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[GRAMMAR] - Wrong position of whitespace after or before comma/fullstop

Crux 3 years ago
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locations/NikoPayback.qsrc

@@ -430,7 +430,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] =  'Payback 4':
 				*clr & cla
 				gs'stat'
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/niko/nikomisc/cum/thighs.mp4"></video></center>'
-				'Niko continues fucking you as he keeps you off the ground. You can''t help but feel somewhat impressed at his strength as he holds you up. You can hear Niko whispering in your ear. "How are you liking your fucking?" You look back at him then nod which seems to turn him on ,as he begins breathing faster. Niko''s breath suddenly stops as he pulls his dick out of you then begins rubbing his dick between your legs, milking his penis on the floor in front of you. After Niko finishes, you turn to him then ask, "Are you satisfied Niko? May I leave now?" Niko gives your ass a firm smack as he replies, "You can go now but never forget that you belong to me." You quickly pick up your clothes then get dressed before leaving the boys restroom.'
+				'Niko continues fucking you as he keeps you off the ground. You can''t help but feel somewhat impressed at his strength as he holds you up. You can hear Niko whispering in your ear. "How are you liking your fucking?" You look back at him then nod which seems to turn him on, as he begins breathing faster. Niko''s breath suddenly stops as he pulls his dick out of you then begins rubbing his dick between your legs, milking his penis on the floor in front of you. After Niko finishes, you turn to him then ask, "Are you satisfied Niko? May I leave now?" Niko gives your ass a firm smack as he replies, "You can go now but never forget that you belong to me." You quickly pick up your clothes then get dressed before leaving the boys restroom.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'vaginal', 5, 'rough', 'sub'
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'

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locations/alexandriaEv.qsrc

@@ -207,7 +207,7 @@ end if
 if $ARGS[0] = 'interview3':
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Aleksei?</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/city/alexandria/chair.jpg"></center>'
-	'You finally reach a study where a morose... Alexandria? sit on a couch, and in an interesting twist, there isn''t another one for you to lie.'
+	'You finally reach a study where a morose... Alexandria? Sit on a couch, and in an interesting twist, there isn''t another one for you to lie.'
 	if $start_type = 'tg':
 		npc_rel['A241'] +=1
 		'"Yes Mr.Kuznetsu... I am another victim of Rikudo''s games, that is the reason for my interest in you."'

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locations/buklinik_event.qsrc

@@ -636,7 +636,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'event2':
 					'- Podn... To podnabratsya experience.'
 					'- WHAT??? Michael A. what you can? - Offended you.'
 					'- Excuse me, I didn''t mean to offend you or to insult, just...'
-					'- Just that? what do you take me for?'
+					'- Just that? What do you take me for?'
 					'- Izvinite again... I shouldn''t have to offer you this. Just forget.'
 					act 'Okay I think!':
 						cls

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locations/gschool_sex.qsrc

@@ -1358,7 +1358,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'petka_homework':
 	'You smile at him. "You are going to do my homework for <i>all</i> my classes from now on. You can drop it off in my locker every morning before school."'
 	'He looks crest fallen. "All of it? Every day?" he says in a whinny voice.'
 	'You give him a hard look. "It''s either that or I go get the coach right now."'
-	'He pales and nods. "OK ,OK. I''ll do all of your homework. Can I leave now?"'
+	'He pales and nods. "OK, OK. I''ll do all of your homework. Can I leave now?"'
 	'You make him squirm before nodding. "Yeah. Now get out of here you little pervert!" He quickly gets dressed then runs out of the locker room. With that taken care of, you go back to getting dressed.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 3
 	gs 'arousal', 'end'

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locations/music_onlinemusic.qsrc

@@ -230,7 +230,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'uploadallmusic':
 	'<center><img src="images/pc/activities/music/uploadmusic.jpg"/></center>'
 	if will_cost > 0:
-		'You go through the songs you recorded, and clear out the old ones that you really ,really don''t like anymore then after a moment of hesitation you take a deep breath and click on the "Upload" button.
+		'You go through the songs you recorded and clear out the old ones that you really, really don''t like anymore. Then after a moment of hesitation you take a deep breath and click on the "Upload" button.
 		The screen changes and one by one, your songs move over to the internet for all to see.'
 		'You bite in your lip, then close the screen before you change your mind and delete them.'
 	else

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locations/party_boys.qsrc

@@ -516,7 +516,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'in':
 			else
 				'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/resident/rekshome/party/reksparty_party_kuh_5_<<rand(24,25)>>.mp4"></video></center>'
 			end
-			'The guys stand over you and begin to finish at the same time, spurting streams of semen on you from all sides. Some of them come into your mouth and you swallow copious amounts of sperm. You sit in front of the happy guys, licking every last drop off of their limp dicks. "Good work boys. We really used this bitch up." ,you hear a muffled voice say, as you begin to fall asleep.'
+			'The guys stand over you and begin to finish at the same time, spurting streams of semen on you from all sides. Some of them come into your mouth and you swallow copious amounts of sperm. You sit in front of the happy guys, licking every last drop off of their limp dicks. "Good work boys. We really used this bitch up.", you hear a muffled voice say, as you begin to fall asleep.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Fall asleep': gt 'dinParty', 'sleep'