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[GRAMMAR] - Contractions

Crux 3 years ago
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+ 1 - 1
locations/HotelWork.qsrc

@@ -1354,7 +1354,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'maid':
 					act 'Stay and watch for a bit':
 						*clr & cla
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/hotel/work/events/masturbate2.jpg"></center>'
-						'You crouch down so that she wont see you and have a perfect close view of her pussy.'
+						'You crouch down so that she won''t see you and have a perfect close view of her pussy.'
 						'She is moaning quite loudly now and you watch her insert a finger deeply inside.'
 							
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 10

+ 6 - 6
locations/MeynoldHome.qsrc

@@ -78,7 +78,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 								gs'stat'							
 								'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'							
-								'Katja gets up then tells you, "I''m sorry that I have been a bit stern, I just don''t want to see what happened today repeat itself. When you finish resting then come see me okay? We can have a nice chat together, and don''t worry, I wont lecture you again." Natalia adds, "Come see me too, I would like to speak with you. Now get some rest." The girls leave the room, as you lay down and close your eyes...'
+								'Katja gets up then tells you, "I''m sorry that I have been a bit stern, I just don''t want to see what happened today repeat itself. When you finish resting then come see me okay? We can have a nice chat together, and don''t worry, I won''t lecture you again." Natalia adds, "Come see me too, I would like to speak with you. Now get some rest." The girls leave the room, as you lay down and close your eyes...'
 
 								act 'Rest':gt 'NikoDreams', 'Woods'
 							end
@@ -367,7 +367,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Meal Time':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
-		'After you all finish eating as much cake as you can fit into your belly, Katja stands up and says, "This was great wasn''t it? I know that I had a great time. We should probably get <<$pcs_nickname>> and Nat back home before their parents begin to worry get going. I need to quickly visit the ladies room. I wont be long." Katja then walks out of the room as she waves at everyone.' 
+		'After you all finish eating as much cake as you can fit into your belly, Katja stands up and says, "This was great wasn''t it? I know that I had a great time. We should probably get <<$pcs_nickname>> and Nat back home before their parents begin to worry get going. I need to quickly visit the ladies room. I won''t be long." Katja then walks out of the room as she waves at everyone.' 
 		
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -516,7 +516,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vicky Goodbye':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vicky2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You open the front door then walk out, as <<$VK_VikName>> quickly comes running up to you. "I hope that you had a great time here. Remember that you always have friends here okay? You don''t need to be alone." You give Vicky an approving nod as you. "Thank you for everything Vicky. I owe you all so much." <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "Bah you don''t owe us anything." But then she playfully whispers, "But I wont argue if you anted to get me a new phone." Before sticking out her tongue, making a goofy face. You giggle as <<$VK_VikName>> waves goodbye while closing the door.'
+	'You open the front door then walk out, as <<$VK_VikName>> quickly comes running up to you. "I hope that you had a great time here. Remember that you always have friends here okay? You don''t need to be alone." You give Vicky an approving nod as you. "Thank you for everything Vicky. I owe you all so much." <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "Bah you don''t owe us anything." But then she playfully whispers, "But I won''t argue if you anted to get me a new phone." Before sticking out her tongue, making a goofy face. You giggle as <<$VK_VikName>> waves goodbye while closing the door.'
 	
 	if VKNatChat = 4:
 		act 'Walk home with Natalia':NikoAftermath = 0 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Natalia Walk'
@@ -545,9 +545,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja Chat':
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff00cc><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			*pl '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
 			if VKNatChat = 0:
-				'You sarcastically reply, "Tell me about it." Katja lightly squeezes your shoulders, "No one can change who you are beside you. Remember that. Anyway you should take a bath before <<$VK_VikName>> Vicky decides to gussy herself in there because trust me when I say, you wont be able to use bathroom anytime this century." You poke Katja in her arm as you reply, "Oh stop. I''m sure she''s not that bad." She giggles, as she pulls out her tweezers then begins plucking her eyebrows while telling you, "Oh, by the way, Natalia wanted to speak to you, she seems very worried about you. She is such a sweet girl. It''s a shame that she isn''t more talkative in school." You reply, "I agree. I will go speak with her." You then give Katja a nod before stepping away.'
+				'You sarcastically reply, "Tell me about it." Katja lightly squeezes your shoulders, "No one can change who you are beside you. Remember that. Anyway you should take a bath before <<$VK_VikName>> Vicky decides to gussy herself in there because trust me when I say, you won''t be able to use bathroom anytime this century." You poke Katja in her arm as you reply, "Oh stop. I''m sure she''s not that bad." She giggles, as she pulls out her tweezers then begins plucking her eyebrows while telling you, "Oh, by the way, Natalia wanted to speak to you, she seems very worried about you. She is such a sweet girl. It''s a shame that she isn''t more talkative in school." You reply, "I agree. I will go speak with her." You then give Katja a nod before stepping away.'
 			else
-				'You sarcastically reply, "Tell me about it." Katja lightly squeezes your shoulders, "No one can change who you are beside you. Remember that. Anyway you should take a bath before <<$VK_VikName>> Vicky decides to gussy herself in there because trust me when I say, you wont be able to use bathroom anytime this century." You poke Katja in her arm as you reply, "Oh stop. I''m sure she''s not that bad." She giggles, as she pulls out her tweezers then begins plucking her eyebrows while telling you, "Oh, by the way, Natalia wanted to speak to you, she seems very worried about you. She is such a sweet girl. It''s a shame that she isn''t more talkative in school." You reply, "It''s alright, I already spoke with her" Katja gives you a nod then says, "Good, I hate seeing her worried like that, but you get washed up. You don''t to miss whatever Natalia has planned." You nod at Katja before stepping away.'
+				'You sarcastically reply, "Tell me about it." Katja lightly squeezes your shoulders, "No one can change who you are beside you. Remember that. Anyway you should take a bath before <<$VK_VikName>> Vicky decides to gussy herself in there because trust me when I say, you won''t be able to use bathroom anytime this century." You poke Katja in her arm as you reply, "Oh stop. I''m sure she''s not that bad." She giggles, as she pulls out her tweezers then begins plucking her eyebrows while telling you, "Oh, by the way, Natalia wanted to speak to you, she seems very worried about you. She is such a sweet girl. It''s a shame that she isn''t more talkative in school." You reply, "It''s alright, I already spoke with her" Katja gives you a nod then says, "Good, I hate seeing her worried like that, but you get washed up. You don''t to miss whatever Natalia has planned." You nod at Katja before stepping away.'
 			end	
 		
 			act 'Walk away':VKKatjaChat = 1 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Katja Room'
@@ -662,7 +662,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Chat':
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	if VKNatChat = 0:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/lounge/natalia3.jpg"></center>'
-		'As soon as you approach, Natalia turns to you before flashing you a smile. "<<$pcs_firstname>> you''re up! How are you feeling?" You return the smile, as you reply, "I''m feeling much better now. I hope that I didn''t worry you." Natalia giggles before replying, "I''m just glad that you''re okay. I have never seen anyone go through as much as you did today, but I''m sure everything will work out in the end." You reply, "I can only hope." Natalia responds, "Try not to let things get to you." You reply, "Don''t worry I wont." Natalia says, "Good, I will always be around, if you want to talk."' 
+		'As soon as you approach, Natalia turns to you before flashing you a smile. "<<$pcs_firstname>> you''re up! How are you feeling?" You return the smile, as you reply, "I''m feeling much better now. I hope that I didn''t worry you." Natalia giggles before replying, "I''m just glad that you''re okay. I have never seen anyone go through as much as you did today, but I''m sure everything will work out in the end." You reply, "I can only hope." Natalia responds, "Try not to let things get to you." You reply, "Don''t worry I won''t." Natalia says, "Good, I will always be around, if you want to talk."' 
 		*nl
 		'You respond, "Thank you, for everything you all have done for me. I shutter to think of what would have happened to me if you weren''t around." Natalia replies with a warm smile before saying, "You are very welcome. Now you should take a relaxing bath before <<$VK_VikName>> is finished cooking."'
 		act 'Walk away':VKNatChat = 1 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'

+ 3 - 3
locations/NikoDates.qsrc

@@ -391,7 +391,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Date 2':
 						gs'stat'
 						'<center><b><h4><font color="red"><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-						'You shake your head as you respond, "No way. I''m not that kind of girl. I told you that." Niko get noticeably angry. "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''m not asking you to donate one of your kidneys. Just give a quick..." You cut him off. "I SAID NO!" Niko grabs your head then begins pushing it toward his crotch as he says, "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, it wont take long."'
+						'You shake your head as you respond, "No way. I''m not that kind of girl. I told you that." Niko get noticeably angry. "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''m not asking you to donate one of your kidneys. Just give a quick..." You cut him off. "I SAID NO!" Niko grabs your head then begins pushing it toward his crotch as he says, "Come on <<$pcs_nickname>>, it won''t take long."'
 
 						act 'Continue':
 							*clr & cla
@@ -728,7 +728,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Date 3':
 																	*clr & cla
 																	gs'stat'															
 																	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/dates/3/d9.jpg"></center>'
-																	'Niko replies, "Don''t worry I wont plump you up. I have no interest in dating a cow." Niko then sticks his tongue out as he guide you to the ice cream stand and lets you choose any one you want. You spend the next few seconds, looking over the choices while comparing all of the different flavors before you decide to go with plain vanilla, you ask the man in the ice cream stand for vanilla when Niko adds, "Make that 2 vanilla cones." You give Niko a happy smile as he rubs on your lower back while returning the smile.'
+																	'Niko replies, "Don''t worry I won''t plump you up. I have no interest in dating a cow." Niko then sticks his tongue out as he guide you to the ice cream stand and lets you choose any one you want. You spend the next few seconds, looking over the choices while comparing all of the different flavors before you decide to go with plain vanilla, you ask the man in the ice cream stand for vanilla when Niko adds, "Make that 2 vanilla cones." You give Niko a happy smile as he rubs on your lower back while returning the smile.'
 
 																	act 'Wait for ice cream':
 																		*clr & cla
@@ -1310,7 +1310,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Disco':
 										gs'stat'
 										'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 										*pl '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
-										'You take a few seconds to collect your thoughts, <font color=#FF00FF>I''m sure those guys wont be a problem. I have nothing to worry about. I just need to wait for Niko then I can go home and relax.</font>' 
+										'You take a few seconds to collect your thoughts, <font color=#FF00FF>I''m sure those guys won''t be a problem. I have nothing to worry about. I just need to wait for Niko then I can go home and relax.</font>' 
 										
 										act 'Continue':
 											*clr & cla

+ 3 - 3
locations/NikoEv2.qsrc

@@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Park':
 				minut += 5
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev2/park/shady.jpg"></center>'	
-				'As you both arrive, one of the men says, "She looks good." He then reaches out to touch you, but his hand is pushed away by Niko. "You need to pay up before you start touching." The guy chuckles, "Of course, of course. Where is my head?" He then nods to the other man, who reaches into his pocket then gives Niko some ruble which Niko counts before nodding to the men then taking a step back, signaling the men to use you. The men begin fondling your breasts as they kiss your neck. '+$OpenInnerThought+'This feels so wrong, but Niko needs me to do this. He is counting on me. I must not let him down. I wont let you down Niko.'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
+				'As you both arrive, one of the men says, "She looks good." He then reaches out to touch you, but his hand is pushed away by Niko. "You need to pay up before you start touching." The guy chuckles, "Of course, of course. Where is my head?" He then nods to the other man, who reaches into his pocket then gives Niko some ruble which Niko counts before nodding to the men then taking a step back, signaling the men to use you. The men begin fondling your breasts as they kiss your neck. '+$OpenInnerThought+'This feels so wrong, but Niko needs me to do this. He is counting on me. I must not let him down. I won''t let you down Niko.'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
 				*nl
 				'One of the men takes off your shirt then throws it to the ground. Niko immediately picks it up. One of the men begins pushing you to your knees.'		
 
@@ -161,7 +161,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Reward':
 									*clr & cla
 									gs'stat'
 									'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/yurikev/sex/throat/bed1.mp4"></video></center>'
-									'Yurik rams his dick into your mouth, forcing it down your throat. The force of his massive penis entering your throat is too much for you to take. You gag helplessly then begin pleading with Yurik. "Please sir, your dick is too big. It wont fit." Yurik grunts before responding, "It will fit just, keep your mouth open and shut up." Yurik re-aligns his penis with your mouth then shoves it back in. You do your best to relax your throat, knowing that you have no choice, but to let Yurik have his way with you.' 
+									'Yurik rams his dick into your mouth, forcing it down your throat. The force of his massive penis entering your throat is too much for you to take. You gag helplessly then begin pleading with Yurik. "Please sir, your dick is too big. It won''t fit." Yurik grunts before responding, "It will fit just, keep your mouth open and shut up." Yurik re-aligns his penis with your mouth then shoves it back in. You do your best to relax your throat, knowing that you have no choice, but to let Yurik have his way with you.' 
 
 									act 'Continue sucking his dick':	
 										*clr & cla
@@ -466,7 +466,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Lunch Chat 2':
 							gs'stat'
 							'<center><b><h4><font color=#9b5800><<"Petia Alkaev">></font></h4></b></center>'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/photos/big159.jpg"></center>'
-							'You continue watching Petia, twitching as he has the most powerful orgasm in his life. You can see the ecstasy on his face. The blissful pleasure he is feeling that leaves you envious. After a few seconds Niko approaches the two of you ands says, "Wow Petia, That was pathetic. You wont have any chance with a woman unless you pay for it. Now get the fuck out out of here. I need to speak with <<$pcs_nickname>>."' 
+							'You continue watching Petia, twitching as he has the most powerful orgasm in his life. You can see the ecstasy on his face. The blissful pleasure he is feeling that leaves you envious. After a few seconds Niko approaches the two of you ands says, "Wow Petia, That was pathetic. You won''t have any chance with a woman unless you pay for it. Now get the fuck out out of here. I need to speak with <<$pcs_nickname>>."' 
 							*nl
 							'Petia quickly collects his things while giving you a look of deep gratitude. This has clearly been the best day of his life. Petia puts his pants back on before leaving the restroom while staring at you the whole way.'
 							gs 'cum_call', 'butt', $boy

+ 6 - 6
locations/NikoMeyHome.qsrc

@@ -77,7 +77,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Aftermath':
 								gs'stat'							
 								'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja [Kat] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja2.jpg"></center>'							
-								'Katja gets up then tells you, "I''m sorry that I have been a bit stern, I just don''t want to see what happened today repeat itself. When you finish resting then come see me okay? We can have a nice chat together and don''t worry, I wont lecture you again." Natalia adds, "Come see me too, I would like to speak with you. Now get some rest." The girls leave the room as you lay down and close your eyes...'
+								'Katja gets up then tells you, "I''m sorry that I have been a bit stern, I just don''t want to see what happened today repeat itself. When you finish resting then come see me okay? We can have a nice chat together and don''t worry, I won''t lecture you again." Natalia adds, "Come see me too, I would like to speak with you. Now get some rest." The girls leave the room as you lay down and close your eyes...'
 
 								act 'Rest':gt 'NikoDreams', 'Woods'
 							end
@@ -366,7 +366,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Meal Time':
 		gs'stat'
 		'<center><b><h4><font color=#ff0090><<"Katja Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/bedroom/katja.jpg"></center>'
-		'After you all finish eating as much cake as you can fit into your belly, Katja stands up and says, "This was great wasn''t it? I know that I had a great time. We should probably get <<$pcs_nickname>> and Nat back home before their parents begin to worry get going. I need to quickly visit the ladies room. I wont be long." Katja then walks out of the room as she waves at everyone.' 
+		'After you all finish eating as much cake as you can fit into your belly, Katja stands up and says, "This was great wasn''t it? I know that I had a great time. We should probably get <<$pcs_nickname>> and Nat back home before their parents begin to worry get going. I need to quickly visit the ladies room. I won''t be long." Katja then walks out of the room as she waves at everyone.' 
 		
 		act 'Continue':
 			*clr & cla
@@ -515,7 +515,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Vicky Goodbye':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#ffae00><<"Viktoriya [Vicky] Meynold">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/vicky/vicky2.jpg"></center>'
-	'You open the front door then walk out as <<$VK_VikName>> quickly comes running up to you. "I hope that you had a great time here. Remember that you always have friends here okay? You don''t need to be alone." You give Vicky an approving nod as you. "Thank you for everything Vicky. I owe you all so much." <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "Bah you don''t owe us anything." But then she playfully whispers, "But I wont argue if you anted to get me a new phone." Before sticking out her tongue, making a goofy face. You giggle as <<$VK_VikName>> waves goodbye while closing the door.'
+	'You open the front door then walk out as <<$VK_VikName>> quickly comes running up to you. "I hope that you had a great time here. Remember that you always have friends here okay? You don''t need to be alone." You give Vicky an approving nod as you. "Thank you for everything Vicky. I owe you all so much." <<$VK_VikName>> replies, "Bah you don''t owe us anything." But then she playfully whispers, "But I won''t argue if you anted to get me a new phone." Before sticking out her tongue, making a goofy face. You giggle as <<$VK_VikName>> waves goodbye while closing the door.'
 	
 	if VKNatChat = 4:
 		act 'Walk home with Natalia':NikoAftermath = 0 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Natalia Walk'
@@ -544,9 +544,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Katja Chat':
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#FF00FF><<"<<$pcs_firstname>> [<<$pcs_nickname>>] <<$pcs_lastname>>">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			*pl '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="<<FUNC(''$face_image'')>>"></center>'
 			if VKNatChat = 0:
-				'You sarcastically reply, "Tell me about it." Katja lightly squeezes your shoulders, "No one can change who you are beside you. Remember that. Anyway you should take a bath before Vicky decides to gussy herself in there because trust me when I say, you wont be able to use bathroom anytime this century." You poke Katja in her arm as you reply, "Oh stop. I''m sure she''s not that bad." She giggles as she pulls out her tweezers then begins plucking her eyebrows while telling you, "Oh, by the way, Natalia wanted to speak to you, she seems very worried about you. She is such a sweet girl. It''s a shame that she isn''t more talkative in school." You reply, "I agree. I will go speak with her." You then give Katja a nod before stepping away.'
+				'You sarcastically reply, "Tell me about it." Katja lightly squeezes your shoulders, "No one can change who you are beside you. Remember that. Anyway you should take a bath before Vicky decides to gussy herself in there because trust me when I say, you won''t be able to use bathroom anytime this century." You poke Katja in her arm as you reply, "Oh stop. I''m sure she''s not that bad." She giggles as she pulls out her tweezers then begins plucking her eyebrows while telling you, "Oh, by the way, Natalia wanted to speak to you, she seems very worried about you. She is such a sweet girl. It''s a shame that she isn''t more talkative in school." You reply, "I agree. I will go speak with her." You then give Katja a nod before stepping away.'
 			else
-				'You sarcastically reply, "Tell me about it." Katja lightly squeezes your shoulders, "No one can change who you are beside you. Remember that. Anyway you should take a bath before Vicky decides to gussy herself in there because trust me when I say, you wont be able to use bathroom anytime this century." You poke Katja in her arm as you reply, "Oh stop. I''m sure she''s not that bad." She giggles as she pulls out her tweezers then begins plucking her eyebrows while telling you, "Oh, by the way, Natalia wanted to speak to you, she seems very worried about you. She is such a sweet girl. It''s a shame that she isn''t more talkative in school." You reply, "It''s alright, I already spoke with her" Katja gives you a nod then says, "Good, I hate seeing her worried like that, but you get washed up. You don''t to miss whatever Natalia has planned." You nod at Katja before stepping away.'
+				'You sarcastically reply, "Tell me about it." Katja lightly squeezes your shoulders, "No one can change who you are beside you. Remember that. Anyway you should take a bath before Vicky decides to gussy herself in there because trust me when I say, you won''t be able to use bathroom anytime this century." You poke Katja in her arm as you reply, "Oh stop. I''m sure she''s not that bad." She giggles as she pulls out her tweezers then begins plucking her eyebrows while telling you, "Oh, by the way, Natalia wanted to speak to you, she seems very worried about you. She is such a sweet girl. It''s a shame that she isn''t more talkative in school." You reply, "It''s alright, I already spoke with her" Katja gives you a nod then says, "Good, I hate seeing her worried like that, but you get washed up. You don''t to miss whatever Natalia has planned." You nod at Katja before stepping away.'
 			end	
 		
 			act 'Walk away':VKKatjaChat = 1 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Katja Room'
@@ -661,7 +661,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Natalia Chat':
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#00eaff><<"Natalia [Nat] Pavlova">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	if VKNatChat = 0:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/meynold/lounge/natalia3.jpg"></center>'
-		'As soon as you approach, Natalia turns to you before flashing you a smile. "<<$pcs_firstname>> you''re up! How are you feeling?" You return the smile as you reply, "I''m feeling much better now. I hope that I didn''t worry you." Natalia giggles before replying, "I''m just glad that you''re okay. I have never seen anyone go through as much as you did today, but I''m sure everything will work out in the end." You reply, "I can only hope." Natalia responds, "Try not to let things get to you." You reply, "Don''t worry I wont." Natalia says, "Good, I will always be around, if you want to talk."' 
+		'As soon as you approach, Natalia turns to you before flashing you a smile. "<<$pcs_firstname>> you''re up! How are you feeling?" You return the smile as you reply, "I''m feeling much better now. I hope that I didn''t worry you." Natalia giggles before replying, "I''m just glad that you''re okay. I have never seen anyone go through as much as you did today, but I''m sure everything will work out in the end." You reply, "I can only hope." Natalia responds, "Try not to let things get to you." You reply, "Don''t worry I won''t." Natalia says, "Good, I will always be around, if you want to talk."' 
 		*nl
 		'You respond, "Thank you, for everything you all have done for me. I shutter to think of what would have happened to me if you weren''t around." Natalia replies with a warm smile before saying, "You are very welcome. Now you should take a relaxing bath before <<$VK_VikName>> is finished cooking."'
 		act 'Walk away':VKNatChat = 1 & gt 'NikoMeyHome', 'Lounge'

+ 4 - 4
locations/NikoWhore.qsrc

@@ -6,7 +6,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Locker Room':
 	gs'stat'
 	'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/avatars/<<week>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'Niko wraps his arm around your neck then leads you to the locker room. When you enter the locker room, Niko closes the door then takes a quick look around to see if anyone is there. Niko walks up behind you then whispers in your ear, "<<$pcs_firstname>> take off your clothes." You obediently do as he asks, removing all your clothes. Niko collects your clothes then puts them in a bag. You can''t help but feel nervous when you see Niko packing up your clothes. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Is he taking my clothes away? What if someone walks in? I wont be able to get dressed. I''m sure Niko knows what he is doing. Just follow his lead <<$pcs_firstname>>, just follow his lead.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+	'Niko wraps his arm around your neck then leads you to the locker room. When you enter the locker room, Niko closes the door then takes a quick look around to see if anyone is there. Niko walks up behind you then whispers in your ear, "<<$pcs_firstname>> take off your clothes." You obediently do as he asks, removing all your clothes. Niko collects your clothes then puts them in a bag. You can''t help but feel nervous when you see Niko packing up your clothes. '+$OpenInnerThought+'Is he taking my clothes away? What if someone walks in? I won''t be able to get dressed. I''m sure Niko knows what he is doing. Just follow his lead <<$pcs_firstname>>, just follow his lead.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
 
 	act 'Take a deep breath':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -419,7 +419,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Exposed':
 									'<center><img src="images/characters/shared/photos/big10.jpg"></center>'
 								end
 								if npc_rel['A144'] >= 80:
-									'Anushka holds out her hand to you. "Come on, lets get out of here!" Dan walks in front of her. "Leave it Nush, <<$pcs_nickname>> likes it... She wants to stay." Then he turns towards you. "Don''t you slut?" You stare at Anushka, too terrified to speak. Anushka shouts, "<<$pcs_nickname>>! Say something!" You want to say something but your body wont let you. Taking your silence as acceptance, Anushka just sighs in a defeated tone then gives you a look of pity. "See, what did I tell you? Now stop being such a buzz kill and either join in, or shove off!" She then says to Dan. "Fuck your asshole." Dan only grins as he adds, "Anywhere, any time, sweet cheeks."'
+									'Anushka holds out her hand to you. "Come on, lets get out of here!" Dan walks in front of her. "Leave it Nush, <<$pcs_nickname>> likes it... She wants to stay." Then he turns towards you. "Don''t you slut?" You stare at Anushka, too terrified to speak. Anushka shouts, "<<$pcs_nickname>>! Say something!" You want to say something but your body won''t let you. Taking your silence as acceptance, Anushka just sighs in a defeated tone then gives you a look of pity. "See, what did I tell you? Now stop being such a buzz kill and either join in, or shove off!" She then says to Dan. "Fuck your asshole." Dan only grins as he adds, "Anywhere, any time, sweet cheeks."'
 									*nl
 									'Valentin pulls Anushka away while Alyona follows, he pulls her to where the stairs exit out into the hallway. Anushka jerks her arm away from him. Valentin puts his hands in the air. "Just go Nush, you can''t do anything here... So just go." She shakes her head in disgust at him. "Fuck you Val." She then turns and walks off while Alyona gives Roman a dirty look as she follows Anushka. Valentin calls after them. "Come on, don''t be like that Nush." Then he starts walking back to the group. "Fuck... She is pissed." Radomir pats him on the shoulder. "She will get over it, she always does."'
 								elseif npc_rel['A144'] >= 50:
@@ -874,7 +874,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame':
 													gs'stat'
 													'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 													'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
-													'You lower your posture as you reply, "Alright, what do I have to lose? I doubt anything could get any worst." Niko wraps his arms around you then brings his face to yours before responding, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. That attitude wont solve anything. Meet me after school then we will work on fixing your reputation. You can trust me and try to cheer up." You nod your head while giving Niko a warm smile. '+$OpenInnerThought+'I don''t know how, but I know that Niko will find a way to help me. Niko loves me as much as I do him. I know in my heart that he will always protect me.'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
+													'You lower your posture as you reply, "Alright, what do I have to lose? I doubt anything could get any worst." Niko wraps his arms around you then brings his face to yours before responding, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. That attitude won''t solve anything. Meet me after school then we will work on fixing your reputation. You can trust me and try to cheer up." You nod your head while giving Niko a warm smile. '+$OpenInnerThought+'I don''t know how, but I know that Niko will find a way to help me. Niko loves me as much as I do him. I know in my heart that he will always protect me.'+$CloseInnerThought+'' 
 													
 													act 'Kiss Niko':
 														*clr & cla
@@ -974,7 +974,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Walk Of Shame 2':
 			gs'stat'
 			'<center><b><h4><font color=#E400FF><<"Nikolai [Niko] Volkov">></font></h4></b></center>'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikoev/smile2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You lower your posture as you reply, "Alright, what do I have to lose? I doubt anything could get any worst." Niko wraps his arms around you then brings his face to yours before responding, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. That attitude wont solve anything. Meet me after school then we will work on fixing your reputation, trust me and try to cheer up." You nod your head while giving Niko a warm smile. '+$OpenInnerThought+'I don''t know how, but I know that Niko will find a way to help me. Niko loves me as much as I do him. I know in my heart that he will always protect me.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
+			'You lower your posture as you reply, "Alright, what do I have to lose? I doubt anything could get any worst." Niko wraps his arms around you then brings his face to yours before responding, "Come on <<$pcs_firstname>>. That attitude won''t solve anything. Meet me after school then we will work on fixing your reputation, trust me and try to cheer up." You nod your head while giving Niko a warm smile. '+$OpenInnerThought+'I don''t know how, but I know that Niko will find a way to help me. Niko loves me as much as I do him. I know in my heart that he will always protect me.'+$CloseInnerThought+''
 
 			act 'Push him away':
 				*clr & cla

+ 1 - 1
locations/bed2.qsrc

@@ -382,7 +382,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wake_horny':
 	elseif SleepHorny = 2:
 		'You''re so horny that you''ve woken a second time. Your pussy is still wet and wanting attention.'
 		*nl
-		'You could try and get back to sleep again, but it''s doubtful that you will get much sleep, and continuously ignoring your needs wont help; maybe you should masturbate, and make the most of the time that''s left.'
+		'You could try and get back to sleep again, but it''s doubtful that you will get much sleep, and continuously ignoring your needs won''t help; maybe you should masturbate, and make the most of the time that''s left.'
 		*nl
 		'Soon you will have to get up one way or another.'
 	elseif SleepHorny >= 3:

+ 1 - 1
locations/grigory.qsrc

@@ -480,7 +480,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'flower3':
 	'"Heh, I used to do things like that when I was younger," He gives you a faint smile, "Some boy just wants to become a man."'
 	'You look at him, a little surprised at his reply.'
 	'"But how do I find out who did it? Did you maybe see someone in the yard this morning?"'
-	'Grandfather barks a little laugh, "Even if I knew, and I don''t, I wouldnt tell you," He shakes his head, "Got to make the man work for it."'
+	'Grandfather barks a little laugh, "Even if I knew, and I don''t, I wouldn''t tell you." He shakes his head, "Got to make the man work for it."'
 	'Waving dismissively, you know grandfather is done talking about it.'
 	act 'Continue':gt 'gadhouse', 'start'
 end

+ 3 - 3
locations/gschool_chats1.qsrc

@@ -1068,7 +1068,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'christina':
 		'As you pass by Christina, she looks at you triumphantly. "Don''t forget my little slave! Showers after the gym class..."'
 		'Before you''re able to respond, she turns around and walks away...'
 	elseif lariskaQwestStart > 0 and zverSlutQW ! 0:
-		'As you walk up to Christina, you smirk and say "Better have your plug in and no panties, buttslut, or things wont go well for you."'
+		'As you walk up to Christina, you smirk and say "Better have your plug in and no panties, buttslut, or things won''t go well for you."'
 		'Before she''s able to respond, you grab her arm, force her to bend over, and flip up her skirt. Finding her buttplug in place, and no panties, you let her go and walk away.'
 	elseif kristinaSex > 0 and fizrukSex > 0:
 		npc_rel['A18'] += 1
@@ -1210,10 +1210,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'lina':
 		'"I have my eye on you, Lina. You are going to have to pick a side, between me and Christina. For your sake, I hope it isn''t the wrong one..."'
 		'With that statement, you turn and walk away.'
 	elseif lariskaQwestStart >= 7 and zverSlutQW >= 1:
-		'"I wont forget you helped Christina come after me. Things are going to get rough for you."'
+		'"I won''t forget you helped Christina come after me. Things are going to get rough for you."'
 		'With that statement, you turn and walk away.'
 	elseif LinaSlut = 1 and kotovLoveQW > 0:
-		'Lina sees the look on your face and recoils away from you. "Stay away from my boyfriend, slut., or I will beat you black and blue. Vitek wont protect you, either."'
+		'Lina sees the look on your face and recoils away from you. "Stay away from my boyfriend, slut, or I will beat you black and blue. Vitek won''t protect you, either."'
 		'Your one warning to her delivered, you turn and walk away.'
 	elseif LinaSlut = 1 and kotovLoveQW = 0:
 		'Seeing Lina, you laugh at her and say "Enjoy Vitek, slut. He''s all yours." When he rips you to pieces I am going to laugh."'

+ 1 - 1
locations/gschool_lunch.qsrc

@@ -747,7 +747,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'rolan_meet':
 					'"Ehh, right, right."'
 					'Rolan takes his fork and knife and quickly cuts his steak into two pieces before basically swallowing both. Did he even chew either piece?'
 					'"Wow, Mr. Matveev! You must have really enjoyed that steak. Well, since you''re finished eating so soon, we have some time to talk."'
-					'"Talk? I-I dont''t know... Usually only Miss Volkov talks to me when she gives me the tasks for the day..."'
+					'"Talk? I-I don''t know... Usually only Miss Volkov talks to me when she gives me the tasks for the day..."'
 					'You pout, "Aww, you don''t want to talk with me..."'
 					'"Oh no! No, no, no, no... Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>... I-I... just don''t know what to talk about. I''m not used to speaking with anyone."'
 					'"Well, what kind of hobbies do you have? What do you do when you''re done working?"'

+ 1 - 1
locations/igorhunter.qsrc

@@ -206,7 +206,7 @@ else
 							act 'Continue Flirt':
 								*clr & cla
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/gadukino/hunters/hanterkiss1.jpg"></center>'
-								*nl 'You smile sweetly at Igor. Suddenly Igor steals a kiss when you didnt expect it. You can feel his breath on your skin, smell the scent of the soap he used to clean himself. Suddenly, he looks embarrassed by what he just did and waits to see what your response will be.'
+								*nl 'You smile sweetly at Igor. Suddenly Igor steals a kiss when you didn''t expect it. You can feel his breath on your skin, smell the scent of the soap he used to clean himself. Suddenly, he looks embarrassed by what he just did and waits to see what your response will be.'
 								gs 'arousal', 'foreplay', 5
 								gs 'stat'
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/pav_complexold.qsrc

@@ -11,7 +11,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'etaj_1':
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/sharedapt/apthallway.jpg"></center>'
 	''
 	'An old, common russian apartment house, lacking lots of years of repairs and maintenance.'
-	'The entry doors are left unlocked and even if they werent, they look like fall apart any moment.'
+	'The entry doors are left unlocked and even if they weren''t, they look like fall apart any moment.'
 	
 	'Inside is a board with <a href="exec:gt ''pav_complexold'', ''advert''">announcements</a> for the tenants.'
 

+ 1 - 1
locations/pav_shared_apt.qsrc

@@ -509,7 +509,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'intro':
 				'<font color=#<<$nd_font>>>"hmmmm"</font>'
 				act 'Continue':gt 'pav_shared_apt', 'intro'
 			end
-			act 'I wont leave my children':
+			act 'I won''t leave my children':
 				cla
 				pavIntroStep = 0
 				'<font color=#<<$pcs_font>>>"OK, I will make do with my current accomodation.'

+ 1 - 1
locations/preALT.qsrc

@@ -135,7 +135,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'Cursed Schoolgirl Start 2':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/system/intro/alt/karinpre.jpg"></center>'
 	'You wake up in an unfamiliar room. Standing near you is a red-haired girl.'
-	'"Ah, you woke up," she chirped. "We found you half-dead, you know. You almost didnt make it. You shouldn''t be fondling ancient amulets you know nothing about."'
+	'"Ah, you woke up," she chirped. "We found you half-dead, you know. You almost didn''t make it. You shouldn''t be fondling ancient amulets you know nothing about."'
 	'"I did some research on what happened to you. Turns out the Amulet of Power passed to you, which should only happen if touched by a male mage. Unfortunately, I got some bad news for you. Reinhold, who''s a really powerful mage. He''s been tracking down this amulet for a while now and if he realizes that the amulet''s power has passed to you he might think you pose a risk."'
 
 	act 'What''s going on?':

+ 1 - 1
locations/tour_guide.qsrc

@@ -427,7 +427,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'after_spank':
 		end
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/palace/office/after_spank1.jpg"></center>'
-		'You go into the changing room and check the marks on your butt while taking off your uniform. They sting pretty badly, and you hope you wont find out how much worse it can get.'
+		'You go into the changing room and check the marks on your butt while taking off your uniform. They sting pretty badly, and you hope you won''t find out how much worse it can get.'
 		riverbusted = 1
 		if pcs_makeup > 1:
 			pcs_makeup = 0