[text edit] clean up sexshop

locations/sexshop.qsrc

@@ -21,10 +21,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
 	'The main counter displays various sex toys:'
 	'Lubricant - 145 <b>₽</b>'
-	'Dildo starting at - 800 <b>₽</b>'
+	'Dildo - starting at 800 <b>₽</b>'
 	'Vibrator - 800 <b>₽</b>'
-	'Strapon harness starting at 1,200 <b>₽</b>'
-	'Butt plug 1,200 <b>₽</b>'
+	'Strap-on harness - starting at 1,200 <b>₽</b>'
+	'Butt plug - 1,200 <b>₽</b>'
 	*nl
 	'In the basement are the private booths for viewing porn movies (50 <b>₽</b> 15 minutes).'
 
@@ -32,13 +32,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 
 	if analplug = 1 and dildo = 1 and hotcat >= 5 and Peter = 0:
 		if rand(0,1) = 1:
-			'You see an interesting looking middle-aged man, apparently he is the owner of this store.'
+			'You see an interesting looking middle-aged man. Apparently, he is the owner of this store.'
 
 			act 'Introduce yourself to the owner of the store' :
 				*clr & cla
 				menu_off = 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/peter/peter.jpg"></center>'
-				'I''m Peter, I''ve been watching you for a long time. I often see you here. I find you rather interesting...'
+				'"I''m Peter, I''ve been watching you for a long time. I often see you here. I find you rather interesting..."'
 
 				act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_industrial', 'redlight'
 				act 'Go with Peter': gt 'Peterroom', 'start'
@@ -69,7 +69,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					*clr & cla
 					minut = minut + 60
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/pierre_2.jpg"></center>'
-					'Peter smiles, and says "New actresses are always welcome. However, in this business, many women do not take well to the work. You will have to do an audition, and if you do well, you can have the job."'
+					'Peter smiles and says, "New actresses are always welcome. However in this business, many women do not take well to the work. You will have to do an audition, and if you do well, you can have the job."'
 					'"I''ll tell you about the work here and now, but under one condition - you have to undress".'
 
 					act 'Undress':
@@ -87,7 +87,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/studio/film_0.jpg"></center>'
 								'"And then comes the filming itself, which is the most exciting and fun part."'
-								'"And after the filming, we create a video to sell it for profit!"'
+								'"And after the filming, we create a video to sell for profit!"'
 
 								act '...':
 									*clr & cla
@@ -215,7 +215,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				money -= 800
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 			end
@@ -229,7 +229,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				karta -= 800
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 			end
@@ -248,7 +248,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				money -= 850
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 15cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 15cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -262,7 +262,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				karta -= 850
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 15cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 15cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -281,7 +281,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				money -= 900
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 20cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 20cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -295,7 +295,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				karta -= 900
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 20cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 20cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -378,7 +378,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				money -= 950
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 25cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 25cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -392,7 +392,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				karta -= 950
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 25cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 25cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -411,7 +411,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				money -= 1000
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 30cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 30cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -425,7 +425,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				karta -= 1000
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 30cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 30cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -444,7 +444,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				money -= 1100
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 35cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 35cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -458,7 +458,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				karta -= 1100
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 35cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 35cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -477,7 +477,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				money -= 1200
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 40cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 40cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -491,7 +491,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				karta -= 1200
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a 40cm long dildo and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a 40cm long dildo and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop','start'
 			end
@@ -510,7 +510,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				money -= 800
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a vibrator and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a vibrator and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 			end
@@ -524,7 +524,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				karta -= 800
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a vibrator and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a vibrator and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 			end
@@ -545,7 +545,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					money -= 1200
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-					'You bought a strap-on and paid the cashier.'
+					'You buy a strap-on and pay the cashier.'
 
 					act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 				end
@@ -561,7 +561,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					karta -= 1200
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-					'You bought a strap-on and paid the cashier.'
+					'You buy a strap-on and pay the cashier.'
 
 					act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 				end
@@ -576,7 +576,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					money -= 500
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-					'You bought a strap-on and paid the cashier. You have to attach one of your dildos to it.'
+					'You buy a strap-on and pay the cashier. You have to attach one of your dildos to it.'
 
 					act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 				end
@@ -590,7 +590,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 					karta -= 500
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-					'You bought a strap-on and paid the cashier. You have to attach one of your dildos to it.'
+					'You buy a strap-on and pay the cashier. You have to attach one of your dildos to it.'
 
 					act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 				end
@@ -610,7 +610,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				money -= 800
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a butt plug and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a butt plug and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 			end
@@ -624,7 +624,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'start':
 				karta -= 800
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sexshop.jpg"></center>'
-				'You bought a butt plug and paid the cashier.'
+				'You buy a butt plug and pay the cashier.'
 
 				act 'Move away from the counter':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 			end
@@ -834,7 +834,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pip':
 
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Booth movies</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/gloryhole/ghbooths.jpg"></center>'
-	'Small cabinet with a TV on the wall, terminal and two holes in the walls at waist level.'
+	'A small cabinet with a TV on the wall, terminal and two holes in the walls at waist level.'
 	if mistressqwest > 0 and mistressqwest <= 20:
 		GHchance = rand(6,10)
 		ghnowcheck = ghnow		
@@ -852,10 +852,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pip':
 			cla
 			money -= 50
 			minut += 15
-			'Once you have paid the money, the TV on the wall begins showing porn movies.'
-			'You sit in a chair and watch the porn. You began to get a little excited.'
+			'Once you pay the money, the TV on the wall begins showing porn movies.'
+			'You sit in a chair and watch the porn. You begin to get a little excited.'
 
-			act 'The movie ended':gt 'sexshop', 'pip'
+			act 'The movie ends':gt 'sexshop', 'pip'
 
 			act 'Masturbate':
 				cla
@@ -864,7 +864,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pip':
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'	
 
-				act 'The movie ended':gt 'sexshop', 'pip'
+				act 'The movie ends':gt 'sexshop', 'pip'
 			end
 
 			
@@ -883,8 +883,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pip':
 					fingerRand = rand(1, 5)
 					! WD: Rename missing Image ~  'ghFinger.jpg' to 'ghFinger5.jpg'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/gloryhole/ghfinger<<fingerRand>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'You poke your finger in the hole, letting them know that you are ready to serve the stranger.'
-					'The stranger slips ' + iif(ghnow < 5, '300', '150') +	'<b>₽</b> into the hole, and then his erect cock pokes out of the hole.'
+					'You poke your finger in the hole, letting whoever''s on the other side know that you are ready to serve him.'
+					'The stranger slips ' + iif(ghnow < 5, '300', '150') +	'<b>₽</b> into the hole, and then his erect cock pokes out of it.'
 
 					act 'Suck dick':
 						cla
@@ -895,7 +895,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pip':
 						ghprand = rand(1, 38)
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/shared/sex/gloryhole/gloryhole<<ghprand>>.jpg"></center>'
 						'You take the cock in your mouth and start to suck it, blowing him enthusiastically.'
-						'The stranger''s cock begins to throb, and finally, the stranger cums in your mouth - filling it with a huge amount of thick sperm. You swallow it, and once you''ve licked all the sperm from a his cock, it disappears back into the hole and you hear the man leaves his booth.'
+						'The stranger''s cock begins to throb, and finally, the stranger cums in your mouth, filling it with a huge amount of thick sperm. You swallow it, and once you''ve licked all the sperm from his cock, it disappears back into the hole, and you hear the man leave his booth.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'	
@@ -926,8 +926,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 			*clr & cla
 			kendrano = 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend.jpg"></center>'
-			'You smile to her. "Sorry, no. I still don''t belong to anyone."'
-			'She sighs softly. "Such a waste. Oh well, there are plenty of pretty little white Russian bitches that love being owned by an Ebony Mistress. Perhaps we will meet again and you will change your mind. I go to the University on the island, you should stop by sometime." She gives you directions to which dorm building is hers, and which floor and room number is her dorm room. With that you both say your goodbyes and she returns to shopping. As do you.'
+			'You smile at her. "Sorry, no. I still don''t belong to anyone."'
+			'She sighs softly. "Such a waste. Oh well, there are plenty of pretty little white Russian bitches that love being owned by an Ebony Mistress. Perhaps we will meet again and you will change your mind. I go to the University on the island, you should stop by sometime." She gives you directions to which dorm building is hers, and which floor and room number is her dorm room. With that, you both say your goodbyes, and she returns to shopping. As do you.'
 			act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_industrial', 'redlight'
 			act 'Go back to shopping':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 		end
@@ -941,8 +941,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 				kendraslave += 1
 				kendratoy = rand(1,2)
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend1.jpg"></center>'
-				'You follow her down into the basement. She sits down the edge of a table and pulls her fetish clothing aside, exposing her pussy. "Now, strip for me, bitch." You do as you are told and begin to slowly strip out of your clothes, until you are fully naked. "Good little slave. Now get over her and worship my pussy." You kneel before her pussy and lick her eagerly. As continue to lick her pussy and suck on her clit, while Kendra squeals and moans in pleasure.'
-				'"Look at me" commands Kendra. When you look up at her, while still eating her out, she pulls her new toy out of her bag. "we''re going to use this, for my pleasure." She informs you.'
+				'You follow her down into the basement. She sits down on the edge of a table and pulls her fetish clothing aside, exposing her pussy. "Now, strip for me, bitch." You do as you are told and begin to slowly strip out of your clothes until you are fully naked. "Good little slave. Now get over here and worship my pussy." You kneel before her pussy and lick her eagerly. You continue to lick her pussy and suck on her clit, as Kendra squeals and moans in pleasure.'
+				'"Look at me," commands Kendra. When you look up at her while still eating her out, she pulls her new toy out of her bag. "We''re going to use this for my pleasure," she informs you.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 				gs 'stat'
 				if kendratoy = 1:
@@ -972,8 +972,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 			*clr & cla
 			kendratoy = rand(1,2)
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend1.jpg"></center>'
-			'You follow her down into the basement. She sits down the edge of a table and pulls her fetish clothing aside, exposing her pussy. "Now strip for me, bitch." You do as you are told and begin to slowly strip out of your clothes, until you are fully naked. "Good little slave, now get over her and worship my pussy." You kneel before her pussy and lick her eagerly. You continue to lick her pussy and suck on her clit, as Kendra squeals and moans in pleasure.'
-			'"Look at me" commands Kendra. When you look up at her, while still eating her out, she pulls her new toy out of her bag. "we''re going to use this, for my pleasure" she informs you.'
+			'You follow her down into the basement. She sits down on the edge of a table and pulls her fetish clothing aside, exposing her pussy. "Now strip for me, bitch." You do as you are told and begin to slowly strip out of your clothes until you are fully naked. "Good little slave, now get over her and worship my pussy." You kneel before her pussy and lick her eagerly. You continue to lick her pussy and suck on her clit, as Kendra squeals and moans in pleasure.'
+			'"Look at me," commands Kendra. When you look up at her while still eating her out, she pulls her new toy out of her bag. "We''re going to use this for my pleasure," she informs you.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			if kendratoy = 1:
@@ -987,7 +987,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 		'As you browse the store, you see a very attractive young black woman about your age trying on latex clothes. She notices you at about the same time.'
 		'After a couple of minutes, she walks over and boldly caresses your hair. "You''re a pretty little thing, what''s your name?" she asks.'
 		'You decide to tell her. "My name is <<$pcs_firstname>>, but most people call me <<$pcs_nickname>>. What''s your name?"'
-		'She smiles. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what a pretty name. My name is Kendra, but you can call me Mistress Kendra." She says in confidence.'
+		'She smiles. "<<$pcs_nickname>>, what a pretty name. My name is Kendra, but you can call me Mistress Kendra," she says with confidence.'
 		'"Oh" You reply, so she is one of those.'
 		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_industrial', 'redlight'
 		act 'Go back to shopping':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
@@ -995,13 +995,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 			*clr & cla
 			meet_kendra = 1
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend01.jpg"></center>'
-			'You ask her about her clothes, and soon the two of you are talking. You tell her that you live in Pavlovsk, and are in your final year of school. She tells you she is attending the University to get a degree. You find out she is from the Republic of Congo, on a student visa. You talk about a wide range of things for a while. Eventually she says "You are very pretty. I love making pretty little Russian bitches into my slaves. Call me Mistress Kendra, <<$pcs_nickname>>, and become mine." Should you call her mistress? You have no doubt where that will lead.'
+			!! the dialogue here should be different if the player is not attending the school in Pavlovsk
+			'You ask her about her clothes, and soon the two of you are talking. You tell her that you live in Pavlovsk and are in your final year of school. She tells you she is attending the University to get a degree. You find out she is from the Republic of Congo, on a student visa. You talk about a wide range of things for a while. Eventually, she says, "You are very pretty. I love making pretty little Russian bitches into my slaves. Call me Mistress Kendra, <<$pcs_nickname>>, and become mine." Should you call her mistress? You have no doubt where that will lead.'
 			act 'Call her Kendra':
 				*clr & cla
 				kendrano = 1
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend.jpg"></center>'
-				'You smile to her. "Sorry, but I don''t belong to anyone."'
-				'She sighs softly. "Such a waste. Oh well, there are plenty of pretty little white Russian bitches that love being owned by an Ebony Mistress. Perhaps we will meet again and you will change your mind. I go to the University on the island, you should stop by sometime." She gives you directions to which dorm building is hers, and which floor and room number is her dorm room. With that you both say your goodbyes and she returns to shopping. As do you.'
+				'You smile at her. "Sorry, but I don''t belong to anyone."'
+				'She sighs softly. "Such a waste. Oh well, there are plenty of pretty little white Russian bitches that love being owned by an Ebony Mistress. Perhaps we will meet again and you will change your mind. I go to the University on the island, you should stop by sometime." She gives you directions to which dorm building is hers, and which floor and room number is her dorm room. With that, you both say your goodbyes, and she returns to shopping. As do you.'
 				act 'Go back to shopping':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 			end
 			act 'Call her Mistress Kendra':
@@ -1014,8 +1015,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 					kendraslave += 1
 					kendratoy = rand(1,2)
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend1.jpg"></center>'
-					'You follow her down into the basement. She sits down the edge of a table and pulls her fetish clothing aside, exposing her pussy. "Now strip for me, bitch." You do as you are told and begin to slowly strip out of your clothes, until you are fully naked. "Good little slave, now get over her and worship my pussy." You kneel before her pussy and lick her eagerly. You continue to lick her pussy and suck on her clit, as Kendra squeals and moans in pleasure.'
-					'"Look at me" commands Kendra. When you look up at her, while still eating her out, she pulls her new toy out of her bag. "we''re going to use this, for my pleasure" she informs you.'
+					'You follow her down into the basement. She sits down on the edge of a table and pulls her fetish clothing aside, exposing her pussy. "Now strip for me, bitch." You do as you are told and begin to slowly strip out of your clothes until you are fully naked. "Good little slave, now get over her and worship my pussy." You kneel before her pussy and lick her eagerly. You continue to lick her pussy and suck on her clit, as Kendra squeals and moans in pleasure.'
+					'"Look at me," commands Kendra. When you look up at her while still eating her out, she pulls her new toy out of her bag. "We''re going to use this for my pleasure," she informs you.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 					gs 'stat'
 					if kendratoy = 1:
@@ -1029,7 +1030,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra':
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend0.jpg"></center>'
 		'As you browse the store, you see a very attractive young black woman about your age trying on latex clothes. She notices you at about the same time.'
-		'She gives you a quick once over, and then stops paying attention to you. After a few moments she moves to another section of the store.'
+		'She gives you a quick once over, and then stops paying attention to you. After a few moments, she moves to another section of the store.'
 		act 'Leave': minut += 5 & gt 'city_industrial', 'redlight'
 		act 'Go back to shopping':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 	end
@@ -1042,7 +1043,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra1':
 	minut += 10
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You take the dildo from her, and insert it into Kendra''s pussy. While you use one hand to fuck her with the dildo, your other hand caresses her clit, trying to bring her to orgasm. Kendra moans and writhes, sitting on the table, enjoying your efforts.'
+	'You take the dildo from Kendra and insert it into her pussy. While you use one hand to fuck her with the dildo, your other hand caresses her clit, trying to bring her to orgasm. Kendra moans and writhes, sitting on the table, enjoying your efforts.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':
@@ -1054,15 +1055,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra1':
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend4.jpg"></center>'
-			'Then Kendra starts spasming, as her whole body orgasms. Her pussy begins to squirt as she orgasms, covering your hand, her thighs and even some of it ends up on your breasts and stomach before her orgasm subsides. Kendra looks at you: "You are my beautiful little white slave bitch, totaly committed to serving me. Now lick me clean" she orders.'
+			'Then Kendra starts spasming, as her whole body orgasms. Her pussy begins to squirt as she orgasms, covering your hand and her thighs. Some of it even ends up on your breasts and stomach before her orgasm subsides. Kendra looks at you. "You are my beautiful little white slave bitch, totally committed to serving me. Now lick me clean," she orders.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_dildo_give', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Lick':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend5.jpg"></center>'
-				'You pull the dildo out of her soaking wet pussy, and dutifully move your head between her legs to begin slowly licking the juices from her thighs and pussy.'
-				'"Keep going, you slut" Kendra orders you. You began to lick faster, licking her thighs and pussy completely clean of her juices.'
-				'"Now, it''s time for your reward" she says as she pulls a strap-on out of her bag next.'
+				'You pull the dildo out of her soaking wet pussy and dutifully move your head between her legs to begin slowly licking the juices from her thighs and pussy.'
+				'"Keep going, you slut," Kendra orders you. You began to lick faster, licking her thighs and pussy completely clean of her juices.'
+				'"Now, it''s time for your reward," she says as she pulls a strap-on out of her bag next.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'cuni', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Yes, Mistress':gt 'sexshop', 'kendra2'
@@ -1078,21 +1079,22 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendra2':
 	minut += 3
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend8.jpg"></center>'
+	*p 'Kendra steps into the harness and slides it up over her hips. As she does, she starts pulling the straps tight to hold the strap-on firmly in place. With the strap-on harness now securely in place, she pulls you close and kisses you. One of her hands wanders down to your pussy and rubs it for a moment, and then she slides one finger inside of you. She breaks the kiss before saying, '
 	if pcs_vag = 0:
-		'Kendra steps into the harness and slides it up over her hips. As she does, she starts pulling the straps tight to hold the strap-on firmly in place. With the strap-on harness now securely in place, she pulls you close and kisses you. One of her hands wanders down to your pussy and rubs it for a moment, and then she slides one finger inside of you. She breaks the kiss before saying "I see you are still a virgin, well, I won''t pop your cherry. Luckily, you still have other holes I can fuck. Now, on your knees and suck my cock."'
+		'"I see you are still a virgin, well, I won''t pop your cherry. Luckily, you still have other holes I can fuck. Now, on your knees and suck my cock."'
 	else
-		'Kendra steps into the harness and slides it up over her hips. As she does, she starts pulling the straps tight to hold the strap-on firmly in place. With the strap-on harness now securely in place, she pulls you close and kisses you. One of her hands wanders down to your pussy and rubs it for a moment, and then she slides one finger inside of you. She breaks the kiss before saying "I see you are already nice and wet, slave. Eager for my cock, are you? Don''t worry, you will feel it soon enough. Now, on your knees and suck my cock" she commands.'
+		'"I see you are already nice and wet, slave. Eager for my cock, are you? Don''t worry, you will feel it soon enough. Now, on your knees and suck my cock."'
 	end
 	act 'Suck her strap-on':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend7.jpg"></center>'
-		'You kneel down and take ahold of the strap-on dildo with one hand, while wrapping your lips around it. You stroke the dildo while you suck on it at the same time. For several minutes you suck the dildo, getting it nice and wet with your saliva.'
+		'You kneel down and take ahold of the strap-on dildo with one hand while wrapping your lips around it. You stroke the dildo while you suck on it at the same time. For several minutes, you suck the dildo, getting it nice and wet with your saliva.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Deep throat':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend7.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you suck on the dildo, you feel her grab you by the hair. Next thing you know, she forces your head forward, forcing the dildo down your throat. Your lips comes to rest against the fake balls. After a few moments of gagging, she lets you pull back to get a breath through your nose - only for her to force it down your throat again, over and over, as she fucks your throat.'
+			'As you suck on the dildo, you feel Kendra grab you by the hair. Next thing you know, she forces your head forward, forcing the dildo down your throat. Your lips comes to rest against the fake balls. After a few moments of gagging, she lets you pull back to get a breath through your nose - only for her to force it down your throat again, over and over, as she fucks your throat.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'bj', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub', 'deepthroat'
 			gs 'stat'
 			if pcs_vag = 0:
@@ -1110,7 +1112,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendravag':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend10.jpg"></center>'
-	'Kendra commands you. "Impale your pussy on my cock, and fuck yourself until I tell you to stop." Once Kendra sits in a chair, you straddle her strap-on, lowering yourself and sliding it into your pussy. You ride the strap-on, and Kendra drives up from under you - trying to shove it as deep into your pussy as possible. Several minutes pass, and each thrust increases your arousal. You decide to rub your clit to increase the amount of pleasure you are recieving.'
+	'Kendra commands you, "Impale your pussy on my cock and fuck yourself until I tell you to stop." Once Kendra sits in a chair, you straddle her strap-on, lowering yourself and sliding it into your pussy. You ride the strap-on, and Kendra drives up from under you - trying to shove it as deep into your pussy as possible. Several minutes pass, and each thrust increases your arousal. You decide to rub your clit to increase the amount of pleasure you are receiving.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'vaginal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Rub clit':
@@ -1133,18 +1135,18 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendraanal':
 	gs 'boyStat', 'D4'
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend9.jpg"></center>'
-	'You stand up, as does she. "Lay on the table" she commands you. You jump up onto the table, and spreads your legs. Kendra steps up between your legs and gently slides the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> strap-on, slick with your pussy juices, into your asshole. She stops a moment to give your ass time to adjust to the size. Then, she begins to thrust the strap-on up your butt, causing you to moan. Seeing that you are enjoying the process, Kendra begins to slowly accelerate. "Tell me your ass belongs to me, Slave!" she commands you. You know it likely means she will just fuck you harder if you refuse to submit, but maybe deep down that''s what you really want'
+	'You stand up, as does she. "Lie on the table," she commands you. You jump up onto the table and spread your legs. Kendra steps up between your legs and gently slides the <<dick>>cm <<$dick_girth>> strap-on, slick with your pussy juices, into your asshole. She stops a moment to give your ass time to adjust to the size. Then, she begins to thrust the strap-on up your butt, causing you to moan. Seeing that you are enjoying the process, Kendra begins to slowly accelerate. "Tell me your ass belongs to me, Slave!" she commands you. You know it likely means she will just fuck you harder if you refuse to submit, but maybe deep down that''s what you really want...'
 	gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Submit':
 		*clr & cla
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend13.jpg"></center>'
-		'You submit to her command, telling her "My ass belongs to you, Mistress Kendra!"'
+		'You submit to her command, telling her, "My ass belongs to you, Mistress Kendra!"'
 		'She smiles at you as she continues fucking your ass. "That''s right, Slave. And what can I do with it?" she asks.'
 		'You reply to her. "Anything you want, Mistress Kendra, I belong to you!"'
-		'Her smile gets bigger. "That''s right, bitch, your ass belongs to me and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" she commands'
-		'Despite the pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "My ass belongs to you and you can fuck it anytime you want, Mistress Kendra!" you scream. She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple more minutes, as if to make her point, before she finally pulls it out of you. As she does, she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
+		'Her smile gets bigger. "That''s right, bitch, your ass belongs to me, and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" she commands.'
+		'Despite the pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "My ass belongs to you, and you can fuck it anytime you want, Mistress Kendra!" you scream. She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple more minutes, as if to make her point, before she finally pulls it out of you. As she does, she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Finish': gt 'sexshop', 'kendrafinish'
@@ -1156,8 +1158,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendraanal':
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend13.jpg"></center>'
-			'You decided not to tell her what she wants to hear. "It''s my butt, Mistress Kendra, I just let you fuck it sometimes!" you tell her.'
-			'Just as you expected, she starts fucking you harder and faster. "You will learn your place, Slave! You will submit to me, or I will fuck your ass raw." She explains and for several minutes she just fucks your butt, before ordering you once again. "Tell me your ass belongs to me, Slave!" You know she will just fuck you harder until you submit, but maybe deep down that''s what you really want...'
+			'You decide not to tell her what she wants to hear. "It''s my butt, Mistress Kendra, I just let you fuck it sometimes!" you tell her.'
+			'Just as you expected, she starts fucking you harder and faster. "You will learn your place, Slave! You will submit to me, or I will fuck your ass raw," she explains, and for several minutes she just fucks your butt, before ordering you once again, "Tell me your ass belongs to me, Slave!" You know she will just fuck you harder until you submit, but maybe deep down that''s what you really want...'
 			gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Submit':
@@ -1167,8 +1169,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendraanal':
 				'You submit to her command, telling her what she wants to hear before she fucks your asshole raw. "My ass belongs to you, Mistress Kendra!"'
 				'She smiles at you, pushing your legs together as she continues to fuck your asshole. "That''s right, Slave. And what can I do with it?" she asks.'
 				'You reply to her. "Anything you want, Mistress Kendra, I belong to you!"'
-				'Her smile gets bigger. "That''s right, bitch, your ass belongs to me and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" she commands'
-				'Despite the pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "My ass belongs to you and you can fuck it anytime you want, Mistress Kendra!" you scream. She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple more minutes, as if to make her point, before she finally pulls it out of you. As she does, she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
+				'Her smile gets bigger. "That''s right, bitch, your ass belongs to me, and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" she commands.'
+				'Despite the pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "My ass belongs to you, and you can fuck it anytime you want, Mistress Kendra!" you scream. She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple more minutes, as if to make her point, before she finally pulls it out of you. As she does, she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Finish': gt 'sexshop', 'kendrafinish'
@@ -1180,8 +1182,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendraanal':
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend6.jpg"></center>'
-					'You decide to resist again. "No, Mistress Kendra! This is my ass, and I decided who fucks it!" You tell her.'
-					'She starts fucking you even harder and even faster than before. She pushes your legs close, so she can get a better grip on your hips. "Learn your damn place, Slave! You belong to me! You will submit to me now, or else no matter what you say, I will fuck your ass raw right now!" she shouts, and for several minutes she pounds into your asshole, commanding you once again. "Tell me your ass belongs to me, Slave! Now!" You know she will just fuck you harder until you submit, you doubt you can last until she gets tired. Eventually, your asshole will start to get sore and it will start really hurting. And not in the good way it is now.'
+					'You decide to resist again. "No, Mistress Kendra! This is my ass, and I decide who fucks it!" You tell her.'
+					'She starts fucking you even harder and even faster than before. She pushes your legs close so she can get a better grip on your hips. "Learn your damn place, Slave! You belong to me! You will submit to me now, or else no matter what you say, I will fuck your ass raw right now!" she shouts, and for several minutes, she pounds into your asshole, commanding you once again, "Tell me your ass belongs to me, Slave! Now!" You know she will just fuck you harder until you submit. You doubt you can last until she gets tired. Eventually, your asshole will start to get sore, and it will start really hurting. And not in the good way it is now.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Submit':
@@ -1191,8 +1193,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendraanal':
 						'You finally submit to her command, telling her what she wants to hear before she fucks your asshole raw. "My ass belongs to you, Mistress Kendra!"'
 						'She smiles at you, pushing your legs together as she continues to fuck your asshole. "That''s right, Slave. And what can I do with it?" she asks.'
 						'You reply to her. "Anything you want, Mistress Kendra, I belong to you!"'
-						'Her smile gets bigger. "That''s right, bitch, your ass belongs to me and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" she commands'
-						'Despite the pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "My ass belongs to you and you can fuck it anytime you want, Mistress Kendra!" you scream. She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple more minutes, as if to make her point, before she finally pulls it out of you. As she does, she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
+						'Her smile gets bigger. "That''s right, bitch, your ass belongs to me, and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" she commands.'
+						'Despite the pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "My ass belongs to you, and you can fuck it anytime you want, Mistress Kendra!" you scream. She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple more minutes, as if to make her point, before she finally pulls it out of you. As she does, she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
 						gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 						gs 'stat'
 						act 'Finish': gt 'sexshop', 'kendrafinish'
@@ -1204,8 +1206,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendraanal':
 							gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend14.jpg"></center>'
-							'Still, you refuse and resist her. "No!" Unable to tell her more than a simple no, as it is starting to hurt now.'
-							'She slams it balls deep into your ass, and starts hammering you as hard and fast as she can. "You will learn your place, right this instant, Slave. You will submit to me, now, or I will stay her all day and fuck your ass until you weep and beg me to stop." For several minutes, she pounds into your sore asshole over and over - it is beginning to hurt a lot. "Tell me, right now, your ass belongs to me, Slave!" she commands you. Your ass is starting to hurt, feeling like it is starting to burn. You just can''t take it anymore and you have to give in.'
+							'Though unable to get out more than a simple "No!" against the pain of her endless thrusts, still you refuse and resist her.'
+							'She slams the strap-on balls deep into your ass and starts hammering you as hard and fast as she can. "You will learn your place, right this instant, Slave. You will submit to me, now, or I will stay here all day and fuck your ass until you weep and beg me to stop." For several minutes, she pounds into your sore asshole over and over - it is beginning to hurt a lot. "Tell me, right now, your ass belongs to me, Slave!" she commands you. Your ass is burning. You just can''t take it anymore, and you have to give in.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 							gs 'pain', 1, 'asshole', 'tear'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -1216,8 +1218,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendraanal':
 								'You finally submit to her command as your ass starts to have a burning sensation, telling her what she wants to hear. "My ass belongs to you, Mistress Kendra!"'
 								'She smiles at you as she continues to fuck your asshole. "That''s right, Slave. And what can I do with it?" she asks.'
 								'You reply to her. "Anything you want, Mistress Kendra, I belong to you!"'
-								'Her smile gets bigger. "That''s right, bitch, your ass belongs to me and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" she commands'
-								'Despite the burning pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "My ass belongs to you and you can fuck it anytime you want, Mistress Kendra!" you scream. She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple more minutes, as if to make her point, before she finally pulls it out of you. As she does, she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
+								'Her smile gets bigger. "That''s right, bitch, your ass belongs to me, and I can fuck it anytime I want. Tell me!" she commands.'
+								'Despite the burning pain, you moan in pleasure as she continues fucking your ass. "My ass belongs to you, and you can fuck it anytime you want, Mistress Kendra!" you scream. She fucks your ass with the strap-on for a couple more minutes, as if to make her point, before she finally pulls it out of you. As she does, she pulls you off the table onto your feet.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'anal_strap', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 								gs 'pain', 1, 'asshole', 'tear'
 								gs 'stat'
@@ -1244,11 +1246,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kendrafinish':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/sex/shkend16.jpg"></center>'
 	'As you stand up, she grabs you by the throat and pulls you close. "Stick out your tongue."'
-	'You do as she says and stick out your tongue. She licks your tongue with hers, and the two of you lick each others'' tongues for a few moments. Finally, she stops and grabs your butt cheek roughly - digging her nails into your backside. Hard enough it hurts a little. Then she lets go and steps away, and the pain quickly fades. She begins taking off her harness. She cleans the dildo, and then puts it away, before getting dressed. Once she is fully dressed, she finally turns to you again. "You may get dressed, Slave."'
+	'You do as she says and stick out your tongue. She joins her tongue with yours, and the two of you kiss for a few moments. Finally, she stops and grabs your butt cheek roughly - digging her nails into your backside hard enough it hurts a little. Then she lets go and steps away, and the pain quickly fades. She begins taking off her harness. She cleans the dildo and then puts it away before getting dressed. Once she is fully dressed, she finally turns to you again. "You may get dressed, Slave."'
 	*nl
-	'"Thank you, Mistress" you tell her, as you get dressed.'
-	'Once you are both fully dressed she says "You should come visit me, I live in the dorms at the University on the island." She gives you directions to which of the dorm buildings is hers, and the floor and room number of her dorm room. "I expect my little white slave to come visit me. Often."'
-	'"Yes, Mistress Kendra" you reply. With that, you leave the basement and go back up to the shop above.'
+	'"Thank you, Mistress," you tell her as you get dressed.'
+	'Once you are both fully dressed, she says, "You should come visit me, I live in the dorms at the University on the island." She gives you directions to which of the dorm buildings is hers and the floor and room number of her dorm room. "I expect my little white slave to come visit me. Often."'
+	'"Yes, Mistress Kendra," you reply. With that, you leave the basement and go back up to the shop above.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5, 'lesbian', 'sub'
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -1261,7 +1263,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shprod':
 	menu_off = 1
 	minut += 5
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/shprod.jpg"></center>'
-	'The cashier is right in front of you, offering to help, and holding a miniskirt. "Girl, this is very you. Will you try it on?"'
+	'The cashier is right in front of you, offering to help and holding a miniskirt. "Girl, this is very you. Will you try it on?"'
 
 	act 'Refuse':gt 'sexshop', 'start'
 
@@ -1269,8 +1271,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shprod':
 		*clr & cla
 		picrand = 47
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/city/citycenter/sexshop/shprod1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You wear the skirt out of the booth, and pose in the mirror. You do not have panties on, and the skirt is so short that it looks more like a belt. It does not cover anything.	All your charms are visible, from all directions.'
-		'Approaching the mirror, you are considering this so-called skirt. The cashier kneels behind you and starts praising your ass in that skirt. His hands already wandering around your hips as he get his lips as close to your butt as he can. He says that he wants to "kiss your skin". Words soon cease, and just the feeling of his lips against your skin remain. Closer and closer to your pussy.'
+		'You wear the skirt out of the booth and pose in the mirror. You do not have panties on, and the skirt is so short that it looks more like a belt. It does not cover anything.	Your pussy is fully visible from all directions.'
+		'Approaching the mirror, you consider this so-called skirt. The cashier kneels behind you and starts praising how your ass looks in it, his hands wandering around your hips as he get his lips as close to your butt as he can. He says that he wants to "kiss your skin". Words soon cease, and just the feeling of his lips against your skin remains. Closer and closer to your pussy.'
 		gs 'willpower', 'cuni', 'resist', 'medium'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
 			act 'Push him away(<<will_cost>> Willpower)':