Well, I can''t say I''m not disappointed <<$pcs_nickname>>. Don''t stop anywhere on your way home." said a disappointed Aunt Tamara.'
 			'"Remember this, if you change your mind and want to hang out, come visit us anytime again! You’’re always welcome here!'
 
 			killvar 'zz_stage'
@@ -144,7 +152,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'learning0':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/learning10.jpg"></center>'
 	'Nervously, you rang the doorbell to the Meynold residence. Short there after you hear the lock click open and the twins mother stands in front of you.'
-	'"Hello Tamara! I''ve come here to study." You still don''t dare to call her aunt Tamara.'
+	'"Hello Tamara! I''ve come here to study." You still don''t dare to call her Aunt Tamara.'
 	'"So you''ve finally decided to go through it. Come in." says Tamara.'
 	'The two of you make your way to the kitchen, Tamara puts on the familiar nickel plated kettle, and she begins taking out the jars of jam of the closet.'
 	'While doing her kitchen chores, Tamara is silent and not looking at you. You have a troubling feeling in the stomach, but you do not dare to start a conversation, you''re still too shy to talk with her.'
@@ -287,7 +295,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'learning1':
 					newdress_loop = 0
 					!check if school uniform exist
 					:looptamaraschool
-					newdress_id = rand(1, 80)
+					newdress_id = rand(1, 60)
 					newdress_loop += 1
 					if newdress_loop > 1000:
 						msg 'ERROR: formal cloth loop > 1000'
@@ -304,11 +312,11 @@ if $args[0] = 'learning1':
 						end
 					end
 
-					if newdress_id = 0 and newdress_loop <= 80:jump 'looptamaraschool'
+					if newdress_id = 0 and newdress_loop <= 60:jump 'looptamaraschool'
 
 					if newdress_id > 0:
 						'"I picked a real sexy outfit, it''s so sexy that the boys will spontaneously be cumming in their pants." you said smiling.'
-						'"Good! Now remember it’’s only to be used in school. Now lets start training you how to walk elegantly. You can start by getting out of my car and take a walk home." Tamara hands you two thousand rubles. "It''s important that you take care of your health so take the money and head over to the clinic and get an health exam. I''ll be waiting for you by the restaurant at 9 o''clock, don''t be late."'
+						'"Good! Now remember it’’s only to be used in school. Now lets start training you how to walk elegantly. You can start by getting out of my car and take a walk around the city for a couple hours" Tamara hands you two thousand rubles. "It''s important that you take care of your health so take the money and head over to the clinic and get a health exam, within the next couple weeks. I''ll be waiting for you by the Babel restaurant at 21:00, don''t be late."'
 
 						killvar 'newdress_id'
 						killvar 'newdress_count'
@@ -355,7 +363,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'learning1':
 						act 'Return to the Meynolds residence': mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] = 40 & minut += 30 & gt 'mey_home', 'start'
 						act 'Stay in the city':
 							cla
-							'"No, dear. I need you to stay near here if you want I can drive you home to me or if you want to walk around the city. Either way you will need to kill a couple of hours. I''m feeling hungry so I''ll go and get something to eat." She says. "Whatever you decide, I expect you to be by the restaurant by 9 o''clock, I''ll be waiting for you there."<br>'
+							'"No, dear. I need you to stay near here if you want I can drive you home to me or if you want to walk around the city. Either way you will need to kill a couple of hours. I''m feeling hungry so I''ll go and get something to eat." She says. "Whatever you decide, I expect you to be by the restaurant by 21:00, I''ll be waiting for you there."<br>'
 
 							act 'I insist staying here in the city': mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] = 36 & gt 'city_center'
 							act 'Return to the Meynolds residence': mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] = 40 & minut += 30 & gt 'mey_home', 'start'
@@ -404,7 +412,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'rebuke':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/rebuke4.jpg"></center>'
 					'Finally Tamara ends the long drawn out silence by saying:'
-					'"Listen to me very carefully, girl. What we set out to do is a very serious and difficult task. Also, very expensive might I add. I invested my hard earned money in you. A lot of money, not to mention the effort and time and expect you to be able to justify these efforts. I don''t ask for much. But I demand complete obedience and for you to follow my instructions to the letter if you want to succeed in life. I''m hoping you don’’t think I do this all out of pure unselfishness? You''re not Aladdin and I''m not a genie here to fulfill any of your whishes. I have a lot to teach you, which will help you in many ways, giving you much more than you can accomplish alone."'
+					'"Listen to me very carefully, girl. What we set out to do is a very serious and difficult task. Also, very expensive might I add. I invested my hard earned money in you. A lot of money, not to mention the effort and time and expect you to be able to justify these efforts. I don''t ask for much. But I demand complete obedience and for you to follow my instructions to the letter if you want to succeed in life. I''m hoping you don''t think I do this all out of pure unselfishness? You''re not Aladdin and I''m not a genie here to fulfill any of your whishes. I have a lot to teach you, which will help you in many ways, giving you much more than you can accomplish alone."'
 					'"But don''t be fooled, don''t take my kindness for weakness. Otherwise we will stop this right away. I''ll be frank with you, maybe you''re pleased having a bland life, marrying someone ugly, working a dead end job at the local sewing factory, repeating the same thing day after day to the point of exhaustion. Do you want to end up like that?"'
 					'"No, I don''t!" You furiously shake your head, almost ripping it off. "I understand! Please, believe me! It will never happen again!"'
 					'"I really hope this is the only time we need to have this conversation. Because there won''t be a second time, my dear." Says Tamara, clicking her nails on the armrest.'
@@ -414,7 +422,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'rebuke':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/rebuke5.jpg"></center>'
 						'You drink tea in the kitchen and taste the most delicious cookies you''ve ever tasted. Aunt Tamara laughs and tells all sorts of stories and the anxiety that was in your belly disappears.'
-						'She''s not the Snow Queen Tamara Mikhailovna anymore, that frightened you as just as she takes pleasure doing the same thing to her subordinates at the Bank. Instead she''s the fun-loving and kind aunt Tamara again.'
+						'She''s not the Snow Queen Tamara Mikhailovna anymore, that frightened you as just as she takes pleasure doing the same thing to her subordinates at the Bank. Instead she''s the fun-loving and kind Aunt Tamara again.'
 						'All of a sudden Tamara puts down her cup...'
 
 						act 'Listen':
@@ -463,7 +471,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'party0':
 		cla
 		! close event until next month
 		mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] = 50
-		'"I''m sorry aunt Tamara, I don''t feel well today, I won''t be able to accompany you..."'
+		'"I''m sorry Aunt Tamara, I don''t feel well today, I won''t be able to accompany you..."'
 		'"No worries, maybe next time."'
 
 		act 'Move away': gt 'mey_home', 'start'
@@ -472,7 +480,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'party0':
 		cla
 		! gotta get ready for work
 		mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] = 41
-		'"I would love to accompany you to the party, aunt Tamara! I''ll go and get ready right away."'
+		'"I would love to accompany you to the party, Aunt Tamara! I''ll go and get ready right away."'
 		'Tamara looks mischievously at you, but strictly instructs you to...'
 		'"Wear your formal dress and put on normal makeup," she smiles. "Don''t overdo the makeup. You should look normal. Not too little, but don''t put on a ton of makeup either. You''re not a soldier, putting on war paint before battle! Be ready by 18 o''clock. I can''t be bothered waiting for you. I''ll leave without you if you''re not on time and there might be some consequences..."'
 
@@ -515,7 +523,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'party1':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/expensiverest/restoran.jpg"></center>'
 	'Tamara stops the car in front of the restaurant.'
 	'"Listen closely now, <<$pcs_nickname>>. It''s a very formal party with some big shots from the city so try not to embarrass me. You should act like Cinderella at the ball, be charming and entrance them with your beauty. Don''t get drunk and begin dancing naked on the table or accompany different men to the toilet, you''re not a prostitute. I really hope you follow my advice. Unlike the time I let Vicky tag along...'
-	'You wisely decide not to ask aunt Tamara what happened that time she brought Vicky with her, you''ll ask her at the party instead.'
+	'You wisely decide not to ask Aunt Tamara what happened that time she brought Vicky with her, you''ll ask her at the party instead.'
 
 	act 'Go inside the restaurant':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -550,7 +558,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'party1':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/party10.jpg"></center>'
 						'Some men look in your direction. But most of them are occupied with some boring business conversation. You spend about twenty minutes aimlessly wandering around, not being able to find anyone interesting.'
-						'"This won''t do, I''m too nervous... To hell with the advice aunt Tamara gave me!" you think to yourself. The first glass is empty, and you grab another glass from a waiters tray. You taste the expensive champagne, it has a delicate aroma and a wonderful aftertaste, making it easy to drink.'
+						'"This won''t do, I''m too nervous... To hell with the advice Aunt Tamara gave me!" you think to yourself. The first glass is empty, and you grab another glass from a waiters tray. You taste the expensive champagne, it has a delicate aroma and a wonderful aftertaste, making it easy to drink.'
 
 						act 'Eavesdrop on the men': gt 'mey_tamara_events', 'party2'
 					end
@@ -820,7 +828,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'party6':
 			'You keep up the small talk. "Bronson" gradually looks at you like he''s trying to read you. With some help from Tamara you don''t get embarrassed by this prying eyes. The way the two of them behave it''s quite obvious that they’re old friends. Though, you believe that they''re more than friends.'
 			'"<<$pcs_firstname>>, will you make an old man happy and dine with him?" He asks you confidently. The way he conducts himself in a conversation, despite the sloppy appearance, makes him somehow, likable and not frightening.'
 			'"I would be honoured."'
-			'"Well, then it''s settled, <<$pcs_firstname>>!" "Bronson" smiles and moves away from you and aunt Tamara. You suddenly realize that he didn''t ask you for your number. Now that you think about it, he never properly introduced himself, even though you talked for a good hour!'
+			'"Well, then it''s settled, <<$pcs_firstname>>!" "Bronson" smiles and moves away from you and Aunt Tamara. You suddenly realize that he didn''t ask you for your number. Now that you think about it, he never properly introduced himself, even though you talked for a good hour!'
 
 			act 'Mingle': gt 'mey_tamara_events', 'party2'
 		end
@@ -863,7 +871,7 @@ if $args[0] = 'reputation':
 		'"You won''t be needing them yet. You don''t have to be embarrassed, no one will see you here. Let''s go to my room, I have a lotion in my room that''ll help..." She takes you by the hand and leads you into her room.'
 		'There, she grabs a bottle with some kind of lotion in it.'
 		'"Now, lie down on the bed, and relax your cute little butt!" You lie down on Tamara''s bed. Her bed is quite modest and hard compared to the enormous, luxurious bed in Vicky''s room!'
-		'Tamara carefully starts rubbing the pleasant-smelling ointment on your red, marked ass. And as she said, the burning sensation immediately begins to subside under the caress caressing hands of aunt Tamara. You have a hard time believing these are the same hands that just severely flogged you. "How can she snap so easily?" You once again start thinking about it...'
+		'Tamara carefully starts rubbing the pleasant-smelling ointment on your red, marked ass. And as she said, the burning sensation immediately begins to subside under the tender caressing hands of Aunt Tamara. You have a hard time believing these are the same hands that just severely flogged you. "How can she snap so easily?" You once again start thinking about it...'
 		'Her gentle hands continue caressing your back and feet, no longer focusing only on your butt, which already feels much better. You start enjoying yourself a bit too much. Your bare pussy starts getting wet! Without thinking about it you start moaning under the skillful caresses.'
 	elseif zz_stage = 5:
 		'Suddenly the caresses stop abruptly. You turn your head wondering why it stopped. Sitting on the bed next to you, you notice a completely nude Tamara, awkwardly cross legged, looking away from you...'

+ 4 - 4
locations/mey_vika_events.qsrc

@@ -143,7 +143,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'play_game_wish0':
 	$location_type = 'event'
 	if mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] < 27 and mey_vika['qw_day'] ! daystart: mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] += 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/meynolds/sex/vika_game0.jpg"></center>'
-	'"Vanya, you’’re the athlete here, come on show off your toned body! As if you were imitating a famous ancient discus thrower!"'
+	'"Vanya, you''re the athlete here, come on show off your toned body! As if you were imitating a famous ancient discus thrower!"'
 	'Vanya grabs a plate from the table and positions it in his hands. Standing wide legged he gets in the pose of a discus thrower.'
 	'"No no no!" You and Vicky shout in unison. "That won''t do! We want to see you just exactly like the athletes completed in ancient Greece. Without any clothes! We don''t want to fantasize about your body! Take off your clothes so we can see it!"'
 	'"Where''s the music and the pole!" Laughs Vanya, moving his hips sensually, mocking male strippers.'
@@ -590,7 +590,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'park_meet':
 			end
 		elseif mey_vika['mey_vika_qw'] >= 5:
 			if npc_rel['A15'] < 60:
-				'You approach the couple and greet them, but they don’’t pay any attention to you.'
+				'You approach the couple and greet them, but they don''t pay any attention to you.'
 			else
 				'You approach the couple and greet them, right away Vicky starts gossiping, as always, Vanya mostly jokes about the things you two are talking about. You chat for a few minutes...'
 			end
@@ -642,7 +642,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cafe_qw':
 			pcs_horny = 100
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/sex/cafe_qw2.jpg"></center>'
-			'So that''s why she was arching! You’’re so mesmerized, you don''t even notice the pussy juice flowing down your own legs. You knees tremble, but the excitement is still growing. You start to panic a bit and just a few more minutes later you know you must get away or else they''ll see you orgasm.'
+			'So that''s why she was arching! You''re so mesmerized, you don''t even notice the pussy juice flowing down your own legs. You knees tremble, but the excitement is still growing. You start to panic a bit and just a few more minutes later you know you must get away or else they''ll see you orgasm.'
 
 			act 'Say goodbye':
 				*clr & cla
@@ -1240,7 +1240,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gym0':
 						cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/vicky/event/gym5.jpg"></center>'
 						'"I''m not really dressed correctly, don''t you agree?" Surprised, Vicky starts scratching her head. "I''ll fix that right away."'
-						'"I don’’t like to wear clothes!" She says while removing her t-shirt.'
+						'"I don''t like to wear clothes!" She says while removing her t-shirt.'
 
 						act 'Further':
 							*clr