[text edit] clean up svidboy

locations/svidboy.qsrc

@@ -16,14 +16,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kinosvid':
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><b>Cinema</b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/kino0.jpg"></center>'
-	'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> you bought the tickets and took their seats ready for viewing'
+	'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> buys the tickets, and you take your seats ready for viewing'
 
-	act 'Watch a movie':
+	act 'Watch the movie':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		minut += 90
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/kino1.jpg"></center>'
-		'During the session <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> looked around and making sure that you are in the room except no one is turned to you and started to kiss his hand slipped under your clothes, you started to caress his chest.'
+		'During the screening, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> looks around and, making sure that you are alone in the theater, turns and starts to kiss you. His hand slips under your clothes, and you start to caress his chest.'
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -33,8 +33,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kinosvid':
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/kino0.jpg"></center>'
-				'You removed his hand with the words "Well, not here"'
-				'When the movie ended <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> said that he has to run and left.'
+				'You remove his hand with the words, "Not here."'
+				'When the movie ends, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says that he has to run and leaves.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt $svidboy_home
 			end
@@ -50,7 +50,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kinosvid':
 			loverrelation[lover_number] += 5
 			gs 'boyStat', $lover[lover_number]
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/kino2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You unbutton his pants and pulled out already erection begin to stroke his hand <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> lays down the hands on your shoulders and begins to press down gently guiding your head to its members.'
+			'You unbutton his pants and pull out his already erect cock, beginning to stroke it in your hand. <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> lays his hands on your shoulders and begins to press down gently, guiding your head to his member.'
 
 			act 'Take by mouth':gt 'sex', 'minet'
 		end
@@ -85,7 +85,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'parksvid':
 		*clr
 		minut += 60
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/sex_park1.jpg"></center>'
-		'When you come into the park <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> caught you in his arms and began to circle, "Stop, stop, else you will drop" you laughed. <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> put you on the ground.'
+		'When you come into the park, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> catches you in his arms and begins to swing you. "Stop, stop, you will drop me," you laugh. <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> put you on the ground.'
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'kiss', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'parksvid':
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/sex_park0.jpg"></center>'
 				'You take his hand and walk away.'
-				'Soon <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> said that he has to run and leaves.'
+				'Soon, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says that he has to run and leaves.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt $svidboy_home, $svidboy_home_arg
 			end
@@ -107,7 +107,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'parksvid':
 		act 'Kiss him':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/sex_park2.jpg"></center>'
-			'You turn to him and kiss on the lips, he holds you and his hands begin to wander through your body, one on the chest, the second squeezes your buttocks.'
+			'You turn to him and kiss him on the lips. He holds you, and his hands begin to wander through your body, one on the chest, the second squeezing your buttocks.'
 
 			gs 'willpower', 'foreplay', 'resist'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -118,7 +118,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'parksvid':
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/sex_park0.jpg"></center>'
 					'You take his hand and walk away.'
-					'Soon <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> said that he has to run and leaves.'
+					'Soon, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says that he has to run and leaves.'
 
 					act 'Leave':gt $svidboy_home, $svidboy_home_arg
 				end
@@ -131,7 +131,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'parksvid':
 				*clr
 				pcs_horny += 20
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/sex_park3.jpg"></center>'
-				'You kiss him, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> starts at your lips, then moves lower, meanwhile he bares your chest and begins to squeeze, while his other hand moves to your pussy.'
+				'You kiss him. <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> starts at your lips, then moves lower. Meanwhile, he bares your chest and begins to squeeze, while his other hand moves to your pussy.'
 				
 				gs 'willpower', 'cuni', 'resist'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -142,7 +142,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'parksvid':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/sex_park0.jpg"></center>'
 						'You remove his hands and cover your bare breasts.'
-						'Soon <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> said that he has to run and leaves.'
+						'Soon, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says that he has to run and leaves.'
 
 						act 'Leave':gt $svidboy_home, $svidboy_home_arg
 					end
@@ -154,7 +154,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'parksvid':
 					cla
 					*clr
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/sex_park4.jpg"></center>'
-					'You enjoy the petting, as one hand fingers your pussy, when <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> suddenly bends you over, exposing your ass. You glare at his tongue as it slides between your buttocks and your fingered pussy.'
+					'You enjoy the petting, as one hand fingers your pussy, when <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> suddenly bends you over, exposing your ass. You glance at his tongue as it slides between your buttocks and your fingered pussy.'
 					'It feels quite sensitive, and you enjoy <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>''s actions very much.'
 
 					act 'Continue':
@@ -175,10 +175,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'parksvid2':
 	*clr
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/sex_park5.jpg"></center>'
-	'Walking through the park zakaulkam you notice black guy watching you'
+	'Walking through the park, you notice a black guy watching you.'
 
 	if izvrat = 1:
-		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> also his remarks and turned to you rastegivat pants and says, "And let''s have a little show for this pervert"'
+		'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> also points him out. Turning to you, he unbuttons his pants and says, "And let''s have a little show for this pervert."'
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -188,8 +188,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'parksvid2':
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/sex_park6.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Well, no, I will not do that, " you reply ego buttoning his pants, take his hand and move on.'
-				'Soon <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> said that he has to run and left.'
+				'"Well, no, I will not do that, " you reply. Buttoning his pants, you take his hand and move on.'
+				'Soon, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says that he has to run and leaves.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt $svidboy_home, $svidboy_home_arg
 			end
@@ -207,14 +207,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'parksvid2':
 			gt 'sex', 'minet'
 		end
 	elseif pcs_inhib >= 40 or exhibitionist_lvl > 1:
-		'You comes to mind crazy idea, to have sex with her boyfriend in front of spying.'
+		'A crazy idea comes to your mind: to have sex with your boyfriend in front of this spy.'
 
 		act 'Have sex':
 			cla
 			*clr
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/sex_park9.jpg"></center>'
-			'You let go of his hand away a little guy back raschityvaya place so that African-would you have seen good and throwing off his clothes covenant her boyfriend, "I want you here and now"'
-			'"And I do not mind, " he says coming up to you and find rastegivaya fly.'
+			'You let go of his hand and stand back a little, determining a place where the African would have a good view. Throwing off your clothes you beckon to him to come over, saying, "I want you here and now."'
+			'"And I do not have a problem with that," he says, coming up to you and unfastening his fly.'
 
 			act 'Blowjob':
 				$svidboy_home = 'svidboy'
@@ -229,19 +229,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'parksvid2':
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
-			act 'Discard this idea and move on. (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
+			act 'Discard the idea and move on. (<<will_cost>> Willpower)':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs 'willpower', 'exhib', 'resist'
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/sex_park6.jpg"></center>'
-				'You drop this idea and move on.'
-				'Soon <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> said that he has to run and left.'
+				'You drop the idea and move on.'
+				'Soon, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says that he has to run and leaves.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt $svidboy_home, $svidboy_home_arg
 			end
 		else
-			act 'Discard this idea and move on.  (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
+			act 'Discard the idea and move on.  (<font color="red"><<will_cost>> Willpower</font>)': '<br><font color="red">You don''t have enough willpower to use this action.</font>'
 		end
 	else
 		act 'Leave':gt $svidboy_home, $svidboy_home_arg
@@ -260,9 +260,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'parksvid21':
 	*clr
 	menu_off = 1
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/sex_park7.jpg"></center>'
-	'Once <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> finished, he asks you, "Well this little Papuan still here?"'
-	'"Yes, actively Fingering." you reply, glancing toward African.'
-	'"If you can suck it, and I''ll see." says <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, clearly wanting something you agreed.'
+	'Once <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> finishes, he asks you, "Well is our little friend still here?"'
+	'"Yes, actively jerking himself off," you reply, glancing toward African.'
+	'"Hey, what if you suck him while I watch?" asks <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>, clearly wanting you to agree.'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -272,8 +272,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'parksvid21':
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/sex_park6.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Well, no, I''m not going to suck him, enough with him and watching." you reply dressing, then take his hand and move on.'
-			'Soon <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> said that he has to run and left.'
+			'"Well, no, I''m not going to suck him, enough with him and watching," you reply, dressing then taking his hand and moving on.'
+			'Soon, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says that he has to run and leaves.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $svidboy_home, $svidboy_home_arg
 		end
@@ -288,12 +288,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'parksvid21':
 		stat['bj'] += 1
 		swallow += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/sex_park8.jpg"></center>'
-		'You beckon African, he carefully approaches cautiously posmatrikaya on your guy.'
+		'You beckon the African over. He carefully approaches, cautiously glancing at your guy.'
 		'"Do not worry, took out personal belongings, now my slut suck you down to the bottom" grinned <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>'
-		'You go down on his knees so that <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> could see the whole process, and with styanuv Man briefs start sucking, you had to work not long, a minute later he came in your mouth. Happy man immediately ran away.'
-		'"Hey, if a slut does not take money it could even say thank you" threw him go <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>'
-		'Not paying attention to his words, because you really behaved like the last whore, you got dressed and went down.'
-		'Soon <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> said that he has to run and left.'
+		'You go down on your knees so that <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> can see the whole process and, pulling off the man''s briefs, start sucking. You do not have to work long. A minute later, he comes in your mouth. Happy, the man immediately runs away.'
+		'"Hey, if a slut does not take money, you should at least say thank you," <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> yells after him.'
+		'Not paying attention to his words, because you really behaved like a whore, you get dressed and move on.'
+		'Soon, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says that he has to run and leaves.'
 
 		act 'Leave':gt $svidboy_home, $svidboy_home_arg
 	end
@@ -310,7 +310,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'parksvid22':
 	cla
 	*clr
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/sex_park7.jpg"></center>'
-	'After <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> finished, he notices you watching African "Damn, this pervert us spying" and noting both your lips slipped smile asked, "Did you know that he''s here, you''re here to fuck specially decided to show off in front of this Negro, you can also otsosesh him? "'
+	'After <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> finishes, he notices you watching the African. "Damn, this pervert is spying on us," he fumes, then, noticing both your lips slipping into a smile, he asks, "Did you know that he was here? Did you decide to fuck here specifically to show off in front of this Negro? Do you also want to suck him off?"'
 	
 	gs 'willpower', 'bj', 'resist'
 	if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -320,8 +320,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'parksvid22':
 			gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 			gs 'stat'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/sex_park6.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Of course I did not know anything, do you think that I could have sex with you in front of this" you make pained face and dressed quickly go away after a few seconds <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> catching up with you, "I''m sorry, honey, not mean to offend you, I said sgorecha "he izvenyayus you take him by the hand, saying that you forgive and move on.'
-			'Soon <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> said that he has to run and left.'
+			'"Of course I did not know anything, do you think that I could have sex with you in front of this..." you make a pained face and dress quickly, starting to walk away after a few seconds. <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> catches up with you. "I''m sorry, honey, I did not mean to offend you." You take him by the hand, saying that you forgive him, and move on.'
+			'Soon, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says that he has to run and leaves.'
 
 			act 'Leave':gt $svidboy_home, $svidboy_home_arg
 		end
@@ -337,10 +337,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'parksvid22':
 		swallow += 1
 		balls += 1
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/sex_park8.jpg"></center>'
-		'"If I want to suck and" threw you back.'
-		'"So what do you expect me to suck or call him, hey man come on here free whore sucks for so" cried <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>>'
-		'"Come on do not be afraid" you shouted guy African timidly walked up to you.'
-		'You go down on his knees so that <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> could see the whole process, and with styanuv Man briefs start sucking, you had to work not long, a minute later he came in your mouth. But you''re not going to end so quickly when osobeno <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> sitting next crimson with anger. You took the guy cock and continued to masturbate, that he finally fell, but themselves demonstratively turned to his, now ex-boyfriend, and a little tinkering with the sperm in her mouth to swallow it. Then you turned back to African and continued without deliv his cock out of hand you the language began to fondle his balls, then took them whole in his mouth and began to suck it out of his mouth one releasing it again absorbing both when a member of the African stood again, you switched on him, slow and metadichno you licking every inch of his phallus, and then began to suck the head, smacking loudly after you calmly and methodically started sucking him trying to absorb it into himself entirely and as a member was very modest size you manage it, and that would put an end to you shoved in his mouth and his balls. At this <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> could not resist and shouting something about the fact that you as a whore and he wa hates escaped, you quietly completed the guy a blowjob and swallowing cum went away.'
+		'"And what if I do want to suck him off?" you snap back at him.'
+		'"Oh hey, let me call him over then. Hey man, come here, free whore sucks just for you," <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> yells at the distant man.'
+		'"Come on, do not be afraid" you shout, and the African guy timidly walks up to you.'
+		'You go down on your knees so that <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> can see the whole process, and pulling off the man''s briefs, start sucking. You do not have to work long. A minute later, he comes in your mouth. But you''re not going to let this end so quickly, especially with <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> sitting next to you crimson with anger. You take the guy''s cock and continue to suck it until it finally falls from your mouth, then demonstratively turn to your now ex-boyfriend and tinker with the sperm in your mouth a little before swallowing it. You turn back to the African and without delay take his cock in your hand and begin to fondle his balls, then taking them into your mouth you begin to suck them, releasing them then taking them in again. As the African''s member rises again, you switch your attention to it. Slowly and methodically you lick every inch of his phallus and then begin to suck the head. Smacking loudly, you then try to get the full length inside your throat, and as his member is very modestly sized, you manage it. At this, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> can not resist shouting something about the fact that you a whore and he hates you. You quietly complete your blowjob and, swallowing the man''s cum, get up and start walking away.'
 
 		act 'Leave':gt $svidboy_home, $svidboy_home_arg
 	end
@@ -356,7 +356,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'billsvid':
 	gs 'stat'
 	picrand = rand(51, 52)
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/bil<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-	'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> pays for a table at a booth and you go to play'
+	'<<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> pays for a table at a booth, and you go to play.'
 
 	act 'Play':
 		*clr & cla
@@ -364,7 +364,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'billsvid':
 		gs 'stat'
 
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/bil1<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-		'During the game <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> moves behind you and his hands gliding over your endeavors hips and lips are drawn to the neck.'
+		'During the game, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> moves behind you, his hands gliding over your hips and lips drawn to your neck.'
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'foreplay', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -375,8 +375,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'billsvid':
 				gs 'stat'
 				$ImageNeededPlacholder
 				! WD: IMAGE NEEDED ~ '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/bil0<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-				'You removed his hand with the words "Well, not here."'
-				'When your time is up <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> said that he has to run and left.'
+				'You remove his hands with the words, "Not here."'
+				'When your time is up, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says that he has to run and leaves.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt $svidboy_home, $svidboy_home_arg
 			end
@@ -387,7 +387,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'billsvid':
 		act 'Let him continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/bil2<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-			'You lozhite cue on the table and relax allowing him to continue to caress your body, kissing it down lower and lower.'
+			'You lay down the cue on the table and relax, allowing him to continue to caress your body, kissing it down lower and lower.'
 			
 			gs 'willpower', 'cuni', 'resist'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -398,8 +398,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'billsvid':
 					gs 'stat'
 					$ImageNeededPlacholder
 					! WD: IMAGE NEEDED ~ '<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/bil0<<picrand>>.jpg"></center>'
-					'You removed his hand with the words "Well, not here"'
-					'When your time is up <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> said that he has to run and left.'
+					'You remove his hands with the words, "Not here."'
+					'When your time is up, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says that he has to run and leaves.'
 
 					act 'Leave':gt $svidboy_home, $svidboy_home_arg
 				end
@@ -431,14 +431,14 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kafesvid':
 	menu_off = 1
 	gs 'stat'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/kafe0.jpg"></center>'
-	'And you <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> went into a small cafe in the center, it seems that it does not enjoy popularity, site visitors almost there, you sat at a table in one of the private booths.'
+	'You and <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> go into a small cafe. It seems that it does not enjoy popularity, as you are almost the only customers. You sit at a table in one of the private booths.'
 
 	act 'Wait for the order':
 		cla
 		*clr
 		minut += 60
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/kafe1.jpg"></center>'
-		'Once you have brought order <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> began to pester you, he and Narov kiss you, and slid his hands over your body, then caressing his chest, then squeeze your buttocks.'
+		'Once you have made your order, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> begins to pester you, kissing you and sliding his hands over your body, one moment caressing your chest, then another squeezing your buttocks.'
 		
 		gs 'willpower', 'foreplay', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -448,8 +448,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kafesvid':
 				gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 				gs 'stat'
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/kafe0.jpg"></center>'
-				'You removed his hand with the words "Well, not here"'
-				'After some time <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> said that he has to run and left.'
+				'You remove his hands with the words, "Not here."'
+				'After some time, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says that he has to run and leaves.'
 
 				act 'Leave':gt $svidboy_home, $svidboy_home_arg
 			end
@@ -460,7 +460,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kafesvid':
 		act 'Let him continue':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/kafe2.jpg"></center>'
-			'Soon you remain almost without clothes, and <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> was kissing you underbelly, dropping to the pubis.'
+			'Soon, you are almost without clothes, and <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> is kissing your underbelly, dropping to the pubis.'
 			
 			gs 'willpower', 'cuni', 'resist'
 			if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -470,8 +470,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'kafesvid':
 					gs 'willpower', 'pay', 'resist'
 					gs 'stat'
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/boyfriend/sex/event/kafe0.jpg"></center>'
-					'The last time you came all the same in yourself and realizing that you are in a cafe, pushed him, "No, we have enough in the same cafe, patience to the house"'
-					'But soon <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> said that he has to run and left.'
+					'At the last second, you come to your senses and realize that you are in a cafe. "No, we have done enough in this cafe, patience until we get home," you insist, pushing him away.'
+					'But soon, <<$loverdesc[lover_number]>> says that he has to run and leaves.'
 
 					act 'Leave':gt $svidboy_home, $svidboy_home_arg
 				end