Her name is Pauline, not Paulina.

locations/dimaRevenge.qsrc

@@ -618,11 +618,11 @@ if dimaRevChoice = 2:
 						!!combat!!
 						!!if you win!!
 						'Lera is unconscious on the ground as you hold Lena by the hair. "I didn''t say shit about you," you tell her.'
-						'You let go of her and turn to head home, but then you see Vitek walking towards you. He looks pissed. He must have just seen you beat up his sister. You make to run but are tripped by Lena. You close your eyes, afraid of what he''ll do to you, but nothing happens. You open your eyes to see Ivan<<$dimaRevenge[''Fedor Involved'']>>holding Vitek back. Vitek is swearing at the top of his lungs. As you get up and dust yourself off, Dan, Vasily, Paulina and Ekaterina come to investigate and see Vitek getting ganged up on. Things get crazy after that.'
+						'You let go of her and turn to head home, but then you see Vitek walking towards you. He looks pissed. He must have just seen you beat up his sister. You make to run but are tripped by Lena. You close your eyes, afraid of what he''ll do to you, but nothing happens. You open your eyes to see Ivan<<$dimaRevenge[''Fedor Involved'']>>holding Vitek back. Vitek is swearing at the top of his lungs. As you get up and dust yourself off, Dan, Vasily, Pauline and Ekaterina come to investigate and see Vitek getting ganged up on. Things get crazy after that.'
 					elseif win = 1:
 						!!if you lose!!
 						'The two of them are too strong for you and you get knocked to the ground. They start kicking you. You do your best to block their kicks while trying to get up, but they keep knocking you down. You are about to give up when Ivan<<$dimaRevenge[''Fedor Involved'']>>show up. Fedor tosses Lera aside and Ivan grabs Lena by the shoulders and tries to calm her down. Suddenly you hear an angry yell, and you see Vitek charging towards Ivan.
-						You get up in time to see Dan, Vasily Paulina, and Ekaterina arrive, followed by Erast and Lazar. Things get crazy after that, with Roman showing up last.'
+						You get up in time to see Dan, Vasily Pauline and Ekaterina arrive, followed by Erast and Lazar. Things get crazy after that, with Roman showing up last.'
 						act 'School brawl':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/revenge/bigbrawl.jpg"></center>'
@@ -898,7 +898,7 @@ if dimaRevChoice = 4:
 				*clr & cla
 				grupvalue[4] += 2
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/boy/dimka/revenge/cheers.jpg"></center>'
-				'You head to the old school building, with Anushka. Inside is the old music room, built to be soundproof. It is the perfect place to avoid being heard, even if most of the windows are now just borded up. You knock on the door, so the people inside can quiet down, before heading in. Lavrenti hands you a beer as you enter. The party is in full swing and everyone is drinking and swearing. Anushka goes to join Radomir and his band. As soon as she joins them, they start one of their songs. Vitek, Dan and Vasily are in a corner laughing. Paulina is drinking a bottle of vodka while talking to Lena and Lera.'
+				'You head to the old school building, with Anushka. Inside is the old music room, built to be soundproof. It is the perfect place to avoid being heard, even if most of the windows are now just borded up. You knock on the door, so the people inside can quiet down, before heading in. Lavrenti hands you a beer as you enter. The party is in full swing and everyone is drinking and swearing. Anushka goes to join Radomir and his band. As soon as she joins them, they start one of their songs. Vitek, Dan and Vasily are in a corner laughing and Pauline is drinking a bottle of vodka while talking to Lena and Lera.'
 				*nl
 				'Alyona is sitting by twenty bottles of Zhiguljovskoje, guarding them from anyone who tries to take one. You can''t believe she bought all that just for herself, the other half of them seem to have been handed out. As you think that, Alyona sees you staring at her and offers you a bottle which you gladly accept.'
 				*nl

locations/gschool_chats.qsrc

@@ -5,19 +5,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
 	*clr & cla
 	minut += 5
 	if ((hotcat >= 8 and rand(1,10) = 1) or (hotcat >= 5 and hotcat < 8 and rand(1,20) = 1)) and gschool_gropeday ! daystart:
-		!!It is more likely that somebody will grap the player''s butt the hooter she is.
+		!!It is more likely that somebody will grab the player''s butt the hotter she is.
 		menu_off = 1
 		gschool_gropeday = daystart
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
 			gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 'tiny'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/buttgrab_nopanties.jpg"></center>'
-			'When you enter the hallway heading for the classroom the nerds hangout in, you feel someone moving in behind you and quickly pulling your skirt up. Your skirt is barely in the air before you feel hands pawing at your naked ass. As you move to turn around, the hand quickly pulls away. By the time you can see who''s behind you, you find half the guys in your class standing there, all looking in different directions and trying to act inconspicuous, a few of them even having the gall to whistle innocently. You try to tell from their faces which one of them just touched you. You hear several classmates remark on your lack of panties.'
+			'When you enter the hallway heading for the classroom the nerds hang out in, you feel someone moving in behind you and quickly pulling your skirt up. Your skirt is barely in the air before you feel hands pawing at your naked ass. As you move to turn around, the hand quickly pulls away. By the time you can see who''s behind you, you find half the guys in your class standing there, all looking in different directions and trying to act inconspicuous, a few of them even having the gall to whistle innocently. You try to tell from their faces which one of them just touched you as you hear several classmates remark on your lack of panties.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 1, 'humiliation'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 		else
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/boysex_tualet.jpg"></center>'
-			'When you enter the hallway heading for the classroom the nerds hangout in, you feel someone moving in behind you and quickly pulling your skirt up. Your skirt is barely in the air before you feel hands pawing at your ass. As you move to turn around, the hand quickly pulls away. By the time you can see who''s behind you, you find half the guys in your class standing there, all looking in different directions and trying to act inconspicuous, a few of them even having the gall to whistle innocently. You try to tell from their faces which one of them just touched you.'
+			'When you enter the hallway heading for the classroom the nerds hang out in, you feel someone moving in behind you and quickly pulling your skirt up. Your skirt is barely in the air before you feel hands pawing at your ass. As you move to turn around, the hand quickly pulls away. By the time you can see who''s behind you, you find half the guys in your class standing there, all looking in different directions and trying to act inconspicuous, a few of them even having the gall to whistle innocently. You try to tell from their faces which one of them just touched you.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'flashlite', 1, 'humiliation'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -33,9 +33,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
 				gs 'gschool_socialchg', 'group_rel_change', 'nerds', 1
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A142', 'like'
 				if grupTipe = 3:
-					'You go to the classroom that you and your fellow nerds like to gather in. You find them all clustered around a table talking and engaged in a variety of pet projects, as usual. You get several warm smiles and greetings from your fellow nerds.'
+					'You go to the classroom that you and your fellow nerds like to gather in and find them all clustered around a table talking and engaged in a variety of pet projects. You get several warm smiles and greetings from your fellow nerds.'
 				else
-					'You go to one of the classrooms that the nerds like to gather in. You find them all clustered around a table talking and engaged in a variety of pet projects. Some of them seem to be surprised at what you are wearing but they also seem to approve.'
+					'You go to one of the classrooms that the nerds like to gather in and find them all clustered around a table talking and engaged in a variety of pet projects. Some of them seem to be surprised at what you''re wearing, but they also seem to approve.'
 				end
 				'Artem, Petka, Julia, Natasha, Zinaida, Evgeny, Feofan and Gerasim are sitting around some tables they''ve moved together.'
 				*nl
@@ -44,9 +44,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A12', 'like'
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A16', 'like'
 				if grupTipe = 3:
-					'You go to the classroom that you and your fellow nerds like to gather in. You find them all clustered around a table talking and engaged in a variety of pet projects, as usual. Natasha notices your uniform. "Oh I like your uniform, it''s very pretty. Don''t you think?" She nudges Julia, who looks at you and blushes. "Yes very pretty." she says in agreement.'
+					'You go to the classroom that you and your fellow nerds like to gather in and find them all clustered around a table talking and engaged in a variety of pet projects. Natasha notices your uniform. "Oh I like your uniform, it''s very pretty. Don''t you think?" She nudges Julia, who looks at you and blushes. "Yes, very pretty..." she says in agreement.'
 				else
-					'You go to one of the classrooms that the nerds like to gather in. You find them all clustered around a table talking and engaged in a variety of pet projects. Natasha notices your uniform. "Oh I like your uniform, it''s very pretty. Don''t you think?" She nudges Julia, who looks at you and blushes. "Yes very pretty." she says in agreement.'
+					'You go to one of the classrooms that the nerds like to gather in and find them all clustered around a table talking and engaged in a variety of pet projects. Natasha notices your uniform. "Oh I like your uniform, it''s very pretty. Don''t you think?" She nudges Julia, who looks at you and blushes. "Yes, very pretty..." she says in agreement.'
 				end
 				'Artem, Petka, Julia, Natasha, Zinaida, Evgeny, Feofan and Gerasim are sitting around some tables they''ve moved together.'
 				*nl
@@ -57,10 +57,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
 				if soniaPS > 0: gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A25', 'like'
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A159', 'like'
 				if grupTipe = 3:
-					'You enter the classroom that you and your fellow nerds like to hang out. You find them, as usual, all gathered around a table talking and engaging in various hobby projects. Few of them look up just as you walk closer. A couple of the boys, Feofan and Artem, are struggling to conceal their disapproving stares about your choosen uniform. Julia''s eyes also seem to linger on your attire for just a bit longer and you don''t feel her gaze is all that welcoming either.'
-					'Artem, Petka, Julia, Natasha, Zinaida, Evgeny, Feofan and Gerasim are sitting around some tables they''ve moved together.'
+					'You enter the classroom that you and your fellow nerds like to hang out in and find them, as usual, all gathered around a table talking and engaging in various hobby projects. A few of them look up as you walk closer. Feofan and Artem are struggling to conceal their disapproving stares about your choosen uniform while Julia''s eyes seem to linger on your attire for just a bit longer; you don''t feel her gaze is all that welcoming either.'
 				else
-					'You go to the classrooms that the nerdy students like to hang out. You find them, as always, all nerding around a table talking and engaging in various personal projects. Several of them look up just as you walk closer. A couple of the boys, Artem and Petka, both seem to be struggling to hide their judgmental stares about your choice of uniform. You don''t find the look Julia has in her eyes all that comforting either.'
+					'You go to the classrooms that the nerdy students like to hang out in and find them, as always, all nerding around a table talking and engaging in various personal projects. Several of them look up as you walk closer. Artem and Petka both seem to be struggling to hide their judgmental stares about your choice of uniform and you don''t find the look Julia has in her eyes all that comforting either.'
 				end
 				*nl
 				gs 'gschool_groups', 'nerds'
@@ -73,9 +72,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
 				if soniaPS > 0: gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A25', 'love'
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A159', 'like'
 				if grupTipe = 3:
-					'When you walk in, the room goes dead silent and everyone is staring at you. Several of the nerds blush at the scandalous display of flesh from your uniform, or lack there of. Feofan finally speaks up. "What are you wearing?" Natasha butts in. "A better questions is why?" As you get closer, the nerds all share looks before looking at Feofan, who swallows and then says. "Maybe you should go hang out somewhere else or go change or something." Then the nerds all close ranks, making sure not to give you space to walk up and talk to them. The outcasts on the other hand don''t seem to care as much.'
+					'When you walk in, the room goes dead silent and everyone stares at you. Several of the nerds blush at the scandalous display of flesh from your uniform, or lack there of before Feofan finally speaks up. "What are you wearing?" Natasha butts in. "A better questions is why?" As you get closer, the nerds all share looks before looking at Feofan, who swallows. "Maybe you should go hang out somewhere else or go change or something?" They all close ranks, making sure not to give you space to walk up and talk to them. The outcasts, on the other hand, don''t seem to care as much.'
 				else
-					'When you walk in, the room goes dead silent and everyone is staring at you. Several of the nerds blush at the scandalous display of flesh from your uniform, or lack there of. The nerds all close ranks, making sure not to give you space to walk up and talk to them. The outcasts on the other hand don''t seem to care as much.'
+					'When you walk in, the room goes dead silent and everyone stares at you. Several of the nerds blush at the scandalous display of flesh from your uniform, or lack there of before they all close ranks, making sure not to give you space to walk up and talk to them. The outcasts, on the other hand, don''t seem to care as much.'
 				end
 			end
 		else
@@ -84,8 +83,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'nerds':
 			gs 'gschool_groups', 'nerds'
 		end
 		*nl
-		'The outcasts are mostly hiding away from everyone else, hoping that no one will pick on them today.'
-		'Lesco is reading a book. Meanwhile '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, '', 'Fedor is sitting on a window sill staring outside, looking lonely and depressed.')+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, '', 'Sonia is sitting at a desk typing on her phone.')+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5 and npc_grupTipe['A18'] ! 5 and npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Petia is roaming around, like he is about to approach someone.', ' Petia is roaming around, like he is about to approach someone.')
+		'The outcasts are hiding away from everyone else, hoping that no one will pick on them today.'
+		'Lesco is reading a book '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, '', 'Fedor is sitting on a window sill staring outside')+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, '', 'Sonia is sitting at a desk typing on her phone')+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5 and npc_grupTipe['A18'] ! 5 and npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'and Petia is roaming around like he''s about to approach someone.', ' and Petia is roaming around like he''s about to approach someone.')
 		gs 'gschool_groups', 'outcasts'
 		act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 	end
@@ -97,13 +96,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	if ((hotcat >= 8 and rand(1,10) = 1) or (hotcat >= 5 and hotcat < 8 and rand(1,20) = 1)) and gschool_gropeday ! daystart:
-		!!It is more likely that somebody will grap the player''s butt the hooter she is.
+		!!It is more likely that somebody will grab the player''s butt the hotter she is.
 		menu_off = 1
 		gschool_gropeday = daystart
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
 			gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 'tiny'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/buttgrab_nopanties.jpg"></center>'
-			'When you enter the hallway heading for the stairwell, you feel someone moving in behind you and quickly pulling your skirt up. Your skirt is barely in the air before you feel hands pawing at your naked ass. As you move to turn around, the hand quickly pulls away. By the time you can see who''s behind you, you find half the guys in your class standing there, all looking in different directions and trying to act inconspicuous, a few of them even having the gall to whistle innocently. You try to tell from their faces which one of them just touched you. You hear several classmates remark on your lack of panties.'
+			'When you enter the hallway heading for the stairwell, you feel someone moving in behind you and quickly pulling your skirt up. Your skirt is barely in the air before you feel hands pawing at your naked ass. As you move to turn around, the hand quickly pulls away. By the time you can see who''s behind you, you find half the guys in your class standing there, all looking in different directions and trying to act inconspicuous, a few of them even having the gall to whistle innocently. You try to tell from their faces which one of them just touched you as you hear several classmates remark on your lack of panties.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 1, 'humiliation'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -126,23 +125,23 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 					gs 'gschool_socialchg', 'group_rel_change', 'gopniks', -5
 					gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A189', 5
 					
-					'You go to the stairwell that you and your fellow gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations, as usual.'
-					'At first, a couple of them stare at you and then more and more of them do. Finally, Dan laughs and Lavrenti speaks up. "What are you wearing?" They just seem stunned at your uniform. Anushka chimes in. "Please tell me you just lost some kind of bet." Several others comment, all expressing displeasure at your choice of uniform. After a few minutes of ridicule they finally lose interest in you, but you can tell you lost their respect and maybe more today.'
+					'You head to the stairwell that you and your fellow gopniks like to gather in and find them leaning against the wall or sitting on the stairs engaged in a variety of conversations.'
+					'A few of them stare at you before Dan laughs and Lavrenti speaks up. "What are you wearing?" They seem stunned at your uniform as Anushka chimes in. "Please tell me you just lost some kind of bet?" Several others comment, all expressing displeasure at your choice of uniform. After a few minutes of ridicule, they finally lose interest in you, but you can tell you lost their respect and maybe more today.'
 				else
 					grupvalue[4] -= 5
 					gs 'gschool_socialchg', 'group_rel_change', 'gopniks', -2
 					
-					'You go to the stairwell that the gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations.'
-					'At first, a couple of them stare at you and then more and more of them do. Finally, Radomir speaks up. "Are you lost or something?" Paulina chimes in, pointing back the way you came. "The nerds are back that way, loser." Several others also comment, all expressing displeasure at your choice of uniform. You feel very unwelcome among them, which makes you uneasy. They are well known to bully their fellow students, maybe this was a bad idea.'
+					'You head to the stairwell that the gopniks like to gather in and find them leaning against the wall or sitting on the stairs engaged in a variety of conversations.'
+					'A few of them stare at you before Radomir speaks up. "Are you lost or something?" Pauline then chimes in, pointing back the way you came. "The nerds are back that way, loser." Several others also comment, all expressing displeasure at your choice of uniform. You feel very unwelcome among them, which makes you uneasy.'
 				end
 				'Vitek, Dan, Vasily, Lena, Lera, Pauline, Alyona, Anushka, Ekaterina, Radomir, Lavrenti, Arkadi, Roman, Valentin and Niko are all hanging around.'
 				gs 'gschool_groups', 'gopniks'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			elseif PCloSkirt < 5 and PCloThinness < 5 and PCloBra = 0:
 				if grupTipe = 4:
-					'You go to the stairwell that you and your fellow gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations, as usual.'
+					'You head to the stairwell that you and your fellow gopniks like to gather in and find them leaning against the wall or sitting on the stairs engaged in a variety of conversations.'
 				else
-					'You go to the stairwell that the gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations.'
+					'You head to the stairwell that the gopniks like to gather in and find them leaning against the wall or sitting on the stairs engaged in a variety of conversations.'
 				end
 				'Vitek, Dan, Vasily, Lena, Lera, Pauline, Alyona, Anushka, Ekaterina, Radomir, Lavrenti, Arkadi, Roman, Valentin and Niko are hanging around.'
 				gs 'gschool_groups', 'gopniks'
@@ -154,9 +153,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A144', 'love'
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A189', 'like'
 				if grupTipe = 4:
-					'You go to the stairwell that you and your fellow gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations, as usual. A few of them take note of your slightly risky uniform and seem to approve of it.'
+					'You head to the stairwell that you and your fellow gopniks like to gather in and find them leaning against the wall or sitting on the stairs engaged in a variety of conversations. A few of them take note of your slightly risky uniform and seem to approve of it.'
 				else
-					'You go to the stairwell that the gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations. A few of them take note of your slightly risky uniform and seem to approve of it.'
+					'You head to the stairwell that the gopniks like to gather in and find them leaning against the wall or sitting on the stairs engaged in a variety of conversations. A few of them take note of your slightly risky uniform and seem to approve of it.'
 				end
 				'Vitek, Dan, Vasily, Lena, Lera, Pauline, Alyona, Anushka, Ekaterina, Radomir, Lavrenti, Arkadi, Roman, Valentin and Niko are hanging around.'
 				gs 'gschool_groups', 'gopniks'
@@ -171,10 +170,10 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 					pcs_mood -= 10
 					gs 'stat'
 					
-					'You go to the stairwell that '+iif(grupTipe = 4,'you and your fellow','the')+' gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations, as usual. As you approach, Dan stands up and whistles. "Hey there slut, why don''t you come over here and suck my dick?" Several of the other gopniks laugh as well, a few of the guys comment about being next in line. You feel yourself getting very nervous around them dressed the way you are and fear they might actually try something. No one comes down to this end of the school at this time of the day after all.'
+					'You head to the stairwell that '+iif(grupTipe = 4,'you and your fellow','the')+' gopniks like to gather in and find them leaning against the wall or sitting on the stairs engaged in a variety of conversations. As you approach, Dan stands up and whistles. "Hey there, slut. Why don''t you come over here and suck my dick?" Several of the other gopniks laugh and a few of the guys comment about being next in line. You feel yourself getting very nervous around them dressed the way you are and fear they might actually try something. No one comes down to this end of the school at this time of the day after all.'
 					*nl
 					'Vitek stands up and shoves Dan up against the wall. "What did you say about my girl?"'
-					'Dan just swallows while everyone else shuts up. "Hey I was just joking, we all know she is your girl."'
+					'Dan just swallows while everyone else shuts up. "Hey, I was just joking! We all know she''s your girl."'
 					'Vitek lets go of him. "Then watch your fucking mouth!" He turns towards you and walks over, grabbing you by the arm and dragging you over to the side. "Just what are you wearing? You''re dressed like a slut! Don''t wear this to school again. Now get out of here." He then shoves you away. You glance back, but know better than to tempt fate so you walk away.'
 					act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				elseif kotovLoveQW > 0 and kotovLoveQW['clo_comment'] = 1:
@@ -182,18 +181,17 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 					pcs_mood -= 10
 					gs 'stat'
 					
-					'You go to the stairwell that '+iif(grupTipe = 4,'you and your fellow','the')+' gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations, as usual. As you approach, everyone notices you and when Vitek sees you, he tenses up and angrily walks across to you. He grabs you roughly by the arm and drags you out of the stairwell. "What did I tell you about coming to school dressed like this? No girl of mine is going to walk around dressed like some slut. Now don''t come back to school dressed like this again!" He roughly shoves you into the wall and storms back to the other gopniks.'
+					'You head to the stairwell that '+iif(grupTipe = 4,'you and your fellow','the')+' gopniks like to gather in and find them leaning against the wall or sitting on the stairs engaged in a variety of conversations. As you approach, everyone notices you and when Vitek sees you, he tenses up and angrily walks over to you before grabbing you roughly by the arm and dragging you out of the stairwell. "What did I tell you about coming to school dressed like this? No girl of mine is going to walk around dressed like some slut. Now don''t come back to school dressed like this again!" He roughly shoves you into the wall and storms back to the other gopniks.'
 					act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				elseif grupTipe = 4:
-					'You go to the stairwell that you and your fellow gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations, as usual. As you approach, Dan stands up and whistles. "Hey there slut, why don''t you come over here and suck my dick?" Several of the other gopniks laugh as well and a few of the guys comment about being next in line. You feel yourself getting very nervous around them dressed the way you are and fear they might actually try something. No one comes down to this end of the school at this time of the day after all.'
-					'Vitek, Dan, Vasily, Lena, Lera, Pauline, Alyona, Anushka, Ekaterina, Radomir, Lavrenti, Arkadi, Roman, Valentin and Niko are hanging around.'
+					'You head to the stairwell that you and your fellow gopniks like to gather in and find them leaning against the wall or sitting on the stairs engaged in a variety of conversations. As you approach, Dan stands up and whistles. "Hey there, slut. Why don''t you come over here and suck my dick?" Several of the other gopniks laugh and a few of the guys comment about being next in line. You feel yourself getting very nervous around them dressed the way you are and fear they might actually try something. No one comes down to this end of the school at this time of the day after all.'
 					gs 'gschool_groups', 'gopniks'
 					act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				else
 					grupvalue[4] -= 5
 					gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 3
 					
-					'You go to the stairwell that the gopniks like to gather in. You find them leaning against the wall, sitting on the steps or even just sitting on the landing of the stairs, engaged in a variety of conversations. As you approach, Dan stands up and whistles. "Hey there slut, why don''t you come over here and suck my dick?" Several of the other gopniks laugh as well and a few of the guys comment as well. "Like she came to see you Dan! She obviously came to throw herself at me." Radomir says. You feel yourself getting very nervous around them dressed the way you are and fear they might actually try something. No one comes down to this end of the school at this time of the day after all.'
+					'You head to the stairwell that the gopniks like to gather in and find them leaning against the wall or sitting on the stairs engaged in a variety of conversations. As you approach, Dan stands up and whistles. "Hey there, slut. Why don''t you come over here and suck my dick?" Several of the other gopniks laugh and a few of the guys comment as well. "Like she came to see you Dan! She obviously came to throw herself at me," Radomir says. You feel yourself getting very nervous around them dressed the way you are and fear they might actually try something. No one comes down to this end of the school at this time of the day after all.'
 					gs 'gschool_groups', 'gopniks'
 					act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 				end
@@ -214,13 +212,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cooljocks':
 	minut += 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	if ((hotcat >= 8 and rand(1,10) = 1) or (hotcat >= 5 and hotcat < 8 and rand(1,20) = 1)) and gschool_gropeday ! daystart:
-		!!It is more likely that somebody will grap the player''s butt the hooter she is.
+		!!It is more likely that somebody will grab the player''s butt the hotter she is.
 		menu_off = 1
 		gschool_gropeday = daystart
 		if $pantyworntype = 'none':
 			gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', 'tiny'
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/buttgrab_nopanties.jpg"></center>'
-			'When you enter the hallway, you feel someone moving in behind you and quickly pulling your skirt up. Your skirt is barely in the air before you feel hands pawing at your naked ass. As you move to turn around, the hand quickly pulls away. By the time you can see who''s behind you, you find half the guys in your class standing there, all looking in different directions and trying to act inconspicuous, a few of them even having the gall to whistle innocently. You try to tell from their faces which one of them just touched you. You hear several classmates remark on your lack of panties.'
+			'When you enter the hallway, you feel someone moving in behind you and quickly pulling your skirt up. Your skirt is barely in the air before you feel hands pawing at your naked ass. As you move to turn around, the hand quickly pulls away. By the time you can see who''s behind you, you find half the guys in your class standing there, all looking in different directions and trying to act inconspicuous, a few of them even having the gall to whistle innocently. You try to tell from their faces which one of them just touched you as you hear several classmates remark on your lack of panties.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'flash', 1, 'humiliation'
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -231,11 +229,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cooljocks':
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 		end
-		act 'Ignore it and talk to the cool kids and jocks': gt 'gschool_chats', 'cooljocks'
+		act 'Ignore it': gt 'gschool_chats', 'cooljocks'
 		act 'Identify the perpetrator': gt 'gschool_events1', 'butt_grab'
 	else
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/chat/cooljocks.jpg"></center>'
-		'When the break finally comes, the girls wander through the hallways of the school, gossiping about pretty much everyone they know. The guys are standing around in small groups, some of them sneaking off to have a smoke behind the school building.'
+		'When the break finally comes, the girls wander through the hallways of the school, gossiping about pretty much everyone they know while the guys are standing around in small groups, some of them sneaking off to have a smoke behind the school building.'
 		if PCloStyle2 = 4:
 			if PCloInhibit <= 10:
 				if fame['pav_sex'] > 0: gs 'fame', 'pav', 'sex', -1
@@ -259,13 +257,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cooljocks':
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A165', -1
 				
 				if christinaQW['fight'] = 1 or christinaQW['blackmail'] = 2:
-					'As you approach them, you notice some of them giving you a disapproving look as Lizaveta takes your picture and then starts texting, obviously sending the picture around. Vicky is smirking a bit and then whispers something to Vanya and Katja.'
+					'As you approach them, you notice some of them giving you a disapproving look as Lizaveta takes your picture and starts texting, obviously sending the picture around. Vicky smirks before whispering something to Vanya and Katja.'
 				else
-					'As you approach them, you notice some of them giving you a disapproving look and Christina starts to laugh. "What are you wearing? Did mommy dress you? I mean we are all glad she did, the more clothes you wear that hide that hideous body the better." Lariska and Lina add their own snide remarks similar to Christina''s and several other students laugh at her comments. Lizaveta takes your picture and then starts texting, obviously sending the picture around. Vicky is smirking a bit and then whispers something to Vanya and Katja.'
+					'As you approach them, you notice some of them giving you a disapproving look as Christina starts to laugh. "What are you wearing? Did mommy dress you? I mean we''re all glad she did, the more clothes you wear that hide that hideous body the better." Lariska and Lina add their own snide remarks similar to Christina''s and several other students laugh at her comments as Lizaveta takes your picture and starts texting, obviously sending the picture around. Vicky smirks before whispering something to Vanya and Katja.'
 				end
-				'Stasya glances at Bella. "My god, she is an absolute social disaster. Really no sense of style at all." Then she turns towards Andrey. "If I ever wore something like that, would you still love me?"'
-				'Andrey shakes his head. "Hell no, a man has to have his standards after all.", which just gets more and more of them to laugh.'
-				'Dimka steps forwards. "Maybe you''re lost? The nerds and outcasts are over that way." He points in the direction of the classroom the nerds and outcasts hang out in. "Perhaps you would find those who might appreciate your sense of... style there." Igor, Irina, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+' Marcus, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+'Svyatoslav, Veronika, Lazar and Erast either ignore what is going on or join in on mocking your clothes.'
+				'Stasya glances at Bella. "My god, she''s an absolute social disaster. Really no sense of style at all." She then turns towards Andrey. "If I ever wore something like that, would you still love me?"'
+				'Andrey shakes his head. "Hell no, a man has to have his standards after all." This results in more of them laughing at you.'
+				'Dimka steps forwards. "Maybe you''re lost? The nerds and outcasts are over that way." He points in the direction of the classroom the nerds and outcasts hang out in. "Perhaps you''ll find those who might appreciate your sense of... style there." Igor, Irina, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+' Marcus, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+'Svyatoslav, Veronika, Lazar and Erast either ignore what''s going on or join in on mocking your clothes.'
 				gs 'gschool_groups', 'popular'
 				gs 'gschool_groups', 'jocks'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -284,7 +282,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cooljocks':
 					gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A139', 1
 					gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A140', 1
 					
-					'As you approach them, several of them give you approving looks. Stasya comments "Looking good <<$pcs_nickname>>! Where did you buy that uniform?" Vicky comments as well. "Yeah I like it, it looks very nice." Katja, Irina, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+' Lizaveta and Bella all comment on how nice your outfit looks while Dimka, Marcus, Andrey, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+' and Svyatoslav talk among themselves, obviously not interested in girls fashion. However, you do notice Igor seems to be somewhat paying attention, maybe at you in particular. Christina just pretends you don''t exist while she talks to Lina and Lariska while Veronika is reading something and seems to be unaware of the whole conversation.'
+					'As you approach them, several of them give you approving looks. "Looking good <<$pcs_nickname>>! Where did you buy that uniform?" Stasya comments.' 
+					'"Yeah I like it, it looks very nice," Vicky adds. Katja, Irina, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+' Lizaveta and Bella all comment on how nice your outfit looks while Dimka, Marcus, Andrey, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+' and Svyatoslav talk among themselves. However, you do notice Igor seems to be somewhat paying attention, maybe at you in particular. Christina just pretends you don''t exist while she talks to Lina and Lariska while Veronika is reading something and seems to be entirely unaware of the conversation.'
 
 					gs 'gschool_groups', 'popular'
 					gs 'gschool_groups', 'jocks'
@@ -303,7 +302,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cooljocks':
 					grupvalue[2] += 1
 					if soniaPS = 0: gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A25', 'like'
 					
-					'As you approach them, several of them give you approving looks. Stasya comments "Looking good <<$pcs_nickname>>! Where did you buy that uniform?" Vicky comments as well. "Yeah looking sexy <<$pcs_nickname>>." Katja, Irina, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+' Lizaveta and Bella all comment on how nice your outfit looks while Dimka, Marcus, Andrey, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+' and Svyatoslav talk among themselves, obviously not interested in girls fashion. However, you do notice Igor seems to be somewhat paying attention, maybe to you in partucular. Christina just pretends you don''t exist while she talks to Lina and Lariska while Veronika is reading something and seems to be unaware of the whole conversation.'
+					'As you approach them, several of them give you approving looks. "Looking good <<$pcs_nickname>>! Where did you buy that uniform?" Stasya comments.' 
+					'"Yeah, looking sexy <<$pcs_nickname>>!" Vicky adds. Katja, Irina, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+' Lizaveta and Bella all comment on how nice your outfit looks while Dimka, Marcus, Andrey, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+' and Svyatoslav talk among themselves. However, you do notice Igor seems to be somewhat paying attention, maybe to you in partucular. Christina just pretends you don''t exist while she talks to Lina and Lariska while Veronika is reading something and seems to be entirely unaware of the conversation.'
 
 					gs 'gschool_groups', 'popular'
 					gs 'gschool_groups', 'jocks'
@@ -319,9 +319,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cooljocks':
 					gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A147', 'like'
 					gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A148', 'like'
 					
-					'As you approach them, several of them give you once over, obviously noticing your uniform. Stasya smirks "Someone is trying hard to get the boys to look at her."'
-					'Hearing this, Bella gives you a closer look and says "It wouldn''t be so bad if it was a good quality."'
-					'Dimka adds in. "Now Bella, you know her family can''t afford the finer things in life." If not for the tone of his voice and the smirk, it would almost sound like he was defending you but it comes across as more of an insult. Igor, Katja, Vicky, Irina, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+' Lizaveta, Marcus, Andrey, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+'Svyatoslav, Christina, Lariska, Lina, Veronika, Lazar, Erast and Vanya just stay out of it.'
+					'As you approach them, several of them give you once over, obviously noticing your uniform. "Someone''s trying hard to get the boys to look at her," Stasya says with a smirk.'
+					'Hearing this, Bella gives you a closer look. "It wouldn''t be so bad if it was a good quality."'
+					'"Now Bella, you know her family can''t afford the finer things in life," Dimka adds. If not for the tone of his voice and the smirk, it would almost sound like he was defending you, but it comes across as more of an insult. Igor, Katja, Vicky, Irina, Albina, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+' Lizaveta, Marcus, Andrey, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+'Svyatoslav, Christina, Lariska, Lina, Veronika, Lazar, Erast and Vanya just stay out of it.'
 					gs 'gschool_groups', 'popular'
 					gs 'gschool_groups', 'jocks'
 					act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
@@ -340,9 +340,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cooljocks':
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A139', 'dislike'
 				gs 'npc_relationship', 'modify', 'A140', 'dislike'
 				
-				'As you approach, everyone is staring at you. Bella speaks up. "What on earth are you wearing? Forget to change out of your whoring clothes last night?" Several of the rest laugh and you can sense the general feeling of agreement from the rest.'
-				'Dimka smirks. "Maybe she messed up the wash and her uniform just shrunk and she was too stupid to notice?" and the others laugh even more.'
-				'Albina steps forward. "Get out of here with your whorish clothes! No one wants you around." and you hear several murmers of agreement from the rest. It looks like even Igor, Katja, Vicky, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+'Stasya, Lizaveta, Marcus, Andrey, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+'Svyatoslav, Christina, Lariska, Lina, Veronika, Lazar, Erast and Vanya appear to agree. They either give you the cold shoulder or refuse to meet your eyes. Feeling very unwelcome, you turn around and leave.'
+				'As you approach, everyone is staring at you. Irina speaks up. "What on earth are you wearing? Forget to change out of your whoring clothes last night?" Several of the others laugh and you can sense the general feeling of agreement from the rest.'
+				'Dimka smirks. "Maybe she messed up the wash and her uniform shrunk, but she was too stupid to notice?"'
+				'Bella steps forward. "Get out of here with your whorish clothes! No one wants you around!" You hear several murmers of agreement from the others. It looks like even Igor, Katja, Vicky, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A25'] ! 5, 'Sonia, ', '')+'Stasya, Albina, Lizaveta, Marcus, Andrey, Mefodiy, Ivan, '+iif(npc_grupTipe['A5'] ! 5, 'Fedor, ', '')+'Svyatoslav, Christina, Lariska, Lina, Veronika, Lazar, Erast and Vanya appear to agree. They either give you the cold shoulder or refuse to meet your eyes. Feeling very unwelcome, you turn around and leave.'
 				act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 		else

locations/gschool_detention.qsrc

@@ -58,11 +58,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'wedgie':
 	:wedgie_girl
 	gs 'gschool_events', 'rand_girl_arg', 1, 1, 0, 1, 1, 0
 	if grupTipe = 4 and wedgie_counter < 1000:
-		if $rand_girl ! 'Paulina' and $rand_girl ! 'Lena' and $rand_girl ! 'Lera' and $rand_girl ! 'Alyona': wedgie_counter += 1 & jump 'wedgie_girl'
+		if $rand_girl ! 'Pauline' and $rand_girl ! 'Lena' and $rand_girl ! 'Lera' and $rand_girl ! 'Alyona': wedgie_counter += 1 & jump 'wedgie_girl'
 	elseif grupTipe = 2 and wedgie_counter < 1000:
-		if $rand_girl ! 'Paulina' and $rand_girl ! 'Lena' and $rand_girl ! 'Lera' and $rand_girl ! 'Alyona' and $rand_girl ! 'Christina': wedgie_counter += 1 & jump 'wedgie_girl'
+		if $rand_girl ! 'Pauline' and $rand_girl ! 'Lena' and $rand_girl ! 'Lera' and $rand_girl ! 'Alyona' and $rand_girl ! 'Christina': wedgie_counter += 1 & jump 'wedgie_girl'
 	elseif wedgie_counter < 1000:
-		if $rand_girl ! 'Paulina' and $rand_girl ! 'Lena' and $rand_girl ! 'Lera' and $rand_girl ! 'Alyona' and $rand_girl ! 'Christina' and $rand_girl ! 'Lina' and $rand_girl ! 'Lariska' and $rand_girl ! 'Stasya': wedgie_counter += 1 & jump 'wedgie_girl'
+		if $rand_girl ! 'Pauline' and $rand_girl ! 'Lena' and $rand_girl ! 'Lera' and $rand_girl ! 'Alyona' and $rand_girl ! 'Christina' and $rand_girl ! 'Lina' and $rand_girl ! 'Lariska' and $rand_girl ! 'Stasya': wedgie_counter += 1 & jump 'wedgie_girl'
 	end
 	'<center><b><font color="maroon">Detention</font></b></center>'
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/detention/wedgie.jpg"></center>'

locations/gschool_events.qsrc

@@ -22,7 +22,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teacher_greet':
 			else
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big26.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Good morning Mr. Tsarev, have a nice day. I look forward to your lessons."'
-				'"Hello <<$pcs_firstname>>. I also look forward to such a wonderful student like you being in my class." he replies, obviously not looking you in the face, but somewhere on the level of your hips.'
+				'"Hello <<$pcs_firstname>>. I also look forward to such a wonderful student like you being in my class," he replies while not looking you in the eye, but somewhere on the level of your hips.'
 				npc_rel['A26'] += 1
 			end
 		else
@@ -32,12 +32,12 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teacher_greet':
 				'"Hello <<$pcs_firstname>>. I''m expecting your homework today. Are you prepared, or should I not ask you for it?" he asks in a friendly manner.'
 				'"Oh you know, I tried to do my homework, but something came up late last night with the girls at the club. Can I give it to you tomorrow?" you plead, giving him your sweetest face.'
 				'"Fine, but this is the last time." he says, but he has said that more than once over the years.'
-				'"Thank you, you are such a nice man! I need to find a nice man for myself." smiling to him.'
-				'"Sorry, I''m married." he replies and you both laugh.'
+				'"Thank you, you are such a nice man! I need to find a nice man for myself," you reply while smiling at him.'
+				'"Sorry, I''m married," he replies and you both laugh.'
 				pcs_mood += 5
 			else
 				'"Mr. Tsarev, what will the lesson be about today? The new subject? And maybe you can let us go early?" you ask.'
-				'"Yes, today will be about the new subject. Unfortunately, I can''t let you leave early. The new Director strictly monitors us and said no." he replies sadly.'
+				'"Yes, today will be about the new subject. Unfortunately, I can''t let you leave early. The new Director strictly monitors us and said no," he replies sadly.'
 			end
 			npc_rel['A26'] += 1
 		end
@@ -49,35 +49,35 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teacher_greet':
 		if npc_rel['A26'] < 10:
 			if hotcat < 5:
 				if rand(0,1) = 0:
-					'"Hello Mr. Tsarev. You are so handsome." you say, trying to attract his attention with a smile.'
-					'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you shouldn''t be saying things like that." but still smiles back at you in response.'
+					'"Hello Mr. Tsarev. You are so handsome," you say, trying to attract his attention with a smile.'
+					'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>, you shouldn''t be saying things like that," he replies, but still smiles back at you in response.'
 				else
-					'You go to greet him, but notice he is quite sour. You decide to cheer him up with a smile and wave to him.'
+					'You go to greet him, but notice he is quite sour. You decide to cheer him up with a smile and wave at him.'
 					'In response, the teacher smiles back at you and goes on about his business.'
 				end
 				npc_rel['A26'] += 1
 			else
 				if rand(0,1) = 0:
-					'"Hello Mr. Tsarev. You are so handsome." you say, trying to attract his attention with a smile.'
-					'"Thank you Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I''d pay you a compliment, but we are not supposed to have such informal relationships with students." he replies, but still smiles back.'
+					'"Hello Mr. Tsarev. You''re so handsome," you say, trying to attract his attention with a smile.'
+					'"Thank you Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. I''d pay you a compliment, but we''re not supposed to have such informal relationships with students," he replies, but still smiles back.'
 					npc_rel['A26'] += 1
 				else
-					'"Good morning Mr. Tsarev. I see you have a new suit, so chic." you say in a very erotic voice.'
+					'"Good morning Mr. Tsarev. I see you have a new suit, so chic," you say in a very erotic voice.'
 					'Hearing your words, he awkwardly picks up his pace while heading towards the mens room. You hear him muttering incoherently - you think he was trying to say hello or respond to the compliment, but apparently was a little flustered.'
 				end
 			end
 		else
 			if rand(0,1) = 0:
-				'"Hello Mr. Tsarev. You are so handsome." you say, trying to attract his attention with a smile.'
-				'"My wife had the night shift at work, so I had to eat at the cafe." he replies and you laugh together.'
-				'"Well, maybe I''ll try to cook for you, just to say thank you for what I''ve learned in your class." you answer in a serious voice.'
-				'"You know, <<$pcs_firstname>>, maybe we should arrange something like that. Yes, a tea party with the class. The girls can make cakes and the boys can prepare the classroom." your teacher replies, obviously not understanding your hint.'
-				'"That''s not what I meant." you say and walk away.'
+				'"Hello Mr. Tsarev. You are so handsome," you say, trying to attract his attention with a smile.'
+				'"My wife had the night shift at work, so I had to eat at the cafe," he replies and you laugh together.'
+				'"Well, maybe I''ll try to cook for you, just to say thank you for what I''ve learned in your class?" you answer in a serious voice.'
+				'"You know, <<$pcs_firstname>>, maybe we should arrange something like that. Yes, a tea party with the class. The girls can make cakes and the boys can prepare the classroom," he replies, obviously not understanding your hint.'
+				'"That''s not what I meant..." you say and walk away.'
 				pcs_mood -= 10
 				npc_rel['A26'] -= 1
 			else
-				'"Good morning Mr. Tsarev. I see you have a new suit, so chic." you say in a very erotic voice.'
-				'"Thank you <<$pcs_firstname>>. I bought it myself with my last paycheck." he replies.'
+				'"Good morning Mr. Tsarev. I see you have a new suit, so chic," you say in a very erotic voice.'
+				'"Thank you <<$pcs_firstname>>. I bought it myself with my last paycheck," he replies.'
 				npc_rel['A26'] += 1
 			end
 		end
@@ -89,21 +89,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teacher_greet':
 		if npc_rel['A26'] < 10:
 			*clr & cla
 			if hotcat < 5:
-				'You hurry down the hallway. You are already late, so decide to just pass by. He wasn''t even looking in your direction.'
+				'You hurry down the hallway. You''re already late, so decide to just pass by. He wasn''t even looking in your direction.'
 			else
-				'"Good morning Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. No time to say hello to your teacher?" he asks.'
-				'"Oh Mr. Tsarev! Good morning. Sorry I didn''t notice you. I was busy day dreaming." you reply and run away.'
+				'"Good morning, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. No time to say hello to your teacher?" he asks.'
+				'"Oh Mr. Tsarev! Good morning. Sorry I didn''t notice you. I was busy day dreaming," you reply and run away.'
 			end
 
 			act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'morning'
 		else
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big26.jpg"></center>'
-			'"Good morning Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Why don''t you say hello? A teacher can''t punish or reward such actions. You''ve still got this year''s exam and should behave more kindly." he jokes.'
+			'"Good morning, Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>. Why don''t you say hello? A teacher can''t punish or reward such actions. You''ve still got this year''s exam and should behave more kindly," he jokes.'
 			act 'Apologize':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big26.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Oh Mr. Tsarev! I''m sorry, I didn''t see you. Of course, good day to you. I look forward to our lessons." you say smiling.'
+				'"Oh Mr. Tsarev! I''m sorry, I didn''t see you. Of course, good day to you. I look forward to our lessons," you say smiling.'
 				npc_rel['A26'] += 1
 
 				act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'morning'
@@ -111,7 +111,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teacher_greet':
 			act 'Touch and apologize':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big26.jpg"></center>'
-				'"Oh Mr. Tsarev. I''m sorry, I didn''t see you." you say happily, coming closer and, as if by accident, touch his arm.'
+				'"Oh Mr. Tsarev! I''m sorry, I didn''t see you," you say happily, coming closer and, as if by accident, touch his arm.'
 				'He either doesn''t notice the touch or pretends not to notice it.'
 				if hotcat >= 5: npc_rel['A26'] += 1
 
@@ -151,19 +151,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teacher_greet':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/building/bendover.jpg"></center>'
 						npc_rel['A26'] += 1
 						'You drop some books and bend over to pick up them up, showing off your ass.'
-						'"<<$pcs_firstname>>, you really should squat down instead of bending over like that or one of the boys might take advantage." he says with a smile.'
+						'"<<$pcs_firstname>>, you really should squat down instead of bending over like that or one of the boys might take advantage!" he says with a smile.'
 					else
 						gs 'flash', 'butt', 'indoors', 1, 1
 						gs 'arousal', 'flash', -10
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/building/bendoverbare.jpg"></center>'
 						npc_rel['A26'] += 1
 						'You drop some books and bend over to pick up them up, showing off your ass.'
-						'"<<$pcs_firstname>>, you really should squat down instead of bending over like that or one of the boys might take advantage." he says with a smile.'
+						'"<<$pcs_firstname>>, you really should squat down instead of bending over like that or one of the boys might take advantage!" he says with a smile.'
 					end
 					act 'Stand up and try to start a conversation':
 						*clr & cla
-						'"Well I was lucky that it was you then. A grown and respectable man and not some kid. I don''t really understand boys and therefore I prefer to make friends and chat with more mature people." you reply.'
-						'"Yes, <<$pcs_lastname>>, their behavior is often bad." he says. Before leaving, he gently runs his hand over your back.'
+						'"Well, I was lucky that it was you then. A grown and respectable man and not some kid. I don''t really understand boys and therefore I prefer to make friends and chat with more mature people..." you reply.'
+						'"Yes, <<$pcs_lastname>>, their behavior is often bad," he says. Before leaving, he gently runs his hand over your back.'
 						pcs_horny += 3
 						act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'morning'
 					end
@@ -176,7 +176,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teacher_greet':
 								gs 'arousal', 'flash', -15
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/building/bendoverbare.jpg"></center>'
 								'You don''t pay attention to his words and decide to have a little more fun. Reaching for the next book, you inadvertently pull your skirt up, giving the teacher a full view of your pussy and ass.'
-								'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Please cover up." he says when he notices that you are not wearing any panties. He quickly runs up to you and pulls your skirt down, covering up your naked ass.'
+								'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Please cover up!" he says when he notices that you''re not wearing any panties. He quickly runs up to you and pulls your skirt down, covering up your naked ass.'
 								'He gives you a lecture on how to properly pick up books from the floor before you both leave, not saying a word to each other.'
 								act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'morning'
 							end
@@ -187,7 +187,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teacher_greet':
 								gs 'arousal', 'flash', -10
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/building/bendover.jpg"></center>'
 								'You don''t pay attention to his words and decide to have a little more fun. Reaching for the next book, you inadvertently pull your skirt up, giving the teacher a full view of your panty clad ass.'
-								'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Please cover up." he says before he rushes to you and pulls your skirt down, covering your ass.'
+								'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Please cover up!" he says before he rushes to you and pulls your skirt down, covering your ass.'
 								'He gives you a lecture on how to properly pick up books from the floor before you both leave, not saying a word to each other.'
 								act 'Continue': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'morning'
 							end
@@ -200,11 +200,11 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'teacher_greet':
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/shared/headshots_main/big26.jpg"></center>'
 				if rand(0,4) > 0:
 					'You stumble and fall into your teacher''s arms as he deftly catches you.'
-					'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Are you OK, did you hurt yourself?" Once he makes sure you are fine, he goes on about his business.'
+					'"Miss <<$pcs_lastname>>! Are you okay? did you hurt yourself?" Once he makes sure you''re fine, he goes on about his business.'
 				else
-					'You stumble and fall in front of him. However, he lacks the agility to catch you. You bruise your knees form falling as he bends over to help you up.'
+					'You stumble and fall in front of him. However, he lacks the agility to catch you. You bruise your knees from falling as he bends over to help you up.'
 					'"Oh-Oh-Oh, my leg hurts. Oh please look, is it alright?" you say and stretch out your leg in front of his face. He begins to inspect your leg, one hand at the ankle, the other stroking your thigh, just above the bruise.'
-					'"Well <<$pcs_firstname>>, you need to be more careful. You have very beautiful legs and it would be a shame if you badly injured them." he gently whispers to you.'
+					'"Well <<$pcs_firstname>>, you need to be more careful. You have very beautiful legs and it would be a shame if you badly injured them," he gently whispers to you.'
 					'"It doesn''t look bad, but you should go to the infirmary so they can check it out." He helps you back to your feet and goes about his business.'
 					npc_rel['A26'] += 2
 				end
@@ -266,7 +266,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_events':
 					gs 'flash', 'butt', 'indoors', 1, 1
 					gs 'arousal', 'flash', -5
 				end
-				'Not even breaking stride you call over your shoulder "Sweetie, you''ll have to spank me harder than that if you want to get up to my standards!" as your hands go down to your waist and give a flip of your skirt to give him a fleeting view of '+iif($pantyworntype ! 'none', 'your panties.', 'your naked ass.')
+				'Not even breaking stride you call over your shoulder "Sweetie, you''ll have to spank me harder than that if you want to get up to my standards!" Your hands go down to your waist and give a flip of your skirt to give him a fleeting view of '+iif($pantyworntype ! 'none', 'your panties.', 'your naked ass.')
 				gs 'gschool_events', 'leave_break_events'
 			end
 		elseif PCloSkirt > 0 and will_cost > pcs_willpwr:
@@ -318,7 +318,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_events':
 	elseif break_rand = 2:
 		cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/irina_stumble.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you walk through the hallway you start to head up the stairs, Irina is in front of you talking to Lazar and flirting with him. She misses one of the steps and suddenly stumbles forward, nearly falling, but manages to catch herself with her hands. Unfortunately for her she drops her books which go tumbling down the stairs and even worse everyone behind and below her can see her panty clad ass under her skirt. Several boys and even a few girls whistle or make rude remarks, she quickly stands up, blushing a bit. Lazar helps her gather up her books, as you walk past the two of them.'
+		'As you walk through the hallway and head up the stairs, you see Irina in front of you talking to Lazar and flirting with him. She misses one of the steps and suddenly stumbles forward, nearly falling, but manages to catch herself with her hands. Unfortunately for her, she drops her books which go tumbling down the stairs and even worse everyone behind and below her can see her panty clad ass under her skirt. Several boys and even a few girls whistle or make rude remarks as she quickly stands up and blushes. Lazar helps her gather up her books as you walk past the two of them.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 2
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
@@ -349,7 +349,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_events':
 					grupvalue[4] -= 5
 					'"Let me go or I''ll scream! Then you''ll have to explain to the teachers what you were trying to do to me." Vitek grabs you by the throat and slams you up against the wall, squeezing until you can''t breathe.'
 					*nl
-					'"You threatening me bitch? I should beat the shit out of you for that." He growls as you struggle in his grip, but his friends notice everyone is starting to stare at what is going on and they grab him by the arm.'
+					'"You threatening me bitch? I should beat the shit out of you for that!" he growls as you struggle in his grip, but his friends notice everyone is starting to stare at what''s going on and they grab him by the arm.'
 					*nl
 					'"Come on Vitek, we can deal with the bitch later, let''s go!" He jerks free from them but does let you go and you collapse to the floor, gasping for air.'
 					'"This isn''t over bitch!" He walks off just as one of the teachers takes notice that something was going on, but seeing that whatever it was is over, they lose interest. You get up slowly, rubbing your bruised throat and wondering if you just made a huge mistake.'
@@ -1132,19 +1132,19 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_events':
 		end
 	elseif break_rand = 31:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/teaseteacher.jpg"></center>'
-		'You notice Paulina, Lena, Lera and Ekaterina sitting by one of the windows, talking and occasinally hassling the other students. When Mr. Yenotin comes over to ask them what they are doing, Lena, Lera and Paulina occasionally open their legs wide to show off their panties while faking innocence. When Mr. Yenotin demands they stop opening their legs, they act shocked like they don''t know what he is talking about and then turn it around on him, asking him if he is trying to look up their skirts. Flustered and not making progress, he tells them to behave and hurries away while the girls all burst out laughing.'
+		'You notice Pauline, Lena, Lera and Ekaterina sitting by one of the windows, talking and occasinally hassling the other students. When Mr. Yenotin comes over to ask them what they are doing, Lena, Lera and Pauline occasionally open their legs wide to show off their panties while faking innocence. When Mr. Yenotin demands they stop, they act shocked like they don''t know what he''s talking about before turning it around on him, asking him if he''s trying to look up their skirts. Flustered and not making progress, he tells them to behave and hurries away while the girls all burst out laughing.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 1, 'unknown'
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 	elseif break_rand = 32:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/tieshoe.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you walk down the hallway, you see Irina has stopped. She lifts her foot up to place it on the window ledge as she bends over to tie her shoe. Her skirt rides way up showing off her ass. It is only for a moment, but you are almost certain she wasn''t wearing panties. You briefly wonder if she was even aware of how much the others could see.'
+		'As you walk down the hallway, you see Irina has stopped. She lifts her foot up to place it on the window ledge as she bends over to tie her shoe. Her skirt rides way up showing off her ass. It is only for a moment, but you''re almost certain she wasn''t wearing panties. You briefly wonder if she was even aware of how much the others could see.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 1
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'
 	elseif break_rand = 33:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/walkaround.jpg"></center>'
-		'As you walk down the hallway, you see Paulina, Lena and Lera practically laying in the middle of the hallway. This forces the other students to carefully walk around them and they berate those who step too close to them. You are sure they are enjoying making the other students lives harder by just being in their way.'
+		'As you walk down the hallway, you see Pauline, Lena and Lera practically laying in the middle of the hallway. This forces the other students to carefully walk around them and they berate those who step too close to them. You are sure they are enjoying making the other students lives harder by just being in their way.'
 	elseif break_rand <= 35 and month ! 9 and cheerleadingQW['quest_stage'] = 0 and cheerleadingQW['gossip'] = 4 and cheerleadingQW['gossip_day'] < daystart:
 	 !! month ! 9 so it doesnt happen in september, but does any time after that
 		gt 'gschool_cheerleading', 'poster'
@@ -1157,9 +1157,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'break_events':
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/lunch/hall.jpg"></center>'
 		if grupTipe = 1 or grupTipe = 2 or grupTipe = 4:
-			'As you walk down the hallway you notice Petka stop at the boys bathroom door and look around for a moment, like he is afraid to go into the bathroom. He opens the door and looks in, then apparently liking what he sees, goes in. He must have been checking if any gopniks were already in there waiting to bully him or something. That likely means he is alone in there. Looking around, you see the hall starting to clear of people.'
+			'As you walk down the hallway you notice Petka stop at the boys bathroom door and look around, like he''s afraid to go into the bathroom. He opens the door and looks in, then apparently liking what he sees, goes in. He must have been checking if any gopniks were already in there waiting to bully him or something. That likely means he''s alone in there. Looking around, you see the hall starting to clear of people.'
 		else
-			'As you walk down the hallway you notice Petka stop at the boys bathroom door and look around for a moment, like he is afraid to go into the bathroom. He opens the door and looks in, then apparently liking what he sees, goes in. He must have been checking if any gopniks were already in there waiting to bully him or something. You don''t blame him for being cautious as you go about your business.'
+			'As you walk down the hallway you notice Petka stop at the boys bathroom door and look around, like he''s afraid to go into the bathroom. He opens the door and looks in, then apparently liking what he sees, goes in. He must have been checking if any gopniks were already in there waiting to bully him or something. You don''t blame him for being cautious as you go about your business.'
 		end
 		act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_events', 'leave_break_events2'
 		if lernHome > 1:
@@ -1211,7 +1211,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool_events':
 					'You walk up to her. "Hey, what''s up Alyona?"'
 					'She gives you a dirty look. "Just hanging out. Why?"'
 					'You reply. "No reason. I just wanted to say hi."'
-					'She shrugs a bit as she takes a long pull of the bottle, before offering it to you. "Want a drink?"'
+					'She shrugs as she takes a long pull of the bottle before offering it to you. "Want a drink?"'
 
 					gs 'willpower', 'drink', 'resist'
 					if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -1247,8 +1247,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool_events':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/alyona3.jpg"></center>'
 								'You shake your head and don''t take the offered bottle. "No thanks, I need to be able to walk home."'
-								'She laughs a bit at that and takes another long swig herself. The two of you talk as she drinks. Well, you talk and she drinks. Before long, she is wasted. She puts the bottle away and falls on her ass as she starts to get up. You offer to help, but she pushes you away. "Fuck off, I don''t need any help!"'
-								'You back off and let her get up on her own, but it takes her a couple of tries. Once up, she turns and stumbles for the exit, not sure what to do. You head out after her, at least making sure she gets outside in one piece.'
+								'She laughs and takes another long swig herself. The two of you talk as she drinks. Well, you talk and she drinks. Before long, she is wasted. She puts the bottle away and falls on her ass as she starts to get up. You offer to help, but she pushes you away. "Fuck off, I don''t need any help!"'
+								'You back off and let her get up on her own, but it takes her a few tries. Once up, she turns and stumbles for the exit, not sure what to do. You head out after her, at least making sure she gets outside in one piece.'
 								act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 							end
 						else
@@ -1262,15 +1262,15 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool_events':
 							npc_rel['A143'] += 2
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/alyona3.jpg"></center>'
 							'You take the offered bottle and take another swig as well. It burns a little less this time. "If I drink much more of this I won''t be able to walk home."'
-							'She laughs a bit at that and take another long swig herself. The two of you talk and drink. Well, you talk while she drinks even more than you do. Before long, you are both wasted. She puts the bottle away and falls on her ass as she starts to get up. You offer to help, but she pushes you away. She then sighs and takes your hand as you pull her to her feet. The two of you stumble outside together supporting one another. After taking a breath of fresh air, you feel a little better.'
-							'She stumbles away but calls back. "I gotta go, see you around <<$pcs_nickname>>!", leaving you drunk and alone.'
+							'She laughs and take another long swig herself. The two of you talk and drink. Well, you talk while she drinks even more than you do. Before long, you are both wasted. She puts the bottle away and falls on her ass as she starts to get up. You offer to help, but she pushes you away. She then sighs and takes your hand as you pull her to her feet. The two of you stumble outside together supporting one another. After taking a breath of fresh air, you feel a little better.'
+							'She stumbles away but calls back. "I gotta go. See you around <<$pcs_nickname>>!"'
 							act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 						end
 					end
 				else
 					'You walk up to her. "Hey what''s up Alyona?"'
-					'She gives you a dirty look. "What the fuck do you want skank?"'
-					'Taken a bit aback by her comment you reply. "Nothing I just wanted to say hi."'
+					'She gives you a dirty look. "What the fuck do you want, skank?"'
+					'You''re taken a bit aback by her comment. "Nothing I just wanted to say hi."'
 					'"Well fuck off bitch before you get hurt!" She sounds serious and you know she has a rep for carrying a knife and not being afraid of using it, so you decide not to press the issue and leave.'
 					act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 				end
@@ -1300,7 +1300,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool_events':
 			end
 		elseif break_rand = 3:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/braflash.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you walk down the hallway, you see several of the gopnik boys giving Paulina a bit of a hard time. She flips them off and shoves the closer ones away. Before she walks off, she flips up her shirt to flash them her bra and laughs at their reaction before walking away, the boys calling her a tease as she does.'
+			'As you walk down the hallway, you see several of the gopnik boys giving Pauline a bit of a hard time. She flips them off and shoves the closer ones away. Before she walks off, she flips up her shirt to flash them her bra and laughs at their reaction before walking away, the boys calling her a tease as she does.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 1
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
@@ -1317,13 +1317,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool_events':
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5, 'unknown'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Ignore her and leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
-			act 'Ask her whats going on':
+			act 'Ask her what''s going on':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/nushflash2.jpg"></center>'
 				'You walk up to her and as you do, she turns to face you, giving you a full view of everything she has. "What''s up <<$pcs_nickname>>?"'
 				'You smile at how casual she is about everything. "You tell me! I was about to ask you the same thing."'
-				'She smiles, obviously knowing what you mean and replies. "Oh you know, same old same old." she says as she gets dressed.'
-				'You just nod. What else are you suppose to say? Once fully dressed, she adds "Well I need to go, see you around." and she turns and heads out.'
+				'She smiles, obviously knowing what you mean and replies. "Oh you know, same old same old," she says as she gets dressed.'
+				'You just nod. Once fully dressed, she adds "Well I need to go, see you around." She turns and heads out.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5
 				gs 'arousal', 'end'
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1380,7 +1380,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool_events':
 			act 'Watch':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/strip2.jpg"></center>'
-				'After a few moments, they encourage her to take off her jacket. Well it''s just her jacket, nothing to it. She seems unsure but after one more quick glance around, she pulls off her jacket, smiling as the boys whistle and compliment her. She seems to be a little more OK with it since the boys are complimenting her so much. Then they start encouraging her to show them her underwear.'
+				'After a few seconds, they encourage her to take off her jacket. She seems unsure, but after one more quick glance around, she pulls off her jacket, smiling as the boys whistle and compliment her. She seems to be a little more OK with it since the boys are complimenting her so much. Then they start encouraging her to show them her underwear.'
 				act 'Ignore what''s happening and leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 				gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', 'medium'
 				if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -1391,8 +1391,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool_events':
 						gs 'stat'
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/strip1.jpg"></center>'
 						'You decide to give her an out and head right for Lariska. "There you are! You ready to go?" you ask her.'
-						'For a moment she seems confused, but with a final look at the boys, she nods quickly. "Yes." She smiles to the boys as the two you head out. She leans over to you and quietly says "Thanks."'
-						'The boys grumble a bit as the two of you walk off, but they go their own way as well. Once outside, Lariska thanks you again and then hurries off.'
+						'For a moment she seems confused, but with a final look at the boys, she nods quickly and smiles at the boys as you head out. She leans over to you and quietly says "Thanks."'
+						'The boys grumble as the two of you walk away, but they go their own way as well. Once outside, Lariska thanks you again and then hurries off.'
 						act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 					end
 				else
@@ -1401,7 +1401,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool_events':
 				act 'Keep Watching':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/strip3.jpg"></center>'
-					'Again she hesitates, obviously a bit unsure but the boys keep encouraging her, pointing out that no one is around and it is just her underwear and that it covers as much as the bikini they have seen her in anyways. After a few more glances around, she unbuttons her shirt and takes it off, then her skirt, leaving her standing in front of them in her underwear, blushing as the boys really compliment her. You can''t tell if she is blushing from the embarrassment or because she likes the attention.'
+					'Again she hesitates, but the boys keep encouraging her, pointing out that no one is around and it''s just her underwear, which covers as much as the bikini they have seen her in anyways. After a few more glances around, she unbuttons her shirt and takes it off, then her skirt, leaving her standing in front of them in her underwear, blushing as the boys really compliment her. You can''t tell if she is blushing from the embarrassment or because she likes the attention.'
 					*nl
 					'Next, the boys start encouraging her to take off her bra. She now looks a bit less confident, looking around and partially using her hands to cover herself up from time to time, but the guys keep complimenting and encouraging her to take off her bra. She resists at first, but she slowly seems to be giving in under the peer pressure.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5, 'unknown'
@@ -1416,8 +1416,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool_events':
 							gs 'stat'
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/strip1.jpg"></center>'
 							'You decide to give her an out and head right for Lariska. "There you are! You ready to go?" you ask her.'
-							'For a moment she seems confused, but with a final look at the boys, she nods quickly. "Yes." She smiles to the boys as the two you head out. She leans over to you and quietly says "Thanks."'
-							'The boys grumble a bit as the two of you walk off, but they go their own way as well. Once outside, Lariska thanks you again and then hurries off.'
+							'For a moment she seems confused, but with a final look at the boys, she nods quickly and smiles at the boys as you head out. She leans over to you and quietly says "Thanks."'
+							'The boys grumble as the two of you walk away, but they go their own way as well. Once outside, Lariska thanks you again and then hurries off.'
 							act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 						end
 					else
@@ -1441,8 +1441,8 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool_events':
 								gs 'stat'
 								'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/strip1.jpg"></center>'
 								'You decide to give her an out and head right for Lariska. "There you are! You ready to go?" you ask her.'
-								'For a moment she seems confused, but with a final look at the boys, she nods quickly. "Yes." She smiles to the boys as the two you head out. She leans over to you and quietly says "Thanks."'
-								'The boys grumble a bit as the two of you walk off, but they go their own way as well. Once outside, Lariska thanks you again and then hurries off.'
+								'For a moment she seems confused, but with a final look at the boys, she nods quickly and smiles at the boys as the two you head out. She leans over to you and quietly says "Thanks."'
+								'The boys grumble as the two of you walk away, but they go their own way as well. Once outside, Lariska thanks you again and then hurries off.'
 								act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 							end
 						else
@@ -1451,7 +1451,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool_events':
 						act 'Keep Watching':
 							*clr & cla
 							'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/strip5.jpg"></center>'
-							'Finally, she gives in and pulls her panties down and steps out of them. She is now completely naked in front of the boys, who seem to be loving the show. She seems torn between enjoying the approval of the boys and the embarrassment of being naked. She lets the boys look at her naked body for a couple more minutes before she seems to change her mind and starts to quickly get dressed. The boys try to get her to stay naked, but she gets dressed. The boys take it in their stride and comment about how great she looks and how cool she is. Once she is dressed, they all leave together, leaving you to go on your way as well.'
+							'Finally, she gives in and pulls her panties down and steps out of them. She is now completely naked in front of the boys, who seem to be loving the show. She seems torn between enjoying the approval of the boys and the embarrassment of being naked. She lets the boys look at her naked body for a few more minutes before she seems to change her mind and starts to quickly get dressed. The boys try to get her to stay naked, but she gets dressed. The boys take it in their stride and comment about how great she looks and how cool she is. Once she is dressed, they all leave together, leaving you to go on your way as well.'
 							gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5
 							gs 'arousal', 'end'
 							gs 'stat'
@@ -1474,7 +1474,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool_events':
 			act 'Ask if she is OK':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/upset.jpg"></center>'
-				'You stop beside her. "Are you OK?" you ask.'
+				'You stop beside her. "Are you okay?" you ask.'
 				'She looks up a bit startled. She apparently didn''t hear you walk up. She quickly rubs her eyes, making it very obvious she was crying. "I''m fine."'
 				'Her tone suggests she is anything but fine, but before you can say more she starts to get up, clearly wanting to get away.'
 				gs 'willpower', 'misc', 'self', iif(grupTipe ! 4,'easy','')
@@ -1626,7 +1626,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'afterschool_classroom_events':
 	act 'Leave': gt 'gschool_grounds', 'main'
 	if break_rand = 1:
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/afterschool/classroom/girlsnudeboy.jpg"></center>'
-		'You step over to the classroom door, look up and down the hallway and see no one around. You gently pull the door open just a crack and peek inside. You notice Lavrenti sitting at one of the desks completely naked while Paulina, Lera and Lena are sitting on a desk near him. You are not sure what is going on as you can''t quite make out what they are saying, but the girls are teasing him about something. You decide you would rather not get caught spying, so you gently close the door and hurry off.'
+		'You step over to the classroom door, look up and down the hallway and see no one around. You gently pull the door open just a crack and peek inside. You notice Lavrenti sitting at one of the desks completely naked while Pauline, Lera and Lena are sitting on a desk near him. You are not sure what is going on as you can''t quite make out what they are saying, but the girls are teasing him about something. You decide you would rather not get caught spying, so you gently close the door and hurry off.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 		gs 'arousal', 'end'
 		gs 'stat'

locations/gschool_lessonsev1.qsrc

@@ -1456,7 +1456,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 5:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/urok7.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you wait for the lesson to end, you see that you''re not the only one who''s a bit drowsy; Paulina is very close to falling asleep on her desk.'
+			'As you wait for the lesson to end, you see that you''re not the only one who''s a bit drowsy; Pauline is very close to falling asleep on her desk.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 6:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/crash.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -1598,21 +1598,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
-			act 'Paulina':
+			act 'Pauline':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
 				gs 'exp_gain', 'chrsm', rand(1,2)
 				if fame['pav_slut'] >= 150:
-					'You sit next to Paulina, who ignores you at first before mouthing "slut" at you and doing a motion with her hands where she pretends to be forcing your head down on her imaginary dick.'
+					'You sit next to Pauline, who ignores you at first before mouthing "slut" at you and doing a motion with her hands where she pretends to be forcing your head down on her imaginary dick.'
 				else
 					if grupTipe = 4:
 						npc_rel['A24'] += 1
-						'You sit next to Alyona and you spend most of the class talking quietly with each other. You often get stern looks from Mr. Yenotin when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat and hushes you a few times before he finally tells you to be quiet or he''ll send you to the principal''s office.'
+						'You sit next to Pauline and you spend most of the class talking quietly with each other. You often get stern looks from Mr. Yenotin when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat and hushes you a few times before he finally tells you to be quiet or he''ll send you to the principal''s office.'
 					elseif grupTipe = 5:
-						'You are forced to sit next to Paulina and she immediately starts bullying you, eventually getting some of the other gopniks to join in.'
+						'You are forced to sit next to Pauline and she immediately starts bullying you, eventually getting some of the other gopniks to join in.'
 					else
 						npc_rel['A24'] += 1
-						'You sit next to Paulina. She is a little surprised that you chose to do so, but you are able to strike up a brief, if a little awkward, conversation with her before Mr. Ivanov asks you to be quiet.'
+						'You sit next to Pauline. She is a little surprised that you chose to do so, but you are able to strike up a brief, if a little awkward, conversation with her before Mr. Ivanov asks you to be quiet.'
 					end
 				end
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1687,9 +1687,9 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			end
 		elseif scooltiperand = 15 and (soniafall = 5 or soniaPS = 1):
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/russian/soniadare1.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you work on your class assignment, you hear Paulina talking to Sonia. "I dare you to walk up to Mr. Yenotin and ask him for help. Then bend over his desk, pull your panties down and show everyone your ass."'
+			'As you work on your class assignment, you hear Pauline talking to Sonia. "I dare you to walk up to Mr. Yenotin and ask him for help. Then bend over his desk, pull your panties down and show everyone your ass."'
 			'Sonia blushes a little, but also looks thrilled at the idea. "Everyone would see."'
-			'Paulina nods. "Yeah, everyone would see how badass you are."'
+			'Pauline nods. "Yeah, everyone would see how badass you are."'
 			'Sonia looks around, spots you looking at them and grins as she gets up and heads up to Mr. Yenotin''s desk.'
 			act 'Ignore them and wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			act 'Watch':
@@ -1740,7 +1740,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/class1.jpg"></center>'
 				'Not wanting to partake in the bullying, but also not wanting to piss off Alyona or the gopniks, you don''t say anything. "Please continue." Mr. Yenotin tells Marcus while giveing Alyona a disapproving look. "Please be nice and treat others as you would like them to treat you." This doesn''t have the effect he was hoping for as it just gets her and several other students laughing.'
-				'After a few minutes, Marcus is still struggling and now Paulina joins in as well, interrupting him each time he almost gets the word right. Soon about half the class has joined in and Mr. Yenotin gives up. "That''s enough Marcus, it was a good effort. Now how about we have someone else read for a bit? Alyona, why don''t you read the next part?"'
+				'After a few minutes, Marcus is still struggling and now Pauline joins in as well, interrupting him each time he almost gets the word right. Soon about half the class has joined in and Mr. Yenotin gives up. "That''s enough Marcus, it was a good effort. Now how about we have someone else read for a bit? Alyona, why don''t you read the next part?"'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
 			act'Take over reading':
@@ -1846,7 +1846,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'russian':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 20:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/russian/paulpanties.jpg"></center>'
-			'As class ends and everyone starts to get up, Paulina stops in front of Marcus, bends over and lifts her skirt to show him her panty clad ass and wiggles it around. "That''s as close as any Russian girl will get to letting you touch them. It must be... hard... being so far from home Marcus." She teases him a bit more and gets a lot of laughs. He does his best to ignore it, but he can''t help himself from looking. Soon, it is over as she drops her skirt back in place and everyone leaves class.'
+			'As class ends and everyone starts to get up, Pauline stops in front of Marcus, bends over and lifts her skirt to show him her panty clad ass and wiggles it around. "That''s as close as any Russian girl will get to letting you touch them. It must be... hard... being so far from home Marcus." She teases him a bit more and gets a lot of laughs. He does his best to ignore it, but he can''t help himself from looking. Soon, it is over as she drops her skirt back in place and everyone leaves class.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'

locations/gschool_lessonsev2.qsrc

@@ -1198,7 +1198,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 4:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/events/urok7.jpg"></center>'
-			'As you wait for the end of the lesson, you notice you''re not the only one being a bit drowsy; Paulina is very close to falling asleep on her desk.'
+			'As you wait for the end of the lesson, you notice you''re not the only one being a bit drowsy; Pauline is very close to falling asleep on her desk.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 5:
 			'<center><video autoplay loop src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/boobg.mp4"></video></center>'
@@ -1464,21 +1464,21 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 			end
-			act 'Paulina':
+			act 'Pauline':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/talk.jpg"></center>'
 				gs 'exp_gain', 'chrsm', rand(1,2)
 				if fame['pav_slut'] >= 150:
-					'You sit next to Paulina, who ignores you at first before mouthing "slut" at you and doing a motion with her hands where she pretends to be forcing your head down on her imaginary dick.'
+					'You sit next to Pauline, who ignores you at first before mouthing "slut" at you and doing a motion with her hands where she pretends to be forcing your head down on her imaginary dick.'
 				else
 					if grupTipe = 4:
 						npc_rel['A24'] += 1
-						'You sit next to Alyona and you spend most of the class talking quietly with each other. You often get stern looks from Mr. Kuznetsov when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat and hushes you a few times before he finally tells you to be quiet or he''ll send you to the principal''s office.'
+						'You sit next to Pauline and you spend most of the class talking quietly with each other. You often get stern looks from Mr. Kuznetsov when you get a bit too loud. He clears his throat and hushes you a few times before he finally tells you to be quiet or he''ll send you to the principal''s office.'
 					elseif grupTipe = 5:
-						'You are forced to sit next to Paulina and she immediately starts bullying you, eventually getting some of the other gopniks to join in.'
+						'You are forced to sit next to Pauline and she immediately starts bullying you, eventually getting some of the other gopniks to join in.'
 					else
 						npc_rel['A24'] += 1
-						'You sit next to Paulina. She is a little surprised that you chose to do so, but you are able to strike up a brief, if a little awkward, conversation with her before Mr. Kuznetsov asks you to be quiet.'
+						'You sit next to Pauline. She is a little surprised that you chose to do so, but you are able to strike up a brief, if a little awkward, conversation with her before Mr. Kuznetsov asks you to be quiet.'
 					end
 				end
 				gs 'stat'
@@ -1550,16 +1550,16 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'shop':
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 13:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/shop/paulnushhump.jpg"></center>'
-			'Near the end of class, Mr. Kuznetsov tells the class to study quietly as he leaves class a few minutes early. Of course, once he is gone no one listens and everyone starts wandering around messing with the tools. Meanwhile, Anushka starts to tease Fedor, asking him if he wants to fuck her until she makes him blush. When he finally admits he is attracted to her, Paulina swoops in behind Anushka, pushes into her and pulls up the back of her skirt.'
+			'Near the end of class, Mr. Kuznetsov tells the class to study quietly as he leaves class a few minutes early. Of course, once he is gone no one listens and everyone starts wandering around messing with the tools. Meanwhile, Anushka starts to tease Fedor, asking him if he wants to fuck her until she makes him blush. When he finally admits he is attracted to her, Pauline swoops in behind Anushka, pushes into her and pulls up the back of her skirt.'
 			*nl
-			'She starts pounding her hips against Anushka''s ass. "Oh Anushka you''re so hot, I have always wanted to fuck you." Paulina says, obviously trying to sound like Fedor, and Anushka plays along. "Oh Fedor, you have such an almost average sized dick! It almost feels good!" This gets the rest of class laughing and Fedor blushing even more. His humiliation ends when the bell rings.'
+			'She starts pounding her hips against Anushka''s ass. "Oh Anushka you''re so hot, I have always wanted to fuck you." Pauline says, obviously trying to sound like Fedor, and Anushka plays along. "Oh Fedor, you have such an almost average sized dick! It almost feels good!" This gets the rest of class laughing and Fedor blushing even more. His humiliation ends when the bell rings.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 			gs 'arousal', 'end'
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Leave class': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 14:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/shop/paulvichair.jpg"></center>'
-			'During class, Vicky and Paulina start whispering back and forth and you can tell it''s getting heated by the harshness of the hissing whispers and their facial expressions. You have no clue what they are saying but whatever it is pisses Paulina off, as she reaches over and starts yanking hard on Vicky''s hair. "You fucking bitch, I will rip your hair out." she says loudly enough to get everyone''s attention. Mr. Kuznetsov rushes over, breaks it up and then takes each girl by the elbow and leads them out of class. A couple of minutes later, Vicky comes back looking smug and just before the end of class, Mr. Kuznetsov comes back alone.'
+			'During class, Vicky and Pauline start whispering back and forth and you can tell it''s getting heated by the harshness of the hissing whispers and their facial expressions. You have no clue what they are saying but whatever it is pisses Pauline off, as she reaches over and starts yanking hard on Vicky''s hair. "You fucking bitch, I will rip your hair out." she says loudly enough to get everyone''s attention. Mr. Kuznetsov rushes over, breaks it up and then takes each girl by the elbow and leads them out of class. A couple of minutes later, Vicky comes back looking smug and just before the end of class, Mr. Kuznetsov comes back alone.'
 			act 'Wait for the end of the lesson': gt 'gschool_lessons', 'short_break'
 		elseif scooltiperand = 15 and npc_rel['A15'] => 60:
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/classroom/shop/vicpanties.jpg"></center>'

locations/nyp_school.qsrc

@@ -519,7 +519,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 			'The group ponders for a bit. "Maybe in one of the classrooms?" Ekaterina suggests.'
 			'"Definitely the entrance, so everyone can see our masterpiece." says Nikolai.'
 			'"One of the exterior walls, as a welcoming sign." Lavrenti scoffs.'
-			'"Why not keep it simple and do it here in the gym locker room instead?" Paulina replies.'
+			'"Why not keep it simple and do it here in the gym locker room instead?" Pauline replies.'
 			minut += 5
 			gs 'stat'
 
@@ -619,7 +619,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'gopniks':
 				cla & *clr
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/school/gym/locker/lockerroom.jpg"></center>'
 				'"Where should we do it?" you ponder for a second before deciding on tagging the gym. "What do you say about the locker room?"'
-				'The others nod while you can see a clear smile on Paulina''s face as you''ve picked her suggestion.'
+				'The others nod while you can see a clear smile on Pauline''s face as you''ve picked her suggestion.'
 				'"Shall we?" you ask. The others nod and you sneak into the boys locker room, where you start searching for the perfect spot.'
 				minut += 30
 				npc_rel['A24'] += 1

locations/soniadisco.qsrc

@@ -12,7 +12,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'cikl':
 			soniaPS = 1
 			soniaPSdays = daystart
 			npc_grupTipe['A25'] = 5
-			$npc_notes['A25'] = 'Ever since Sonia inadvertently got way too drunk and gave five guys including Vitek and his friends a simultaneous blowjob near the disco, her reputation in Pavlovsk has been in shambles. The girls in her class all give her the silent treatment, pretending she does not exist. Meanwhile, the guys all treat her like a cheap whore and regularly ask (or sometimes even demand) sex from her, knowing she doesn''t have the strength to say no.'
+			$npc_notes['A25'] = 'Ever since Sonia inadvertently got way too drunk and gave five guys including Vitek and his friends a simultaneous blowjob near the disco, her reputation in Pavlovsk has been in shambles. The girls in her class all give her the silent treatment, pretending she doesn''t exist, while the guys all treat her like a cheap whore and regularly ask (or sometimes even demand) sex from her, knowing she doesn''t have the strength to say no.'
 			$npcGoSchool['A25'] = '<a href="exec:gt ''gschool_outcast_chats'', ''' + $lcase($npc_usedname['A25']) + '''"><<$npc_usedname["A25"]>></a>'
 		end
 	end
@@ -217,7 +217,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'disco':
 		grupvalue[4] += 1
 		gs 'stat'
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/locations/pavlovsk/community/disco/gopdrinking.jpg"></center>'
-		'You''re not sure whether he invited you along because he wants you to come, or just because he''s afraid you would rat them out. Either way, it could be fun? You follow the guys outside, and after a few minutes, you sit down in a quiet place where several of the other gopniks already are. Vasily pours the booze, vodka as it turns out, into plastic cups and hands everyone one. Dan, Vasily and Paulina are here along with a couple of older guys you don''t know.'
+		'You''re not sure whether he invited you along because he wants you to come, or just because he''s afraid you would rat them out. Either way, it could be fun? You follow the guys outside, and after a few minutes, you sit down in a quiet place where several of the other gopniks already are. Vasily pours the booze, vodka as it turns out, into plastic cups and hands everyone one. Dan, Vasily and Pauline are here along with a couple of older guys you don''t know.'
 		'For the next 15 minutes, you enjoy their company, only slowly sipping the vodka and alternating it with lemonade. Sonia is not quite as careful as you and just slams down shot after shot. When the cups are empty, Vasily offers everyone a refill.'
 		gs 'willpower', 'drink', 'resist'
 		if will_cost <= pcs_willpwr:
@@ -405,7 +405,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pressuredforpanties':
 	'Sonia is really starting to get wasted now. As she does, Dan speaks up. "Hey Sonia what color are your panties?"'
 	'She looks at him a little confused. "What?"'
 	'"You were going to show us what color your panties are," Dan says as if it were a fact.'
-	'Sonia blinks. "I was?" she asks, which gets all the guys agreeing. She glances at you, and you nod. While Paulina offers more helpful advice. "Go on don''t be a tease." With the encouragement Sonia stands up and turns around and pulls up her dress showing off the back of her panties.'
+	'Sonia blinks. "I was?" she asks, which gets all the guys agreeing. She glances at you, and you nod. While Pauline offers more helpful advice. "Go on don''t be a tease." With the encouragement Sonia stands up and turns around and pulls up her dress showing off the back of her panties.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'erotic', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Continue':
@@ -427,7 +427,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pressuredfortits':
 	'Sonia is really starting to get wasted now. As she does, several of the gopniks whisper among themselves while keeping Sonia''s cup topped off. Finally, Dan speaks up. "Hey Sonia show us your tits."'
 	'She looks at him a little confused. "What?"'
 	'"You were going to show us your tits," Dan says as if it were a fact.'
-	'Sonia blinks. "I was?" she asks, which gets all the guys agreeing. She glances at you, and you nod, while Paulina offers more helpful advice. "Yeah you said you had really perky ones, so go on and prove it."'
+	'Sonia blinks. "I was?" she asks, which gets all the guys agreeing. She glances at you, and you nod, while Pauline offers more helpful advice. "Yeah you said you had really perky ones, so go on and prove it."'
 	'With the encouragement, Sonia pulls down her top, showing off her perky boobs. Then she stands up, a little unsteady on her feet. "Show us your butt now," Vasily says.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -450,7 +450,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pressuredforpussy':
 	'Sonia is really starting to get wasted now. As she does, Dan speaks up. "Hey Sonia show us your pussy."'
 	'She looks at him a little confused. "What?"'
 	'"You were going to show us your pussy," Dan says as if it were a fact.'
-	'Sonia blinks. "I was?" she asks, which gets all the guys agreeing. She glances at you, and you nod, while Paulina offers more helpful advice. "Yeah you said you had a pretty pussy, so go on and prove it."'
+	'Sonia blinks. "I was?" she asks, which gets all the guys agreeing. She glances at you, and you nod, while Pauline offers more helpful advice. "Yeah you said you had a pretty pussy, so go on and prove it."'
 	'With the encouragement, Sonia pulls her dress up and pulls her panties aside, showing off her pussy. She has a huge grin on her face at all the attention she is getting. "Show us everything," Vasily says.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'erotic_nudity', 5
 	gs 'stat'
@@ -491,20 +491,20 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pressuredforblowjob':
 		act 'Keep watching':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/disco/bj1.jpg"></center>'
-			'As she looks around grinning with her tongue sticking out, Vitek pulls his dick out of his pants and shoves his hard cock in her open mouth before she can close it. "I gave you a treat, now give me one." The other guys offer encouragement, saying it is only fair. Paulina puts her hand on the back of Sonia head to keep her from pulling away.'
-			'Sonia seems unsure for a moment but then starts to suck on Vitek''s cock. Paulina steps back and starts filming the whole thing.'
+			'As she looks around grinning with her tongue sticking out, Vitek pulls his dick out of his pants and shoves his hard cock in her open mouth before she can close it. "I gave you a treat, now give me one." The other guys offer encouragement, saying it is only fair. Pauline puts her hand on the back of Sonia head to keep her from pulling away.'
+			'Sonia seems unsure for a moment but then starts to suck on Vitek''s cock. Pauline steps back and starts filming the whole thing.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Keep watching':
 				*clr & cla
 				'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/disco/bj2.jpg"></center>'
-				'Sonia bobs her head up and down on Vitek''s cock, working her mouth down until she starts to gag. She has her lips tightly wrapped around the shaft, and just like the popsicle, she sucks on his dick with no hands. Paulina keeps recording, while the guys all offer encouragement. You can tell they want to join in, but one look from Vitek and they remain seated.'
+				'Sonia bobs her head up and down on Vitek''s cock, working her mouth down until she starts to gag. She has her lips tightly wrapped around the shaft, and just like the popsicle, she sucks on his dick with no hands. Pauline keeps recording, while the guys all offer encouragement. You can tell they want to join in, but one look from Vitek and they remain seated.'
 				gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 				gs 'stat'
 				act 'Keep watching':
 					*clr & cla
 					'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/disco/bj3.jpg"></center>'
-					'Sonia is really starting to get into a rhythm. It seems she has a knack for this, and Vitek seems content to let her work at her own pace other than offering words of encouragement. Paulina offers her a few pointers, which Sonia listens to and does her best to follow, making Vitek moan even louder.'
+					'Sonia is really starting to get into a rhythm. It seems she has a knack for this, and Vitek seems content to let her work at her own pace other than offering words of encouragement. Pauline offers her a few pointers, which Sonia listens to and does her best to follow, making Vitek moan even louder.'
 					gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 					gs 'stat'
 					act 'Keep watching':
@@ -512,7 +512,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pressuredforblowjob':
 						'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/disco/bj4.jpg"></center>'
 						'Suddenly, Vitek lets out a loud moan, and Sonia makes a slight gagging noise. It is obvious he is cumming in her mouth. For the first time, she takes ahold of his dick and strokes the shaft, milking every drop of his cum into her mouth. Once he finishes, he looks down at her and says, "Show me." She knows what he wants and opens her mouth to show her cum coated tongue. Her mouth is so full of his cum a little leaks out of the corner onto her cheek.'
 						*nl
-						'He grins at her. "That''s a good girl, now swallow." She does as he commands and swallows all his cum down. As she stands up, Paulina motions towards her cheek where the cum leaked out. Sonia reaches up and blushes a little when she feels the cum. She wipes it up with her finger and sucks her finger clean. Then she blushes and seems to realize maybe she is going too far. With a slight slur in her voice and a cheeky grin on her face, she says, "I want to go dancing! Let''s go back to the disco!"'
+						'He grins at her. "That''s a good girl, now swallow." She does as he commands and swallows all his cum down. As she stands up, Pauline motions towards her cheek where the cum leaked out. Sonia reaches up and blushes a little when she feels the cum. She wipes it up with her finger and sucks her finger clean. Then she blushes and seems to realize maybe she is going too far. With a slight slur in her voice and a cheeky grin on her face, she says, "I want to go dancing! Let''s go back to the disco!"'
 						gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 						gs 'arousal', 'end'
 						gs 'stat'
@@ -540,7 +540,7 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'pressuredforgangbang':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/disco/gangbang1.jpg"></center>'
 		'As she looks around grinning with her tongue sticking out, Vitek pulls his dick out of his pants and shoves his hardening cock in her open mouth before she can close it. The other guys offer encouragement.'
-		'Sonia starts to suck on Vitek''s cock enthusiastically. Paulina steps back as the other guys get up and crowd around Sonia, pulling their dicks out as well. Quickly surrounded by hard dicks, Sonia starts jerking off the other guys. Eventually, she switches which dick she is sucking and jerking off, trying to give them all attention.'
+		'Sonia starts to suck on Vitek''s cock enthusiastically. Pauline steps back as the other guys get up and crowd around Sonia, pulling their dicks out as well. Quickly surrounded by hard dicks, Sonia starts jerking off the other guys. Eventually, she switches which dick she is sucking and jerking off, trying to give them all attention.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Keep watching': gt 'soniadisco', 'soniabang'
@@ -696,7 +696,7 @@ end
 if $ARGS[0] = 'soniabang':
 	*clr & cla
 	'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/disco/gangbang2.jpg"></center>'
-	'Sonia keeps switching which dick she is sucking and which ones she is jerking off. Paulina takes out her phone and starts recording it, making sure to get a good close up of Sonia''s face as she does. Paulina seems pretty amused by all this and offers, "Why are you all just standing around, she has more than one hole," then looks to Sonia. "Don''t you slut!" Sonia mutters something, but it is too hard to tell what she said with a cock in her mouth. The guys don''t need to be told twice. The ones not getting jerked or sucked off start pulling her clothes off, and before long, she is completely naked.'
+	'Sonia keeps switching which dick she is sucking and which ones she is jerking off. Pauline takes out her phone and starts recording it, making sure to get a good close up of Sonia''s face as she does. Pauline seems pretty amused by all this and offers, "Why are you all just standing around, she has more than one hole," then looks to Sonia. "Don''t you slut!" Sonia mutters something, but it is too hard to tell what she said with a cock in her mouth. The guys don''t need to be told twice. The ones not getting jerked or sucked off start pulling her clothes off, and before long, she is completely naked.'
 	gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 	gs 'stat'
 	act 'Try to stop her':
@@ -736,13 +736,13 @@ if $ARGS[0] = 'soniafall':
 	act 'Air tight':
 		*clr & cla
 		'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/disco/gangbang4.jpg"></center>'
-		'They trade positions, two of the others now fucking both of Sonia''s holes while Paulina records it all. Vitek stands near her head and uses her third hole, shoving his dick back in her mouth. Now with every hole on her body large enough to accommodate a cock filled, she seems to start getting into it, actually seeming to enjoy being gangbanged. Maybe she is too drunk to realize what is going on, or maybe she was tired of being a good girl and needed a release.'
+		'They trade positions, two of the others now fucking both of Sonia''s holes while Pauline records it all. Vitek stands near her head and uses her third hole, shoving his dick back in her mouth. Now with every hole on her body large enough to accommodate a cock filled, she seems to start getting into it, actually seeming to enjoy being gangbanged. Maybe she is too drunk to realize what is going on, or maybe she was tired of being a good girl and needed a release.'
 		gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 5
 		gs 'stat'
 		act 'Keep watching':
 			*clr & cla
 			'<center><img <<$set_imgh>> src="images/characters/pavlovsk/school/girl/sonia/sex/disco/gangbang5.jpg"></center>'
-			'Each guy takes a turn with each of her holes. Sonia doesn''t seem to mind. In fact, she seems to be really loving it. Paulina keeps recording the whole thing. The guys are not remotely gentle, but it doesn''t seem to matter. Sonia moans and writhes in pleasure as the six guys take turns fucking her. The first guy finally pops his load right in her mouth. She swallows most of it, but some leaks out as she switches to a new cock. Several of the other guys seem to be getting close as well to blowing their loads.'
+			'Each guy takes a turn with each of her holes. Sonia doesn''t seem to mind. In fact, she seems to be really loving it. Pauline keeps recording the whole thing. The guys are not remotely gentle, but it doesn''t seem to matter. Sonia moans and writhes in pleasure as the six guys take turns fucking her. The first guy finally pops his load right in her mouth. She swallows most of it, but some leaks out as she switches to a new cock. Several of the other guys seem to be getting close as well to blowing their loads.'
 			gs 'arousal', 'voyeur_sex', 10
 			gs 'stat'
 			act 'Facial':